„ Sheleft, butagreedwithmale leadmetagain.
“她离开了,但和男主约定了再见面。
”
”„Un...... Generally speaking is also the classicalplot, mustsuchwriteyes, butis similar to the first female leadplot, felt that does not suffice.”Seijitouches the chin.
“嗯……总的来说也是经典剧情,要这么写是可以,但是跟第一女主的剧情类似,感觉不太够。”晴司摸了摸下巴。„Ithought that canwork hardindetail, male lead and female leadearlier periodis an enemy, shouldbe ableto writemanyinterestingplots.”Yukarisaid.
“我觉得可以在细节方面多下功夫,男主和女主前期是对头,应该可以写出不少有趣的情节。”紫姬说道。„The transformation of two peoplemoodshoulddescribeemphatically, fromdislikestomutuallybecoming the friend, arrives at the awakenloveheartagain, butlikesbeing at heart difficultto openin the mouth, untileruptsfinally! Does not give a thought to the vision of otherpeopleat the airport......”
“两人心情的转变应着重描写,从互相讨厌到成为朋友,再到觉醒恋心,但又爱在心里口难开,直至最后爆发出来!在机场不顾其他人的目光……”cough cough, heremergency brake.咳咳,她紧急刹车。„Overallplot, althoughis the convention, but if writes the detail, Ithink that will be will be very interesting.”
“总体剧情虽然是俗套的,但要是写好细节,我认为还是会很有趣的。”„ThissayingIapprove. Howevermustwritewhat kind ofdetailspecifically, was quite difficultto think, whatidea did youhave?”
“这话我赞同。然而具体要写怎样的细节,就比较难想了,你对此有什么点子吗?”„Has! Ithink that cansuchwrite......”
“有的!我认为可以这么写……”YukariandSeijicontinuediscuss, talkedveryhappily.紫姬和晴司持续讨论,交谈得很愉快。Kagura Shikahas looked calmly on, except fordrinking teato eat the dessert, addsoutside the teatotwo people, withoutanyunnecessarymovement.神乐诗一直静静旁观,除了喝茶吃点心,给两人添茶水外,没有任何多余的动作。Yukariseeminglyunknowinglyhas neglectedher, butin factalsohas been paying attention toher.紫姬貌似不知不觉把她忽略了,但实际上也一直注意着她。Seesherinsidewatches, the meaning of not having interrupted, has not spokena few words.
见到她就只是在旁看着,没有插嘴的意思,没说一句话。Thisdoes not suitobviously.
这显然不太对劲。Does not hopeherto interrupt, butwasshewas too peaceful, looked onindifferently, simplylikelywas......
不是希望她插嘴,而是她太安静了,冷漠地旁观,简直像是……
Does makepeoplefeelunluckyKuroneko (Black Cat)?
一只让人感觉不祥的黑猫?Yukaridoes not know how shoulddescribethissubtlefeelingclearly.紫姬不知道该如何清楚地形容这种微妙的感觉。OppositeSeigo, except that whenthisadopted sisteradds the teaexpresses the gratitudetoitssmile, has not madeanything, thisdoes not conform tohisattitude.
对面的清吾,除了在这位义妹添茶的时候向其微笑表示谢意,也没多做什么,这不太符合他的作风。Properly speaking, heshouldmanyhertell that severalwordsare right, howeverdoes not have...... Thisistheirbeing togetherways.
按理来说,他应该多少跟她说几句话才对,然而没有……这就是他们的相处方式吧。In brief, is very strange.
总之,挺奇怪的。
......
……Chattedveryjoyfully, Yukariwantsto chatlike this, buthad a look at the time, was similar.
聊得很快乐,紫姬想这样一直聊下去,但是看看时间,已经差不多了。„Ihave a gift to give toyou.”
“我有份礼物想送给你。”Shetakes uponeselfbag, takes out a packingsimple and elegantgift boxfrominside.
她拿起自己的袋子,从里面取出一个包装素雅的礼盒。„WishesWinter Snow Festivaljoyful, Seigo.”
“预祝冬雪节快乐,清吾。”Saying, shegives the opposite party the gift.
说着,她将礼物递给对方。„thanks.”Seijiaccepts the gift box, „has not preparedtoyourgift, excuse me, Ilaterwill return a courtesy.”
“谢谢。”晴司收下礼盒,“没准备给你的礼物,不好意思,我之后会回礼的。”„Has not related.”purple-hairedyoung girlsaid with a smile, „youropenscame to see, hopes that youwill like.”
“没关系。”紫发少女微笑道,“你打开来看看吧,希望你会喜欢。”„Iam impolite.”
“那我就不客气了。”Seijidisassembles the gift box, in seesis a prettynotebook, as well as a silverfountain pen.晴司将礼盒拆开,见到里面是一个漂亮的笔记本,以及一支银色的钢笔。„Wishyou to writebetternovelworks.”Yukarisaid.
“愿你能写出更多更好的小说作品。”紫姬说道。„The thankswish, thisgiftvery happy, Ilike.”Seijitakes the notebook and fountain pen, saidheartfeltly.
“谢谢祝愿,这份礼物很好,我喜欢。”晴司拿起笔记本和钢笔,由衷说道。YukarilooksagaintoKagura Shika.紫姬再看向神乐诗。„A giftwantsto giveKagura-san.”Sheputs outanotherpackingto result in the cutegift boxfrom the bag.
“还有份礼物想送给神乐小姐。”她从袋子里拿出另一个包装得可爱的礼盒。„WishesWinter Snow Festivaljoyful.”Has handed over.
“预祝冬雪节快乐。”递了过去。„...... thanks.”black-hairedyoung girlaccepted.
“……谢谢。”黑发少女收下了。Sees the opposite partyexpressionnot to change, Yukarilacks self-confidenceat heart.
见对方表情没有丝毫变化,紫姬心里没底。
After listening to the Wakabainformation, shestillhesitatedwas very long, finallydecided that deliversonesmallgiftoneto sproutcatdollbased on the courtesy. As the gift of female studentgivingnot knowing well, thisischoicewithout bias and without favor.
听了若叶的情报后,她仍然犹豫了挺久,才最终决定基于礼数送一份小礼物一个萌猫玩偶。作为送给不熟识的女生的礼物,这是不偏不倚的选择。Kagura Shikais indifferent, butis not a badchild. Thisis the Wakaba Chiaki'sappraisal.神乐诗性格冷漠,但不是一个坏孩子。这是若叶千秋的评价。CanbecomeHarano Seigo'sadopted sister, attaches great importance toforhim, definitelyis not the badfemale student, regardingother people'sgood intentions, shouldbe able the correct understanding. Yukarithinks.
能成为原野清吾的义妹,为他所重视,肯定不是坏女生,对于他人的善意,应该是能够正确理解的。紫姬这么认为。Givesher the gift, shouldnot create the counter-effect...... Howeversuperficiallydoes not come out, is hardto determine.
送她礼物,应该不会造成反效果……然而表面上看不出来,难以确定。Sincedelivered, were not manythinks.
既然送出去了,就不多想了吧。Yukarirealizedsincerelyoneselfare hardto deal withsuchfemale student.紫姬深切意识到自己难以应对这样的女生。
To maintain the relationswithKagura Shika, butdoes not knowhowcompletelyshoulddo.
想要跟神乐诗搞好关系,但完全不知道该怎么做。
The wordssaid that Seigoisbecomesadopted brother and sisterwithsuchfemale student? What happened? Whycan'tsay?
话说清吾到底是怎么和这样的女生成为义兄妹的?发生了什么事情?为什么不能说呢?Yukarireallycurious, butalsoclearlyknows that nowshould notgo into seriously, will otherwise annoyto dislike. Later the relationswithSeigowas more intimate, naturallycanknow.紫姬真的好奇,但也清楚知道现时不该深究,否则会惹来反感。以后跟清吾的关系更亲密了,自然就能够得知吧。Again after a while, Yukarisaid goodbyeto leave, Seijideliveredherto go out.
再过了一会后,紫姬告辞离开,晴司送她出门。Shikatook the giftto go backroom.小诗拿着礼物回去了房间。
After Seijireturns to the room, brings back to the room the gift, thenopensSystem, examines„Gifts”.晴司返回屋内后,也把礼物带回房间,然后打开系统,查看“礼品”。pastries that Yukarideliverswhatbringsis10Exchange Points, but the notebook and fountain penare紫姬送的糕点带来的是10兑换点数,而笔记本和钢笔则是Writing Promotion Card„Emotion of Wishing”写作提升卡“祝愿之情”this cardcontainspurple-hairedyoung girlto wishhimto writeemotion. After the use, „Writing”classifies the attributespermanentpromotion, attributesis lower, the promotionvalueis bigger.此卡蕴含紫发少女祝愿他写出更的感情。使用后,“写作”分类属性值永久提升,属性值越低,提升值越大。Drawing Promotion Card„Heart of Love”绘画提升卡“爱恋之心”this cardcontainsYukari'sto be in love withemotion. After the use, „Drawing”classifies the attributespermanentpromotion, attributesis lower, the promotionvalueis bigger.此卡蕴含紫姬的爱恋感情。使用后,“绘画”分类属性值永久提升,属性值越低,提升值越大。Direction Indicating Card„Emotion of Loneliness”方位指示卡“寂寞之情”this cardcontainsYukari unable inWinter Snow Festivalwithlonelyemotion that hespends together. After the use, canassignFavorability over 65character, immediatelyknowsitsin the position.此卡蕴含紫姬在冬雪节不能与他一起共度的寂寞感情。使用后,可以指定一名好感度65以上的人物,立刻知道其所在位置。Seiji: „............”晴司:“…………”„Heart of Love”and„Emotion of Loneliness”makeshimhave the guilty conscience.
“爱恋之心”和“寂寞之情”让他有种负罪感。Howeverintertwinesnot to have the significance, is gratefulon the intention, useswell.
然而多纠结没意义,就心怀感激,好好地使用吧。„Writing”and„Drawing”classifiesattribute promotion cardimmediatelyto use.
“写作”和“绘画”分类属性提升卡马上就可以用。Direction Indicating Card, seems likequitesubtle, actually the effectis good, when neededcanknowperson who immediatelywantsto findinposition.方位指示卡,看似比较微妙,其实效果挺不错的,在需要的时候可以立刻知道想要找的人所在位置。
After looks, Seijilay downon the bed.
看过后,晴司躺到了床上。Choice„Emotion of Wishing”, the pointchooses„use”.
选择“祝愿之情”,点选“使用”。
The illuminationcardchanges to a twinkle starbrillianceto drill intohisbrains, makinghimfeelwarm...... Falls into the delaycondition.
发光卡片化作一阵星星点点的光芒钻入他的头脑,让他感觉暖暖的……陷入呆滞状态。
After the moment the inducing resuscitation, chooses„Heart of Love”again, the pointchooses„use”.
片刻后醒神,再选择“爱恋之心”,点选“使用”。Understood the samefeeling.
体会到了一样的感觉。Laterlooks atSystemagain, discovered that „Writing”and„Drawing”classifiedattributesto promote the entire15points!
之后再看系统,发现“写作”和“绘画”分类属性值都提升了整整15点!Seijigets out of bed, experimentsto the study room.晴司下床,到书房去进行试验。Writingabilityhadobviouspromotion, the detaildescribedwas more splendid.写作能力有了明显的提升,细节描写更出色了一些。As forDrawingability......
至于绘画能力……His„Fine Arts”attributes, althoughon own initiativehas not promoted, butincoming fromHoney Peach-sensei„Heart of Gratitude”, as well asfromHaruta Yui„Emotion of Delight”underfunction, has surpassed40points.
他的“美术”属性值,虽然没怎么主动提升,但在来自水蜜桃老师的“感谢之心”,以及来自春田唯梦的“欣慰之情”作用下,已经超过了40点。Butnow„Drawing”classifiedvalueone breathhas promoted15points, finallyis...... The drawing that drawsappearedquitegood!
而现在“绘画”分类值一口气提升了15点,结果就是……画出来的图画显得相当不错了!Seijiwatchesdrawgraspsdevil bladeblack-hairedbishoujo(s), eyesshines.晴司看着自己描画的手持妖刀的黑发美少女,眼睛发亮。HedrawsisShika.
他画的就是小诗。WearsKagura Shika of blackwomen's clothingto look at the front, grasps the sheath, draws a sword, blade's edgehas drawn outhalf, glittersbright as snowbrilliance, the bodyslightlyleans forward, as ifimmediatelygoes forwardon the strategic place.
身穿黑色衣裙的神乐诗望着前方,一手握鞘,一手拔刀,刀锋拔出了一半,闪烁雪亮光芒,身体微微前倾,似乎马上就要冲上前去。Withouthonorable personthatpretty, butalsodrawsvery well, at leastcompared withmoststartedis better.
没有真人那么漂亮,但也画得挺好的了,起码远比最开始的时候要好。Showsher.
给她看看吧。Thinksdoes, Seijiknocks the adopted sisterdoor.
想到就做,晴司去敲义妹的房门。
The gateopened.
门开了。„Shika, Itriedto draw a picture, feltalsowell, showedyou.”
“小诗,我试着画了一幅画,感觉还不错,给你看看。”Seeshimto demonstrate the drawing that black-hairedyoung girlstaredin a big wayeyesimmediately.
看到他展示出来的图画,黑发少女顿时瞪大了眼睛。„Thisis...... I?”
“这是……我?”„Un! Youthinkhow is it?”
“嗯!你觉得怎么样?”Shikareceived the picturebook, carefullylooked.小诗接过画本,仔细看了一下。„Good......”
“好棒……”Thispicturecannot say that is good, buthas the movingaesthetic sense, canfeel the regard of painting.
这幅画说不上非常好,但有着动人的美感,能够感受到作画者的心意。„elder brother...... Is this you give myWinter Snow Festivalgift?”
“哥哥……这是你给我的冬雪节礼物吗?”OnKagura Shikafacefloodruddycolor.神乐诗脸上泛起红润颜色。
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