WTDIYAVHLY :: Volume #1

#105: To write the love article


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The Fan Residence study room, He Yun Xiao teaches the writing experience endlessly, Fan Zi is enjoying the small hand weakly secretly by the feeling that the big hand packages. 范府书房,何云霄喋喋不休地传授着写作经验,范梓弱则偷偷享受小手被大手包裹的感觉。 She feels this is not good, while giving up makes He Yun Xiao loosen. 她一边觉得这样不好,一边又舍不得让何云霄松开。 In brain at ferocious struggle. 脑中在激烈的斗争。 Rain responsibility mister the small Chinese catalpa is weak: Fan Zi is weak Fan Zi to be weak, you are the He Yun Xiao teaching mister, how can you so not know the sense of honor? Has own of flesh with the disciple? 雨荷先生小梓弱:范梓弱呀范梓弱,你是何云霄的教书先生,你怎能如此不知廉耻?与弟子有肌肤之亲? Do not think that the small Chinese catalpa is weak: What teaching mister? He Yun Xiao not only teaches you to write a book, and teaches you martial arts, he is a mister. 不要多想小梓弱:什么教书先生?何云霄既教你写书,又教你武功,他才是先生。 Rain: No matter he is a mister, I am a mister, in brief our is a mister, one person is a disciple. Such being the case, between the mister and disciple, need to defend the ritual. 雨:不管他是先生,还是我是先生,总之我们二人一人是先生,一人是弟子。既然如此,先生与弟子之间,是需要守礼的。 No: What ritual defends? 不:守什么礼? Rain: Naturally is the ritual of human relations. Master to revere, how may profane. 雨:自然是人伦之礼。师者为尊,岂可轻慢。 No: You want. He Yun Xiao is only one excited, without paying attention to hold the hand. I also listen to him to speak earnestly, forgot the matter of hand. 不:你想多了。何云霄只是一激动,没注意拉了手而已。我也只是认真听他说话,忘记手的事情了。 Rain: You had not forgotten, you are intentionally. 雨:你没忘记,你是故意的。 No: Do not think, I really forgot. 不:你不要多想,我真忘了。 Rain: You think now, asked him to let go quickly. 雨:你现在想起来了,快叫他松手吧。 No: What thinks? 不:想起来什么? Rain: Hand by drawing. 雨:手被拉着。 Do not think the small Chinese catalpa weak palm of the hand the small Chinese catalpa weak patting flatly rain responsibility mister. 不要多想小梓弱一巴掌把雨荷先生小梓弱给拍扁。 Said angrily: Let you do not think! He Yun Xiao said that he likes the love article. I hold a hand, ahead of time experienced, accumulates the writing experience? What's wrong!!! 气鼓鼓地说:让你不要多想!何云霄都说他喜欢恋爱文。我拉个手,提前体验体验,攒点写作经验怎么了?怎!么!了! ...... …… He Yun Xiao looks that Fan Zi shows expression bitterly weakly, has a scare. 何云霄看着范梓弱露出恨恨的表情,吓了一大跳。 Bad! I a moment ago one excited, how to touch her hand! This bad custom may be intolerable! Her thinks that was hates me...... 糟了!我刚才一激动,怎么又去摸她的手了!这坏习惯可要不得呀!她这想必是怨恨我了…… 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity is 75 范梓弱好感度为75】 He Yun Xiao looked at a good sensitivity hastily, has not fallen luckily downward. 何云霄连忙看了一眼好感度,幸好没有往下掉。 Although the Fan Zi weak good sensitivity not to have fallen, is the good deed, but her good sensitivity card in 75 calories several times, what situation is this? 虽说范梓弱的好感度没掉,是好事,但她的好感度卡在75卡了好几次了,这是什么情况? He Yun Xiao also the first time is came across this matter, suddenly a little cannot feel the mind. 何云霄也是第一次遇到这种事情,一时间有点摸不着头脑。 Fan Zi looks at He Yun Xiao to loosen own hand weakly, at heart inexplicable deserted. Bears forcefully the strange impulsion that the big hand stresses, Fan Zi has to make the topic return to the novel weakly. 范梓弱看着何云霄松开自己的手,心里莫名空落落的。强行忍住去把大手抓回来的奇怪冲动,范梓弱只好让话题重新回归小说上面。 Young master, can the Chinese catalpa also write the love article weakly?” “公子,梓弱也可以写恋爱文吗?” He Yun Xiao just wants saying: You could not write, often did not go out the main house gate, how to write the appointment plot, how to write the love article? How to write , best benefits plot? 何云霄刚想说:你写不了,连家门都不常出去,怎么写约会情节,怎么写恋爱文?怎么写,咳咳,最棒的福利情节啊? But quick, he changes mind thinks. Seemingly very famous love article writer, has not as if been in love. single Lunwang writer, who is not weak with Fan Zi, for a long time treats in home? 但很快,他转念一想。貌似很多挺出名的恋爱文写手,似乎都没谈过恋爱。单论网文写手这块,谁又不是和范梓弱一样,长时间待在家中呢? Quick, He Yun Xiao became aware. 很快,何云霄就悟了。 The genuine love article, can only by not be in love, has not held hands with the female student, not with writer writing that the female student has spoken! 真正的恋爱文,只能由没谈过恋爱,没和女生牵过手,没和女生说过话的写手书写! Why must ask, the female student who because the female students of three dimensions miss two dimensions were too many. 要问为什么,因为三次元的女生差二次元的女生太多了。 The women of three dimensions, how depend upon the fantasy with the author, the person of careful design supposes, compared with illustration of artist careful plan! 三次元的女人,怎么和作者依靠幻想,精心设计的人设,画师精心绘制的插画相比! He Yun Xiao looks that front Fan Zi is weak, looks at this attractively to the miss of violation, the heart shouts passes through long live! Slip of paper person wife, leading lady who only then can present in the novel, because now pass through, therefore lukewarm, meat toot toot, compared with real sits in his front. 何云霄看着面前的范梓弱,看着这个漂亮到犯规的姑娘,心呼穿越万岁!纸片人老婆,只有在小说中才会出现的女主角,现在因为自己穿越,所以温乎乎、肉嘟嘟,比真实更真实地坐在他的面前。 He Yun Xiao looks that Fan Zi said with a smile weakly: Chinese catalpa can certainly write the love article weakly. Not only Ok, but can also write the love article of knight-errant theme.” 何云霄看着范梓弱笑道:“梓弱当然可以写恋爱文啦。不仅可以,还能写武侠题材的恋爱文。” Fan Zi a little gets muddled weakly, said: What is the love article of knight-errant theme?” 范梓弱有点发蒙,道:“什么是武侠题材的恋爱文?” He Yun Xiao said: If a man and a woman are the relations of mutual admire, their goals are to become the martial arts world hegemon, how then the Chinese catalpa will write weakly?” 何云霄道:“假如一男一女是相互爱慕的关系,他们的目标是成为武林盟主,那么梓弱会怎么写?” Fan Zi hesitated weakly the moment, said: I will write, they are the couples.” 范梓弱沉吟了片刻,道:“我会写,他们是夫妻。” He Yun Xiao nods: Right, then.” 何云霄点点头:“对,然后呢。” Then they to compete for the position of martial arts world hegemon, turns into enemies.” “然后他们为了争夺武林盟主之位,反目成仇。” He Yun Xiao:??? 何云霄:??? Man at the back of the wife, practiced the demonic path merit law secretly. Even also liked the profligate demon gate female in secret.” “男人背着妻子,偷偷练习了魔道功法。甚至还暗中喜欢上了放荡的魔门女子。” He Yun Xiao:??? 何云霄:??? He dares unexpectedly at the martial arts contest congress, “他居然敢在比武大会上, Defeats his wife with the method of sneak attack! ” He Yun Xiao:??? 用偷袭的手段打败他的妻子!”何云霄:??? Fortunately, the wife forgave him broadminded.” “还好,妻子宽宏大量原谅了他。” He Yun Xiao relaxes. 何云霄松了口气。 Has not actually thought that Fan Zi said weakly with clenched jaws: But the wife has not thought, the man abandoned her unexpectedly finally, followed being bewitched gate female!” 却没想到范梓弱咬牙切齿地说道:“但妻子没想到,男人居然最后抛弃了她,跟着魔门女子走了!” He Yun Xiao hears this, scratched forehead cold sweat hastily. 何云霄听到这,连忙擦了一把额头冷汗。 Fan Zi continued with clenched jaws weakly: Finally, the female realizes peerless martial arts, gives ten thousand swords this heartless man (Han) through!” 范梓弱继续咬牙切齿地说:“最后,女子练成绝世武功,把这个负心汉给万剑穿心!” He Yun Xiao frightens trembles. This is the third time! Fan Zi weakly is third writing female lord hacks to death male lord the plot! 何云霄吓得一哆嗦。这已经是第三次了!范梓弱已经是第三次写“女主砍死男主”的剧情了! He Yun Xiao asked cautiously: Chinese catalpa is weak, you how always actor writing.” 何云霄小心翼翼地问道:“梓弱,你怎么老是把男主角给写死。” Fan Zi said weakly naturally: His permits others were wholehearted, now likes other woman, is perfidious, throws the family/home to abandon the child, this damn?” 范梓弱理所当然地说:“他原本许了别人要一心一意的,现在又喜欢上别的女人,背信弃义,抛家弃子,这不该死吗?” He Yun Xiao nods again and again: Truly, truly.” 何云霄连连点头:“确实,确实。” Fan Zi looks to keep approving of her He Yun Xiao weakly, was at heart happier, therefore said: If these men have half like the He child, is insufficient to end up the fate.” 范梓弱看着不停赞同她的何云霄,心里开心了些,于是说:“若那些男人有一半像何公子,也不至于落得这样的下场。” Like me? They also like two, I...... 像我?他们也就是喜欢两个,我…… He Yun Xiao referred to digging out the three-bedroom apartment with the foot awkwardly. 何云霄尴尬地用脚指抠出了三室一厅。 He thinks impressively, I must capture/raid her, making her like me, but she, if thinks like this, that Chu Xiaoxiao 2nd? If I do not give up other female lords, to escape by the destiny of blade finally difficultly? 他赫然想到,我得攻略她,让她喜欢我,但她要是这样想的话,那岂不是楚潇潇二号?我若不放弃其他女主的话,岂不是最终难逃被刀的命运? He Yun Xiao is probing asking: Chinese catalpa is weak, male three wife four concubines in Qi, are very many.” 何云霄试探着问道:“梓弱,齐国的男子三妻四妾,也挺多的。” Fan Zi weak say/way: Different.” 范梓弱道:“不一样。” How different?” “怎么不一样?” Three wife four concubine, without has said to whom, is wholehearted.” “三妻四妾者,又没对谁说过,要一心一意。” He Yun Xiao understood what is heard, Fan Zi weak is not cannot accept the little sisters, she like Nanzhu, cannot accept the deceit and betrays He Yun Xiao rejoiced in secret has not deceived her, while in warned itself at heart again and again: Do not pledge to the Chinese catalpa weak miss casually! 何云霄听明白了,范梓弱不是不能接受有小姐妹,她是像南珠一样,不能接受欺骗和背叛何云霄一边暗中庆幸没骗过她,一边在心里连连告诫自己:千万别向梓弱姑娘随便承诺! Is wholehearted this to whom, on the one hand, He Yun Xiao does not dare to go into seriously with Fan Zi weakly. He can only guarantee that heart enough broadness, can hold more possibilities. 对谁一心一意这一方面,何云霄是不敢和范梓弱深究的。他只能保证心胸足够的宽广,容得下更多的可能性。 He Yun Xiao reverses in the topic the novel. 何云霄把话题重新扭转回小说上。 Chinese catalpa is weak, your plots have no issue. But this, was not the love article of knight-errant theme you want to write. Love article, what mainly said is the male and female lord is in love, do not have so many killing.” “梓弱,你这些剧情没什么问题。但这样,就不是你想写的武侠题材的恋爱文了。恋爱文,主要说的是男女主谈恋爱,不要有那么多打打杀杀。” I change your plot.” “我重新改一下你的剧情。” Men and women lord the couple, is actually the newly-married newlyweds. They must attend the martial arts world congress. On road, when the hotel orders food, thing that the discussion each other likes eating. When rides a horse to hurry along, is only riding a horse, slowly walks. hardship...... then meets...... handles the matter that some they like handling once for a while.” “男女主还是夫妻,却是新婚燕尔。他们要去参加武林大会。在路上,会在酒店点菜的时候,讨论彼此爱吃的东西。会在骑马赶路的时候,只乘着一匹马,慢慢走。厄……然后会……时不时做一些他们爱做的事情。” Fan Zi hears here weakly, is somewhat curious, blinks to ask: What is the matter that likes handling?” 范梓弱听到这里,有些好奇,眨眨眼问道:“什么是他们爱做的事情?” He Yun Xiao does not know that today many time falls into the uncomfortable place. 何云霄今天不知第多少次陷入尴尬的境地。 Misjudged, in the ancient times was ill-informed, the young lady of being still unbetrothed simply has not possibly listened to this matter. Generally flow, before getting married, how mother teaches to do. 失算了,古代消息闭塞,待字闺中的大小姐可能根本没听过这种事情。一般流程,都是临出嫁前,母亲去教该如何做的。 Looks at Fan Zi weakly chastely, attractively and curious face, he does not feel all right drives directly, but said ambiguously: Is the matter of men and women.” 看着范梓弱纯洁、漂亮、又好奇的脸庞,他也不太好意思直接开车,只是含糊道:“就是男女之事。” On Fan Zi weak face slightly red, is sipping the lip, with the slender slender finger, referred to own small mouth. 范梓弱脸上微红,抿着嘴唇,用纤细修长的手指,指了指自己的小嘴。 This?” “这样?” The imagination of limit is this degree...... 极限的想象力就是这种程度吗…… The He Yun Xiao nod said: Un , almost.” 何云霄点头道:“嗯,也,差不多吧。” „.” “哦。” Fan Zi is complying weakly, lowered embarrassed. 范梓弱答应着,不好意思地把头低了下去。 In the study room was peaceful for a while, no one has spoken. 书房内一时安静极了,谁也没有说话。
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