MGHAS :: Volume #3

#214: Literary everybody?


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High-speed writing first round 高速文字首发 The cell phone read synchronously 手机同步阅读 Ai Xian is one is very earnest, very upward good student. 艾娴是一名很认真,很向上的好学生。 She even planned by ancient observing ceremony, teacher behind, even prepared has been similar to Honored Master Wei Zhao at heart. 她甚至打算以古代的师礼,跟着老师身后,甚至做好了如同‘魏昭尊师’般的心里准备。 No, in fact she is even thinking can have Honored Master Wei Zhao fortuitous encounter. 不,实际上她甚至想着能有‘魏昭尊师’般的奇遇。 The Eastern Han Dynasty time, there is a Wei Zhao's person. He does obeisance Guo Linzong for the teacher, moreover sends the servants to serve the teacher. 东汉时代,有一位名叫魏昭的人。他就拜郭林宗为老师,而且派奴婢侍奉老师。 However Guo Linzong is weak, once he wants Wei Zhao to make the gruel to eat to him personally. When Wei Zhao carries is boiling the good gruel comes, Guo Linzong then reprimands him to boil not well, but Wei Zhao again boils one time. 但是郭林宗体弱多病,有一次他要魏昭亲自煮粥给他吃。当魏昭端着煮好的粥进来的时候,郭林宗便斥责他煮得不好,而魏昭就再煮一次。 This for three times, to the fourth time, when Wei Zhao carries the gruel to come again when was still benign, Guo Linzong said: I only saw your semblance before, today finally sees your sincerity!” 这样一连三次,到了第四次,当魏昭再端粥来而仍然和颜悦色时,郭林宗才笑着说:“我以前只看到你的外表,今天终于看到你的真心啦!” Therefore the great happiness, studied the lifetime has taught Wei Zhao completely, but Wei Zhao also finally became the great talent. 于是大喜,将毕生所学全部教给了魏昭,而魏昭也终成大器。 Em, if there is a similar situation occurrence, she also absolutely can make enormous patience and efforts, resolutely completes Mission that the teacher issues! 恩,如果有类似的情况发生,她也绝对能付出极大的耐心和努力,坚决完成老师发布的任务 system is also encouraging him. 系统也在鼓励他。 keep it up! Host, system can you reward, the person but who writes truly is you, needs your to enhance, can true become a God!】 加油宿主,系统可以给你奖励,但是真正写书的人还是你,需要你本人提高起来,才能真正的成神!】 Su Hao's background deep and unmeasurable, if exposes completely, can make the entire world vacillate absolutely!】 苏皓的底蕴深不可测,如果全部暴露出来,绝对可以令整个世界动摇!】 a day as a teacher, father for lifetime, you must listen to his words!】 一日为师,终身为夫,你要听他的话!】 Em!” Ai Xian secretly said in the heart. “恩!”艾娴心里暗道 Em, when father and teacher is the unison, the prompt of system by the form of voice penetrates in the Ai Xian mind, she had not discovered that anything is strange. 恩,父和夫是同音,系统的提示以语音的形式贯入艾娴脑海里时,她也没发现什么奇怪的。 Sees Su Hao starting, Ai Xian left has a look, right has a look, thinks that finally still bows. 见到苏皓开机,艾娴左看看,右看看,想了想,最终依然鞠躬下去。 Teacher! Please teach me to write the novel the secret!” “老师!请您传授我写小说的秘诀!” Su Hao was fooled by that stance stares, then said with a smile: You too have exaggerated......” 苏皓被那架势唬的一愣,然后笑道:“你太夸张了......” No! Asked the teacher to teach me to write the novel the secret!” Ai Xian deep gets down lowly, has not lifted. “不!请老师教授我写小说的秘诀!”艾娴头深深低下去,并未抬起。 In order to write novel, she spells really very much. 为了写小说,她真的很拼。 É...... Your old book I first did not say that this, your old book is also about to terminate, we think that your new book was good.” Su Hao thinks that said with a smile. 额......你老书我就先不说了,这样,你老书也快完结了,咱们想想你的新书好了。”苏皓想了想,笑道。 Ai Xian has gawked under: You said.” 艾娴愣了下:“您说。” You want to write any theme, I think you to write Xuanhua, has written the metropolis, but also has written strange...... What theme do you like?” “你想写什么题材的,我看你写过玄幻,写过都市,还写过灵异......你喜欢什么题材?” Moreover, why you write is male-oriented?” On the Su Hao looks at screen, the Ai Xian's author information, sighed. “而且,为什么你写的都是男频?”苏皓看着屏幕上,艾娴的作者信息,叹了一口气。 although has the authoress to write male-oriented to get up, however the majority of authoresses must write female-oriented! 虽然不是没有女作者写男频起来的,但是大部分的女作者还是得写女频啊! I want to write male-oriented!” Ai Xian said without hesitation. “我想写男频!”艾娴毫不犹豫的道 Actually, the female student writes female-oriented to be better a point......” “其实,女生写女频可能更好一点......” I want to write male-oriented!” “我想写男频!” The Su Hao corners of the mouth pull out, the literary young woman really lives in her the person of world. 苏皓嘴角一抽,好吗,文艺女青年果然都是活在自己的世界的人。 I want to write male-oriented...... 我想写男频...... Because this reason forcefully starts, then by oneself live incomparable difficult. 因为这个理由就强行上马,然后让自己活的无比艰辛。 The normal female student with her best friend in the same place, chatted the cosmetics every day, chatted the male student, chatted the result. 正常的女生每日都和自己的闺蜜在一起,聊化妆品,聊男生,聊成绩。 But the male student chats the game, chatted the female student, chatted the basketball...... 而男生则是聊游戏,聊女生,聊篮球...... Both although is not does not occur together, what however is without a doubt, the way of thinking that they year to year foster is different. 两者虽然不是毫无交集,但是毋庸置疑的是,他们常年养成的思维习惯是不一样的。 Writes male-oriented, unavoidably will present the thought that some male authors will not violate to be wrong. 男频,难免会出现一些男性作者不会犯的思维错误。 Ai Xian also knows this point obviously, her hesitant, said: I then write anything not to decide...... Teacher, what opinion do you have?” 艾娴显然也知道这一点,她犹豫一下,道:“不过我接下来写什么还没决定......老师,您有什么意见吗?” Saying, her eyes shining looks at Su Hao. 说着,她双眼发亮的看着苏皓 Su Hao hesitant, his some themes are many, but can the literary young girl write, that was an issue. 苏皓犹豫一下,他有的题材很多,不过文艺少女能不能写好,那就是一个问题了。 Moreover the literary youth unavoidable meeting wants to write the article with own mentality, this in commercial article, but big death anniversary. 而且文艺青年难免会想用自己的思路写文,这在商业文中可是大忌。 Should better opening incomparably confirm the character disposition, can bring anticipates to feel very much strongly, actually does not calculate the complex theme, otherwise she possibly cannot write......” Su Hao secretly said in the heart. “最好有一个开头就无比确认人物性格,能带来很强期待感,却又不算复杂的题材,不然她可能写不好......”苏皓心里暗道 This creativity is very troublesome, creativity was very precious, but must meet her condition. 这种创意很麻烦,创意本就很珍贵了,还得符合她的条件。 However luckily, Su Hao has the accumulation of previous life entire world. 不过幸好,苏皓拥有前世整个世界的积累。 Thinks that he said: Or, you write Xuanhua rebirth of an expert!” 想了想,他道:“要不,你写玄幻强者重生流吧!” rebirth of an expert?” A Ai Xian attractive brow wrinkle. 强者重生流?”艾娴好看的眉头一皱。 Em, the Xuanhua World's top powerhouse, the body dies for some reasons, when the rebirth when he makes a debut.” Su Hao explained: golden finger of this type of article has two, because of the rebirth, he knows very well the matter that then can have, can earn the advantage.” “恩,玄幻世界的顶级强者,因为某种原因身死,重生在他初出茅庐之时。”苏皓解释道:“这种文的金手指有两个,一个是因为重生,他熟知接下来会发生的事情,可以赚取好处。” Second is his Cultivation Technique, the experience, comes up to become greatly strengthened.” “第二个则是他本身的功法,经验,一上来就可以变得极强。” „When the individual also third advantage, for example rebirth brings to create the rebirth reason the treasure, Cultivation Technique wait / etc.......” “个别还有第三个好处,比如重生时带着造成重生原因的宝物、功法等等......” This is the standard neophyte stories Xuanhua repertoire, comes up by Long Aotian the disposition kills all enemies, the disposition can be arrogant, the tone can compel the standard, is an unfailing Xuanhua type. 这是标准的小白文玄幻的套路,一上来就是以‘龙傲天’的性格干掉一切敌人,性格可以高傲,口气可以极具逼格,属于经久不衰的一个玄幻类型。 Su Hao detailed explained to Ai Xian key point of rebirth of an expert, particularly by the humiliation that the childhood receives, after the rebirth, protagonist the crisp point that slap in the face to create explained. 苏皓详细的给艾娴解释了一下强者重生流的重点,尤其是以幼年受到的欺凌,和重生后,主角的打脸造成的爽点进行讲解。 However Ai Xian actually more listens, brow wrinkles is tighter. 不过艾娴却越听,眉头皱的越紧。 She cannot bear the tastes: Teacher, such article, is extremely as if straightforward, extremely repertoire......” 她忍不住出口道:“老师,这样的文,似乎太过直白,太过套路了吧......” This is the commercial article, the commercial article goal is to let the reader likes, no matter the repertoire is also good, straightforward, the reader likes, is the good article!” Su Hao indifferently said. “这就是商业文,商业文的目的是让读者喜欢,不管套路也好,直白也罢,读者喜欢,就是好文!”苏皓淡淡的道 Is......” “是......” Ai Xian purses the lips to say. 艾娴撅着嘴应道。 She also knows Battle Through the Heaven that Su Hao writes is standard neophyte stories, the mentality is simple, crisp point. 她也知道苏皓写的斗破是一本标准的小白文,思路简单,爽点到底。 But Ai Xian will not think that Su Hao does not have the literary talent! 可是艾娴可不会觉得苏皓没有文采! Common people slandered me, to bully me, shame I, to laugh at me, light I, inexpensive I, wicked I, to deceive me, how should to him the famous saying, was ‚the call of 30 years of west river 30 years of east of the river, had the aura that other people were not having. 无论是‘世人谤我、欺我、辱我、笑我、轻我、贱我、恶我、骗我,该如何对他’的名言,还是‘30年河西30年河东的呐喊’,都带着一种其他人不存在的气息。 However now teacher taught the article that she writes, felt...... Such repertoire? 然而现在老师教导她写的文,怎么感觉......如此的套路? Ai Xian is literary girl, she a little shut out this type of article. 艾娴是个文青妹纸,她有点嫌弃这种文了。 no, no, no, the teacher should be has connotation Great Master, he makes me write this type of article, may have any profound meaning......” Ai Xian secretly said in the heart, then engages in introspection to say. 不不不,老师应该是一名颇有内涵的大师,他让我写这种文,可能会有什么深意......”艾娴心里暗道,然后扪心自问道。 „Can that write this type of article?” “那要不要写这种文呢?” although she also knows that the commercial article same is very difficult to write, however the literary thought of innermost feelings makes her somewhat be hard to accept. 虽然她也知道商业文一样很难写,但是内心的文青思维还是让她有些难以接受。 exceed thinks that she more intertwines. 越想,她心里越是纠结。 To be honest, the Su Hao's age compared with on Ai Xian also small 2-3 years old, does obeisance like this artificial master, if at heart an idea does not have, that deceived oneself and others. 说实话,苏皓的年纪比艾娴还小上两三岁,拜这样的人为师,心里要是一点想法都没有,那就是自欺欺人了。 However Ai Xian thought that reaches is the master, therefore before , had not thought anything, is the present...... 不过艾娴却觉得达者为师,所以之前一直没有觉得什么,可是现在...... Should, the teacher not write is he to that I spoke, aimed at slapping the face, repertoire commercial article?” “该不会,老师写的都是他跟我讲的那种,以打脸、套路为目的的商业文吧?” The although commercial article makes money very much, but does not have the feeling of that Great Master! 虽然商业文很赚钱,但是没有那种大师的感觉啊! literary wants is that feeling...... 偏偏文青要的就是那种感觉...... dīng dōng! 叮咚 Suddenly Su Hao's cell phone sound. 忽然苏皓的手机响了。UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com Hello?” Su Hao meets to ask. “喂?”苏皓接起来问道。 Hello, are you Teacher Filthy Speech Using Hate? I am the «Martial Artist World» responsibility arrange, Ye Zi!” The sound in telephone is very excited. “您好,请问您是污言以怼老师吗?我是《武者世界》的责编,叶子!”电话里的声音很是激动。 Your Wuxia novel, «Seven Weapons: Longevity Sword» had put in the Wuxia article type by our magazine company, Editor Feng Yun favors your work very much, what old book do you have?” “您的武侠小说,《七种武器之长生剑》已经被我们杂志社放入武侠征文类型,主编风云很看好您的作品,请问您有什么老书吗?” É...... Has.” 额......有。” Really! I know that you is a literary everybody, opens the new book with new sockpuppet!” “果然!我就知道您是一名文学大家,用新的马甲开新书的!” The sound in telephone is excited, Ai Xian that listens to stares. 电话里的声音激动无比,听的艾娴一愣。 Literature...... Everybody? 文学......大家?
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