Regarding the Chu Xiaoxiao martial arts, He Yun Xiao explained tactfully weakly to Fan Zi: „Chu Xiaoxiao actually meets a martial arts, but also is fierce. The average people cannot be victorious she.” 对于楚潇潇的武功,何云霄委婉地对范梓弱解释道:“楚潇潇其实会一点武功,还蛮厉害的。一般人打不过她。” Regarding character that Chu Xiaoxiao changes back, the He Yun Xiao vivid explanation is: „She only likes Chu Fan, not to look to other person of good complexions, therefore, she left Chu Fan like changing a person, did you understand?” 对于楚潇潇变来变去的性格,何云霄则生动的解释为:“她只喜欢楚凡,不会给其他人好脸色看,所以,她一离开楚凡就像变了一个人,你明白吗？” „In brief, matter is this. I am helping a little miss in meeting martial arts, pursues her Elder Brother.” “总之,事情就是这样。我在帮一个会武功的小姑娘,去追她哥哥。” He Yun Xiao summarizes accurately, although deleted many dispensable details, for example „meets a martial arts” and „meets hundred million martial arts” the difference, as well as „deep and clear” and „neat” existences of two personalities. „Solves bad woman for her”, ingeniously broad, in „helps her pursue Elder Brother”. 何云霄总结得蛮准确,虽然删减了很多可有可无的细节,比如说“会一点武功”和“会亿点武功”的区别,以及“潇潇”和“楚楚”两个人格的存在。还有就是把“替她解决坏女人”,巧妙地概括在“帮她追哥哥”里面。 Originally does not like Chu Xiaoxiao Fan Zi being weak, after hearing her actually likes Chu Fan rather than He Yun Xiao, then regarded her with the new vision. 本来不太喜欢楚潇潇的范梓弱,在听到她其实喜欢楚凡而非何云霄之后,便又用新的目光重新看待她了。 „Deep and clear miss, dares to like daring to hate, is a good miss.” “潇潇姑娘,敢爱敢恨,是个好姑娘。” He Yun Xiao should with saying: „Right. Right. When the Chinese catalpa is weak you see her again, may ten million/countless probably to her as usual. Do not reveal the secret.” 何云霄应和道:“没错。没错。梓弱你再见到她时,可千万要对她像往常一样。别露馅了。” Fan Zi weak say/way: „She dares to like oneself Elder Brother, faces universal condemnation, such courage, is I should respect.” 范梓弱道:“她敢喜欢自己的哥哥,冒天下之大不韪,这样的勇气,是我该敬重的。” He Yun Xiao scratched cold sweat of forehead. 何云霄擦了一把额头的冷汗。 The turtle turtle, you respects her to be equal to that told her „me to know your secret”, was this shuts out own poor life insufficient length? 龟龟,你敬重她等于告诉她“我知道了你的秘密”,这是嫌弃自己的小命不够长了吗？ „Don't. Her was fully suffered the dispute the sentiment. You more respect her, more is giving her the pressure. We pretend not to see, assists in secret two, lets this sentiment successful and that's the end. If the Chu Xiaoxiao sentiment is intense, Chu Fan actually does not like her, that Chinese catalpa is weak your respect, then pounds Chu Xiaoxiao stone finally.” “别别别。她这本身就是饱受争议的感情。你越是敬重她,越是在给她压力。咱们就假装没有看见,暗中帮扶两下,让这段感情水到渠成就是了。假若楚潇潇的感情强烈,楚凡却不喜欢她,那梓弱你的敬重,便是最后再砸楚潇潇身上的石头。” Listened to He Yun Xiao saying that Fan Zi understands weakly own mistake, therefore stood up, thanked politely to say to He Yun Xiao: „Many thanks the young master reminded. Chinese catalpa weak consideration is not thorough, almost did bad things with good intentions.” 听何云霄这么说,范梓弱明白了自己的错误,于是站起身,对何云霄拜谢道:“多谢公子提醒。梓弱考虑的不周到,差点好心办坏事了。” Looked that Fan Zi complies weakly, later treats Chu Xiaoxiao as usual, He Yun Xiao relaxes finally. The Chu Xiaoxiao character unusual matter, the good and evil was the explanation passes. 看范梓弱答应,以后如常对待楚潇潇,何云霄终于松了口气。楚潇潇性格异常的事情,好歹是解释过去了。 At this time after turning, the topic returns to the right track quickly: How to write the knight-errant. 此时翻篇之后,话题很快回到正轨:如何写好武侠。 He Yun Xiao turns out in the morning to dodge Chu Xiaoxiao receives and manuscript paper, gives Fan Zi to be weak all. 何云霄翻出早上为了规避楚潇潇才收起来的和稿纸,尽数递给范梓弱。 „Chinese catalpa is weak, this several are I the knight-errant who looks for from the family/home, you first have a look.” “梓弱,这有几本是我从家里找的武侠,你先看看。” Fan Zi received the He Residence study room weakly, opens looked, then traded another itself/Ben, opens again looks. Later repeated two above operations again. 范梓弱接过何府书房的,翻开一看,然后又换了另一本,再翻开一看。之后再次重复了两遍上述操作。 She said with a smile: „Young master, these, I have looked.” 她笑道:“公子,这几本,我都看过。” He Yun Xiao face one black. 何云霄脸一黑。 Has looked? Looked has also been able to write such? 看过？都看过还能写成那样？ Sees with own eyes He Yun Xiao to be unemotional, Fan Zi said weakly afraid: „Young master, is the Chinese catalpa not quite weakly intelligent?” 眼见何云霄面无表情,范梓弱心虚道:“公子,梓弱是不是不太聪明？” He Yun Xiao is just thinking how to teach Fan Zi weak writing a book, the subconsciousness said: „It is not, you are only brain child long/grows are possibly different from others.” 何云霄正想着怎么教范梓弱写书,下意识道:“不是,你可能只是脑子长得和别人不一样。” Fan Zi is weak: „?” 范梓弱:“啊？” He Yun Xiao realizes to make an indiscreet remark, he then remembers, this saying was the previous generation knocks the keyboard time often to say. 何云霄意识到失言,他这才想起,这话是自己前世敲键盘时候常说的。 Therefore explained hastily: „Story that I mean, you think, with you finally with expression the story that the story, as well as was read, understands after by the reader, among the three has the quite big discrepancies.” 于是连忙解释道:“我的意思是,你想的故事,和你最终用文字表达出来的故事,以及被读者阅读后理解的故事,这三者之间有比较大的出入。” Fan Zi weak say/way: „What to do should I?” 范梓弱道:“那我该怎么办？” What to do He Yun Xiao does not know should. He does not have to study the screenwriter systematically, many theories do not understand. Understands, but only understands little, belongs is „rube” writer. 何云霄也不知道该怎么办。他没有系统地学过编剧,很多理论都不太懂。懂,但只懂一点点,属于是“泥腿子”写手。 In fact, overwhelming majority writers who write the net article, just like him, no one have to learn the knowledge in this aspect systematically. Is trying unceasingly wrong and throws in the middle of the street unceasingly, grows. 实际上,写网文的绝大部分作家,都和他一样,谁也没有系统的学习过这方面的知识。都是在不断试错和不断扑街当中,一路成长的。 He Yun Xiao repeatedly confirmed weakly to Fan Zi: „Chinese catalpa is weak, you really want to write that type, everyone likes looking?” 何云霄再次向范梓弱确认道:“梓弱,你是真想写那种,大家都爱看的吗？” Fan Zi looks at He Yun Xiao weakly, nods seriously. To her, oneself write happily is being very important, but obtains the approval of person of caring, actually the ratio entertains happy ten thousand times. 范梓弱看着何云霄,郑重地点了点头。对她来说,自己写着高兴是很重要,但获得在意之人的认可,却比自娱自乐开心万倍。 The Chinese catalpa wants to write weakly, 梓弱想写出, The He child also likes looking! He Yun Xiao sees her is so firm, does not suspect her determination. 何公子也喜欢看的！何云霄见她如此坚定,已经不怀疑她的决心。 The world famous work he cannot write, cannot teach, may write common people the popularity that likes looking, He Yun Xiao has the full assurance. 世界名著他是写不出来,也教不出来,可只是写出一本老百姓都爱看的通俗,何云霄却有十足的把握。 Although my previous generation is only slightly throws the street, but now in various entertainment product quite deficient Qi! 虽然我前世只是小小扑街,但现在是在各种娱乐产品都相当匮乏的齐国！ If this cannot write a positive result to come, my how doing right by previous generation ten million network article reader, my how doing right by previous generation was curled the writer peer who dies innumerably! 要是这都写不出点名堂来,我怎么对得起前世数以千万记的网文读者,我怎么对得起前世无数被卷死的写手同行！ Although is in the key the non- winner, dares to grasp the writing brush to swing Nine Provinces! 虽是键中不胜者,敢握毛笔荡九州！ Fan Zi looks at He Yun Xiao to complete the transformation on makings weakly helplessly, like the playboys who a good deed does not do, overnight takes off the brocade robe, changes the armor, a person, grasps the long dagger-axe, before horizontal Yu Wanjun . 范梓弱眼睁睁地看着何云霄完成了气质上的蜕变,就像一位好事不干的纨绔子弟,一夜之间脱下锦袍,换上盔甲,一人单骑,手持长戈,横于万军阵前。 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 75 to become 75】 【范梓弱的好感度由75变为75】 „Chinese catalpa is weak, actually wants to write everyone to like looking, what the most important point is, do you know?” “梓弱,其实想写出大家都爱看的,最重要的一点是什么,你知道吗？” „Does not know.” “不知道。” He Yun Xiao looks at her to say with a smile: „The most important thing is that actually puts down your pride.” 何云霄看着她笑道:“最重要的一点,其实是放下你的骄傲。” Fan Zi is knitting the brows weakly, seemed clearly became aware, seemed does not have clear(ly) to become aware. He Yun Xiao does not demand her to understand. By said only, is not clear, is normal. 范梓弱皱着眉,好似明悟了,又好似没有明悟。何云霄也不强求她明白。单靠这么说,不明白,才是正常的。 He extracts the manuscript paper, divides to make two halves. And half give Fan Zi to be weak, said: „Chinese catalpa is weak, I take to you, is our both has looked. And a itself/Ben, what written is ‚marries into the wife's household Su’, but also remembers?” 他抽出稿纸,分作两半。其中一半递给范梓弱,道:“梓弱,我带给你的,是我们两个都看过的。其中一本,写的是‘入赘苏家’,还记得吗？” Fan Zi weakness said: „Remembers. Called «Taihu Lake Knight-errant swordsman Record».” 范梓弱点头道:“记得。叫《太湖剑侠录》。” He Yun Xiao said: „Good. We give this giving a name character now, then looks for other younger sister Du and your family place young housemaids, whose has a look at them to name is interested.” 何云霄道:“不错。咱们现在重新给这本起个名字,然后再去找杜妹妹和府上其他的小丫鬟,看看她们对谁起名字的更感兴趣。” Fan Zi weak does not know that He Yun Xiao this action is what intention, had not asked, only presses his instruction to do. 范梓弱不知何云霄这举动是何用意,却没多问,只按着他的吩咐去做。 Is thinking at heart cannot think of as worthless by the young master, therefore she recalls that content attentively, then refines the primary intention of sublimating unceasingly. 心里想着不能被公子看扁了,于是她就用心回忆起那本的内容,然后不断提炼升华的主旨。 Finally, thinks the entire quarter of an hour, Fan Zi writes down name that she gives newly weakly- «azure Duckweed». 最终,想了整整一刻钟,范梓弱写下她新取的名字-《青萍》。 Reviews that side He Yun Xiao, wrote long time ago, idles the safe/without matter to rest one's chin in one's hands looks secretly Fan Zi knits the brows weakly the elegant face of ponder. 反观何云霄那边,早早就写好了,闲得无事一直托腮偷偷看着范梓弱皱眉思考的俏脸。 In the He Yun Xiao heart sighed: The female lord is the female lord. No matter Chu Xiaoxiao and Du Yinyun, are close at hand Fan Zi are weak. They are not only the attractive issues, but is first shocking, 234 th more looks is more attractive. Most importantly, they are the beauty of that each has his good points, rather than stereotyped beauty. 何云霄心中感叹:女主就是女主。不管是楚潇潇、杜音韵,还是近在眼前的范梓弱。她们不仅仅是漂亮的问题,而是第一眼惊艳,第二三四眼越瞧越漂亮。最重要的,她们是那种各有千秋的美,而不是千篇一律的美。 Really makes one sigh with emotion this is this face to be how long. 真让人感慨这是这脸怎么长出来的。 Simply is perfect long on the aesthetic appreciation of He Yun Xiao. 简直就是完美长在何云霄的审美上。 Fan Zi thinks weakly the name, then said to He Yun Xiao: „Did young master think?” 范梓弱想好了名字,便对何云霄说道:“公子想好了吗？” He Yun Xiao said with a smile: „That natural. Does the Chinese catalpa want to look weakly?” 何云霄笑道:“那当然。梓弱想看吗？” „Un.” “嗯。” He Yun Xiao is unambiguous, at the scene writing the manuscript paper of name advanced the Fan Zi weak front. 何云霄也不含糊,当场把写了名字的稿纸推到范梓弱的面前。 Sees only on that manuscript paper, impressively writing: 只见那稿纸上,赫然写着: «Son in law who takes wife's name: A move defeats martial arts world hegemon». 《赘婿:一招打败武林盟主》。