SF1983 :: Volume #3

#270: The 1st day


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Every winter, the north others will usually hang the cotton gate curtain screen. 每到冬天,北方人家通常会挂棉门帘子。 The later generation are many and varied, the leather, the canvas, the sound-insulated arrange/cloth, some can also add the window. Now is not good, does not have to that carefully. 后世多种多样,皮革的,帆布的,隔音布的,有些还能加窗户。现在可不行,没细致到那一块。 permits Feixian the curtain screen enters the west room, coerces cold air, washed out by the furnace fire rapidly. 许非掀帘子进西屋,裹挟一身寒气,又迅速被炉火冲散。 The small rising sun bends over one's desk the work, has not lifted. He takes up several rough sketches conveniently, very abstract villain. 小旭伏案作业,头都没抬。他随手拿起几张画稿,挺抽象的小人儿。 Is a man gets together with the colleague probably, does not splash carefully the greasy dirt. The colleagues call out in alarm Balla Balla, the man smile self-confidently, I have xx sign laundry powder. 大概是一个男人跟同事聚会,不小心溅到油污。同事惊呼巴拉巴拉,男人自信微笑,我有xx牌洗衣粉。 „Isn't this good? How also to change?” “这不挺好么?怎么还改?” Teacher said that interesting and lens feeling is insufficient.” “老师说趣味性和镜头感不足。” He does not understand, the lens feeling is the first-grade student can do?” “他懂个屁,镜头感是一年级学生能做出来的么?” Also I!” “还我!” The small rising sun has snatched the rough sketch, that is requests to me strictly, can achieve one percentage, why did 80 points satisfy?” 小旭抢过画稿,“那是对我严格要求,能做到一百分,为什么80就满足了?” ! 嘁! permits non- curls the lip, extracts several, sees a wash bowl, a pair of hand is rubbing the clothes, then water used bubble, the picture switching, the dirty shirt changes snow white clean. 许非撇撇嘴,又抽出几张,见一个脸盆,一双手在搓衣服,然后用水一泡,画面切换,脏衬衫变的雪白干净。 He looks is being not quite right, strange say/way: You are the plan add the director, how also to bring minute/share of lens?” 他瞧着不太对,奇道:“你这是策划加导演啊,怎么还带分镜头?” I go to school from the book, first experiments the experiment......” “我从书上学的,先试验试验……” The small rising sun stops the pen, said properly: Jokes aside, before how I had not felt the advertisement. But watches the plane and television now, thought that was too primitive, might as well you sell the culture T-shirt to have the creativity.” 小旭停下笔,正经道:“说真的,我以前没觉得广告怎么样。可现在看平面和电视,觉得太原始了,还不如你卖文化衫有创意。” Fresh, the culture T-shirt is the average person can think?” “多新鲜啊,文化衫是一般人能想的么?” permits non- moves to by the chair her, which block also misses?” 许非把椅子搬到她旁边,“还差哪块?” Does not need you to teach.” “不用你教。” Hurry up, difference which block?” “快点,差哪块?” She roused the mouth, is pointing at the rough sketch, here.” 她鼓了鼓嘴,指着画稿,“这里。” He took a look at one, then the discovery crux is, said: Laundry powder is the essential item every household, cannot walk the generalization, must adapt. Your this idea is very good, the issue has not made clear, you must crank up slightly narrative, cranks up popular science.” 他瞅了一眼,便发现症结所在,道:“洗衣粉是每家每户的必需品,不能走概念化,一定要生活化。你这个想法很好,问题是没搞清楚,你要拍成小故事性的,还是拍成科普性的。” How to say?” “怎么讲?” First in your brain must have an overall idea, for example the man dined together with the colleague, splashes hot pot froth, the colleague shouted and wrangled, aiya, the white shirt was not good to wash! “首先你脑子里得有一个整体构思,比如男人跟同事聚餐,溅了一身火锅沫子,同事大呼小叫,哎呀,白衬衫可不好洗! The men smile do not speak. 男人微笑不语。 A lens revolution, the man goes home, the wife approach, said that smeared? Doesn't matter, we have xx laundry powder. 镜头一转,男人回家,妻子迎上来,说怎么又弄脏了?没关系,我们有xx洗衣粉。 This called narrative, you think a opening, lacked following, seemed stiff. Because the masters will not say generally, I have xx laundry powder. 这叫故事性,你想了个开头,缺乏后续,就显得生硬。因为老爷们一般不会说,我有xx洗衣粉。 Alternatively, the opening pats several picture that smears the clothes, aside explanation in daily life, we always smear the clothes unavoidably, the grease stains dirt is too stubborn, upsetting. 或者是,开头拍几个弄脏衣服的画面,旁白讲解‘日常生活中,我们总免不了弄脏衣服,油渍污渍太顽固,令人苦恼’。 This is the popular science opening. 这是科普性的开头。 These two types, can meet your do laundry a minute/share of mirror. ” 这两种,都能接你的洗衣服分镜。” Finally turns over to various roads respectively, the story is complete, does the popular science need to summarize?” “最后各归各的路,故事要完整,科普要总结?” „, Has the perception!” “诶,有悟性!” Chen Xiaoxu obtained the inspiration, is very happy, immediately also sighed, you work are very always easy, I think oneself are very intelligent, who knows more studies somewhat is more strenuous.” 陈小旭得到了灵感,十分开心,随即又叹道,“你做事情总是很容易,我本以为自己挺聪明的,谁知越学越有些吃力。” „A your junior high pupil does this, already very good good?” “你一初中生搞成这样,已经很棒了好么?” You is a junior high pupil, you must publish books.” “你还是初中生呢,你都要出书了。” She snort/hum the sound, all discarded the rough sketch, puts out one pile newly. 她哼了声,把画稿全部扔掉,又拿出一摞新的。 „Do you do?” “你干嘛?” I think one again.” “我再想一个。” Ok. permits non- has a look at the time, nearly six points, then set out saying: I cook the noodles in the evening.” 行吧。许非看看时间,快六点了,遂起身道:“我晚上煮面条。” „Do you want to prepare food?” “你要做饭?” You are busy, I do.” “你俩都忙,我就做呗。” That, your tangential point shredded meat, puts an ardisia solonacea, the food sprinkled on top of noodles is wider.” “那,那你切点肉丝,放点雪里红,浇头宽一些。” Rests, in the dream anything has.” “睡吧,梦里啥都有。” ............ ………… The night of cold winter comes early, stretch/open Li goes home entire is black. 寒冬的夜晚来得早,张俪回家的时候已经全黑了。 She now was «Emperor» total movie-making Jin Yusheng's the assistant, similarly position also five, but the unit intended to train, being responsible for the matter were most. 她现在是《唐明皇》总制片靳雨生的助手,同样职位的还有五位,不过单位有意培养,负责事情最多。 Initially they sent in the unit, the East stayed for several days to flash, thinks that she will also walk, the little miss insisted unexpectedly, started to study from zero, did not fear that did not fear painstakingly tired. 当初俩人调进单位,东方呆几天就闪了,都以为她也会走,小姑娘居然坚持下来,从零开始学,不怕苦不怕累。 The 80's 40 volumes of historical plays, the preparatory work could be imagined. 八十年代的40集历史戏啊,筹备工作可想而知。 Opening the couple whole body is exhausted, the dinner has not actually done, in the family/home has the vegetable/dish luckily, does not need to turn a market. Finally as soon as she enters the institute, discovers the kitchen to turn on a light , like the explosion. 张俪浑身疲惫,晚饭却还没做,幸好家里有菜,不用拐趟市场。结果她一进院,发现厨房亮着灯,噼里啪啦跟爆炸一样。 What's wrong?” “怎么了?” She hurries to run, permits non- shouted: In a big hurry! Tray tray!” 她赶紧跑进去,许非喊:“快快!盘子盘子!” Has handed over the tray, that goods take up the big bucket, whish, glossy, faint trace, could not see that any thing the thing comes out freshly. 递过盘子,那货拿起大勺,哗,一盘油亮亮,丝丝条条,看不出啥玩意的东西新鲜出炉。 What is this?” “这是什么?” „The potherb mustard shredded meat, in one toward the noodles but actually, is the potherb mustard shredded meat surface. Aiya, forgot to thicken soup.” “雪菜肉丝啊,往面条里一倒,就是雪菜肉丝面啊。哎呀,忘勾芡了。” stretch/open Li looked helplessly he ignites, recooks the vegetable/dish, cancelled a euryale ferox decent. Followed abundantly three large bowl noodles, whish, another but actually. 张俪眼睁睁看他重新点火,把菜回锅,像模像样的勾了点芡。跟着盛了三大碗面条,哗,又一倒。 The food sprinkled on top of noodles is rich, overflows salty fragrant. 浇头浓郁,咸香四溢。 After two minutes, three people sit before the table, Teacher permits is quite proud, entire good, first time makes the display to be good.” 两分钟后,仨人坐在桌前,许老师极为自豪,“整挺好,头一次做发挥不错。” The small rising sun is surprised, you also really did, I taste.” 小旭惊讶,“你还真做了,我尝尝。” She used the chopsticks to select selecting, placed the mouth to blow. stretch/open Li has not acted, takes a look at the jug that in the corner some only uncaps. 她用筷子挑了挑,放在嘴边吹。张俪没动作,一个劲瞅角落里某只开盖的坛子。 „Don't you eat?” “你不吃么?” My a lot of cold air, slow one slow.” “我一肚子寒气,缓一缓。” I ate.” “那我吃了。” They clamped a big mouth, simultaneously forces in the mouth, chews, simultaneously! 俩人夹了一大口,同时塞进嘴里,同时嚼了嚼,又同时哇! pū pū!” “噗噗噗!” Bah!” “呸呸!” The small rising sun is twisting the eyebrow, „do you feed other swallow tiger? ku died I!” 小旭拧着眉毛,“你喂燕别虎呢?齁死我了!” I have not added how much salts!” “我没放多少盐啊!” Teacher permits is also strange, clamped one, so to be how salty?” 许老师也奇怪,又夹了一口,“怎么这么咸呢?” You the potherb mustard that does take from there?” stretch/open Lizhi corner. “你是不是从那里拿的雪菜?”张俪指指角落。 Yes, how?” “是啊,怎么了?” That is the brined vegetable that the aunt pickles.” “那是阿姨腌的咸菜。” „......” “……” Two unearthly children, show the doubt and shock expression suddenly, has the sense of depth. 两个不食人间烟火的孩子,露出狐疑、震惊又恍然的表情,极具层次感。 Your anxious good intention, the pure heart looks at us to laugh!” “你这人不安好心,纯心看我们笑话!” Not, my a lot of cold air, slow one slow.” “不是的,我一肚子寒气,缓一缓。” stretch/open Likuai suppresses the internal injury, sees the small rising sun to throw, busy say/way: Good, I save.” 张俪快憋出内伤,见小旭要扑过来,忙道:“好了好了,我挽救一下。” Ardisia solonacea type of thing, as if suits inborn makes the brined vegetable, can support a nest swallow other tiger. She went out the food sprinkled on top of noodles but actually, has the pan boiling three eggs, did not add the salt, mixed including the consomme in the surface. 雪里红这种东西,仿佛天生适合做咸菜,能养活一窝燕别虎。她把浇头倒出去,起锅煮了三个蛋,不加盐,连清汤拌在面里。 Original salty juice, flavor just. 就着原有的咸汁,味道刚好。 ...... …… Has eaten meal seven o'clock. 吃过饭七点钟。 Non- evening, but the winter night is always quiet, probably the entire world rested. Yard desolate Szo, the cat dog gathers round the residual heat in the kitchen, on the window curtains of west room screens the fuzzy shadow. 不晚,但冬天的夜总是静悄悄,好像全世界都睡了。小院萧索,猫狗在厨房围着余温,西屋的窗帘上映出模糊的影。 The small rising sun continues the work, stretch/open Li is busy combing the material, permits non- on the arhat bed, takes the pamphlet to ponder, often writes several. 小旭继续作业,张俪忙着梳理资料,许非自己在罗汉床上,拿着小本思考,不时写几笔。 The publishing house editor said, first tries the water in the newspaper, that first writes anything is very important. If according to the overall idea, first should speak the film and television play theme, the current work division type, said that who is superior who is poor. 出版社编辑说,先在报纸上试试水,那第一篇写什么就很重要。若按整体构思,第一篇应该讲影视剧题材,把当今的作品划分类型,说说谁优谁劣。 But single Pianfa the words, felt no interesting. 可单篇发的话,感觉没啥意思。 Yeah, if my book left, you thought that which part the reader will like? For example theme, script, performance and clothing/taking say/way, photography wait/etc.” He asked. “哎,如果我这本书出了,你们觉得读者会喜欢哪个部分?比如题材、剧本、表演、服化道、摄影等等。”他问。 stretch/open Li thinks, performance, or star.” 张俪想了想,“表演吧,或者说明星。” Right, you really write the performing skill the words, feared that had not looked patiently, they pay attention to the star.” little Xu said. “对,你真写演技的话,怕是没耐心看,他们关注明星。”小旭道。 Reasonable.” “有道理。” permits non- the mentality opens suddenly, decided first since the star kills, is not, first began from the star. 许非思路顿开,决定先从明星杀起,啊不是,先从明星谈起。 Suddenly, in the room only remains rustle the writing sound. 一时间,屋内只剩沙沙的写字声。 The small rising sun bought the desk lamp, just covers the whole piece desk, the white light extends upwardly, pale yellow was swallowed to the midair. 小旭买了台灯,刚好笼罩整张书桌,白色的光向上延伸,到半空又被昏黄吞噬。 This pale yellow in light bulb from awning, not has been bright, does not read actually good, looks like the fire that in the furnace lid shows very much, is obsolete and warm. 这昏黄源自棚上的灯泡,一直都不怎么亮,不看书的时候却蛮好,很像炉盖里透出的火,老旧且温暖。 stretch/open Lixie a meeting, sighed suddenly gently. 张俪写了一会,忽然轻轻叹了口气。 Also separated a small meeting, the small rising sun asked: What's wrong?” 又隔了一小会,小旭才问:“怎么了?” Director picked what Qingyan Yang Yuhuan, what emotion listens to pat for three years, the rejection. I leaf through the material of actress, had not found appropriately.” “导演相中何情演杨贵妃,何情一听要拍三年,拒绝了。我翻遍女演员的资料,也没找到合适的。” You are good, doesn't Baochai look like Consort Yang?” “你就行呀,宝钗不是像杨妃么?” Told properly you.” “跟你说正经的。” I said is the proper words.” “我说的就是正经话。” According to fat looking, do not try thinly, when the time comes weight gain on the line.” permits Feisui tastes. “别按胖的找,试试瘦的,到时候增肥就行了。”许非随口道。 Weight gain?” “增肥?” stretch/open Li blinks, immediately is excited, the goal were then many. 张俪眨眨眼,立时兴奋起来,这下目标就多了。 Gurgle gurgle!” “咕嘟咕嘟!” Gurgle gurgle!” “咕嘟咕嘟!” The pot on stove is also calling, she stretched under the waist, stands up: Also can drink water?” 炉子上的壶又在叫,她抻了下腰,站起身:“还要喝水么?” Gives me to pour.” “给我倒点。” The small rising sun has extended a teacup. 小旭伸过一只茶杯。 The boiling hot water crashes in the cup, the steam ascends, in the room as if is also warm several points. She smells, closes one's eyes to make being infatuated shape, „, thanks!” 滚烫的水冲进杯子,热气升腾,屋内仿佛又暖和几分。她闻了闻,闭眼做陶醉状,“嗯,谢谢!” stretch/open Lining under her face, the rub-down bath gave permits Feidao. 张俪拧了下她的脸,抹身给许非倒。 Thanks!” “谢谢!” Teacher permits sipped one, soaks two thickly still spicy. This is the good black tea, from the tea party along, is all right to drink two cups in the winter, stimulates to disappear the weary, warm stomach drives out the cold. 许老师抿了一口,泡二起依然厚实香浓。此乃上好的红茶,从茶话会顺来的,冬天没事饮两杯,提神消疲,暖胃驱寒。 He holds the cup, knocks the case suddenly several, first stops, we hold a small meeting. That, several days later is the Spring Festival, this year the situation is quite special, only has a master chef. First studies the entire several vegetables/dishes, I good to buy tomorrow.” 他捧着杯子,忽地敲敲案几,“先停一停,咱们开个小会。那个,再过几天就是新春佳节,今年情况比较特殊,只有一位大厨。先研究研究整几个菜,我明天好去买。” Makes 12, four cool eight heat, eight have the meat and fish salad vegetarian salad hotly, I want to eat the oil to cook in a covered vessel the prawn, the squirrel mandarin fish, red-roast elbow, sweet and sour spareribs......” “做十二个,四凉八热,八热有四荤四素,我想吃油焖大虾,松鼠鳜鱼,红烧肘子,糖醋排骨……” The small rising sun starts the report name. stretch/open Li pays no attention to her, thinks saying: Dual on the line, makes eight. The fish takes two, vegetarian dish two, the soup to together, pig's feet together, other what wants to eat?” 小旭开始报菜名。张俪不理她,想想道:“双数就行,做八个吧。鱼要两道,素菜两道,汤要一道,猪蹄一道,别的想吃什么?” Makes a chicken and shrimp again. The shrimp not necessarily has, I will take a look tomorrow, on entire has not spelled coolly.” “再弄个鸡和虾。虾不一定有,我明天去瞅瞅,没有就整个凉拼。” On this very happy determination. 就这样很愉快的确定。 permits non- sees the time early, then did not say: Good I went back. Looks at a stove, other midnight shouted coldly.” 许非见时候不早,遂道:“行了我回去了。看着点炉子,别半夜喊冷。” They take a look at the time, truly should rest, receives the work preparation to wash. 那俩人瞅瞅时间,确实该歇了,收好作业准备洗漱。 Yeah, wash bowl?” “哎,脸盆呢?” Dried in the sun the clothes to put outside?” “晾衣服放外面了吧?” I take.” “我拿吧。” permits Feiying who just went out the sound, found the basin to rinse rinsing, carried the pot conveniently, but actually half basin. 刚出门的许非应了声,找到盆涮了涮,随手拎起壶,哗哗倒了半盆。 Does not use......” “不用……” stretch/open Li when prevents, the water has carried to come, the person also went out, looks at each other one with the small rising sun, takes off the shoes and socks silently, handles washing. 张俪正待阻止,水已经端过来,人也出去了,不由跟小旭对视一眼,默默脱掉鞋袜,打理洗漱。 Quiet at dead of night, pitch-dark piece. 夜深人静,黑漆漆一片。 She shrinks in the bedding slightly unconsciously cold, tea in stomach has not digested, the nice and warm percolation whole body, muscles relax, the physique is comfortable, did not feel unexpectedly tired. 她缩在被窝里丝毫不觉冷,胃里的茶似未消化,暖烘烘的浸透全身,肌肉放松,筋骨舒适,竟不觉得累了。 This should be the first time, common being together that does not have any outside world disturbs, actually underwent very for a long time very long wearing in probably, one appearance that forms. 这应该是第一次,没有任何外界打扰的共同相处,却好像经过了很久很久的磨合,才形成的一种样子。 „......” “……” She closes one's eyes to let one's thoughts wander, side turning over in broken bits, has not rested. 她闭着眼睛乱想,旁边细细碎碎的翻了个身,也没有睡。 ( Old group filled, the additional new group, group id is introducing.) (老群都满了,加新群吧,群号在简介。)
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