SF1983 :: Volume #3

#277: Hope


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„!” “吱呀!” „!” “咣啷!” In the morning, permits Feitui the vehicle goes out, has not eaten meal, oneself do not like doing at home, prepares lane several steamed stuffed buns to eat. 早晨,许非推车子出门,没吃饭,自己在家也不爱做,准备弄几个包子吃。 Year later is very cold, opens mouth breathes out together, the alley just regained consciousness. He treads on the vehicle to ride outward, quickly to lane entrance time was stopped by calling out. 年后还是很冷的,一张嘴一道哈气,胡同刚刚苏醒。他蹬上车子往外骑,快到巷口的时候被叫住。 little permits!” “小许!” Turns head, several old women do grocery shopping, directly soars the direction. 一扭头,几个老太太买菜回来,直奔自己方向。 Yo, your several mornings!” “哟,您几位早啊!” Early, goes to work? But is really diligent, young people diligent point good......” “早早,上班啊?可真勤快,年轻人勤快点好……” The aunt talks incessantly several, a voice revolution, „the two days saw in you to go out, how to look at Baochai Daiyu?” 大妈唠叨几句,话音一转,“这两天就见你里出外进的,怎么没看着宝钗黛玉呢?” Moved out.” “搬走了。” „? How in good condition to move out?” “啊?好端端怎么就搬走了?” This does not make you chew the wife tongue chewing?” “这不让你们嚼老婆舌给嚼走的么?” This, this saying said...... you may not have the politeness!” “这,这话说的……你可没礼貌了啊!” Yes, your what meaning?” “就是,你什么意思啊?” What meaning did you say? We lived this small two years, what situation didn't know? How many others are friend rent the house, now two walked, don't oneself rent good? “您说什么意思啊?我们住这小两年了,什么情况不知道么?人家就是朋友几个租房子的,现在有俩走了,自己租不行么? Also was not three of us, my mother also in! I live in the same place with my mother, the additional two friends, has something to wag the tongue? Does not celebrate the new year to go home on my mother, haven't I gone back? How to become this excitedly, is picking greatly cheaply? 再说还不是我们仨,我妈还在呢!我跟我妈住一块,加俩朋友,有什么可嚼舌头的?不就我妈过年回家,我没回去么?怎么就兴奋成这样,捡着大便宜了是吧? Some words me told that my skin coarse meat is thick, can the little miss bear? I told you, this called the psychological quality to be high, moved out, bumped into that saying that hung to death directly in your main house gate. 有话跟我说啊,我皮糙肉厚的,小姑娘受得了么?我告诉您,这叫心理素质高,搬走了,碰上那不禁说的,直接吊死在您家门口。 The murderer understands! ” 杀人凶手懂么!” You, this, this......” “你,这,这……” Several old women by resentment out of breath. 几个老太太被怼的上气不接下气。 This alley more than ten courtyards, each institute men and women, single many? How to see you to say them? I live in the alone institute I to be discriminated, hits the local tyrant to fight the landlord? “这胡同十几个院子,每院男男女女,单身的不少吧?怎么没见你们说他们啊?我住独院我就得受歧视,打土豪斗地主呢? Obsolete in you! ” 过时了您内!” permits non- Balla Balla one spurts, holds the previous six steamed stuffed buns, refreshing hurrying to unit. 许非巴拉巴拉一顿喷,揣上六个包子,神清气爽的赶去单位。 ............ ………… Teacher permits early!” “许老师早!” Early!” “早!” Teacher permits is in high spirits.” “许老师精神不错啊。” Un, good that rests.” “嗯,睡的好。” The colleagues talked in whispers, because couple of days ago this goods were punished, public review. The young people are thin-skinned, thinks that he must honest a while, finally, the condition is not getting better and better. 同事们窃窃私语,因为前两天这货被罚,公开检讨。年轻人脸皮薄,都认为他得老实一阵子,结果偏不,状态越来越好。 Nine o'clock, the conference room gathers , to continue the script symposium. 九点钟,会议室聚集,继续开剧本讨论会。 Li bathe is not completely clear, what kind of ups and downs own right arm experienced, said: „ We taking advantage of yesterday's progress. This Liu Huifang divorces, has determined. 李沐完全不清楚,自己的得力干将经历了怎样的起伏跌宕,道:“咱们借着昨天的进度。这个刘慧芳离婚啊,已经确定了。 Besides her personality reason, Wang Yaru's taunting, Gossip all around, with Wang Husheng is not self-confident. 除了她性格原因之外,还有王亚茹的冷嘲热讽,周遭的流言蜚语,和对王沪生的不自信。 Today mainly studies, she divorces the later trend. Small clear(ly), you first said. ” 今天主要研究一下,她离婚之后的走向。小明,你先说说。” This has many lines......” “这个有很多条线……” Li Xiaoming flips the draft, said: „ Luogang rehabilitates the release, looks Wang Yaru, informs the child to lose, Wang Yaru refuses stubbornly to forgive, is even more extreme. 李小明翻翻文稿,道:“罗冈平反释放,去找王亚茹,告知孩子丢失,王亚茹死不原谅,愈发偏激。 Wang Husheng's father also restores the reputation/honorary, the family circumstances changes for the better quickly, two disparities even more increase. 王沪生的父亲也恢复名誉,家境迅速好转,两家的差距愈发增大。 Strives for son's custody, the dispute of Wang Husheng and bamboo heart, how the adopted daughter life experience to become known, how Song Dacheng develops and so on the factory...... ” 还有争夺儿子的抚养权,王沪生和竹心的纠葛,养女如何身世大白,宋大成在工厂怎么发展等等……” Un, little permits, said your idea.” Li Mudao. “嗯,小许,说说你的想法。”李沐道。 50 volumes are the big lengths, is not divided into the single collection story like the alley, wants to connect is not easy these veins.” “50集是大篇幅,又不像胡同分为单集故事,想把这些脉络串联起来非常不易。” permits Feixian praised under Li Xiaoming, said: „ But if the branch is too numerous and disorderly, will appear the main line attenuation. The «Hope» main line, without doubt is Liu Huifang's half a lifetime, must launch regarding her. 许非先夸了下李小明,道:“但如果支线太庞杂的话,就会显得主线弱化。《渴望》的主线,无疑是刘慧芳的半生,得围绕她来展开。 Listened to the script of Teacher Li a moment ago, felt that the following Liu Huifang's actor's pay were too few, moreover arrived at the tail from the beginning painstakingly. Initial discussion time, I have said that can painstakingly, but the main key should be positive, a courage and power of life. 刚才听李老师的剧本,感觉后面刘慧芳的戏份太少,而且从头苦到尾。最初探讨的时候,我就说过,可以苦,但基调应该是积极的,给人一种生活的勇气和动力。 Therefore the partial content that I complete, said after probably Liu Huifang divorced, did not have the work. The son was occupied by the prince is not putting, only has an adopted daughter of sickly multi- disaster. 所以我完成的这部分内容,大概讲刘慧芳离婚之后,又没了工作。儿子被王家占着不放,只有一个多病多灾的养女。 At this time, the source of income is the key. 这种时候,经济来源是关键。 The background of story should to the early 80's, the reform and opening, the new ideological trend surge. Since we stretch across for more than ten years, why doesn't show? 故事的背景应该到了八十年代初,改革开放,新思潮涌动。我们既然横跨十几年,为什么不展现一下呢? For example Liu Huifang to live, has to set up a stall in the discrimination, sells small gadget that some make. 比如刘慧芳为了生活,不得不在歧视中去摆摊,卖一些自己做的小玩意儿。 She will make some small business transactions, made some change ; She will know a new role, a man, is interesting and warm. 她会做些小买卖,赚了些小钱;她会认识一个新角色,一个男人,有趣且温暖。 She nicely arrives weakly, but the life makes her strong. She had the new love, after the bitter comes the sweet, no longer is raises son the marriage. ” 她善良到软弱,但生活让她坚强起来。她有了新的爱情,苦尽甘来,不再是‘养儿子’似的婚姻。” Haha, raises the son!” “哈哈,养儿子!” Under some people smile. 底下有人笑。 „, Do not smile. Wang Husheng this buddy who spreads on who dies, only then his mother can bear, therefore he must look for with his mother wife.” “诶,不要笑。王沪生这种哥们谁摊上谁死,只有他妈能受得了,所以他就得找个跟他妈似的媳妇。” permits non- is serious, said: General trend is this, Liu Huifang result is happy.” 许非一本正经,道:“大概走向就是这样,刘慧芳结局是幸福的。” „......” “……” Li bathe recorded full one page, said: „ Ok, was very actually simple, arrived at the tail from the beginning painstakingly, was makes the audience cry. One is after the bitter comes the sweet, happy. 李沐记录了满满一页,道:“好了,其实很简单,一个是从头苦到尾,就是让观众哭。一个是苦尽甘来,幸福美满。 Everyone said. ” 大家说说吧。” May not the bitterness play be able to make the audience cry, of person strong brave, same can produce the resonance.” “不一定非得苦情戏才能让观众哭,人的那种坚强勇敢,一样可以产生共鸣。” I believe that the good and evil has the report, the prince is not the thing, finally actually children complete in both. Liu Huifang nicely for a lifetime, anything has not obtained finally. This play broadcast, even if the common people like looking, I still feared the literary and art circles poke our backbones.” “我坚信善恶有报,王家不是东西,最后却儿女双全。刘慧芳善良一辈子,最后啥也没得到。这种剧播了,就算老百姓爱看,我也怕文艺界戳我们脊梁骨。” I thought that the predecessor experiences reliably, «Cut Plum» had proven the audience liked, does not need to take risk.” “我觉得前人经验最可靠,《一剪梅》已经证明了观众喜好,没必要冒险。” Do not hold the congress, or discussed with the peer together?” “不是要开大会么,要不跟同行一块讨论讨论?” „The blind Jie treasure pulls, does own book look to others?” “瞎杰宝扯,自己的本子给别人看?” Ok, voted, arrived at raising hand of tail from the beginning painstakingly.” “好了,表决一下吧,从头苦到尾的举手。” One less than half. 一小半。 Raising hand of after the bitter comes the sweet.” “苦尽甘来的举手。” Also is one less than half, but obviously many several, remaining forfeits. 也是一小半,但明显多几个,剩下的弃权。 Good, the script general orientation was determined. Small bright, little permits, both of you communicate as soon as possible, with complete coming out. Then " Hope » lord creates the member, I first said. “好,剧本大方向确定。小明、小许,你们俩尽快沟通,拿个完整的出来。然后《渴望》的主创成员,我先说一下。 Movie-making director, in general.” “制片主任,于普。” Unsurprisingly, in general is the central first movie-making, Director. 不出意外,于普是中心的第一制片,主任。 Director, I proposed that Teacher Lu holds the post.” “导演,我提议鲁老师担任。” Agreement!” “同意!” Agreement!” “同意!” Screenwriter, is both of you signs. old Zheng makes the supervised manufacture, photographic Bi Jianhua has one group concretely...... makes the arrangement again.” “编剧,就是你们俩署名。老郑做监制,摄影毕建华带一组……具体的再做安排。” In the reality, " Hope » arrangement is hasty. 在现实中,《渴望》的筹备非常仓促。 Just wrote several volumes to begin shooting, pats half, the script could not follow. Director Serena must put the photography temporarily, does the script with Li Xiaoming together. 刚写了几集就开拍,拍到一半,剧本跟不上。导演鲁小威只得暂放拍摄,跟李小明一块搞剧本。 Writes while pats, what that generation of rackets is who? 一边写一边拍,那代拍的是谁呢? Zhao Baogang. 赵宝钢。 He put forward the condition, I did not enroll, did not take the reward, gave me this opportunity on the line. Finally he patted 30 volumes, «when Hope» receives an award everyone went, he has not enrolled, without share. 他自己提出条件,我不挂名,不拿酬劳,给我这机会就行。最后他拍了三十集,《渴望》领奖时所有人都去了,他没挂名,没有份。 Special patho that oneself make. 自己弄的特悲情。 However the ability has been approved, after that takes the director path officially. 不过能力得到认可,此后正式走上导演道路。 Because the preparatory work is not at the right place, the progress is slow, «Hope» towed for ten months to finalize. An indoor play, ten months, brutal. 而由于筹备工作不到位,进度缓慢,《渴望》足足拖了十个月才杀青。一部室内剧,十个月啊,惨无人道。 Teacher permits hangs the screenwriter name, is just right for the intention, in the future the soap opera will be successful, has own merit not to need to take time. 许老师挂编剧名,正合心意,将来电视剧成功,有自己的功劳还不用太费事。
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