PS: Discovers? This book has signed. Thanks winter hot hitting to enjoy, first. Moreover, the role column has established, has little white chart. PS:发现没？本书已经签约了。谢谢冬日炎炎的打赏,第一个哦。另外,角色栏已经建立,有小白的图。 Mentioned by name by the team leader, review «This Formidable Very Excessively Is obviously discrete», Jiang Rong is impatient, the opens the mouth comes. 被组长点名,点评《这个勇者明明很强却过分谨慎》,姜蓉迫不及待,张口就来。 „Team leader, my script is very interesting......” “组长,我这个剧本很有意思……” Spoke big pile of merits. 讲了一大堆优点。 old Liu maintains composure, said: „Shortcoming also says.” 老刘不动声色,说道:“缺点也讲讲。” Jiang Rongleng, said: „I feel not to have the shortcoming, very good.” 姜蓉愣了下,说:“我觉得没缺点,很好。” old Liu: „How possibly not to have the shortcoming, is the script has the shortcoming.” 老刘:“怎么可能没缺点,是剧本就有缺点。” Jiang Rong thinks saying: „Really does not have the shortcoming.” 姜蓉想了想说:“真没缺点。” The team leader said: „I look at your shortcoming meaning.” 组长说:“我看你这人缺点意思。” „Hehe, Team leader, I am short, actually the shortcoming also has, for example, some plot comparison hackneyed stuff, summoned the warrior to save the world like the princess......” “呵呵,组长,我短浅,其实缺点也有,比如,有些情节比较老套,像公主召唤勇士来拯救世界……” She squeezed out three shortcomings from the gap between teeth, could not say again other. 她从牙缝里挤出了三条缺点,再说不出其他的了。 Well? Is three? 咦？怎么也是三条？ The team leader looks all around the person who other see a play, asked: „Others? what Chao?” 组长环顾其他看戏的人,问:“其他人？何超？” what Chao spoke on own viewpoint, finally said: „Last I thought that is the biggest shortcoming, will be fears the market to accept will have the difficulty.” 何超讲了自己的观点,最后说道:“最后一条我觉得是最大的缺点,就是恐怕市场接受会有困难。” The team leader said morosely: „Do not pat a racket, discharges, come! Disposable, happy!” 组长不高兴地说:“别拍一拍,就屙一点,来！一次性,痛快点！” The people chill, what Chao said hastily: „The most major characteristics of formidable are are very very discrete......” 众人恶寒,何超连忙说:“勇者的最大特点是很强却很谨慎……” Also two after him discussed to the view of formidable, thinks interesting, when inventories the shortcoming, said that does not meet immediately the mainstream demand of market. 在他之后又有两人谈了对勇者的看法,都认为有趣,但是盘点缺点时,都说不符合当下市场的主流需求。 What at that moment is the mainstream demand of market? 当下市场的主流需求是什么？ Warm-blooded, overcomes one difficulty after another, evenly matched, even the enemy potential is big, the lead falls into the hopeless situation, the microcosm erupts, explodes plants...... must pass through the dangers and difficulties and a narrow escape in brief, can defeat the opponent, realizes the transformation. 热血,过关斩将,势均力敌,甚至敌人势大,主角陷入绝境,小宇宙爆发,爆种……总之一定要经过艰难险阻、九死一生,才能战胜对手,实现蜕变。 But formidable script, runs counter with the market mainstream. Lead strength strong excess, but also is so discrete, that also hits, spanks to consider as finished. 而勇者这个剧本,和市场主流背道而驰。主角实力强的过分,还这么谨慎,那还打个屁啊,打屁股算了。 The people said that team leader old Liu showed neither approval nor disapproval, next group of speeches. 众人讲完,组长老刘不置可否,点下一组发言。 Jiang Rong cannot bear, interposes: „Does eldest child, who this script is write?” 姜蓉忍不住,插话道:“老大,这份剧本是谁写的？” old Liu shot a look at her one eyes saying: „Who writes important?” 老刘瞥了她一眼说:“谁写的重要吗？” Jiang Rong: „I want to know that this teases in a big way...... ” 姜蓉:“我就是想认识一下这个逗……大大嘛。” old Liu said: „You then ask stretch/open Tan, he knows.” 老刘说:“你回头问问张叹,他知道。” One that everyone brushes looked to stretch/open Tan, Jiang Rong said: „Opens sighs you to know, you also make fun with me in the morning, does not uphold justice.” 大家刷的一下看向张叹,姜蓉说:“张叹原来你知道啊,那你上午还跟我打哈哈,不仗义。” stretch/open Tan: „Said your review time will have the worry.” 张叹:“说了你点评的时候会有顾虑。” Jiang Rong suspects saying: „Is the team leader writes?” 姜蓉怀疑道:“难道是组长写的？” old Liu is a little happy, but denied: „My mentality is not young.” 老刘有点开心,但否认道:“我心态没那么年轻。” Then, the remaining several people of 11 speeches, after the conference ended, old Liu opening sighed stays behind, discussion his formidable script. 接下来,剩下的几人一一发言,会议结束后,老刘把张叹留下,讨论他的勇者剧本。 „Overall is very good, but everyone a little said is very right, this style and present market mainstream demand difference are too big, the corresponding risk is also too big......” “总体很不错,但是大家有一点说的很对,这种风格和现在的市场主流需求差异太大,相应的风险也太大……” Opens sighs can understand the meaning of team leader. 张叹能理解组长的意思。 Making the animation is a very long process, is more troublesome than the honorable person film and television, the production process is numerous and diverse, related to 1100 people of cooperation based on division of labor, each picture takes a picture to come out, therefore project, once initiates a project, quick also needs two years. 做动画是个很漫长的过程,比真人影视麻烦,制作流程繁杂,涉及到百千号人分工协作,每一个画面都要一帧一帧画出来,所以项目一旦立项,快的话也要两年。 Such big resilience, spends astonishingly, the animation company has to operate discretely, in order to with his gambling formidable, is inferior to be safe, initiates a project a mainstream animation, for example «Under Day Yu». 这么大的工程量,耗资惊人,动漫公司不得不谨慎操作,与其赌一部勇者,不如稳妥起见,立项一部主流动漫,比如《天虞山下》。 After wants to understand, stretch/open Tan has nothing regrettably, initially has not thought the formidable can initiate a project, but wants to listen to the specialized screenwriter to the view of this story, the reaction of probe market, the goal has achieved now. 想明白后,张叹没什么遗憾,当初也没想过勇者能立项,只是想听听专业编剧对这个故事的看法,试探市场的反应,如今目的已经达到了。 Returns to the seat, opens sighs packs the thing to prepare to get off work, Jiang Rongzhui asked: „stretch/open Tanzhang sighed, who haven't you told my formidable are write?” 回到座位上,张叹收拾东西准备下班,姜蓉追上来问:“张叹张叹,你还没告诉我勇者是谁写的？” stretch/open Tanbian walks while said: „Why you want to know that who the author is?” 张叹边走边说:“你干嘛这么想知道作者是谁？” Jiang Rong: „I thought that this author suits my taste very much, wants to know, is, said quickly said quickly.” 姜蓉:“我觉得这个作者很合我的口味,想认识一下嘛,是谁呀,快说快说。” „I.” “我。” stretch/open Tan said, entered the elevator, Jiang Rongleng visits him outside. 张叹说完,进了电梯,姜蓉愣在外面看着他。 „Can you come in? The elevator must close.” “你要进来吗？电梯要关了。” „?.” “啊？哦哦哦。” Jiang Rong followed in a hurry the elevator, continued to stare at him to look. 姜蓉匆匆跟着进了电梯,继续盯着他看。 „What look this is?” “什么眼神这是？” „stretch/open did Tan, what you say a moment ago? Is the formidable you writes?” “张叹,你刚才说什么？勇者是你写的？” „Right, I am that funny ratio.” “对,我就是那个逗比。” „...... You are the secret big shot, looks at me to laugh intentionally.” “……原来你是幕后大佬,故意看我笑话。” stretch/open Tan did not have the moment to stay, has the elevator, outside person came, sees only inside girl to hit the electricity stairwell in the specific use, mouth muttered me to tease compared with me is. 张叹没有片刻停留,出了电梯,外头的人进来,只见里面一个女孩在用头撞电梯井,口里喃喃我是逗比我才是。 Some people asked with good intention: „Elevator must come up, do you go out?” 有人好心地问:“电梯要上去了,你出去吗？” Jiang Rong touches the forehead, the skin very compact, has not damaged by abrasion. 姜蓉摸摸额头,皮很紧致,没有擦破。 „8 buildings thank.” “八楼谢谢。” Jiang Rong who goes to return to found the colleagues who get off work to leave one after another, ran saying that you know, wrote of formidable to tease the ratio is stretch/open Tan. 去而复返的姜蓉找到正陆续下班离开的同事们,一个个跑去说,你知道吗,写勇者的那个逗比是张叹。 Gossips very much bored very much. 很无聊很八卦。 Opens sighs comes out from the place iron gate, to the food market, bought some vegetables/dishes, goes home, curls up the sleeve, encloses the apron, starts to make the dinner. 张叹从地铁口出来,到了菜市场,买了些菜,回到家,卷起袖子,围上围裙,开始做晚饭。 He to eating quite tasteful, the cook is very good. 他对吃比较讲究,厨艺很不错。 Opens the window of kitchen, transmits in the courtyard the voice of child. 推开厨房的窗户,传来院子里小孩子的声音。 „Has the little friend in? Children you in?” “有小朋友在吗？小朋友们你们在不在？” „A melon baby has not.” “一个瓜娃子都莫有。” Under the trees complement, has not seen the person, but does not look also knows, is little white baby shoe. 树木掩映下,没看到人,但是不看也知道,是小白童鞋。 Spoke the Sichuan words her. 说川话的就她一个。 Without a while, in the courtyard broadcasts bang bang dá dá the sound, a small form plays the soccer in the courtyard, really wears little white baby shoe of China. 没一会儿,院子里传来砰砰哒哒的声音,一个小小的身影在院子里踢足球,果然是身穿大中华的小白童鞋。 This little friend is first arrives at the academy, without little friend time, she plays the soccer, or digs the sand. 这个小朋友又是第一个到学园,没有小伙伴的时候,她就踢足球,或者挖沙子。 It‘s nothing skill, is pursues to kick a foot, then pursues, kicks a foot, with jogging only the difference, has a soccer to tease her. 没什么技巧,就是追上去踢一脚,然后又追上去,又踢一脚,跟跑步唯一的区别,就是有个足球在逗她。 Suddenly, little white baby shoe raised the head stretch/open Tan who sees the window, raised the small head to stare was looking at the little while, pastes the small face and that the wound pasted sighs relative. 忽然,小白童鞋抬头看到窗口的张叹,昂着小脑袋愣着看了会儿,贴了创口贴的小脸和张叹相对。 She holds the soccer, runs to be nearer, the pestle under the window, puts out a hand two hand fingers, lifts asked high: „Uncle, is this several?” 她抱起足球,跑近一些,杵在窗口下,伸手两根手指头,举高高问:“大叔,这是几？” stretch/open Tan speechless, does not want to reply, even white pushed down own intelligence quotient, but did not reply that little white thinks he got drunk. 张叹一阵无语,很不想回答,平白拉低了自己的智商,但不回答小白会以为他喝醉了。 „This is 2!” “这是二！” little white hears word, grinned said grinningly: „Uncle, plays? Plays sai quickly.” 小白闻言,咧嘴笑嘻嘻地说:“大叔,来耍耍么？快来耍耍噻。” Holds the soccer, whips on the ground, the meaning plays the soccer together. 抱起足球,在地上拍拍打打,意思是一起来耍足球。 On that day she saw stretch/open Tanlu a foot, felt a little fierce, suited to play with her. 那天她见张叹露了一脚,觉得有点厉害,适合和她耍耍。 The average people, technical bad she could not have had a liking. 一般人,技术差的她还看不上呢。 In the little red horse academy, can play the soccer with her young female student few, the young male student is easy to fight with her. 小红马学园里,能和她踢上足球的小女生没几个,小男生则容易和她打架。 My mother does not make me play with you! stretch/open Tan thought, said embarrassedly. 我妈不让我跟你玩！张叹心想,没好意思这么说。 „Now does not want to play the soccer.” “现在不想踢足球。” little white still invited warmly: 小白依然热情邀请: „Comes sai, comes sai quickly.” “来噻,快来噻。” „Not.” “不了不了。” „Comes sai, plays sai, gets down.” “来噻,耍耍噻,下来咯。” „Really does not come.” “真不来。” „Is about to play sai.” “快下来耍耍噻。” „Thanks me really not to come.” “谢谢我真不来。” „Claw? Doesn't come for the claw?” “爪子？为爪子不来？” little white stamps one's foot, is a little ominous, such warm invitation does not come, what do you mean. 小白跳起脚来,有点凶,这么热情邀请都不来,啥子意思嘛。 stretch/open Tan does not know whether to laugh or cry, is quite warm, how the constriction of overbearing president?? 张叹哭笑不得,好热情啊,怎么会有一种霸道总裁的压迫感？？ „I am making the dinner, has no way to accompany you to play soccer.” “我正在做晚饭,没法陪你踢球。” What he does is the oyster mushroom stir fries the meat. 他做的是平菇炒肉。 „Haven't you eaten luxuriantly?” little white asked. “你还没吃莽莽吗？”小白问道。 „What eats?” “吃什么？” „Luxuriant.” “莽莽。” „What is this? You spoke the standard spoken Chinese.” “这是什么？你说普通话。” „Didn't you have the food food?” “你还没饭饭吗？” „No, did you eat?” “没呢,你吃了吗？” „Ate.” “吃了呀。” „Eats meal cannot the strenuous exercise, meets the belly to hurt.” “吃了饭不能剧烈运动,会肚子疼。” „My belly is not sore.” “我肚子不疼。” ...... …… Two people are chatting, slightly gives for nothing stretch/open Tan a very unusual feeling, this kid brings one to sprout/moe Tyrant wind, moe and rules by force, moe moe ominously ominously, on smell of gunpowder is very strong, stamps one's foot, a word not at earliest convenience offer appearance, but the next second vanished into thin air. 两人聊着,小白给张叹一种很奇特的感觉,这娃自带一股萌霸风,又萌又霸道,萌凶萌凶的,上一句火药味很浓,跳起脚来,一言不合就要约架的样子,但下一秒就烟消云散了。 Gate guard old Li in distant place sentry box looks repeatedly, thinks little white is provoking stretch/open Tan, coming out that this child does, never forgets to win over him these days, said that wants him opening sighs two earwax. 远处岗亭里的门卫老李频频看过来,以为小白在挑衅张叹,这孩子干的出来,这段时间始终不忘拉拢他,说要他哐哐给张叹两耳屎。 He did not feel relieved, leaves the post, has a look what's the matter. If quarrelling, he must mediate a quarrel, finally approaches to hear them to chat, the discussion eats, although not like old friend, but is not the enemy. 他不放心,离开岗位,过来看看怎么回事。如果是在吵架,他得劝架,结果走近听到他们在聊天,谈论吃的,虽然不像老朋友,但也不是敌人。 Did not shout that hits to shout "kill"? How in an instant changed? 不是喊打喊杀吗？怎么转眼就变了？ He listened to the little while, determined that two people are impossible to get angry, then walked quietly, rejoiced that beforehand had not been tripped somebody up to stretch/open Tan by little white misleading, otherwise he is unpopular everywhere and with everybody now. 他听了会儿,确定两人不可能翻脸,便又悄悄地走了,庆幸之前没有受小白的蛊惑给张叹使绊子,不然他现在里外不是人。 The children are really unreliable, mediate to become reconciled, almost flashes to his old waist. 小孩子果然靠不住,说和好就和好,差点闪到他的老腰。 „Quite fragrant.” “好香诶。” Little Belarus Station sniffs in downstairs, at once at once is covering the neck oh. 小白站在楼下抽鼻子,旋即旋即捂着脖子哎哟哎哟。 „You how?” stretch/open Tan asked. “你怎么了？”张叹问。 He looked under the kitchen fan, opening, is impossible to have smell divulging, moreover flutters to a building? 他看了下抽油烟机,开着,不可能有气味泄露,而且飘到一楼？ He did not feel relieved, arrives at upscale the kitchen fan. 他不放心,把抽油烟机开到最高档。 „My neck good acid, I to come up to chat with you.” “我的脖子好酸哦,我还是上来和你聊天吧。” Lost the soccer, entered the building speedily. 丢了足球,一溜烟钻进了大楼。 Quick, little white knocked on a door. 很快,小白敲门了。 stretch/open Tanca the hand, comes out to open the door. 张叹擦擦手,出来开门。 „Eats to you.” little white stressed one to boil the peanut in the pocket, gave stretch/open Tan. “给你吃。”小白又在兜里抓了一把煮花生,递给张叹。 „Yourself keep eating, I do not eat.” “你自己留着吃,我不吃。” „Claw? Don't you eat for the claw? What meaning sai?” “爪子？你为爪子不吃？啥子意思噻？” Quite ominous, does not eat the words of her peanut, as if must be eaten by her. 好凶啊,不吃她的花生的话,似乎就要被她吃掉。 „......” stretch/open Tan said: „I prepared to have the dinner, ate to the full could not eat meal.” “……”张叹说:“我准备吃晚饭了,吃饱了就吃不下饭。” No matter little white, the peanut stopper in his hands, the force eats. 小白才不管,把花生塞在他手里,强迫吃。 Good overbearing president model/pattern. 好一副霸道总裁范啊。 stretch/open Tan does not know whether to laugh or cry, to show the sincerity, peeled one to eat at the scene, inviting little white to come to sit. 张叹哭笑不得,为表诚意,当场剥了一颗吃,邀请小白进来坐坐。 little white lies in the gate edge, looked down the luminous floor, shook the head saying: „I stir up o to stir up o is quite dirty, will smear your family/home.” 小白趴在门沿,低头看了看光亮的地板,摇头说:“我激o激o好脏,会弄脏你的家。” At once looked to ask toward inside: „What is uncle you making to eat sai?” 旋即往里面看了看问:“大叔你在做啥子吃噻？” stretch/open Tan: „Oyster mushroom stir fries the meat, can you come to have a look, to taste my craftsmanship?” 张叹:“平菇炒肉,你要不要进来看看,尝一下我的手艺？” little white shakes the head: „I wait for the little friend, does obeisance ~” 小白摇头:“我去等小朋友啦,拜~” Ran speedily. 一溜烟跑了。