SAHDA :: Volume #13

#1210: Story( 2 / 3 asked monthly ticket)


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Zhang Tan has not disturbed children's farewell, he still remembers clearly, just when came the small red horse, the millet must leave, little white is extremely does not abandon. 张叹没有打扰小朋友们的告别,他依然清晰记得,刚来小红马时,小米要离开,小白也是这么万分不舍。 He and show father chatted. 他和秀秀爸爸聊了起来。 They stand outside the crowd, at night the fallen leaf flutters about, swaying shadows of the trees. 他们站在人群外,夜晚落叶纷飞,树影婆娑。 Where is your native place?” Zhang Tan asked. “你老家是哪里?”张叹问。 Yichun of Jiangxi, a small mountain village.” show father puts out one packet of cigarettes from the pocket, extracts pays Zhang Tan, „do you smoke?” “赣省的宜春,一个小山村。”秀秀爸爸从口袋里拿出一包香烟,抽出一支给张叹,“你抽烟吗?” I do not pull out, thanks. Went back also to come back?” “我不抽,谢谢。回去了还会回来吗?” Will not come back probably. show must attend the elementary school, cannot follow I to run again everywhere, celebrates the new year I to look for a work that side the native place. At this point, really must, Boss stretch/open, the small red horse caravan I be thank you busy, otherwise I do not know how to take care of show.” “大概不会回来了。秀秀要读小学,不能再跟着我到处跑,过完年我在老家那边找份工作。说到这里,真的要谢谢你,张老板,小红马帮了我大忙,不然我都不知道怎么照顾秀秀。” He must work in the evening, a person in Pujiang, is unable to take care of show, is good because of having the small red horse. 他晚上要工作,一个人在浦江,无法照顾秀秀,好在有小红马。 Two people are chatting, has not chatted the life, has not chatted the work, the one who chatted was the daughter. 两人闲聊着,没有聊生活,没有聊工作,聊的是女儿。 show father smokes cigarette, presses to extinguish in the cigarette case the cigarette butt, then placed in the oneself pocket. 秀秀爸爸抽完一支烟,把烟头在烟盒上摁灭,然后放在了自己的口袋里。 Boss stretch/open, has a look at my thing..” “张老板,有空看看我这份东西吧。。” He coyly several wrinkled folds in the together paper to give Zhang Tan. 他扭扭捏捏地把几张皱巴巴的折叠在一起的纸张递给张叹 This what?” “这什么?” „The story that I write, hehe, scribbles, you had free time to have a look, to have no free time even, lost.” “我写的故事,呵呵,乱写的,你有空就看看,没空就算了,丢了吧。” Zhang Tan said with a smile: Ok, I have a look in the evening.” 张叹笑道:“行,我晚上看看。” show father said happily: Yeah, thanks! I do not request anything, wants to show you, I know that you are the big screenwriter, the vision is good, my story is my side happened, I could not put down, writes casually.” 秀秀爸爸高兴地说:“哎,谢谢!我不要求什么,就是想给你看看,我知道你是大编剧,眼光好,我这个故事是我身边发生的,我一直放不下,有空的时候就随便写写。” Then, he brings show who is holding the cloth doll, had/left little red horse, waved toward the people, walks. 说完,他带着抱着布娃娃的秀秀,出了小红马,朝众人挥挥手,走了。 Tan Xier cried a tears person, and toot toot is dragging the classroom by little white. They also want the family/home that in Xier drags three building, Zhang Tan was worried that drags gruff the sad happy baby, expressed hastily he can hug. 谭喜儿小朋友哭成了一个泪人,被小白和嘟嘟拖着回了教室。她们还想把喜儿拖上三楼的家里,张叹担心把伤心的喜娃娃拖成憨憨儿,连忙表示他可以抱着。 Really is a sentimental little friend. 真是个多愁善感的小朋友。 Zhang Tan Xier take home, plans to put on the sofa, but the little friend holds his neck not to let go. 张叹把喜儿抱回家,打算放沙发上,但是小朋友抱着他的脖子不肯撒手。 Zhang Tan then hugged the study room her, talked openly with her. 张叹便把她抱到了书房,和她谈心。 When Xier was finally happy to select, they came out from the study room, see only in the living room to fill the little friend, was cares about Xier. 当喜儿心情总算好点了,他们从书房出来,只见客厅里排满了小朋友,都是来关心喜儿的。 How did you come?” Xier asked that the tone was difficult to cover is moved. “你们怎么都来了?”喜儿问道,语气难掩感动。 Do not cry, Xier, we have played each family together.” Toot toot said. “你不要哭啦,喜儿,我们一起玩过家家叭。”嘟嘟说。 What story does Xier you want to listen to?” journey journey said. “喜儿你想听什么故事?”程程说。 Eagle catches the chicken, I make you work as the eagle.” This is history Baobao the commitment. “老鹰抓小鸡,我让你当老鹰叭。”这是史包包的承诺。 ...... …… The children are coaxing the happy baby, the happy baby smiles through tears. 小朋友们都在哄喜娃娃,喜娃娃破涕为笑。 She does not understand the expression mood, but the mood is solid in her heart, that is named happy mood. 她不懂表达情绪,但情绪在她心中是实实在在的,那是一种叫作幸福的情绪。 Drinks little bear, drinks little bear ~ ~ ~ “喝小熊,喝小熊嗷~~~” little white opens the refrigerator, steps in the stool, stealing little bear drink, the pomegranate pomegranate stands in the , is responsible for transporting, has been looking at Zhang Tan, for fear that Zhang Tan discovered. 小白打开冰箱,踩在凳子上,“偷”小熊饮料,榴榴站在边上,负责搬运,一直在瞄张叹,生怕张叹发现。 The result has not thought, Boss stretch/open had not discovered, but little white this melon baby oneself shouted made noise, one that Boss stretch/open brushed looked, the pomegranate pomegranate put out a hand to point at little white immediately, the meaning was is the small white wine, she was only a porter. 结果万万没想到,张老板没有发现,但是小白这個瓜娃子自己喊出声了,张老板刷的一下看了过来,榴榴立即伸手指着小白,意思是一切都是小白干的,她只是一个搬运工而已。 Toot toot runs, shouts she comes her to come, but also complained that the pomegranate pomegranate snatches her living. 嘟嘟跑过去,嚷嚷说她来她来,还抱怨榴榴抢她的活。 Pomegranate pomegranate: „......” 榴榴:“……” Zhang Tan said with a smile: Drinks, tonight permits you.” 张叹笑道:“喝吧,今晚允许你们。” The pomegranate pomegranate spirit inspires, with toot toot transports little bear drink, distributes to the little friend. 榴榴精神一振,和嘟嘟搬运小熊饮料,给小朋友分发。 Toot toot must first depending recent history Baobao, but was stopped by the pomegranate pomegranate, she requests first bottle of little bear to little white, then the second bottle to Boss stretch/open, the third bottle Xier, the fourth bottle gives her oneself...... 嘟嘟第一个要给靠的最近的史包包,但是被榴榴制止了,她要求第一瓶小熊给小白,然后第二瓶给张老板,第三瓶才喜儿,第四瓶给她自己…… Drank little bear, the children on the powder. 喝了小熊,小朋友们就散了。 valley Xiang 谷襄 The time has crossed ten points, the children should go home. 时间已经过了十点,小朋友们该回家了。 In fact, when they coax Xier, drinks little bear, there is a guardian to arrive, but for does not disturb them, waits for in downstairs. 实际上,在她们哄喜儿、喝小熊时,有家长就已经到了,只是为了不打扰她们,在楼下等待而已。 Xier and little Belarus Station in the balcony, wield other children. 喜儿和小白站在阳台上,挥别小朋友们。 You cry today the small tabby cat, washes the face quickly.” “你今天哭成小花猫了,快来洗脸吧。” Zhang Tan greeted Xier to wash the face. 张叹招呼喜儿过来洗脸。 Xier hiahia smiles, is making faces to mirror in oneself, but, wants to frighten little white, after was knocked the small head by little white is honest. 喜儿hiahia笑,对着镜子里的自己做鬼脸,还嗷呜嗷呜,想要吓唬小白,直到被小白敲了敲小脑袋后才老实下来。 Washes the face, Xier ran immediately the oneself bedroom, is holding the pillow and cloth doll quickly comes out. 洗了脸,喜儿立即吧嗒吧嗒跑去了自己的卧室,很快抱着枕头和布娃娃出来。 little white little white, I and you rests together.” “小白小白,我和你一起睡叭。” „! You will be hugging me.” “啊!你又会抱着我。” I cannot.” “我不会的。” Your meeting!” “你会!” I cannot.” “我不会。” Your previous time will not say, but will hug.” “你上次也说不会,但还是抱啦。” Hiahia my time cannot.” “hiahia我这次不会啦。” Zhang Tan helps Xier speak, little white, you let Xier and you rest an evening, tomorrow Elder Sister Xier will come back.” 张叹帮喜儿说话,“小白,你就让喜儿和你睡一晚,明天喜儿姐姐就回来了。” Xier immediately with air flue: Right, little white, the adoptive father wants to sleep to think with Xier, Xier had not agreed that snort/hum!” 喜儿立即跟风道:“对吖,小白,干爹想和喜儿睡觉觉,喜儿没同意呢,哼!” „......” “……” I am not, I do not have, you spoke irresponsibly! 我不是,我没有,你乱说! little white agreed finally lets Xier and she rests together, on two people lying down bed, Xier to express oneself will not hold little white absolutely, lies down in the bedding obediently, is distant to little white, put several cloth dolls with little white, and places outside a oneself pair of small hand the quilt , indicating that her hand will not move heedlessly absolutely. 小白最终还是同意了让喜儿和她一起睡,两人躺床上,喜儿为了表示自己绝对不会抱小白,乖乖地躺在被窝里,离小白远远的,和小白之间还放了好几只布娃娃,并且把自己的一双小手放在被子外,表示她的手手绝对不会乱动。 Zhang Tan told the story to them, coaxed them to rest, left the room. 张叹给她们讲了故事,哄她们睡了,离开房间。 He tidied up the living room simply, turns off a light, returns the study room , to continue the past work. 他把客厅简单收拾了一下,关了灯,退回书房,继续之前的工作。 He is writing the script, had the inspiration to write, may not probably use instantly. 他在写剧本,有灵感了就写,不一定非得即刻就要用。 Outside the room the leaf crash-bang makes noise in the wind, moonlight like water, according to window. 屋外树叶哗啦啦在风中作响,月光如水,照在窗户上。 Zhang Tan writes writes, suddenly remembers show father's paper that receives. 张叹写着写着,忽然想起收到的秀秀爸爸的纸张。 He found in the pocket, with, spreads out on the desk, four A4 papers, above with the character of pen writing by hand, wrote all over. 他在口袋里找到,拿出来,在书桌上摊开,四张A4纸,上面是用水笔手写的字,写满了。 The neat handwriting, is not attractive, but clean neat, clear, probably the student when the test, first wrote the answer in the rough draft, then copies out in the examination paper. 字迹工整,不算好看,但是干净整齐,一目了然,像是学生在考试时,先在草稿上写了答案,再誊写到卷子上似的。 Curiously what Zhang Tan writes is what story, glanced over fast, looked, looked, puts down the paper. 张叹好奇写的是个什么故事,快速浏览了一遍,又看了一遍,又又看了一遍,放下纸张。 Written is not splendid, show father is not good at writing, but Zhang Tan actually from this not splendid writing, saw one lightly but actually splendid story. 写的并不精彩,秀秀爸爸不擅长写作,但是张叹却从这并不精彩的写作中,看到了一个平淡但却精彩的故事。 He likes this story very much, the occupational disease violated, sees the unpleasant place, he wants to take up the pen to change. 他很喜欢这个故事,职业病犯了,看到不如意地方,他就想动笔改。 He turns on the notebook, story essence that show father writes in mind, then combs the compilation. 他重新打开笔记本电脑,把秀秀爸爸写的故事内核记在脑海里,然后重新梳理编写。 The finger such as flies on the keyboard, the time 1 0.1 points pass, when he finished the draft, is around 3 : 00 am. 手指在键盘上如飞,时间一点一点流逝,当他写完初稿时,已经是凌晨 3 点多了。 Unknowingly passed unexpectedly for four hours. 不知不觉竟然过去了四个小时。 However he does not feel weary, instead probably hit the chicken blood, is full of the working zeal. 但是他毫不觉得疲倦,反而像是打了鸡血,充满干劲。 Tonight did not finish this story, he cannot fall asleep. 今晚不把这个故事写完,他睡不着。 He continues to revise improves, when 4 : 00, basically finish finally. 他继续修改完善,在四点的时候,终于基本完工。 Set out to give oneself to make one cup of tea, stretched the body, Zhang Tan prints directly the script story, with entire 16 pages of papers in hand, about 10,000 characters. 起身给自己泡了一杯茶,舒展身体,张叹直接把剧本故事打印出来,拿在手里整整16页纸,将近一万字。 He transfers the chair, to the whereabouts window, the moonlight according to him, keeps the ground the inverted image, starts to appreciate this story...... 他把椅子转个向,对着落地窗,月光照在他身上,把倒影留在地上,开始欣赏这个故事……
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