SF1983 :: Volume #1

#57: Changes the script


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With «Journey to the West», «Dream of the Red Chamber» a long time is to have a camera. The photography progress is extremely slow, one month can pat one volume probably. 跟《西游记》一样,《红楼梦》在很长一段时间也是只有一台摄影机。拍摄进度极慢,一个月大概能拍一集。 Late Ren Dahui borrowed two, speeds up slightly, one month can pat one -and-a-half volumes. 后期任大惠又去借了两台,稍稍加快,一个月能拍一集半。 Dramatic team starting a half year, according to the content of script, patted 20% at most. Because the outdoor scene is not good to do, various types and other winds and other clouds and other birds had flown. 剧组开机半年,按剧本的内容来讲,顶多拍了20%。因为外景不好搞,各种等风等云等鸟儿飞过。 Like Hunan cloud drunk dormancy Chinese peony clump, the dramatic team's first year goes to Hangzhou Nishiyama Park Chinese peony garden to step on, the second year catches up specially in the flowering season passes by, finally that year was cold, many flowers have not bloomed, must grip many artificial flowers. 就像湘云醉眠芍药丛,剧组第一年去杭城西山公园芍药圃踩点,第二年专门赶在花期过去,结果那年冷,很多花都没开,只得扎了好些纸花。 In comparison, the indoor play is good to grasp. 相比之下,室内戏就非常好掌握。 permits Feijin group nearly one month, witnessed Daiyu to enter the mansion to see Ms. Jia, and new year's day visited parents to go home and other classic scenes, calculates that also oneself thinks to reading of this play. 许非进组近一个月,就见证了黛玉进府见贾母,以及元春省亲回家等经典场面,算还了自己对这部剧的念想。 Then, was one's turn Teacher permits to go forth to battle. 然后,便轮到许老师上阵了。 The night of March/three months is very cold, on the stove heats pot water, the light bulb is swaying in the top of the head, that is the wind that pushes from outside. 三月的夜晚还是很冷,炉子上烧着一壶水,灯泡在头顶摇摇晃晃,那是从外面挤进来的风。 permits Feiguo the big cotton-wadded jacket, the both feet is branching off extends warms by a fire to the stove, in the hand holds the thick script. 许非裹着大棉袄,双脚岔开伸到炉子边烤火,手里捧着厚厚的剧本。 His ancestors were extremely ripe to the entertainment world, were not strange to the dramatic team operation, to performing skill school also rationally, but oneself have not really made a movie. 他上辈子对娱乐圈极熟,对剧组运作也不陌生,对演技流派也头头是道,但自己真的没拍过戏。 Without attempting, to have probably the low stance, the modest learn/study, the script he look innumerable , above full is dense and numerous labelling. 既然没尝试过,就得低下姿态,虚心学习,剧本他已经看了无数遍,,上面满是密密麻麻的标注。 The play that will soon make, is speaks Jia Residence to be copied, some people shut in the prison temple. Jia Yuntuo the Ni two paths, pretended to be a prison guard to come to visit prisoners- prison temple outdoor scene in the Mount Tai racket, prison cell in movie studio. 即将拍的这场戏,是讲贾府被抄,一干人被关进狱神庙。贾芸托了倪二的路子,冒充一个狱卒进来探监-狱神庙外景在泰山拍的,牢房在摄影棚。 And has him to feel the difficult place, for example this: 其中就有很多他觉得拧巴的地方,比如这段: Jia Yun who „ prison guard dresses up knelt down in front of the precious jade, sobbing: Uncle! “狱卒打扮的贾芸一下跪在了宝玉面前,哽咽着:叔叔! The precious jade grasps Jia Yun: How did you arrive at this to come? 宝玉一把抱住贾芸:你怎么到这来了? Jia Yun quickly stands, wiped the eye, draws the precious jade to chocking up by the table of food and wine: Uncle, under please sit down! 贾芸急忙站起来,抹了抹眼睛,把宝玉拉到摆满酒菜的桌旁:叔叔,请坐下! The precious jade feels puzzled looks at Jia Yun, slowly sits down. 宝玉困惑不解地看着贾芸,慢慢坐下。 Jia Yun raises the wine glass, smiles: Uncle, previously at home, often/common thinks showed filial respect to the uncle, did not have a chance, today...... 贾芸擎起酒杯,强笑笑:叔叔,先前在家的时候,常想孝敬叔叔,一直没个机缘,今儿…… Was saying also sobbed. ” 说着又哽咽起来。” Looks is not twisting difficult? This they said completely respectively various, language logic from the start not by! Therefore he wrote a big section in side, prepares to communicate with the director. 瞧着拧不拧巴?这俩人完全各说各的,语言逻辑压根不挨着!所以他在旁边写了一大段,准备跟导演沟通沟通。 Again for example this: 再比如这句: Jia Yun: The uncle felt relieved! Although I have not read what book, may also know that Shen Baoxu cried Qin court the story.” “贾芸:叔叔放心!我虽说没读过什么书,可还知道申包胥哭秦庭的故事。” Shen Baoxu cried Qin court, permits, checked specially, knew that was a «Spring and Autumn Period Zuo Zhuan» literary reference. 申包胥哭秦庭,许非不懂,专门去查了查,得知是《春秋左传》的一则典故。 Shen Baoxu was Chu doctor, the Chuzhaowang 15 years, Wu Zixu helps Wu Gongpo Chu. Shen Baoxu went to Qin to pray for rescue, Duke Ai of Qin could not make up mind is dispatches troops or, Shen Baoxu then cried on the 7 th Qin court, saved illustrious king Fanchu finally. 申包胥是楚国大夫,楚昭王十五年,伍子胥助吴攻破楚国。申包胥赴秦国求救,秦哀公拿不定主意是出兵还是不出,申包胥便哭秦庭七日,终救昭王返楚。 It can be said that permits non- insight of script research, but is more insightful, the issue are more. He is the 30 years later thoughts and aesthetic appreciation, looks at the film and television character logic of this age, always feels a little fool. 可以说,许非把剧本研究的通通透透,可越通透,问题就越多。他是三十年后的思维和审美,看这个年代的影视人物逻辑,总觉着有点呆瓜。 Oh!” “唉!” He read is reading, with beginning a stroke and adding one, could not bear shake the head, pressed down nearby tape recorder conveniently. 他读着读着,拿起笔又添上一句,忍不住摇了摇头,随手按下旁边的录音机。 Right, who is Boss permits? The valuables conducted the person hundreds of thousands dog wealthy and powerful families, the tape recorder said that buys buys! Moreover buys to not to listen to music, to make a movie specially. 没错,许老板是谁啊?腰缠十几万的狗大户,录音机说买就买!而且买来不为听歌,专为拍戏。 First oneself read the lines, took down with the loom, then replayed, where listening not right. So repeatedly, naturally can enhance. 先自己念遍台词,用机子录下,然后重放,听听哪里不对。如此反复,自然就能提高。 This move learned from Qin Hailu, un, this child now is only seven years old...... 这招还是跟秦海路学的,嗯,这孩子现在才七岁…… The words saying that the actor of later generation, generally is divided into three types: 话说后世的演员,一般分为三个类型: The first type, the rational serious offense perception, consisted mainly of the Qin sea route, old segment, Feng Yuanzheng. 第一种,理性大过感性,以秦海路、老段、冯元征为代表。 The second type, the perceptual serious offense rationality, consists mainly of the earlier azure elder brother and Young Master Zhou, to participate in «Limit Challenge» beforehand grandson Hong Leiwei. 第二种,感性大过理性,以前期的青哥、周公子、参加《极限挑战》之前的孙洪雷为代表。 The third type, blind several develop, is represented by Yang Shoutian, Yang Tianbao, the hundred flowers scholar and electric eel. 第三种,瞎几把演,以杨寿天、杨天宝、百花居士、电鳗为代表。 The so-called rational actor, is the pure technical class/flow, is quite rich, can eat most to pass the script that the desk job is done. Pats one to play for four months, preparation possibly three months. 所谓理性演员,都是纯粹的技术流,案头工作做的极为丰富,能将剧本吃到最透。拍一部戏四个月,前期准备可能就得三个月。 Waited till the scene, which play looks is, comes up to develop, moreover steady ruthless. 等到了现场,一看是哪场哪场戏,上来就能演,而且稳准狠。 The controlling force to the role is extremely strong, is good at designing, this design is not the derogatory meaning, is a playing skill. 对角色的控制力极强,善于设计,这个设计不是贬义,是一种表演技巧。 For example «Bailu plain», Qin Hailu held a concurrent post of the performance to instruct, Li Qin had a movement that bit the finger, the Qin sea route made her bite one after another, finally said you bit the pinky time, that curve and stance were most attractive. 比如《白鹿原》里,秦海路兼任表演指导,李沁有个咬手指的动作,秦海路就让她一根一根咬,最后说你咬小拇指的时候,那个弧度和姿态是最好看的。 This is a design. 这就是一种设计。 Although permits non- is very graceful, but self-examines the wood to have the handsome young man azure intelligence, cannot achieve degree that is on site to display, must do the desk job. 许非虽然很帅,但自问木有靓仔青的灵性,达不到临场发挥的程度,只得做做案头工作。 Gurgle gurgle!” “咕嘟咕嘟!” Gurgle gurgle!” “咕嘟咕嘟!” The water opened for quite a while, has been calling. 水开了半天,一直在叫。 He raised the canteen, poured into an enamel mug, hugged toward the bosom, used temporarily as the hot-water bottle, in the hand grips the script to go out of the gate. 他提起水壶,倒进一个搪瓷缸子里,又往怀里一抱,权当热水袋,手里攥着剧本走出门去。 Arrived next door, knocked on a door gently. 到了隔壁家,轻轻敲门。 Who?” “谁啊?” The gate opens, reveals Ouyang's fat face, the expression is very accidental/surprised, „does Teacher permits, have the matter?” 门一开,露出欧阳的胖脸,表情挺意外,“许老师,有事儿么?” Two days have patted us to play, I want to consult with the director again.” “过两天就拍咱俩戏了,我想再跟导演请教请教。” „, You and other meetings!” “哦,那你等会啊!” Ouyang on the childish face, the small canine tooth, hangs lovably, presently all day long mixes in the girl pile, seems even more pleasantly warm. He went back to throw over clothes, went into king Fulin Room together. 欧阳本身就娃娃脸,小虎牙,可爱挂的,现成天又在女孩子堆里混,显得愈发温软。他回去披了件衣服,一起跑到王扶霖房间。 king Fulin sees them in the same place, then knows to play. 王扶霖见他们俩在一块,便晓得为戏来的。 king hasn't Dao, disturbed you?” “王导,没打扰您吧?” No, I have not rested, you will pat the day after tomorrow, preparation how?” “没有,我还没休息呢,你们后天就拍了,准备的怎么样?” Actually right several plays, didn't this ask you to glance?” “倒是对了几遍戏,这不请您过过目么?” „, You first develop one to take a look.” “哦,那你们先演一段瞧瞧。” permits Feisui referred to the script, Ouyang nods, before also had arranged one time. 许非遂指了指剧本,欧阳点点头,之前也排过一次。 They spread out slightly, permits Feixian is turning away, then fishes out the enamel mug from the bosom, disguises is food, slowly places on the table. 俩人稍稍拉开距离,许非先背对着,然后从怀里摸出搪瓷缸子,假装是食物,慢慢放在桌上。 Ouyang whole face doubts, asked: You are......” 欧阳则满脸疑惑,问:“你是……” He has turned around, calls said: Valuable uncle!” 他转过身,唤道:“宝叔!” Who are you......?” Ouyang is even more astonished. “你……是谁?”欧阳愈发惊异。 Valuable uncle, is I!” “宝叔,是我!” Yun?” “芸儿?” Uncle!” “叔叔!” permits non- said that kneels kneels, the plump short lower part of the body, sobbed in a tone with. 许非说跪就跪,扑通一声矮下身,语带哽咽。 You, how did you come to here?” “你,你怎么到这儿来了?” Ouyang helps up him hastily. 欧阳连忙把他扶起。 permits non- stands up, draws the opposite party to the table by: Uncle, please sit down!” 许非站起身,把对方拉到桌旁:“叔叔,请坐!” Two people sit down. 二人坐下。 permits non- also said: Previously at home, often/common thinks showed filial respect to the uncle, did not have a chance, today......” 许非又道:“先前在家的时候,常想孝敬叔叔,一直没个机缘,今儿……” He lives suddenly, two people look at each other speechless. 他忽地顿住,二人相顾无言。 king Fulin looks in side, doubts held the eyeglasses, develops very well, where has does not understand?” 王扶霖在旁看着,疑惑的扶了扶眼镜,“演得挺好的,有什么地方不理解么?” „......” “……” Ouyang naturally does not have, is only looking at somebody. 欧阳当然没有,只瞧着某人。 Somebody has turned the head, „hasn't director, you felt very irritably?” 某人转过头,“导演,您就没觉着挺别扭么?” Front Jia Yun after small red also kerchief, has not entered the stage again, in the book had not introduced that he did do afterward, in the script has not written. Separated such a long time, Jia Yun braved suddenly, but also faked the prison guard to visit prisoners, I thought that this process explained to the audience. “前面贾芸跟小红还了帕子之后,就没再出场,书里没介绍他后来干什么,剧本里也没写。隔了这么长时间,贾芸又冷不丁冒出来了,还假作狱卒来探监,我觉得这个过程得给观众一个交待。 Moreover you looked, the precious jade asked obviously, how did you arrive at this to come?’ 而且您看,宝玉明明问了,‘你怎么到这来了?’ Jia Yun did not answer, made him sit, before added at home and so on, obviously irrelevantly replied, did not pass logically. 贾芸不答,偏让他坐,跟着还说‘之前在家的时候’云云,明显答非所问,逻辑上也不通。 Others asked that at least must return to one, do I do now, hear Jia Residence to be copied, walks to pass the relations to come to see you, this is reasonable. ” 人家问了,起码得回一句,我现在干什么,听到贾府被抄,就走通关系来看你,这样才合理啊。” „......” “……” Ouyang who the words listen to stares, but also a little fear, like Daiyu, Baochai, Hunan clouds that is the honest child, how the director lets develop how to develop, unmanned objection. 一番话听的欧阳直愣,还有点害怕,像黛玉啊,宝钗啊,湘云啊都是老实孩子,导演让怎么演就怎么演,根本无人异议。 king Fulin is also startled, later records, this boy helps complement has stolled outside the city in springtime the line! 王扶霖也是一怔,随后才记起来,这小子可是帮忙补全过探春线的! Moreover this words are listening rational, his itself/Ben is modest, then asked: Other?” 而且此话听着有理,他本就是个虚心的,便问:“还有别的么?” Here, the precious jade recalls Jia Yun to deliver White Sea to him crab apple tree, but also read Daiyu's poem. You look at Jia Yun response, ‚seemed infected, in the eye is flashing the tears.’ “还有这里,宝玉回忆起贾芸给他送白海棠,还念了黛玉的诗。您看贾芸的反应,‘仿佛被感染了,眼睛里闪动着泪光。’ Jia Yun is the heavy affectionate righteousness, but does not represent him to be heavy the affectionate righteousness to anyone. He is Jia five, the life is poor, cannot know again about Jia Residence that group of seekers after rank and salary, what sentiment can have in inside? 贾芸是重情重义,但不代表他对谁都重情重义。他是贾家五房,生活贫苦,对贾府那帮禄蠹再了解不过,能有什么感情在里头? This poem, he has not possibly seen Lin Daiyu, oneself also said that studies not many, finally listened to the first Daiyu poem, will flash the tears...... this little to offer a far-fetched interpretation unexpectedly. ” 还有这首诗,他可能都没见过林黛玉,自己也说读书不多,结果听了首黛玉诗,竟会闪动着泪光……这有点太穿凿了。” „ The prison temple entire play, is purposely creating a dismal atmosphere, but does not conform to the character to establish actually. The precious jade can be dismal, Jia Yun is why dismal, often bursts into tears? “狱神庙整场戏,都在刻意营造一种悲凉的气氛,但其实不符合人物设定。宝玉可以悲凉,贾芸为什么要悲凉,动不动就流下泪来? He only has three places to be low-spirited, spoke of the precious jade present situation, mentioned mother to pass away, mentioned the small red condition. 他只有三个地方应该黯然,一个说及宝玉现状,一个提到母亲过世,一个说起小红境况。 I feel that this is right, this called the worldly affairs to be insightful, the gratitude and grudges were distinct. ” 我觉着这样才对,这才叫世情通透,恩怨分明。”
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