PS: Young Brother Bai asked the recommendation ticket PS:小白大哥求推荐票 Gazes after the scar of knife wound to sprout/moe the disciple little white baby shoe, incarnation small rabbit, sneaks off fast, stretch/open Tan has not done yes what's the matter, probably feared very much he resembles, was not a moment ago chatted was very relaxed? Oh, the millet is not very relaxed, the entire journey fears. 目送刀疤萌徒小白童鞋,化身小兔子似的,飞快溜走,张叹没搞明白怎么回事,好像很怕他似的,刚才不是聊的挺轻松吗？噢,小米很不轻松,全程怕怕的。 little white words of machine gun, hit stretch/open Tan was a little a moment ago ignorant, in the mind playbacked three to understand what is heard, originally for millet platform, but also a little small elder sister style. 小白刚才一顿机关枪似的话,打的张叹有点懵,脑海里回放了三遍才听明白,原来是为小米站台呢,还挺有点小姐姐风范的。 Opened sighs selected a movie at home, the nest looked on the sofa. What previous time selecting grades the high movie, what this time selecting is the box office high movie, grading is relatively high, box office really high. 张叹在家里挑了部电影,窝在沙发上看。上次挑的是评分高的电影,这次挑的是票房高的电影,评分是相对高,票房是真的高。 After looking, is very late, stretch/open Tan goes downstairs, arrives at a building active region, some children have returned to the bedroom to sleep, some children are watching the television, sits on the respective small chair, is raising the small head, dark mass, neat. 看完后,已经很晚了,张叹下楼,来到一楼活动区,一些小朋友已经回寝室睡觉了,还有一些小朋友在看电视,坐在各自的小椅子上,昂着小脑袋,乌压压的,齐刷刷的。 little white sits in some children, a big eye sticks on the television simply, in the eye does not have other to exist. 小白坐在这部分小朋友中,一双大眼睛简直粘在电视机上,眼中没有其他存在。 Opened sighs looked at her several eyes, because she too „aggressive”. 张叹不由多看了她几眼,因为她太“霸气”了。 Sees only little white baby shoe left hand to hug the millet, the right hand is building Meng Chengcheng shoulder, on the face is pasting the wound post, wears China, I am big brother’s appearance, making one look askance. 只见小白童鞋左手搂着小米,右手搭着孟程程的肩膀,脸上贴着创口贴,身穿大中华,一副我是大哥的模样,让人侧目。 little Teacher willow reminded her several times, without effect, saw her to seem like the big brother, but was really not a big brother, when has not seen. 小柳老师提醒她好几次,没效果,又见她只是貌似大哥,而不真是大哥,所以当没看见。 stretch/open Tanhe the staff chatted several, urged do not make the little friend watch the too long television, the result staff turned around to turn off the television, the catching up children who caught up with duck slept, suddenly the small milk sound rose from all directions, protested, moreover a large part looked to innocent him. 张叹和工作人员聊了几句,叮嘱不要让小朋友看太久的电视,结果工作人员转身就把电视关了,赶鸭子似的赶小朋友们去睡觉,一时间小奶音四起,纷纷抗议,而且很大一部分看向了无辜的他。 stretch/open Tan: 张叹: Your how many meanings? I have not left with enough time! Doesn't this make the children bear a grudge me?? 你几个意思？我都还没来得及离开！这不让小朋友都记恨我吗？？ little white is staring at already has closed television god several seconds, before running up to the staff body, inquired that can make her look again for 5 minutes, 2 minutes also good, she must know that the donkey can die, otherwise she cannot fall asleep tonight, in the dream is the donkey. 小白盯着已经关了的电视愣神好几秒,跑到工作人员身前,询问能不能让她再看五分钟,二分钟也行,她一定要知道小驴会不会死,不然她今晚睡不着,梦里全是驴。 The staff look with the vision of inquiry to stretch/open Tan. 工作人员拿询问的眼光看向张叹。 stretch/open Tan: * 张叹:* You return to dislike toward the fiery pit in me do not satisfy a craving, must take a tuba to indicate and confirm me! How does this make little white think me? Just became reconciled! 你这是把我往火坑里推还嫌不过瘾啊,非得拿个大喇叭指认我！这让小白会怎么想我？刚刚和好呢！ Really, slightly shows the whites of the eyes to him, rubbed the small milk teeth, draws the staff to him, inquired: „Uncle, is this several?” 果然,小白瞪向他,磨了磨小奶牙,把工作人员拉到他跟前,询问:“大叔,这是几？” Stretches out two fingers to shake in him at present shakes. 伸出两根指头在他眼前晃啊晃。 How many meaning this are? 几个意思这是？ stretch/open Tan said: „2.” 张叹说:“二。” Said me very 2?? Fart black just cancelled, came the new nickname? 说我很二？？屁儿黑刚取消,就来新外号了？ Determined that stretch/open Tan has not been drunk, little white puts down the heart, the adjuration looks to meet the television again, sees the donkey to live well, otherwise she tonight certainly live is not good. 确定张叹没有醉,小白放下心,恳请再看会电视,看到小驴活着就好,否则她今晚一定活的不好。 stretch/open Tan said: „That looks for 5 minutes, now starts to time.” 张叹说:“那就看五分钟吧,现在开始计时。” He also said to the staff: „You lead other children to go to the bedroom, here I look.” 他又对工作人员说:“你带其他小朋友去寝室吧,这里我来照顾。” After 10 minutes,...... 十分钟后…… stretch/open Tan: „5 minutes had arrived, now already two 5 minutes.” 张叹:“五分钟早就到了,现在已经两个五分钟了。” little white is staring at the television, did not return said: „But the donkey had not been rescued.” 小白盯着电视,头也不回地说:“可是小驴还没被救出来呀。” stretch/open Tan is also watching the animated cartoon, he is a screenwriter, if he writes, the donkey must be rescued at least after two volumes, after must hang the foot child's appetite, gets out of trouble, where is so quick, rises after staying low, can attract the little white like this naive little friend. 张叹也在看动画片,他是编剧,如果他来写,小驴要被解救至少在两集之后,得吊足小朋友的胃口后才脱困,哪有那么快,先抑后扬,才能吸引小白这样的天真小朋友。 „Sleeps sleeps, I turn off the television, you can then look tomorrow. Told you, I have looked, the donkey has not died, certainly will be rescued.” “睡觉啦睡觉啦,我关电视,你明天可以接着看。告诉你,我看过,小驴没有死,一定会被救出来的。” Hurried to the bedroom little white with great difficulty, stretch/open Tan also returns to the room, sits the desk, turns on the computer, sees abundantly the boiling peanut in bowl, pinches one, bares the shell, reveals two grains of full boiled shelled peanuts, fragrance flutters the tip of the nose, making one want to deliver to the mouth especially. 好不容易把小白赶去了寝室,张叹也回到房间,坐回书桌,打开电脑,看到盛在碗里的煮花生,捏起一颗,剥开壳,露出两粒饱满的煮熟的花生米,一股香气飘到鼻尖,让人特想送到嘴里。 He moves the mouse, opened an agent company, examines the housing price of Chang'an Avenue West, if truly today's private kitchen boss said that this house price high oddness, the rent makes one look to sigh. 他挪动鼠标,打开了一家房产中介公司,查看西长安街的房价,确实如今天私厨老板说的,这一带的房价高的离谱,租金让人望而兴叹。 stretch/open Tan glanced over a while, has not seen Chang'an Avenue West to have many sell housing stocks, overwhelming majority only rent does not sell, belongs does not have the city valuably. 张叹浏览了一会儿,没看到西长安街有多少出售的房源,绝大部分都是只租不卖,属于有价无市。 stretch/open Tan estimated that if sold little red horse academy place, he net worth over a hundred million, does not need to worry for the fund of academy immediately, does not need to worry for the matter of work, can choose have thought the life. 张叹估算了一下,如果把小红马学园这块地卖了,他立刻身家上亿,再也不用为学园的资金发愁,也不用为工作的事操心,可以选择过自己想过的生活。 If he has the fervor, can write a script, oneself pull up the dramatic team, oneself are the director, does, the chase vainly hoped for, the complete abbreviation starts the stage and accumulating, reaches one's goal instantly. Naturally, can succeed does not know. 他要是有激情,可以自己写个剧本,自己拉起剧组,自己当导演,搞起来,追逐梦想,完全省略起步和积累的阶段,一步到位。当然,能不能成功就不知道了。 Opens to sigh ten to divert attention, what only worry is, the little red horse academy is grandfather grandmother leaves his . Moreover, although he does not have to understand specially, but can guess correctly, two old people also, treasure to here. 张叹十分心动,唯一顾虑的是,小红马学园是外公外婆留给他的,而且,虽然他没有特别了解,但可以猜到,两位老人还在的时候,对这里十分珍惜。 The small red horse late at night the academy embodied the painstaking care of parents. 小红马深夜学园凝聚了二老的心血。 stretch/open Tan hesitates, does not want to understand, turned off the homepage, sleeps! 张叹犹豫,没想明白,关了网页,睡觉！ Next morning goes to the company, has the staff to bring a new script. 第二天一早来到公司,有工作人员拿来一份新剧本。 stretch/open Tan opens looked, the name of this script was «Under Day Yu». 张叹翻开一看,这份剧本的名字叫《天虞山下》。 For serveral days stretch/open Tan the work flow was the morning reads the script generally, in the afternoon met to discuss. 这些天张叹的工作流程一般是上午看剧本,下午开会讨论。 Others also received, sits is opening sighs opposite Jiang Rong from the computer front the head, asked: „Did the script that stretch/open Tan, you receive what call?” 其他人也收到了,坐在张叹对面的姜蓉从电脑前侧过脑袋,问:“张叹,你收到的剧本叫什么？” What everyone not necessarily looks is the same share script, sometimes every itself/Ben, various, sometimes is the same itself/Ben, sometimes several people are the same, several other people are also different, therefore Jiang Rongcai will have this one to ask. 大家不一定看的是同一份剧本,有的时候人手一本,各不相同,有的时候是同一本,有的时候几个人相同,另外几个人又不同,所以姜蓉才会有此一问。 „«Under Day Yu».” stretch/open Tan said that „your?” “《天虞山下》。”张叹说道,“你的呢？” In Jiang Rong looks at to him hand script demonstration, said: „Good strange script, I see such long name for the first time.” 姜蓉把手上的剧本展示给他看,笑着说:“好奇怪的剧本,我还是第一次见到这么长的名字。” stretch/open Tan sees impressively: «This Formidable Very Excessively Is obviously discrete»! 张叹赫然看到:《这个勇者明明很强却过分谨慎》！ The script when this is not does he throw resume supplements??!! 这不是他投简历时附带的剧本吗？？！！ He also thinks that the movie studio forgot this script, it seems like today plans to appraise. 他还以为制片厂把这份剧本忘了,看来今天打算对此评估。 „I thought that this name has the individuality very much, one made one remember . Moreover, selected the topic very much, was very strong, was excessively discrete, I found it very interesting.” stretch/open Tan boasts to say silently. “我觉得这名字很有个性,一下就让人记住了,而且,很点题,很强,过分谨慎,我觉得很有意思。”张叹默默自夸道。 Jiang Rongwen said that thinks, the nod said that actually. 姜蓉闻言,想了想,点头说那倒是。 The script that they appraise does not have the author name, anonymous, helping everyone open wide, does not want to worry. 他们评估的剧本都是没有作者名字的,匿名,便于大家敞开来说,不要有所顾虑。 The script in stretch/open Tan hand does not have the name, but after looking, he thought that absolutely is old writing by hand, the plot has the logic rigorously, is very appealing. 张叹手里的这本剧本同样没有名字,但是看完后,他觉得绝对是个老手写的,剧情严谨有逻辑,很吸引人。 „Ha” “哈哈哈” Sits opposite Jiang Rong to smile to make noise suddenly , the side excessive said to stretch/open Tan: „stretch/open Tan, this script feels all right, is quite funny, do you want to take a look? This formidable is quite funny, is serious that teases, you know Slime who how he hits a biological chain lowest level?” 坐对面的姜蓉忽然笑出声,又侧过头对张叹说:“张叹,这份剧本好意思,好搞笑,你要不要看看？这个勇者好逗,是一本正经的那种逗,你知道他是怎么打一只生物链最底层的史莱姆吗？” stretch/open Tanting supports. 张叹挺捧场的。 „How to hit?” “怎么打的？” Must support diligently, stretch/open Tan pretends to think, asked: „With big move?” 要捧场就努力到底,张叹假装想了想,又问:“用大招？” Jiang Rong said with a smile: „Guessed correctly, but is inaccurate , to continue to try hard.” 姜蓉笑道:“猜到了一些,但还不准确,继续努力。” stretch/open Tancuo twice, Jiang Rong could not have borne, laughs saying: „He has the full power unexpectedly, has you to know full power? He was saved the formidables in the world by the summon, the peerless talent in god, kills a Slime to have the full power, haha.” 张叹错了两次,姜蓉已经忍不住了,哈哈大笑道:“他竟然出全力,出全力你知道吗？他可是被召唤来拯救世界的勇者啊,神界里的绝世天才,杀一只史莱姆都要出全力,哈哈。” stretch/open Tan followed to smile two, Jiang Rong also said: „Do you know? He and others fights to prepare the third mate armor, puts on, spare, spare spare, ha. This is who writes, certainly is a funny ratio.” 张叹跟着笑了两下,姜蓉又说道:“你知道吗？他和别人打架要准备三副铠甲,一副穿,一副备用,还有一副备用的备用,哈哈哈。这到底是谁写的,一定是个逗比。” stretch/open Tan:( ;) 张叹:(;) Allows you to organize the language! 允许你重新组织一下语言！ stretch/open Tan has not returned to her, others interposed. 张叹没有回她,其他人纷纷插话。 „Right right, I am also reading this script, this formidable must laugh at me, has not seen the person who has instigated.” “对啊对啊,我也在看这本剧本,这个勇者要把我笑死了,没见过这么怂的人。” Another person said: „Others did not call to instigate, was excessively discrete. What person this is, he has experienced anything.” 另一个人说:“人家不叫怂,就是过分谨慎。什么人啊这是,他到底经历过什么。” Also some people said: „He is a coveting life and fearing death person.” 又有人接话:“他就是个贪生怕死的人。” „I did not feel, he is discrete, but is not considered as absolutely the person of coveting life and fearing death.” “我不觉得,他谨慎,但绝对不算是贪生怕死的人。” „Hasn't this called to covet life and fear death?” “这还不叫贪生怕死？” ...... …… Jiang Rong also joined their discussion: „He is a funny ratio.” 姜蓉也加入了他们的讨论:“他是个逗比。” „What you said is which script?” Also some people joined. “你们说的是哪本剧本？”又有人加入了。 Because there is an own script, therefore stretch/open Tan anticipates afternoon appraisal meeting. 因为有自己的剧本,所以张叹十分期待下午的评估会。 In the afternoon, has had the lunch, took a nap a while, two points, the vice-chairman informs everyone to meet to the conference room. 下午,吃过午饭,午睡了一会儿,两点,副组长通知大家到会议室开会。 Opens sighs takes the notebook, arrives at the old position to sit down, Jiang Rong sits near his right hand, lowered the sound to say to him excitedly: „Finally must know that which the formidable who teased the ratio to write.” 张叹带上笔记本电脑,来到老位置坐下,姜蓉坐在他右手边,兴奋地压低声音对他说:“终于要知道哪个逗比写的这本勇者了。” stretch/open Tanding she was looking at one, thought that you determined must shout this author does tease the ratio? 张叹盯着她看了一眼,心想你确定要一直喊这个作者逗比吗？ Team leader old Liu last, took a seat said: „Same as usual, come, chatted the scripts on your hand, stretch/open Tan first came.” 组长老刘最后一个到,落座就说:“老样子,来,谈谈你们手上的剧本,张叹先来。” He first selects stretch/open Tan each time. 他每次都是先点张叹。 stretch/open Tan has been used to it, hears word said: „My script was called «Under Day Yu», what said was...... the merit many......” 张叹已经习惯了,闻言说道:“我的这本剧本叫《天虞山下》,讲的是……优点很多……” After speaking big pile of merits, starts to speak the shortcoming. 讲了一大堆优点后,开始讲缺点。 Jiang Rong said in side low voice: „Shortcoming has three.” 姜蓉在旁边小声说:“缺点有三条。” stretch/open Tan: „Shortcoming has three.” 张叹:“缺点有三条。” Jiang Rong happily shot a look at stretch/open Tan one eyes, she was used to stretch/open Tan the custom, suspected very much he has the obsession, the appraisal script, he lists three shortcomings each time. 姜蓉得意地瞥了张叹一眼,她习惯了张叹的习惯,很怀疑他是不是有强迫症,每次评估剧本,他都是列出三条缺点。 As for merit, possibly, possibly many strip, the only shortcoming forever is three. 至于优点,可能一条,也可能很多条,唯独缺点永远是三条。 stretch/open Tan is still continuing: „First, the entire story is a little stuffy, lacks novelly, is slightly tasteless......” 张叹还在继续说:“第一条,整个故事有点闷,缺乏新奇点,略显乏味……” After saying, team leader old Liu also asked: „To these three shortcomings, you said solution.” 讲完后,组长老刘又问:“对这三条缺点,你说说解决的办法。” stretch/open Tan: „In view of first, I thought that can join a supporting role, the major function is the active atmosphere, for example, pet......” 张叹:“针对第一条,我觉得可以加入一个配角,主要功能是活跃氛围,比如,宠物……” Such example are many, for example the animated cartoon «Hua Mulan» wood must the dragon, because of joining of this small role, making this animated cartoon vividly more interesting. 这样的例子很多,比如动画片《花木兰》中的木须龙,因为这个小角色的加入,让这部动画片生动有趣了许多。 In many animations has such setting, is not only the animation, the honorable person film and television is also the same, often establishes a funny ratio side the lead, the active atmosphere uses, for example «Tomb raider Note» in fatty. 很多动漫里都有这样的设定,不仅是动漫,真人影视也一样,往往在主角身边设置一个逗比,活跃氛围用,比如《盗墓笔记》里的胖子。 After team leader old Liu listens, the nod shows neither approval nor disapproval, making three colleagues who also receive this script also chat the view. 组长老刘听完后,点头不置可否,让同样收到这份剧本的三名同事也谈谈看法。 After everyone said that he said: „These comments that you make I will all feed back to the dramatic team.” 大家讲完后,他才说道:“你们提的这些意见我会全部反馈给剧组。” „Dramatic team?” Some people asked curiously. “剧组？”有人好奇地问。 old Liu nods saying: „This is actually in the factory a project that prepares to launch, this script is the screenwriter in factory writes, listens to our suggestions especially, you said good.” 老刘点头道:“这其实是厂里准备启动的一个项目,这份剧本就是厂里的编剧写的,特地来听听我们的意见建议,你们讲的都不错。” The people are somewhat excited, this is the first time that must be operational facing the script that oneself appraise. 众人有些兴奋,这是第一次遇到自己评估的剧本要投入使用。 old Liu: „Ok, we continued, Jiang Rong, I thought you to be eager to try, says your.” 老刘:“好了,我们继续,姜蓉,我看你跃跃欲试,讲讲你的。”