A night of dawn.
一夜天明。„Yeah...... How did the skyshine?”
“哎……天怎么亮了?”Seijigets back one's composurefrom the fantasy, discoveredfiercelythatout of the windowhas illuminatedentersearly morningsunlight.晴司从幻想中回神,猛地发现,窗外已经照进清晨的阳光。Helooked atnexttimehastily.
他连忙看了一下时间。motherfucker, has written a nightunexpectedly!?Mb,居然写了一个通宵!?He who the whole facecompelsignoranthas a look atoneselffrontbookagain, originally a thickbignotebook, nowonlyremainingabout3-4page.
满脸懵逼的他再看看自己面前的本子,原本厚厚的一大个笔记本,现在只剩下了三四页左右。Toofascinated......
太入迷了啊……Although the pointelected„to write the Writingimpulsion that novel”motioncaused is also a reason, butonbasicbecauseSeijiwallowedin the pleasant sensation of creation, wrote the basis unable to stop.
虽然点选了“写小说”行动导致的写作冲动也是一个原因,但基本上还是由于晴司沉迷于创作的快感中,写得根本停不下来。„Stops.”Heputs down the pen, stretched oneself.
“到此为止吧。”他放下笔,伸了个懒腰。Then, hetakes up the book, starts a speed readingnight of creationachievement.
然后,他拿起本子,开始快速阅读自己一夜的创作成果。„...... It is not wonderful.”
“……不妙啊。”Seijiwatches, has liftedeyebrowgradually.晴司看着,渐渐抬起了眉毛。„Really...... It is not very wonderful.”
“真的……很不妙啊。”Heturns the page the speed, is getting quicker and quicker.
他翻页的速度,越来越快。„Very...... It is not wonderful.”
“非常地……不妙啊。”eyeskeepsrotating, keepslooking.眼睛不停地转动,不停地看。Finally, glanced overfinally.
最终,浏览到了最后。„”, Seijicloses the book.
“啪”地一下,晴司合上本子。„These...... IsIwritesreally?”
“这些……真的都是我写的?”Herepresses the innermost feelingsvigorouslyexcitement.
他极力地按捺内心的激动。
If not suppressdiligently, perhapshewill, be excitedto shout loudly.
如果不努力压制的话,他恐怕会,激动得大喊大叫起来。Because, thisnovelwrites...... UltraattractiveAhhh
因为,这小说写得……超好看的啊啊啊Seijiputs down the book, set outto jumpfiercely, turned a backward somersault, has madevictoryposture in the dragonOagain!晴司放下本子,起身猛地一跳,翻了个后空翻,再做了个龙O里的胜利姿势!
!!
耶!!
At heart, himmakes an effortto cry out.
在心里,他用力地呐喊。ThisSeijiat firstcreationlight novel...... short story, gives a namefor„I'll Die If I Don't Become Handsome!”.
这本晴司最初创作的轻小说……短篇,起名为“不变成帅哥就会死!”。Whatnarratedwasonehadwarm-blooded, butwas attacked after brutallydegenerated, degenerates intootakuyoungster, some daywill be taken possessionbystrangely the ghost, is forced to become a handsome fellow, story that otherwisecandie.
讲述的是一个曾经有过热血,但遭到残酷打击后堕落,沦为废宅的少年,某天遭到奇怪的鬼魂附身,被迫要成为一个帅哥,否则就会死掉的故事。Onlylooks atthese words, will think that thisworksisstrangein additionpursues a goal with determination, butactually is the King's Wayfight of evilwartolaunching.
光看这句话,会觉得这部作品是灵异加励志,但其实里面是正邪大战的王道战斗向展开。From the beginningmain characterunder the threat of mysteriousghost, has todo the matter that violatesoneselfwish, walks out of the door, loses weightdiligently, Study, etc., towardbecoming the goal of handsome fellowsets out.
一开始主角是迫于神秘鬼魂的威胁,不得不去做违反自己意愿的事,走出家门,努力减肥、学习等,朝着成为帅哥的目标进发。Part ofanticipationsmainlylie in the contrasts that the male leadinnermost feelingsandsurfacemove, hedispiritedpassiveinnermost feelingsall kindscursed angrilywithridiculekeep, butin the practical actionactuallyhas tounder the threat of ghost, displaypositively, sunlight, evenwasjust, unknowinglyobtainedseveralbishoujo(s)favorable impressions.
这一部分的看点主要在于男主内心与表面行动的反差,他颓废消极的内心万般怒骂和吐槽个不停,但实际行动上却不得不迫于鬼魂的威胁,表现得非常积极、阳光,甚至是正义,不知不觉获得数个美少女的好感。Then, obtains the repayment and care of bishoujo(s)inmale lead, thuswas moved, finallystartsto face up toowntimeearnestly, the plotdevelops rapidly after a sudden turn.
然后,就在男主得到美少女们的回报和关心,从而受到感动,终于认真地开始正视自己的时候,剧情急转直下。
The strangevillainappears, injuresinhisfronthad caredhisfriends from childhood, ghosthas entrusted withhisformidablemysteriousstrengthfortunatelytemporarily, repels the villain.
诡异的反派出现,就在他的面前伤害一直关心他的青梅竹马,幸而身上鬼魂临时赋予了他强大的神秘力量,将反派击退。Then the ghosttomale leadrecounted that ownstatusandhas the significance, whymustfightwith the villainand so on.
然后鬼魂对男主述说自己的身份和存在意义,为何要跟反派战斗云云。Itneeds the help of main character, needsmain characterbecomesoutward appearancehandsome, the innermost feelings are also full of the energy the handsome fellow, canrepel the evil forces that is goingto arrive at, protectssideland.
它需要主角的帮助,需要主角成为一个外表帅气,内心也充满正能量的真之帅哥,才能击退将要到来的邪恶势力,守护一方土地。Under the huge the risk of pressureanddeath, main characterhas chosenescape, withdrawsis not willingto exitinownroom, the disappointedghosthas togive uphim, meets the enemybyfrailspirit body.
在巨大的压力和死亡的风险之下,主角选择了逃避,龟缩在自己房间怎么也不愿意出去,失望透顶的鬼魂不得不放弃了他,以脆弱的灵体去迎战来敌。Finally the time, male leadis aroused the recollectionby the gift that friends from childhooddelivered, has rememberedpassingthatwarm-blooded, believedjust.
最后时刻,男主被青梅竹马送的礼物激起了回忆,想起了过往那个热血的,坚信正义的自己。„Even ifwill diereally...... Again!?”
“哪怕真的会死……又如何!?”„Is livingasWaste, might as well, as a genuinehandsome fellow, goes todeadAhh”
“作为废物活着,还不如,作为一个真正的帅哥,去死啊啊”Harboredsuchconsciousness, male leadrushed to the battlefield.
怀着这样的觉悟,男主赶赴了战场。Meetswith the ghost, after oneexplodesplants the warm-bloodedfierce combat of transformation, finallyhas defeated the villain, saved the life of friends from childhood.
与鬼魂会合,一番爆种变身的热血激战后,终于击败了反派,救下了青梅竹马的性命。
The friends from childhoodwake up, returned to the original condition, he of being scarredcriesveryugly, tearsandnasal mucuscrossflow, but also is keepingapologizing.
青梅竹马醒来的时候,已经恢复原状的,伤痕累累的他哭得非常难看,眼泪和鼻涕横流,还在不停地道歉。Althoughlost the consciousness, butdarkfelt that hadanything'syoung girl, touches the face of male leadgently.
虽然失去了意识,但冥冥中感觉到发生了什么的少女,温柔地抚摸男主的脸。„Presentyou, were really explodeugly...... Shranktimeat homecompared withbefore, but also was ugly.”
“现在的你,真是难看爆了……比以前缩在家里的时候,还要难看。”„But, Ithoughtthatpresentyou, suchyou, areIhave seen...... Most gracefulmale student!”
“但是,我偏偏就是觉得,现在的你,这样的你,是我看到过的……最帅的男生!”
The novelstoppedinthese words.
小说就停在了这一句话上。Underbold handwriting vigorous style of Seijisharp, some cliché, variousridicule and dwellingsto the warm-bloodedshort storystory of stemrun all over the place, highlighted the richcharmKing's Wayelementcompletely.
在晴司犀利的笔力之下,这个有些老套,各种吐槽和宅向梗满天飞的热血短篇故事,完完全全凸显出了富有魅力的王道元素。Starts the part, dispirited and unwillingness of main character, the ghostrampantwithcute, the interest that the contrast of main characterinnermost feelingsandbehaviorcauses, all kinds ofbishoujo(s), describedextremelyvividly, was passingfullyhumorouswithsprouting.
开始部分,主角的颓废与不甘,鬼魂的嚣张与可爱,主角内心和行为的反差导致的趣味,各式各样的美少女,都描写得极为生动,透着十足的幽默与萌点。Afterward the part, evil and strangeness of villain, the brutalfearfulmanner, main characterfelt that the fearwithfeeling inferior the causednegativityanddispirited, with the friends from childhoodpassinggloriousmemory, rose spiritedlywarm-blooded of fighting, at risk of lifemagnificent scene of fierce combat, after as well asvictoryrelieved, lamentedandis moved...... Byextremelyappropriatebrushwork, incisiveness of description!
后来部分,则将反派的邪恶与诡异,残酷可怕的举止,主角感到恐惧与自卑所导致的消极与颓废,与青梅竹马过往的美好回忆,奋起战斗的热血,拼死激战的大场面,以及胜利后的安心、悔恨、感动……都以极为贴切的笔触,描写的淋漓尽致!Thisisoutstandingworks.
这是一部优秀的作品。At least, looks likeinSeiji, thisisonecanmakehimlookthatwill smileandbe anxiouson the way, finallya littlewill be affected, looked, does not haveanynegativemood, splendidlight novel!
至少,在晴司自己看来,这是一部能让他一口气看完,途中会笑、会紧张,最后会有点感动,看完后没有任何负面情绪的,出色的轻小说!Except that the number of wordsare too few...... Thereforeisshort story.
除了字数太少……所以是短篇嘛。In brief, thisnoveloutstandingcannotbelievetohimthatthisis the thing that hewritespersonally.
总之,这部小说优秀到他自己都不敢相信,这是他亲手写出来的东西。Moreoverhas spent merely onlytime of night!
而且仅仅只花了一个通宵的时间!Seijiis feeling the excitement of innermost feelings, slowly, graduallywas calmed downbyoneself.晴司感受着内心的激动,慢慢地,才让自己渐渐冷静下来。
To submit a piece of writingvery muchimmediately...... Butmustinput the computerfirst, makes into the documents, thenprints.
很想马上投稿……但要先录入电脑,弄成文档,然后打印出来。
After the input, sends towebsiteto come up?
或者,录入后,发到网站上去?Good, how only need submit a piece of writing, needsto consider.
好吧,光是要怎么投稿,就需要考虑一下。Seijilooked at the time, shouldprepareto work.晴司看了看时间,该准备去打工了。Right, works...... Hehas thought ofLady BossAmami Rika, as well asHoney Peach-senseiAmami Mayuzumi.
对了,打工……他想到了老板娘天海莉香,以及水蜜桃老师天海黛。AlthoughHoney Peach-senseiismangaka, butlight novelandmangarelateclosely, is the neighboringfield, does not know that shecangive the suggestion?水蜜桃老师虽然是漫画家,但轻小说与漫画联系密切,算是相邻的业界吧,不知道她能不能给与些建议呢?
The teacher is very busy, thenaskedfirstLady Bosswas good, the latterpossiblyalsoknowssomesituations.
也许老师很忙,那么先问一下老板娘好了,后者可能也知道一些情况。Seijithinksthatdecidedtakes awaydessert shop the book...... Naturally, musttear down the diaryfirstthatpart.晴司想了想,决定把本子带去甜品店……当然,得先撕下日记的那部分。IfcanmakeHoney Peach-senseiseewere good, althoughshehasandrophobia, but the novelshouldnot have the issue?
如果能让水蜜桃老师看到就好了,虽然她有男性恐惧症,但小说应该没问题的吧?currently popularmangakais possibly busy, thereforeSeijihas not huggedtooin a big wayanticipated.当红漫画家可能非常忙,因此晴司没抱太大期待。
......
……Divine Sweets Dessert Shop.神味甜品店。
After Seijiarrives in the shop, moves toward the Shopkeeperroomdirectly, had foundLady Boss.晴司到店里后,径直走向店长室,找到了老板娘。„good morning, Haruta...... Harano-kun, youcome tohere, whatmatterhas?”Amami Rikalookstoyoungster, winkedeyes.
“早安,春田……原野君,你来这里,有什么事吗?”天海莉香看向少年,眨了眨眼睛。„good morning, Shopkeeper.” The Seijismilegreeted.
“早安,店长。”晴司微笑打招呼。„Actuallyisthis, Ihave writtenshort storylight novel, is wantingto submit a piece of writing......”
“其实是这样的,我写了一部短篇轻小说,正想要投稿……”Heexplained the matter, the book on handdemonstrated that looksto the opposite party.
他将事情说明了一下,将手上的本子展示给对方看。light novel?轻小说?Amami Rikawascurious.天海莉香感到了好奇。Sheknows that Seijiisotaku, butspends and creationis the completelydifferenttwomatters, was not the expensemustbe many, can createability.
她知道晴司是宅男,但是消费和创作是完全不同的两件事,并不是消费得多了,就能拥有创作能力。Naturally, animelooked, wantingoneselfto create the story, was very naturalmatter, in factthiswas the firststep that manyauthormoststarted.
当然,动漫看多了,想要自己创作故事,也是很自然的事,实际上这就是很多作者最开始的第一步。However, likesandimpulsesis not equal to the abilitycompletely, butcan a smallpart, is wantingto step into the brutalfielddepending onthese, isnaive.
但是,喜好和冲动不完全等于才能,只是才能的一小部分而已,光凭着这些就想踏入残酷的业界,是一种天真。Amami Rikadid not think that Haruta Seijiis a naivemale student.天海莉香不觉得春田晴司是个天真的男生。works that the opposite partysinceritywantsto submit a piece of writing, shouldnot be the roughwork of being prompted by a sudden impulse, otherwisehe, as soon asclosed/pass.
对方真心想要投稿的作品,应该不是心血来潮的粗糙之作,否则他自己一关就过不了吧。Isacts seriously the workswords...... Thatmadepeoplefeelcuriously.
是动真格的作品的话……那就让人感到好奇了。„I, althoughis notthatfieldperson, butwas togetherwithMayuzumifor a long time, manyknew a matter.”
“我虽然不是那个业界的人,但与黛相处久了,也多少知道点事情。”„Words that youwant, Icanintroducegoodedit(or)toyou, butbefore then, can Ihave a look atyourworks?”
“你想要的话,我可以给你介绍一个好编辑,但在此之前,我能看看你的作品吗?”
The Amami Rikasmilesaid.天海莉香微笑说道。
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