„Was this Classical Chinese?? How was Classical Chinese?” The Qiu Wuji grief and indignation is clutching Chu Ge collar: „This obviously is the vernacular, but described the scenery with some antithetical styles!” “这怎么是文言文了？啊？怎么是文言文了？”秋无际悲愤地揪着楚戈的衣领子:“这明明就是白话,只是写景用了些骈文而已啊！” Chu Ge also a little has a headache. 楚戈也有点头疼。 Said Classical Chinese, definitely is incorrect. Actually this literary style is the ancient vernacular, the styles of four big famous work are also this kind, if you look at «Journey to the West», Chapter 1 looks on the boundless many poems and songs is dizzy, but actually narrated mostly and dialogue very vernacular, most calls a bastard style with jarring intrusion of wenyan into baihua to the present, to the literary style was a little disparity. 说文言文吧,肯定是不对的。其实她这文风属于古白话,四大名著的风格也是此类,你要是去看《西游记》,第一章就茫茫多的诗词歌赋看得头晕,但其实大部分叙事和对话还是挺白话的,对现在来说最多称一句半文不白,离文言还是有点差距的。 This style, Chu Ge definitely does not favor its result, however to the result had not anticipated, made her send. 这种风格,楚戈肯定不看好它的成绩,然而本来就对成绩没期待啊,也就让她发了。 Has not thought actually will be returned, enter the library did not enter. 倒是没想到会被打回来,入库都入不了。 After all oneself are not the edition does not verify the group, everyone's edit standard is different. 毕竟自己不是编辑也不是审核组,大家的审稿标准不一样。 „In the final analysis was introduction that scenery antithetical style was too overdone, the needing show savage, wrote a palatial mountain not to finish up honestly, you put this ‚to have a tax single channel scenery’, anything ‚river water far away, where did not know Yuqiao ; The fog is deep, the young lad returns vaguely’, enough 200-300 characters are pulling this, does not need, really does not need......” “归根结底是开篇那段风景骈文太过火了,没必要秀得这么凶残,老老实实写个巍峨青山不就完事了,你搁这‘有一篇赋单道此景’,什么‘江水迢迢,不知渔樵何在;云雾深深,依稀童子归来’,足足200-300字在扯这个,没必要,真没必要……” Qiu Wuji is nipping the lower lip, the look grief and indignation: „I thought for a long time! This is also the necessary scenery serves as contrast, I have read several thousand years of story story-telling scripts, writes......” 秋无际咬着下唇,神色悲愤:“我想了好久的！这也是必要的风景衬托,我看过几千年的故事话本,都这么写……” „Emmmm looked for several thousand years......” Chu Ge to scratch the head, then was really not good to do. Qiu Wuji so many year of fostering reading memories and written letters and so on literary style, belongs deep-rooted, is not suddenly changes, in this world looked that the novel has not looked at several, definitely could not cover ten thousand years of foundation. “emmmm看了几千年……”楚戈挠头,这么说来还真不好搞。秋无际这么多年养成的阅读记忆和书写信件之类的文风,属于根深蒂固的了,不是说改就改的,在这世界看小说也没看几本,肯定覆盖不了万年根基。 „Words said that you hadn't deliberately studied my literary style at that time?” “话说你当时不是还刻意研究过我的文风？” „? Looked at the story to go to...... the literary style and literary style not such?” Qiu Wuji sits in the sides of the bed is in a daze: „Moreover I also looked at that after with the classical Chinese literature, went back......” “啊？看故事去了……文风、文风不就那样？”秋无际坐在床沿发呆:“而且我还看了那么多道经和古文,又回去了……” „You spoke adapt actually quickly, writing to be how good?” “你说话倒是适应得很快啊,写怎么就不行呢？” „Speech is different, has the environment. Writes the article unable to write, these anything reveal that you will not write your group chatted says to pass when the book to me......” “说话不一样啊,有环境的。写文就不能那么写啊,你也不会在书里写你群聊时说的那些什么露露给我透一下吧……” Chu Ge: „...... But actually is also.” 楚戈:“……倒也是。” Qiu Wuji grievance: „Do I want to read crazily, seek for the feeling of modern literary style?” 秋无际委屈:“难道我要疯狂看书,寻找现代文风的感觉？” „Okay, if you with your style, deliberately do not imitate others style, can not accomplish?” “这么着吧,你若是不用自己的风格,刻意模仿他人风格,能办到不？” „Can try, imitates your?” “可以试试,模仿你的？” „female-oriented that you send, imitation female-oriented Great God, that side female-oriented also the tasteful writing is actually exquisite, is only everyone's exquisite way is not quite same, you study.” Chu Ge said: „If imitates me, that must send male-oriented.” “你发的女频,就模仿女频大神的吧,其实女频那边也讲究文字优美,只是大家的优美方式不太一样,你研究研究。”楚戈道:“如果模仿我的话,那得发男频。” „What is the male and female orientation main difference? Female main character and masculine main character?” “男女频主要区别是什么？女性主角和男性主角？” „This is the angle of view substitution difference. In addition has the difference of style orientation, a female-oriented more tasteful sentiment, a male-oriented more tasteful enterprise, naturally is not generally spoken, female-oriented also has the big female lead enterprise article, male-oriented also has the love dog grain article, however the detail is different, angle of view and thinking mode......” “这是个视角代入区别。另外还有风格取向的区别,女频更讲究感情,男频更讲究事业,当然也不是一概而论,女频也有大女主事业文,男频也有恋爱狗粮文,然而细节还是不同,视角和思维方式……” Qiu Wuji was big: „stop stop stop......” 秋无际头都大了:“停停停……” Chu Ge has saying: „Each trade is seemingly simple, studies many ways, this is people of different lines of work are as separate as separated by mountains. The words saying that your male and female orientation has not divided to understand, determined can write?” 楚戈只好道:“每个行当看上去简单,研究进去都很多门道的,这就是隔行如隔山。话说你连男女频都没分明白,确定要写下去？” Qiu Wuji thinks: „You obtains truly carefully, has in view of the segmentation of different reader, our that side......, you said that if I in this publication, do not attain that side to publish the dissemination, is? By the this Eminence influence, during the ten-day days passed on the world knowledge to hear were very easy...... I can also look to study the Dao of Books person to equal......” 秋无际想了想:“你们这边分得确实细致,有针对不同读者的细分,我们那边……诶,你说,如果我不在这发表,拿到那边去发表传播,算不算？以本座的影响力,旬日之间传得天下知闻还是很容易的……我还可以找研究书之道的人合计合计……” Chu Ge opened the mouth slowly. 楚戈慢慢张大了嘴。 If you write a book in that side, in the book constructed a world, this kid wrap/sets...... 如果你在那边写书,书里构建了一个世界,这娃套的…… „Did I try to say again? It is not good comes back to try to find the solution again.” Some Qiu Wuji embarrassed tunnels: „en, my time also remained enough for a long time, first went back for several days?” “我试一下再说？不行再回来想办法。”秋无际有些不好意思地道:“嗯,我这次也留得够久了,先回去几天？” The tone of this questionnaire opinion hears Chu Ge somewhat slightly to satisfy. 这征求意见的口吻听得楚戈有些小满足。 Head of household! 户主嘛！ Chu Ge has not demanded, racket her shoulder: „Tests, although I do not favor, but is very interested, hopes that you can succeed.” 楚戈也没强求,拍拍她的肩膀:“去测试吧,虽然我不看好,但挺感兴趣的,希望你能成功吧。” Qiu Wuji has not spoken, but is staring at his hand straightly. 秋无际没说话,只是直挺挺地盯着他的手。 Chu Ge received awkwardly. 楚戈尴尬地收了回来。 Qiu Wuji pushes him to walk out: „Goes out, I must go back.” 秋无际推着他往外走:“出去出去,我要回去了。” Chu Ge then remembers her to go back now is hides on the bed to fall the clothes, one wants to be in the heart, suddenly said: „Your this main character name, placed that world really to miss a meaning, how did I change a character?” 楚戈这才想起她现在回去是躲床上掉衣服的,一想就是心中一荡,忽然道:“你这个主角名,放在那个世界就真差了点意思,我改一个字如何？” Qiu Wuji some have not kept up with the thought that he jumps, queerly said: „What changes?” 秋无际有些没跟上他跳跃的思维,奇道:“改什么？” Chu Ge folds the body to go back, changed a character in the documents: „Chu Muqiu.” 楚戈折身回去,在文档上改了一个字:“楚慕秋。” Subsequently turns the head to smile: „Is good?” 继而转头一笑:“好不好？” Qiu Wuji looks at his smile, in the heart some anything is also swinging very much strangely, is unable to say the table. 秋无际怔怔地看着他的笑容,心中也有些什么很奇怪地在荡着,无法言表。 This is not Chu Ge wants to gather together Qiu Wuji, changed the pattern to keep saying. 这不又是楚戈欲逑秋无际嘛,变着花样不停说。 Snort. 哼。 She is excessive: „Good, you will write a book. Goes out, I must walk.” 她偏过头:“好了好了,你会写书得了吧。出去,我要走了。” Chu Ge has put out a hand, seized her delicate hands: „Our world, the farewell at least wants the handshake ritual.” 楚戈伸过手来,捉住了她的纤手:“我们这个世界,告别至少要个握手礼的。” Qiu Wuji becomes him to grasp, but also was rubbed two, what words had not said. 秋无际就任他握着,还被揉了两下,什么话也没说。 ............ ………… Qiu Wuji went back. 秋无际回去了。 Chu Ge stands in her room, looks that even closed down forgot the computer of closing, thought that this Qiu Wuji went back to be a bit like flees from calamity, hurriedly. 楚戈站在她屋里,看着连关机都忘了关的电脑,觉得这次秋无际回去有点像逃难,急匆匆的。 As for me does not raise your quilt. 至于嘛,我又不掀你被子。 Chu Ge is hearing in the hand the delicate fragrance, the vision falls in the computer documents, is lost in thought. 楚戈闻着手中清香,目光落在电脑文档上,陷入了沉思。 In own setting, Dao of Books of that world definitely cannot achieve to set the world level, is bad, this kind of member can summon the spirits of some books, or achieves some kind of magical technique effect using the writing characteristics, is the limit. 在自己的设定中,那个世界的书之道是肯定达不到创世水准的,差得很远,此类修士能召唤一些书之灵、或者利用文字特性达成某类术法效果,已经是极限。 Even during the estimate idea, the ascension Heaven is unable to create the world through Dao of Books. Method that this type is to the high divine creative force, either is main character, either is the ability of BOSS scale has finally, but in the setting of this book does not have from the start. 甚至在预计构思之中,飞升的天界都无法通过书之道来创世。这种属于至高造物的手段,要么是主角所有,要么是最终BOSS档次的才能有,而这本书的设定中压根就没有。 Qiu Wuji goes back to create a world set of kid, should unable to achieve, she cannot break through the world limit. 秋无际回去想要创世套娃,应该达不成,她突破不了世界局限。 Therefore one side wraps the kid issue to put, truly what Chu Ge is thinking, in oneself book has not written Qiu Wuji writing a book, then she goes back to write a book at this time, and is the dissemination world, what nature? 所以套娃问题可以搁一边,楚戈真正在想的是,自己书里没有写秋无际写书,那么她此时回去写书、并且传播天下,属于什么性质？ This is definitely to the world creates certain impact and change...... just should not affect the plot trend. Will this degree of change, have the issue? 这是肯定会对天下造成一定影响和改变的……只不过应该不影响剧情走向。这种程度的改变,会有问题么？ This also tests one point. 这也是测试一环。 Does not know that Qiu Wuji thinks this first floor...... had not looked the appearance that she travels does not have mostly. 不知道秋无际想到这一层没……看她跑路的样子多半没。 Chu Ge felt own likely taking the trouble guardian. 楚戈感觉自己像个费心的家长。 Matter that en...... the guardian must be the guardian! Chu Ge is a thief about looked, sat in front of the computer, turned on the Qiu Wuji hard disk and browser. 嗯……家长就要做家长的事情！楚戈做贼似的左右看了看,坐到了电脑面前,打开了秋无际的硬盘和浏览器。 Which car(riage) you looked at other day, day after day is searching what Inguri's strange thing, making the father have a look! 你上回到底看了哪辆车,还有一天天的都在搜索什么古里古怪的东西,让爸爸看看！ en...... car(riage), here...... 嗯……车,在这里…… The Chu Ge point opened looked at one, has almost not flung to fly the mouse. 楚戈点开看了一眼,差点没把鼠标甩飞了。 This damn is a M male is brushed training by the leather whip unexpectedly movie! 这TM居然是一部M男被皮鞭抽打调教的片子！ No wonder her the response had not imagined on that day is so intense, instead vision sizing up, extremely strange...... so that's how it is! 怪不得那天她的反应没有想象中那么激烈,反而目光上上下下的打量,极为怪异……原来如此！ Although had not come under attack initially! But this was not the good deed my day! 虽然当初没挨打！但这不是好事啊我日！ Moreover I have not looked at this type of car(riage)! 而且我也没看过这种车啊！ Chu Ge is almost mad spits up blood, selected the hand airplane group to chat: „On that day who gave the Sect Leader Qiu round of M car(riage), stood to lead!” 楚戈气得差点呕血,点开了手机群聊:“那天谁给秋宗主发的M车,站出来领死！”