MGHAS :: Volume #3

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High-speed writing first round 高速文字首发 The cell phone read synchronously 手机同步阅读 Everybody this name is not casual can use. ‘大家’这个称呼可不随便就能用的。 That is the name that the big writer and Great Writer can use! 那是大作家、大文豪才能用的称呼! Ai Xian will not think that that side of telephone, that said Ye Zi Editor will make a mistake this name! 艾娴可不会觉得电话的那边,那位自称叶子编辑会弄错这种称呼! Teacher, what article has written?” “老师,到底写了什么文?” split second, she raises up the ear. 一瞬间,她竖起耳朵。 Teacher, how do you want to write this Longevity Sword?” Ye Zi asked in telephone. “老师,您是怎么想写这把长生剑的?”叶子在电话里问道。 Nothing.” Su Hao touches the nose, he can tell her, he is prepares lane in the future to practice oneself director ability the flat and thin piece, writes this short film? “没什么。”苏皓摸摸鼻子,难道说他能告诉她,他是准备弄一部自己日后可以练习自己导演能力的片子,才写这种短片的吗? But also wants resentment one to be called Luo Xin author. 哦,还要怼一个叫做‘落心’的作者。 Article today becomes, the skilled artist occasionally it, wants to write also writes.” “文章本天成,妙手偶得之,想写也就写了。” Article today becomes, skilled artist occasionally it...... Worthily is the teacher, said real good!” Ye Zi excited [say / way]: These words absolutely are everybody word!” “文章本天成,妙手偶得之......不愧是老师,说的真好!”叶子兴奋的道:“这句话绝对是大家之言!” Words, is having a thick literary aura immediately. 话语一出,顿时带着一种浓浓的文艺气息。 Somewhat was drunk including Ai Xian. 艾娴都有些醉了。 cough cough, right Teacher Filthy Speech Using Hate, although Feng Yun Editor thought that you may win a prize very much, but I must say one responsiblily, your novel was too short.” 咳咳,对了污言以怼老师,虽然风云主编觉得您很有可能得奖,但是我得负责任的说一句,您的小说太短了些。” Ye Zi organization language, tactful [say / way]: Now the popular Wuxia novel probably in 100,000 characters above, your article, compares others novels, some inferiority.” 叶子组织语言,委婉的道:“现在流行的武侠小说大约都在100000字以上,您的文,相比人家的长篇小说,有些劣势。” Final award item some not steady......” “最终的奖项有些不稳......” This was not Feng Yun said that Feng Yun thought wholeheartedly should place first Longevity Sword, was some Ye Zi actually faint worries. 这不是风云说的,风云一心觉得应该把长生剑放在第一位,可是叶子却隐隐有些担心。 She does not take on the Longevity Sword quality, the work of this Great Master, ten years rare meets. 她不担长生剑的质量,这种大师之作,是十年难得一遇的。 However she is actually worried about the Longevity Sword number of words! 但是她却担心长生剑的字数! Because this time article, is not decides the award item by the Editor society, but is decided the award item by the readers! 因为这一次的征文,并不是由编辑社决定奖项,而是由读者们决定奖项! The Longevity Sword short 30,000 characters, are divided into 6000 character one chapters , about five, can only send five issues of periodicals. 长生剑短短30000字不到,分成6000字一章,也不过五张左右,只能发五期期刊。 But others are actually the novel, sends dozens issues not to have the issue casually. 可是人家却是长篇小说,随随便便发几十期都没有问题。 The voting of reader will accumulate, even if front Longevity Sword saves the bank note, very difficult to continue to attract the work that with these reader votes to compare. 读者的投票是会积累起来的,就算前面长生剑把票子都积攒起来,也很难跟那些持续能吸引读者投票的作品相比。 However Su Hao hear word, actually stares. 然而苏皓闻言,却是一愣。 „Is my article short? No, my this book also hundreds of thousands characters have not issued you.” “我的文短?没有啊,我这部书还有十几万字没发给你呢。” Behind also?” Ye Zi stares, actually clutches at heart. 还有后面?”叶子一愣,心里却是一揪。 The Longevity Sword ending is perfect, talks into increases for one point too to be fat, short one point is too thin does not have the least bit issue. 长生剑的结尾非常完美,说成增一分则太肥,短一分则太瘦也毫无半点问题。 If in addition following...... She a little worried that the following article can maintain the Longevity Sword elegant demeanor. 如果加上后续的话......她有点担心后续的文会不会保持长生剑的风采。 Cannot the sequel inferior to the previous work......” “不会狗尾续貂吧......” Has this worry, Ye Zi to ask: Teacher Filthy Speech Using Hate, your new article......” 带着这份担心,叶子问道:“污言以怼老师,那您新的文......” Had finished, waits to issue to you.” “写完了,等下发给你。” Good.” “好的。” The telephone hangs, Su Hao thinks that said to Ai Xian: You looked first, looked I pass on to her again.” 电话挂点,苏皓想了想,对艾娴道:“你先看吧,看完我再给她传。” no, no, no, the teacher you pass on the article first, when I look am same!” Ai Xian sets out hastily, respectful sound track. 不不不,老师您先传文吧,我什么时候看都一样!”艾娴连忙起身,恭声道。 That this, I pass on first, then you look again are.” “那这样,我先传,然后你再看就是。” Good!” “好的!” Su Hao sat, after the novel pack issues «Martial Artist World» , the position has given Ai Xian. 苏皓坐了下来,将小说打包发给《武者世界》后,又把位置让给了艾娴 Ai Xian deeply inspired, sat. 艾娴深吸一口气,坐了下来。 However before and different, she nearly harbors a psychological looks at present draft of pilgrimage now. 不过和之前不同,她现在近乎怀着一种朝圣的心理看着眼前的稿子。 She opened «Seven Weapons: Longevity Sword». 她打开了《七种武器之长生剑》。 Em? This is “恩?这是” split second, her mydriasis, the whole person almost collects in front of the computer screen. 一瞬间,她瞳孔放大,整个人几乎凑在电脑屏幕前面。 Actually Gu Long's writing style although is good, but compares another big shot audience, has been short of that a little bit. 其实古龙的文笔虽然好,但是相比另外一个大佬的受众,还是少了那么一点点的。 However he writes is very evil, is very evil. 但是他写的很邪,很邪。 Unusual getting interested of character portray, as if pot old wine, the person who does not love the liquor hold one's noses not to collect. 将人物刻画的非常入味,仿佛一壶老酒,不爱酒的人捏着鼻子不想凑过去。 But regarding loving the person of liquor, almost can wallow dead! 可是对于爱酒之人来说,几乎能沉迷到死! In the Gu Long firmest audience group, is general literary! 古龙最坚定的受众群里,就是广大的文青们! Each sees his article literary, seemed poisoned general, immerses is unable to extricate oneself! 每一个看到他的文的文青们,都仿佛中了毒一般,沉醉的无法自拔! Ai Xian without a doubt is literary! 艾娴毫无疑问是一个文青 Therefore, she also without a doubt immersed...... 所以,她也毫无疑问的沉醉了下去...... ...... ...... Ye Zi is waiting for the Su Hao's draft, even more is at heart heavy. 叶子等着苏皓的稿子,心里却愈发沉重。 The draft of author according to the payment for published piece that number of words gives, the payment for published piece that the although traditional literature gives compared with web novel first year some, but compares with the web novel casual several million numbers of words, the traditional literature suffers a loss in this aspect very much. 作者的稿子都是按照字数给的稿费,虽然传统文学给的稿费比网络文学高一些,但是和网络文学随随便便几百万的字数比起来,传统文学在这方面很吃亏。 Therefore some authors are thinking the hydrology, develops toward web novel on the traditional literature stiffly, looking awful that finally throws. 所以就有一些作者想着水文,把传统文学硬生生往网络文学上面发展,结果扑的不成样子。 Should this do not try......” “该不会这位也要试着......” Ye Zi sinks at heart, collapse that by behind stiffly she does not want that good article, to add something superfluous and ruin the effect the words that makes. 叶子心里一沉,她可不想那么好的文,被后面画蛇添足的笔墨弄的硬生生崩溃。 Thinking, her is entering the Feng Yun office, has drawn Feng Yun. 想着,她走进风云的办公室,把风云拉了出来。 Editor, you have a look, or we urged Teacher Filthy Speech Using Hate, erased behind, number of words few points little, closed right up against such writing style, he same can succeed!” Ye Zi obtains enlightenment. 主编,您看看,要不咱们劝劝污言以怼老师,把后面删掉吧,字数少点就少点,靠着这样的文笔,他一样能成功!”叶子不由得道。 At first said what the number of words are too few is she, is thinking said do not add too many numbers of words is also she. 最初说字数太少的是她,想着说别加太多字数的也是她。 Only can say person Oh... 只能说人啊...... Oh? Teacher Filthy Speech Using Hate sent the new article, first made me have a look.” Feng Yun actually smiles, arrives by the Ye Zi computer. 哦?污言以怼老师又发新的文了啊,先让我看看。”风云却是一笑,走到叶子的电脑旁。 Em, now Su Hao has sent in the new draft, they opened immediately, crowd together to look. 恩,现在苏皓已经发来了新的稿子,两人当即打开,凑在一起看了起来。 What is very skillful, Ai Xian also just looked at Longevity Sword, the feeling that type made the person mind in trembling was she has never experienced. 很巧的是,艾娴也刚刚看完长生剑,那种令人心灵都在发颤的感觉是她从未体验过的。 Suddenly, she has thought that but does not know that should say anything. 一时间,她想了很多,可是偏偏又不知道该说些什么。 But when remembering following also documents, she then unbearably anxious opening. 可是当想起后面还有一个文档的时候,她便急不可耐的打开了。 Above writes a title. 上面写着一个标题。 «Seven Weapons: Peacock Plume»! 七种武器之孔雀翎》! Well, isn't Longevity Sword following? 咦,不是长生剑的后续? Wait / Etc., is this series?!” “等等,难道说这是一个系列?!” Ai Xian and Ye Zi they are away from innumerably do not know that the far space, has voiced the similar feeling. 艾娴叶子两人隔着无数不知多远的空间,发出了同样的感慨。 That is natural, front said Seven Weapons, why you can think that Longevity Sword did represent all?” Feng Yun laughs. “那是当然,前面都说了七种武器,为什么你能认为一把长生剑就代表所有了呢?”风云哈哈一笑。 He has discovered this point, asserted that the champion gold medal had the winner. 他就是发现了这一点,才断言冠军金牌已经有了得主。UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com „Before you read, doesn't look at title? The title is Seven Weapons, naturally is...... cough cough, my anything had not said.” Su Hao also said with a smile. “你看书之前不看标题吗?标题是七种武器,当然是......咳咳,我什么都没说。”苏皓也是同时笑道。 although each one was teased by nearby person, but they felt at ease. 虽然各自都被旁边的人调笑,不过她们都安心了。 It is not the sequel inferior to the previous work is good, is not the sequel inferior to the previous work good...... 不是狗尾续貂就好,不是狗尾续貂就好...... The Longevity Sword that classical work, this termination terminates, how can the water be stiffly many one pile? 长生剑那么经典的作品,该完结就是完结,怎么可以硬生生水多出一堆来呢? What did that become? 那成什么了? Em, Longevity Sword was very good, following second, even if the standard is inferior to its also doesn't matter. 恩,长生剑已经很不错了,接下来的第二部,哪怕水准不如它也没关系 Director lives the sword in any case, calls the classics sufficiently! 反正一部长生剑,足以称之为经典! Ai Xian and Ye Zi they, so is thinking, while actually started to scrutinize second Peacock Plume Seven Weapons. 艾娴叶子两人,一边如此想着,一边却已经开始审阅七种武器之二孔雀翎 World hidden weapon altogether has more than 360 types, but most successful and most fearful is Peacock Plume!” “天下的暗器共有360余种,但其中最成功、最可怕的就是‘孔雀翎’!”
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