2DRE :: Volume #3 LV2，逐渐专业的聊天室

#687: Ends this words expressing feelings

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First here everyone told that was sorry, because on the ending, ending of this book is somewhat hasty, when it is estimated that saw that the book ends these three characters, some readers have not recovered. 首先在这里跟大家说一声抱歉,因为就结尾来说,这书的完本是有些仓促的,估计当看到全书完这三个字,还有一些读者没有回过神来。 Causes this situation to have many reasons, first is the theme issue that before mentioned, chat class/flow mode of writing actually two types ; first, the plot prophet who only lead dragon arrogant day, depended the lead, installed to compel the play to pass to each world, second was the group portrait play, described each crowd to put on the later scene randomly. 造成这种情况有很多原因,首先就是以前提到的题材问题,聊天流的写法其实就两种,一是唯主角的龙傲天式,仗着主角的剧情先知,到各个世界去装逼剧透,第二则是群像剧,描写各个群员乱穿之后的情景。 dragon Aotian the -type mode of writing is quite simple, but is somewhat stereotyped, from the beginning may be somewhat fresh, after dozens about 1 million characters, gradually will be tasteless, I had not actually depended toward here as far as possible, for example the strength of lead has had in the pressure, but will not have the means many words to focus on the body of lead finally, because , the group portrait play was too difficult to write. 龙傲天式的写法比较简单,但有些千篇一律,一开始或许有些新鲜,等几十近百万字之后,就会渐渐乏味了,我其实已经尽量不往这边去靠了,比如主角的战力一直都有在压,可最终还是没办法将更多的笔墨着眼于主角的身上的,因为真的,群像剧太难写了。 Especially after the population of chatroom are getting more and more, will unable to distinguish clearly gradually primary and secondary, the feeling that often some types are unable to start writing, then turned into sometimes the group portrait play, sometimes dragon Aotian. 尤其是当聊天室的人数越来越多之后,会渐渐的分不清主次,往往有种无从下笔的感觉,然后就变成了有时候群像剧,有时候又龙傲天了。 Next is the reason on body, probably is two months ago, my body had/left some problems, has been taking a drug the running hospital, the renewal is unsatisfactory day after day, the mentality is also out of stock gradually, more and more day not from heart, then result also slowly falls downward, the feelings of some vicious circles, are uncomfortable. 其次就是身体上的原因,大概是两个月前,我的身体就出了些毛病,一直在吃药跑医院,更新日渐不佳,思路也渐渐断档,越来越日不从心,然后成绩也慢慢的往下掉,有种恶性循环的感觉,非常难受。 Writes collapse Xielan with it when the time comes, writes nobody will ask, might as well finished as soon as possible. 与其到时候写崩写烂,写到无人问津,还不如尽早结束。 Although said that the result is somewhat hasty, but actually this/should writing also wrote, without writing, for example Chaldea's person manages, foreshadowing that finally how, the life experience of lead, the origin of chatroom, as well as other seemed like, actually must write to write, but really wrote, will also feel and nothing necessity. 虽然说结局是有些仓促,但其实该写的也都写了,没写的,比如迦勒底的人理,最后怎么样了,主角的身世,聊天室的来历,以及其他一些看似的伏笔,其实要写可以写很多,但真写了,却也会觉得并没有什么必要。 Like the lead is the average person, is the later generation inheritance of chatroom civilization, will not have any effect in the plot of this book, most is some dispensable painted eggshells. 就像主角到底是普通人,还是聊天室文明的后人传承,于本书的剧情并不会有任何影响,最多算是一些可有可无的彩蛋。 Naturally, most mainly I exhaust one's creative vein, the ability is insufficient, is unable to write interesting some good things. Originally I was planning, when national mourning FGO has the Consort Yu pond to end the itself again, shares a joy of next five valuable Consort Yu with everyone while convenient, but is very helpless, really did not tow by that time. 当然,最主要还是我自己江郎才尽,能力不足,无法把一些好的东西写得更加有趣。本来我是打算着等到国服FGO出虞姬卡池再完本,顺便跟大家分享一下五宝虞姬的喜悦,但很无奈,真的拖不到那个时候了。 Generally speaking, the shortcoming of this book are many, once again exposes some problems that I always wrote, hope next time can improve. 总的来说,这本书的缺点是很多的,也再次暴露了我一直以来的写作上的一些毛病,希望下一本的时候能够有所改进吧。 Actually also some places improved, for example the harem issue of lead, this I restrained myself time finally, has not released for flight at this matter, to finally, determined the relations also only then Consort Yu Sajyou Manaka and Asuna three, compared with the beforehand wastefulness, felt that progressed are very many. 其实也有些地方改进了,比如主角的后宫问题,这一次我终于克制住了自己,没有在这件事上放飞自我,到最后,确定关系的也只有虞姬沙条爱歌和亚丝娜三个,比起以前的大手大脚,感觉进步挺多的。 After Kurumi and Alice/Arisu these person and lead will have anything to develop......, if I interested, may write beyond, naturally, such blank is also good, do not get so far as perfectly. 至于狂三、有珠这些人和主角以后会有什么发展……嗯,如果我有兴趣的话,可能会写写番外,当然,就这样留白也不错,也不是一定要弄到十全十美的。 Finally, thank everyone companion more than one year, very sorry, is unable to hand over one to let everyone satisfied answer paper. 最后,感谢大家一年多来的陪伴,很抱歉,无法交出一份让大家都满意的答卷。 Then, basically arrived here, now first makes me rest. 那么,基本就到这里了,现在先让我休息一下。 Then, if predestined friends, lets us one month later sees again. 然后,如果有缘的话,让我们一个月后再见吧。
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