To Li Mu, the creation is a boundary, once entered in the boundary, that is similar to with isolates and wanders about in the creation sea in the world heartily, this feeling is even laborious, but makes people joyful especially. 对李牧来说,创作是一种境界,一旦进入了境界之中,那便如同与全世界隔绝、尽情在创作的海洋之中徜徉,这种感觉即便辛苦,但却格外使人愉悦。 …… …… When creates " Extreme Fast Chasing Murder » screenplay, Li Mu found the highest boundary of that creation truly, the entire script forms a coherent whole, is seemingly careless, contained he many careful ponders and improvements. 创作《极速追凶》的电影剧本时,李牧就真正找到了那种创作的最高境界,整个剧本一气呵成,看似草率,却又包含了他诸多细致的思考以及改进。 «Extreme Fast Chasing Murder» takes the Wei Lan kidnapped story as the main source, however in this foundation, Li Mu conducted the change of certain extent with the way of artistic creation, made certain plus-minus method in the background and plot. 《极速追凶》是以蔚澜被绑架的故事为蓝本,但是在这个基础上,李牧用艺术创作的方式进行了一定程度的改变,在背景与剧情上做了一定的加减法。 And, subtracted cause and effect that oneself and in the Wei Lan real status knew, cut into by the male and female lover directly, lets the story start was lither convenient ; 其中,减去了自己与蔚澜真实身份中认识的前因后果,直接以男女情侣切入,让故事启动时更轻盈便捷; Increased in the play the Male & Female Lead sentimental actor's pay, is equivalent in the subject of entire rescue, increased a new main line, is the male and female sentiment development line ; 增加了剧中男女主的感情戏份,相当于在整个营救的主题中,增加了一条新的主线,也就是男女感情的发展线; Increased in the play contrast and conflict among various character and plot, big or small plot high toward unceasingly, the rhythm controls is also proper. 增加了剧中各种人物与剧情之间的对比与冲突,大小剧情高朝不断,节奏把控的也非常到位。 The core main line of story is Female lead is kidnapped, in 100 minutes of movie, this main line must stare, to be kidnapped, kidnapper to hide various clue and police more by the kidnapper by the kidnapper from Female lead more to fall into the impasse successfully specialized, finally almost despairs, the progressive of layer upon layer this entire rhythm will advance a key point of most suspenseful anticipation the plot, at this time the Male lead miraculous glow one presently, released the nervousness that before progresses instantaneously completely, this huge contrast, will certainly make the audience be hard to take excitedly. 故事的核心主线是女主被绑架,一百分钟的电影中,这条主线要从女主被绑匪盯上、被绑匪成功绑架、绑匪专业隐藏各种线索、警察越查越陷入死胡同,最后几乎绝望,这整个节奏的层层递进会将剧情推到一个最令人紧张期待的关键点,这个时候男主的灵光一现,瞬间把之前递进的紧张情绪完全释放,这一下的巨大反差,一定会让观众激动难耐。 Li Mu felt, control of this rhythm, looks like makes an effort to oppress the pinnacle a spring unceasingly, then in the flash its release, only by doing so, can achieve the pinnacle the release of kinetic energy mood. 李牧觉得,这种节奏的把控,就像是不断用力把一根弹簧压迫到极致,然后在一瞬间将其释放,只有这样,才能把动能情绪的释放做到极致。 In addition, the Male & Female Lead sentiment does not understand and borders on to bid good-bye, to treasures and returns to in good mutually, this sentimental line is also a huge contrast contrast, although about sentimental line the ingredients of some upholstery many dog blood, but has to acknowledge, the sentimental actor's pays in most movies, is in itself one fills the dog blood greatly about collection, reason that the sentimental plays of some movies are touching, the classics, was not it is separated from the dog blood to gather the collection the nature, but was its plot tensity is bigger. 除此之外,男女主的感情从互不理解、濒临分手,到互相珍惜、重归于好,这条感情线本身也是一个巨大的反差对比,虽然关于感情线的铺垫多少有些狗血的成分在内,但是不得不承认,绝大多数电影中的感情戏份,本身就是一个充满狗血的大合集,有些电影的感情戏之所以感人、之所以经典,并不是它脱离了狗血合集的性质,而是它的剧情张力更大。 «Titanic», told was a female student of upper circles of society, the marriage and discontented second generation of rich fiance who the discontented parents arranged, did not observe the traditional woman ethics, to go off track on the cruise slightly hang the silk and to the fiance wears green hat the dog blood story, it can become the classics, some first-year university student reasons because of the final shipwreck, Male lead sacrificed themselves for Female lead very much, with own death, enhanced most greatly the plot tensity, therefore made trillion audience be with flowing tears. 《泰坦尼克号》,讲述的就是一个上流社会的女生,不满父母安排的婚姻、不满富二代未婚夫,在游轮上不守妇道、出轨小吊丝、给未婚夫戴绿帽的狗血故事,它之所以能成为经典,很大一部分原因是因为最后的沉船事故中,男主为了女主而牺牲了自己,用自己的死亡,把剧情的张力提升到了最大,所以才让亿万观众潸然泪下。 If «Titanic» final, Male & Female Lead goes by boat safe and secure to arrive in US (America), then eloped together, the day of having no shame, that this movie naturally cannot become the classics. 如果《泰坦尼克号》的最后,男女主乘船平安抵达美国,然后一起私奔、过起了没羞没臊的日子,那这部电影自然不会成为经典。 Li Mu naturally does not have the ambition to create a classical movie, he thinks is to build one to have extremely good commercial television work this script, this is the true product manager thought. 李牧自然没野心去缔造一部经典电影,他所想的就是要把这部剧本打造成一部具备极佳商业性的影视作品,这才是真正的产品经理思维。 The product manager never wants to develop one to call it the classical product, he only wants to develop one most to receive the user to welcome, the product that can take out money from the user pocket. 产品经理永远不想开发出一款会被称之为经典的产品,他只想开发出一款最受用户欢迎、最能从用户口袋里掏钱出来的产品。 Li Mu made the product to do for a long time, not only the commercial pursue to product was especially explicit, the analysis to the user especially was also thorough, therefore, when he completed " Extreme Fast Chasing Murder » script truly, his keen product sense of smell told him, this script, is perfect on the product structure, but after it transformed the product, can succeed, depended on the concrete development flow. 李牧做产品做久了,不但对产品的商业性追求格外明确,对用户的分析也格外透彻,所以,当他真正完成《极速追凶》剧本的时候,他敏锐的产品嗅觉告诉他,这部剧本,在产品架构上已经非常完美,而它转化成产品之后,到底能不能成功,就取决于具体的开发流程了。 A good commercial film director is essential, in addition, the electing corner/horn of movie equally is also important. 一个好的商业片导演是必不可少的,除此之外,影片的选角也一样重要。 Li Mu felt, since this movie must have Muye Pictures to begin shooting, then oneself must be the producer, not for other, to guarantee this movie can achieve the commercial good piece the quality, to this movie build classics in the commercial film. 李牧觉得,既然这部电影要有牧野映象来投拍,那么自己一定要做制片人,不为别的,就为了确保这部电影能够达到商业佳片的品质、一定要把这部电影打造成商业片中的经典。 After the script is completed, Li Mu used for several hours proofreads repeatedly, confirmed all unmistakably, after the situation that even the erroneous character as well as a punctuation wrong used did not have, the time is three days early morning. 剧本完成之后,李牧又用了几个小时的时间反复校对,确认一切无误,甚至连错别字以及一个标点错用的情况都没有之后,时间已经是第三天的清晨。 A Li Mu sleep/felt that is exhausted rests 1 : 00 pm, Father Li Mother Li somewhat wonders, the son comes back with great difficulty, how do whole time lock oneself in the room? 疲惫不堪的李牧一觉睡到下午 1 点,以至于李爸李妈都有些纳闷,儿子好不容易回来一趟,怎么大部分时间都把自己锁在屋里？ However Father Li Mother Li stemming from respects about Li Mu's, has not inquired, but Mother Li quite loves dearly about Li Mu this distorting the facts daily schedule. 不过李爸李妈出于对李牧的尊重,也没有多过问,只是李妈对李牧这种颠倒黑白的作息时间颇为心疼。 Around 1 : 00 pm, Li Mu is going against a chicken coop hair, walked from the room, Mother Li one hear of he comes out, nearby hastily arrives, concerned inquiry: „Son awakes, is hungry? In the pot keeps the food to you, but also hot, hurries to eat several before it's too late.” 下午 1 点多,李牧顶着一头鸡窝般的头发,从房间里走了出来,李妈一听他出来,急忙来到跟前,关切的询问:“儿子睡醒啦,饿不饿？锅里给你留着饭呢,还热着,赶紧趁热吃几口。” Li Mu rubs the eyes, belly cluck, he smiles, said: „Hungrily mother, I am awake......” 李牧揉揉眼睛,肚子一阵咕咕,他嘿嘿一笑,说:“妈,我就是饿醒的……” Mother Li hastily drew him to go to the restaurant, complained his work and rest is too chaotic, did not pay great attention to the body, while served to fill a bowl with rice to him, nearby the end arrived, said to Li Mu: „Hurries to eat, your father also called to ask that a moment ago my you got up.” 李妈急忙拉着他就去了餐厅,一边抱怨他作息太乱,一点也不注重身体,一边给他盛菜盛饭,端到跟前,对李牧说:“赶紧吃,你爸刚才还打电话来问我你起了没有。” Li Mu asked: „Which did my father go?” 李牧问:“我爸去哪了？” „In Department Store.” Mother Li said: „That side progress of work was quite recently essential, I must pass with your father every day.” “在百货大楼。”李妈说:“最近那边工程进度比较关键,我跟你爸每天都要过去。” Saying, Mother Li looked at the time, said: „You, say tonight what cannot stay up late, hears?” 说着,李妈看了看时间,道:“你啊,今晚说什么也不许熬夜了,听见没有？” Li Mu nods: „Knows that does not certainly stay up late tonight.” 李牧点点头:“知道啦,今晚一定不熬夜。” Mother Li said: „Your this time comes back to close in the room oneself, mystical, I with your father other relatives had not told matter that you come back, this in an instant was three days that you came back, you said that this time also them told matter that you came back?” 李妈说:“你这次回来就把自己关屋里,神神秘秘的,我跟你爸也一直没跟其他亲戚说你回来的事儿,这一转眼都是你回来的第三天了,你说这次还跟他们说你回来的事吗？” Li Mu thinks, said: „Or let alone, I feared that I did not have the too much time to treat at home, that side Yanjing also some lot must be done, this time no one tells.” 李牧想了想,说:“要不就别说了吧,我怕我没太多时间待在家了,燕京那边还有很多事情要做,这次就谁也不告诉了。” Speaking of here, Li Mu remembers Su Yingxue at heart suddenly, does not know that she is busy at anything at home, before although promised her to go home as far as possible, but really came back, because actually a script lost two three days time, without two days must begin school shortly, does not know her also in Haizhou. 说到这儿,李牧心里忽然想起苏映雪,也不知道她在家里忙什么,之前虽然答应她尽量回家,但是等自己真回来了,却因为一部剧本就耽误了两三天的时间,眼看没两天就要开学了,不知道她还在没在海州。 Mother Li hear of Li Mu said, nod of face support, said: „That no one tells, you rested well for two days at home, when the time comes quietly returned to Yanjing that's alright, otherwise various types treated with courtesy must boil unbearable you.” 李妈听李牧这么说,一脸支持的点了点头,说:“那就谁也不告诉了,你在家好好休息两天,到时候悄悄的回燕京就行了,不然的话各种应酬又要把你熬个够呛。” Li Mu said with a laugh: „My mother is sorest I.” 李牧笑着说:“还是我妈最疼我。” „Spoke the idle talk only.” Mother Li white Li Mu, said: „You first eat, mother goes to a company, this afternoon a little matter must process, finished up comes back earlier, what in the evening do you want to eat? The mother buys to give you to do.” “净说废话。”李妈白了李牧一眼,说:“你先吃,妈去趟公司,今天下午有点事情要去处理一下,完事就早点回来,晚上你想吃什么？妈买回来给你做。” Li Mu then said: „My anything is good, you decide well.” 李牧便说:“我什么都行,你决定就好。” Mother Li said with a smile: „Mother oneself took responsibility.” 李妈笑道:“那妈就自己做主了。” Li Mu discovered, oneself whole family is actually a workaholic. 李牧发现,自己一家子其实都是工作狂。 Oneself were needless saying that wished one could to lose the life, the parents were also same, my goodness, this was busy at own career coming, was a neglecting to eat and sleep strength, oneself this son came back, has not disrupted the rhythm that they worked. 自己就不用说了,恨不能把命都搭上,爸妈也是一样,好家伙,这忙起自己的事业来,也是一股废寝忘食的劲头,自己这个儿子回来,也一点都没打乱他们工作的节奏。 Mother Li walked, Li Mu at home, eats meal, while sent an information to Su Yingxue, inquired that now where Su Yingxue is. 李妈走了,李牧自己在家,一边吃饭,一边给苏映雪发了条信息,询问苏映雪现在在哪。 The Su Yingxue reply said: „Has gone to the school, this morning, you?” 苏映雪回复说:“已经到学校了,今天早上到的,你呢？” Li Mu said with amazement: „Went back quickly?” 李牧惊讶的说:“这么快就回去了？” Su Yingxue said: „Yes , will teach a course today on the 7 th tomorrow, did not come back without enough time.” 苏映雪说:“是啊,今天七号了,明天开课,再不回来就来不及了。” Li Mu then realized, a National Day vacation, has passed unexpectedly. 李牧这才意识到,一个国庆假期,竟然就已经这么过去了。 At this time, Su Yingxue returned to one: „Where are you at?” 这时候,苏映雪又回了一句:“你在哪呢？” Li Mu wants to say in Haizhou, but thinks, if in Haizhou, missed forcefully met in Haizhou with Su Yingxue, felt that some were not quite actually good, therefore then replied her: „I handle matters in Hangzhou, two days have returned to Yanjing.” 李牧想说在海州,但是一想到如果说自己在海州,硬生生错过了与苏映雪在海州见面,感觉倒是有些不太好,于是便回复她:“我在杭城办点事,过两天就回燕京。” Su Yingxue has not thought that after two people also chatted several, then stopped the message communication. 苏映雪也没多想,两人又聊了几句之后便停止了短信沟通。 Has eaten meal, Li Mu telephones to Wei Lan, wants to tell her the script already the news that completes, looks like in Li Mu, the first audience of this script, belongs certainly to Wei Lan. 吃过饭,李牧给蔚澜打了个电话,想告诉她剧本已经完成的消息,在李牧看来,这部剧本的第一个观众,一定非蔚澜莫属。 The Wei Lan itself/Ben thinks, perhaps by the actual situation of Li Mu this super busy person, the script of this movie, at least needs to wait till can see at the end of the year, but she has a dream also didn't expect, after more than 20 hours, Li Mu hits first that the telephone said is: „Script I had finished, sent to your mailbox, you first glanced, if there is any unsatisfied place, although raised, I revised again!” 蔚澜本以为,以李牧这种超级大忙人的实际情况,这部电影的剧本,恐怕至少要等到年底才能看到,但是她做梦也没想到,时隔二十多个小时,李牧打来电话说的第一句便是:“剧本我已经写完了,发到你邮箱里了,你先过目一下,如果有什么不满意的地方,尽管提出来,我再修改！” Wei Lan also thinks oneself are having a dream: „Wrote quickly? You do not tease me to play......” 蔚澜还以为自己是在做梦:“这么快就写出来了？你不是逗我玩呢吧……” Li Mu said: „When have I deceived you?” 李牧说:“我什么时候骗过你？” Then, Li Mu also said: „I send to the script your PO Box YY later, you first glance.” 说罢,李牧又道:“我待会儿把剧本发到你的yy里,你先过目一下。” Wei Lan is difficult to cover said excitedly: „You issue me quickly, my reads!” 蔚澜已经难掩激动的说:“那你快发给我,我这就拜读一下！” „Good, waits a bit.” “好,稍等一下。” Li Mu made the telephone call, returns to the room to open laptop, " Extreme Fast Chasing Murder » script documents sent to Wei Lan PO Box YY. 李牧挂了电话,回房间把笔记本电脑打开,将《极速追凶》的剧本文档发到了蔚澜的yy。 After the moment, the Wei Lan YY head picture flashes, gesticulated „” the hand signal, said to Li Mu: „My this has a look!” 片刻后,蔚澜的yy头像闪动,比划了一个“耶”的手势,对李牧说:“我这就看看！” Li Mu replies her one: „Good, you looked that I take a bath.” 李牧回复她一句:“好,你看吧,我去洗个澡。” Fought bravely is so long for the script, the Li Mu whole person somewhat was sloppy, like past years when the small-scale entrepreneur made the enclosed development condition, for several days and several nights did not take a bath, even the face could not attend to washing. 为剧本奋战了这么久,李牧整个人都有些邋遢,像极了当年在小型创业公司做封闭式开发时的状态,几天几夜不洗澡,甚至连脸都顾不上洗。 At this moment, in Yanjing Wei Lan, was filled with the anticipation the mail that opens Li Mu to send, when saw that named «Extreme Fast Chasing Murder» appendix documents, she smiles, thought aloud: ” Name gets up also pretty good! ” 此时此刻,远在燕京的蔚澜,满心期待的打开了李牧发来的邮件,当看到那个名为《极速追凶》的附件文档时,她笑了笑,自言自语道:”名字起得还不赖！” Then, the Wei Lan impatient opening documents, she especially wants to have a look, in the Li Mu's writing, actually how to deduct him to rescue own Legend story...... 说罢,蔚澜迫不及待的打开文档,她特别想看看,在李牧的笔下,究竟会如何演绎他救了自己的传奇故事……