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Fan Zi looks at the book title that He Yun Xiao writes weakly, suddenly has not a little responded. 范梓弱愣愣地看着何云霄写的书名,一时间有点没反应过来。 Why in the book title can present the colon? 书名中为什么可以出现冒号? Can the book title also use the vernacular? 书名也可以用白话吗? Defeats the martial arts world hegemons only to occupy in the book very small length, can this also be used to treat as the book title? 打败武林盟主只占书中很小的篇幅,这也能用来当做书名吗? Fan Zi looks at the book title that He Yun Xiao writes weakly, has a look at book title «azure Duckweed» that she writes again. 范梓弱看着何云霄写的书名,再看看她自己写的书名《青萍》。 Although she thought «azure Duckweed» is better, but looks at He Yun Xiao, suddenly one type opens the book to watch an impulsion again, even if she has looked at several, but also remembers in the book many plots, but suddenly wants to open the book to look. 虽然她还是觉得《青萍》更好,但看着何云霄的,突然就有一种打开书再看一遍的冲动,即使她已经看过好几遍了,还记得书中很多的情节,可就是突然想打开书看一看。 He Yun Xiao looks at this expression, the apparent goal has been achieved, therefore said: Chinese catalpa is weak, the onlooker is clear-headed, how did we ask Du Miss to have a look?” 何云霄看她这表情,便知目的已经达到,于是道:“梓弱,旁观者清,咱们请杜姑娘看看怎样?” Confidently Fan Zi is just now weak, at this time some are not self-confident, she said: Good.” 方才还信心满满地范梓弱,此时有些不自信了,她说:“好。” In the Fan Zi people of low ability takes two manuscript paper that wrote the book title, goes to the Du Yinyun dwelling with He Yun Xiao shoulder to shoulder. 范梓弱手里拿着两张写了书名的稿纸,与何云霄并肩前往杜音韵的住处。 younger sister Du is just the same as always, not to play a stringed musical instrument all day, embroidery. She also only then in He Yun Xiao not , will wrest away meets Fan Zi to be weak, the becoming reconciled sisters spoke. 杜妹妹还是老样子,整日不是弹琴,刺绣。她也只有在何云霄不在的时候,才会去霸占一会范梓弱,和好姐妹说说话。 She prepares to the embroidering handkerchief that Fan Zi uses weakly, has completed one, the second article is still embroidering. 她准备给范梓弱用的绣花手绢,已经完成了一条,第二条还在绣着。 The style of embroidery, chose especially conforms to the elder sister makings „after the rain, lotus. 刺绣的样式,特地选择了符合姐姐气质的“雨后荷花”。 However, from the Du Yinyun hand is embroidering the design, after this rain, lotus, is actually only then lotus but does not have rain. 不过,从杜音韵手中正绣着的图案来看,这“雨后荷花”,却是只有“荷花”而没有“雨”。 Intelligent such as she, the embroidery will not leak rainwater, on the contrary, without rainwater „after the rain, lotus, is the genuine brush. 聪明如她,自不会绣漏了“雨水”,相反,没有雨水的“雨后荷花”,才是真正的神来之笔。 Du Yinyun moved the chair to sit under the eaves, on the nearby stool put the bamboo basket, in the bamboo basket is thinking of all kinds needlework that the embroidery needed. 杜音韵搬了椅子坐在屋檐下,边上凳子上放着竹篮,竹篮里装着刺绣所需的各样针线。 In her hand embroiders the lotus, the corners of the mouth holds the happy expression of not being able to be covering. 她手上绣着荷花,嘴角噙着掩盖不住的笑意。 Really wants to have a look at elder sister raining appearance...... 真想看看姐姐“下雨”的样子…… After all is rain responsibility...... 毕竟是“雨荷”嘛…… Fan Zi leads He Yun Xiao to arrive at the Du Yinyun dwelling weakly, stands in the slightly far place, then calls said: Sound.” 范梓弱领着何云霄来到杜音韵的住处,站在稍远的地方,便唤道:“音韵。” Du Yinyun hears Fan Zi to shout her weakly, is wanting to set out to sexually harass Sister Fan several, without opened the mouth then first to see Fan Zi weak He Yun Xiao. 杜音韵听到范梓弱叫她,正欲起身调戏范姐姐几句,没等开口便先看到了范梓弱身旁的何云霄 younger sister Du to place on her good young master the bottom of the heart point daily, has a dream is thinking, will not forget words that he exhorts. 杜妹妹日日把她的好公子放在心尖尖上,做梦都想着,自不会忘记他嘱咐的话。 Sees He Yun Xiao, she then receives the plan that and Fan Zi creates a disturbance weakly, the makings are chilly. Puts down the needlework, sets out to salute to He Yun Xiao slightly. Among the graces, has named aloof natural sense of distance. 何云霄在,她便收起和范梓弱打闹的打算,气质清冷起来。放下针线,起身微微向何云霄行礼。举手投足之间,都有一种名为“高冷”的天然的距离感。 She be nothing more or less than raises slightly gently, He child.” 她不多不少地轻轻欠身,“何公子。” He Yun Xiao returns salute to say submissively: Du Miss, met.” 何云霄拱手还礼道:“杜姑娘,又见面了。” Fan Zi sees the atmosphere weakly so, then stands in relations alienate two people, explained to He Yun Xiao: Young master, my younger sister temper is fainter, to anyone is so, neither cold nor hot, the young master do not care.” 范梓弱见气氛如此,便站在“关系疏远”的二人中间,向何云霄解释道:“公子,我妹妹性子淡漠一些,对谁都是如此,不冷不热的,公子别放在心上。” He Yun Xiao: «Temper Faint». 何云霄:《性子淡漠》。 Du Yinyun: Did the elder sister cry out young master? Is I first calls obviously. 杜音韵:姐姐怎么也叫起“公子”了?明明是我先叫的。 He Yun Xiao replies Fan Zi to be weak: Isn't in the way, has heard Du Miss personality.” 何云霄回复范梓弱:“不碍事不碍事,早就听说杜姑娘的性格了。” He Yun Xiao has not deliberately raised spring breeze building to see has tried to get close ; first, he does not need to try to get close to younger sister Du ; second, the spring breeze building is not the good recollection, said others painful event for no reason, many a little big sickness. 何云霄刻意没提“春风楼见过”来套近乎,一是他不需要和杜妹妹套近乎,二是春风楼并不是什么好的回忆,平白无故说人家的伤心事,多少有点大病。 Fan Zi enters the subject weakly quickly, she writing the two manuscript paper of book title handed in the hand of Du Yinyun. 范梓弱很快进入正题,她把写了书名的两张稿纸递到杜音韵的手里。 Sound, the words of this two book titles, which itself/Ben do you like? Which itself/Ben wants to read?” “音韵,这有两本书名的话,你喜欢哪一本?想看哪一本?” Du Yinyun is looking at the two book titles on hand, looked up Fan Zi weakly with He Yun Xiao. Then is pointing at «azure Duckweed» said, I like this itself/Ben.” 杜音韵看着手上的两本书名,又抬头看了看范梓弱和何云霄。然后指着《青萍》道,“我喜欢这一本。” The choice of Du Yinyun, pouring makes He Yun Xiao be a little astonished. 杜音韵的这个选择,倒让何云霄有点讶异。 Unexpectedly doesn't choose my colon article? 居然不选我的冒号文? Thinks carefully, actually also reasonable. younger sister Du the literary level is next to Fan Zi to be weak, belonging to be high, cannot have a liking for the vernacular book title, is very normal. 仔细一想,却也合理。杜妹妹文学水平仅次于范梓弱,属于极高,看不上白话书名,也很正常。 Two people said goodbye to Du Yinyun, asked again and again several literate maidservants, this time just like He Yun Xiao such in advance, maidservants simultaneous/uniform simultaneous/uniform chose the colon article. 两人告别了杜音韵,又连连问了几位识字的丫鬟,这次正如何云霄预先的那样,丫鬟们齐齐选择了冒号文。 Two people return to the study room shoulder to shoulder, the Fan Zi weak facial expression is unattractive. 两人并肩回到书房,范梓弱的神情并不好看。 He Yun Xiao said comfortably: Chinese catalpa names weakly truly well, but is some elegance, has advantage elegantly, Du Miss does not like very much?” 何云霄宽慰道:“梓弱取名确实不错,不过是有些雅气,雅也有雅的好处,杜姑娘不是很喜欢吗?” Fan Zi weak say/way: Young master is not clear. My that younger sister is very intelligent. She must be saw that this book title is I gets up, to take care of me, deliberately chooses this book title.” 范梓弱道:“公子不明白。我那妹妹聪明得很。她必是看出这书名是我起的,为了照顾我,才刻意选这书名。” This made He Yun Xiao a little awkward. 这就让何云霄有点尴尬了。 Sentimental everyone is from oneself, no candidate Fan Zi is weak. 感情所有人都选自己,没一个人选范梓弱。 How saying that Fan Zi weakly is also the Yin Jing first talented woman, this teaches the net article, teaches first, has given her confidence to is rotten. 怎么说范梓弱也是尹京第一才女,这教网文,才教到第一层,就已经把她的信心给冲烂了。 Confidence thing, to the author, is a very puzzled thing. 信心这东西,对作者来说,是个很纠结的东西。 The confidence is too full, will make one not listen to the suggestion, conceited ; Lacks confidence, to fear the hand to fear the foot, article deficient sharp qi and arrogance of writing. 信心太足,会让人听不进建议,狂妄自大;信心不足,会让人畏手畏脚,写出来的文章缺乏锐气和傲气。 Therefore a good author, must also stays behind humble and arrogance, this is very difficult. 所以一个好的作者,必须把谦逊和傲气同时留下,这就很难。 He Yun Xiao, looks that mood somewhat low Fan Zi is weak, again two manuscript paper that wrote the book title, places her front. 何云霄,看着情绪有些低落的范梓弱,重新把两张写了书名的稿纸,放在她的面前。 Chinese catalpa is weak, your azure duckweed obtains very well.” “梓弱,你这个‘青萍’取得很好。” Fan Zi raised the head weakly, looks at He Yun Xiao earnestly. 范梓弱抬起头,认真地看着何云霄 He Yun Xiao also said that «azure Duckweed» is very good, even compared with this book old name «Taihu Lake Knight-errant swordsman Record», is much better.” 何云霄又说了一遍,“《青萍》真的很好,甚至比这书的原名《太湖剑侠录》,好得多。” The Fan Zi weak vision is sparking, she looks at He Yun Xiao earnestly, is listening to his tone earnestly. No matter how she observes the manner, how to distinguish the tone, no matter observes earnestly, distinguishes many times, she has to have a Conclusion He Yun Xiao is the sincerity thinks like this. 范梓弱的目光闪亮亮的,她认真地看着何云霄,认真地听着他的语气。不管她怎么观察神态,怎么分辨语气,不管观察得多认真,分辨多少次,她都只得出了一个结论-何云霄是真心这样认为的。 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 75 to become 75 范梓弱的好感度由75变为75】 He Yun Xiao:? Here we go again? What's the matter? Good sensitivity card 75? 何云霄:?又来了?怎么回事?好感度卡75了? The Fan Zi weak vision looks at He Yun Xiao softly, said: Chinese catalpa weak book title, no one likes obviously, how the young master added that it is good.” 范梓弱目光柔柔地看着何云霄,道:“梓弱的书名,明明没人喜欢,公子怎么还说它好。” He Yun Xiao loses the system in the one side, then replies the Fan Zi weak issue earnestly. 何云霄把系统丢在一旁,转而认真回复范梓弱的问题。 Chinese catalpa felt weakly, my book title?” “梓弱觉得,我的书名好吗?” Fan Zi weak hesitant, said: Good.” 范梓弱犹豫了一下,道:“好。” Is good!” “好个屁!” Suddenly explodes the swearing He Yun Xiao, has a scare Fan Zi really weakly. 突然爆粗口的何云霄,着实把范梓弱吓了一跳。 Chinese catalpa is weak, you are the Yin Jing first talented woman, is the Antler Academy teaching mister. At your level, do you really feel my book title?” “梓弱,你是尹京第一才女,又是鹿角书院的教书先生。以你的水平,你真觉得我的书名好吗?” Young master’s book title has so many people to like, naturally is......” “公子的书名有那么多人喜欢,自然是……” He Yun Xiao grabs the Fan Zi weak hand, Chinese catalpa is weak, which your self-confidence and did the arrogance go?” 何云霄一把抓住范梓弱的手,“梓弱,你的自信和傲气去哪了?” I......” “我……” Chinese catalpa weak hope obtains the approvals of more reader, this right, to cater to constantly, can discard oneself most basic judgment?” “梓弱希望得到更多读者的认可,这没错,可是为了一味迎合,就要丢掉自己最基本的判断力吗?” Chinese catalpa is weak I to tell you, my book title, is very successful, but is not good! It does not have no merit to speak, on the contrary is very useful, is very easy-to-use, but even so, I still felt, it is not good.” “梓弱我告诉你,我的书名,很成功,但一点也不好!它并非是一无是处,相反是很有用,很好用,但即便是这样,我依然觉得,它一点也不好。” Chinese catalpa is weak, you think well why I will say.” “梓弱,你好好想想,我为什么会这么说。” Fan Zi looks at He Yun Xiao to grip own hand weakly somewhat, the cheek red, pretends that cannot think what strange men and women are able to discriminate. When only has not seen. 范梓弱看着何云霄握住自己的手,脸蛋有些红红的,假装想不起来什么奇怪的“男女有别”。只当没看见。 She said: Young master wants saying that the author must know anything is good, must know what easy-to-use. Among this two, does not conflict.” 她说:“公子是想说,作者要知道什么是好,也要知道什么好用。这二者之间,并不冲突。” He Yun Xiao said with a smile: Right! Don't you want to write others the book that likes reading? Good, can write. Is the premise that writes what? Is you know that they want to look at anything.” 何云霄笑道:“对!你不是想写一本别人喜欢看的书吗?好,可以写。那写的前提是什么?是你知道他们想看什么。” Fan Zi pretends weakly continued He Yun Xiao unknowingly, said: What does the young master like looking at?” 范梓弱假装不经意地接过何云霄的话头,道:“那公子喜欢看什么?” At this moment, the He Yun Xiao look is solemn and respectful, imitates, if the loyal follower is common. 这一刻,何云霄神色肃穆,仿若忠诚的信徒一般。 I like love ( behind ) loving( palace) forever article.” “我永远喜欢恋(后)爱(宫)文。”
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