Myscriptunexpectedly, defeatedSenju Muramasa, finishedfirst of mangafestival?
我的剧本竟然,战胜了千寿村征,获得了漫画节的第一名?Meanwhile, sits in Kasumigaoka Utahabeautiful the pupil on sofabringssurprisedlylooks that in the screenstandsonstageMu Fan, as well aslistens to the appearance the discussion that preparesto helpherprove, the moodbecamecomplex.
与此同时,坐在沙发上的霞之丘诗羽美丽的眸子里带着惊讶的看着屏幕中站在台上的慕凡,以及听到场中准备帮她证明的议论声,心情不由变得复杂了起来。So long asdiligently, reallycanmakeeveryoneapprove?
只要努力,真的可以让大家重新认同吗?Kasumigaoka Utaha has been very strange, alwaysshedoes not understandwhereoneselfweremade the mistake, said after Mu Fanwantedto give a newresult, shedullis shocked.霞之丘诗羽一直很奇怪,一直以来她都不明白自己是哪里做错了,到慕凡说出想要赋予一个新的结局后,她不由呆愣住了。Looks under the stage, Mu Fanfaceearnestsaying: „The result that Ihopeis, Ichinoserainachieved the success of mangafestival, sheunderstandsshehasas the talent of writer, startsto believe itself, the character was also self-confidently stronger than the past, went back to the period the lightnovel, is relying onheridea, changes the lightnovel that shefailed, reappearedwith the pen name of Ichinoseraininlightnovel.....”
看着台下,慕凡一脸认真的说道:“我希望的结局是,一之濑雨获得了漫画节的胜利,她明白了自身是有作为作家的天赋,开始相信自己,性格也比过去更加坚强自信,重拾时期了轻小说,凭借着她自己的想法,将她失败的轻小说重新更改,以一之濑雨的笔名重新出现在了轻小说界中.....”„Youhaveare looking, Senpai. Mywords, can youunderstand?”
“你有在看吗,学姐。我的话,你能理解吗?”Spokethese words, in the feature article of television, on the face of Mu Fanrevealedwiped the sinceresmile.
说完这句话,电视机的特写上,慕凡的脸上露出了一抹真诚的微笑。Heplannedfrom the beginningisto makeKasumigaoka Utahaattend the mangafestival.
他从一开始的打算就是让霞之丘诗羽参加漫画节。BecauseMu Fanknowsfrom the beginning the reason of Senpaifailure, in the restaurant, Senpaihad once said that shedid not understand how the secondnovelshouldwrite, startsto look at the opinion of book reviewarea, is revisingownwork, maywriteis unhappy, finallystillcannotbe echoed byreader.
因为慕凡一开始就知道了学姐失败的原因,在餐厅的时候,学姐曾说过,她不理解第二本小说该怎么写,开始看着书评区的意见,修改着自己的作品,可写的并不开心,最终依然没能得到读者的认同。Althoughaccepts the opinion of reader, is not a misdemeanor.
虽然采纳读者的意见,并不是件坏事。Butbecause ofthis, Senpaiwas actually forgetting the readeris the book that likesvisitingherto write, rather thaninthembook in the personal opinion, oncedefers to a development that the readeris anticipating, will make the Senpaibookloseherto plan the goodsoul . Moreover, Senpaiwritessuchbook, shewill not be happy.
可正因为这点,学姐却忘记了读者是喜欢看她写的书,而不是他们中个人意见中的书,一旦按照着读者期待的一步发展,才会让学姐的书失去她原本所计划好的灵魂,而且,学姐写这样的书,她本人也并不会开心。Untilafterward, herstarted unable to control the plot, caused the workonestepto crash.
直到后来,她开始无法掌控住剧情,才导致作品一步崩盘。Finally, ended uptoday'ssuchfate.
最后,落得了今天这样的下场。Mu FanmakesKasumigaoka Utahawriteto attend the mangafestival, becausethistimeheandEriritoopinion of Senpaiinplot, not making a Senpaipersontry hard, obtainsmangabefore the holidayseveralpositions, shecanunderstandherStrength, believesoneselfhas the lightnoveltalent, picked uponcedream.慕凡之所以让霞之丘诗羽执笔参加漫画节,正是因为这次他和英梨梨都不会给学姐在剧情上的意见,让学姐一个人努力,获得漫画节前几名的名次,她才能明白了她自己的实力,相信自己是拥有着轻小说作品天赋,重新拾起曾经的梦想。Is depending upon itself, making the readersapproveher, changesresult that this can only evade.
依靠着自己,让读者们重新认同她,改变这个只会逃避的结局。„Mu Fan.....”
“慕凡.....”Listened toMu Fan saying that the Kasumigaoka Utahahearttrembled, understandsshe in Mu Fanhiddenintent, eyeinthis momentred, line of sight the scene of televisionalsobecameblurred, the tearsflowedfollowing the corner of the eye, the class/flowfrom the cheeksto the chin, droppingonherclothes, moistenedherclothes.
听着慕凡说完,霞之丘诗羽的心头一颤,明白了慕凡隐意的她,眼睛在这一刻红了起来,视线中的电视机的景象也变得模糊了起来,泪水顺着眼角流淌了出来,从脸颊两侧流到下巴,啪嗒的滴落在了她的衣服上,打湿了她的衣服。„Really is, what am Ifor a long timedoing?”
“真是的,我这么久都在干些什么?”Kasumigaoka Utahatucks in the long hair, fettered the hairstyle of listponytailwith a satin ribbon, took the paper goodsto wipe the tears of corner of the eye, but the tearsactually still could not stopflowed outfrom the corner of the eye.霞之丘诗羽撩起长发,用一条缎带束缚成了单马尾的发型,拿着纸巾擦着眼角的泪水,可泪水却依然止不住的从眼角流出。In the heart of Kasumigaoka Utaharebukes oneselfsecretly.霞之丘诗羽的心中暗暗自责。IsI is too always biased, tooself-, onlythinks that according to the idea of reader, Iwill be makingeveryonelike, butIactuallylost myselflike this, could not finddirection that oneselfwrite, makingmyreadersfeel,onceKasumi Utakohas left.
一直以来都是我太偏执,太自我了,只以为按照着读者的想法,我就会让大家喜欢,可是这样我却迷失了自己,找不到自己写作的方向,让我的读者们感觉,曾经的霞诗子已经离开了。Mu Fanwith the mangafestivalsheis writing the plot, toldher, herpotential, she, so long asbelieved itself, canmake the readersapproveher.慕凡正是用漫画节她一个人执笔着的剧情,告诉她,她的潜力,她只要相信自己,就可以让读者们重新认同她。Kasumigaoka Utaha, before standing uparrives at the mirror, looks atfor these days the palesurfaceemaciatedface, is nipping the silvertooth, closed the eyeto wipe the tears, whenopened the eyetohertime, in the limpidpupilflashed beforeonce the self-confidentearnestappearanceagain.霞之丘诗羽,站起身来走到镜子前,看着这几天苍白面悴的脸庞,咬着银牙,闭上眼睛抹去了泪水,待到她睁开眼睛的时候,清澈的眸子里再度闪现出曾经自信认真的神采。Mu Fan, EririandMachidaeditor, and myreader of deeplove, alwaysmadeyoube worried.....慕凡、英梨梨、町田编辑,以及深爱的我读者,一直以来都让你们担心了.....„TeacherTwilight in the Mortal World, TeacherKashiwagi Eri.”
“暮色凡尘老师,柏木英理老师。”Attended the mangafestival, Mu FanjustandEririleaves the conference site, Rokushimaruns overfrom the distant placesuddenly
参加完了漫画节,慕凡刚刚和英梨梨离开会场,鹿岛突然从远处跑了过来WithoutRokushima, thismangafestivalhas not resulted inparticipates, ranked the firstnot to mention, Mu Fanhas the favorable impressionregardingRokushimavery much, haltingfootsteps, has turned aroundto smile saying: „Rokushimasenior, what matterbut alsothere is?”
如果没有鹿岛的话,这次漫画节都没得参加,更别提获得第一名了,慕凡对于鹿岛是很有好感的,站住脚步,转过身微笑道:“鹿岛前辈,还有什么事情吗?”Rokushimaas ifranfor a long timecaught up withthemvery much, is breathing heavilyto beckon with the hand, cracks into a smile: „Was not the important matter, butfirstmanga of mangafestivalcanpublishto produce the animationmovie, does not know that youdid haveto manufacture the wish of animationmovieit.”
鹿岛似乎跑了很久才追上他们,喘着粗气摆了摆手,咧嘴一笑:“也不是什么大事了,只是漫画节的第一名的漫画可以出版制作成动漫电影,不知道你们有没有将其制作成动漫电影的意愿。”Mu Fanfirstshakes the head, thenputs out the cell phone, the say/way of apology: „Rokushimasenior, Ihave not been ableto make the decisionnow, butcanfirstaddyourcontact method, whatbecausethisworkcreatesis main lies inKasumi Utako, thereforefilms the animationmovieto needto undergo the agreement of Kasumi Utako.”慕凡先是摇了摇头,然后拿出手机,歉意的道:“鹿岛前辈,我现在还不能做决定,但可以先加一下你的联系方式,因为这部作品创作最主要的在于霞诗子,所以拍摄成动漫电影需要经过霞诗子的同意。”„Should.”
“应该的。”Rokushimaalsoknows that the photographymovieneedsafter the agreement of member the scriptwrites, butMu FanandKashiwagi Eri agreed that thisscriptfilms the animationmovie should not be difficult, henot, indisturbingto exchangeunder the cell phone numberwithMu Fan, thenleft.
鹿岛也知道拍摄电影需要经过剧本执笔的成员的同意,不过慕凡和柏木英理都同意了,这个剧本拍摄成动漫电影应该不难,他也不在打扰和慕凡交换了下手机号码,便离开了。
Before arriving at the motorcycle, EririlookedtoMu Fan, Twintailmoved, asking of doubts: ” Mu Fan, do wego to the Kasumigaoka Utahahomenow? ”
来到摩托车前,英梨梨看向慕凡,双马尾甩动了下,疑惑的问道:”慕凡,我们现在去霞之丘诗羽的家里吗?”At this point, elegantface of Eririonered: „Ido not care aboutKasumigaoka Utaha, mymeaningisthismedalgood and evilalsohashermerit, shouldmakehertake away?”
说到这里,英梨梨的俏脸一红:“我才不是关心霞之丘诗羽,我的意思是这个奖牌好歹也有她的功劳,该让她拿去吧?”Eriri, does yourheaddareagain the ironpoint?英梨梨,你的头敢不敢再铁点?HeardEriri saying that Mu Fanwas somewhat speechless, beforehewent out, hesaidwithKasumigaoka Utahaespeciallywill makeherrank the firstat the mangafestival, knows that Senpaiwill unable to bearopen the television direct transmission the programto look at the position of mangafestival.
听到英梨梨这么说,慕凡有些无语,在他出门前,他特地和霞之丘诗羽说了一声会让她在漫画节上获得第一名,就知道学姐会忍不住打开电视直播的节目看一下漫画节的名次。CanopentelevisionMu Fanto have the idearegardingSenpai, heknows, if the heart of Senpaireallygave up the profession of writer, will not helpthemwrite the script, ordailyworry«Wizard schoolLoveGuide»matter.
对于学姐会不会打开电视慕凡是有想法的,他知道如果学姐的心真的放弃了作家的生涯,根本不会帮他们写剧本,或者每日烦恼《魔法学院恋爱指南》的事情。WhenclearlyknowsSenpaiwill watch the program, Mu Fansaid the words of finalthatchangeresult, letsSenpaiunderstand,shehas the talent and potential of writing, eventalentyoung girlSenju Muramasaapprovedherexistence.
所以在明知道学姐会看节目的时候,慕凡才说出了最后的那一番改变结局的话,来让学姐明白,她是有写作的天赋和潜力的,就算天才少女千寿村征都为之认同了她的存在。Mu Fanplanned that to the Senpaisomerelaxation time, was sayingtoEriri: „Wereturn toCompany, recently the Hatsunefuturestageplanmustlaunchimmediately, westudy, makingHatsunetake part in the performancethese days.”慕凡打算给学姐一定的休息时间,对着英梨梨说道:“我们回到公司吧,最近初音未来的舞台计划马上要展开了,我们去研究一下,让初音在这段时间参加演出。”Does not understand that the Mu FanplanEririhad a little not felt relieved: „ThatKasumigaoka Utaha?”
不明白慕凡打算的英梨梨还有点不放心:“那霞之丘诗羽?”„Ibelieve that Senpaiwill buoy up, wefirsthave a look, perhapstodayortomorrow, Senpaiwill likely change.”
“我相信学姐会振作起来的,我们先看看吧,说不定今天或者明天,学姐可能会发生改变。”Mu Fanshows a faint smile.慕凡微微一笑。Heknows,Senpaiis strong, althoughgoes outfacing the difficultydifficult to walk, but once understood the innermost feelings, is stronger than others, even ifevenYuuki Asunawere inferior the Senpaicharactercomesis stronger.
他知道,学姐是坚强的,虽然面对困难不好走出去,可一旦明白了内心,就比别人更加坚强,甚至就算结城明日奈都不如学姐的性格来的更加坚强。Healsobelieves,Senpaiwill regain the affection of readers.
他也相信,学姐会重新获得读者们的喜爱。Listened toMu Fan saying that Eririwas startledslightly, extremely brightshealsoas ifunderstood the plan of Mu Fan, no longersaidmuch, rode the Mu Fanmotorcycleandhegoes toAmagi.
听慕凡这么说,英梨梨微微一怔,冰雪聪明的她也似乎理解了慕凡的打算,不再多说,坐上慕凡的摩托车和他前往甘城。WithEririjustreturned toCompany, SichuanZeto stop the waterandKuronekosaw that Mu Fanreturns toCompanyagain, whensees the smile that on the Mu Fanfaceshows, theyknowMu Fanhas solvedhimoneweek ago plannedmatter that handles.
和英梨梨刚刚回到公司,川泽止水和黑猫看到慕凡再次回到公司,当看到慕凡脸上露出的微笑时,他们都知道慕凡已经解决了他一周前打算去做的事情。Saw that Mu Fanreturnsagain, KuronekoandSichuanZewill stop the water more relieved, gaveMu Fan the recentsituationreport of Company.
见到慕凡再次归来,黑猫和川泽止水不由安心了许多,纷纷将公司的近期情况汇报给了慕凡。Mu Fanalsostartsto take over the Companymatter, it is expected thatthreedayslaterwill carry out the Hatsunefuturevirtualsinging girlstage performanceplan.慕凡也开始重新接手公司的事情,预计三天后开展初音未来的虚拟歌姬舞台演出计划。First night, Mu Fananticipationsomepoints«Wizard schoolLoveGuide», althoughSenpaihas not renewed, butactuallystarted outsinglesectionin the Internet editionalone, asdid not have the newsprobablyrecently, the novel that as well asrenewsletseveryoneannoyedapologysinglesection, andtold the readers, tomorrowwill restoreto renew.
第一天晚上,慕凡有些期待的点开《魔法学院恋爱指南》,虽然学姐没有更新,可是却单独在网络版里开出了一个单章,大概是作为最近一直没有消息,以及更新出的小说让大家心烦的致歉单章,并且告诉读者们,明天恢复更新。Although the book reviewareastill the beginningdoes not believeher, evensomepeoplethink that shewas short of moneydeceived the reader to make a wave of moneyintentionally a pieceto scold the soundagain, butnext evening, Senpaiwill not have been attacked, insteadherbookrenewedonce again.
虽然书评区依然始不相信她,甚至有人以为她是缺钱了故意来诓骗读者想要再赚一波钱的一片骂声,可第二天晚上,学姐并没有遭受到打击,反而她的书又一次更新了。WhatthiscommandMu Fansurprisedis, Senpairenewed " Wizard schoolLoveGuide » tenchaptersunexpectedlyone time, the originalplotwill also revise.
这一次令慕凡惊讶的是,学姐竟然一次性更新了《魔法学院恋爱指南》十个章节,将原本的剧情也修改了。Readfrom the chapter of mistake, thisplotturned intobeforehandHeroinenot to trust the malelord, and malelordrested the plot that the femalematched, was the maleadvocates peaceHeroine to draw out the secretenemycompletelydevelopsintentionally, in factwith the femalewith, appeareduntil the secretenemynothing happened, the maleHeroinethencommoncooperationdefeated the secretbossplot.
从出错的章节一路阅读下来,这段剧情变成了之前的女主不信任男主,以及男主去睡了女配的剧情,完全是男主和女主为了引出幕后的敌人而故意演出来,实际上和女配什么都没有发生,直到幕后的敌人出现,男女主这才共同的合作战败幕后的boss的剧情。Thisplotexplaineddirectly the beforehandHeroinewhyretarded, malelordwhywill rest the matter that the femalematched, entireC Stationupmainimmediatelycompletelybyhitting the face that Senpaiformed in one's mind.
这段剧情一出直接解释了之前女主为何弱智,男主为什么会睡了女配的事情,整个c站的up主顿时全部都被学姐构思出来的打脸。Inthirdday, after the Mu Fanpointopens«Wizard schoolLoveGuide»discovered, the scoldingsound of book reviewareawas also all submergedby the high praiseinthis day, littledisappearance.....
在第三天,慕凡点开《魔法学院恋爱指南》后发现,书评区的骂声也全在这一天中被好评淹没,一点点的消失了.....Meanwhile, the Hatsunefuturestageplan of Mu Fanalsostartedformallyto start.....
与此同时,慕凡的初音未来的舞台计划也开始正式开始了.....【Was reasonable, Ireallywantto writeseveralchapters of conclusionsagain, thenmade upbeyondsaoand a Asunaoutsidechapter., The Sagiriplot is quite but difficult. However, to everyonecompared with a presentbetterresult, the perfectresult, can only write200,000charactersagain.】
【讲道理,我真的想再写几章收尾,然后补sao的番外和明日奈的番外章。可是啊,纱雾的剧情好难啊。但是,为了给大家一个比现在更好的结局,完美的结局,只能再写20万字了。】
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