„In childhoodwas kidnapped and soldin the ravineby the slave trader, was just rescued......”Chu Geto look that the Qiu Wujifileis very speechless: „Has the duston this soft and fair skinimmortal aura, thisstatuswholetter/believes?”
“小时候被人贩子拐卖到山沟沟里,刚被解救……”楚戈看着秋无际档案很是无语:“就她这细皮嫩肉仙气出尘的,这身份谁信啊?”Zhong Yihas nothing to do with say: „Regards as the words of slave traderyou? Wassuddenlya little rationality.”钟逸袖手道:“把你视为人贩子的话呢?是不是忽然有点合理性了。”Chu Ge: „?”楚戈:“?”Qiu Wujisaid: „Probablyis very reasonable.”秋无际道:“好像很合理。”Chu Ge: „......”楚戈:“……”Zhong Yisizes up the Qiu Wujimoment, sighed: „Youreallyshouldwear the mask, thisis longcompared with the documentaccording toattractivehundredtimes, arriving atBlackroomgoes tothesepeopleto fear that was the soulmustnot have, then your ID cardalsocalledQiu Wuji......”钟逸打量秋无际片刻,叹了口气:“你真该戴面具,这长得比证件照好看百倍,走到黑屋去那些人怕是魂都要没了,然后你这身份证还叫秋无际……”Qiu Wujishows a faint smile, withoutreply.秋无际微微一笑,没有回答。Thisworldpraisedothers'appearanceto be probably commonly seen, to herwas not familiar with, thatworldeveryonecontained. Actuallywhichworldregardless, shedoes not likeothersfocusing on herappearance...... currently speaking, oneselfothertake the thing that the proudthingneedsto hide, ok.
这个世界夸奖别人的外貌好像司空见惯,对她来说还是不怎么习惯,那个世界大家含蓄多了。其实无论哪个世界,她都不喜欢别人把关注点放在她的容貌上……不过目前来说,自己其他引以骄傲的东西正是需要隐藏的东西,算了。Snort, the point when mywritingto becomeGod, canpraisehad!
哼,等我码字成神,可以夸的点就有了!Is confidentincludingQiu Wuji that the main characterfamous metropolisdoes not wantto understand.
连主角名都没想明白的秋无际信心满满。Zhong Yisaid: „Thispreserves the file, was kidnapped and soldand so onwon't publicize, whomneedsto believe? The status of publicauthenticationisyourdistantly relatedcousin, accommodating alongside...... was rightinyourregistered permanent address, is thisdistant relativefar?”钟逸道:“这个只是留存档案,被拐卖之类的又不会公开,需要谁相信?公开认证的身份是你远房表妹,挂靠在你户口里……对了,这远房亲戚多远啊?”Chu Geis extremely serious: „Besidefive degree of mourning clothing!”楚戈极其严肃:“五服之外!”Qiu Wujihas not refuted.秋无际没有反驳。Oneselfarehecreates, is the relative? Butalsodoes not have the blood relationship. Thereforeshouldbe the relativeness outside five degree of mourning clothing, withoutproblem.
自己是他创造的,算亲属?但又没有血缘。所以本来就该算是五服之外的亲戚关系嘛,没毛病。
The registered permanent addresscame up. The ID card must manufacture, next daycantake, cansend. Chu Gehas not remained, leaves behind the addressto take the registered permanent addressto bringQiu Wuji, have mixed feelingsleaves.
户口就这么上去了。身份证还要制作,隔天才能拿,也可以寄。楚戈也没有多留,留下地址拿着户口带着秋无际,心情复杂地离开。Qiu Wujitakes the registered permanent addressto lookin the back seatrepeatedly,alsosameveryhas mixed feelings.秋无际在后座拿着户口翻来覆去地看,心情也一样很复杂。Head of household: Chu Ge.
户主:楚戈。Family member: Qiu Wuji.
家庭成员:秋无际。
The registered permanent addressaddressis notrental house, isolddwelling that Chu Gemoves from, is coming...... wúinurban districtold city district, actually does thishave the family members?
户口地址不是租屋,是楚戈搬离的老宅,在市区老城区来着……唔,其实这是有房族?Besideswithhead of household's relations are „cousin”, solelylooks atthisthing, alwaysfeltandgets the marriage certificateto have no difference.
除了和户主的关系是“表妹”之外,单单看着这玩意,总觉得和领了结婚证都没什么区别。
The head of household, the family member, looksreallystrangely.
户主,家庭成员,看着真怪。Right, nowhad the status, probablyreallycanget the card?
对了,现在有身份了,好像是真的可以领证的了吧?„Cousin......”
“表妹啊……”„......?”
“啊……啊?”Chu Geis riding a bicycle, the tonequitesomewhatsighedto sighsaid: „And other ID cardsgot down, going to the bankopened a bank account...... you is really modern people.”楚戈骑着车,语气颇有些喟叹地说:“等身份证下来了,去银行开户吧……你真的已经是个现代人了。”Qiu Wujiis silent.秋无际沉默。Cell phoneWeChatties uphisnumber, to usehisbankcard, likewindinginhiscuscuth japonica, probablyalsoyesterday.
手机微信绑他的号、用他的银行卡,如同缠绕在他身上的菟丝子,好像还在昨天。Nowcouldhaveownaccount, isnatural person who an independencehas.
现在已经可以拥有自己的账户了,是一个独立存在的自然人了。„Don't youhave a pointto lose?”Qiu Wujiaskedsuddenly.
“你没有一点失落吗?”秋无际忽然问。„Has.”Chu Gesmiles: „Has such a type...... the daughtergrew up the feeling.”
“有啊。”楚戈笑笑:“有那么一种……女儿长大了的感觉。”„Alsopoor.”Qiu Wujisaidill-humoredly: „Ihadmystatus, no longerattachesinyou, canleavemomentarily, wheregoes to! Don't youknow?”
“还贫。”秋无际没好气道:“我有了自己的身份,不再依附于你,随时可以离开,去哪里都可以!你不知道吗?”„Yes, the daughtergrew up is also this.”
“是啊,女儿长大了也就是这样的。”„You......”
“你……”„Losingisa little.” The Chu Getoneis serious: „ButQiu Wuji, thisisourthesetwomonths, continuouslypursuingthing......”
“失落是有点的。”楚戈语气郑重起来:“但是秋无际,这就是我们这两个月来,一直在追求的东西啊……”Qiu Wujiis silent.秋无际默然。Chu Gesaid: „ActuallyIdo not know that losesmany, isgratifiedmany, actually, myunexpectedlynottoomanytrue feelings, becauseperhapsthisdoes not obtainthroughoureffortsslowly, was short of a taste. Reallyplays the game unable to cheat.”楚戈道:“其实我也不知道失落多一点呢,还是欣慰多一点,其实吧,我居然没有太多实感,或许因为这不是通过我们的努力慢慢获得的吧,少了点滋味。果然玩游戏不能作弊啊。”HelplessQiu Wujisaid: „Has not seen the hopeto add the difficultytooneself, youthink that is the cultivationchallenge. Innested in the housewriting the writerdepending onyourone, byoneselffeared that dailyistosses about for severalyearsnot to handlethis.”秋无际无奈道:“没见过希望给自己加难度的,你以为是修行挑战啊。就凭你一个天天窝在家里码字的写手,靠自己怕是折腾几年也搞不定这个。”„, The processis in any case unimportant, thisresultis we need.”Chu Gerode a bicycle the community, slowlystopped: „Yourstatusindependent...... hopes that yourlife is also.”
“呃,反正过程不重要,这个结果是我们需要的。”楚戈骑车到了小区,慢慢停了下来:“你的身份独立了……希望你的生命也是。”Qiu Wujilooks athisback, for a very long timeis speechless.秋无际看着他的背影,久久无言。Will once have a thoughtoccasionally, thinks that does not understandsowill be why intimatewithhim, butdoes not needto thinkat this momentagain.
曾经偶尔会有种念头,想不明白为什么会跟他这么亲近,但这一刻不需要再想了。
It is not mostly bigwithhissettingrelations.
多半与他那句设定关系不大的。Becauseheis really helping himselfwholeheartedly, does the person the non-vegetation, how couldhave no interest?
因为他真的全心全意在帮助自己,人非草木,岂能无心?„TodayuswaslunarJuly 15.”Chu Gesaidsuddenly: „Is ourtwo sidestime linenot quite same? When shouldnot arrive atyouandYan Qianliefights a decisive battle?”
“今天我们这边是农历七月十五了。”楚戈忽然道:“我们两边时间线不太一样吧?应该没到你和炎千烈决战之时?”„Alsono.”Qiu Wujisaid: „Insidetimewalkswithyourplot , there is nothing to dowith the realistictime. Howeveralsoquick......”
“还没。”秋无际道:“里面的时间是随着你的剧情走的,和现实时间无关。不过也快了……”„PossiblyisIcould not understand that yourstate of mind, has thoughtimportant mattercurrentyoualsoponder over the gossiphere, is out of sortsvery much.”
“可能是我理解不了你的心境吧,一直觉得大事当前你还在这里琢磨家长里短的,很违和。”Qiu Wujishows a faint smile: „To catch up withmeto walk?”秋无际微微一笑:“这么想赶我走啊?”„It is not thatmeaning......”
“不是那意思……”„Iam studying the meaning of yourcreationworld, thisisseeks the goodway of breakthroughto metruly...... the cultivationmatter, youleave alone.”Qiu Wujimoves toward the elevator, ponytailswings: „Iwill certainly write!”
“我在研究你的创世之意呢,这对我而言才真正是寻求突破的好途径……修行的事,你就别管了。”秋无际走向电梯,马尾一摇一摇:“我一定会写出来的!”
After the moment .
片刻后。Chu Gereadsin the documents„Chu Xiaoqiu” the main charactername, is incapable ofcomplaining.楚戈看着文档上“楚小秋”的主角名,无力吐槽。Asmain character, isasourchild'sname, probablymissed a meaning......
无论是作为主角,还是作为咱孩子的名字,好像都差了点意思啊……Qiu Wujiis casting a sidelong glanceslantinglyhe: „What's wrong? The namegives up affectationis good, the main charactersettingis the poor familyfemale, this/shouldso. Chu TiangeQiu Wujilikeyou, too the unimaginative, lookedpoetryliterary reference that collectsintentionally.”秋无际斜睨着他:“怎么?名字返璞归真才好,主角设定是贫家女,就该如此。像你这样楚天歌秋无际,太匠气了,一看就是故意凑的诗词典故。”Unexpectedly the accident/surprisehas a damntruth...... Chu Genot to know whether to laugh or cry: „Ok, according toyouthinkscomes. Savesseveralchapters of drafts, when the ID cardarrived, youcanselect mother to send the book.”
居然意外有TM那么点道理……楚戈哭笑不得:“行吧,按你想的来。存个几章稿子,等身份证到了,你就可以点娘发书了。”en, thoughtsuddenlyChu Xiaoqiudoes not have nothingwell, was the namesyntheses of twopeople...... Chu Gelooked at the Qiu Wujiprofilesecretly, thought that thisshould notbe the name that shespeaksto be willingto use, even ifreasonablyproposed that will still be rejectedis right, finallyunexpectedly was really shewantsto come out......嗯,忽然觉得楚小秋也没什么不好,怎么也是两个人的名字合体嘛……楚戈偷偷看了眼秋无际的侧脸,觉得这不应该是她会愿意用的名字,按理即使自己提出也会被驳回才对,结果居然真是她自己想出来的……Means......
是不是意味着……Ok, wantstoomanyto be hitcarefully.
算了,想太多小心被打。But the Chu Gemoodisverygood, snort/hum the smallsongwas returning toownroomwriting.
但楚戈心情还是很好,哼着小曲子回了自己的房间码字。Tworooms, peaceful, only thenraps the sound of keyboardto reverberatefaintly, likeonceandZhang Qirenaboutrentingday. Chu Geoncehow the brainmade updoes not think,oneselfasks a girlfriend to beunexpectedlytogetherinwriting......
两个房间,安安静静,只有敲击键盘的声音隐隐回荡,像极了曾经和张奇人合租的日子。楚戈曾经怎么脑补也不会去想,自己找个女朋友居然会是一起在码字……enis not a girlfriend, aiyain any casealmost...... in brief the stylereallyarrives attogetherwritingthis, Chu Gehas not felt out of sorts, the life of writerperhapsforeveris an appearance, was used tothisappearance.嗯不是女朋友,哎呀反正差不多啦……总之当画风真的走到一起码字这一步的时候,楚戈却一点都没觉得违和,写手的生活或许永远都是一个模样,也习惯了这个模样。Good.
挺好的。Qiu Wujiwrotethreedays of draft, equalsfivechapters, eachchapter of 2000characters, equalten thousandcharacter.秋无际写了三天稿子,合计五章,每章两千字,合计万字。On this dayID card.
这一天身份证到了。Qiu Wujiby the solemn and respectfulmentality of greeting the Yan Qianlieduel, opens a mother, registered the authoraccount number, carefullyfilled ineachmaterial, the clickissued Chapter 1, anticipated the enter the libraryverificationintense.秋无际以一种迎接炎千烈决斗的肃穆心态,打开点娘,注册了作者账号,认认真真地填写每一份资料,点击发布了第一章,紧张地期待入库审核。Chu Gealsoputs downownmattertemporarily, sitsis accompanyingat the same time: „Nowthisenter the librarysoonverifies, mostonehour, quickwordssecond.”楚戈也暂时搁下自己的事儿,坐在一边陪着等:“现在这个入库审核很快的,最多一小时,快的话秒过。”Qiu Wujisomewhatis anxiously small: „Shouldnot examine?”秋无际有些小紧张:“该不会不过审?”„Generallynot, butexaminesonly thentwosituations, onetypeis Chapter 1has the obvioussensitive issue, anothertypeis the sentenceis not smooth, compared withAImight as well...... mustknow that AIwrites, canexamineenter the libraryfrequently.”
“一般不会,不过审只有两种情况,一种是第一章有明显的敏感问题,另一种是语句都不通顺,比AI还不如……要知道就连AI写的,都常常能过审入库。”Qiu Wujitothisactuallyconfident.秋无际对这个倒是有信心的。Shewill not make up the story, does not know that the novelwritingtechnique and essential factor, do not represent the style is not good. Reallymustexquisite, hoist the poetryantithetical stylecompared with the writing, shecanhangto hit100Chu Ge.
她只是不会编故事,不知道小说写作手法和要素,不代表文笔不行。真要比起文字优美、扯起诗词骈文来,她能吊打一百个楚戈。Finallytwo peopleanticipatedintenselydozen minutes, in the stand the messagecame: „Sorry, yourworkhas not achievedenter the library standard, pleasemake persistent efforts......”
结果两人紧张地期待了十几分钟,站内短信来了:“对不起,您的作品未达到入库标准,请再接再厉……”
The Qiu Wujipeoplewere silly: „Ha?”秋无际人都傻了:“哈?”Chu Gescratches the head, healsothought that this Chapter 1did not say the storydoes have the personto look, at least the writingis very fierce, a scenery that opening the rhythmical prose style with four syllable and six-syllable lines in parallel, looking for the ancientcame is also no more than so, hasn't thisstylepossibly reachedenter the library standard?楚戈挠挠头,他也觉得这第一章不说故事有没有人看,起码文字很厉害啊,开局骈四俪六的一片风景,找个古人来也不过如此了,这文笔怎么可能未达入库标准?Hethinks,braced oneselfto find itselfto edit, sentQiu Wuji Chapter 1: „Editiongreatlytroublesomehelphas a look, thismycousin'sarticle, whatreason did enter the libraryoverflowis? Wheretriggered the sensitiveword?”
他想了想,硬着头皮找到自家编辑,把秋无际的第一章发了过去:“编辑大大麻烦帮忙看看,这我表妹的文,入库都没过是什么原因?哪里触发敏感词了吗?”
The editorsilentmoment, returned toseveralcharacters: „we don’t accept Classical Chinese.”
编辑沉默片刻,回了几个字:“我们不收文言文。”
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