PS: Asked the recommendation ticket, otherwise the scar of knife wound moe the disciple to knock your doors tonight PS:求推荐票啊,不然刀疤萌徒今晚敲你们的门 Afterward stretch/open Tancai knows, this fought the penalty that little white received not to permit to watch the television. To others, did not look that the television does not look, an evening, but to little white, this wanted her half poor life simply, the whole person fades the da brain, listless. 后来张叹才知道,这回打架小白受到的惩罚是不准看电视。对别人来说,不看电视就不看呗,一晚上而已,但对小白来说,这简直是要了她半条小命,整个人蔫头耷脑,无精打采。 „This is the script that you wrote yesterday, random distribution, anonymous, your, review, after one hour, we meet to discuss.” “这是你们昨天写的剧本,随机分发的,匿名,你们每人一份,点评一下,一个小时后我们开会讨论。” The vice-chairman distributed yesterday's 10 scripts randomly, everyone received one, because of without the name, does not know that was whose. 副组长把昨天的十份剧本随机分发,每人领到一份,因为没有名字,不知道是谁的。 stretch/open Tan also attained one, lowers the head to glance through, after one hour, everyone is centralized in the conference room, except for two vice-chairmen, the team leader also came. 张叹也拿到了一份,低头翻阅,一个小时后,大家在会议室集中,除了两个副组长,组长也来了。 Sees the person to arrive in full, team leader old Liu mentioned by name directly: „stretch/open Tan, you first said that the script on your hand, the good and bad points say, everyone listens earnestly.” 见人到齐,组长老刘直接点名:“张叹,你先说说你手上的这份剧本,优缺点都说一说,大家认真听。” stretch/open Tan closes the script, puts on the board before body. 张叹把剧本合上,放到身前的会议桌上。 „My this script, the good and bad points are very obvious, the merit has three ; first, the language is spirited, conforms to the plot to need...... shortcoming also three very much ; first, in the plot lacks the logic, for example the opening said that the small mud is very poor, fantasized oneself can draw a prize-winning ticket, finally he really...... the propelling force of story cannot come in the pure coincidence......” “我这份剧本,优缺点都很明显,优点有三条,一是语言生动活泼可爱,很符合剧情需要……缺点也有三条,一是剧情上缺乏逻辑,比如开头说小小泥很穷,幻想自己能中大奖,结果他真的中了……故事的推动力不能来于纯粹的巧合……” The people in conference room are listening earnestly, sits a female student facial expression near stretch/open Tan right hand is somewhat special. 会议室的众人都在认真听,其中坐在张叹右手边的一个女生神情有些特别。 „Two are the plot, said that the small mud and friends must make a youth piece, then used many lengths to write the youth piece plot, the audience sees a play, finally the role in animated cartoon is also acting in a play, this was in the play plays, very not suitable......” “二是其中有一个剧情,说小小泥和朋友们要拍一部青春片,然后用了很多篇幅写青春片的剧情,观众看戏,结果动画片里的角色也在演戏,这是戏中戏,很不适合……” ...... …… stretch/open Tan said that the team leader asked: „That aims at these three issues, what means revision do you have?” 张叹讲完了,组长问道:“那针对这三个问题,你有什么办法修改？” stretch/open Tan stopped, before had not said that must revise, only said the review, but he confidently, said self-poise: „In view of the first issue, is the pure coincidence, can draw a prize-winning ticket to turn into the background establishment the small mud, is he enters the stage draws a prize-winning ticket, how then regarding to spend to launch the story, this avoided......” 张叹停顿了一下,之前没说要修改,只说点评,但他胸有成竹,镇定自若地说道:“针对第一个问题,也就是纯粹的巧合,可以把小小泥中奖变成背景设置,也就是他出场就中了奖,然后围绕怎么花钱展开故事,这样就避免了……” stretch/open Tan said that old Liu nodded again and again, said is very good, then asked: „This is who writes? Raises hand on own initiative.” 张叹讲完了,老刘连连点头,说很不错,然后问:“这是谁写的？主动举个手。” The people look right and left, stretch/open Tan the right hand resounds a sound. 众人左看右看,张叹右手边响起一个声音。 „Is I.” “是我。” The team leader said with a smile: „I guess that mostly is you, Jiang Rong, what view do you to opening sighing the review have?” 组长笑道:“我猜多半就是你,姜蓉,你对张叹的点评有什么看法？” Jiang Rong: „Said was very proper, I accepted, thanks, learn/study.” 姜蓉:“讲的很到位,我都接受,谢谢,学习啦。” ...... …… After getting off work, opens sighs receives Auntie Huang's call, said that the millet has met, is very calm, does not cry noisily. 下班后,张叹接到黄姨的电话,说小米已经接回来了,情绪很稳定,不哭不闹。 stretch/open Tan has not gone home immediately, tonight has dining together, welcome him to join with what over two rookies, the person of proposition was team leader old Liu, the 15 people of assessment panel participates. 张叹没有立即回家,今晚有聚餐,欢迎他和何超两个新人加入,提议的人是组长老刘,评估小组的15个人都参加了。 stretch/open Tan is one of the leads, drinks unavoidably, is good is good because of his alcohol capacity, without being drunk, what Chao was not good, had 78 feeling of being drunk, the tongue was big. 张叹是主角之一,免不了喝酒,好在他酒量挺好,没有醉,何超就不行,有了七八分的醉意,舌头大了。 Jiang Rong opening sighed proposes a toast, said that a today's review makes her benefit greatly. 姜蓉给张叹敬酒,说今天的一番点评让她受益匪浅。 When team leader old Liu with stretch/open Tan drinks is encouraging him to keep cool, guards against arrogance and impetuosity, waits for the opportunity. 组长老刘在和张叹喝酒时鼓励他耐住性子,戒骄戒躁,等待机会。 In this group of rookies, what he most favors is stretch/open Tan. 这批新人中,他最看好的是张叹。 7788 that the liquor drinks, the restaurant owner pushes the door to come, will hand over the name card smilingly, welcome next time again. 酒喝的七七八八,餐厅老板推门进来,笑容可掬地递名片,欢迎下次再来。 Jiang Rong said: „Meal good is good, but was too far, does the boss have the branch store?” 姜蓉说:“饭菜好是好,但是太远了,老板有分店吗？” The boss said: „Has, three branch stores, in Chang'an Avenue West......” 老板说:“有有有,还有三家分店,一家在西长安街……” Big that Boss Jiang Rongkua the business makes, several branch stores open in the lively section, one month of rent is only serious, but must make money, obviously the business is very certainly good. 姜蓉夸老板生意做的大,几家分店都开在繁华地段,光一个月的租金就不得了,还要赚钱,可见生意一定很好。 The boss said: „Rents precious as gold, particularly Chang'an Avenue West!” 老板说:“租金贵啊,尤其是西长安街！” The people said Chang'an Avenue West rents precious as gold is expensive/noble, but the business is good, right is in several branch stores most can make money. 众人笑说西长安街的租金贵是贵,但生意好,搞不好还是几家分店里最能赚钱的。 Said has no intention, the listener intended, to open to sigh the thoughts to move. 说者无意,听者有意,张叹心思动了起来。 Has had the dinner, everyone goes separate ways. 吃过晚饭,大家分道扬镳。 Opens sighs returns to the academy, gate guard old Li sees him to come back, stretches out the head to greet from the sentry box. 张叹回到学园,门卫老李见他回来,从岗亭里伸出脑袋打招呼。 „stretch/open less/small, yo, drank.” “张少回来了啊,哟,喝酒了。” stretch/open Tan smells, has not heard, asked: „Is wine taste very heavy?” 张叹闻了闻,没闻出来,问:“酒味很重吗？” old Li said: „Some.” 老李说:“有些。” stretch/open Tan wants the millet that goes to the classroom to have a look at to come back today, hears word then to cancel the thought that goes upstairs directly, returns to the room, when enters the bathroom to take a bath, comes out hears the knock. 张叹本来想去教室看看今天回来的小米,闻言便打消了念头,直接上了楼,回到自己房间,进浴室洗了个澡,出来时听到敲门声。 „Waits a bit the moment.” “稍等片刻。” He changes the clothes, wipes off the water drop on hair, gets to the entrance, opens the door, no one, lowers the head looks, yo, how no one! Two children stand in nearby animated, raises the small head to visit him, an expression is timid, tigerish, might fight. 他换好衣服,擦掉头发上的水珠,走到门口,打开房门,没人,低头一看,哟,怎么没人！两个小朋友俏生生地站在跟前呢,昂着小脑袋看着他,一个表情怯怯的,一个虎虎的,好像要打架。 Tigerish that wore red China, on the face pasted a wound post, with little white baby shoe that he was unable to co-exist. 虎虎的那个,身穿红色的大中华,脸上贴了一块创口贴,正是和他势不两立的小白童鞋。 This appearance, a little scar of knife wound moe the stance of disciple. 这模样,有点刀疤萌徒的架势。 How, chased down in the family/home to come? Doesn't this break the game rule? The calamity is less than the family member. 怎么着,追杀到家里来了？这不破坏游戏规则吗？祸不及家人啊。 Another looks to look familiar, but cannot think, felt that little friend most long similar, look like the block either, either looks like the little guy. 另一个看着眼熟,但想不起来,感觉小朋友大部分长的差不多,要么像墩子,要么像小萝卜头。 The scar of knife wound moe the disciple little white baby shoe to see him, is still pursing the lips, very serious appearance, the big eye slides the smooth revolutions, the demonstration is quite not at heart tranquil. 刀疤萌徒小白童鞋见到他,依然抿着嘴,很严肃的样子,大眼睛溜溜转,显示心里颇不平静。 stretch/open Tan sees two visit Little Sister papers not to speak, takes the lead to break silent, asked: 张叹见两个上门小妹纸不说话,率先打破沉默,问道: „Hello, how? Asks me to have the matter?” “你们好啊,怎么了？找我有事吗？” The timid that little friend lowers the head, manipulates own small clothes, trod one step toward the left, happen to hides in little white behind, own hid. 怯怯的那个小朋友低着头,摆弄自己的小衣裳,往左边踏了一步,正好躲在小白身后,把自己藏了起来。 little white looks at stretch/open Tan, probably very hot as, the look puts aside fast, finally looked to some ground of corridor, there possibly can see that spent. 小白看一眼张叹,好像很烫似的,眼神飞快地移开,最后看向了走廊的某一块地面,那里可能能看出一朵花来。 „What's wrong? Please speak.” stretch/open Tan asked again. “怎么了？请说话。”张叹再次问道。 „Uncle, sorry, ~” little white looked that does not visit him, but the words truly were she say. “大叔,对不起,嗬嗬嗬~”小白看也不看他,但话确实是她说的。 ? 啊？ stretch/open Tan visits her surprised, what said a moment ago? Sorry? Do the Sichuan words „get rid of you yes to be unfair to ” this pronunciation? 张叹吃惊地看着她,刚才说什么？对不起？川话“干掉你”是“对不起”这种发音吗？ „Your hand does also hurt? Sorry, I do not nip intentionally your.” “你的手手还疼吗？对不起吖,我不是故意咬你的。” little white has the courage finally, raised the head, looked at his one eyes, moved downward, stares at his hand, the gauze has been opening, the wound post, was like her face on. 小白终于鼓起勇气,抬起头,看了他一眼,往下移,盯着他的手,纱布已经拆了,还有创口贴,和她脸上一样。 Opened sighs this determined, little white baby shoe was apologizes, did not put the aggressive statement. 张叹这回确定了,小白童鞋是来道歉的,不是放狠话。 Then...... 那么…… stretch/open Tan looked that to little white is pulling another little girl, is generally high with little white, thin and small, the eye a little swells, had just cried evidently. 张叹看向小白牵着的另一个小女孩,和小白一般高,瘦瘦小小的,眼睛有点肿,看样子刚哭过。 Without guessing wrong, this should be the millet. 如果没猜错的话,这应该就是小米。 Really, little white draws the millet to introduce to him: „Millet comes back, thank you sai uncle.” 果然,小白拉着小米给他介绍:“小米儿回来啦,谢谢你噻大叔。” Also said to Xiaomi of lowering the head: „Melon baby, fears anything, instigates sai.” 又对低着头的小米说:“瓜娃子,怕啥子,唆一下噻。” Millet hears word, had the courage to say the sentence low voice. 小米闻言,鼓起勇气小声说了句。 „Thanks the uncle.” “谢谢大叔。” stretch/open Tan has not thought, by him and little white gratitude and grudges, thanking heaven and earth she can not call fart to be black, has not thought that also cannot think, she can come to apologize on own initiative, only if Auntie Huang continues with the imposing manner and look forces her. 张叹万万没想到,以他和小白的恩怨,谢天谢地她能不叫屁儿黑,从没想过,也不敢想,她能主动上门道歉,除非黄姨继续用气势和眼神逼迫她。 Opposes with him everywhere, the person aggressive statement many little white is also adaptable to the situation unexpectedly, really likes hating the distinct child, the scar of knife wound moe the disciple is not really simple, but their world is also very simple, no face and cannot have a long face. 处处和他作对,人狠话也多的小白竟然能屈能伸,真是爱恨分明的小孩子啊,刀疤萌徒果然不简单,但她们的世界又很简单,没有什么面子和拉不下脸的。 stretch/open Tan smiles, the complaint that because at heart that fart has black also vanished into thin air. 张叹一笑,心里那点因为屁儿黑而产生的怨念也烟消云散了。 „You're welcome, can I understand your then moods, how the millet today the mood?” “不用谢,我能理解你们当时的心情,小米今天心情怎么样？” The millet lowers the head does not speak, little white bumped her, reminded: „Melon baby, the uncle is asking your sai, your how child gruff is the same?” 小米低头不说话,小白碰了碰她,提醒道:“瓜娃子,大叔在问你噻,你咋子憨憨儿一样？” The millet ignorant circle visits her, cannot understand. 小米懵圈地看着她,听不懂。 little white roused the cheek, said with the standard spoken Chinese: „Millet, the uncle is asking you, mood lang, should not be in a daze sai.” 小白鼓了鼓腮帮子,用普通话说:“小米,大叔在问你,心情啷个嘛,你不要发呆噻。” Xiaomi said low voice: „Has not cried.” 小米小声说:“没哭了。” little white: „You must instigate sai to me not, you instigate to the uncle, the leader looks at him.” 小白:“你莫要对我唆噻,你对大叔唆,头头看他。” The millet turns the head to look to stretch/open Tan, said repeatedly: „Millet has not cried today.” 小米转头看向张叹,重复道:“小米今天没哭了。” stretch/open Tan is a little tired, spoke to be able is not tired. 张叹心里有点累,这么说话能不累吗。 „Without crying well, the tears are Hong Kong kumquat, the child cannot always fall. Can you come to sit?” “没哭了就好,眼泪都是金豆子,小孩子不能总是掉。你们要进来坐坐吗？” The millet looks to little white, little white stretches out the small head to size up toward in: „, In your family good close to to be suitable, sits sits.” 小米看向小白,小白伸出小脑袋往里打量:“哇,你家里好巴适哟,坐坐就坐坐叭。” Pulls the millet however to come in leisurely, looking right and left, is not cautious. 牵着小米施施然进来,左看右看,一点不拘谨。 stretch/open Tan moves in the chair to them, asking them to sit down, asked: „Do you want to drink water?” 张叹给她们搬来椅子,请她们坐下,问:“你们要喝水吗？” little white and millet shake the head, little white remembers anything, puts out a hand to pull out in the pants pocket, pulls out pulls out, pulls out a boiled peanut, gives stretch/open Tan: „Uncle, eats to you.” 小白和小米都摇头,小白想起什么,伸手在裤兜里掏,掏啊掏啊,掏出一把煮熟的花生,递给张叹:“大叔,给你吃。” „Boils the peanut, I tasted one to be good, you ate.” “是煮花生啊,我尝一颗就行了,你们自己吃。” little white all puts his palm altogether: „Eats to you.” 小白一股脑全放他手心:“都是给你吃的。” stretch/open Tan does not endure to reject, all received, looks for a small bowl to the kitchen, boiling the peanut pours in inside, then washed a azure bodhi, puts out two orange yellow oranges. 张叹不忍拒绝,全收了,到厨房找来一个小碗,把煮花生倒在里面,接着洗了一把青色的菩提,拿出两个橙黄的橘子。 „Tastes the fruit.” “尝一尝水果。” little white pinched in a azure bodhi plug cock, the politeness the smalltalk smiles, said the sentence is quite sweet, suddenly the peak peak small nose, said: „Uncle you drinks.” 小白捏了一颗青色的菩提塞嘴里,礼貌又客套地笑了笑,说了句好甜,忽然耸耸小鼻子,说:“大叔你喝酒啦。” „Was heard by you, drank little.” “被你闻出来了,是喝了一点点。” little white jumps down the chair immediately, draws the millet to walk. 小白立刻跳下椅子,拉着小米走。 „We walk, does obeisance ~” “我们走啦,拜~” Suddenly comes, goes ahead, hurriedly. 说来就来,说走就走,风风火火。 stretch/open Tan detains: „Aren't many sits a while?” 张叹挽留:“不多坐一会儿吗？” „Does not sit does not sit, we must rest to consider.” “不坐啦不坐啦,我们要睡告告啦。” Escapes also resembles. 逃也似的。 „Takes away the orange bodhi.” “把橘子菩提拿去。” „Does obeisance” “拜” The orange bodhi does not want. 橘子菩提不要。 little white draws the millet to go downstairs quickly, has transferred the corner, little white then looked to look furtive, saw stretch/open Tan not with, felt relieved that said to the small tail: „Millet you must remember, drank the Sirs are quite ominous, will hit the child, we must slide quickly.” 小白拉着小米很快下了楼,转过转角,小白贼头贼脑地回头望上看了看,见张叹没跟过来,才放心地对小尾巴说:“小米你要记住啦,喝酒了的大人都好凶,会打小孩子,我们要溜得快。” Millet ignorant. 小米懵懵懂懂地哦了一声。 „Notch ~” “哦豁~” little white recalled the main purpose of this coming not to say suddenly, what to do? She a little does not dare to go back to look for fart to be black, what to do if fart did get drunk black hit her? 小白忽然记起这趟来的主要目的没说,怎么办？她有点不敢回去找屁儿黑,万一屁儿黑喝醉了打她怎么办？ little white looks to the millet, thought that the millet is really pitiful, therefore has the courage, rubs the small hand, making the millet with, is waiting for her here. 小白看向小米,觉得小米真可怜,于是鼓起勇气,搓搓小手,让小米不要跟来,就在这里等着她。 She pulled a hair carelessly, the small hand according to the waist, there left a small water gun again, put the water especially. 她胡乱抓了一把头发,再把小手按在腰上,那里别了一把小水枪,特地装了水。 One two steps, one two steps, slightly go in vain the stair, before arriving at the door, looks fierce, quite ominous, again after that oneself make is indecisive, finally sounded the gate. 一步两步,一步两步,小白走完台阶,重新来到房门前,龇牙咧嘴,把自己弄的好凶,再经过一阵犹豫不决后,最终敲响了门。 The gate opened, after little white, jumps two steps, guards is staring at stretch/open Tan, saying of small mouth machine gun: „Uncle millet must be occupied by here you to in the evening to her well do not bully the child to do obeisance ~” 门开了,小白后跳两步,提防地盯着张叹,小嘴机关枪似的说道:“大叔小米晚上要住这里你要对她好好的哦不要欺负小孩子哦拜~”