Under as ending this words expressing feelings, must certainly review puts in order this book, said the gains and losses in creation, then can know that what should maintain, what this/should promotion, un, I unify my own artistic method to discuss to discuss that naturally, this is own, did not express that suits others who I refine, suits other platforms, has the sensibility to be very good, copies very easily unaccustomed to the climate, the truth has the difference of the absolute truth and relative truth, this very personal sensibility, study I live let alone, I die likely, to? 作为完本感言,肯定要回顾下整本书,说说创造中的得与失,然后才能知道什么该保持,什么该提升,嗯,我结合我自己的创作方法论来谈吧,当然,这是我提炼出来的属于自己的,不表示就适合其他人,适合其他平台,从中有感悟很好,照搬很容易水土不服,真理都有绝对真理和相对真理的区别,更何况这种很私人的感悟,学我者生,像我者死,对吧？ To me, the first keyword in creation, is the most important keyword is „expression”. 就我个人而言,创作中的第一个关键词,也是最重要的一个关键词是“表达”。 Expressing this word is very broad, the narrow sense can be equal to the article subject, the central thought that generalized, any hope transmits to transmit to the thing of reader, is one kind of expression, we can express itself to the humane idea, to the cognition of the world , can express satisfaction obtained, as well as popular, I must be very happy. 表达这个词很宽泛,狭义可以等于文章主题,中心思想,广义来说,任何希望传递出来传递给读者的东西,都属于表达的一类,我们可以表达自身对人性的想法,对世界的认知,也可以表达获得的满足,以及通俗一点的,我要很爽。 Secretive this book, what I want to express is what? 诡秘这本书,我希望表达的是什么呢？ First, fuses after some Western mysticism knowledge and myth and SCP foundation these elements , that has novel interesting, is worth pondering over, complex fun world outlook ; 一是将西方神秘学部分知识与克苏鲁神话、SCP基金会这些元素融合起来后产生的一个新奇有趣,值得琢磨,复杂好玩的世界观; Second, a dark desperate wisp light/only( „right,......” Amon is just about to jump, was covered the mouth by little to subdue|grams, „below.”) This wisp of light is not only humane pitying, is the human race courage song of praise, dark desperate is not only the situation of first Industrial Revolution period worker and farmer, is Old One that myth element brings, Evil God, unknown, cannot look straight ahead, chaotic crazy and desperate no use. 二是黑暗绝望中的一缕光(“对,正是……”阿蒙正要跳出来,就被小克捂住嘴巴,“正是在下。”)这一缕光既是人性的怜悯,也是人类勇气的赞歌,黑暗绝望既是第一次工业革命时期工人、农民的处境,也是克苏鲁神话元素带来的旧日,邪神,未知,不可直视,混乱疯狂和绝望无助。 Third, resistance and fusion of humane and divinity. Why I path localization Divinator of little to subdue|grams, the end point am Fool, on the one hand is its plot need, moreover early period of Divinator this path can very natural launch many mysticism essential factors, leads into interesting, on the other hand, secretive this book concealed main body , is not concealed, I wrote in the synopsis: A Fool legend. 三是人性、神性的对抗和融合。为什么我将小克的途径定位“占卜家”,终点是“愚者”,一方面是本身故事情节需要,而且“占卜家”这条途径前期能很自然地将许多神秘学要素展开,有趣地带入,另一方面,诡秘这本书隐含的主体,呃,也不算隐含吧,我都写在简介里了:一段愚者的传说。 In other words is: A Fool journey. 换句话说就是:一个愚者的旅程。 But tarot card this book very important element, the recognized explanations are, whole description is a Fool journey, starts from Fool, finished to the world, obtains perfectly. 而塔罗牌这个本书很重要的元素,有一个较公认的解读是,整体描述的就是一个愚者的旅程,从愚者开始,到世界结束,获得完满。 I naturally impossible to copy the explanation and image of tarot card, will unify the secretive this book to make certain revision, therefore, a Fool journey refers to the gradation of god, refers to spiritual travel that the human nature, the divinity resistance and fusion bring. 我当然不可能去照搬塔罗牌的解读和意象,会结合诡秘这本书做一定的修改,所以,一个愚者的旅程指的是从人到神的渐变,指的是人性、神性对抗和融合带来的精神旅行。 This point, because I hope that little to subdue|grams could have humane side, warm side, therefore does not have to describe from his psychological activity intuitively, more from others, manifests from him and whole world and surrounding human race interactive frequency and depth, is more indirect. 这一点,因为我希望小克一直能有人性的一面,温暖的一面,所以没有直观地从他的心理活动来描写,更多是从他人,从他和整个世界、周围人类的互动频率、深度来体现,更加间接。 Therefore, to later period, no matter how little to subdue|grams emphasized own human nature, 所以,越到后期,不管小克如何地强调自己的人性, Is he is far away from the human race society to everyone's reading feeling more and more, is getting more and more lonely, is getting more and more abstract, gradually without the feeling of flesh, this is a Fool journey. 给大家的阅读感觉都是他越来越远离人类社会,越来越孤独,越来越抽象,渐渐没有血肉之感,这就是一个愚者的旅程。 This structural design is a little actually opportunistic, because my spiritual sense originates from the beforehand several books, un, the martial arts are an exception, some people said that the lead jumps over toward the later period, jumps over the trouble-maker, even more is divorced from the reality, no longer has to be rooted in the world, is rooted in the feeling of society, then, I turn into from the author unconsciousness this change simply have the consciousness. This spiritual sense almost looked after some tarot books, produced. 这个结构设计其实有点取巧,因为我的灵感来源于之前几本书,嗯,武道除外,都有人说主角越往后期,越是非人,越发脱离现实,不再有根植于世界,根植于社会的感觉,那么,我干脆将这种变化从作者无意识变成有意识。这个灵感差不多看完一些塔罗书籍后就这么产生了。 Now compares, the first point achieved reluctantly, some good, dark some earlier periods of second light are very good, later with the strength level increase have the desalination. 现在对照来看,第一点勉强达到了,第二点光的部分不错,黑暗的部分前期很好,后期随着力量层次提升有淡化。 This truly is an issue, is the issue in secretive this book structure, is in the methodology fourth part that I under and others can say „structure”. 这确实是一个问题,也是诡秘这本书结构上的问题,也是我等下会说的方法论里面的第四部分“结构”。 Returns to the subject, starts from Sequence Three, puts in order this book in the mysticism part, actually has certain style separate in the unknown frightened part. On element, unknown, once clarified, is on the stage truly, will lose most charm, therefore, later the chaotic and crazy feeling maintains well, the dark, desperate, mysterious and tiny feeling is certainly defective. 回到主题,从序列3开始,整本书在神秘学部分,在未知的恐惧部分其实有一定的风格割裂。就克苏鲁元素来说,未知一旦讲明,真正登上舞台,就会失去大部分魅力,所以,后期混乱与疯狂感保持得不错,黑暗、绝望、神秘与渺小感都是一定欠缺的。 Before opening the book, I very hesitate, must only write about Sequence Three, other make the background, the overall style of such mysterious world will be very unified, that fascinating, along with the exploration feeling of frightened and trembling, the mystery can link up the full text. 开书前,我就很犹豫,要不要只写到序列3,其他就作背景,这样神秘世界的整体风格就会很统一,那种引人入胜,伴随着恐惧和颤栗的探索感,神秘感就能贯通全文。 But I somewhat am finally greedy, I hope that the secretive this book can outline a big appearance the overall world outlook, later, can display under this world outlook calmly. 但最终我还是有些贪心,我希望诡秘这本书能把整体世界观勾勒出一个大模样,之后,就可以在这个世界观下从容地发挥了。 The third point, I grade am pass an examination above, over 80, mainly the heart is not very not ruthless, displays insufficiently intuitively. 第三点,我个人评分是及格以上,不超过80吧,主要还是心不够狠,表现得不够直观。 Said that „expression”, I create the second group of keywords am „interesting, interesting”. 说完“表达”,我创作中的第二组关键词是“有趣,有意思”。 In other words, after determining thing that wants to express, then must carefully examine own theme and possible turn of expression was whether appropriate. 也就是说,当确定了想表达的东西后,那么就要审视自己的题材和可能的表达方式是否合适了。 Did not say that some themes cannot write, rule out the external factor, can a theme write only looked interest that you can write, interesting. 不是说有的题材不能写,排除掉外在的因素,一个题材能不能写只看你能不能写的有趣,有意思。 The simple dish must look that is who does, how to do. 家常菜也得看是谁来做,怎么做。 Un, human race essentially, is strives for newly, asked strange, naturally, pursued to be refreshed and affected, following two I was place „mood” some processing, here only discussed that was new and wonderful. 嗯,人类从本质上来说,是求新,求奇的,当然,也追求爽快和感动,后面两个我是放在“情绪”部分处理,这里只谈新和奇。 Does not refer to newly is pure rare, wonderful does not only seek novelty purely, they should be close to have the fresh idea, has certain difference from other. 新不指是单纯的少见,奇也不纯粹只猎奇,它们应该更接近有新意,与其他有一定的不同。 But is interesting and interesting, from the word meaning, the difference is very big, interesting refers to being fun and novel, interesting, then can attach „can ponder over” the meaning. 而有趣和有意思,从词义上来说,差别还是挺大的,有趣更多指好玩、新奇,有意思则可以附加一个“能琢磨”的含义。 Interesting is fun, funny, but can immerse, finds it very interesting, can ponder over, can disperse own imagination. 有意思的不一定会好玩,搞笑,但可以让人沉浸进去,觉得很有意思,可以琢磨,可以发散自己的想象。 Interesting not necessarily is interesting, now is pure, funny, plays the stem many, there is a very big market. 有趣的也不一定有意思,现在单纯轻松,搞笑,玩梗的不少,也有很大的市场。 Naturally, both can unify similarly, when is interesting can make people think interesting, is willing to ponder over, studies, substituted and fantasized, some that double attractions. 当然,两者同样可以结合,有趣之余能让人觉得有意思,愿意去琢磨,去研究,去代入和幻想,那就有双倍吸引力了。 When interesting, if can achieve interesting in the issue document, the character interaction and detail part, but can play similarly adds the finishing touch, lets dynamic function that everyone pursues. 有意思之余如果能在行文、人物互动、细节部分做到有趣,但同样能起到画龙点睛,让大家追的更有动力的作用。 The secretive this book, I to my goal am, first achieves interestingly, then pursues interesting, now, 22 sequence paths, 220 magical medicine, nine source nature and acting method this system, truly achieved had new, had strange, interesting, was interesting. 诡秘这本书,我给自己的目标就是,先做到有意思,再追求有趣,现在来看,二十二条序列途径,220种魔药,九个源质和扮演法这个体系,确实做到了有新,有奇,有趣,也有意思。 But behavior, interaction, detail and other places, I as far as possible am not monotonous, is not arid, the mosts of the time met the requirements. 而行为、互动、细节等地方,我也尽量不单调,不枯燥,大部分时候还是达到了要求。 Naturally, this aspect also has the leeway of progress. 当然,这方面还有进步的余地。 The my third creation keyword is „substitution”. 我的第三个创作关键词是“代入”。 Does not take one hear of substitutions to feel YY, in fact, the substitution is divided many types, truly, many people substitute the lead, but also some people substitute lead his father, his mother, his brothers, his girlfriend, some people substitute the supporting role, substitutes Audience and reader role, the substitution world outlook, substitutes the Earth community, substitutes the science noble feeling, substitutes the classical culture, wait/etc., wait/etc., to mention just a few. 不要一听代入就觉得是YY,实际上,代入是分很多种的,确实,很多人代入主角,但也有人代入主角他爹,他妈,他兄弟,他女友,也有人代入配角,代入观众、读者角色,代入世界观,代入地球共同体,代入科学神圣感,代入古典文化,等等,等等,不一而足。 But an author determined that thinks „expression” the thing, found interesting interesting cut- in the theme and turn of expression, that is the issue of ponder is, which angle making the main reader substitute, this will decide that what narrative technique you use and article structure and prepare what ground. 而一个作者确定好想“表达”的东西,也在题材、表达方式上找到了有趣有意思的切入,那接下来就是思考的问题是,让主要读者代入哪个角度,这会决定你采用什么样的叙事手法、文章结构和做什么样的铺垫。 I in the public number three chapters of brain holes, actually in the idea that considering „substitution” aspect had, I hope what the main reader substituted was the Earth knowledge, by one type watched the fun , and proud mentality looked that native made fun with the Earth knowledge help grows, has the crisp point experience. 我之前在公众号上更了一个只有三章的脑洞,其实就是在考虑“代入”方面产生的想法,我希望主要读者代入的是地球知识,以一种看热闹且骄傲的心态去看一个土著在地球知识帮助下闹笑话又成长,有爽点的经历。 Secretive this book, in the common lead substitutes outside, but also paid closer attention to force system, magical medicine, acting method and in the overall world outlook, therefore the technique of massively utilizing the suspense decipher, put the clasp little, launched little, making everyone immerse. 诡秘这本书,在常见的主角代入外,还把更多的精力放在了力量体系、魔药、扮演法、整体世界观上,所以大量运用了悬疑解密的手法,一点点放钩子,一点点展开,让大家沉浸进来。 The fourth creation keyword is „structure”. 第四个创作关键词是“结构”。 Walks the front three steps, thinks after story outline, must act according to these, overall construction of idea. 走完前面三步,想好故事梗概后,就要根据这些,构思的整体结构。 Therefore, I said that the secretive ending partially estimated from the beginning good can definitely look, the comparison, the fate samsara, the story collects, these launch under a big structure, to me, this has an unusual aesthetic sense. 所以,我说诡秘结尾部分是一开始就预想好的完全可以看得出来,前后对照,宿命轮回,故事收束,这些都是在一个大的结构下展开,就我个人而言,这有种奇特的美感。 Beyond overall construction, the structure of independent each part, before the first structure me, has said that I am self-satisfied, done is very good, the second, third structure has also said that later rarely proposes this word, this is mainly because more will write in the future, the fetter is bigger, the degree of freedom is smaller, if cannot think that the good structure, good cut-, I rather use most common or already has used the story structure, no good particularly to say. 整体结构之外,还有单独的每个部分的结构,第一部的结构我之前就讲过了,我非常得意,做的很好,第二、第三部的结构也是讲过的,之后就很少提这个词,这主要是因为越往后写,束缚越大,自由度越小,如果没能想到好的结构,好的切入,我宁愿采用最常见或已经用过的故事结构,没什么好特别讲的。 And, fourth progresses layer upon layer, finally the detonation underplot type, fifth is vortex, the volume is bigger, finally has the great change, sixth has said probably, the peak clamps middle plain, seventh is travels daily the sudden burst, overall is close to the second structure, eighth pushes the high tide continuously, then the aftertaste concludes. 其中,第四部是层层递进,最后引爆伏线类型,第五部是旋涡式,越卷越大,最终产生巨变,第六部好像说过,前后高峰夹中间的平原式,第七部是日常游历中的突然爆发,整体上接近第二部的结构,第八部就是连续推高潮,然后余韵收尾。 In this, because some volumes, when formally starts to write, the idea of structure is not very clear, or does not know how should achieve the effect of estimate, causing the middle part to have the rhythm problem, either has to lose something for the plot rationality. 这里面,因为有的卷在正式开始写的时候,结构的想法还不够清晰,或者不知道该怎么达到预想的效果,导致中间部分有出现节奏问题,或者不得不为了剧情合理性损失一些东西。 This experiences and lesson, later the need when opens new one volume, as far as possible is very clear degree by oneself setting and assurance to the structure, rather than has a concept, attempts fuzzily, explores, writes, in this case, the luck is good, the condition is good, can hold spiritual sense, perhaps has the pleasant surprise, but the mosts of the time will have many problems. 这都是经验和教训,以后需要在开新一卷的时候,尽量让自身对结构的设定和把握都达到非常清晰的程度,而不是有个概念,就模模糊糊去尝试,去探索,去写,这样的话,运气好,状态好,能抓住灵感,说不定有惊喜,但大部分时候会出现许许多多的问题。 The fifth group of creation keywords are „are realistic and real”. 第五组创作关键词是“现实、真实”。 This actually „substitution” development came from the third keyword, I thought at first most has the substitution feeling, perhaps is the most realistic environment, then exceeds the reality in this foundation, but most realistic without a doubt is our daily, is the metropolis theme. 这其实是从第三个关键词“代入”发展而来的,我最初觉得最有代入感的,或许就是最现实的环境,然后在这个基础上超越现实,而最现实的毫无疑问就是我们的日常,就是都市题材。 Under this prerequisite, the metropolis absolutely is the theme of easiest substitution, therefore, I terminate after first, is thinking profound melts the metropolis imaginary, is not only the reality, exceeds the reality, in the meantime, practices write writes the detail daily the ability, therefore there is a martial arts book, actually, earlier effect also good, but I discovered afterward I underestimated an issue, that is metropolis's limit, when setting does not have fully considering this, causes to have no way to launch later, the story appears repeatedly, lacks the change. 在这个前提下,都市绝对是最容易代入的题材,所以,我在一世完结后,想着把玄幻融进都市,既是现实,也超越现实,同时,也练一练写日常写细节的能力,于是有了武道这本书,其实,前期的效果都还不错,可后来我发现自己低估了一个问题,那就是都市本身的限制,因为设定时没充分考虑到这点,导致后期没法展开,故事出现重复,缺乏变化。 My idea, has in some popular themes of recent years is verified, was very gratified, but, 404 vision are gazing at the metropolis theme, caused unable to present me to imagine the big tidal current. 我的这个想法,在最近几年的部分流行题材里都有得到印证,也算是很欣慰了,不过,404的目光注视着都市题材,导致没能出现我想象中的大的潮流。 Finished the martial arts, I to substituting was more profound with the cognition of reality, thinks that compared with „reality”, „real” can manifest the essence. 写完武道,我对代入和现实的认知更加深刻了,认为比起“现实”来说,“真实”更能体现本质。 So long as is real enough, making the reader immerse, that same can achieve the realistic effect, and has pursue novel meaning. 只要足够真实,让读者沉浸,那一样可以达到现实的效果,而且更有追求新奇的意味。 Therefore, I write the secretive time, goes through the material massively, in the substantial detail, to let this world is lifelike, making everyone the natural ground submergence when reading plunge, knows that here eats anything, with anything, must spend how much money, the manners and customs are anything. 所以,我写诡秘的时候,大量查阅资料,充实细节,就是为了让这个世界栩栩如生,让大家都在阅读时自然地沉浸入内,知道这里吃什么,用什么,要花多少钱,风俗习惯是什么。 This actually has something in common with the 3 A writings recent, opening and freedom, but enough real world. 这其实就和最近几年的3A大作有共同之处,开放、自由但足够真实的世界。 The third dimension, immersive, after this is I finished the martial arts, and writes in the secretive process, slowly a clear idea, by this time, I refined own complete artistic method theory truly. 真实感,沉浸式,这就是我写完武道后和写诡秘的过程中,慢慢清晰的一个想法,到了这个时候,我才真正提炼出了自己的完整的创作方法论。 Naturally, this mode of writing is very tired, is tired. 当然,这种写法真的很累,非常累。 This point, the secretive prometaphase does is very good, afterward after sequence enhancement, there is certain weakening, next, I need to ponder is, under the high strength level, how really to build. 这一点,诡秘前中期都做的很好,后来序列提高后,有一定的减弱,下一步,我需要思考的就是,在高力量层次下,怎么营造真实。 The sixth keyword is „gentle”. 第六个关键词是“柔和”。 I remember that the front that some summaries have said that here were not many said — was mainly the one breath writes so many characters, the train of thought started to diverge, wants the amusement, wanted to be loaf. 我记得前面那部分总结说过,这里就不多说了——主要是一口气写了这么多字,思绪开始发散,想要玩乐,想要偷懒了。 „Gentle”, my understanding is, the plot transition has enough upholstery, the mood advancement has the process of enough fermentation, has the enough appropriate release, if the former does is not good, for transition, but transition, but the high tide the high tide, will be only towering, is unable to shine upon the impact feeling, the latter turns easily sprinkles the dog blood, sensational extremely. “柔和”,我的理解是,剧情转折有足够的铺垫,情绪推进有足够发酵的过程,有足够合适的释放,前者要是做的不好,为转折而转折,而高潮而高潮,只会突兀,无法映照冲击感,后者则容易变成洒狗血,煽情太过。 In this regard, I have been restraining myself, if not suitable to send the blade, absolutely do not send the blade, cannot for the blade, but blade, a whole show, if cannot die is valuable, dies appropriately, dies has the impact feeling, that is lives is being quite good. For wound, but the wound was not very gentle. 在这方面,我一直在约束自己,如果不适合发刀,绝对不要发刀,不能为刀而刀,一个主要人物要是不能死得有价值,死得合适,死得有冲击感,那还是活着比较好。为创伤而创伤就不够柔和了。 Similarly, should not the sensational place not want blindly sensational, when the expression of mood must divide to be clear this/should restraint, anything can erupt, does the overall atmosphere support this, wait/etc., wait/etc.. 同样的,不该煽情的地方不要瞎煽情,情绪的表达一定要分清楚什么时候该克制,什么可以爆发,整体氛围支不支持这样,等等,等等。 Also, cannot to hit the face to hit the face, to be crisp and crisp, the plot promotes, the crisp point will naturally produce gently, does not make people awkward. 还有,不能为了打脸而打脸,为爽而爽,剧情推动起来,爽点自然就会柔和产生,不让人尴尬。 This point, on the surreptitiousness, I does well, only one by one time surpasses self-examines that chapter, but that is also traceable. 这一点,在诡秘上,我做得还不错,唯一一次超过是自问那章,但那也有迹可循。 The seventh keyword is „character”: 第七个关键词是“人物”: I had said before, after I am first story character, after first character story certainly different, but starts from the martial arts, I thought more and more character is very as important. 我之前说过,我是先故事后人物,和先人物后故事有一定不同,但从武道开始,我是越来越觉得人物同样很重要。 A itself, the world outlook is the skeleton, the plot is the meat, the character is the blood, does not have the good character, that this will be spiritless, is very difficult to make one greatly lengthy be interesting in each part, is appealing enough, builds the resonance, to be moved with various mood very much difficultly. 一本,世界观是骨架,剧情是肉,人物则是血,没有好的人物,那这本就会死沉沉的,很难让一个大长篇在每个部分都有意思,足够吸引人,也很难去营造共鸣、感动和各种情绪。 The mold of character, except the hierarchical that the character establishes, I also try to find out a word slowly: „Interaction”. 人物的塑造上,除开人物设定的层次性,我也算是慢慢摸索出一个词:“互动”。 The image of character is established lies in the interaction of character. The independent psychological interaction, individual action, once or twice is useful, the number of times were many inevitably monotonously, frail, tasteless. 人物的形象建立在于人物的互动。单独的心理互动,个人行动,一次两次有用,次数多了必然单调,单薄,乏味。 Had the interaction, the character lived, shows different in the different interactions. 有了互动,人物就活了过来,在不同的互动里展现不同的自己。 Does not launch specifically, because wrote too, wants to finish a bit faster. 具体就不展开了,因为写太多了,想快点写完。 Also, the pinnacle character came from the pinnacle plot inevitably, the pinnacle plot can portray the pinnacle character inevitably, both are not completely separate. 还有,极致的人物必然来自极致的剧情,极致的剧情必然能塑造极致的人物,两者不是完全割裂的。 In secretive this book, I from fuzzy cognition, to clear utilization, has certain harvest, portrayed some good characters, naturally, some characters concerned about the length, have no way to follow little to subdue|grams concerned about the character growth curve, can only calculate that completed the first half, hopes that future second can portray well. 在诡秘这本书上,我从模糊认知,到清晰运用,也算是有一定的收获,也塑造了一些不错的人物,当然,部分人物碍于篇幅,碍于人物成长曲线没法跟上小克,只能算完成了上半场,希望将来的第二部能更好地刻画。 Generally speaking, although Amon made many people dislike, but his character whole completion besides little to subdue|grams, highest. 总的来说,虽然阿蒙令很多人讨厌,但祂的人物整体完成度是除了小克外,最高的。 Similarly, my molds to many villains has certain issue, seventh has said that is always familiar with the establishment is too strong, the insufficient presence opportunity, the accumulation of mood is few, the interaction are less, later must change. 同样的,我对许多反派人物的塑造有一定的问题,第七部说过了,总是习惯设置太强,缺乏足够的出场机会,情绪的积累很少,互动更加少,以后得改。 Moreover, unifies „really” this keyword, the character must pay attention issue whether distorts, sometimes, funny extremely, plays the stem extremely, is very easy to make the character distort, degenerates that roles in most animations, naturally, this did not express that such character will not be attractive, the distortion or not must look that the story overall atmosphere decides. 另外,结合“真实”这个关键词,人物还得注意是否失真的问题,有的时候,搞笑太过,玩梗太过,很容易让人物失真,退化成大部分动漫里的那种角色,当然,这不表示这样的人物不会有魅力,失真与否还是得看故事整体氛围而定。 The eighth keyword is „change”. 第八个关键词是“变化”。 When this is the summary has raised many, most abstains is invariable, the air wire, is a concealed wiring, must have certain change inevitably, otherwise has no way to support very long length, even if the structure simplest wireless wind profound imaginary article, must trade the map to bring about the change through times, eliminates the redundant feeling on plot. 这个是总结时提过最多的,一本最忌讳的就是一层不变,无论是明线,还是暗线,必然得有一定的变化,否则没法支撑起很长的篇幅,哪怕是结构最简单的无线风玄幻文,也是要通过一次次换地图带来变化,消除剧情上的重复感。 Writes in the secretive process, the fourth center-section, the promotion line draws is too long, causing the change to be insufficient, the plot tensity drops. Before later period of the martial arts was hard to launch, the plot started the repetition, fought even more bored. This has said that later must improve well, the time attention, the sober cognition, prevented ahead of time. 写诡秘的过程中,第四部中段,升级线拉太长,导致变化不足,剧情张力下降。之前武道后期难以展开,剧情开始重复,打斗越发无聊。这都是说过的,以后要好好改进,时刻注意,清醒认知,提前预防。 The ninth keyword is „detail”. 第九个关键词是“细节”。 The detail, the devil forever in the detail, this is also the key that „substitution” and „real” and „gentle” and „character” lands on feet. 细节,魔鬼永远在细节里,这也是“代入”、“真实”、“柔和”、“人物”落到实处的关键。 Lacking detail, will not be without a doubt real, is unable to substitute, the interaction is senseless, the transition is towering. 缺乏细节,毫无疑问不会真实,无法代入,互动无趣,转折突兀。 This is a big topic, please allow me to be loaf does not say, this does not write the class in any case. 这是个大课题,请允许我偷懒就不讲了,反正这又不是写作课。 In brief, the secretive this book has many details, therefore there is a sense of reality, had the character, had the picture, had the mood resonance, this I am very satisfied, but the late fight, extremely in expressed the abstraction and generalization, gradually lacked the detail, truly was a big issue. 总之,诡秘这本书有许多细节,因此有了质感,有了人物,有了画面,有了情绪的共鸣,这点我很满意,但后期的战斗,太过于去表达抽象化、概念化,逐渐缺乏细节,确实是一个不小的问题。 This point, I currently have some mentalities, this is JOJO takes to my spiritual sense, that is gives the ability the rule and limit, as far as possible simple, but the enough clear rule and limit, then make an issue in this frame, such ability has the boundary, the detail has the guarantee. 这一点,我目前有了些思路,这是JOJO带给我的灵感,那就是给出能力的规则和限制,尽量简单但足够清晰的规则和限制,然后再在这个框架里做文章,这样能力有边界,细节就有保证。 After this is , a point that can increase. 这是以后可以提升的一个点。 The tenth keyword is „mood”. 第十个关键词是“情绪”。 Writes about here, really does not want to write, was too tired, had the mood. 写到这里,真的不想写了,太累了,有情绪了。 Yeah, actually, mood, many net article Author has said that even many people take oneself artistic method it the core, how the entire story regarding works up the reader mood to plan and upholstery. 哎,其实,情绪这块,很多网文作家都讲过,甚至不少人将它作为自己创作方法的核心,整个故事就是围绕怎么调动读者情绪来规划和铺垫的。 I also attach great importance to the mood very much, because of a good high tide, a good fragment, a good character, will include or bring the mood finally, without the mood, that story was dry, insufficient attraction. 我对情绪也很重视,因为一个好的高潮,一个好的片段,一个好的人物,最终都是会含有或带来情绪的,没有了情绪,那故事就干巴巴的,缺乏足够的吸引力。 How other draw the hatred the technique, I did not say, many that I knew, used few, I liked advancing with the conflict of plot. 其他怎么拉仇恨的手法啊,我就不讲了,我知道的多,用的少,我更喜欢用剧情的冲突来推进。 However, regarding the mood, whether frequently the advancement nature that I can pay attention to the mood, is whether smooth, whether the middle has too many interruptions, otherwise has no way to stack the high tide, stacks the impact feeling. 不过,对于情绪,我会时刻去关注情绪的推进是否自然,是否流畅,中间是否有太多的打断,否则没法堆起高潮,堆起冲击感。 Moreover, cannot be equal to the hatred and vent the mood, love and justice, no, is moved, affection, satisfied, wait/etc., wait/etc., a good author, must let own weapons storehouse as far as possible richly, works up the mood type many. 另外,不能把情绪等同于痛恨和发泄,还有爱与正义,不,还有感动,喜爱,满足,等等,等等,一个好的作者,得尽量让自己的武器库丰富一点,调动情绪的类型多一点。 In the surreptitiousness, in my whole gives the mood to restrain very much, has been making the advancement of mood gentle, therefore, so many creation keywords do not exist absolutely alone, is the coordination with each other, natural body. 在诡秘里,我整体上给出情绪是很克制的,也一直在让情绪的推进柔和,所以,这么多创作关键词绝对不是单独存在的,都是互相配合,天然一体的。 In the classical scene of mood expression about the surreptitiousness, I close one's eyes to recall some, did not boast that is mainly disinclined to write, in brief, does well, the next hope raises eruption that the mood divulges, making it closely unify with other mood turn of expression. 关于诡秘里情绪表达的经典场景,我闭着眼睛都能回想起一些,就不自夸了,主要是懒得写,总之,做得还不错,下一部希望提升情绪宣泄的爆发度,让它和别的情绪表达方式有机结合。 The 11 th keyword, replaces with „impulse” the high tide, Chernobyl and other scenes display, a 12 keyword...... considers as finished, does not write, was too tired, the ink spat, in any case not too important these. 第十一个关键词,将高潮用“冲击力”代替,“切尔诺贝利”等场景就是表现,第十二个关键词……算了,不写了,太累了,墨水吐完了,反正都是不太重要的那些了。 Writes my creation idea, I did not fear that the study, just the opposite, I am very hoped some people study, this means that I can have many book that suits my taste looked, but such creation is doomed to be very tired, naturally , will be very satisfied. 写出我的创作想法,我并不怕被人学,恰恰相反,我挺希望有人学,这就意味着我能有很多适合我口味的书看,但这样的创作注定很累,当然,也会很满足。 Un, finally reported the number of times, the secretive present subscribes 109,000, pursued subscribes, because had the last addition, has been very high, the whole was higher than the seventh whole, the mosts of the time paced back and forth 61,000 to 63,000, lowly also 58,000, highest were the final three chapters, broke through 70,000, last chapter of present 24 hours 90,000.. 嗯,最后报次数吧,诡秘现在均订10万9千,追订因为有最后一部加成,一直挺高的,整体比第七部整体还高一点,大部分时候6万1到6万3之间徘徊,最低也有5万8吧,最高是最后三章,都突破七万了,最后一章现在24小时九万。。 Finished the secretive creation, summarized the success and failure, chatted the new book again. 写完诡秘的创作,总结出了得失,再谈谈新书。 Un, will not open 2 directly surreptitiously, I am worried to repeat some things, I want first to write other trading the brain, then makes an accumulation. 嗯,不会直接开诡秘二,我担心会重复这部的一些东西,我希望先写别的换换脑子,再做点积累。 Before the new book, has said that the spent clay and xianxia two choose one. When writes surreptitiously, I hope that the next instinct writes a relaxed main key, fun, therefore is partial to xianxia at first, afterward some people said to me, can definitely process crazily the lead, making him dilute the spent clay the main key, this seems interesting. 新书之前说过,废土和仙侠二选一吧。在诡秘写的时候,我希望下一本能写个轻松基调的,好玩一点的,所以最初是偏向仙侠的,后来有人给我说,完全可以将主角处理得疯狂一点,让他来冲淡废土的基调,这似乎挺有意思的。 In brief, my present balance balanced, when under my rest some time, empties the brain, then asks itself, which most wants to write. 总之,我现在天平又平衡了,等我休息一段时间,清空下大脑,然后再问问自己,最想写哪个。 The new book preliminary determination is in mid November, the specific time I will announce in the public number, from the present by that time, I first serializes beyond one 20,000-30,000 small here, then one after another, puts some secretive hypotheses in the public number non-periodically, writes beyond some small, in the meantime, announced that the theme of new book, some hypotheses, collect the dragon embroidered costume, searched for „wuzei1985”, animation head picture that is. 新书初步确定是11月中旬,具体时间我会在公众号上公布,从现在到那个时候,我先在这里连载一个20,000-30,000的小番外,然后陆续,不定期地在公众号上放一些诡秘设定,写一些小番外,同时,公布新书的题材,一些设定,征集龙套等,搜“wuzei1985”,动漫头像那个就是。 Finally, thanked everyone again, thank all has subscribed this book, friend who liked this book, was you make me have the opportunity to mention the story. 最后,再次感谢大家,感谢所有订阅过这本书,喜欢这本书的朋友,是你们让我有机会讲出自己心里的故事。 Also, thank friend who has cast the monthly ticket, we couple of days ago broke the beginning male frequency monthly ticket record, making us congratulate itself, smiles. 还有,感谢一直投月票的朋友,我们前两天打破了起点男频月票记录,让我们祝贺自己,笑。 Thank to the friend who the role hit the list, little to subdue|grams, Audrey, Leonard and Sharon they therefore had oneself birthday party. 感谢给角色打榜的朋友,小克、奥黛丽、伦纳德、莎伦他们因此有了自己的生日会。 Thank friends who hit to enjoy, my attitude is always, therefore do not affect own life, my study, other oneself entertainment, under this prerequisite, I can only opens the pocket, while said „doesn't use”. Money who does not love( sincere. 感谢打赏的朋友们,我一直以来的态度就是,不要因此影响到自己的生活,自己的学习,自己别的娱乐,在这个前提下,我只能一边拉开衣兜,一边说“不用不用”。钱谁不爱啊(正色。 Thank to like generating electricity surreptitiously, has been Ainley's friends, was liked definitely is very good experience. 感谢为诡秘为爱发过电,做过安利的朋友们,被喜欢被肯定是很好的体验。 Thank my moderators and to manage, you were very laborious, the pot of back was black and big. 感谢我的版主们、管理们,你们真的很辛苦,背的锅又黑又大。 Thank my general staff corps, took you too much time to give the title page, peripheral to give the comment. 感谢我的参谋团们,占用了你们太多的时间来给封面、周边提出意见。 Thank issues the commentary, publishes friends who this chapter said that your overwhelming majority times brought the good mood to me, at first I was each strip looked, afterward were getting more and more, really could not look, that will delay the symbol, therefore can only fix time to select, looked at part. 感谢发表评论,发表本章说的朋友们,你们绝大部分时候都给我带来了好心情,最初我是每条都看,后来越来越多,实在看不过来,那会耽误到码字,所以只能固定一个时间点,看一部分。 Thank all accompanies is arriving surreptitiously ended this friend, in the two years, can have your companions, was my luck, hopes that this was in your life a glorious memory. 感谢所有陪着诡秘走到了完本的朋友,这两年,能有你们的陪伴,是我的幸运,也希望这是你们人生中一段美好的回忆。 Final final, by the hand according to the chest, bows to salute. 最后的最后,以手按胸,鞠躬行礼。 Finally while 3, reaching an agreement beyond probably in May 7 , 12 : 30 pm, by the form renewal of chapter words expressing feelings, every day a chapter, seven to ten days. 最后乘三,说好的番外大概是在5月7日中午12点半,以章节感言的形式更新,每天一章,七到十天。 Finished the words expressing feelings, I must rest, have a long lazy sleep well well. 写完感言,我要好好休息一下,好好睡个懒觉了。 The anticipation and you meet again! 期待和你们再会！ Newest website: 最新网址: Note: If you noticed that after this chapter content is the security wrong content and this book breaks and other issues please register, → → 注:如你看到本章节内容是防盗错误内容、本书断更等问题请登录后→→