TDFS :: Volume #5 复苏的记忆

#469: Senpai, did you see? 【Ending has important matter】


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My script unexpectedly, defeated Senju Muramasa, finished first of manga festival? 我的剧本竟然,战胜了千寿村征,获得了漫画节的第一名? Meanwhile, sits in Kasumigaoka Utaha beautiful the pupil on sofa brings surprisedly looks that in the screen stands on stage Mu Fan, as well as listens to the appearance the discussion that prepares to help her prove, the mood became complex. 与此同时,坐在沙发上的霞之丘诗羽美丽的眸子里带着惊讶的看着屏幕中站在台上的慕凡,以及听到场中准备帮她证明的议论声,心情不由变得复杂了起来。 So long as diligently, really can make everyone approve? 只要努力,真的可以让大家重新认同吗? Kasumigaoka Utaha has been very strange, always she does not understand where oneself were made the mistake, said after Mu Fan wanted to give a new result, she dull is shocked. 霞之丘诗羽一直很奇怪,一直以来她都不明白自己是哪里做错了,到慕凡说出想要赋予一个新的结局后,她不由呆愣住了。 Looks under the stage, Mu Fan face earnest saying: „The result that I hope is, Ichinose rain achieved the success of manga festival, she understands she has as the talent of writer, starts to believe itself, the character was also self-confidently stronger than the past, went back to the period the light novel, is relying on her idea, changes the light novel that she failed, reappeared with the pen name of Ichinose rain in light novel ..... 看着台下,慕凡一脸认真的说道:“我希望的结局是,一之濑雨获得了漫画节的胜利,她明白了自身是有作为作家的天赋,开始相信自己,性格也比过去更加坚强自信,重拾时期了轻小说,凭借着她自己的想法,将她失败的轻小说重新更改,以一之濑雨的笔名重新出现在了轻小说界中.....” You have are looking, Senpai. My words, can you understand?” “你有在看吗,学姐。我的话,你能理解吗?” Spoke these words, in the feature article of television, on the face of Mu Fan revealed wiped the sincere smile. 说完这句话,电视机的特写上,慕凡的脸上露出了一抹真诚的微笑。 He planned from the beginning is to make Kasumigaoka Utaha attend the manga festival. 他从一开始的打算就是让霞之丘诗羽参加漫画节。 Because Mu Fan knows from the beginning the reason of Senpai failure, in the restaurant, Senpai had once said that she did not understand how the second novel should write, starts to look at the opinion of book review area, is revising own work, may write is unhappy, finally still cannot be echoed by reader. 因为慕凡一开始就知道了学姐失败的原因,在餐厅的时候,学姐曾说过,她不理解第二本小说该怎么写,开始看着书评区的意见,修改着自己的作品,可写的并不开心,最终依然没能得到读者的认同。 Although accepts the opinion of reader, is not a misdemeanor. 虽然采纳读者的意见,并不是件坏事。 But because of this, Senpai was actually forgetting the reader is the book that likes visiting her to write, rather than in them book in the personal opinion, once defers to a development that the reader is anticipating, will make the Senpai book lose her to plan the good soul . Moreover, Senpai writes such book, she will not be happy. 可正因为这点,学姐却忘记了读者是喜欢看她写的书,而不是他们中个人意见中的书,一旦按照着读者期待的一步发展,才会让学姐的书失去她原本所计划好的灵魂,而且,学姐写这样的书,她本人也并不会开心。 Until afterward, her started unable to control the plot, caused the work one step to crash. 直到后来,她开始无法掌控住剧情,才导致作品一步崩盘。 Finally, ended up today's such fate. 最后,落得了今天这样的下场。 Mu Fan makes Kasumigaoka Utaha write to attend the manga festival, because this time he and Eriri to opinion of Senpai in plot, not making a Senpai person try hard, obtains manga before the holiday several positions, she can understand her Strength, believes oneself has the light novel talent, picked up once dream. 慕凡之所以让霞之丘诗羽执笔参加漫画节,正是因为这次他和英梨梨都不会给学姐在剧情上的意见,让学姐一个人努力,获得漫画节前几名的名次,她才能明白了她自己的实力,相信自己是拥有着轻小说作品天赋,重新拾起曾经的梦想。 Is depending upon itself, making the readers approve her, changes result that this can only evade. 依靠着自己,让读者们重新认同她,改变这个只会逃避的结局。 Mu Fan ..... 慕凡.....” Listened to Mu Fan saying that the Kasumigaoka Utaha heart trembled, understands she in Mu Fan hidden intent, eye in this moment red, line of sight the scene of television also became blurred, the tears flowed following the corner of the eye, the class/flow from the cheeks to the chin, dropping on her clothes, moistened her clothes. 听着慕凡说完,霞之丘诗羽的心头一颤,明白了慕凡隐意的她,眼睛在这一刻红了起来,视线中的电视机的景象也变得模糊了起来,泪水顺着眼角流淌了出来,从脸颊两侧流到下巴,啪嗒的滴落在了她的衣服上,打湿了她的衣服。 Really is, what am I for a long time doing?” “真是的,我这么久都在干些什么?” Kasumigaoka Utaha tucks in the long hair, fettered the hairstyle of list ponytail with a satin ribbon, took the paper goods to wipe the tears of corner of the eye, but the tears actually still could not stop flowed out from the corner of the eye. 霞之丘诗羽撩起长发,用一条缎带束缚成了单马尾的发型,拿着纸巾擦着眼角的泪水,可泪水却依然止不住的从眼角流出。 In the heart of Kasumigaoka Utaha rebukes oneself secretly. 霞之丘诗羽的心中暗暗自责。 Is I is too always biased, too self-, only thinks that according to the idea of reader, I will be making everyone like, but I actually lost myself like this, could not find direction that oneself write, making my readers feel, once Kasumi Utako has left. 一直以来都是我太偏执,太自我了,只以为按照着读者的想法,我就会让大家喜欢,可是这样我却迷失了自己,找不到自己写作的方向,让我的读者们感觉,曾经的霞诗子已经离开了。 Mu Fan with the manga festival she is writing the plot, told her, her potential, she, so long as believed itself, can make the readers approve her. 慕凡正是用漫画节她一个人执笔着的剧情,告诉她,她的潜力,她只要相信自己,就可以让读者们重新认同她。 Kasumigaoka Utaha, before standing up arrives at the mirror, looks at for these days the pale surface emaciated face, is nipping the silver tooth, closed the eye to wipe the tears, when opened the eye to her time, in the limpid pupil flashed before once the self-confident earnest appearance again. 霞之丘诗羽,站起身来走到镜子前,看着这几天苍白面悴的脸庞,咬着银牙,闭上眼睛抹去了泪水,待到她睁开眼睛的时候,清澈的眸子里再度闪现出曾经自信认真的神采。 Mu Fan, Eriri and Machida editor, and my reader of deep love, always made you be worried ..... 慕凡英梨梨、町田编辑,以及深爱的我读者,一直以来都让你们担心了..... Teacher Twilight in the Mortal World, Teacher Kashiwagi Eri.” 暮色凡尘老师,柏木英理老师。” Attended the manga festival, Mu Fan just and Eriri leaves the conference site, Rokushima runs over from the distant place suddenly 参加完了漫画节,慕凡刚刚和英梨梨离开会场,鹿岛突然从远处跑了过来 Without Rokushima, this manga festival has not resulted in participates, ranked the first not to mention, Mu Fan has the favorable impression regarding Rokushima very much, halting footsteps, has turned around to smile saying: Rokushima senior, what matter but also there is?” 如果没有鹿岛的话,这次漫画节都没得参加,更别提获得第一名了,慕凡对于鹿岛是很有好感的,站住脚步,转过身微笑道:“鹿岛前辈,还有什么事情吗?” Rokushima as if ran for a long time caught up with them very much, is breathing heavily to beckon with the hand, cracks into a smile: Was not the important matter, but first manga of manga festival can publish to produce the animation movie, does not know that you did have to manufacture the wish of animation movie it.” 鹿岛似乎跑了很久才追上他们,喘着粗气摆了摆手,咧嘴一笑:“也不是什么大事了,只是漫画节的第一名的漫画可以出版制作成动漫电影,不知道你们有没有将其制作成动漫电影的意愿。” Mu Fan first shakes the head, then puts out the cell phone, the say/way of apology: Rokushima senior, I have not been able to make the decision now, but can first add your contact method, what because this work creates is main lies in Kasumi Utako, therefore films the animation movie to need to undergo the agreement of Kasumi Utako.” 慕凡先是摇了摇头,然后拿出手机,歉意的道:“鹿岛前辈,我现在还不能做决定,但可以先加一下你的联系方式,因为这部作品创作最主要的在于霞诗子,所以拍摄成动漫电影需要经过霞诗子的同意。” Should.” “应该的。” Rokushima also knows that the photography movie needs after the agreement of member the script writes, but Mu Fan and Kashiwagi Eri agreed that this script films the animation movie should not be difficult, he not, in disturbing to exchange under the cell phone number with Mu Fan, then left. 鹿岛也知道拍摄电影需要经过剧本执笔的成员的同意,不过慕凡柏木英理都同意了,这个剧本拍摄成动漫电影应该不难,他也不在打扰和慕凡交换了下手机号码,便离开了。 Before arriving at the motorcycle, Eriri looked to Mu Fan, Twintail moved, asking of doubts: ” Mu Fan, do we go to the Kasumigaoka Utaha home now? ” 来到摩托车前,英梨梨看向慕凡,双马尾甩动了下,疑惑的问道:”慕凡,我们现在去霞之丘诗羽的家里吗?” At this point, elegant face of Eriri one red: I do not care about Kasumigaoka Utaha, my meaning is this medal good and evil also has her merit, should make her take away?” 说到这里,英梨梨的俏脸一红:“我才不是关心霞之丘诗羽,我的意思是这个奖牌好歹也有她的功劳,该让她拿去吧?” Eriri, does your head dare again the iron point? 英梨梨,你的头敢不敢再铁点? Heard Eriri saying that Mu Fan was somewhat speechless, before he went out, he said with Kasumigaoka Utaha especially will make her rank the first at the manga festival, knows that Senpai will unable to bear open the television direct transmission the program to look at the position of manga festival. 听到英梨梨这么说,慕凡有些无语,在他出门前,他特地和霞之丘诗羽说了一声会让她在漫画节上获得第一名,就知道学姐会忍不住打开电视直播的节目看一下漫画节的名次。 Can open television Mu Fan to have the idea regarding Senpai, he knows, if the heart of Senpai really gave up the profession of writer, will not help them write the script, or daily worry «Wizard school Love Guide» matter. 对于学姐会不会打开电视慕凡是有想法的,他知道如果学姐的心真的放弃了作家的生涯,根本不会帮他们写剧本,或者每日烦恼《魔法学院恋爱指南》的事情。 When clearly knows Senpai will watch the program, Mu Fan said the words of final that change result, lets Senpai understand, she has the talent and potential of writing, even talent young girl Senju Muramasa approved her existence. 所以在明知道学姐会看节目的时候,慕凡才说出了最后的那一番改变结局的话,来让学姐明白,她是有写作的天赋和潜力的,就算天才少女千寿村征都为之认同了她的存在。 Mu Fan planned that to the Senpai some relaxation time, was saying to Eriri: We return to Company, recently the Hatsune future stage plan must launch immediately, we study, making Hatsune take part in the performance these days.” 慕凡打算给学姐一定的休息时间,对着英梨梨说道:“我们回到公司吧,最近初音未来的舞台计划马上要展开了,我们去研究一下,让初音在这段时间参加演出。” Does not understand that the Mu Fan plan Eriri had a little not felt relieved: That Kasumigaoka Utaha?” 不明白慕凡打算的英梨梨还有点不放心:“那霞之丘诗羽?” I believe that Senpai will buoy up, we first have a look, perhaps today or tomorrow, Senpai will likely change.” “我相信学姐会振作起来的,我们先看看吧,说不定今天或者明天,学姐可能会发生改变。” Mu Fan shows a faint smile. 慕凡微微一笑。 He knows, Senpai is strong, although goes out facing the difficulty difficult to walk, but once understood the innermost feelings, is stronger than others, even if even Yuuki Asuna were inferior the Senpai character comes is stronger. 他知道,学姐是坚强的,虽然面对困难不好走出去,可一旦明白了内心,就比别人更加坚强,甚至就算结城明日奈都不如学姐的性格来的更加坚强。 He also believes, Senpai will regain the affection of readers. 他也相信,学姐会重新获得读者们的喜爱。 Listened to Mu Fan saying that Eriri was startled slightly, extremely bright she also as if understood the plan of Mu Fan, no longer said much, rode the Mu Fan motorcycle and he goes to Amagi. 慕凡这么说,英梨梨微微一怔,冰雪聪明的她也似乎理解了慕凡的打算,不再多说,坐上慕凡的摩托车和他前往甘城 With Eriri just returned to Company, Sichuan Ze to stop the water and Kuroneko saw that Mu Fan returns to Company again, when sees the smile that on the Mu Fan face shows, they know Mu Fan has solved him one week ago planned matter that handles. 英梨梨刚刚回到公司,川泽止水和黑猫看到慕凡再次回到公司,当看到慕凡脸上露出的微笑时,他们都知道慕凡已经解决了他一周前打算去做的事情。 Saw that Mu Fan returns again, Kuroneko and Sichuan Ze will stop the water more relieved, gave Mu Fan the recent situation report of Company. 见到慕凡再次归来,黑猫和川泽止水不由安心了许多,纷纷将公司的近期情况汇报给了慕凡 Mu Fan also starts to take over the Company matter, it is expected that three days later will carry out the Hatsune future virtual singing girl stage performance plan. 慕凡也开始重新接手公司的事情,预计三天后开展初音未来的虚拟歌姬舞台演出计划。 First night, Mu Fan anticipation some points «Wizard school Love Guide», although Senpai has not renewed, but actually started out single section in the Internet edition alone, as did not have the news probably recently, the novel that as well as renews lets everyone annoyed apology single section, and told the readers, tomorrow will restore to renew. 第一天晚上,慕凡有些期待的点开《魔法学院恋爱指南》,虽然学姐没有更新,可是却单独在网络版里开出了一个单章,大概是作为最近一直没有消息,以及更新出的小说让大家心烦的致歉单章,并且告诉读者们,明天恢复更新。 Although the book review area still the beginning does not believe her, even some people think that she was short of money deceived the reader to make a wave of money intentionally a piece to scold the sound again, but next evening, Senpai will not have been attacked, instead her book renewed once again. 虽然书评区依然始不相信她,甚至有人以为她是缺钱了故意来诓骗读者想要再赚一波钱的一片骂声,可第二天晚上,学姐并没有遭受到打击,反而她的书又一次更新了。 What this command Mu Fan surprised is, Senpai renewed " Wizard school Love Guide » ten chapters unexpectedly one time, the original plot will also revise. 这一次令慕凡惊讶的是,学姐竟然一次性更新了《魔法学院恋爱指南》十个章节,将原本的剧情也修改了。 Read from the chapter of mistake, this plot turned into beforehand Heroine not to trust the male lord, and male lord rested the plot that the female matched, was the male advocates peace Heroine to draw out the secret enemy completely develops intentionally, in fact with the female with, appeared until the secret enemy nothing happened, the male Heroine then common cooperation defeated the secret boss plot. 从出错的章节一路阅读下来,这段剧情变成了之前的女主不信任男主,以及男主去睡了女配的剧情,完全是男主和女主为了引出幕后的敌人而故意演出来,实际上和女配什么都没有发生,直到幕后的敌人出现,男女主这才共同的合作战败幕后的boss的剧情。 This plot explained directly the beforehand Heroine why retarded, male lord why will rest the matter that the female matched, entire C Station up main immediately completely by hitting the face that Senpai formed in one's mind. 这段剧情一出直接解释了之前女主为何弱智,男主为什么会睡了女配的事情,整个c站的up主顿时全部都被学姐构思出来的打脸。 In third day, after the Mu Fan point opens «Wizard school Love Guide» discovered, the scolding sound of book review area was also all submerged by the high praise in this day, little disappearance ..... 在第三天,慕凡点开《魔法学院恋爱指南》后发现,书评区的骂声也全在这一天中被好评淹没,一点点的消失了..... Meanwhile, the Hatsune future stage plan of Mu Fan also started formally to start ..... 与此同时,慕凡初音未来的舞台计划也开始正式开始了..... Was reasonable, I really want to write several chapters of conclusions again, then made up beyond sao and a Asuna outside chapter., The Sagiri plot is quite but difficult. However, to everyone compared with a present better result, the perfect result, can only write 200,000 characters again.】 【讲道理,我真的想再写几章收尾,然后补sao的番外和明日奈的番外章。可是啊,纱雾的剧情好难啊。但是,为了给大家一个比现在更好的结局,完美的结局,只能再写20万字了。】
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