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手机同步阅读Worldhidden weaponaltogether has more than 360types, butmost successfulandmost fearfulis‚Peacock Plume’.
天下的暗器共有360余种,但其中最成功、最可怕的就是‘孔雀翎’。At first glance, ‚Peacock Plume’iscasts, the sparklingcylinderby the pure gold, abovehastwokey positions, hidden weapon in tubethenfliesto shoot.
从外表看来,‘孔雀翎’是个由纯金铸成、闪闪发光的圆筒,上面有两道枢纽,筒里的暗器便飞射而出。It is said when thesehidden weaponrounds, is beautifulspreads the taillike the peacock, resplendence, however, when youbythisastonishingsupernatural movement the eyestares blanklyconfuses, itwantedyourlife.
据说这些暗器发出来时,美丽得就像孔雀开屏一样,辉煌灿烂,然而,就在你被这种惊人的神灵感动得目瞪神迷时,它已经要了你的性命。‚Peacock Plume’is exhausted the painstaking careto buildsuccessfullyby the Peacock Manor'smaster. At that time, 36invincibleinworldunderworld gangExperttodestroyPeacock Manor, tied the hemorrhagingpledgeunexpectedly, the joint attack, were killed finallyin‚Peacock Plume’under.
‘孔雀翎’是由孔雀山庄的主人耗尽心血打造成功的。当时,36名无敌于天下的黑道高手为了毁灭孔雀山庄,竟结下血盟,联手进攻,结果全部丧生在‘孔雀翎’下。Henceforth, ‚Peacock Plume’famous. In the following 300 years, about300peopledieofPeacock Plume, theyare notfirst-classsovereign, isonegeneration of extremelyExpert, because ofintruding onPeacock Manoris killed violently.
从此,‘孔雀翎’名扬天下。在此后的300年间,也有近300人死于孔雀翎,他们不是一流宗主,就是一代绝顶高手,都因进犯孔雀山庄而毙命。Just likein『Seven Weapons』 every hasitssymbolto be the same, what‚Peacock Plume’symbolizesin the articleisself-confident!
正如「七种武器」中每一把都有其象征一样,‘孔雀翎’在文中象征的是自信!Ma Fenglooks forGao Lito revenge, butGao Li the farm cropslife, whenfacinghimthisdid not have the confidence, thereforelooked forgood friendQiu Feng Wuto borrowfirst under heavenhidden weaponpast‚Peacock Plume’, in‚Peacock Plume’under the inspirationhas killedhimfinally.麻锋找高立报仇,但高立过惯了农作生活,在面对他时本没有信心,于是找昔日好友秋凤梧借来了天下第一暗器‘孔雀翎’,在‘孔雀翎’的鼓舞下最终杀了他。ButGao Lilost‚Peacock Plume’unfortunately, goes toPeacock Manorto apologize, forQiu Feng Wudoes not make the good friendsuffer, told a Gao Lisecret, namely‚Peacock Plume’alreadylost, Peacock Manoralreadylost the life.
但高立不幸遗失了‘孔雀翎’,去孔雀山庄谢罪,秋凤梧为了不让好友痛苦,告诉了高立一个秘密,即‘孔雀翎’早已遗失,孔雀山庄早已失去了命脉。Little Wu in novelisQiu Feng Wu, itstono longerrely on‚Peacock Plume’has joined the black dragonmeeting, butafterwardhad been separated fromthisorganization, infinally, ussawactually, Qiu Feng Wuhas grasped‚Peacock Plume’true meaningconfidence.
小说中的小武就是秋凤梧,其为了不再依赖‘孔雀翎’而加入了青龙会,但后来又脱离了这个组织,在最后,我们其实看到,秋凤梧已经把握了‘孔雀翎’的真谛信心。Otherswritehidden weapon, isemphasizesitssinisterly and ruthlessly, butGu Longwrites, isWuxia Worldstrongesthidden weapon, writes is actually the will of the people!
别人写暗器,都是强调其阴险毒辣,但是古龙写的,也是武侠世界最强的暗器,写的却是人心!
The Ye Zione breathreads the draftthatimmediatelyraisesfeeling of the satisfaction.叶子一口气将稿子看完,顿时升起一种满足之感。This«PeacockFlying in circles», is not inferior toinitial«Longevity Sword»completely!
这篇《孔雀翔》,完全不亚于最初的《长生剑》!writing styleis magnificent, to‚peacockflies in circles’ the descriptionisextremelybeautiful, is extremely dangerous.文笔华丽,对‘孔雀翔’的描写可谓是极美,也极其险恶。In the worlddoes not haveanyhidden weaponto be able‚Peacock Plume’ more fearful than certainly, does not haveanyhidden weaponto be able‚Peacock Plume’ more beautiful than certainly.
世上绝没有任何一种暗器能比‘孔雀翎’更可怕,也绝没有任何一种暗器能比‘孔雀翎’更美丽。Nobodycandescribeitsbeauty, nobodycanavoidit, resistsit......
没有人能形容它的美丽,也没有人能避开它,招架它......Howeversopowerfulhidden weapon, ‚Peacock Plume’itselfexistsor is not unimportant, more importantly‚Peacock Plume’ the symbolto the earth-shakingchange that the peoplebring.
然而如此强悍的暗器,‘孔雀翎’本身存在与否并不重要,重要的是‘孔雀翎’的象征给人们带来的翻天覆地的改变。Ischange that the confidencebrings about!
是信心带来的变化!Ye Zithistime, is differentfromreadsLongevity Swordto be like that fastat first, insteadis very slow, is very slow.叶子这一次,不同于最初读长生剑那般快速,反而很慢,很慢。As ifsavorsteato result, makes the persontastemelodiously......
就仿佛品味一品茗茶似得,悠扬而让人回味......Just likepreambleLongevity Sword is the same, finallysimilarlykeptone.
正如前文的长生剑一样,最后同样留了一笔。
„ Thisstoryhas also givenus a lesson. The truevictory, is notyoucanstrivewith the weapon, thatmustuseyourconfidence. Regardless offearfulweapon, cannot compare the confidence of humanity.
“这故事也给了我们一个教训。真正的胜利,并不是你能用武器争取的,那一定要用你的信心。无论多可怕的武器,也比不上人类的信心。second weapon that thereforeI said that is notPeacock Plume, butis the confidence! ”
所以我说的第二种武器,并不是孔雀翎,而是信心!”„Classics......”
“经典......”Suddenly, Ye Zicannot discoversecondto describe the words of thispiece of articleunexpectedly.
一时间,叶子居然找不出第二句形容这片文章的话语。„Indeedclassical!”NearbyFeng Yunalsosighed.
“的确经典啊!”旁边的风云也是叹道。Hehas seen through the Seven Weaponsname, buthas not actually imagined that the followingwriting, is not inferior toinitial«Longevity Sword»unexpectedly.
他看穿了七武器的名字,但是却没有想象到后面的文字,居然不亚于最初的《长生剑》。Evento a certain extent, still haveit!
甚至从某种程度上来说,犹有过之!AsEditortwothinksimmediatelythatperhapsin the futurein the Wuxiahidden weaponranking, will havenamePeacock Plume that foreverhas!
身为编辑的两人立即想到,恐怕日后武侠暗器排行榜上,会有一个永远存在的名字孔雀翎!Theylook at each otherone, unexpectedlyfor a whilesilent.
两人对视一眼,居然一时无声。„«Longevity Sword»todaystartsto serialize, 10,000characterissue of words, canserializethreeissues, thenagainPeacock Plume, then......”Feng Yunlooks atthattitle, particularlyin‚Seven Weapons’in the phrasestopped.
“《长生剑》即日开始连载吧,10000字一期的话,能连载三期,接着再孔雀翎,然后......”风云看着那标题,尤其是在‘七武器’的字眼上停了一下。„Ifcanhavethesetwoelegant demeanors......”hislooks atauthorpen name, a numerouspoint.
“如果都能有这两篇的风采的话......”他看着作者笔名,重重的一点。„Thisnamewill be known to everybody!”
“这个名字将无人不知!”
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......InSu Hao'sfamily|home.苏皓的家里。Shivering that Ai Xianplaces the palm on mousekeyboard.艾娴放在鼠标键盘上的手掌都在不住的颤抖。„Thisarticle...... Thisarticle...... Thisis the genuinenovel!”
“这文......这文......这才是真正的小说!”split second, herin the eyesblooms the incomparablyeye-catchingray.一瞬间,她的眼中绽放出无比夺目的光芒。Thisisherlong-awaitedwriting! Isherlong-awaitedarticle!
这才是她梦寐以求的文字!是她梦寐以求的文章!Readingsplit second, sheas ifimmersesin the sea breeze, the whole bodyisneat.
阅读的一瞬间,她就仿佛沉浸在海风之中,浑身都是清爽。„Is sucharticle, teacherwrites?”Ai Xianhas discoveredthisfact.
“这样的文,是老师写的?”艾娴紧接着就发现了这个事实。In front ofBattle Through the Heavenis moisteningliterary artsside, butbehind is actually the standardcommercialarticlestyle.斗破前面沾着点文艺的边,但是后面却是标准的商业文风格。Byrebirth of an expert that oneselfwriteevencompared withBattle Through the Heavenalso, from beginning to endis the attitude of commercialarticle, the Su Haoexplanationtimeat heartarrives atreader the dissection, typicalwritesfor the readercrisply.
让自己写的强者重生流甚至比斗破还很,从头到尾都是商业文的作风,苏皓讲解的时候都是把读者的心里解剖到位,典型的为了读者爽而写。Butthisarticle......
可是这文......For example«Peacock Plume», the intermediateprotagonistfrienddied, laterprotagonistdied.
比如《孔雀翎》,中期主角的朋友死了,后期主角死了。No, eveninPeacock Plume, whowasprotagonisthas not said!
不,甚至孔雀翎中,谁是主角还说不上呢!Qiu Feng Wu, Gao LiandShuang Shuang......秋凤梧、高立、双双......Regardless ofwhichcharacter, itsimageplentifulincomparable.
无论哪一个人物,其形象都丰满无比。Placesinotherarticle, thisis the protagonisttreatment!
放在别的文里,这都是主角待遇!Thesealmostcan be said as the poisonouspointmattersin the commercialarticle, piles upintogether, makes the personnot endureto let goread, provides much food for thought.
这些在商业文里几乎可以说是毒点的事情,堆积在一起,却让人不忍释手的读了下去,回味无穷。„, The teacherwantsto tellme, writing the articlecanstartfrom the trade?”In the Ai Xianheartcrackstartling thunderclap, has stoodsuddenly.
“难道说,老师是想告诉我,写文要从商业开始?”艾娴心中炸响一声惊雷,猛然站了起来。crash sound.哗啦一声。keyboard and mousewere broughtbyherunconsciousness, fallson the ground.键盘和鼠标都被她无意识中带了出去,落在地上。ThisplaysSu Hao of cell phoneto be gawkedin the one side, looking of surprisethismattermakesin the past.
本在一旁玩着手机的苏皓被这番事情弄的一愣,诧异的望过去。Ai Xian'sin the eyes that butstands up is actually the train of thoughtagain and again.
可是站起身的艾娴的眼中却是思绪连连。Nobodystudies the Chinese character, will startfrom the extremelydifficultwriting, even if no ancient of Pinyin, createsThree Character Classic, Hundred Family Surnamesand otherinitiationteaching materials.
没有人学汉字,会从极困难的文字开始,哪怕是没有拼音的古人,也创造出三字经、百家姓等启蒙教材。
Is commercialarticlewritessimilar«Longevity Sword»and«Peacock Plume» the firststep of article?
难道说,商业文就是写类似《长生剑》、《孔雀翎》的文的第一步?Ai Xianmorethinksthatexceedthoughtpossibilityis very big.艾娴越想,越觉得可能性很大。„Wait / Etc., thatsaidthat《Battle Through The Heavens》wasn't only the smallsomestrengths of teacher?” The Ai Xianhearttrembles, wantsto saysuddenly.
“等等,那这么说,《斗破》不就只是老师的一小部分实力了?”艾娴心头一颤,猛然想道。Em, systemalsooftensaid that anything‚Su Hao, a God acting as an ordinary man, histalentcanmake the worldshivers’ the words.
恩,系统也经常说什么‘苏皓,一个神一般的男子,他的才华能令世界颤抖’的话语。Ifcontinuallyirritabletosuch《Battle Through The Heavens》is onlySu Hao'spart of strengths, thatsystemwasn't right?
如果连火爆到如此的《斗破》都只是苏皓的一部分实力的话,那系统的话不就是对了?Right! So!
对!正是如此!Otherwisesoformidable does system, whywantmeto acknowledge as teacherSu Hao?
不然如此强大的系统,为什么非要我拜师苏皓?„Teacher!”Ai Xiansuddenlyloudly said.
“老师!”艾娴忽然大声道。„?”Su Haostares.
“啊?”苏皓一愣。„Sorry!”Ai Xiandeeplyinspires, on the faceis bringingfirmly, the looks atSu Hao'slook seems the looks atidolis ordinary.
“对不起!”艾娴深吸一口气,脸上带着坚定,看着苏皓的眼神就仿佛是看着偶像一般。Shewants the beforehandidea, butapologizedtoSu Hao.
她要自己之前的想法而对苏皓道歉。Thereforeheronestep, mustbowdirectlyforward, is......
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The under footslides, the whole persontumblestowardSu Hao.
脚下一滑,整个人都朝着苏皓跌倒下去。„?”Su Haositson the smallstool, wherehasanystrengthto catchher.
“啊?”苏皓坐在小凳子上,哪有什么力气来接住她啊。Immediately, plop sound.
顿时,噗通一声。„Em? Little Hao, are youdoing, doessuchin a big way...... The soundcomes......”
“恩?小皓,你们在干什么啊,怎么搞出这么大......动静来......”Su Qianxinfromliving roomdiscontentedfinding outhead, thenonfaceonestiff.苏倩心从客厅不满的探出脑袋,然后脸上一僵。
The gate that opensfromSu Haogreatlylooksclear.
从苏皓大开的门看得一清二楚。Su Haofalls down, Ai Xianpressesonhisbody, male below and female above, theypastecompletelyin the same place.苏皓倒在地上,艾娴压在他的身上,男下女上,两人完全贴在一起。Butthatpairis not plentiful, has the chest of justto suppress the Su Hao'sheadvery......
而那一双不算丰满,却十分有型的胸刚好将苏皓的脑袋压住......
The silentmoment, Su Qianxinrevealswipes the gentlesmiling face.
沉默片刻,苏倩心露出一抹温柔的笑容。„Little Hao, said that youdo want the burial at seaandburial of dead undergroundto cremate?”
“小皓,说吧,你要海葬、土葬还是火葬?”
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