„Embarrassed several, we must take a break.” “不好意思几位,我们要打烊了。” „, That pays up...... I to come me to come......” “哦,那结账吧……我来我来……” Five people eat to chat, comes the reminder until the server, realized that is very late. 五人吃吃聊聊,直到服务生过来提醒,才意识到已经很晚了。 Chen Xiaoer is as usual motionless, beam left slightly standing stand, Feng pants and Zhao Baogang are the sincerity pays up, but the itself/Ben is permits Feiqing, will not make others pay. 陈小二照例不动,梁左略微站站,冯裤子和赵宝钢是真心结账,但本就是许非请的,自不会让旁人买单。 He tied the account, came back saying: „How, powder?” 他结完了账,回来道:“怎么着,散么？” „Has not given full expression!” Feng pants pound pound the mouth, a face is dissatisfied. “意犹未尽啊！”冯裤子砸吧砸吧嘴,一脸不满足。 „Un un, has not given full expression.” Zhao Baogang nods. “嗯嗯,意犹未尽。”赵宝钢点头。 „Hehe, I am casual!” Chen Xiaoer touched baldly. “嘿嘿,我随便！”陈小二摸了摸光头。 „Ok.” beam heretical ways. “还可以。”梁左道。 „That becomes, on our family/home goes, today sits around the stove night of words, does not enjoy oneself to the full does not disband.” “那成,上我们家去,今儿围炉夜话,不尽兴不散伙。” Saying, five people are going out, the winding corridor two no people, the street light did not have, pitch-dark. Is riding the bicycle respectively, rushes to the hundred flowers alley. 说着,五人出门,廊房二条都没啥人了,路灯也没有,黑洞洞的。各自骑着自行车,奔百花胡同。 permits non- let one step, with Chen Xiaoer parallel, asked in a low voice: „I said, Teacher beam is not quite not satisfied, had not said a word.” 许非让了一步,跟陈小二并行,低声问:“我说,梁老师是不不太满意啊,一直没咋言语。” „He must not be really happy, will not turn the table with you, becoming friends some are quick, some are slow, this person must take your time.” “他要真不高兴,就不会跟你翻桌了,交朋友有的快,有的慢,这人得慢慢来。” „Ok.” “行吧。” He nods, knows how things stand at heart. 他点点头,心里有了数。 When the hundred flowers deep place, the one-home courtyard, permits non- pressed the lamp, two big red lanterns are reflecting the ancient wooden door, several hundred years ago bronze bells dingdong resounding. 待到了百花深处,独门独院,许非把灯一按,俩大红灯笼映着古旧木门,几百年前的铜铃叮当脆响。 „Your this! The honorable people do not reveal the true nature, will play!” “你这可以啊！真人不露相,会玩儿！” Chen Xiaoer curled upwards the thumb, the gate opened, lifts the foot first to step, with trembled. 陈小二翘了根大拇指,门一开,抬脚先跨进去,跟着一哆嗦。 „Woof woof!” “汪汪！” „Meow!” “喵！” „Yeah I go!” “哎我去！” He covers the chest suspect to palpitate, „how also to raise the cat to raise the dog?” 他捂着胸口犯悸,“怎么还养猫养狗啊？” „Many is a pleasure...... the pomegranate, the bottle gourd, at the same time plays, cannot disturb us.” “多少是点乐子……石榴,葫芦,一边玩去,不许打扰我们。” „Woof woof!......” “汪汪！嗷呜……” The bottle gourd must bark randomly, was truncated a claw by the cat, oneself rolled earnestly. 葫芦还要乱吠,被猫削了一爪子,埋头自己滚了。 beam left sizes up everywhere, curious and interest, this Mr. permits more and more likely outstanding person. 梁左四处打量,充满好奇和趣味,这位许先生越来越像个妙人。 Five people entered the dining hall, the stove lit, Zhao Baogang hiding quite a while paper-insulated pulled out, a pig meat, exploded the shelled peanut, a chicken was mixed up. 五人进了饭厅,炉子烧上,赵宝钢把藏了半天的纸包掏出来,一份猪头肉,一份炸花生米,一份鸡杂碎。 permits non- opened bottle of young wines, cuts two apples, the full meal will use temporarily as from now on whiles away the time. 许非又开了瓶小酒,切俩苹果,正餐过后权当消遣。 The quick furnace fire heat, in the room warmed, five people of then topics opened chat. 很快炉火烧红,屋里暖了起来,五人接着刚才的话题开聊。 „ At present the inland literary and art circles, the book are basically reorganized by the novel, rare independent creation. But Hong Kong is just right, their commercialization, the market is relatively mature, takes that type of serious proper picture no one to look, how entertainment how. “目前内地文艺界,本子基本由小说改编,少有自主创作。但香港正好相反,他们商业化,市场相对成熟,拍那种严肃正经的片子没人看,怎么娱乐怎么来。 That side screenwriter divides two types, one type is an apprentice, without creating the power of script, mainly provides the piece, several people, even more than ten people accumulate the script together. 那边编剧分两个类型,一种是学徒,没有创作剧本的权力,主要提供段子,几个人,甚至十几个人一块攒剧本。 Another type was called the beginning the performance master, can put out a complete story, and was good-quality, the position was honored. 另一种叫开戏师傅,能拿出一个完整的故事,并且质量上乘,地位尊贵。 The Hong Kong culture soil is not good, the threshold is low, is individual can write the script, screenwriter also unvalued. What is truly effective is these big stars and successful directors, they think an idea, finds the person to be perfect again. 香港文化土壤不行,门槛低,是个人都能写剧本,编剧也不受重视。真正管用的是那些大明星和大导演,他们想个点子,再找人完善。 At first possibly merely is a few words, an idea, lives accumulating a movie hardly. Does this live calling bridge, the bridge is the meaning of idea, this is the theatrical troupe shoptalk. 起初可能仅仅是一句话,一个想法,硬生给攒成一部电影。干这个活的叫度桥,桥是点子的意思,这是戏班行话。 The most flamboyant calling bridge king, the good idea applauding bridge, the stupid idea to call the excrement bridge...... me is also hears! ” 最牛逼的叫桥王,好点子叫好桥,馊主意叫屎桥……我也是听人说的啊！” permits Feimo supplemented one, said: „ I have contacted the film and television play since any case, deeply thinks that our independent creativity is too bad, today is also the fate, several people with outstanding ability get together, if has a mind to intend, we accumulate a frame to come out. 许非末了补充一句,道:“反正我接触影视剧以来,深觉咱们自主创作能力太差,今儿也是缘分,几位英才齐聚,要是有心有意,咱就攒个框架出来。 Teacher beam, you must think that our plays may pat, troubles your chief surgeon writing a script. ” 还有梁老师,您要觉得我们这部剧可拍,就麻烦您主刀给写个剧本。” „Gurgle gurgle!” “咕嘟咕嘟！” The water in big pot boiled, is spurting the steam unceasingly outward. The young wine drinks hot comfortable, fat and tender that the pig meat presses, shelled peanut fragrance and crispness. 大壶里的水开了,不断往外喷着热气。小酒喝的火辣舒坦,猪头肉压的肥嫩,花生米又香又脆。 Fresh! This age, who understands Hong Kong what's the matter? 新鲜呐！这年代,谁了解香港怎么回事？ Feng Kuzi has rubbed the thigh, „at first how I did not have, listened to your saying, cancelled my addiction , calculated my one!” 冯裤子一直搓大腿,“我起初还没怎么着,听你这一说,把我瘾头勾出来了,得,算我一个！” „Also calculates my one!” Zhao Baogang said immediately. “也算我一个！”赵宝钢立即道。 Chen Xiaoer is interested, but is also acting bashful, „my segment Mang, has a look, to have a look.” 陈小二感兴趣,但还拿捏着点,“我这段忙,有空就看看,看看。” „......” “……” beam Zuotui pushed the eyeglasses, said: „What frame, you must first think the character, first thinks the story?” 梁左推了推眼镜,道:“什么框架,你要先想人物,还是先想故事？” „Character, the Situation comedy character is most important, I first begin......” “人物,情景喜剧人物最重要,我先起个头……” permits Feidun, said: „Quite baffling is not good to cut into, we start from the ages, definitely old , middle-aged and young few four generations. First said old, old cannot be too many, are many snatched the play, a man and a woman are just right. Could not be the whole family, does not have the meaning, yeah, a wifeless man widow, what kind of?” 许非顿了顿,道:“没头没尾的不好切入,咱们从年龄段入手,肯定老中青少四代人。先说老的,老的不能太多,多了抢戏,一男一女正好。还不能是一家人,一家没意思,哎,一个鳏夫一个寡妇,怎么样？” „Good! The widows have a daughter, big silly thing.” Zhao Baogang said. “不错！寡妇还有个女儿,大傻丫头。”赵宝钢道。 „Silly thing is not good, desirably, daughter of noisy divorce how?” Feng Kuzi said. “傻丫头不好,刻意了,闹离婚的女儿怎么样？”冯裤子道。 „Good! Noisy divorce, compared with divorcing has the quality of being worth looking.” “好！闹离婚的,比离婚的有看头。” Chen Xiaoer reveals baldly, „old wifeless man has a granddaughter, 20 over, the children work outside area. The granddaughter is pretty, greatly high, the big eye, is, is, the model!” 陈小二又露出光头,“老鳏夫有个孙女,二十出头,子女在外地工作。孙女漂亮,大高个,大眼睛,是个,是个,模特！” „Yeah, the model is good!” “哎,模特好！” Zhao Baogang patted the belly, „I have not been seeing the model in the soap opera!” 赵宝钢拍起了肚皮,“我就没在电视剧里见着过模特！” „That dramatic conflict had......” “那戏剧冲突就有了……” beam Zuohu who listens earnestly said: „Wifeless man is old traditional, conservative, the granddaughter who draws back must be the model, must produce the contradiction. The daughter of widow must divorce, do others make peace or urge to leave? This conflicts.” 认真听讲的梁左忽道:“鳏夫是退下来的老传统,守旧,孙女要当模特,必然要产生矛盾。寡妇的女儿要离婚,旁人劝和还是劝离？这又是冲突。” „Fierce! Our reform and opening ten years, but also some people hug are rather tearing down ten temples, did not open a marriage to say the matter, this person should kill!” “厉害！咱们改革开放十来年,还有人抱着宁拆十座庙,不拆一桩婚说事,这种人就该打死！” permits non- also set upright the thumb, „two old people's occupations, I thought that is more interesting. The old woman can be carries out the literary arts to draw back, every day the hanging oneself throat, had been the militiaman early before, the body is hale and hearty.” 许非也竖了根大拇指,“俩老人的职业,我觉得要有意思一些。老太太可以是搞文艺退下来的,每天早上吊嗓子,以前当过民兵,身子骨硬朗。” „Militiaman explained has practiced, the necessary time unexpectedly, seized the criminal bravely, this burden had!” “民兵说明练过,必要时候出其不意,勇擒罪犯,这包袱有了！” Chen Xiaoer ponders over, „old person is a very good adjustment, boasts especially possible, but the lead must place on the young people.” 陈小二琢磨琢磨,“老人是个非常好的调剂,咋咋呼呼特有戏,但主角还得放在年轻人身上。” „Rational, when the young people the lead audience like looking.” Feng Kuzi said. “有理,年轻人当主角观众更爱看。”冯裤子道。 „Middle age, the middle age has the family/home to have industry, the life is stable, can establish the cultural worker, how the language teacher? The professional ability is high, has the talent, but cannot divide the house, the family of three pushes in the big courtyard, has own that writer to be sorrowful.” permits Feidao. “中年,中年有家有业,生活稳定,可以设定成文化人,语文老师怎么样？业务能力高,有才华,但就是分不着房子,一家三口挤在大杂院,有自己的那份文人哀愁。”许非道。 „Wife is the cafeteria worker, straight talk from a straightforward person, the housework the expert, lacks the spiritual exchange. A additional daughter, few character generations also had again.” “媳妇儿是个食堂工人,快人快语,家务是把好手,缺少精神交流。再加个女儿,少字辈也有了。” beam left thought deeply about a meeting , to continue saying: „School came a new colleague, the young miss, read the poem writing, liked Whitman and Jane/simple Austin. The teacher is capricious, thought that found the soul mate, finally the miss loves money, is a post-modern bad karma......” 梁左思索了一会,继续道:“学校来了一位新同事,年轻姑娘,读诗写作,喜欢惠特曼和简奥斯汀。老师心猿意马,觉得找到了精神伴侣,结果姑娘爱钱,又是一段后现代主义孽缘……” „Haha, certainly! Certainly!” “哈哈,绝了！绝了！” Zhao Baogang stands all of a sudden, strikes the table to laugh. 赵宝钢一下子站起来,拍案大笑。 „Furthermore, can write an outside couple, opens shop anything, can the rich content.” “再有,可以写一对外地夫妻,开个小店什么的,能丰富内容。” Chen Xiaoer is breaking off the finger headage, „widow leads a daughter, the wifeless man leads a granddaughter, teacher three, the outside couple mouth, this nine, being the fixed actor were enough, how looked at the lead.” 陈小二掰着手指头数,“寡妇带一女儿,鳏夫带一孙女,老师三口,外地夫妻两口,这就九个了,做固定演员足够,就看主角怎么着了。” permits non- ponders saying: „Lead I thought that cannot be too young, slightly greatly, 28 or 29-year-old such, vagrant, but is not the bludger, has own pursue, pursues anything......” 许非思考道:“主角我觉得不能太年轻,稍微大一点,二十八九岁那样,无业游民,但不是混混,有自己的追求,追求什么……” „Art.” beam heretical ways. “艺术。”梁左道。 „, Ok, such contrast is more striking.” permits Feidao. “诶,可以,这样反差更强烈。”许非道。 „Has not worked, does he live by what?” Feng Kuzi said. “可没工作,他靠什么活呢？”冯裤子道。 „......” “呃……” Zhao Baogang transferred in an instant the bead, the earth deities light presently, „sells to pirate the magnetic tape suddenly for the first time!” 赵宝钢转了转眼珠子,忽地灵光乍现,“卖盗版磁带！” „Hahahaha!” “哈哈哈哈！” „Your this certainly!” “你这个更绝！” „Good! Good!” “好！好！” permits non- sets out with a smile, carries the second pot water, one by one bowl adding. 许非笑着起身,拎起第二壶水,挨个碗给添。 The steam of ascension fills the air in the tables instantaneously, white billowing, wet steaming, on each face wiped froth. 升腾的热气瞬间又在桌间弥漫,白滚滚,湿腾腾,每人脸上都抹了层水沫儿。 Several people gush out a hot feeling, grows out of nothing, from having to careful, like looking at a thing takes shape in own hand slowly. 几人都涌出一股热乎乎的感觉,从无到有,从有到细致,就像看着一个东西在自己手中慢慢成型。 This ideological collision, is very high-level one head trip. Did not say that I eat today well, made 200 dollars, can compare with miss approximately. 这种思想上的碰撞,是非常高级的一种精神享受。不是说我今天吃了顿好的,挣了二百块钱,跟姑娘约个会就能比拟的。 „......” “呵……” beam left also smiled finally, reveals not attractive tooth, „this script I met.” 梁左也终于笑了,露出不咋好看的牙齿,“这剧本我接了。” ( Last month renewed 54 chapters, is actually 55 chapters, was closed one chapter. This was I in history most one month, sprouted main also eight chapters of in addition, the monthly ticket I calculate, according to 35 chapters calculates, will make up one by one. In the evening also has......) (上月更新了54章,其实是55章,被关进去一章。这是我有史以来更最多的一个月了,萌主还有八章加更,月票我算了算,按35章算吧,逐一会补上。晚上还有……)