Fan Zilooks at the book title that He Yun Xiaowritesweakly, suddenlyhas not a little responded.范梓弱愣愣地看着何云霄写的书名,一时间有点没反应过来。Whyin the book titlecanpresent the colon?
书名中为什么可以出现冒号?
Can the book titlealsouse the vernacular?
书名也可以用白话吗?Defeats the martial arts worldhegemonsonlyto occupyin the book very smalllength, can thisalsobe usedto treat as the book title?
打败武林盟主只占书中很小的篇幅,这也能用来当做书名吗?Fan Zilooks at the book title that He Yun Xiaowritesweakly, has a look atbook title«azureDuckweed» that shewritesagain.范梓弱看着何云霄写的书名,再看看她自己写的书名《青萍》。Althoughshethought«azureDuckweed»is better, butlooks atHe Yun Xiao, suddenlyonetypeopens the bookto watch an impulsionagain, even ifshehas looked atseveral, but alsoremembersin the bookmanyplots, butsuddenlywantsto open the bookto look.
虽然她还是觉得《青萍》更好,但看着何云霄的,突然就有一种打开书再看一遍的冲动,即使她已经看过好几遍了,还记得书中很多的情节,可就是突然想打开书看一看。He Yun Xiaolooks at this expression, the apparentgoalhas been achieved, thereforesaid: „Chinese catalpais weak, the onlooker is clear-headed, how did weaskDuMissto have a look?”何云霄看她这表情,便知目的已经达到,于是道:“梓弱,旁观者清,咱们请杜姑娘看看怎样?”ConfidentlyFan Ziis just now weak, at this timesomeare not self-confident, shesaid: „Good.”
方才还信心满满地范梓弱,此时有些不自信了,她说:“好。”In the Fan Zipeople of low abilitytakes two manuscript paper that wrote the book title, goes to the Du YinyundwellingwithHe Yun Xiaoshoulder to shoulder.范梓弱手里拿着两张写了书名的稿纸,与何云霄并肩前往杜音韵的住处。younger sisterDuis just the same as always, not to play a stringed musical instrumentall day, embroidery. Shealsoonly theninHe Yun Xiaonot , will wrest awaymeetsFan Zito be weak, the becoming reconciledsistersspoke.
杜妹妹还是老样子,整日不是弹琴,刺绣。她也只有在何云霄不在的时候,才会去霸占一会范梓弱,和好姐妹说说话。Shepreparesto the embroideringhandkerchief that Fan Ziusesweakly, has completedone, the secondarticleis still embroidering.
她准备给范梓弱用的绣花手绢,已经完成了一条,第二条还在绣着。
The style of embroidery, choseespeciallyconforms to the elder sistermakings„after the rain, lotus”.
刺绣的样式,特地选择了符合姐姐气质的“雨后荷花”。However, from the Du Yinyunhandis embroidering the design, after this„rain, lotus”, is actually only then„lotus”butdoes not have„rain”.
不过,从杜音韵手中正绣着的图案来看,这“雨后荷花”,却是只有“荷花”而没有“雨”。Intelligentsuch asshe, the embroiderywill not leak„rainwater”, on the contrary, withoutrainwater„after the rain, lotus”, is the genuinebrush.
聪明如她,自不会绣漏了“雨水”,相反,没有雨水的“雨后荷花”,才是真正的神来之笔。Du Yinyunmoved the chairto situnder the eaves, on the nearbystoolput the bamboo basket, in the bamboo basketis thinking ofall kindsneedlework that the embroideryneeded.杜音韵搬了椅子坐在屋檐下,边上凳子上放着竹篮,竹篮里装着刺绣所需的各样针线。Inherhandembroiders the lotus, the corners of the mouthholds the happy expression of not being able to be covering.
她手上绣着荷花,嘴角噙着掩盖不住的笑意。Reallywantsto have a look atelder sister„raining”appearance......
真想看看姐姐“下雨”的样子……After all is „rainresponsibility”......
毕竟是“雨荷”嘛……Fan ZileadsHe Yun Xiaoto arrive at the Du Yinyundwellingweakly, standsin the slightlyfarplace, thencallssaid: „Sound.”范梓弱领着何云霄来到杜音韵的住处,站在稍远的地方,便唤道:“音韵。”Du YinyunhearsFan Zito shoutherweakly, is wantingto set outto sexually harassSister Fanseveral, withoutopened the mouththenfirstto seeFan ZiweakHe Yun Xiao.杜音韵听到范梓弱叫她,正欲起身调戏范姐姐几句,没等开口便先看到了范梓弱身旁的何云霄。younger sisterDuto placeonhergoodyoung master the bottom of the heartpointdaily, has a dreamis thinking, will not forgetwords that heexhorts.
杜妹妹日日把她的好公子放在心尖尖上,做梦都想着,自不会忘记他嘱咐的话。SeesHe Yun Xiao, shethenreceives the plan that andFan Zicreates a disturbanceweakly, the makingsare chilly. Puts down the needlework, sets outto salutetoHe Yun Xiaoslightly. Among the graces, hasnamed„aloof”naturalsense of distance.
见何云霄在,她便收起和范梓弱打闹的打算,气质清冷起来。放下针线,起身微微向何云霄行礼。举手投足之间,都有一种名为“高冷”的天然的距离感。Shebe nothing more or less thanraises slightlygently, „Hechild.”
她不多不少地轻轻欠身,“何公子。”He Yun Xiaoreturns saluteto saysubmissively: „DuMiss, met.”何云霄拱手还礼道:“杜姑娘,又见面了。”Fan Zisees the atmosphereweaklyso, thenstandsin„relationsalienate”twopeople, explainedtoHe Yun Xiao: „Young master, my younger sistertemperis fainter, toanyoneisso, neither cold nor hot, the young masterdo not care.”范梓弱见气氛如此,便站在“关系疏远”的二人中间,向何云霄解释道:“公子,我妹妹性子淡漠一些,对谁都是如此,不冷不热的,公子别放在心上。”He Yun Xiao: «TemperFaint».何云霄:《性子淡漠》。Du Yinyun: Did the elder sistercry out„young master”? IsIfirstcallsobviously.杜音韵:姐姐怎么也叫起“公子”了?明明是我先叫的。He Yun XiaorepliesFan Zito be weak: „Isn't in the way, has heardDuMisspersonality.”何云霄回复范梓弱:“不碍事不碍事,早就听说杜姑娘的性格了。”He Yun Xiaohas not deliberately raised„spring breezebuildingto see”has tried to get close;first, hedoes not needto try to get close to younger sisterDu;second, the spring breezebuildingis not the goodrecollection, saidotherspainful eventfor no reason, manya littlebigsickness.何云霄刻意没提“春风楼见过”来套近乎,一是他不需要和杜妹妹套近乎,二是春风楼并不是什么好的回忆,平白无故说人家的伤心事,多少有点大病。Fan Zienters the subjectweaklyquickly, shewriting the twomanuscript paper of book titlehandedin the hand of Du Yinyun.范梓弱很快进入正题,她把写了书名的两张稿纸递到杜音韵的手里。„Sound, the words of thistwobook titles, whichitself/Ben do youlike? Whichitself/Benwantsto read?”
“音韵,这有两本书名的话,你喜欢哪一本?想看哪一本?”Du Yinyunis looking at the twobook titles on hand, looked upFan ZiweaklywithHe Yun Xiao. Thenis pointing at«azureDuckweed»said,„Ilikethisitself/Ben.”杜音韵看着手上的两本书名,又抬头看了看范梓弱和何云霄。然后指着《青萍》道,“我喜欢这一本。”Thechoice of Du Yinyun, pouringmakesHe Yun Xiaobe a little astonished.杜音韵的这个选择,倒让何云霄有点讶异。Unexpectedlydoesn't choosemycolonarticle?
居然不选我的冒号文?Thinkscarefully, actuallyalsoreasonable. younger sisterDu the literarylevelis next toFan Zito be weak, belongingto be high, cannot have a liking for the vernacularbook title, is very normal.
仔细一想,却也合理。杜妹妹文学水平仅次于范梓弱,属于极高,看不上白话书名,也很正常。Two peoplesaid goodbye toDu Yinyun, askedagain and againseveralliteratemaidservants, thistimejust likeHe Yun Xiaosuchin advance, maidservantssimultaneous/uniformsimultaneous/uniformchose the colonarticle.
两人告别了杜音韵,又连连问了几位识字的丫鬟,这次正如何云霄预先的那样,丫鬟们齐齐选择了冒号文。Two peoplereturn to the study roomshoulder to shoulder, the Fan Ziweakfacial expressionis unattractive.
两人并肩回到书房,范梓弱的神情并不好看。He Yun Xiaosaidcomfortably: „Chinese catalpanamesweaklytrulywell, butissomeelegance, hasadvantageelegantly, DuMissdoes not likevery much?”何云霄宽慰道:“梓弱取名确实不错,不过是有些雅气,雅也有雅的好处,杜姑娘不是很喜欢吗?”Fan Ziweaksay/way: „Young masteris not clear. Mythatyounger sister is very intelligent. Shemustbesaw that thisbook titleisIgets up, totake care ofme, deliberatelychoosesthisbook title.”范梓弱道:“公子不明白。我那妹妹聪明得很。她必是看出这书名是我起的,为了照顾我,才刻意选这书名。”ThismadeHe Yun Xiaoa littleawkward.
这就让何云霄有点尴尬了。Sentimentaleveryoneis fromoneself, nocandidateFan Ziis weak.
感情所有人都选自己,没一个人选范梓弱。How saying that Fan Ziweakly is also the YinJingfirsttalented woman, thisteaches the netarticle, teachesfirst, has givenherconfidencetois rotten.
怎么说范梓弱也是尹京第一才女,这教网文,才教到第一层,就已经把她的信心给冲烂了。Confidencething, to the author, is a verypuzzledthing.
信心这东西,对作者来说,是个很纠结的东西。
The confidenceis too full, will make one not listen to the suggestion, conceited;Lacks confidence, to fear the handto fear the foot, articledeficientsharp qi and arrogance of writing.
信心太足,会让人听不进建议,狂妄自大;信心不足,会让人畏手畏脚,写出来的文章缺乏锐气和傲气。Therefore a goodauthor, mustalsostays behindhumble and arrogance, this is very difficult.
所以一个好的作者,必须把谦逊和傲气同时留下,这就很难。He Yun Xiao, looks that moodsomewhatlowFan Ziis weak, again two manuscript paper that wrote the book title, placesherfront.何云霄,看着情绪有些低落的范梓弱,重新把两张写了书名的稿纸,放在她的面前。„Chinese catalpais weak, your ‚azureduckweed’obtainsverywell.”
“梓弱,你这个‘青萍’取得很好。”Fan Ziraised the headweakly, looks atHe Yun Xiaoearnestly.范梓弱抬起头,认真地看着何云霄。He Yun Xiaoalso said that „«azureDuckweed» is very good, evencompared withthisbookold name«Taihu LakeKnight-errant swordsmanRecord», is much better.”何云霄又说了一遍,“《青萍》真的很好,甚至比这书的原名《太湖剑侠录》,好得多。”
The Fan Ziweakvisionis sparking, shelooks atHe Yun Xiaoearnestly, is listening tohistoneearnestly. No matter how sheobserves the manner, howto distinguish the tone, no matterobservesearnestly, distinguishesmanytimes, shehas tohave a ConclusionHe Yun Xiaois the sinceritythinkslike this.范梓弱的目光闪亮亮的,她认真地看着何云霄,认真地听着他的语气。不管她怎么观察神态,怎么分辨语气,不管观察得多认真,分辨多少次,她都只得出了一个结论-何云霄是真心这样认为的。【The Fan Ziweakgoodsensitivityby75to become75】
【范梓弱的好感度由75变为75】He Yun Xiao:? Here we go again? What's the matter? Goodsensitivitycard75?何云霄:?又来了?怎么回事?好感度卡75了?
The Fan Ziweakvisionlooks atHe Yun Xiaosoftly, said: „Chinese catalpaweakbook title, no onelikesobviously, how the young masteradded that itis good.”范梓弱目光柔柔地看着何云霄,道:“梓弱的书名,明明没人喜欢,公子怎么还说它好。”He Yun Xiaoloses the systemin the one side, thenreplies the Fan Ziweakissueearnestly.何云霄把系统丢在一旁,转而认真回复范梓弱的问题。„Chinese catalpafeltweakly, mybook title?”
“梓弱觉得,我的书名好吗?”Fan Ziweakhesitant, said: „Good.”范梓弱犹豫了一下,道:“好。”„Is good!”
“好个屁!”Suddenlyexplodes the swearingHe Yun Xiao, has a scareFan Zireallyweakly.
突然爆粗口的何云霄,着实把范梓弱吓了一跳。„Chinese catalpais weak, youare the YinJingfirsttalented woman, is the Antler Academyteachingmister. Atyourlevel, do youreallyfeelmybook title?”
“梓弱,你是尹京第一才女,又是鹿角书院的教书先生。以你的水平,你真觉得我的书名好吗?”„Young master’sbook titlehasso manypeopleto like, naturallyis......”
“公子的书名有那么多人喜欢,自然是……”He Yun Xiaograbs the Fan Ziweakhand, „Chinese catalpais weak, whichyourself-confidenceand did the arrogancego?”何云霄一把抓住范梓弱的手,“梓弱,你的自信和傲气去哪了?”„I......”
“我……”„Chinese catalpaweakhopeobtains the approvals of morereader, thisright, tocater toconstantly, candiscardoneselfmost basicjudgment?”
“梓弱希望得到更多读者的认可,这没错,可是为了一味迎合,就要丢掉自己最基本的判断力吗?”„Chinese catalpais weakIto tellyou, mybook title, is very successful, butis not good! Itdoes not have no merit to speak, on the contraryisveryuseful, is very easy-to-use, buteven so, Istillfelt,itis not good.”
“梓弱我告诉你,我的书名,很成功,但一点也不好!它并非是一无是处,相反是很有用,很好用,但即便是这样,我依然觉得,它一点也不好。”„Chinese catalpais weak, youthinkwell why Iwill say.”
“梓弱,你好好想想,我为什么会这么说。”Fan Zilooks atHe Yun Xiaoto gripownhandweaklysomewhat, the cheekred, pretends that cannot thinkwhatstrange„men and womenare able to discriminate”. Whenonlyhas not seen.范梓弱看着何云霄握住自己的手,脸蛋有些红红的,假装想不起来什么奇怪的“男女有别”。只当没看见。Shesaid: „Young masterwants saying that the authormustknowanythingisgood, mustknowwhateasy-to-use. Amongthistwo, does not conflict.”
她说:“公子是想说,作者要知道什么是好,也要知道什么好用。这二者之间,并不冲突。”He Yun Xiaosaid with a smile: „Right! Don't youwantto writeothers the book that likesreading? Good, canwrite. Is the premise that writeswhat? Is you know that theywantto look atanything.”何云霄笑道:“对!你不是想写一本别人喜欢看的书吗?好,可以写。那写的前提是什么?是你知道他们想看什么。”Fan ZipretendsweaklycontinuedHe Yun Xiaounknowingly, said: „What does the young masterlikelooking at?”范梓弱假装不经意地接过何云霄的话头,道:“那公子喜欢看什么?”At this moment, the He Yun Xiaolookis solemn and respectful, imitates, if the loyalfolloweris common.
这一刻,何云霄神色肃穆,仿若忠诚的信徒一般。„Ilikelove( behind )loving( palace) foreverarticle.”
“我永远喜欢恋(后)爱(宫)文。”
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