„Did Senju Muramasa actually admit defeat on own initiative?” “千寿村征竟然主动认输了？” Saw the Senju Muramasa earnest facial expression, Mu Fan slightly astonished. 看到千寿村征认真的神情,慕凡微微惊愕了一下。 Can make talent light novel young girl Senju Muramasa admit defeat on own initiative, proved the script that sufficiently Senpai writes was splendid. 能让天才轻小说少女千寿村征主动认输,就足以证明学姐写的剧本有多么精彩了。 But broadcasts in " Transformation » plot, in entire conference site enough silent about one minute, appraised recovers from the manga plot, then according to starting grading. 而在《蜕变》的剧情播放完,整个会场中足足沉默了一分钟左右的时间,评审们才从刚才的漫画剧情中回过神来,然后按下了手中的评分器。 Meanwhile, on the large screen presented five scores one after another. 与此同时,大屏幕上相继出现了五个分数。 91 points and 94 points and 96 points and 92 points and 97 points of & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; 91分、94分、96分、92分、97分—— Sees these scores, the Mu Fan heartbeat accelerates immediately, because the average scores of this work in his computation, has exceeded the Senju Muramasa script! 看到这几个分数,慕凡的心跳顿时加速,因为在他的计算中这部作品的平均分数,已经超越了千寿村征的剧本！ The rule that because competes is to remove highest score and most low score selects an average minute of score, sees the final outcome, the voice of host also becomes resounding, laughs saying: „Has not thought the work that finally presents, has not really disappointed us, removes highest score 97 points, most low score 91 points, «Transformation» average score 94 points of & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ;” 因为比赛的规则是去掉最高分和最低分选出平均分的分数,看到最终结果,主持人的声音也变得高亢起来,大笑道:“没想到最后出现的作品,果然没有让我们大家失望,去掉最高分97分,最低分91分,《蜕变》的平均分数94分——” „We were congratulated by Kashiwagi Eri and Twilight in the Mortal World draw, Kasumi Utako writing plot short article manga «Transformation» finish first of this manga festival.” “我们来恭喜由柏木英理、暮色凡尘所画、霞诗子执笔剧情的短篇漫画《蜕变》获得这次漫画节的第一名。” Hears this to announce sound that they win, the heart of Mu Fan became in this moment thorough excited. 听到这个宣布他们胜利的声音,慕凡的心在这一刻变得彻底激动了起来。 Really read the innumerable famous work and books Senpai worthily, Senpai potential writing the plot also contains a profound meaning of life, will finish first of this competition directly! 真不愧是阅读了无数名著和书籍的学姐,学姐是有潜力的写出来的剧情也蕴含着一种人生的深意,才会直接获得了这次比赛的第一名！ „Good!” “太好了！” Nearby Eriri called one excitedly, then saw Mu Fan that turns around then could not bear throw the Mu Fan bosom, exciting saying: „Mu Fan, Mu Fan, our manga ranked the first finally, we for serveral days in vain diligently, have not really been good! Good!” 一旁的英梨梨更是激动的叫了一声,然后看到转过身来的慕凡然后忍不住扑到了慕凡的怀里,兴奋的说道:“慕凡,慕凡,我们的漫画终于获得第一名了,我们这些天没有白白努力,真是太好了！太好了！” Was saying to be saying, Eriri cried unexpectedly, the head rubbed the chest of Mu Fan, the tears was moistening the Mu Fan clothing. 说着说着,英梨梨竟然哭了出来,脑袋蹭着慕凡的胸口,泪水打湿了慕凡的衣衫。 Some Mu Fan loving dearly touches the hair of Eriri. 慕凡不禁有些心疼的摸了摸英梨梨的头发。 For serveral days, Eriri has been trying hard for the Senpai matter, even these have not had a good sleep in the evening. 这些天来,英梨梨为了学姐的事情一直在努力,甚至这几个晚上都没有睡好。 Actually the success of Senpai is not her, but must depend on the Eriri picture merit, exposed the character manner manner of Ichinose rain completely, making Ichinose rain character lifeliker. 其实学姐的成功并不是她一个人的,还要靠英梨梨的画功,将一之濑雨的性格神态行为举止完全展露了出来,让一之濑雨这个人物更加惟妙惟肖。 Presented the happy manners of five Ichinose rain in the recollection of people. 才在众人的回想中出现了五个一之濑雨的美好神态。 From the plot, the plot that Senpai writes is naturally impeccable, may from the fine success of manga, actually probably give credit to Eriri. 从剧情上,学姐写的剧情自然是无可挑剔的,可从漫画的精致成功,却要归功于英梨梨。 Also has very major role as for him, a point as the Eriri assistant, does not have the ingredients that he makes in addition, have these two female students the hungry dusk, how possibly compiled such manga? 至于他也有很大的作用,一点是作为英梨梨的助手,另一点没有他做的料理,这两个女生早就饿昏了,怎么可能编写出这样的漫画？ Stands before the seat, looks on the large screen to be higher than her script two points of score, Senju Muramasa gratified smiles. 站在座位前,看着大屏幕上足足高出她剧本两分的分数,千寿村征欣慰的一笑。 Actually when sees Kasumi Utako to write such plot, Senju Muramasa understands, she failed. 其实当看到霞诗子写出这样的剧情,千寿村征就明白,她失败了。 Although she has been honored as the E-Mule Library youngest talent, has the E-Mule Library maximum brain hole and fancy, but she is Junior High School Student, in the future the road of light novel will be long, she impossible to learn in such age completely. 虽然她一直被誉为电击文库最年轻的天才,拥有着电击文库最大的脑洞和幻想力,可是她才是初中生,未来轻小说的路还长,她并不可能在这样的年纪就全部学到。 Although she is impeccable regarding the understanding of lengthy light novel, may compare to the lengthy plot, the short story is her mechanical damage, she is not very profound regarding the understanding of short article plot, lost to Kasumi Utako. 虽然她对于长篇轻小说的理解无可挑剔,可比起长篇剧情,短篇小说一直是她的硬伤,她对于短篇剧情的理解还不够深刻,才败给了霞诗子。 But said no matter how, Kasumi Utako the attainments of short story plot be stronger than her, Senju Muramasa felt, if Kasumi Utako can go out of the difficulty of this facing bravely, in the future will certainly become her to rank the biggest enemy in E-Mule Library. 但不管怎么说,霞诗子的短篇小说剧情的造诣要比她更强的,千寿村征感觉如果霞诗子能够勇敢的走出这次面临的困难,未来一定会成为她在电击文库排名最大的敌人。 Naturally, Senju Muramasa is but not envying Kasumi Utako, instead is gratified, hopes that Kasumigaoka Utaha can come out of the difficult position, returns E-Mule Library, becomes the friend with her. 当然,千寿村征但并不是在嫉妒霞诗子,反而是欣慰,更希望霞之丘诗羽能够走出困境,重新回到电击文库,和她成为朋友。 But the audience and manga under family/home stage hears the final result is also nothing objection, on the contrary is the unusual approval. 而台下的观众和漫画家听到最终的结果也都是没有任何异议,反倒是非常的认同。 Although the author belongs to Kasumi Utako, which perspective but regardless of from, contrasted Senju Muramasa and Kasumi Utako plot, they compare to favor Kasumi Utako compose the light novel writer difficult lifetime story by the simplest plot like this. 虽然作者属于霞诗子,可无论从哪个角度来看,对比了千寿村征和霞诗子的剧情,他们都比较倾向于霞诗子这样以最简单的情节谱写出轻小说作家艰难一生的故事。 Even is straightforwardest wrote their life, told them to insist that will obtain the happiness. 甚至是最直白的写出了他们的一生,告诉他们坚持下去才会获得幸福。 „Words said, what this time play is candid is Kasumi Utako writes?” “话说,这次的剧本真的是霞诗子写的吗？” „She can actually write such good script, it seems like we must «Love Metronome» that goes back under the careful reading she to write and «Wizard school Love Guide».” “她竟然能够写出这么好的剧本,看来我们要回去仔细阅读下她写的《恋爱节拍器》和《魔法学院恋爱指南》了。” „Obviously bright does such a author, how make that low level mistake in «Wizard school Love Guide»?” “明明这么有才华的一个作者,怎么会在《魔法学院恋爱指南》中犯那种低级的错误呢？” Silent moment, in the entire conference site spread audience's discussion. 沉默了片刻,整个会场中传出了观众们的议论。 Does not understand they who reason, do not know why Kasumi Utako has such high attainments to the light novel obviously, but why will also write such low intelligence quotient the plot, spreads in the network, was railed. 不明白原因的他们,不知道为什么霞诗子明明对轻小说有着这么高的造诣,可为什么还会写出那样低智商的情节,在网络上流传,受人谩骂。 At this time, senior manga pushed the eyeglasses to say with a smile a moment ago: „Possibly Kasumi Utako encountered what difficulty a while ago, I can also understand the mentality of writer as manga, once the mentality came under the influence, the plot of novel will also be affected correspondingly.” 这时,刚才资深的漫画家推了推眼镜笑道:“可能是前段时间霞诗子遇到了什么困难,作为漫画家我也能理解作家的心态,一旦心态受到了影响,小说的剧情也会受到相应的影响。” Listens to this, some nodded of audience approval, this manga said indeed is reasonable, the mentality can indeed affect a quality of work. 听此,一些观众们纷纷认同的点了点头,这位漫画家说的的确有道理,心态的确可以影响一部作品的好坏。 The mentality is good, this work begins even insufficiently splendidly, but the following plot will still attract the person. 心态好,这部作品就算开头不够精彩,可接下来的剧情依然会吸引到人。 A mistake of Kasumi Utako created such serious phenomenon, making in the affection she write " Transformation » audience somewhat regretted to such talent high-school student. 只是霞诗子的一次失误就造成了这么严重的现象,让喜爱上她执笔《蜕变》的观众对这样的天才高中生有些惋惜。 In this time, in the corner is spreading a gentle female voice: „I made the story that Kasumi Utako wrote a moment ago, we put out the cell phone for the live broadcast of repeater today's manga festival together, is Kasumi Utako rectifies names?” 正在这时,角落里传出了一个温柔的女声:“刚才我拍下来了霞诗子写的故事,我们大家一起拿出手机为转发今天的漫画节的直播,为霞诗子正名吧？” Hears this sound, several audience turn head, sees only in the corner to sit a beautiful young girl, the young girl wears the simple cream-colored one-piece dress, a chestnut color long hair hangs loose again the shoulder, is glittering the clear gloss under the light of conference site, at this time the young girl does not contain on a elegant face of impurity to hang is wiping the smile, let being shocked that these audience looked. 听到这个声音,几名观众们回过头去,只见角落里坐着一位美丽的少女,少女身着简单的米色连衣裙,一头栗子色的长发披散再肩头,在会场的灯光下闪烁着晶莹的光泽,此时少女不含一丝杂质的俏脸上挂着一抹微笑,不由让这几个观众看的愣住了。 „This .... This is not, Yuuki ....” “这....这不是,结成....” Recalls Ojou-sama that in the news arrives occasionally, the name that several people recognized the present young girl, is preparing to send out to call out in alarm, the young girl winked the winking amber brown pupil, puts out the cell phone, the smile said: „We help Kasumi Utako rectify names together!” 回忆起偶尔新闻中登场的大小姐,几个人认出了眼前的少女的名字,正准备发出惊呼,少女眨了眨琥珀色的眸子,拿出手机,微笑道:“我们一起来帮助霞诗子正名吧！” ...... ...... Sits in front Mu Fan and Eriri does not know the matter that the auditorium has, the host on stage takes the microphone, said with a smile: „Really thanked writes " Transformation » three teachers brings such happy story for us, the time already not early, making us welcome Teacher Kashiwagi Eri and Teacher Twilight in the Mortal World and Kasumi Utako-sensei to mount the stage to receive an award by the warm applause.” 坐在前排的慕凡和英梨梨并不知道观众席发生的事情,台上的主持人却拿着话筒,笑道:“真的感谢写出《蜕变》的三位老师为我们带来这么美好的故事,时间已经不早了,让我们大家以热烈的掌声欢迎柏木英理老师、暮色凡尘老师、霞诗子老师上台领奖吧。” The host said, under the stage started a warm applause immediately, everyone is to applause that «Transformation» this work is from the heart, therefore the applause of entire conference site like thunderous general deafening. 主持人说完,台下顿时掀起了一阵热烈的掌声,每一个人皆是对《蜕变》这部作品发自内心的鼓着掌,所以整个会场的掌声如同雷鸣一般震耳欲聋。 Sees an audience face warm appearance, the host announced that mounted the stage to receive an award, finished first of manga festival, the good and evil should also the receiving an award sign bring to be then good to face Senpai, Mu Fan can only stand up, looks to left side Eriri: „Eriri, we mount the stage.” 看到观众们一脸热情的样子,主持人宣布上台领奖了,获得了漫画节的第一名,好歹也该去领个奖牌带回去这才好面对学姐,慕凡只能站起身来,看向左侧的英梨梨:“英梨梨,我们上台吧。” Eriri pushed Mu Fan directly, say/way that a face shuts out: „I do not want, you want entire world to know that I am Kashiwagi Eri? Mounts the stage quickly, remembers do not think me on the stage, I am not and you!” 英梨梨直接推了慕凡一把,一脸嫌弃的道:“我才不要,你难道想让全世界的人都知道我是柏木英理吗？快上台,记住在台上不要看我,我才不是和你一路的！” „You go back yourself to walk, do not ride my motorcycle!” “那你回去自己走,不要坐我的摩托车！” Mu Fan white Eriri that is worried about to expose the status, can only a person get on. the stage 慕凡白了担心暴露身份的英梨梨一眼,只能一个人走上了台。 Stands on the stage, entire conference site over a thousand audience several thousand eyes gathered oneself body all of a sudden, Mu Fan felt immediately some were not comfortable. 站在台上,整个会场上千观众数千只眼睛一下子汇聚到了自己的身上,慕凡顿时感觉有些不自在。 As otaku him, many a little crowd phobophobia, before so many people as well as televisions, does not know that has many audience to gaze at bit by bit him in this moment, this made his mood all of a sudden anxious. 作为宅男的他,多少有点人群恐惧症,这么多人以及电视机前不知道有多少观众都在这一刻注视着着他,这让他的心情一下子变得紧张了起来。 The host sees Mu Fan that walked, takes microphone surprised asking: „Are you Teacher Kashiwagi Eri?” 主持人看到了走过来的慕凡,拿着话筒惊讶的问道:“请问您是柏木英理老师？” Mu Fan received the microphone: „No, I am Twilight in the Mortal World, she ..... she and Kasumi Utako-sensei has not come to the conference site as for Kashiwagi Eri, therefore this time can only receive an award by me.” 慕凡接过话筒:“不,我是暮色凡尘,至于柏木英理她.....她和霞诗子老师都没有来会场,所以这次就只能由我一个人来领奖了。” Just spoke of half, under Mu Fan sudden stage saw that Eriri is clenching teeth to stare his one eyes, can only give to swallow back the words that preparing to say. 刚刚说到了一半,慕凡突然台下的看到英梨梨咬着牙瞪了他一眼,只能将准备说出口的话又给咽了回去。 Eriri does not plan to expose the status, he do not reveal, otherwise this Ojou-sama violent walks face to face is unamusing. 嘛,英梨梨不打算暴露身份,他还是不要揭穿了,不然这大小姐当面暴走可不好玩了。 „, This.” “哦,这样啊。” The host are not many asked, must open the box, gives Mu Fan inside medal, smiles to ask: „Teacher Twilight in the Mortal World, had heard you wrote two classical light novels, is acgn existed fiery, at present achieves the success of manga festival, what had to say?” 主持人也不多问,只得打开盒子,将里面的奖牌交给慕凡,笑问道:“暮色凡尘老师,早就听说过您写出了两本经典的轻小说,已经是acgn界火热的存在了,目前又获得了漫画节的胜利,有什么想说的吗？” I can say that I only do want to leave office now a bit faster? 我能说我现在只想快点下台吗？ The host who you can watch a person's every mood could not look that I now am very anxious? 你们会察言观色的主持人看不出来我现在很紧张吗？ Mu Fan stands on the stage some helpless, may think, he thought of Senpai suddenly, clenches teeth to have the courage, earnest saying: „Can finished first of this time manga festival in me and Kashiwagi Eri as well as Kasumi Utako efforts, I from the heart am moved, because this proved the efforts of our three people have not been in vain, everyone approved our success ....” 慕凡站在台上有些无奈,可想了想,他忽然想到了学姐,咬了咬牙鼓起勇气,认真的说道:“能够在我和柏木英理以及霞诗子三人的努力获得了这次的漫画节的第一名,我发自内心的感动,因为这证明了我们三个人的努力并没有白费,大家都认同了我们的成功....” Spoke some pleasantries, a Mu Fan sudden thread of conversation revolution: „....., although changes others' manga plot to be somewhat disrespectful, but I want to give the later result on this manga.” 说了一些客套话,慕凡突然话锋一转:“不过.....虽然改别人的漫画剧情有些失礼,但是我还是想在这则漫画上赋予之后的结局。” „Result?” “结局？” Hears Mu Fan these words, the host gawked slightly dull, under the stage is also sends out one to call out in alarm. 听到慕凡这句话,主持人微微呆愣了一下,台下也是发出一阵惊呼。 The audience cannot bear somewhat strangely, how does this well-known writer plan to revise the plot? 观众们都忍不住有些奇怪,这位知名的作家打算怎么修改剧情呢？ The host takes the lead with the microphone, looked that asked to Mu Fan question that the audience want to ask: „In our opinion, this manga result is very perfect, Teacher Twilight in the Mortal World creates one of the manga writers as three people together, what result plans to give it is?” 主持人率先拿着话筒,看向慕凡问出了观众们都想问的问题:“在我们看来,这则漫画的结局已经很完美了,暮色凡尘老师作为三人共同创作漫画的作家之一,打算赋予其是什么样的结局呢？”