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#389: Not dead Sichuan editorial department


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Chapter 389 not dead Sichuan editorial department 第389章不死川编辑部 , And. 唰、唰、唰唰。 In the conference room reverberates the paper to turn the page the sound. 会议室里回响着纸张翻页的声音。 „......” “……” „......” “……” Has some little time, in the room is peaceful. 有好一会儿,房间里都非常安静。 Until some people took the lead to stop the movement in hand...... 直到有人率先停下了手中的动作…… This original manuscript......” Tamura moves the mouth, the Yusuke of look the original manuscript and between opposite in hand wanders, on the face has the thinking, tries to search for the appropriate words from the mind. “这份原稿……”木村动了动嘴巴,眼神在手中的原稿与对面的悠介之间徘徊,脸上带着思索,试图从脑海里搜寻出恰当的话语。 However had words on the tip of the tongue actually turns...... 然而话到嘴边却是变成了…… Our comic magazines are actually the hot blooded themes.” “我们的漫画杂志其实是热血题材的。” ??? ??? In the room emitted a string of question marks quickly. 房间里倏地冒出了一连串问号。 Tamura takes in the hand the 54 P original manuscript, the fast change, then also said: But the teacher your work type , seems close to the youth seeking novelty.” 木村拿着手中54P的原稿,唰唰地快速翻动,接着又道:“但老师你的作品类型,似乎更加接近青年猎奇。” Hears this saying Utaha black eyebrow to be light, turns upwards the leg, asked directly: Excuse me, you meant that this original manuscript isn't able to print? Mr. Tamura.” 听到这话的诗羽黛眉轻蹙,翘起腿来,直接问道:“不好意思,请问您的意思是说这份原稿无法刊载吗?木村先生。” Tamura pushed the eyeglasses on bridge of the nose, pondered a while slightly, said. 木村推了推鼻梁上的眼镜,稍微思考了一会儿,说了起来。 Words that must speak, the style of this work is not outstanding, lead's performance does not tally with the traditional hot blooded hero, somewhat incredible strange, in addition here.” “要说的话,这部作品的画风并不出众,主角的表现也与传统的热血英雄不太相符,有些荒诞离奇,再加上这里。” He turns to some page, above is the male lord is dismembered the block, throws a minute/share of mirror in trashcan. 他唰唰唰地翻到某页,上面是男主被肢解成块,丢在垃圾箱里的分镜。 Here......” “还有这里……” The male lord cleaves in two devil with the power saw. 男主用电锯将恶魔劈成两半。 And here......” “以及这里……” The male lord steps on the mourning corpse pile, laughs wildly is making the flesh that one pile flies horizontally. 男主踩在丧尸堆里,狂笑着制造出一堆横飞的血肉。 Tamura pours out the character to think the sentence place to choose the expression, said: „Can these pictures, be too bloodier?” 木村斟字酌句地挑选着措辞,说道:“这些画面,会不会太血腥了一些呢?” He was saying looked to Katou Yusuke, the mood in eye was strange, please ask how the teacher you...... found out this story?” 他说着望向了加藤悠介,眼中的情绪古怪至极,“请问老师你……到底是如何想出这种故事的呢?” In Katou Yusuke thinks, Utaha placed the leg under table to start one after next to shake, and asked: „Does Machida young lady, you feel?” 加藤悠介思索间,诗羽放在桌下的腿开始一下下地抖了起来,并开口询问道:“町田小姐,你觉得呢?” Yes, un ~ this indeed is a criterion very astonishing work.” Machida park first appraises one, immediately to revealing Utaha of some disgruntled expressions blinks. “是呢,嗯~这的确是一部尺度很惊人的作品呢。”町田苑子先是这么评价一句,随即又对露出些许不悦表情的诗羽眨了眨眼。 A thread of conversation road for grain shipment: „The rhythm and a minute/share of mirror of story grasp very well, is very outstanding.” 话锋一转道:“不过故事的节奏和分镜都掌握得很好,十分杰出。” Opening summarized the male Lord world outlooks and some backgrounds directly, used a suspense guidance reader, causes altogether the sentiment through the pitiful circumstances and base and low desire of male lord.” “开头直接简述了男主的世界观和部分背景,又用了一点悬念引导读者,通过男主的悲惨境遇和卑微愿望引起共情。” Behind makes the story develop rapidly after a sudden turn and penetrate the part of high tide, is influential. Said such like Editor Tamura, although criterion big a point, the relative expressive force is also astonishing.” “后面让故事急转直下、突入高潮的部分,也非常具有冲击力。就像木村编辑说得那样,虽然尺度大了一点,不过相对的表现力也非常惊人呢。” Generally speaking, not only the personality of character molds very well, the idea of work also original novel, has the creativity very much. And the rhythm development passing clouds and flowing water of story impulse full......” “总体来说,不仅人物的性格塑造得很好,作品的构思也非常得独到新颖,很有创造性。故事的节奏发展行云流水且冲击力十足……” She stops at this point for the time being, then saying of summary: I thought that was very perfectly not convention serial cartoon.” 她说到这里暂且停顿,然后总结似的说道:“我个人觉得是很完美又不俗套的连载漫画了。” The Utaha board the face, is seeming like wants to smile to restrain. 诗羽板着脸孔,似乎是想要笑又克制住了。 She looks at Machida park, in the wine red eye pupil dispatches several points of shy inquiry. 她看着町田苑子,酒红色的眼眸中递出几分扭捏的询问。 I make you express the standpoint, why spoke one's mind the boasts......? 我只是让你表达一下立场,为什么就自说自话地夸起来了……? Machida park shows a faint smile, did not argue, subsequently will look around white hair youngster, in the eye appears several points of blunt exclamation. 町田苑子对此微微一笑,也不辩解,继而将目光转向一旁的白发少年,眼中浮现出几分不加掩饰的惊叹。 In fact also indeed so. 事实上也的确如此。 As «Love Metronome Sand that looking at the opposite party has drawn by Good This» person. 作为看过对方所画的《恋爱节拍器沙由佳本》的人。 She the impression of this person to " the Roman flatter " , has stayed on that startled certainly the colorful picture technique, actually does not think that the brain hole of opposite party is so also big. 她对「埃罗芒阿」这个人的印象,一直停留在那惊才绝艳的画技上面,却是不想对方的脑洞也这么大。 The so-called layman watching the fun expert looks at the way. 所谓外行看热闹内行看门道。 What although she main is responsible in not dead Sichuan is the light novel, but under being influenced by what one sees and hears, understands something to the cartoon somewhat. 虽说她在不死川主要负责的是轻小说,但在耳濡目染下,对漫画也多多少少懂得一些东西。 ACGN does not divide family property. 况且ACGN本身就不分家。 Under reaches the same goal or conclusion from different approaches, actually regarding a work is good is bad, actually also very simple judgement rule. 殊途同归之下,对于一部作品究竟是好是坏,其实也有一个非常简单的判断标准。 That then can drive the reader mood, to initiate the reader to anticipate that is a good work. 那便是能够带动读者情绪、引发读者期待的,就是一部好的作品。 She is looking at that youngster, just like saw a free soul under that outstanding appearance. 她望着那名少年,宛如在那副俊逸的容貌下看到了一个自由的灵魂。 On the other hand, didn't Brother Katou, why your time work hard in the picture merit?” “话说回来,加藤小弟,为什么你这次不在画功上下功夫了呢?” Katou Yusuke looks at each other with her tranquilly, said succinctly: This is quite appropriate.” 加藤悠介平静地与她对视,简洁道:“这个比较合适。” This ~ ~ “这样吗~~” Machida park nods gently, turns to the minute/share of mirror of that several pages of large scales on, tried to imagine an opposite party previously that type, like the mysterious picture merit of experiencing personally. 町田苑子轻轻颔首,又翻到那几页大尺度的分镜上,试着想象了一下对方先前那种、让人有如身临其境的神奇画功。 A chill in the air spreads from the back, the brain also produced the intense illness, the heartbeat sped up slightly. 一股寒意不由从背脊扩散开来,大脑也产生出了强烈的不适,心跳微微加快。 She thinks that here stopped decisively, subsequently implored the one breath gently, returned to normal a mood. 她想到这里果断停了下来,继而轻轻吁出一口气,平复了一下心情。 Later turns the head to look that to the side displays peacefully- cartoon section subeditor. 之后才转头看向身旁表现得非常安静的-漫画部副主编。 Embarrassed editor-in-chief Tamura ~ ~ I some were too a moment ago excited, here invited you.” “不好意思木村主编~~我刚才有些太兴奋了,这里还是请你来说吧。” Tamura actually keeps silent, but stayed a while in opposite Utaha with her face on respectively, in eye looking pensive. 木村却不言不语,而是分别在对面的诗羽与她脸上停留了一会儿,眼中若有所思。 In the brain thinks certain spreads the rumor in not dead Sichuan. 脑中不由想到了某些流传在不死川内部的传言。 " Rosy cloud poem of light novel rookie king, is the princess in not dead Sichuan library. " 「轻小说新人王的霞诗子,是不死川文库的公主。」 An adamant writer, shows loving concern to have, to spoil subeditor to her again in addition...... 一个我行我素的作家,再加上一个对她关爱有加、娇惯不已的副主编…… Under two unify, something became have not been hard to understand. 两相结合之下,有些事情就变得没那么难以理解了。 At once thinks of another hearsay. 旋即又想到了另一个小道消息。 That then was just promoted to subeditor soon Machida park it is said that when the work termination of rosy cloud poem, will go a step further hopefully again. 那便是据说才刚刚升任副主编不久的町田苑子,将会在霞诗子的作品完结时,有望再进一步。 This rumor ten obtain laughably, and does not have the logic. 这种传言十分得可笑,并且毫无逻辑。 First did not say that the opposite party spans the subeditor from an ordinary edition, even abbreviated the step of director, is very odd. 先不说对方从一个普通编辑跨越到副主编,甚至省略了主任的这一步,就已经很离谱了。 But according to " Love Metronome » current rhythm, will basically end the itself/Ben in this in the winter. 而按照《恋爱节拍器》目前的节奏,基本在这个冬天就会完本。 On this basis, an ordinary light novel edition realizes three combinations all of a sudden, rises the fantasy story of editor-in-chief directly...... 在此基础上,一个普通的轻小说编辑一下子实现三连跳,直接升上主编的这种天方夜谭…… Even the light novel and don't the cartoon dare to play? 就算是轻小说和漫画也不敢这么玩吧? Tamura surging emotions surge, on the face actually maintains composure. 木村心潮涌动,脸上却是不动声色。 Child said facing the Machida park, he opens mouth close to, the smile gave the approval. 面对町田苑子所言,他张了张嘴巴,微笑地给予了认同。 „......, Just like Machida edits spoke, my view possibly kept a point slightly. After all this style is quite rare in the hot blooded cartoon . Moreover the criterion is also an issue, is very difficult to expect reader's response......” “……嗯,正如町田主编讲的一样,我的看法可能稍微保守了一点。毕竟这种风格在热血漫画中还是比较少见的,而且尺度也是一个问题,很难预料读者的反应……” He, then a words revolution said at this point: But, has to acknowledge that this original manuscript is indeed interesting, has the value that is worth waiting and seeing and waiting, I thought that can print to try.” 他说到这里顿了顿,然后话语一转说道:“不过,不得不承认这份原稿的确有趣,有值得观望和期待的价值,我觉得可以刊载一下试试。” Tamura is displays eventually very acts with constraint. 木村终究是表现得十分矜持。 Actually he after reading the original manuscript has also truly felt a little meaning, but also somewhat acts bashful in addition does not permit the response of criterion and market, therefore wants to wait and see again. 其实他在看过原稿以后也确实觉得有点意思,只是除此之外也有些拿捏不准尺度和市场的反应,因此才想要再观望一下。 In rosy cloud poem child and Machida park working as one, this idea does not seem able to put into practice. 只是在霞诗子和町田苑子的“齐心协力”下,这点想法似乎也无法实现了。 cough cough......” 咳咳……” Tamura is coughing gently, looks to Katou Yusuke, raised another matter. 木村轻轻咳嗽着,望向加藤悠介,提起了另一件事情。 „Then is the matter of contract, does not know that what this teacher does have to request?” “那么接下来就是合同的事情,不知道这位老师有什么要求吗?” This saying to be very interesting, many a little Party A father inquired the meaning of Party B. 这话很有意思,多少有一点甲方爸爸去询问乙方的意思。 However considering the influence, does not seem towering. 不过考虑到外界的影响,似乎也就没那么突兀了。 Katou Yusuke does not cover up, to the tone come straight to the point to say tranquilly: I want to retain other work copyrights excluding cartoon, the payment for published piece can lower.” 加藤悠介对此也不遮掩,以平静地口吻开门见山道:“我希望保留除漫画以外的其他作品版权,稿费可以低一点。” This......” Tamura selected under one slowly, places the both hands junction on table to grasp the fist, resembles was pondering. “这样啊……”木村缓缓点了一下头,放在桌上的双手交握成拳,似在思考。 Utaha sees this to have a mind to speak, child was actually stopped by the look by opposite Machida park, then keeps quiet. 诗羽见此有心想要说话,却被对面的町田苑子以眼神制止,遂保持安静。 Conference room peaceful. 会议室安静了下来。 Tamura a while turns turns the hand the original manuscript, a while has a look at opposite Yusuke, repeated several this processes. 木村一会儿翻翻手中的原稿,一会儿又看看对面的悠介,重复了几次这个过程。 After passes for about seven and eight minutes . 就这么过去大约七、八分钟以后。 He as if has a resolution finally, subsequently hesitated was saying: Then defers to original payment for published piece 1...... 12000 Japanese Yen, we only retain the exclusive copyright of cartoon, other you can stay behind, can such teacher accept?” 他似乎终于有所决断,继而沉吟着说:“那么就按照原稿费一……12000日元一张,我方仅保留漫画的独家版权,其他的您可以留下,这样老师可以接受吗?” Ok.” “可以。” Katou Yusuke has nothing to comply hesitant. 加藤悠介没什么犹豫地答应下来。 Tamura is also satisfied with his happiness, on the face had/left several points of smile from the heart, then said: Good, then I take the contract, but also asked the teacher to wait a bit the moment here.” 木村也对他的痛快感到满意,脸上多出了几分发自内心的笑容,然后说道:“好,那么我去拿一下合同,还请老师在这里稍等片刻。” The language finishes, then set out to leave the conference room. 语毕,便起身离开了会议室。 After he walks,...... 等他走后…… Machida young lady.” Katou Yusuke says: Help thank you.” “町田小姐。”加藤悠介开口说道:“谢谢你的帮忙。” However Machida park actually does not claim credit, but aiya ~ is waving, responded with a smile: 然而町田苑子却不居功,只是“哎呀哎呀~”地挥着手,笑着回应说: Had no need for politely, Brother Katou also helping me solve the matter of illustration after all, this was just the normal exchange of gifts between friends.” “用不着这么客气,毕竟加藤小弟也帮我解决了插画的事情,这只不过是正常的投桃报李而已。” „...... .” “……呼。” Nearby Utaha is backing on the seat back, two hold the chest, the white and tender slender right hand index finger is rapping the left arm gently, said. 一旁的诗羽背靠着座椅靠背,两手抱胸,白嫩修长的右手食指轻轻敲击着左臂,说了起来。 Basically, my many understanding why the sales volume of not dead Sichuan cartoon section was not good, has that vision averagely not wonderful subeditor, also can only make people feel that sighs with regret.” “基本上,我也多少理解了为什么不死川漫画部的销量不行了,有那种眼光平平无奇的副主编在,也只能让人感到扼腕叹息而已。” As if was still being reduced the payment for published piece the matter to be dissatisfied to her person. 似乎仍在对“她的人”被缩减稿费的事感到不满。 Can't say? Verset.” “不能这么说喔?小诗。” The Machida park child warning said: „The working method of everyone is different. Although Mr. Tamura has no result of extremely losing face/showing off, but relative, what mistake hasn't he basically made?” 町田苑子告诫般地说道:“每个人的工作方式都不一样。虽然木村先生没有什么太过出彩的成绩,不过相对的,他也基本没有犯过什么错误哦?” „......, therefore I repugnant mediocre person and senseless matter,......” the Utaha sound gradually changes is also small, finally is low inaudible. “……所以我才讨厌平庸的人和无趣的事,其中也……”诗羽的声音逐渐变小,最后更是低不可闻。 Un? What did you say? Verset ~ “嗯?你说了什么吗?小诗~” „...... It‘s nothing.” Utaha provoked a letting fall temple to send, has not explained. “……没什么。”诗羽拨弄了一下垂落的鬓发,没有多做解释。 Although opposite Machida park has not heard clearly, but sat in nearby Yusuke actually hears faintly. 而虽然对面的町田苑子并未听清,不过坐在旁边的悠介却是隐隐听到了。 " Therefore I repugnant mediocre person and senseless matter, includes me. " 「所以我才讨厌平庸的人和无趣的事,其中也包括我自己。」 This is the complete words that the young girl spoke, in the tone brings some to weaken with feel alienated, there is an aloof flavor. 这是少女所说的完整的话,语气里带着些许淡漠与疏离,又有一种超然物外的味道。 He has no response, everyone has does not hope the inquired into place. 他对此没什么反应,每个人都有不愿被人探究的地方。 World itself/Ben is various people snows, various people have the respective vagueness and brightness respectively. 世间本就是各人下雪,各人各有各自的隐晦和皎洁。 Does not need others to inquire into...... 并不需要他人去探究…… „......” “……” Utaha silent all of a sudden, continues saying: „...... Can't many point image Machida young lady such person? Such words at least can also unearth the outstanding work to come much.” 诗羽沉默了一下子,又继续说道:“……就不能多一点像町田小姐这样的人吗?那样的话至少还能多挖掘出一点优秀的作品来。” You are praising me, is praising itself? Verset.” Machida park teased with a smile, looked that was very gentle to her look, just like looking child who needs to protect. “你这是在夸我呢,还是在夸自己呢?小诗。”町田苑子笑着打趣,看向她的眼神却十分温柔,宛如在看一个需要保护的孩子。 I in statement fact. Not only need limit many to the author, and wants to carry over the popular serial publication, did not think that this idea was too impractical?” “我只是在陈述事实而已。既要对作者限制过多,又想要带出热门的连载作品来,不觉得这种想法太不切实际了吗?” This ~ must say that each author is different. Although the verset you and Brother Katou, are that type can bloom the type of brilliance under breeding, but more creators need the editor to look.” “这个嘛~要说每个作者都不同呢。虽然小诗你和加藤小弟,是那种在放养下才能绽放出光彩的类型,不过更多的创作者还是需要编辑去照料的。” Machida park said: At least we, are you, no one meets does not hope that can see the work to be successful, therefore does not need is so extreme.” 町田苑子如是说:“至少不论是我们,还是你们,没有人会不希望能够见到作品成功,所以不必这么偏激。” Several people chatted a while. 几人聊了一会儿。 Discussed to meet the manuscript about Katou Yusuke as illustration master while convenient the matter. 顺带探讨了一下关于加藤悠介以插画师身份接稿的事情。 The Yusuke decision of unhappy fetter meets the manuscript as free man, but does not plan to become the special-purpose illustration master in not dead Sichuan. 不喜束缚的悠介决定以自由人的身份接稿,而不打算成为不死川的专用插画师。 Like this although was short of the basic salary, can only gain the pay according to the achievement, but can actually voluntarily the choice whether must take over certain jobs, rather than not the dead Sichuan stopper to him anything, must make anything. 这样子虽然少了底薪,只能按成果获取薪资,但却可以自行选择是否要接某些工作,而不是不死川塞给他什么,就必须要做什么。 The pricing similarly is 12000 Japanese Yen one. 定价同样是12000日元一张。 Above this, if also has other demands, or involved the transaction of commercial copyright, will recomputate the price, was free. 在此之上若是还有其他的需求,或是涉及到了商业版权的交易,也会重新计算价格,非常自由。 After reaching an agreement the matter in this aspect, editor-in-chief Tamura also brings to print the good contract to return. 商量好这方面的事情之后,木村主编也带着打印好的合同返回。 Katou Yusuke observed an actual issue of contract, took at the request of Utaha to her glanced. 加藤悠介察看了一下合同的具体事项,又在诗羽的要求下拿给她过目了一遍。 Until had confirmed after having no issue, signed the contract...... 直到确认过没什么问题之后才签订了合同…… Although this behavior is some too does not trust to Machida park, but related to the situation of benefit, do not probe the will of the people, like this to each other is good. 虽然这种行为对町田苑子似是有些不太信任,不过涉及到利益的情况下,还是不要去试探人心,这样对彼此都好。 Signs the contract time. 签合同的时候。 Katou Yusuke pondered, wrote down " liana tree " in pen name that column finally this name, and also wrote own given name and bank account. 加藤悠介思考了一下,最终还是在笔名那一栏写下了「藤本树」这个名字,并把自己的本名与银行账户也写了上去。 Because of he grown relations, has not needed the guardian to accompany actually. 因为他尚未成年的关系,其实是需要监护人陪同的。 However with the assistance of Machida park, matter also obtained the tactful solution. 不过在町田苑子的协助下,事情也得到了委婉的解决。 That then first is in the mountain Mui Ne of Saitama prefecture through telephone explanation, then posted in the past the signature in the way of express item the contract, later signing a chapter of contract sent. 那便是先与人在埼玉县的本山美奈通过电话说明情况,然后将合同以快件的方式寄送过去签章,之后再把签好名章的合同寄回来。 Until completes that step, this contract is officially becomes effective. 直到完成那一步,这份合同才算是正式生效。 Although is not very convenient, step that but this must pass through. 虽然很不方便,但这又是必须要经过的步骤。 However is good because of being mountain Mui Ne has been very tolerant to the matter that he wants to do, therefore also has no twists and turns, but will delay time. 不过好在是本山美奈对他想做的事一直很宽容,所以也没什么波折,只是会耽搁一点时间而已。 After signing the contract . 签好合同以后。 Tamura puts out a hand to shake hand on own initiative, said: Then later also please look , the liana sets up the teacher.” 木村主动伸出手来握手,说道:“那么以后还请多关照了,藤本树老师。” I send to printing your original manuscript later, can print if as expected this weekend, will just catch up with next time release, the payment for published piece will enter your account according to the agreement date of contract on time.” “我稍后就把您的原稿送去印刷,不出意外的话这周末就能刊载了,刚好赶上下期的发行,稿费会按照合同的约定日期准时打进您的账户。” In addition, what other issues do you have?” “除此之外,请问您还有什么其他的问题吗?” Katou Yusuke shakes the head no longer said. 加藤悠介摇了摇头不再多说。 Said goodbye to editor-in-chief Tamura and Machida park, two people who get through the matter left not the dead Sichuan building. 告别了木村主编和町田苑子,办完事情的两人离开了不死川大楼。 Does not have the choice to take the taxi again. 没有选择再次乘坐计程车。 Yusuke and Utaha walk toward the direction of station together, step the distance of going home. 悠介诗羽一同向车站的方向走去,踏上回家的路程。 ...... …… ( Owes manuscript 3 / 10?) (欠稿3/10?) Thank Book friend Something went wrong, Spring flower blood oppressive Hitting enjoys. 感谢【书友[Not Found]】、【春花血虐】的打赏。
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