AfterLi Mucompliesto writethisscript, howto process itselfaboutLi Muin the scriptandhisstatus and relations, Wei Lanhad once hadmanyconception.
在李牧答应写这个剧本之后,关于李牧会如何在剧本中处理自己与他的身份以及关系,蔚澜曾有过很多构想。
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……Inherdifferentconception, sheorLi Mu'ssubordinate, orhispartner, orhisfamily member, orhisfriend, variousstatusshehad supposedin the mind, buthas not conceivedonly, oneselfin the Li Mu'sscript, will become the Li Mu'sgirlfriend.
在她的不同构想中,她或是李牧的下属、或是他的合作伙伴、或是他的亲人、或是他的朋友,各种身份她都曾经在脑海之中假设过,但唯独没有设想过,自己在李牧的剧本里,会成为李牧的女朋友。Thisthoughthad appearedonetimein the Wei Lanmind, thatiswhenshethinks that for the first time when must the kidnappedcasereorganizes the movie, the reorganizationway in hermindinstantaneouslythinking.
这个念头曾经在蔚澜的脑海中出现过一次,那是当她第一次想到要把自己被绑架的案子改编成电影时,她脑海中瞬间想到的改编方式。Shehasmanyresearchto the film and televisionactually not, butshefelt,shereallylikedthisslightly young boy, perhapsoneselfwill be impossibleto becomehisgirlfriendin the real life, such being the case, ifcan„become”onetimein the television work, oneselfhave also been ableto satisfy.
倒不是她对影视有多少研究,只是她觉得,自己实在太喜欢这个比自己小了好几岁的男孩,或许自己根本不可能会在现实生活中成为他的女朋友,既然如此,如果能在影视作品中“成为”一次,自己心里也已经可以满足。However, Wei Lanonlythinks a time, cannotthinkagain, the reason is also becauseshefelt,Li Muwill be impossibleto showhimandownrelationswiththisway.
但是,蔚澜之所以只想了一次、没敢再想,原因也是因为她觉得,李牧根本不可能会用这种方式去展现他与自己的关系。
But after sheopens " Extreme Fast Chasing Murder » script, actually the pleasantly surpriseddiscovery, in the charactersetting, the Male leadcorner/horn„Chen Hao” and Female leadcorner/horn„Li Xuan” between relations, unexpectedlyis a lover!
可当她打开《极速追凶》剧本之后,却惊喜的发现,在人物设定中,男主角“陈昊”与女主角“李萱”之间的关系,竟然是情侣!Thisletsin the Wei Lanheartjoyfulincomparable, didn't expectLi Muchooses the way that oneselfmostanticipatedactuallymostnot to dareto expect, andhisrelationsportrayed itself a pair of lover.
这让蔚澜心中欣喜无比,没想到李牧选择了自己最期待却又最不敢期待的方式,把自己和他的关系塑造成了一对情侣。In the 27-year-oldWei Lanfeelingheartis similar tohas the innumerablefawnsto runto proceed along no particular course, withthisexcitingexcitement, shecontinuesto lookdownward.
27岁的蔚澜感觉心中如同有无数只小鹿奔跑乱撞,怀着这种激动兴奋的心情,她继续往下看。WhensawoneselfandLi Mu the sentiment of startsto shine the red lightin the script, on the Wei Lanfaceexudes the intermittenthappy expression, thought aloud: „The personality of workaholicverybuildswith the realityactually, Ithoughtyouifin the futurewill not change, will really have the possibility, becausemustworkbusily, withgirlfriendsentimentbrightred light.”
当看到自己与李牧在剧本中最开始的感情亮起红灯的时候,蔚澜脸上泛起阵阵笑意,自言自语道:“工作狂的性格倒是跟现实挺搭,我看你将来如果不改一改,真有可能因为总要忙工作,跟女朋友感情亮红灯。”Saying, Wei Lanthenlooksdownward.
说着,蔚澜接着往下看。In the script, the Song Zhileirolechanged the nameas„Zhou Dahua”, turned intoMale lead„Chen Hao”sworn enemy, thisthenFemale lead„Li Xuan”more innocent.
剧本中,宋志磊的角色被更名为“周大华”,同时也变成了男主“陈昊”的死对头,这样便把女主“李萱”更加无辜化。In the Li Mu'sscript, „Li Xuan” the personsupposeswith the maximumdeviation, isLi Xuan„absolutelyinnocent”.
在李牧的剧本里,“李萱”的人设与自己最大的偏差,就是李萱的“绝对无辜”。Oneselfareunder the settoSong Zhileiinfirst, Song Zhileikidnapping, saidstrictly,to a certain extentoneselfalsotakes the consequences for own actions;But„Li Xuan”is a completeinnocentfemale, the Boyfriendbusyworkinsufficientlylovesher , the sworn enemy on Boyfriendworktoretaliatehim , the choiceconspiresto kidnap itself, then, „Li Xuan”thisrolemoldeddoes not have anysunspot, will not causeanydispute, canarouse all audience'stohersympathy and affection.
自己是给宋志磊下套在先,宋志磊绑架在后,严格说起来,一定程度上自己也是自作自受;而“李萱”则是一个完完全全的无辜女性,男朋友忙工作不够爱她也就罢了,男朋友工作上的死对头为了报复他,也选择密谋绑架自己,如此一来,“李萱”这个角色就被塑造的没有任何黑点,不会引发任何争议,可以唤起所有观众对她的同情与喜爱。Whensaw that Male lead„Chen Hao”toFemale lead„Li Xuan”is impatient, Wei Lansomewhatfor„Li Xuan”defends against injustice, felt,theMale lead of Li Mumoldis brutal, atFemale leadwas kidnappedcritical moment, healsotomeetnot to meet the kidnapperunexpectedlywith the phone call that the Female leadcell phonemakes, is really somedregsmalepotentials.
当看到男主“陈昊”对女主“李萱”一点也不耐烦的时候,蔚澜都有些替“李萱”打抱不平,同时也觉得,李牧塑造的这个男主过于无情,在女主都被绑架了的关键时刻,他竟然还为了开会而不接绑匪用女主手机打来的电话,实在是有些渣男的潜质。But, the storyhad a gianttransitionhere.
可是,故事在这里发生了一个巨大的转折。When„Chen Hao”knew that „Li Xuan”was kidnapped, hestartsto be anxiousimmediately, with the robberdisplays their wisdom and braveryat the same time, took outoneto buy the goodproposingringfrom the drawer of officeunexpectedly, arrived here, Wei Lanwas clear, originallyinscript„Chen Hao”to„Li Xuan”was the absolutereallove, but the charactermade it so, makinghimnot be willingexcessivelyto yieldin front ofLi Xuan, thereforetwo peoplehave been in sharp opposition, could not find a bestbeing togetherway.
当“陈昊”得知“李萱”被绑架,他立刻开始紧张起来,与劫匪斗智斗勇的同时,竟然还从办公室的抽屉里取出了一枚早就买好的求婚戒指,到这里,蔚澜才明白,原来剧本中的“陈昊”对“李萱”是绝对的真爱,只是性格使然,让他不愿意在李萱面前过多让步,所以两人一直针锋相对,找不到一个最佳的相处方式。Thissmalldesign, makingWei Lan unable to bearslap the table and shout with praise, butpulls out a ring, reversedMale lead„Chen Hao”to leave the selfishimage of audience before all of a sudden, made the audiencerealizeall of a sudden, heto„Li Xuan” the affection, is actually deep, encountered the time of kidnappinginFemale lead, Male leadsuchbehavior, gavehimto win the hugepersonal connection and approvalbefore the audience.
这一个小小的设计,让蔚澜忍不住拍案叫绝,只是掏出一枚戒指,就一下子扭转了男主“陈昊”在之前留给观众的自私形象,一下子让观众意识到,他心里对“李萱”的感情,其实已经非常深厚,在女主遭遇绑架的时刻,男主这样的行为,给他在观众面前博得了巨大的人缘与认可。Starting fromthis moment, a mantorescue the belovedwomanracks brainsandto want the plotact drops of completelyallmeanspull open.
从这一刻开始,一个男人为了营救心爱的女人而绞尽脑汁、想尽一切办法的剧情大幕就此拉开。Lookedlittledownward,Wei Lanwas attractedby the Li Muexquisiteplotarrangementlittle, particularlyin the unceasingadvancement of plot, oneselfasexperiencing, as beforealsoin the rhythmbyLi Muscriptwas pressedhas not somewhat gasped for breath.
一点点往下看,蔚澜一点点被李牧精妙的剧情编排所吸引,尤其是在剧情的不断推进上,自己作为亲历者,也依旧被李牧剧本中的节奏压的有些喘不过气来。Whensees„Chen Hao”withspecialmeanslocking„Li Xuan” when position, Wei Lanheartalsoexcitingjumpscrazily.
当看到“陈昊”用特殊的办法锁定“李萱”的位置时,蔚澜心头也激动的一阵狂跳。Whenfinally, whensaw that „Chen Hao”did not say a wordto propose„Li Xuan”, Li Xuanput out a handto representto comply, Wei Lanis also with flowing tears, storygreatlycompleteresult, „Li Xuan”, not onlybyreturning safe and soundrescued, with„Chen Hao” the sentimentalsorosefinallyalsomade the hugebreakthrough, proposedsuccessfully, means that will soon walk into the maritalpalace, thisis the loveultimatestage, therefore the resultinanylevel, was perfect.
等到最后,当看到“陈昊”一言不发求婚“李萱”,李萱伸出手去代表答应的时候,蔚澜也不禁潸然泪下,故事大圆满结局,“李萱”不但被毫发无损的救了出来,与“陈昊”的感情也终于重新升温并且取得了巨大的突破,求婚成功,也就意味着即将步入婚姻殿堂,这已经算是爱情的终极阶段,所以结局在任何一个层面上,都是完美的。Reads the completesectionscript, Wei Lannot onlyhas tears streaming down the face, but also is unable to be calmfor a very long time, shereallyafternot reorganizing the moviehugstooin a big wayhopes, butfeelsthismovie, ifshoots, will have very bighelptoLi Mu'sSkynet Monitoring System, so long asis helpfultoLi Mu, oneselfliftboth handsapprovalon the nature.
看完整部剧本,蔚澜不仅泪流满面,而且心情也久久无法平静,她原本并没有真的对改编后的电影抱太大希望,只是觉得这部电影如果拍出来,对李牧的天网监控系统会有很大的帮助,只要对李牧有帮助,自己就自然举双手赞成。Howeverdidn't expect, Li Muusedless thantwodays of absolutelyunexpectedly, put out a high-qualityscript, makes itselfincomparablyshockingsimply!
但是万万没想到,李牧竟然用了不到两天的时间,就拿出了一个如此高质量的剧本,简直让自己无比惊艳!WhenLi Mutakes a bath, Wei Lanreported a bigskewernewsonYYtohim.
当李牧洗完澡出来的时候,蔚澜在yy上给他发了一大串的消息。„ScriptIlooked, was really good!”
“剧本我看完了,真的是太棒了!”„You are really a talent, the althoughstoryhas not changed, but the change of storybackground was really big, particularly the Male & Female Leadsentimentalplay, although had almost no directopponentplay, but the developmentandtwo peoplerealsentiments of two peoplesentimentconditionmanifested, through the incisiveness that varioussmalldetailsshowed!”
“你真是个天才,虽然故事本身没怎么变,但是故事背景的变化实在是太大了,尤其是男女主的感情戏,虽然几乎没有什么直接的对手戏,但两人感情状况的发展、两人真实的感情体现,都通过各种小细节展现的淋漓尽致!”„Ihave wantedto seethismoviein the movie theaternowimpatiently!”
“我现在就已经迫不及待想在电影院看到这部电影了!”„Right, whom do youwantto makeact inthismovie? EspeciallyMale leadandFemale lead.”
“对了,你想让谁来演这部电影?尤其是男主和女主。”„Alsohas, Iam satisfied with the script, only thenafterlookingto have an idea, was the name«Extreme Fast Chasing Murder»is some are not quite appropriate? In comparison, Ithought that ‚rescue’conforms to the subject of thismovie!”
“还有还有,我对剧本非常满意,不过只有在看完之后有一个想法,名字叫《极速追凶》是不是有些不太合适?相比之下,我觉得‘营救’更符合这部电影的主题!”Li Musits downnearby the computer, looks at the message of Wei Lan, at presentonebright, said with a laughsaid: „A yoursuchsayingmademesuddenly see the lightactually, what " Extreme Fast Chasing Murder » namewas evidentwaspunisheseliminatesdeceitfullywickedly, ifchanged into«Extreme Fast Rescue», conformed to the subject of movie!”李牧在电脑跟前坐下,把蔚澜的留言看完,眼前一亮,笑着说道:“你这么一说倒是让我豁然开朗,《极速追凶》的名字凸显的是惩奸除恶,如果换成《极速营救》,才更符合电影的主题!”Wei Lanrepliesimmediately: „Ialsothought so,«Extreme Fast Rescue»thisnamewas good, not onlyfittingsubject , the sentiment of fittingMale leadtoFemale lead!”蔚澜立刻回复:“我也这么觉得,《极速营救》这个名字太棒了,不但贴合主题,也贴合男主对女主的感情!”Li Musaidimmediately: „Thatdecided«Extreme Fast Rescue», as for the cast, I have not thoughtnow,firstbumpedto saywith the Yanjingcitybureauagain.”李牧当即说道:“那就定《极速营救》了,至于演员阵容,我现在还没想好,先跟燕京市局碰一下再说吧。”
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……Next day, when the citybureaumedia centersees " Extreme Fast Rescue » script, entirepropagandamouthpolice officersbythisoutstandingscriptexcitingexcited.
翌日,当市局新闻中心看到《极速营救》的剧本时,整个宣传口的警员都被这部优秀的剧本刺激的兴奋不已。Theirappraisaltothisscriptis extremely high, hightolettingGu Jianghesomedoes not dareto believe.
他们对这部剧本的评价极高,高到让顾江河都有些不敢置信。Gu Jiangheevenscrutinized the entirescriptpersonally, afterreadingcompletesectionscript, Gu Jianghealsogives the thumbs-uptoLi Muin the heart.顾江河甚至都亲自审阅了整部剧本,在看完整部剧本之后,顾江河也不由在心底冲李牧竖起大拇指。Thisfellow, is really a anomaly, even the scriptplaysis so smooth, thiscaseishe himselfhas personally experienced, Li Muthisscriptchanges, makinghe himselfstartto suspect, scriptandownpersonal experiencewhichreally? Howoneselfinsteadfelt,Li Muthishalf real , half fakescript, insteaddoes make itselffeel the vividsense of reality?
这家伙,果然是个变态,连剧本都玩的这么溜,要知道,这件案子可是他自己亲身经历过的,李牧这个剧本改的,让他自己都开始怀疑,到底剧本与自己的亲身经历哪个更真实一点?怎么自己反而感觉,李牧这个半真半假的剧本,反而更让自己感觉到有血有肉般的真实感呢?Moreover, Li Muthisfellow, whenprocessesvariousrelations, imagesandcontradiction, accomplishes a task with ease.
而且,李牧这家伙,在处理各种关系、形象、矛盾的时候,也是游刃有余。In the entirescript, without the least bitplacehighlighted the ability of Yanjingcitybureauto be insufficient, managementwas disadvantageous.
整部剧本中,没有半点地方凸显了燕京市局的能力不足、办事不利。
The citybureaupolicecould not find the clue of kidnapper, there aretwoobjective causes:
市局警察找不到绑匪的线索,有两个客观原因:First, the monitoringcoversinsufficient, could not findtrulyvaluablemonitoringvideomaterial;
第一,监控覆盖不足,找不到真正有价值的监控视频资料;Second, the kidnapper is too truly astute, hidden the clue that allcanhide, evengives back to the policeto leave behindmanyfalsecluesto confuse the police, making the policetakemanytortuous paths;
第二,绑匪确实太精明,隐藏了所有能够隐藏的线索,甚至还给警察留下许多假线索迷惑警察,让警察走了不少弯路;Li Muis especially astutein the script, appears the police who the criminalwritesto detour is also natural, formed the directcausal relationwith the formerupholstery.李牧在剧本里把犯罪分子写的格外精明,就显得警察走弯路也是理所当然,与之前的铺垫形成了直接的因果关系。Moreover, for the image of Yanjingcitybureau, Li Mualsogave the kidnapper in scriptto establish a dialoguespecially, the generalcontentwas, after kidnappingwas successful, kidnapperin privateare communicating, claimedthisdoingflawlessness, the police, even ifhad the hugeability, not possiblelockedtheirpositionswithin24hours or 48hours.
而且,为了燕京市局的形象,李牧还专门给剧本中的绑匪设定了一段对话,大概内容是,绑架成功之后,绑匪自己在私下沟通,声称这一次做的天衣无缝,警察就算是有天大的本领,也不可能在24小时或者48小时之内锁定他们的位置。Sucha few words, are the Yanjingcitybureauwashagain, in the kidnappersuchastutesituation, Yanjingcitybureaualthoughspellsvery much, butwantsto find the correctcluein 24 hours, is almost not the matter that is possibleto achieve.
这么一段话,再次为燕京市局洗地,在绑匪这么精明的情况下,燕京市局虽然很拼,但想在24小时内就找出正确的线索,几乎是不可能做到的事情。
The matter that is impossibleto achieve, finallyby„Male lead that” the ideological modewas a notch above everybody elseachieving, thiswill only highlight the Male leadloft image, butwill actually not bringto the image of citybureauanydiscredits.
不可能做到的事情,最后被思维模式超人一等的“男主”给做到了,这只会凸显男主的高大形象,但却不会给市局的形象带来任何抹黑。
It looks like inGu Jianghe, thismoviehadtoomanyflashing temperatures.
在顾江河看来,这部电影具备了太多闪光点。First, has majorwarningto the criminal;
首先,对犯罪分子有很大的警示作用;Next, tostrengthening the cityvideo surveillance has strongsuggestionfunction;
其次,对增强城市视频监控有着很强的暗示作用;Again, the good persongoodresultandevil personto have the theme of retribution for evildoinghighlightunusualis clearclearly;
再次,好人好结局、恶人有恶报的主旋律被凸显的非常清晰明确;Finally, the excitingplotsetting, moves the love storybackground, makingthismovie have strongcommercialelement, thisalsoindicates,thismoviecompared withotherthememoviescame, to havehighercommercial value, said that was capable ofmaking moneystraightforwardly!
最后,激动人心的剧情设定、感动不已的爱情故事背景,让这部电影具备了很强的商业元素,这也就预示着,这部电影比起其他的主旋律电影来,有更高的商业价值,说的最直白一点,就是有能力赚钱!Gu Jiangheexcited, immediatelypasses toGolden Shield Film and Television Cultural Center of Ministry of Public Security the script, thisis the propagandabattle position of Ministry of Public Security, in his opinion, such goodscript, is not the unit of citybureaurank can grasp, mustreportto the section.顾江河激动之下,立刻就将剧本传给了公安部的金盾影视文化中心,这可是公安部的宣传主阵地,在他看来,这么好的剧本,可不是市局这个级别的单位能够拿得住的,必须向部里汇报。Passedfor quite a whilemerely, in the section7-8shoots the director of thememovieto telephonetoGu Jianghespeciallyone after another, director who theseusuallyhave keen eyesightinwithstand/top, intelephonetoGu Jiangheto the utmostpolitewiththinking highly, the truegoalonly hasone, that is: Hopescandirect«Extreme Fast Rescue»
仅仅过了半天,部里七八个专拍主旋律电影的导演接二连三的给顾江河打电话,这些平时眼高于顶的导演,在电话里对顾江河极尽客气与恭维,真正的目的只有一个,那便是:希望能够执导《极速营救》Thiswave of directorhas not dealt with, biggroup of socialdirectorsdo not know how to knowthisscript, one after anotherprojectsin the telephone the Gu Jianghecell phone.
这波导演还没应付完,一大堆社会导演不知道怎么得知了这个剧本,接二连三的把电话打到顾江河的手机上。Those whomostmakeGu Jianghesurprisedis, thesealsoseveraldomesticfirst-linedirectors, theyalmostsee the scriptunexpectedly, the decisionhopes that immediatelycandirect.
最让顾江河惊讶的是,这其中竟然还有几个国内的一线导演,他们几乎是一看到剧本,就立刻拍板表示希望能够执导。Gu Jianghedidn't expect, justsubmittedin the script the section, someso manydirectorsrush to shootone after another, moreovermanypeopleevenasked themselvesto helpstrive, hopeexplicitly to striveto direct the opportunity of thismovie.顾江河没想到,刚把剧本递交到部里,陆陆续续就有这么多导演抢着要拍,而且不少人甚至明确求自己帮忙争取、希望能够争取到执导这部电影的机会。
The marketabledegree of «Extreme Fast Rescue»script, makesGu Jianghedumbfoundedsimply, buthewhilesurprised, was also sighingat heart: Youwantto pat, looking formeis useful? ThismattercannotothersLi Musaycalculates!
《极速营救》剧本的抢手程度,简直让顾江河目瞪口呆,而他在惊讶的同时,心里也在感叹:你们想拍,找我有什么用?这事儿不还得人家李牧说得算!
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