RINAPE :: Volume #10

#978: The script finishes!


LNMTL needs user funding to survive Read More

Li Mu thought suddenly Wei Lan the selfishness is sincere. 李牧忽然觉得蔚澜的这份私心过于厚重。 She will comply with the city bureau and agreement to move the big screen the case, actually wants to seek the benefits taking this opportunity for oneself radically. 她之所以会答应市局、同意把案子搬上大荧幕,其实根本就是想借这个机会为自己谋福利。 Skynet Monitoring System, is, when Wei Lan was kidnapped, feels the monitoring to cover earnestly insufficient to the hidden danger that the social order brings, therefore the decision must do, Wei Lan is very at heart clear, the initial case process gave itself this feeling, once it were moved the big screen, through the good the deduction of screenwriter, director as well as actor, can certainly give all audience this feeling release. 天网监控系统,是自己在蔚澜被绑架的时候、切实感受到监控覆盖不足给社会治安带来的隐患,所以才拍板要做的,蔚澜心里很清楚,当初的案件经过给了自己这个感受,一旦它被搬上大荧幕,通过好的编剧、导演以及演员的演绎,一定也能将这种感受释放给所有观众。 What wants not to need to think, once this movie is published, attractive first abandons did not discuss, it will certainly let the promotion of all audience urgent ORIJEN (long for) public securities, once brings change in this subconscious to the audience, Skynet Monitoring System will become the favored product, by that time, this set of system popular resistance will certainly minimize. 想都不用想的是,这部电影一旦问世,好看不好看的先抛开不谈,它一定会让所有观众迫切渴望公共安全的提升,一旦给观众带来这种潜意识上的改变,天网监控系统就会成为众望所归的产品,到那个时候,这套系统的普及阻力一定会降到最低。 Only is this point even also insufficient, Wei Lan even also thinks oneself Muye Pictures, she actually mentioned by name to request Muye Pictures to invest the manufacture, wants to shoot the film and television company of this movie to keep them out these all of a sudden truly. 光是这一点甚至还不够,蔚澜甚至还想到了自己的牧野映象,她竟然点名要求牧野映象来投资制作,一下子就把那些真正想拍这部电影的影视公司拒之门外了。 To be honest, Li Mu does not want to begin shooting this movie, always thought that somewhat spends the feeling of Wei Lan pain, therefore he then said to Wei Lan: Thank you Wei Lan, if you really want to notice that case reorganizes the movie, that this movie do not let Muye Pictures shoot, Muye Pictures is actually a spatial shell, inexperienced.” 说心里话,李牧并不想投拍这部电影,总觉得有些消费蔚澜痛苦的感觉,于是他便对蔚澜说:“谢谢你蔚澜,不过如果你真想看到那件案子改编成电影的话,那这部电影还是别让牧野映象拍了,牧野印象其实就是个空壳子,经验不足。” Wei Lan said: I felt, only then Muye Pictures pats, I can feel relieved.” 蔚澜说:“我觉得只有牧野映象来拍,我才能放心。” Saying, Wei Lan was also saying: Reorganizes from the real the movie of event or novel, lacks to story's respect, every so often for changing beyond all recognition that other goals will change, therefore I felt, only then Muye Pictures will begin shooting, I can feel relieved.” 说着,蔚澜又道:“很多改编自真实事件或者小说作品的电影,都缺乏对故事本身的尊重,很多时候会为了一些个人目的而改的面目全非,所以我觉得,只有牧野印象来投拍,我才能放心。” Li Mu said: If you feared that reorganizes too oddly, can request when the time comes with them, ahead of time has a look at the script.” 李牧说:“如果你怕改编得太离谱,到时候可以跟他们要求一下,提前看看剧本。” I did not want......” Wei Lan for the first time almost am to Li Mu said with the tone that nearly acted like a spoiled brat: Other person of I am untrustworthy, I only believe you.” “我不要……”蔚澜几乎是第一次用近乎撒娇的语气对李牧说:“其他人我都信不过,我只信你。” Saying, Wei Lan hesitated for a moment, was saying: If possible, I hope that you are the screenwriter.” 说着,蔚澜迟疑片刻,道:“如果可以的话,我希望你来做编剧。” I?” Li Mu head big, said: I am not this brick.” “我?”李牧脑袋大了一圈,说:“我可不是这块料。” I do not believe.” Wei Lan said: 《Old Boy》 is you writes and directs? I looked several, the screenwriter or the director, your strength is very fierce.” “我不信。”蔚澜说:“《老男孩》就是你自编自导的吧?我看了好几遍,无论是编剧还是导演,你的实力都很厉害。” Li Mu said: That is the product of working as a volunteer nature......” 李牧说:“那就是个玩票性质的产物……” Wei Lan again the tone that uses that type nearly to act like a spoiled brat a moment ago: Aiya, you comply with my time, the request in this aspect, I possibly also proposed this time with you for a lifetime, movie Muye Science and Technology began shooting, who was the director, who acted the leading role in me not to matter, but the screenwriter must be you.” 蔚澜再次用上了刚才那种近乎撒娇的语气:“哎呀,你就答应我这一次吧,这方面的要求,我可能一辈子也就跟你提这一次了,电影牧野科技投拍,谁做导演、谁主演我都无所谓,但编剧必须是你。” Li Mu wants to turn down, but Wei Lan the tone, could not be said the words that turns down by oneself unexpectedly. 李牧本想婉拒,但蔚澜的这种语气,竟让自己说不出婉拒的话来。 Li Mu knows, Wei Lan so asking are helping, actually to help oneself. 李牧又何尝不知道,蔚澜这般“求”着自己帮忙,其实是为了帮自己。 At this time must be artificial, that may really not have the face. 这种时候自己要还是矫情,那可真是没脸了。 Therefore, Li Mu sighed, said: That line, Muye Pictures begins shooting, I write the script.” 于是,李牧叹了口气,说:“那行吧,牧野印象来投拍,我写剧本。” Wei Lan is happy immediately, said with a laugh: That and other script writes, I must be the first audience!” 蔚澜立刻开心起来,笑着说:“那等你的剧本写出来,我要做第一个观众!” Good! The script writes, first first looks to you!” “好!剧本写出来,第一时间先给你看!” ...... …… The automobile drives into the Haizhou boundary time, is the night almost 11 points. 汽车驶入海州地界的时候,已经是夜里差不多十一点了。 Because the Li Mu's parents know that he must go home, has not rested and sat sofa at home superior. 李牧的爸妈因为知道他要回家,都还没有休息、坐在家里的沙发上等着。 When Li Mu according to loud doorbell, has somewhat waited for deeply worried Mother Li hastily to set out to give him to open the door. 李牧按响门铃时,早已经等得有些焦灼的李妈急忙起身给他开门。 Opens the door, seeing on travel-worn and face several points of feeling of weariness Li Mu, Mother Li to love dearly immediately, said to Li Mu: Son, rides such long car(riage), was exhausted?” 一开门,看见风尘仆仆、脸上略带几分倦意的李牧,李妈顿时心疼起来,对李牧说:“儿子,坐这么久的车,累坏了吧?” Li Mu passes through the gate, changes the shoes, while said with a laugh: „It is not tired, sleeps on the vehicle, is energetic.” 李牧进了门,一边换鞋,一边笑着说:“不累,在车上还睡了一觉,正精神着呢。” Saying, Li Mu and Mother Li entered the living room together, Father Li has stood from the sofa, was difficult to cover exciting saying: I waited for your evening with your mother, in the evening ate meal? Your mother fears you to be hungry, kept the noodles with soybean paste to you specially.” 说着,李牧李妈一起走进客厅,李爸已经从沙发上站起来,难掩兴奋的说道:“我跟你妈等了你一晚上了,晚上吃饭了吗?你妈怕你饿,特意给你留了炸酱面。” Li Mu busy say/way: I hurry one bowl, was hungry.” 李牧忙道:“那我赶紧来一碗,饿了。” Mother Li hastily gave Li Mu abundantly one bowl of surface to come out, Li Mu sits to stutter on the sofa simply loudly, rushed about, no mood ate the thing, has not felt hungry, but arrived home instead to think that the belly somewhat was hungry cannot bear. 李妈急忙去给李牧盛了一碗面出来,李牧干脆就在沙发上坐着大口吃了起来,一路奔波,也没什么心情吃东西,更没觉得饿,可是一到家反而觉得肚子饿得有些受不了。 Saw that the appearance of Li Mu big stuttering scope, some Mother Li loving dearly said: If we had known drives to be so long, mother did not make you come back.” 眼看李牧大口吃面的模样,李妈有些心疼的说:“早知道开车要这么久,妈就不让你回来了。” Li Mu eats while said: Blames me, National Day the vacation has not been thinking goes home to have a look, mother you do not live me air/Qi.” 李牧边吃边说:“怪我,国庆假期也没想着回家看看,妈您可别生我气啊。” Mother Li rebuked oneself to say very much: Mother that speaks the angry words in the telephone, at that time had not considered Hangzhou was far from the family/home, moreover went home to return to Yanjing to be much more troublesome than you.” 李妈很是自责的说:“妈在电话里那是说气话呢,当时也没考虑杭城离家远,而且回家比你回燕京要麻烦得多。” Li Mu said with a smile: Mother, looked at you saying that going home is not again troublesome.” 李牧笑道:“妈,瞧您说的,回家再远也不麻烦。” Mother Li shakes the head sighs in a soft voice, looks at Li Mu is tired and hungry appearance, that rebukes oneself not to alleviate because of the Li Mu's words at heart. 李妈摇头轻声叹气,看着李牧又累又饿的样子,心里那份自责一点也没有因为李牧的话而缓解。 Father Li asked him at this time: Son, how did you run Hangzhou?” 李爸这时开口问他:“儿子,你怎么跑杭城去了?” Li Mu said truthfully: Went to Hangzhou to receive one to make good company in security monitoring very much.” 李牧如实道:“去杭城收了一家在安防监控方面做得很好的公司。” Security monitoring?” Some couples surprise, asked Li Mu: How to do this line suddenly?” “安防监控?”两口子都有些诧异,问李牧:“怎么忽然又搞起这一行来了?” Li Mu said with a laugh: I have a idea, wants to develop one set of monitoring system that enhances the urban law.” 李牧笑着说:“我有个构思,想开发一套提高城市治安的监控系统。” Saying, Li Mu was also saying to the parents the idea of Skynet system. 说着,李牧又将天网系统的构思跟父母说了一遍。 After husband and wife two people understand what is heard Li Mu's Skynet system plans, in abundance to this idea praise without cease. 夫妻两人听明白李牧的天网系统规划之后,纷纷对这个构思赞不绝口 Father Li was half a lifetime technical worker, is the intellectual, therefore the social responsibilities are quite heavy, he said to Li Mu: Son, your Skynet system significance was great, completes can save the personal and property safety of innumerable people, but can also restrain according to the law more criminals, therefore you must well entire, do not give up halfway.” 李爸做了半辈子技术工人,也算是个知识分子,所以社会责任感颇重,他对李牧说:“儿子,你这个天网系统意义重大,做好了能挽救无数人民群众的人身财产安全,还能将更多的犯罪分子绳之以法,所以你一定要好好整,千万别半途而废。” Li Mu serious nod: Relax father, once I complete the resource integration of security monitoring, the Skynet system research and development meeting is quick, certainly will let Skynet in the next several years, covers national all cities.” 李牧郑重点头:“放心吧爸,一旦我把安防监控的资源整合完成,天网系统的研发会非常快的,一定会让天网在未来的几年时间里,覆盖全国所有的城市。” Father Li said earnestly: Your present achievement, the father had a dream unable to do before continually, in all your achievements, most makes me feel proud, is actually 3321 that your one cent does not gain, now looks like, Skynet system can also become one of them.” 李爸认真的说:“你现在的成就,爸爸以前连做梦都做不出来,不过在你所有的成就中,最让我感到骄傲的,其实是你那个一分钱也不赚的3321,现在看来,天网系统也能成为其中之一。” Li Mu naturally knew about the father especially, oneself social responsibilities, originate from him mostly usually in being influenced by what one sees and hears, this point is especially important to oneself, if not because has the social responsibilities this together rod in the brain frequently, Li Mu will not think of 3321 such business models, even hatches Alipay, he will still certainly trade a truly profitable business model to hatch. 李牧对老爸自然格外了解,自己身上的社会责任感,多半也是来源于他平日里的耳濡目染,这一点对自己格外重要,如果不是因为在脑子里时刻有社会责任感这一道标尺,李牧也根本不会想到3321这样的商业模式,就算是孵化支付宝,他也一定会换一个真正有利可图的商业模式去孵化。 If there is 3321, wants to hatch Alipay, only then with Taobao net road, first cultivates national's Online shopping consciousness, to let the national after Online shopping has the demand, is centered on secure payment selects , to promote Alipay in the Online shopping user, but as the matter stands, Alipay and Taobao net wants to start truly, perhaps will become more difficult. 如果么有3321,想孵化支付宝,就只有用淘宝网这一条路,也就是先培养国民的网购意识、让国民对网购产生需求之后,再以“安全支付”为核心点,在网购用户中推广支付宝,但是这样一来,支付宝淘宝网想真正起步,恐怕都会变得更加困难。 It can be said that 3321 accomplished Alipay, was the Taobao net provided the high-quality payment user group, therefore the development of Taobao can be problem-free, all competitor distant flinging after brain. 可以说,3321造就了支付宝,同时也为淘宝网提供了优质的支付用户群,所以淘宝的发展才能够一帆风顺,把所有竞争对手都远远的甩在了脑后。 Such a looks, because Li Mu also 3321 this focusing on educating charity the non- profit project, benefit. 这么一看,李牧自己也因为3321这个以教育慈善为主的非盈利项目,获益匪浅。 Skynet Monitoring System, just like 3321, emerges in Li Mu heart deep place that intense social responsibilities, Li Mu initially when sprouted this thought that but also has not really thought the security monitoring domain can bring big room for profits to oneself, but truly started to promote this project forward the time, Li Mu unexpectedly unexpected benefit a future security monitoring Giant Hikvision. 天网监控系统,和3321一样,脱胎于李牧内心深处那份强烈的社会责任感,李牧当初在萌生这个念头的时候,还真没有想过安防监控领域能给自己带来多大的利润空间,可是真正开始向前推动这个项目的时候,李牧竟意外收获了一个未来的安防监控巨头-海康威视 With own tremendous support, Li Mu believes that now also for Hikvision that several million research and development funds worry, in the future will certainly be representing thousand hundred million RMB soaring market values, this is the unexpected benefit in idea Skynet Monitoring System. 在自己的巨大支持下,李牧相信现在还在为几百万研发资金犯愁的海康威视,未来一定代表着过千亿人民币的高昂市值,这就是自己在构思天网监控系统中的意外收获。 Now looks like, Li Mu even more felt, the social responsibilities are really a good thing, when you are thinking truly the benefitting society, for the society makes contribution, the society in other aspects will always give you unexpectedly to return. 现在看来,李牧愈发觉得,社会责任感实在是个好东西,当你真正想着去造福社会、为社会尽一份力的时候,社会总是会在其他方面给你意想不到的回报。 Chatted with the parents about, Li Mu returned to own room, after having taken a bath, Li Mu that could not withstand wearily again energetic many. 与父母聊到将近一点,李牧才回到自己的房间,洗过澡之后,原本疲倦不堪的李牧又重新精神了不少。 Lies on the bed, Li Mu thinks suddenly oneself comply with the Wei Lan matter, thinks that must wrote the script the Wei Lan kidnapped 24 hours of process, in his brain starts start cannot help but to flash before the realistic as well as illusory scene, in the mind even starts to reappear the concrete manifestation way of film and television idea. 躺在床上,李牧忽然想到自己答应蔚澜的事情,想到要把蔚澜被绑架的24小时经过写成剧本,他的脑中开始不由自主的开始闪现出许多现实以及虚幻的场景,脑海中甚至开始浮现出影视构思的具体展现方式。 Li Mu felt, since must do, that must complete this matter, he does not think the movie that the script that write, begin shooting ends with the servant street finally, therefore he starts to ponder over, how the idea script, can make this movie obtain the approval of market. 李牧觉得,既然要做,那就要把这件事做好,他不想自己写的剧本、自己投拍的电影最后以仆街收场,所以他开始琢磨,如何构思剧本,才能让这部电影获得市场的认可。 Afterward, Li Mu start to deliberate various details carefully. 随后,李牧开始仔细推敲其中的各种细节。 First, since reorganizes the movie, then must first abbreviate itself and Wei Lan complex relations background, and benefit involves, cannot and Wei Lan real relations manifests oneself, for example Wei Lan was own subordinate, actually owes the Wei Lan many hundreds of millions cash to pledge, this not only will attenuate the main line, but also and Wei Lan will expose oneself, the person with high aspirations or and Wei Lan slightly some people of understanding of oneself, can guess that obtained the lead in this play is Wei Lan. 首先,既然是改编成电影,那么首先就要省略掉自己与蔚澜复杂的关系背景,以及利益牵扯,不能把自己与蔚澜的真实关系体现出来,例如蔚澜是自己的下属、自己却欠了蔚澜好几亿的现金承诺,这样不但会弱化主线,还会把自己与蔚澜暴露出来,有心人或者对自己与蔚澜稍微有些了解的人,都能猜得出这剧中的主角就是蔚澜和自己。 Thinks it over, Li Mu thought that should follow in the case detail slightly changes, in the principle that in the status background changes greatly, oneself and Wei Lan role will conduct the deep film and television processing, but the best generation style, and Wei Lan relations will establish itself the lover. 想来想去,李牧觉得应该遵循在案件细节上小改、在身份背景上大改的原则,将自己和蔚澜的角色进行深度的影视化加工,而最好的加工方式,就是把自己和蔚澜的关系设定成情侣。 Film and television must first have enough character and plot conflicts, therefore, Li Mu felt, best setting, not only need and Wei Lan establishes the lover oneself, but must establish the sentiment to present the lover who some fissures, each other entered the desolate time temporarily, abides by this principle, lets sentiment of Male & Female Lead in play with the unceasing advancement of case, but the unceasing restore and healing even sublimate, finally reaches the peak, this can cater to the audience to the full. 影视化首先要有足够的人物与剧情冲突,所以,李牧觉得,最好的设定,不仅要将自己和蔚澜设定成情侣,而且要设定成感情暂时出现了一些裂痕、彼此进入冷淡期的情侣,遵循这个原则,让男女主在剧中的感情随着案件的不断推进而不断的修复、愈合甚至升华,最后达到顶峰,这样才能最大程度迎合观众。 Rising after staying low emotionally, is in itself also the plot that the metropolis men and women love. 感情上的先抑后扬,本身也是都市男女喜闻乐见的剧情。 Next, the status establishes, must ask for as far as possible happily. 其次,身份设定上,也要尽量讨喜。 For example: The masculine status that the females most like definitely is the overbearing president, the female status that the male most likes is Host and star one kind, therefore, the best plan is: Establishes itself the overbearing president, establishes star Host Wei Lan. 例如:女性最喜欢的男性身份肯定是霸道总裁,男性最喜欢的女性身份则是主持人、明星一类,所以,最好的方案就是:把自己设定成霸道总裁,把蔚澜设定成明星主持人 As the matter stands, the background of plot is: And takes star Host Female lead to go through a serious cold war as Male lead of overbearing president, the bride's side thought that the groom's family attached great importance to working to neglect itself, the groom's family thought the bride's side and contained, the gradual quarrel gradually to be lost the patience to oneself work insufficient understanding by oneself. 这样一来,剧情的背景就是:作为霸道总裁的男主和作为明星主持人女主正在经历一场严重的冷战,女方觉得男方过于重视工作而忽略了自己,男方则觉得女方对自己的工作不够理解与包容、逐渐的争吵让自己逐渐失去耐心。 Is such a pair of seemingly agreed but actually at variance lover, the bride's side stares suddenly by several specialized kidnappers, as for bandit chieftain, is Song Zhilei that role, Li Mu also conducted certain mold again. 就是这样一对貌合神离的情侣,女方忽然被几个专业的绑匪盯上,至于匪首,也就是宋志磊的那个角色,李牧也进行了一定的重新塑造。 Song Zhilei this role was established the Male lead once competitor by Li Mu, because just murdering of Male lead on market is decisive, causing Song Zhilei to go bankrupt and hates to the marrow of the bones about him, after Song Zhilei the wife and kid send to the overseas, then prepares internally to look for Male lead to revenge, kidnaps her girlfriend, and extorts large amount of financial affairs to him, after anticipating to go well, massacres his girlfriend, is drawing cash the overseas and wife converges. 宋志磊这个角色被李牧设定成了男主曾经的竞争对手,正因为男主在商场上的杀伐果断,导致宋志磊破产并对他恨之入骨,宋志磊把老婆孩子送去国外之后,便准备在国内找男主报仇,绑架她的女朋友,并向他勒索巨额财务,期待着得手之后把他的女朋友杀掉,拿着钱去国外与老婆汇合。 In Male lead with Female lead cold war, all thoughts is putting in the work, late at night also in organization grand summit, but just Female lead that gets off work from TV Station made the phone calls to interrogate why he does not call himself on own initiative, Male lead somewhat claimed unfeelingly oneself are working busily, does not have the time, but also advised politely her maturely, do not create a scene, Female lead were driven beyond the limits of forbearance finally, accused Male lead at the telephone rave, threw down a bidding good-bye aggressive statement, later drove home, on the roads that in driving home one side drives, one side to shed tears, highlighted Female lead actually still to have very deep sentiments by this to Male lead. 正在与女主冷战中的男主,所有心思都扑在工作上,深夜还在组织重大会议,而刚从电视台下班的女主打来电话质问他为什么不主动给自己打电话,男主有些冷酷无情的声称自己在忙工作,没有时间,还奉劝她成熟一点、不要无理取闹,女主终于忍无可忍,在电话里狂吼指责男主,丢下一句分手的狠话,随后开车回家,并且在开车回家的路上一边开车、一边垂泪,以此来凸显女主男主其实仍旧有很深的感情。 Male lead has not been serious the bidding good-bye opinion of Female lead, continuation of not care late at night works overtime to meet with own staff completely, making the audience produce Male lead no longer to love the Female lead misconception, at this time, the plot changed suddenly, Female lead by kidnapper two car(riage) design kidnapping! 男主没把女主的分手言论当回事,完全不care的继续与自己的员工深夜加班开会,让观众产生男主已经不再爱女主的错觉,这时,剧情突变,女主被绑匪两辆车设计绑架! When the Male lead conference conducts the critical moment, actually receives the call that the Female lead cell phone makes suddenly, Male lead remembers her some is not then impatient, resist to answer the telephone several times, almost lets the kidnapper of telephone that head and kidnapped Female lead falls into desperately. 男主的会议进行到关键时刻的时候,却忽然接到女主手机打来的电话,男主想起她便有些不耐烦,几次拒接电话,几乎让电话那头的绑匪和被绑架的女主陷入绝望。 Critical moment, Male lead firm had some became less crowded, perhaps was because took great pains, perhaps was because the heart deep place still had the sentiment to Female lead, he suspended the conference and connection telephone, coldly inquiry Female lead actually wants to make anything. 关键时刻,男主的坚决还是有了些许松动,或许是因为不厌其烦,或许是因为内心深处对女主仍有感情,他暂停了会议、接通电话,冷冷的询问女主到底想做什么。 At this time, the voice of kidnapper conveyed, Male lead knew, Female lead had been kidnapped. 这时候,绑匪的声音传来,男主才得知,女主已经被绑架。 Afterward, actually Male lead of heart deep place very anxious Female lead safety, started with displaying their wisdom and bravery of kidnapper, striving for Female lead and oneself exchanges the opportunity, thus used among two people had had the dialogue, disclosed the status of bandit chieftain ingeniously to Male lead. 随后,其实内心深处非常紧张女主安危的男主,开始了与绑匪的斗智斗勇,争取到了女主跟自己交流的机会,从而利用两人之间曾经有过的对话,巧妙地将匪首的身份透露给了男主 Male lead at the most tense time, must take out one to buy the good proposing ring from the drawer of office, aiming at letting the audience knows, although two people quarrelled frequently, each other lack understood, but the Male lead heart deep place deeply loved Female lead as before, and there is to plan to her proposes. 这其中,男主每到最紧张的时刻,都要从办公室的抽屉里取出一枚早已经买好的求婚戒指,意在让观众知道,虽然两人频繁争吵、彼此缺乏理解,但男主内心深处依旧深爱女主,并且有计划向她求婚。 Again later, how Male lead solves a case with the police together, the advancements of various clues alternately present with the technique of film and television, many clues release to be defeated one by one one by one, making the atmosphere of movie achieve an especially intense critical point. 再随后,男主如何与警察一同破案,各种线索的推进用影视的手法交叉呈现,多条线索逐一释放出去又逐一失败,让电影的气氛达到一个格外紧张的临界点。 At this time, Male lead used the Li Mu initial method, little screening, such as looked for a needle in a haystack general MU Online / miracle telephone number locking of bandit chieftain, the plot progressed layer upon layer, exciting, attracted the audience to focus and waits for the Male lead success lock the criminal telephone number unceasingly unceasingly that moment. 这时候,男主利用李牧当初的手段,一点点筛选,如大海捞针一般奇迹般的将匪首的电话号码锁定,剧情层层递进、扣人心弦,同时也吸引着观众不断聚焦、不断等待着男主成功锁定罪犯电话号码的那一刻。 The plot achieves one in a big way high toward later, the plot was in the rescue phase, through the effort of police, successfully rescued Female lead. 剧情达到一个最大高朝之后,剧情进入到了营救阶段,通过警察的努力,成功将女主救出。 After Female lead was rescued, she of being survivor of disaster discovered that Male lead also arrived at the scene, rushes to him and to support to sob with him recklessly. 女主被救出之后,劫后余生的她发现男主也来到了现场,不顾一切的奔向他、与他相拥而泣。 Afterward Male lead pulls out the ring, knees down, silent looks at Female lead, Female lead crying tears of joy, is bursting into tears to extend own right hand...... 随后男主掏出戒指,单膝跪地,一言不发的看着女主,女主喜极而泣,流着泪伸出自己的右手…… At this time, did not wait for the lens to present Male lead to put on the diamond ring for her, the act drop one black, the movie ended. 这时候,不等镜头呈现出男主为她戴上钻戒,大幕一黑,电影结束。 Entire is survivor of disaster, supports the process that sobs and proposes, as well as complies with propose, no dialog. 整个劫后余生、相拥而泣、求婚、以及答应求婚的过程,没有一句对白。 This reorganization dog blood was the dog blood a point, but Li Mu felt, wants to cater to the populace, to create the high box office also influence, the dog blood was almost essential. 这种改编狗血是狗血了一点,但李牧觉得,想迎合大众、想创造高票房也影响力,狗血几乎是必不可少的。 Li Mu that the train of thought such as the urine collapses, after clearing off train of thought that with own laptop, from around 1 : 00 pm, writes 7 : 00 am, sleeps to wake up to have a food then to write , the one breath wrote the next day 2 : 00 pm. 文思如尿崩的李牧,在理清思绪之后,用自己的笔记本电脑,从晚上 1 点多,一口气写到早晨 7 点,睡一觉醒来吃点饭接着写,又一口气写到了第二天的夜里 2 点。 More than ten hours of writing times, Li Mu then finished the script of this movie, after writing down the entire end three characters, Li Mu comes back to ponder that the name of this movie, how long to be useless, the last basin dog blood makes a final decision, Li Mu wrote down four large characters in the title- «Extreme Fast Chasing Murder» 十多个小时的写作时间,李牧便将这部电影的剧本写完了,写下全剧终三个字之后,李牧才回过头来思考这部电影的名字,没用多长时间,最后一盆狗血敲定,李牧在标题上写下了四个大字-《极速追凶 ...... …… PS: Three first make up one chapter, over the two days continued to try hard to repay a debt! PS:三更先补一章,这两天继续努力还账!
To display comments and comment, click at the button