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Chats matter that cannot speak, Fan Zi weak is the embarrassed again driving opens the mouth, looks for the He Yun Xiao speech. 聊了不能言说的事情,范梓弱是不好意思再主动开口,找何云霄说话的。 This deadlock can only be resolved by He Yun Xiao. 这个僵局只能由何云霄自己打破。 Chinese catalpa is weak, you know how now the love article did write?” “梓弱,你现在知道恋爱文怎么写了吗?” Fan Zi lifts some weakly slightly, said: Un. Described dialogue and interaction between the leading actors and actresses probably. Writes vividly interesting light daily.” 范梓弱稍微把头抬起来一些,道:“嗯。大概是多描绘男女主角之间的对话和互动。把平淡的日常写得生动有趣。” He Yun Xiao claps to say immediately: Right! Is this!” 何云霄立刻拍手道:“对!就是这样!” Really worthily is the special skill is learn/study the female lord, this learning speed was also too exaggerating. So long as indicated slightly, immediately can extrapolate, achieves mastery through a comprehensive study. 真不愧是特长为“学习”的女主,这种学习速度也太夸张了。只要稍一点拨,立刻就能举一反三,融会贯通。 Present Fan Zi is weak, has the story that has wanted to write, in order to lets her write the story that everyone likes looking at smoothly, He Yun Xiao continues to teach with skill and patience. 现在的范梓弱,已经有了想写的故事,为了能让她顺利写出大家爱看的故事,何云霄继续循循善诱起来。 Chinese catalpa is weak. How to write the light life vividly interesting?” “梓弱。如何把平淡的生活写得生动有趣呢?” Fan Zi thinks to say weakly: Character.” 范梓弱想了想道:“人物。” Hears character brightly two characters, the eye of He Yun Xiao immediately one! 听到“人物”二字,何云霄的眼睛顿时一亮! Subsequently urgently asked: Specifically said why is the character?” 继而急切问道:“具体说说,为什么是人物?” Fan Zi weakly by He Yun Xiao greedy the vision looks, somewhat said embarrassed: Because is the love article, most time are writing the interaction of leading actor and actress, length that then defer, majority that the plot of leading actor and actress holds. Because the plot is also eats meal to sleep these. Therefore, if the lead is interesting, that story thinks that will be interesting.” 范梓弱被何云霄“贪婪”的目光看着,有些不好意思地说:“因为是恋爱文嘛,大多数时间都是在写男女主角的互动,那么按照的篇幅来说,男女主角的剧情就占有的大部分。因为剧情也不过是吃饭睡觉这些。所以,如果主角本身有趣的话,那故事想必就会有趣了。” If not for is afraid to fall the sensitivity rude. 若不是害怕失态掉好感度。 He Yun Xiao wants to stand to decide a case simply to exclaim over! 何云霄简直想站起来判案叫绝! Talent! True talent! 天才!真正的天才! The short half double-hour, has thrown a street many years of acquired valuable experience to want to understand me! 短短半个时辰,就已经把我扑街多年获得的宝贵经验全都想明白了! This is really...... 这真是…… This...... 这…… Wū wū, compares weakly with Fan Zi, I really am a waste...... 呜呜呜,和范梓弱比起来,我真是个废物…… Since the good sensitivity to be high, present He Yun Xiao easily then can inspire the Fan Zi weak mood. 自从好感度高起来后,现在的何云霄轻易便能引动范梓弱的情绪。 Looks expression that He Yun Xiao breaks down suddenly, Fan Zi weakly originally good mood, also loses. She was afraid is speaks incorrectly to cause He Yun Xiao is not unhappy, probes was saying: Young master, weakly the Chinese catalpa said isn't right?” 看着何云霄突然垮下去的表情,范梓弱原本不错的心情,也随之失落下去。她害怕是自己说错导致何云霄不开心,试探着说:“公子,梓弱说的不对吗?” He Yun Xiao denied again and again: „, You did not say very right. If wants to add color to the light daily life plot, is the person supposes loses face/shows off is good.” 何云霄连连否认道:“不不不,你说得很对。若想给平淡的日常生活剧情增色,就是得人设出彩才行。” Therefore, you , to write an outstanding love article, is certain the losing face/showing off people to suppose.” “所以,你如果想写一本出众的恋爱文,一定得有一个出彩的人设。” Fan Zi sees the He Yun Xiao mood to be good weakly, oneself then also cheer up, she also asked the most essential question immediately: That anything is ‚the person who loses face/shows off supposes.” 范梓弱见何云霄情绪不错,自己便也高兴起来,她立马又问出了最关键的问题:“那什么是‘出彩的人设’。” This issue said that difficult to be very difficult, said simple was also very simple. 这个问题说难很难,说简单也很简单。 He Yun Xiao explained: Can make you feel, he is the living person, then he is ‚the person who loses face/shows off supposes. He must have the name, the character, the hobby, the shortcoming, the desire wait/etc.” 何云霄解释道:“能让你感觉到,他是活生生的人,那么他就是一个‘出彩的人设’。他要有名字,性格,爱好,缺点,欲望等等。” He Yun Xiao puts out the manuscript paper, 11 enumerates these essential factors on the manuscript paper. 何云霄拿出稿纸,把这些要素一一列举在稿纸上。 You fill in these, then this person supposed basically completes.” “你将这些都填好,那么这个人设就基本完成了。” Gives after the manuscript paper that this fills up Fan Zi is weak, He Yun Xiao has not been idling, pulls out a new paper, wrote these essential factors, as form that designing the mistress supposes. 将这填空的稿纸递给范梓弱后,何云霄也没闲着,抽出一张新的纸,又把这些要素写了一遍,作为设计女主人设的表格。 After finishing, He Yun Xiao looked up the hand-held writing brush, knit the brows ponder Fan Zi to be weak, in the heart felt slightly stably. 写完之后,何云霄抬头看着手持毛笔,皱眉思考的范梓弱,心中稍感安定。 Hehe, the Chinese catalpa weak younger sister, the person supposes is not good to write. Wants I to think initially the person supposes that meeting, but scratched open unable to think the scalp. 嘿嘿,梓弱妹妹,人设可不是那么好写的。想当初我想人设那会,可是把头皮都挠破了也想不出来。 Fan Zi turns over to weakly intelligently intelligently, but also is person in category. Most is the outstanding person phoenix, the talent. Compared with the anomaly of it Chu Xiaoxiao this 16 -year-old first under heaven, but was much more real will get sleepy, just when got out of bed will be blurry, even if in the stomach were loaded with the much knowledge, may have more knowledge, was she does not know that for example He Yun Xiao aspect of knowledge most widespread that kind. 范梓弱聪明归聪明,但还属于“人”的范畴之内。最多就是人中龙凤,天才而已。比之楚潇潇这种十六岁天下第一的变态,可真实得多多了会犯困,刚起床时会迷糊,即便肚中装有很多知识,可还有更多知识,是她不知道的,比如何云霄知识面最广泛的那一类。 He Yun Xiao looks that Fan Zi knits the brows weakly for a long time, is unsuitable to make noise to disturb, even idles to blow on the paper not the dry/does ink. 何云霄看着范梓弱皱眉许久,也不便出声打扰,甚至闲得吹起纸上未干的墨水。 Really was too afterward idle, He Yun Xiao then disguised the studying by oneself class, the teacher inspected the student to do one's assignment such, crossed the hands behind the back to take a stroll, takes a stroll to Fan Zi weakly behind, having a look at her to write anything. 后来实在太闲了,何云霄便假装自习课,老师视察学生做作业那样,负手溜达,溜达到范梓弱身后,看看她写了什么。 On manuscript paper one pleasant, 稿纸上一入眼, Then is the He Yun Xiao dog crawls the same character written with a writing brush, is small with the Fan Zi weak attractive put flowers in hair on hat, fierce contrast that forms. He Yun Xiao had not felt own character has what relations ugly, now his dog crawling character places by the Fan Zi weak attractive handwriting, his really toad approaches the feeling of swan. 便是何云霄狗爬一样的毛笔字,和范梓弱的漂亮簪花小楷,所形成的剧烈对比。何云霄本来还不觉得自己字丑有什么关系,现在他的狗爬字放在范梓弱漂亮的字迹旁边,他真有一种癞蛤蟆傍上天鹅的感觉。 In had the taste. 有内味了。 Slightly crosses handwriting roughly, He Yun Xiao looked specific content that Fan Zi writes weakly. 略过大体的字迹,何云霄看起范梓弱所写的具体内容来。 Plot localization: Actors 剧情定位:男主角 Name: Xiao He 姓名:肖河 Cao! 曹! This lead is why surnamed Xiao! 这主角为什么要姓肖啊! He Yun Xiao sees that now surname similar is ill on the physiology. 何云霄现在看到姓“肖”就生理不适。 Chinese catalpa is weak.” “梓弱。” Even if Fan Zi is weak is knitting the brows the ponder, He Yun Xiao could not attend. 即便范梓弱在皱眉思考,何云霄也顾不上了。 Fan Zi hears He Yun Xiao to call her weakly, immediately responds: Young master how?” 范梓弱听到何云霄叫她,立刻回应道:“公子怎么了?” He Yun Xiao is pointing at Xiao He, said: Chinese catalpa is weak, can you change the name of actor.” 何云霄指着“肖河”,道:“梓弱,你能不能把男主角的名字换一下。” Fan Zi heard He Yun Xiao to say weakly, small face slightly red, was cramped. 范梓弱听见何云霄这么说,小脸微红,局促起来。 The young master will not discover, Xiao He actually took He Yun Xiao the two homophones. 公子不会发现,“肖河”其实就是取了“何云霄”中的两个同音字吧。 She asked afraid: Why young master must replace......” 她心虚地问:“公子为什么要换掉……” He Yun Xiao replied afraid: Eh...... this because of me, had read a itself/Ben before, used this name.” 何云霄心虚地答道:“额……这个因为我,之前看过一本,也用了这个名字。” Fan Zi is weakly afraid, does not dare to closely examine, complies to change the name hastily. 范梓弱非常心虚,没敢追问下去,连忙答应换名字。 She uses the writing brush in crossing out Xiao He two characters, in Xiao He side inscribes Xiao Yun. 她用毛笔在划掉“肖河”两个字,在“肖河”的旁边写上“肖云”。 He Yun Xiao:...... 何云霄:…… Xiao Yun is anything, understood understands. 肖云”是个什么东西,懂的都懂。 He Yun Xiao quick awkward lethal, he shiver said: Chinese catalpa is weak, can we do not use Xiao Yun, trading a surname is good?” 何云霄已经快尴尬致死了,他颤抖地说:“梓弱,咱们能不能也不要用‘肖云’,换个姓好不好?” Fan Zi is also weakly awkward, she knows that takes the name with Xiao Yun, might be discovered the clue by the young master, only without thinking, was discovered quickly. 范梓弱也非常尴尬,她知道用“肖云”作为名字,很可能又会被公子发现端倪,只没想到,这么快就被发现了。 Good. What does the young master want to change into?” “好。公子想换成什么?” Changes into...... changes into......” “换成……换成……” He Yun Xiao knew that is the giving a name waste, the ancestors wrote, a name must ponder over for quite a while. Thinks two, after without clue, he has saying: Haha, I don't know either, in brief should not be surnamed similar well.” 何云霄自知是个起名废物,上辈子写的时候,一个名字得琢磨大半天。想了两下,毫无头绪之后,他只好说:“哈哈,我也不知道,总之不要姓‘肖’就好。” Fan Zi weak say/way good, with setting pen to paper, thinks, then looked at He Yun Xiao secretly. Slightly intertwines at heart, but decided the mind quickly, then writes down He Xiao on the paper. 范梓弱道“好”,拿着笔,想了想,然后偷瞄了一眼何云霄。心里略有纠结,但很快定了心神,便在纸上写下“何晓”。 He Yun Xiao:...... 何云霄:…… He Yun Xiao thorough is speechless. 何云霄已经彻底无语了。 Name that He Xiao his ancestors used, now do not know that were how the coincidence or, unexpectedly under the mistake arising out of chance circumstances, were written by Fan Zi weakly. 何晓”正是他上辈子所用的名字,现在不知道是巧合还是怎样,居然阴差阳错之下,被范梓弱写了出来。 He has corrected the name that Fan Zi is twice weak, this time was not good to correct again. 他已经纠正过两次范梓弱起的名字了,这次却是不好再纠正了。 In any case besides he himself, no one knows that He Xiao was his former name, although looked slightly has the illness, but actually compared surnamed Xiao on good many. 反正除他自己之外,也没人知道何晓是他从前的名字,虽然看起来略有不适,但却比姓肖好上很多。 Fan Zi has the selfishness to ask weakly carefully: Young master, called He Xiao, Ok?” 范梓弱带有私心地小心问道:“公子,叫‘何晓’,可以吗?” Helpless He Yun Xiao said: Can......” 何云霄无奈道:“可以……” The Fan Zi weak selfishness works, is happy: Good, later He Xiao, was I new actor.” 范梓弱私心得逞,开心道:“好,以后‘何晓’,就是我新中的男主角了。” He Yun Xiao looked that Fan Zi is weak, for a name is so happy, detected that is not a little right. 何云霄范梓弱为了一个名字这么开心,发觉有点不对。 He is also an author, unavoidably will have smuggles the smuggled goods the time. 他自己也是作者,难免也会有夹带私货的时候。 Fan Zi weak will not be having any bad idea...... 范梓弱不会在打什么坏主意吧…… Chinese catalpa is weak, your leading lady thinks that what called?” “梓弱,你女主角想好叫什么了吗?” He Yun Xiao stands behind the Fan Zi weak body. 何云霄是站在范梓弱身后侧的。 Hears He Yun Xiao to ask like this, Fan Zi puts down the writing brush weakly, is leaning the body, raises the face, be with smile on the face, asked for seems said: Young master, the leading lady called Fan Zi, Ok?” 听到何云霄这样问,范梓弱放下毛笔,侧着身子,扬起脸,面带微笑,讨好似的说:“公子,女主角叫范紫,可以吗?”
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