LM :: Volume #8

#42: Ends this words expressing feelings (First Part)

Originally scheduled is rest, tomorrow will write this again, but possibly time sensitive, various many friend types of messages and private letter asked me, I am just thinking took an afternoon nap well, relaxes stimulated of ending, the cell phone the sound, did I...... also make one sleep. 本来预定是休息一下,明天再写这个的,但可能时间点敏感吧,不少朋友各种短信、私信来问我,我正想着好好睡个午觉,放松结尾的亢奋,手机一个劲地哔哔哔响,我……还让不让人睡觉啊。 In May/five months ends is the scheduled matter, this point, I have said very much early very much early, but had no way to estimate at that time accurate, the 5-6 moon/month of generally saying, must stay behind enough flexible leeway, right, if not the epidemic situation, I cannot pass for several days to go to Spanish travel. 五月完本是预定中的事情,这一点,我很早很早前就说过了,只不过当时没法精准估计,就笼统说的五六月,总得留下足够的弹性空间,对吧,如果不是疫情,我过不了几天就去西班牙旅行了。 Also, my contract is at the end of 2016 bamboo slip, at the beginning of 2022, remains a book now, the appearances of 3 million characters, new book definitely in beginning. 还有,我的合同是2016年底签的,到2022年初,现在还剩一本书,300万字的样子,新书肯定是在起点。 Spoke the off topic, returns to the book. 说完题外话,回到书本身。 If behind seventh concludes the part, I chose a more reasonable development, causing the plot to change quick, has no way to make more plentiful and careful expansion, that eighth from Chapter 1 start, in I control conduct, each should write anything, where transition, the ending how collects, I have considered, does not have the matter that the plot speeds up suddenly, had not reduced the issues of many branch. 如果说第七部后面收尾部分,我选择了更合理的发展,导致剧情变快很多,没法做更丰满和细致的展开,那第八部从第一章开始,就是在我掌控中进行,每一张该写什么,哪里转折,结尾怎么收束,我都是已经考虑好的,不存在剧情突然加快的事情,也没有砍掉了很多支线的问题。 This ending, I thought before the book, Tarot Society everyone after experiencing all sorts of passively, anticipation, confused, wandered, finally was separated from own comfort margin, went facing this world, facing all sorts of difficulties, but Klein and Ards completed samsara on a role. 这个结尾,我在开书前就想好了,塔罗会每个人在经历了种种被动、期待、迷茫、徘徊后,终于脱离自己的舒适区,去面对这个世界,面对种种困难,而克莱恩和阿兹克完成了一次角色上的轮回。 And finally, strangely with the innocence, dimly with the sunlight, the darkness and newborn contrast, is a little warm unusual picture a little, simultaneously pointed out Klein has regained consciousness initially, is insufficient the book. 到了最后,诡异与童真,黯淡与阳光,黑暗与新生对比,属于有点克苏鲁又有点温暖的奇特画面,同时点明了克莱恩已初步苏醒,不至于断书。 As for five gold coin foreshadowing, the Tarot Society people respective experience, as well as other do not involve this book main line the pit, naturally leaves second, I write was so obvious, finally the part is not only an ending, is the foreword chapter. 至于五个金币伏笔,塔罗会众人各自的经历,以及其他不涉及这本书主线的坑,当然是留给第二部的,我都写的这么明显了,最后部分既是结尾,也是序章。 Un, second from the small to subdue|grams deep sleep, or is earlier, regains consciousness these days to him. 嗯,第二部就是从小克沉睡,或者更早,到他苏醒这段时间。 Before this was opened the book, determines, why at that time considered second ; first, I thought that this setting was too huge, can write were too many, if the stopper to a book, that inevitably primary and secondary did not divide altogether, the branch was long, scattered in disorder tasteless, could not withstand extremely fat ; second, the growth curve of Tarot Society people had no way to follow Klein, if gave them too many branches, more stories, making their promotion enough reasonable, that will attack the main line the construction, similarly had the problem that primary and secondary did not divide, if did not give, grew by them, at crucial moments played the role, definitely will have massive. The friend feels one's family and relatives can ride on one's coattails to success, thought that they extremely obtain all with ease. 这都是开书前就确定下来了,当时为什么考虑第二部,一是我觉得这个设定太庞大,能写的太多,如果一股脑塞到一本书里,那必然主次不分,支线冗长,散乱乏味,臃肿不堪,二是塔罗会众人的成长曲线没法跟上克莱恩,如果给他们太多支线,更多故事,让他们的提升足够合理,那会冲击到主线的架构,同样出现主次不分的问题,如果不给,又让他们成长,在关键时刻发挥作用,肯定会有大量的朋友觉得一人得道鸡犬升天,觉得他们太过轻松就得到一切。 Therefore, after I measure, unifies various aspect situations, was determined that at least needs to write 2 surreptitiously, as the matter stands, this can walk the plot calmly, does not use the full world running map, but the Tarot Society people only launch their life the first half, completes the transformation and growth, then leaves the comfort margin, deducts a more splendid story and life to second. 所以,我权衡之后,结合各方面情况,决心至少要写诡秘二,这样一来,这一部可以从容地走剧情,不用满世界跑地图,而塔罗会众人只展开他们人生的上半场,完成蜕变和成长,然后离开舒适区,到第二部里演绎更精彩的故事和人生。 To me, 对于我来说, This similarly is a challenge, how separating for several years later, how to lead into this world everyone, how to make the new reader not look surreptitiously 1 has also been able smoothly, read unzoned. 这同样是一个挑战,如何在隔了几年后,怎么把大家重新带入这个世界,怎么让新的读者没看过诡秘一也能流畅地,不受限制地阅读下去。 I had not written an experience of series book before, without writes the experience of second book under the same world outlook, on the one hand is the front several book hypotheses time would have no to consider that this issue, insufficient space deployment ; second, the fear redundant past repertoire, is unable to break through, but this fear is also a limit, I felt I who had found the pragmatic strategy theory can try to challenge under one. 我之前没有写一个系列书的经验,没有在同一个世界观下写第二本书的经验,一方面是前面几本书设定的时候就没考虑这个问题,缺乏足够的空间展开,二是害怕重复过去套路,无法突破,但这种害怕本身也是一种限制,我觉得已经找到自己写作方法论的我可以试着挑战一下了。 I had said before, my slogan, no, my motto is: 我之前说过,我的口号,不,我的座右铭是: „ Will be never satisfied, forever will be challenging. “永不满足,永在挑战。 Second, I have not thought the lead and cut-, but in my present mind had presented some plot pictures: 第二部,我还没想好主角和切入,但我现在脑海里已经出现了一些剧情画面: That is awakens various attempts of little to subdue|grams by the Tarot Society people, with five gold coin and different people of made of iron volume cigarette case representative, concealed wiring of constitution. 那是以塔罗会众人唤醒小克的各种尝试,以五个金币、铁制卷烟盒代表的不同人,构成的暗线。 He will perhaps bump into one to light the cigarette, mentioned the former hunter, occasionally the appearance that perhaps will sneak a peek at half beautiful, will perhaps hear the overseas to transmit found that perhaps the new continent news, can in the King with sea hit has to do, perhaps will explore the buried treasure legend that marine that several have not exposed, can perhaps with all forms „transmigrator” and „infiltrator” had the inflation. 他也许会碰到一个点起烟,说起从前的猎人,也许会偶尔窥见到半张美丽的容颜,也许会听到海外传来发现新大陆的消息,也许会与大海上的王者们打一打交道,也许会去探索海上那几个还未揭露的宝藏传说,也许会和形形色色的“穿越者”、“潜入者”发生膨胀。 Concrete style, when the time decides again, in brief, in the setting gave second to leave a lot of spaces, I did not worry completely did not have the thing to write. 具体的风格,等到时候再定,总之,设定上给第二部留下了很多的空间,我完全不担心没东西写。 As for doomsday, definitely is not one can solve, to let second doomsday has the oppression strength, I decided that makes the epic level to strengthen to Goddess, harms, in brief, why the boar is pregnant, the man for what/how outstanding the belly, why the stone is giving birth to the child, all these back, are the humane distortions, morals perishes...... as for the plan of strengthening, will put western continent related third probably, but I not necessarily write, earnest face. 至于末日,肯定不是一部能解决的,而为了让第二部的末日更有压迫力,我决定给母神做史诗级强化,误,总之,公猪为何怀孕,男子为何挺着肚子,石头为何产下小孩,这一切的背后,是人性的扭曲,还是道德的沦丧……至于强化的方案,大概会放到西大陆相关的第三部,但我未必写,认真脸。 western continent is related, I had not actually made the setting before, but left behind the connection, the surplus seven source natures, with few do not contain Sequence One, unique Extraordinary characteristics, what world will construct, a promotion system? 西大陆相关,我之前其实是没做设定,只是留下了接口,剩余七个源质,和少量不包含序列1,唯一性的非凡特性,会构建出什么样的一个世界,一个升级体系呢？ I basically determined the idea recently, knows that what setting must make, hehe. 我最近基本确定了想法,知道要做什么样的设定了,嘿嘿。 Un, the correct path system centered on source nature, uses Extraordinary characteristics as the heresy of basis, as well as has the lower currents of part respectively. 嗯,以源质为核心的正道体系,以非凡特性为根本的旁门左道,以及各有部分的下九流。 The former is from Taoism „by seal” this mentality, un, was obtained the forehead approval by seal you in other words, becomes one of the system, can summon six Ding Liujia and other God to help fight happily, but without by the wild taoist priest of seal, you are wanted to summon six Ding Liujia, the land mountain spirit, why do others manage you? Therefore, rune/symbol Zhuanli, rune/symbol Hezhuan is separates, by the seal in a nutshell is in the system, then, if changes to the source nature the forehead and pure land, the entire setting one vividly was strange. 前者是从道家“受篆”这个思路出发,嗯,受篆就是说你得到了天庭认可,成为了这个体系的一员,可以愉快地召唤六丁六甲等神灵帮忙战斗了,而没有受篆的野道士,你想召唤六丁六甲,土地山神,人家凭什么理你啊？所以,符篆里,符和篆是分开的,受篆一言以蔽之就是体制内,然后,如果把天庭、净土改成源质,整个设定一下就活泼诡异起来了。 Writes about here, the belly was hungry, the wife urged me to go out.. After all is the temporary decision writes, un, first arrived here, I will continue this to end this words expressing feelings tomorrow, chatted the idea and success and failure of secretive this book creation, UU read 写到这里,肚子饿了,媳妇催我出门了。。毕竟是临时决定写的,嗯,先到这里,我明天继续这个完本感言,谈谈诡秘这本书创作的想法和得失,UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com Chatted my artistic method theory. 谈谈我的创作方法论。 Moreover, thank the parasol big shot to hit to enjoy, I opened the beginning to study to frighten a moment ago , later will first serialize beyond one 20,000-30,000 fixed time here, was beyond of indefinite tense, originally did not plan to write, but discovers that now many did not involve second, thing that but can write, for example the dreamland of little to subdue|grams deep sleep, fourth era some fragment stories, wait/etc., wait/etc.. 另外,感谢梧桐的大佬打赏,我刚才开起点读书都吓到了,还有,之后先会定时在这里连载一个20,000-30,000的番外,然后是不定时的番外,本来不打算写的,但现在发现有许多不涉及第二部,但可以写的东西,比如小克沉睡的梦境,第四纪的一些片段故事,等等,等等。 Why was disturbed about the Heavenly Lord subsequent hand, I have made certain suggestion: 关于天尊后手为什么被干扰,我已经做了一定暗示了: Arrods the Magical Mirror as comes out from the chaos sea, why must follow Klein, why Klein must bring it when the deep sleep. “魔镜”阿罗德斯作为从混沌海出来的,为什么一定要跟着克莱恩,克莱恩为什么要在沉睡时带着它。 Also, the entity book reset version came out, this time title page is I likes, the content also revised in some network words and dictionaries no word, for example , he purchases the address to read my micro blog specifically, cuttlefish main body that likes diving, later beyond can pay attention occasionally my ”, animation head picture that. 还有,实体书重置版出来了,这次的封面是我喜欢的,内容也只是修订了部分网络词汇和词典里没有的词,比如,祂,具体购买地址可以去看我的微博,爱潜水的乌贼本尊,之后不定时番外则可以关注我的”,动漫头像那个。 Un un, will continue this words expressing feelings (Last Part) tomorrow. 嗯嗯,明天继续完本感言(下)。
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