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手机同步阅读Ai Xianisoneis very earnest, veryupwardgoodstudent.艾娴是一名很认真,很向上的好学生。Sheevenplannedbyancientobserving ceremony, teacherbehind, evenpreparedhas been similar to‚Honored Master Wei Zhao’at heart.
她甚至打算以古代的师礼,跟着老师身后,甚至做好了如同‘魏昭尊师’般的心里准备。No, in factsheis even thinkingcanhave‚Honored Master Wei Zhao’fortuitous encounter.
不,实际上她甚至想着能有‘魏昭尊师’般的奇遇。
The Eastern Han Dynastytime, there is a Wei Zhao'sperson. Hedoes obeisanceGuo Linzongfor the teacher, moreoversends the servantsto serve the teacher.
东汉时代,有一位名叫魏昭的人。他就拜郭林宗为老师,而且派奴婢侍奉老师。HoweverGuo Linzongis weak, oncehewantsWei Zhaoto make the gruelto eattohimpersonally. WhenWei Zhaocarriesis boiling the goodgruelcomes, Guo Linzongthenreprimandshimto boil not well, butWei Zhaoagainboilsonetime.
但是郭林宗体弱多病,有一次他要魏昭亲自煮粥给他吃。当魏昭端着煮好的粥进来的时候,郭林宗便斥责他煮得不好,而魏昭就再煮一次。Thisforthreetimes, to the fourthtime, whenWei Zhaocarries the gruelto comeagainwhenwas still benign, Guo Linzongsaid: „Ionlysawyoursemblancebefore, todayfinallyseesyoursincerity!”
这样一连三次,到了第四次,当魏昭再端粥来而仍然和颜悦色时,郭林宗才笑着说:“我以前只看到你的外表,今天终于看到你的真心啦!”Therefore the great happiness, studied the lifetimehas taughtWei Zhaocompletely, butWei Zhaoalsofinallybecame the great talent.
于是大喜,将毕生所学全部教给了魏昭,而魏昭也终成大器。Em, ifthere is a similarsituationoccurrence, shealsoabsolutelycanmakeenormouspatience and efforts, resolutelycompletesMission that the teacherissues!
恩,如果有类似的情况发生,她也绝对能付出极大的耐心和努力,坚决完成老师发布的任务!systemis also encouraginghim.系统也在鼓励他。【keep it up! Host, system can youreward, the person but who writestrulyisyou, needsyourto enhance, cantruebecome a God!】
【加油!宿主,系统可以给你奖励,但是真正写书的人还是你,需要你本人提高起来,才能真正的成神!】【Su Hao'sbackgrounddeep and unmeasurable, ifexposescompletely, canmake the entire worldvacillateabsolutely!】
【苏皓的底蕴深不可测,如果全部暴露出来,绝对可以令整个世界动摇!】【a day as a teacher, father for lifetime, youmustlisten tohiswords!】
【一日为师,终身为夫,你要听他的话!】„Em!”Ai Xiansecretly said in the heart.
“恩!”艾娴心里暗道。Em, when father and teacheris the unison, the prompt of systemby the form of voicepenetratesin the Ai Xianmind, shehad not discovered that anythingis strange.
恩,父和夫是同音,系统的提示以语音的形式贯入艾娴脑海里时,她也没发现什么奇怪的。SeesSu Haostarting, Ai Xianlefthas a look, righthas a look, thinksthatfinallystillbows.
见到苏皓开机,艾娴左看看,右看看,想了想,最终依然鞠躬下去。„Teacher! Pleaseteachmeto write the novel the secret!”
“老师!请您传授我写小说的秘诀!”Su Haowas fooledbythatstancestares, thensaid with a smile: „Youtoohave exaggerated......”苏皓被那架势唬的一愣,然后笑道:“你太夸张了......”„No! Asked the teacherto teachmeto write the novel the secret!”Ai Xiandeepgets downlowly, has not lifted.
“不!请老师教授我写小说的秘诀!”艾娴头深深低下去,并未抬起。In order towritenovel, shespellsreallyvery much.
为了写小说,她真的很拼。„É...... Yourold bookIfirstdid not say that this, yourold bookis also aboutto terminate, wethink that yournew bookwas good.”Su Haothinksthatsaid with a smile.
“额......你老书我就先不说了,这样,你老书也快完结了,咱们想想你的新书好了。”苏皓想了想,笑道。Ai Xianhas gawkedunder: „Yousaid.”艾娴愣了下:“您说。”„Youwantto writeanytheme, Ithinkyouto writeXuanhua, has written the metropolis, but alsohas writtenstrange...... Whattheme do youlike?”
“你想写什么题材的,我看你写过玄幻,写过都市,还写过灵异......你喜欢什么题材?”„Moreover, whyyouwriteismale-oriented?”On the Su Haolooks atscreen, the Ai Xian'sauthorinformation, sighed.
“而且,为什么你写的都是男频?”苏皓看着屏幕上,艾娴的作者信息,叹了一口气。althoughhas the authoressto writemale-orientedto get up, however the majority ofauthoressesmustwritefemale-oriented!虽然不是没有女作者写男频起来的,但是大部分的女作者还是得写女频啊!„Iwantto writemale-oriented!”Ai Xiansaid without hesitation.
“我想写男频!”艾娴毫不犹豫的道。„Actually, the female studentwritesfemale-oriented to be better a point......”
“其实,女生写女频可能更好一点......”„Iwantto writemale-oriented!”
“我想写男频!”
The Su Haocorners of the mouthpull out, the literaryyoung womanreallylivesinher the person of world.苏皓嘴角一抽,好吗,文艺女青年果然都是活在自己的世界的人。Iwantto writemale-oriented......
我想写男频......Becausethisreasonforcefullystarts, thenbyoneselfliveincomparabledifficult.
因为这个理由就强行上马,然后让自己活的无比艰辛。
The normalfemale studentwithherbest friendin the same place, chatted the cosmeticsevery day, chatted the male student, chatted the result.
正常的女生每日都和自己的闺蜜在一起,聊化妆品,聊男生,聊成绩。But the male studentchats the game, chatted the female student, chatted the basketball......
而男生则是聊游戏,聊女生,聊篮球......Bothalthoughis notdoes not occur together, whathoweveris without a doubt, the way of thinking that theyyear to yearfoster is different.
两者虽然不是毫无交集,但是毋庸置疑的是,他们常年养成的思维习惯是不一样的。Writesmale-oriented, unavoidablywill present the thought that somemaleauthorswill not violateto be wrong.
写男频,难免会出现一些男性作者不会犯的思维错误。Ai Xianalsoknowsthis pointobviously, herhesitant, said: „Ithenwriteanythingnot to decide...... Teacher, whatopinion do youhave?”艾娴显然也知道这一点,她犹豫一下,道:“不过我接下来写什么还没决定......老师,您有什么意见吗?”Saying, hereyesshininglooks atSu Hao.
说着,她双眼发亮的看着苏皓。Su Haohesitant, hissomethemesare many, but can the literaryyoung girlwrite, thatwas an issue.苏皓犹豫一下,他有的题材很多,不过文艺少女能不能写好,那就是一个问题了。Moreover the literaryyouthunavoidablemeetingwantsto write the articlewithownmentality, thisincommercialarticle, butbigdeath anniversary.
而且文艺青年难免会想用自己的思路写文,这在商业文中可是大忌。„Should betteropeningincomparablyconfirm the characterdisposition, canbringanticipatesto feelvery muchstrongly, actuallydoes not calculate the complextheme, otherwiseshepossiblycannot write......”Su Haosecretly said in the heart.
“最好有一个开头就无比确认人物性格,能带来很强期待感,却又不算复杂的题材,不然她可能写不好......”苏皓心里暗道。Thiscreativityis very troublesome, creativity was very precious, but must meethercondition.
这种创意很麻烦,创意本就很珍贵了,还得符合她的条件。Howeverluckily, Su Haohas the accumulation of previous lifeentire world.
不过幸好,苏皓拥有前世整个世界的积累。Thinksthathesaid: „Or, youwriteXuanhuarebirth of an expert!”
想了想,他道:“要不,你写玄幻的强者重生流吧!”„rebirth of an expert?” A Ai Xianattractivebrowwrinkle.
“强者重生流?”艾娴好看的眉头一皱。„Em, the Xuanhua World'stoppowerhouse, the bodydiesfor some reasons, when the rebirthwhenhemakes a debut.”Su Haoexplained: „golden finger of thistype of articlehastwo, because of the rebirth, heknows very well the matter that thencanhave, canearn the advantage.”
“恩,玄幻世界的顶级强者,因为某种原因身死,重生在他初出茅庐之时。”苏皓解释道:“这种文的金手指有两个,一个是因为重生,他熟知接下来会发生的事情,可以赚取好处。”„SecondishisCultivation Technique, the experience, comes up to becomegreatly strengthened.”
“第二个则是他本身的功法,经验,一上来就可以变得极强。”„When the individualalsothirdadvantage, for examplerebirthbringsto create the rebirthreason the treasure, Cultivation Techniquewait / etc.......”
“个别还有第三个好处,比如重生时带着造成重生原因的宝物、功法等等......”Thisis the standardneophyte storiesXuanhuarepertoire, comes upby‚Long Aotian’ the dispositionkillsallenemies, the dispositioncanbe arrogant, the tone can compel the standard, is an unfailingXuanhuatype.
这是标准的小白文玄幻的套路,一上来就是以‘龙傲天’的性格干掉一切敌人,性格可以高傲,口气可以极具逼格,属于经久不衰的一个玄幻类型。Su HaodetailedexplainedtoAi Xiankey point of rebirth of an expert, particularlyby the humiliation that the childhoodreceives, after the rebirth, protagonist the crisppoint that slap in the faceto createexplained.苏皓详细的给艾娴解释了一下强者重生流的重点,尤其是以幼年受到的欺凌,和重生后,主角的打脸造成的爽点进行讲解。HoweverAi Xianactuallymorelistens, browwrinklesis tighter.
不过艾娴却越听,眉头皱的越紧。Shecannot bear the tastes: „Teacher, sucharticle, is extremely as if straightforward, extremelyrepertoire......”
她忍不住出口道:“老师,这样的文,似乎太过直白,太过套路了吧......”„Thisis the commercialarticle, the commercialarticlegoalisto let the readerlikes, no matter the repertoireis also good, straightforward, the readerlikes, is the goodarticle!”Su Haoindifferently said.
“这就是商业文,商业文的目的是让读者喜欢,不管套路也好,直白也罢,读者喜欢,就是好文!”苏皓淡淡的道。„Is......”
“是......”Ai Xianpurses the lips to say.艾娴撅着嘴应道。ShealsoknowsBattle Through the Heaven that Su Haowritesisstandardneophyte stories, the mentalityis simple, crisppoint.
她也知道苏皓写的斗破是一本标准的小白文,思路简单,爽点到底。ButAi Xianwill not think that Su Haodoes not have the literary talent!
可是艾娴可不会觉得苏皓没有文采!‚Common peopleslanderedme, to bullyme, shameI, to laugh atme, lightI, inexpensiveI, wickedI, to deceiveme, howshouldtohim’ the famous saying, was‚the call of 30years of west river30years of east of the river’, had the aura that otherpeoplewere not having.
无论是‘世人谤我、欺我、辱我、笑我、轻我、贱我、恶我、骗我,该如何对他’的名言,还是‘30年河西30年河东的呐喊’,都带着一种其他人不存在的气息。Howevernowteachertaught the article that shewrites, felt...... Suchrepertoire?
然而现在老师教导她写的文,怎么感觉......如此的套路?Ai Xianisliterarygirl, shea littleshut outthistype of article.艾娴是个文青妹纸,她有点嫌弃这种文了。„no, no, no, the teachershouldbe has connotationGreat Master, hemakesmewritethistype of article, may have anyprofound meaning......”Ai Xiansecretly said in the heart, thenengages in introspectionto say.
“不不不,老师应该是一名颇有内涵的大师,他让我写这种文,可能会有什么深意......”艾娴心里暗道,然后扪心自问道。„Can thatwritethistype of article?”
“那要不要写这种文呢?”althoughshealsoknows that the commercialarticlesameis very difficultto write, however the literarythought of innermost feelingsmakeshersomewhatbe hardto accept.虽然她也知道商业文一样很难写,但是内心的文青思维还是让她有些难以接受。exceedthinksthatshemoreintertwines.
越想,她心里越是纠结。To be honest, the Su Hao'sagecompared withonAi Xianalsosmall2-3 years old, does obeisancelike this artificialmaster, ifat heart an ideadoes not have, thatdeceived oneself and others.
说实话,苏皓的年纪比艾娴还小上两三岁,拜这样的人为师,心里要是一点想法都没有,那就是自欺欺人了。HoweverAi Xianthought that reachesis the master, therefore before , had not thoughtanything, is the present......
不过艾娴却觉得达者为师,所以之前一直没有觉得什么,可是现在......„Should, the teachernot writeisheto that Ispoke, aimed atslapping the face, repertoirecommercialarticle?”
“该不会,老师写的都是他跟我讲的那种,以打脸、套路为目的的商业文吧?”
The althoughcommercialarticlemakes moneyvery much, butdoes not have the feeling of thatGreat Master!虽然商业文很赚钱,但是没有那种大师的感觉啊!literarywantsisthatfeeling......
偏偏文青要的就是那种感觉......dīng dōng!叮咚!SuddenlySu Hao'scell phonesound.
忽然苏皓的手机响了。UU看书www.uukanshu.com
www.uukanshu.com„Hello?”Su Haomeetsto ask.
“喂?”苏皓接起来问道。„Hello, are youTeacher Filthy Speech Using Hate? Iam the «Martial Artist World»responsibilityarrange, Ye Zi!” The sound in telephone is very excited.
“您好,请问您是污言以怼老师吗?我是《武者世界》的责编,叶子!”电话里的声音很是激动。„YourWuxianovel, «Seven Weapons: Longevity Sword»had put in the Wuxiaarticletypebyourmagazine company, Editor Feng Yunfavorsyourworkvery much, whatold book do youhave?”
“您的武侠小说,《七种武器之长生剑》已经被我们杂志社放入武侠征文类型,主编风云很看好您的作品,请问您有什么老书吗?”„É...... Has.”
“额......有。”„Really! Iknow that you is a literaryeverybody, opens the new bookwithnewsockpuppet!”
“果然!我就知道您是一名文学大家,用新的马甲开新书的!”
The sound in telephoneis excited, Ai Xian that listens tostares.
电话里的声音激动无比,听的艾娴一愣。Literature...... Everybody?
文学......大家?
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