Chatsmatter that cannotspeak, Fan Ziweakis the embarrassedagaindrivingopens the mouth, looks for the He Yun Xiaospeech.
聊了不能言说的事情,范梓弱是不好意思再主动开口,找何云霄说话的。Thisdeadlock can only be resolvedbyHe Yun Xiao.
这个僵局只能由何云霄自己打破。„Chinese catalpais weak, youknow how now the lovearticledid write?”
“梓弱,你现在知道恋爱文怎么写了吗?”Fan Ziliftssomeweaklyslightly, said: „Un. Describeddialogue and interaction between the leading actors and actressesprobably. Writesvividlyinterestinglightdaily.”范梓弱稍微把头抬起来一些,道:“嗯。大概是多描绘男女主角之间的对话和互动。把平淡的日常写得生动有趣。”He Yun Xiaoclapsto sayimmediately: „Right! Isthis!”何云霄立刻拍手道:“对!就是这样!”Reallyworthilyis the special skillis„learn/study” the femalelord, thislearning speed was also too exaggerating. So long asindicatedslightly,immediatelycanextrapolate, achieves mastery through a comprehensive study.
真不愧是特长为“学习”的女主,这种学习速度也太夸张了。只要稍一点拨,立刻就能举一反三,融会贯通。PresentFan Ziis weak, has the story that has wantedto write, in order toletsherwrite the story that everyonelikeslooking atsmoothly, He Yun Xiaocontinuesto teach with skill and patience.
现在的范梓弱,已经有了想写的故事,为了能让她顺利写出大家爱看的故事,何云霄继续循循善诱起来。„Chinese catalpais weak. Howto write the lightlifevividlyinteresting?”
“梓弱。如何把平淡的生活写得生动有趣呢?”Fan Zithinksto sayweakly: „Character.”范梓弱想了想道:“人物。”Hears„character”brightlytwocharacters, the eye of He Yun Xiaoimmediatelyone!
听到“人物”二字,何云霄的眼睛顿时一亮!Subsequentlyurgentlyasked: „Specificallysaid why is the character?”
继而急切问道:“具体说说,为什么是人物?”Fan ZiweaklybyHe Yun Xiao„greedy” the visionlooks,somewhatsaidembarrassed: „Becauseis the lovearticle, mosttimeare writing the interaction of leading actor and actress, length that thendefer, majority that the plot of leading actor and actressholds. Because the plot is also eats mealto sleepthese. Therefore, if the leadis interesting, thatstorythinks that will be interesting.”范梓弱被何云霄“贪婪”的目光看着,有些不好意思地说:“因为是恋爱文嘛,大多数时间都是在写男女主角的互动,那么按照的篇幅来说,男女主角的剧情就占有的大部分。因为剧情也不过是吃饭睡觉这些。所以,如果主角本身有趣的话,那故事想必就会有趣了。”If not foris afraidto fall the sensitivityrude.
若不是害怕失态掉好感度。He Yun Xiaowantsto standto decide a casesimplyto exclaim over!何云霄简直想站起来判案叫绝!Talent! Truetalent!
天才!真正的天才!
The shorthalfdouble-hour, has thrown a streetmanyyears of acquiredvaluable experience to wantto understandme!
短短半个时辰,就已经把我扑街多年获得的宝贵经验全都想明白了!This is really......
这真是……This......
这……Wū wū, comparesweaklywithFan Zi, Ireally am a waste......
呜呜呜,和范梓弱比起来,我真是个废物……
Since the goodsensitivityto be high, presentHe Yun Xiaoeasilythencaninspire the Fan Ziweakmood.
自从好感度高起来后,现在的何云霄轻易便能引动范梓弱的情绪。Looksexpression that He Yun Xiaobreaks downsuddenly, Fan Ziweaklyoriginallygoodmood, alsoloses. Shewas afraidisspeaks incorrectlyto causeHe Yun Xiao is not unhappy, probeswas saying: „Young master, weakly the Chinese catalpasaidisn't right?”
看着何云霄突然垮下去的表情,范梓弱原本不错的心情,也随之失落下去。她害怕是自己说错导致何云霄不开心,试探着说:“公子,梓弱说的不对吗?”He Yun Xiaodeniedagain and again: „, Youdid not sayveryright. Ifwantsto add colorto the lightdaily lifeplot, is the personsupposesloses face/shows offis good.”何云霄连连否认道:“不不不,你说得很对。若想给平淡的日常生活剧情增色,就是得人设出彩才行。”„Therefore, you , to write an outstandinglovearticle, is certain the losing face/showing offpeopleto suppose.”
“所以,你如果想写一本出众的恋爱文,一定得有一个出彩的人设。”Fan Zisees the He Yun Xiaomoodto be goodweakly, oneselfthenalsocheer up, shealsoasked the most essentialquestionimmediately: „Thatanythingis‚the person who loses face/shows offsupposes’.”范梓弱见何云霄情绪不错,自己便也高兴起来,她立马又问出了最关键的问题:“那什么是‘出彩的人设’。”Thisissuesaid that difficultto be very difficult, saidsimple was also very simple.
这个问题说难很难,说简单也很简单。He Yun Xiaoexplained: „Canmakeyoufeel,heis the livingperson, thenheis‚the person who loses face/shows offsupposes’. Hemusthave the name, the character, the hobby, the shortcoming, the desirewait/etc.”何云霄解释道:“能让你感觉到,他是活生生的人,那么他就是一个‘出彩的人设’。他要有名字,性格,爱好,缺点,欲望等等。”He Yun Xiaoputs out the manuscript paper, 11enumeratestheseessential factorson the manuscript paper.何云霄拿出稿纸,把这些要素一一列举在稿纸上。„Youfill inthese, thenthispersonsupposedbasicallycompletes.”
“你将这些都填好,那么这个人设就基本完成了。”Gives after the manuscript paper that thisfills upFan Ziis weak, He Yun Xiaohas not been idling, pulls out a newpaper, wrotetheseessential factors, asform that designing the mistresssupposes.
将这填空的稿纸递给范梓弱后,何云霄也没闲着,抽出一张新的纸,又把这些要素写了一遍,作为设计女主人设的表格。
After finishing, He Yun Xiaolooked up the hand-heldwriting brush, knit the browsponderFan Zito be weak, in the heartfeltslightlystably.
写完之后,何云霄抬头看着手持毛笔,皱眉思考的范梓弱,心中稍感安定。Hehe, the Chinese catalpaweakyounger sister, the personsupposesis not goodto write. WantsIto thinkinitially the personsupposesthatmeeting, butscratched open unable to think the scalp.
嘿嘿,梓弱妹妹,人设可不是那么好写的。想当初我想人设那会,可是把头皮都挠破了也想不出来。Fan Ziturns over toweaklyintelligentlyintelligently, but also is „person”incategory. Mostis the outstanding personphoenix, the talent. Compared with the anomaly of itChu Xiaoxiaothis16 -year-old first under heaven, butwas much more realwill get sleepy, just when got out of bedwill be blurry, even ifin the stomachwere loaded with the muchknowledge, may have moreknowledge, wasshedoes not know that for exampleHe Yun Xiaoaspect of knowledgemost widespreadthatkind.范梓弱聪明归聪明,但还属于“人”的范畴之内。最多就是人中龙凤,天才而已。比之楚潇潇这种十六岁天下第一的变态,可真实得多多了会犯困,刚起床时会迷糊,即便肚中装有很多知识,可还有更多知识,是她不知道的,比如何云霄知识面最广泛的那一类。He Yun Xiaolooks that Fan Ziknits the browsweaklyfor a long time, is unsuitableto make noiseto disturb, evenidlesto blowon the papernot the dry/doesink.何云霄看着范梓弱皱眉许久,也不便出声打扰,甚至闲得吹起纸上未干的墨水。Really was too afterward idle, He Yun Xiaothendisguised the studying by oneselfclass, the teacherinspected the studentto do one's assignmentsuch, crossed the hands behind the backto take a stroll, takes a strolltoFan Ziweaklybehind, having a look atherto writeanything.
后来实在太闲了,何云霄便假装自习课,老师视察学生做作业那样,负手溜达,溜达到范梓弱身后,看看她写了什么。Onmanuscript paperonepleasant,
稿纸上一入眼,Thenis the He Yun Xiaodogcrawls the samecharacter written with a writing brush, is smallwith the Fan Ziweakattractiveput flowers in hair on hat, fiercecontrast that forms. He Yun Xiaohad not feltowncharacterhaswhatrelationsugly, now his dogcrawlingcharacterplacesby the Fan Ziweakattractivehandwriting, his reallytoadapproaches the feeling of swan.
便是何云霄狗爬一样的毛笔字,和范梓弱的漂亮簪花小楷,所形成的剧烈对比。何云霄本来还不觉得自己字丑有什么关系,现在他的狗爬字放在范梓弱漂亮的字迹旁边,他真有一种癞蛤蟆傍上天鹅的感觉。
In had the taste.
有内味了。Slightlycrosseshandwritingroughly, He Yun Xiaolookedspecific content that Fan Ziwritesweakly.
略过大体的字迹,何云霄看起范梓弱所写的具体内容来。Plotlocalization: Actors
剧情定位:男主角Name: Xiao He
姓名:肖河Cao!
曹!Thisleadis why surnamed Xiao!
这主角为什么要姓肖啊!He Yun Xiaosees that nowsurname„similar”is illon the physiology.何云霄现在看到姓“肖”就生理不适。„Chinese catalpais weak.”
“梓弱。”Even ifFan Ziis weakis knitting the brows the ponder, He Yun Xiaocould not attend.
即便范梓弱在皱眉思考,何云霄也顾不上了。Fan ZihearsHe Yun Xiaoto callherweakly, immediatelyresponds: „Young masterhow?”范梓弱听到何云霄叫她,立刻回应道:“公子怎么了?”He Yun Xiaois pointing at„Xiao He”, said: „Chinese catalpais weak, can youchange the name of actor.”何云霄指着“肖河”,道:“梓弱,你能不能把男主角的名字换一下。”Fan ZiheardHe Yun Xiaoto sayweakly,smallfaceslightlyred, was cramped.范梓弱听见何云霄这么说,小脸微红,局促起来。
The young masterwill not discover,„Xiao He”actuallytook„He Yun Xiao” the twohomophones.
公子不会发现,“肖河”其实就是取了“何云霄”中的两个同音字吧。Sheaskedafraid: „Whyyoung mastermustreplace......”
她心虚地问:“公子为什么要换掉……”He Yun Xiaorepliedafraid: „Eh...... thisbecause ofme, had read a itself/Benbefore, usedthisname.”何云霄心虚地答道:“额……这个因为我,之前看过一本,也用了这个名字。”Fan Ziis weakly afraid, does not dareto closely examine, compliesto change the namehastily.范梓弱非常心虚,没敢追问下去,连忙答应换名字。Sheuses the writing brushincrossing out„Xiao He”twocharacters, in„Xiao He”sideinscribes„Xiao Yun”.
她用毛笔在划掉“肖河”两个字,在“肖河”的旁边写上“肖云”。He Yun Xiao:......何云霄:……„Xiao Yun”is anything, understoodunderstands.
“肖云”是个什么东西,懂的都懂。He Yun Xiaoquickawkwardlethal, heshiversaid: „Chinese catalpais weak, can wedo not use‚Xiao Yun’, trading a surnameis good?”何云霄已经快尴尬致死了,他颤抖地说:“梓弱,咱们能不能也不要用‘肖云’,换个姓好不好?”Fan Zi is also weakly awkward, sheknows that takes the namewith„Xiao Yun”, might be discovered the clueby the young master, onlywithoutthinking, was discoveredquickly.范梓弱也非常尴尬,她知道用“肖云”作为名字,很可能又会被公子发现端倪,只没想到,这么快就被发现了。„Good. What does the young masterwantto change into?”
“好。公子想换成什么?”„Changes into...... changes into......”
“换成……换成……”He Yun Xiaoknew that is the giving a namewaste, the ancestorswrote, a namemustponder overfor quite a while. Thinkstwo, after without clue, hehas saying: „Haha, I don't know either, in brief should not be surnamed‚similar’well.”何云霄自知是个起名废物,上辈子写的时候,一个名字得琢磨大半天。想了两下,毫无头绪之后,他只好说:“哈哈,我也不知道,总之不要姓‘肖’就好。”Fan Ziweaksay/way„good”, withsetting pen to paper, thinks,thenlooked atHe Yun Xiaosecretly. Slightlyintertwinesat heart, butdecided the mindquickly, thenwrites down„He Xiao”on the paper.范梓弱道“好”,拿着笔,想了想,然后偷瞄了一眼何云霄。心里略有纠结,但很快定了心神,便在纸上写下“何晓”。He Yun Xiao:......何云霄:……He Yun Xiaothoroughis speechless.何云霄已经彻底无语了。Name that „He Xiao”hisancestorsused, nowdo not know that werehow the coincidenceor, unexpectedlyunder the mistake arising out of chance circumstances, were writtenbyFan Ziweakly.
“何晓”正是他上辈子所用的名字,现在不知道是巧合还是怎样,居然阴差阳错之下,被范梓弱写了出来。Hehas corrected the name that Fan Ziis twice weak, thistime was not goodto correctagain.
他已经纠正过两次范梓弱起的名字了,这次却是不好再纠正了。In any casebesideshe himself, no oneknows that He Xiaowashisformername, althoughlookedslightlyhas the illness, butactuallycomparedsurnamed Xiaoongoodmany.
反正除他自己之外,也没人知道何晓是他从前的名字,虽然看起来略有不适,但却比姓肖好上很多。Fan Zihas the selfishnessto askweaklycarefully: „Young master, called‚He Xiao’, Ok?”范梓弱带有私心地小心问道:“公子,叫‘何晓’,可以吗?”HelplessHe Yun Xiaosaid: „Can......”何云霄无奈道:“可以……”
The Fan Ziweakselfishnessworks, is happy: „Good, later‚He Xiao’, wasInewactor.”范梓弱私心得逞,开心道:“好,以后‘何晓’,就是我新中的男主角了。”He Yun Xiaolooked that Fan Ziis weak, for a nameis so happy, detected that is not a little right.何云霄看范梓弱为了一个名字这么开心,发觉有点不对。He is also an author, unavoidablywill have smuggles the smuggled goods the time.
他自己也是作者,难免也会有夹带私货的时候。Fan Ziweakwill not be having any badidea......范梓弱不会在打什么坏主意吧……„Chinese catalpais weak, yourleading ladythinks that whatcalled?”
“梓弱,你女主角想好叫什么了吗?”He Yun Xiaostandsbehind the Fan Ziweakbody.何云霄是站在范梓弱身后侧的。HearsHe Yun Xiaoto asklike this,Fan Ziputs down the writing brushweakly, is leaning the body, raises the face, be with smile on the face, asked forseemssaid: „Young master, the leading ladycalledFan Zi, Ok?”
听到何云霄这样问,范梓弱放下毛笔,侧着身子,扬起脸,面带微笑,讨好似的说:“公子,女主角叫范紫,可以吗?”
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