TDFS :: Volume #5 复苏的记忆

#467: Five Ichinose rain

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Under the stage the action of people makes in the Mu Fan heart be somewhat uncomfortable. 台下众人的举动让慕凡心中有些不是滋味。 This is light novel and network spreads the Senpai reputation not good reason, once some large crowd attack Senpai, sprouting/moe newly still driven repugnant Senpai that even if some do not understand. 这就是轻小说界和网络流传学姐名声不好的原因,一旦有大批人攻击学姐,就算一些不懂的萌新也会被带动的讨厌学姐。 Like Senpai «Wizard school Love Guide» because of this book, Senpai has become the object who numerous light novel author and in the reader mouth dislikes, was hung up light novel only one big god level author who abandons the pit not to renew, as well as most does not have the sense of responsibility author and makes a mistake in writing the label that the plot does not dare to come out to take on. 就像学姐的《魔法学院恋爱指南》因为这一本书,学姐已经成为了众多轻小说作者和读者口中所讨厌的对象,更被挂上了轻小说界唯一一个弃坑不更新的大神级作者,以及最没有责任心的作者和写错了剧情不敢出来担当的标签。 They will only comment, actually does not know the Senpai current pressure...... 他们只会评论,却不知道学姐目前的压力...... The plot progress of novel, can see author the progress of mentality, Mu Fan did not think Senpai writes Ichinose rain to plan to jump into the river to commit suicide, she will not have this idea. 小说的剧情进展,就可以看出作者的心态的进展,慕凡可不觉得学姐写出一之濑雨打算跳河自尽,她自己会没有这种想法过。 Was good walked because of Senpai. 好在学姐走了回来。 The novel author looked that the novel looks like own child to be the same, now own child was railed, all of oneself laborious creation were denied by others, the former author will be happy blames. 要知道,小说作者看出来小说就像是自己的孩子一样,如今自己的孩子被人谩骂,自己辛辛苦苦创造的一切被别人否定,原作者会开心就怪了。 The change also makes the host on stage somewhat awkward, originally many audience remain because of Twilight in the Mortal World and Kashiwagi Eri name, may hear Kasumi Utako to write, these people do not believe that Kasumi Utako will write any good plot, made plan that prepares to leave the field. 现场的变化也让台上的主持人有些尴尬,本来许多观众留下来是因为暮色凡尘和柏木英理的名字,可一听到霞诗子执笔,这些人早就不相信霞诗子会写出什么好的剧情了,都是做出了准备离场的打算。 „Everyone first waits.” “大家先等等。” The host quickly added again: „Perhaps this short article manga name is «Transformation» Kasumi Utako had this name what special meaning, everyone can stay behind comes to see.” 主持人急忙再次补充道:“这则短篇漫画的名字叫做《蜕变》说不定霞诗子起了这个名字又什么特殊的含义在内呢,大家可以留下来看一看。” „Good, has a look to have a look, she is unable to exceed Senju Muramasa in any case.” “好吧,看看就看看,反正她是无法超越千寿村征的。” Heard the host saying that the audience under stage whispered to sit the home position secretly, although in their mouth is saying repugnant Kasumi Utako, but wants to have a look at this work. 听到主持人这么说,台下的观众们暗自嘀咕着坐回了原位,虽然他们口中说着讨厌霞诗子,可是还是想看看这部作品的。 Even if the trash looks at the pleasure still a little meaning. 就算垃圾看个乐子也有点意思。 After all the reader of light novel is this, although in the mouth was saying did not like your book , so long as made a mistake in writing author sincere apology, the integrity repented, they will come back to look after a period of time. 毕竟轻小说的读者就是这样,虽然口中说着不喜欢你的书了,可只要写错了的作者诚心道歉,诚信悔过,他们过段时间还是会回来看一看的。 Saw to stand firm the audience, the host then relaxed secretly. 见到稳住了观众,主持人这才暗自松了口气。 Starts to give to appraise the teacher the manga draft that Mu Fan and Eriri complete to place on the large screen simultaneously, projects looks to the audience. 开始将慕凡和英梨梨做好的漫画文稿交给评审老师同时放在大屏幕上,投影给观众们看一看。 With the development of time, the manga festival that the manga association organizes is Japan is recognized, not inside story, therefore these manga audience and manga family/home can see the manga plot through the large screen together. 随着时代的发展,漫画协会组织的漫画节是日本公认的,不会有一丝内幕在内,所以这些漫画观众和漫画家都是可以共同通过大屏幕看到漫画的剧情。 Otherwise the audience sit under the stage, what has not resulted in looked, but also does buying a ticket come here to sit is not sick? Might as well easy and comfortable lying down watches the television on the sofa at home, waited for is announcing the result. 不然观众们坐在台下,什么也没得看,还买票来到这里坐着不是有病吗？还不如在家里安逸的躺在沙发上看着电视,等待着宣布结果了。 When on the large screen sees the manga itself, the audience of audience completely silent, even their repugnant Kasumi Utako still needs a look at the manga plot, tsukkomi, directly attacks her to be pointless again. 在大屏幕上看到漫画本的时候,全场的观众全部都沉默了下来,就算他们讨厌霞诗子也需要看看漫画的剧情,再吐槽,直接打击她是没有意义的。 The started story rhythm is the author and manga of family/home warm writing manga plot warm daily, occasionally sells the benefits and wait/etc. story, is simple and warm, such story seems like the clear spring running water to be the same, making the mood of person happy get up & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; 开始的故事节奏是温馨的执笔漫画剧情的作者和漫画家的温馨日常,偶尔卖卖福利等等的故事,简单又温馨,这样的故事像是清泉流水一样,让人的心情都舒畅了起来—— May in the warm daily midway, actually suffer, finished second, the manga three people of groups, because the reason of writing writer announced that dismisses & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; 可在温馨日常的中途,却遭遇了困难,获得了第二名,漫画家三人组因为执笔作家的缘故宣布解散—— The writing writer starts to write the light novel, because the first light novel writing obtained some result, her character became open got up & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; 执笔作家开始写轻小说,因为第一本轻小说写作获得了一些成绩,她的性格变得开朗了起来—— The lead Ichinose rain actually suffered, does not know how to form in one's mind the second novel, starts to accept the opinion of reader, diligently practices, but was still failed finally & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; 主角一之濑雨却又遭遇了困难,不知道如何去构思第二本小说,开始采纳读者的意见,努力的去实践,可最终依然失败了—— Greatly disappointed she made a mistake in writing the plot, becomes entire light novel everyone's repugnant author & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; 大受打击的她又写错了情节,成为了整个轻小说界人人讨厌的作者—— Ichinose rain starts becomes dejected, day after day is depressed, she actually started adore/admire Fan who finally prepares to jump into the river plunges into the river to grasp, draws her not to let she such suicide. 一之濑雨开始变得心灰意冷,日渐消沉,最终准备跳河的她却被开始的慕帆跳入河中抱住,拉着她不想让她就这样的自杀。 „Even the whole world does not support you, I will still still support you, believes you!” “就算整个世界不支持你,我也依然会支持你,相信你！” In manga saw that adore/admire Fan shouted these words hoarsely, at this moment, stage the line of sight under of audience this moment in the tears that was welled up blurred completely, from starting the warm daily exaggeration, to several lives the sorrow of major rises, was really can again felt profoundly the Ichinose rain the pity, as well as adore/admire Fan to the intention that Ichinose rain that trust and did not give up. 漫画中看到慕帆声嘶力竭的喊出这句话,这一刻,台下的观众的视线全部都在这一刻不禁被涌上的泪水模糊了,从开始的温馨日常的渲染,再到几次人生的大起大落的悲痛,实在是太能让人深刻的感觉到一之濑雨的可怜,以及慕帆对一之濑雨那种信任和不放弃的心意。 Was rescued Ichinose rain that comes ashore under persuasion that in adore/admire Fan and female match, the mood restores day after day, decided that finally to write final short article manga «Change» gives up the profession of writer, takes a brand-new road, because of this, she still never believes even oneself have writing talent & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; 被救上岸来的一之濑雨在慕帆和女配的劝说下,情绪日渐恢复过来,更是最终决定以执笔最后的短篇漫画《改变》放弃作家的生涯,走一条崭新的路,因为就算这样,她也始终不相信自己拥有写作的天赋—— In the manga work team three person unremitting efforts, finished first of manga festival finally, the final hero was lucky «Change» this composed life general manga, was makes Ichinose rain obtain the final love, explained why adore/admire Fan has been loving Ichinose rain & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; 在漫画工作组三个人不懈的努力,终于获得了漫画节的第一名,最终的功臣多亏了《改变》这则谱写了人生一般的漫画,更是让一之濑雨获得了最终的爱情,也解释了慕帆为什么一直爱着一之濑雨—— In finally adore/admire Fan to Ichinose rain „I the words in finished entire chapter story & Fuck ash to you harbored the sentiment of love” ; & Fuck ash ; 在最终慕帆对一之濑雨的“我对你怀有恋爱之情”的话语里结束了整篇故事—— Sees here, in the audience heart of audience was full of the shock. 看到这里,全场的观众心中都是充满了震惊。 Kasumi Utako a story of simple light novel writer, wrote her the life of major rises, as well as blows up the courage harvest love finally the beautiful story. 霞诗子将一则简单的轻小说作家的故事,写出了她的大起大落的一生,以及最终鼓起勇气收获爱情的美丽故事。 This novel when looks, still makes one recall infinitely, at this moment, in all person eyes on the scene appeared the beautiful forms of five Ichinose rain. 这则小说在看完的时候,依然让人回忆无穷,这一刻,在场的所有人眼中都不由浮现出了五个一之濑雨的美丽身影。 In warm daily arrives to sympathize the gentle beautiful length to send directly the female student for the first time, just entered the stage attracted the attention of people, that elf beautiful smile, in engraved from the beginning in the atrium of people. 第一次在温馨日常中登场体贴又温柔的美丽长直发女生,刚一出场就吸引了众人的注意,那种精灵般美丽的微笑,在一开始就刻印在了众人的心房。 Came under the attack for the second time, lowers the head in the work room ignores the back of Ichinose rain adore/admire Fan opposes to leave, as well as her firm approach and is facing the online commentary scared manner, making one somewhat pity. 第二次是受到了打击,在工作室低着头不顾慕帆反对离开的一之濑雨的背影,以及她那种坚决的态度和面对着网上的评论失魂落魄的神态,让人不禁有些怜悯。 The third time is the light novel is successful, Ichinose rain sits in front of the computer sends the silk to flutter, the fine exquisite cheeks bring excitedly, sends the silk to flutter, under the mapping of light, on elegant face enclosed a holy gloss, probably a beautiful angel is common. 第三次是轻小说成功,一之濑雨坐在电脑前发丝飘动,精致细腻的脸颊带着兴奋,发丝飘动,在灯光的映射下,俏脸上附上了一层圣洁的光泽,像是一位美丽的天使一般。 The fourth time is Ichinose rain is attacked again, closes the pupil to put behind the scene that all preparations jump into the river, was abandoned by the world probably generally, is pitiful and no use. 第四次是一之濑雨再次受到打击,闭上眸子忘却一切准备跳河的场景,像是被世界抛弃了一般,可怜又无助。 Wins for the fifth time when the manga festival, as well as harvest love happiness and manner joyfully, although is similar to the first gentle young girl, but after experiencing several major rises, Ichinose rain actually became compares was maturer before, was more beautiful, was dazzling, completed her dream finally. 第五次是在漫画节胜出,以及收获爱情时的幸福和欣然的神态,虽然和第一个温柔的少女相似,但是经历了几次大起大落后,一之濑雨却变得比以前更加成熟了,更加美丽,更加耀眼,也终于完成了她的梦想。 In the heart thinks of here, in the manga heart under stage somewhat regretted, they should not slander Kasumi Utako a moment ago. 心中想到这里,台下的漫画家心中有些后悔,刚才他们都不该那么去诋毁霞诗子。 Kasumi Utako short story, although seems like that in writing the novel writer to the hatred and no use that in the network commented, and difficulty of writer, but wrote a true meaning through a story of ordinary writer actually. 霞诗子的短篇小说,虽然看似是在写着小说作家对网络上评论的怨毒和无助,以及作家的艰难,可实则是通过一个普通作家的故事写出了一个真谛。 Kasumigaoka Utaha the implication of story in fact is a being positive and progressive story, told them the faith, so long as not giving up insisted that the association/will obtained a happy result .... 霞之丘诗羽的故事的寓意实际上正是一则积极向上的故事,正是告诉他们只要将不放弃的信念坚持下去总会获得一个美好的结局.... No one has thought writer who they always taunted, actually wrote such a thought-provoking story at the manga festival, this let their mood incomparable complex. 谁都没想到他们一直以来都嘲讽的作家,却在漫画节上写出了这样一则耐人寻味的故事,这让他们的心情无比的复杂。 The conference site that feeling the atmosphere is all of a sudden silent, Mu Fan shot a look at one toward all around, when sees to sip the lip, the audience who stop the discussion, his eyebrow selects. 感受到气氛一下子寂静下来的会场,慕凡朝着四周瞥了一眼,当看到抿着嘴唇,止住议论的观众们,他的眉毛一挑。 From this group of audience and response of manga family/home, as if the Senpai manga plot gave in their hearts very big impact. 从这群观众和漫画家的反应来看,似乎学姐的漫画剧情给予了他们的心中很大的冲击。 This Mu Fan is not accidental/surprised, the short article plot that this Senpai writes, he and Eriri these have the studied person to the novel plot, looked that thought in the mind received certain inspiration, these audience are naturally no exception. 这点慕凡并不意外,这次学姐写出的短篇剧情,就连他和英梨梨这些对小说剧情有所研究的人,看完了都觉得心灵上受到了一定的启发,这些观众自然也不例外。 In this time, the Mu Fan body side is broadcasting the Senju Muramasa lithe sound suddenly: 正在这时,慕凡的身侧突然传来了千寿村征轻盈的声音: „Plot that this time manga festival writes, was I failed, I lost to Kasumi Utako .....” “这次的漫画节执笔的剧情,是我失败了,我败给了霞诗子.....”
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