WTNRAS :: Volume #1

#65: edit(or)


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Sometimes, I also will look at light novel, although definitely cannot compare you or Mayuzumi's degree, but also insightful.” “有时候,我也会看轻小说的,虽然肯定比不上你或者黛的程度,但也是有眼光的。” „...... Is glad utmost.” Seiji nodded, approaches, has put on the book the tabletop. “哦……乐意之至。”晴司点点头,走近过去,将本子放到了桌面上。 That asked Shopkeeper to have a look, to look first later has appraised...... I change the clothes now, prepares work.” “那就请店长先看看,看过之后评价一下吧……我现在去换衣服,准备工作。” Good, you go.” “好,你去吧。” After gazing after youngster leaves, Rika reads the book. 目送少年离开后,莉香看起了本子。 Unexpectedly is entire writing by hand . Moreover the character very writes pretty, is really the accident/surprise, Haruta-kun really also has this skill.” “居然是全手写,而且字写得挺漂亮的呢,真是意外,春田君竟然还有这种技能。” I'll Die If I Don't Become Handsome!’? Hehe ~ this is...... Takes him as the prototype novel?” “‘不变成帅哥就会死!’?呵呵~这难道是……以他自己为原型的小说吗?” Rika looks at the title, felt interesting, therefore read full of enthusiasm. 莉香一看标题,就感到了有趣,于是兴致勃勃地阅读起来。 Writing is quite good, watches feels is very comfortable, the description is very vivid, narrates is also interesting.” “文字相当不错呢,看着就感觉很舒服,描述很生动,叙述得也很有趣。” That many stems a little cannot understand, but ridicule is very amusing, has the marvelous refreshed feeling.” “那么多梗有点看不懂,不过吐槽还是挺好玩的,有奇妙的爽快感。” young girl also draws very much cute, ~ does not know that has the prototype of reality......” 少女也描画得很可爱,呵~不知道有没有现实的原型呢……” beautiful Shopkeeper read is reading, sank to gradually. 美女店长读着读着,渐渐沉入其中。 ...... …… This morning, the staff in latter kitchen think somewhat strangely. 今天上午,后厨的员工们觉得有些奇怪。 Shopkeeper, was Lady Boss Amami Rika appears too lately, moreover appeared a little absent-minded, but also left one once for a while. 店长,也就是老板娘天海莉香出现得太迟了,而且显得有点心不在焉,还时不时就离开一阵。 Her that a little dull appearance, with the ordinary calm dignified image, has the obvious contrast. 她那有点呆呆的模样,跟平常沉稳威严的形象,有着明显的反差。 What's the matter? 到底怎么回事? In when staff in latter kitchen are busy loaf, discussed on the quiet. 后厨的员工们忙里偷闲时,悄悄地议论。 Can be in the family/home had the matter?” This is approaches normally. “会不会是家里出了事情?”这是正常向的。 I guess that was the past old sweetheart makes the phone call.” This is approaches ambiguous. “我猜是过去的老情人打来了电话。”这是暧昧向的。 Should actually not be that day?” This is the physiology approaches. “该不会其实是那个日子吧?”这是生理向的。 You were too naive! Ahem, according to my eyesight, Shopkeeper was suspecting actually that oneself was pregnant!” This is talks nonsense to approach. “你们都太天真了!哼哼,根据我的眼力,店长其实是在怀疑,自己是不是怀孕了!”这是扯淡向的。 Who was pregnant?” Ice-cold sound sound in internal channel. “谁怀孕了?”冰冷的声音响在内部频道里。 A male staff of self-satisfied expression speech stiffens instantaneously, other people look neatly to him, looked at his mouth the telephone conversation wheat that forgets to close, then neatly twists open to go, pretends anything not to know that does not know this idiot appearance. 一副得意表情说话的男员工瞬间僵住,其他人齐刷刷看向他,看了看他嘴边忘记关上的通话麦,然后再齐刷刷地扭开头去,装作什么都不知道也不认识这个笨蛋的样子。 Katou, deducts the wages to kneel down to apologize, yourself elect.” 加藤,扣工资还是下跪谢罪,你自己选。” Sorry!! Shopkeeper forgives Ahhh “对不起!!店长饶命啊啊啊 Hears the dessert shop whole staff who such compels to wail funny: ............ 听到此等逗逼哀嚎的甜品店全员:“…………” Being up to mischief of latter kitchen?” Seiji has adjusted earphone position, sighed. “后厨的搞什么鬼?”晴司调整了一下耳机位置,叹道。 Saa, god knows.” Tanaka that passed by also expressed puzzled. “撒,天知道。”路过的田中也表示不解。 After the busy time passes by, finally can rest. 忙碌时间过去后,终于可以休息。 Seiji comes to the Shopkeeper room again, saw that Amami Rika was still reading the book. 晴司再次来到店长室,见到天海莉香仍然在看本子。 Harano-kun...... Come.” 原野君……来啦。” Realized that youngster enters the room, Rika raised the head, smile. 察觉到少年进房间,莉香抬起头来,微笑。 Your works, is quite good.” She makes positive appraisal straightforwardly. “你的作品,相当不错哦。”她直截了当地做出积极的评价。 As ordinary reader, this is light novel that is worth me buying.” “作为普通读者来看,这是一部值得我花钱去买的轻小说。” Seiji hears so comments, naturally feels happy. 晴司听到如此评论,自然感到开心。 „The commendation of thanks Shopkeeper, works can obtain the approval of Shopkeeper, I'm very happy.” 谢谢店长的称赞,作品能得到店长的认可,我很高兴。” Amami Rika smiled charmingly. 天海莉香微笑得更妩媚了一丝。 My also very much happy can become your first reader, Harano...... Haruta-kun.” “我也很高兴能成为你第一位读者,原野……春田君。” „After reading off your novel, overall, is most profound to this novel impression, is the writing.” “读完你的小说后,整体而言,对这部小说印象最深刻的,是文字。” Your description, your narration, writes very well, is I have read in the middle of light novel is best...... No, said insufficiently also! After all I have looked at light novel are not many.” “你的描写,你的叙述,都写得非常好,是我所读过的轻小说当中最好的……不,这么说还不够!毕竟我看过的轻小说不算多。” Your works writing, is good...... Let me in reading, in the brain can imagine naturally leaves pictures, and these pictures will move! As if they show before me...... Probably I am not am reading actually, but is looking at anime to be the same!” “你作品的文字,好到……让我在看书的时候,脑子里自然而然就能想象出一幕幕的画面,并且这些画面都是会动的!仿佛它们就展现在我面前……好像我其实不是在看书,而是在看动画一样!” Rika acclaimed heartfeltly. 莉香由衷地赞叹。 So outstanding, lets writing that I cannot even bear read repeatedly, you affirmed that polished was very long? Can feel simply tremendous enthusiasm of implication ~ “如此优秀,让我甚至忍不住反复阅读的文字,你肯定打磨了很久吧?简直能够感受到其中蕴含的极大热情呢~ Seiji smiles silently. 晴司默默微笑。 Enthusiasm some, but writes this short story novel also on evening's time...... Is this do not say is quite good? 热情是有的啦,不过写这本短篇小说也就一个晚上的时间而已……这还是不要说出来比较好吧? Yeah, good compels not to install well. 哎,太牛的逼不好装啊。 Besides the writing, your story and character is also good, but my story is not deep, this aspect did not have no comment.” “除了文字之外,你的故事和人物也都不错,不过我阅历并不深,这方面就不多评论了。” I help you relate the understanding now that edit(or), she is responsible for female editor of Mayuzumi's works novel version, is a very good person.” “我现在就帮你联系认识的那位编辑,她是负责黛的作品小说版的女编辑,是一个很不错的人。” Amami Rika puts out cell phone, has dialed a number. 天海莉香拿出手机,拨了一个号码。 Hey, hello/you good, Yoshizawa-san.” “喂,你好,吉泽小姐。” Excuse me, at this time disturbed you, here a little matter, concrete was such......” “不好意思,这个时候打扰你,这边有点事情,具体是这样的……” Rika explained the request with the succinct sprightly words. 莉香用简洁明快的话语说明了请求。 „Has Mayuzumi raised him with you? Right, is this high school student.” 跟你提过他?对,就是这位高中生。” „Do you immediately come? Un, he in shop...... I think that he does not have the issue.” Rika looked at Seiji one. “你马上就过来?嗯,他是在店里……我想他没问题的。”莉香看了晴司一眼。 Good, this.” “好,就这样。” beautiful Shopkeeper has hung up the telephone. 美女店长挂断了电话。 You heard, Haruta-kun? That edit(or) comes to here immediately, comes to see your works...... As well as you.” “你听到了吧,春田君?那位编辑马上就来这里,来看你的作品……以及你这个人。” Seiji nodded. 晴司点点头 Is Honey Peach-sensei has raised me with her?” “是水蜜桃老师跟她提过我吧?” that's right, Mayuzumi must tell her with your date matter.” Rika sighed. 没错,把要和你约会的事告诉了她。”莉香叹道。 Naturally, Mayuzumi had not said that casually your real name, only said that must ask the Harano Seigo's Motohana Middle School first year male student to stroll together School Festival with one.” “当然,没随便说你的真名,只说了要跟一个叫原野清吾的元华中学高一男生逛一起学园祭。” That besides my real name, other said!” “那就是除了我的真名外,其他都说了嘛!” Yes...... Does not have the means that she is the schoolmate of Mayuzumi high school time, is one of the Mayuzumi trust few friends, Mayuzumi told this matter, was very natural behavior.” “是呢……没办法,她是高中时期的同学,是信任的极少数友人之一,把这件事告诉她,是很自然的行为。” Seiji nods once again. 晴司再度点头。 „Should you not mind?” Rika blinked. “你应该不会介意吧?”莉香眨了眨眼。 Naturally, this is not the important secret.” “当然,这又不是什么要紧的秘密。” Is this, because Mayuzumi told this matter, causes her some appearances to your caring......” “是这样,可是因为跟她说了这事,导致她对你有些在意的样子……” A subtle silence. 一阵微妙的沉默。 I asked for the time being, this Yoshizawa-san......” Seiji has pulled the corners of the mouth, should not be...... That side person?” “我姑且问一下,这位吉泽小姐……”晴司扯了扯嘴角,“该不会是……那边的人吧?” Not.” Rika understood obviously the suggestion of youngster, the forced smile said. “不是哦。”莉香显然理解少年的暗示,苦笑道。 She is not that person, but, should say that is the high school time and Mayuzumi are together has formed deep emotion, is other any reasons...... In brief, she has a little to Mayuzumi, special regards......?” “她不是那种人,不过,该说是高中时期和相处的时候形成了深厚感情,还是其他的什么原因……总之,她对有那么一点,特殊的看待……吧?” Is this very indefinite expression what kind of? 这种很不确定的语气是怎样? Sees the Seiji's look, Rika as if realized that youngster in ridicules in the heart, slightly awkwardly has been coughing under. 见到晴司的眼神,莉香似乎意识到少年正在心里吐槽,略尴尬地咳嗽了下。 In any case, this came, you can see her quickly.” “反正,她这就过来了,你很快就能见到她。” She is good edit(or), no matter what, will appraise your works right...... Probably.” “她是一个好编辑,不管怎样,都会正当评价你的作品的……大概。” The letting person who your this said is a little with trepidation big sis! 你这说的让人有点提心吊胆啊大姐 Seiji suddenly a little thought that making Lady Boss help to introduce edit(or), probably isn't a great idea? 晴司突然有点觉得,让老板娘帮忙介绍编辑,好像不是一个好主意? Ok, does not want to be too many, saw that the person looks again. 算了,不想太多,见到人再看吧。 Approximately after one hour. 约一个多小时之后。 Seiji was called the Shopkeeper room again, saw that inside strange beautiful woman is sitting on the sofa, glances through his book. 晴司再被叫去店长室,到了后,见到里面一位陌生美女正坐在沙发上,翻阅他的本子。 This beautiful appearance female wears the yellow continually clothes short skirt attire, the figure is symmetrical, on the long leg wears the skin skin color silk stockings, a bright orange long hair grips the beautiful long pigtail, the eyebrow is slightly thick, the chin is slightly sharp, ruddy lip sips, the eye pupil of deep yellow is passing sharp brilliance slightly. 这美貌女子身穿黄色连衣短裙装,身段匀称,长腿上穿皮肤色的丝袜,一头亮橙色长发扎成美丽的长辫,眉毛略浓,下巴略尖,红润的嘴唇微微抿着,深黄色的眼眸透着一丝锐利光芒 To the feeling of person, is elegantly beautiful elegant young career womons, faint sends out sharp aura. 给人的感觉,是一位冷艳秀美的年轻职业女性,隐隐中散发出一种犀利气息 You good......” Seiji to open the mouth to be just about to send regards. “你好……”晴司开口正要问候。 Suddenly the female one raised the head, looks by the sharp look to his face. 突然女子刷地一下抬起头来,以锐利的眼神看向他的脸庞。 „Are you Harano Seigo?” “你就是原野清吾?”
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