In the courtyard in boarding house several other one-story houses, after the kitchen and warehouse. In the warehouse has the platform scale, the girls morning finishes the merit, frequently comes here name body weight. 招待所的院子里另有几间平房,作为后厨和仓库。仓库内有台秤,姑娘们早上练完功,经常来这里称体重。 When quiet at dead of night, most people went to sleep, in building pitch-dark piece, only several houses are also turning on a light. 正值夜深人静,大部分人都睡下了,楼上黑漆漆一片,只数间房屋还亮着灯。 Two person's shadow stealthy slipping away front doors, after pasting the lower part of wall is running in the kitchen, natural in entrance, an automatic aware frontline combat. 两个人影鬼鬼祟祟的溜出楼门,贴着墙根跑进后厨,一个理所当然的把在门口,一个自动自觉的前线作战。 Without the means that Chen Xiaoxu on this morality, the idea are many, but always hides after the person. 没办法,陈小旭就这德性,主意多,但从来都躲在人后。 But permits Feijin the warehouse, seeing the room was a bamboo basket, piled old tall, could not look. He extends to delimit blindly, touches a thing to shrink immediately, is actually the eggplant that very curls upwards. 而许非进了仓库,见满屋子都是竹筐,摞起来老高,根本看不着里面。他伸进去就瞎划拉,碰着个东西立马缩回来,却是一根挺翘的紫茄子。 „Eggplant......” “茄子……” He wants to touch the tomato to come, but the eggplant can also use, with puts out a hand for the second time, grasping, this time is the root cucumber. 他本想摸西红柿来着,不过茄子也能用,跟着第二次伸手进去,抓了抓,这次是根黄瓜。 „How is the slivers?” “怎么都是长条的？” He extends for the third time , the round was icy cold, feels right, really touched two tomato. 他第三次伸进去,诶,圆溜溜冰凉凉,感觉对了,果然摸出来俩西红柿。 permits non- with clothes one package, said in a low voice: „Walks quickly!” 许非用衣服一包,低声道:“快走！” „What did you feel?” “你摸着什么了？” „An eggplant, a cucumber, two tomato.” “一根茄子,一根黄瓜,俩洋柿子。” „Do they have the vegetable/dish not to eat to us? Eats the cabbage!” “他们有菜还不给我们吃？顿顿啃白菜！” Chen Xiaoxu is angry immediately, said: „I heard that the dramatic team pressed a lot of money, this called to cheat on labor and materials.” 陈小旭顿时气恼,道:“我听说剧组压了不少钱呢,这叫偷工减料。” „You reflected.” “那你反映反映。” „I do not go.” “我才不去。” ! 嘁！ permits non- being disinclined manages, in the return building softly, separates respectively. Hou Changrong and Wu Xiaodong have not rested, hold the script to read, sees him to come back to be busy at asking: „Has the harvest?” 许非懒得理,轻手轻脚的返回楼上,各自分开。侯昌荣和吴小东都没睡,捧着剧本在读,见他回来忙问:“有收获么？” „Must have!” “必须有！” He a clothes pocket, „mouth strict chose/point, will eat up to you tomorrow.” 他把衣服一兜,“嘴都严点,明天给你们加餐。” permits non- tidied up, saw two people still not to have the sleepiness, opened the script simply, looked under the lamp. 许非收拾了一下,见二人仍无睡意,索性也翻开剧本,在灯下看了起来。 This age technology is backward, where has what duplicator, is the rollers. Is installs the printing ink the big box, moistens hair Zhanhui the drum with one again similarly, places inside the paper, rolls is. 这年代技术落后,哪有什么复印机,都是油滚。就是装油墨的大盒子,再拿一根类似沾毛沾灰的滚筒,把纸放在里面,一滚就是一张。 seal typeface thick black, is easy the stain, but also brings obvious printing ink taste- the present should be lost. 印出来的字体粗大浓黑,易有污迹,还带着一股明显的油墨味儿-现在应该失传了。 He opens such a script, word for word read, recalled 87 editions of «Dream of the Red Chamber» plots, really had differently. 他就翻开这样一个剧本,逐字逐句的默读,又回想87版《红楼梦》的情节,确有许多不同。 The words saying when «Dream of the Red Chamber» arranges, how the people from all quarters reorganize in view of the script, held 15 days of conferences in Huilongguan specially. 话说在《红楼梦》筹备期间,各方人士针对剧本如何改编,专门在回龙观开了十五天的会议。 A school headed by Zhou Ruchang, supports the latter 40 chapters of creativities reorganizes ; A school headed by Feng Qiyong , indicating that must present 120 books completely. 以周汝昌为首的一派,支持将后40回创造性改编;以冯其庸为首的一派,表示要完整呈现120回的全书。 Then situation, it may be said that argued heatedly group of Confucians. 当时的情形,可谓舌战群儒。 Because the latter 40 chapters are tall Exu the books, is violates Cao Xueqin to want, cannot calculate in the original works. Quarrelled finally, various just now agreed with the opinion of dramatic team, eight characters: The respect original works, attach great importance to continuing do. 因为后40回是高鹗续书,是违背曹雪芹愿意的,不能算在原著里。吵到最后,各方才同意了剧组的意见,八个字:尊重原著,重视续作。 Therefore had the script, Zhou Lei and Liu Genglu are responsible for the first 20 volumes, corresponds first 80. Zhou Ling is responsible for the latter 7 volumes, the correspondence continues makes the reorganization. 于是就有了剧本,周雷和刘耕路负责前20集,对应前80回。周领负责后七集,对应续作改编。 Therefore altogether is 27 volumes of scripts. In permits non- hand this, but also without latter 7 volumes, but light/only looks at front, knows that the soap opera erased many. 所以一共是27集的剧本。许非手里这份,还没有后七集,但光看前面,就知道电视剧删掉了多少。 For example the opening, Jia Yu and tender apricot gang up, brave lotus was turned by the slave trader, Zhen and bottle gourd temple were burnt, Zhen Shiyin goes down in the world wait/etc, totally no. 比如开头,贾雨村和娇杏勾勾搭搭,英莲被人贩子拐走,甄家和葫芦庙被烧,甄士隐落魄等等,一概没有。 Has the racket, but patted, above organized an old cadre watching movies meeting. The old cadres looked how many volumes were very uncomfortable, said you developed for quite a while, Lin Daiyu and haven't Jia Baoyu come out? 不是没拍,而是拍完了,上面组织了一场老干部观影会。老干部看完几集很不爽,说你演了半天,林黛玉和贾宝玉怎么还没出来啊？ Then became the existing edition, the above content deflation is half volume, second half collection Lin Daiyu entered Jia Residence directly. 然后就成了现有的版本,将上述内容缩减为半集,后半集林黛玉直接就进贾府了。 The universe illusion that is a pity, according to Zhou Ling, at that time was the truth section speaks, the general idea/careless was: Cannot pat has a dream this, Jia Baoyu pursues the free marriage, is the antifeudal warrior and so on. 还有非常可惜的太虚幻境,据周领说,当时是真理部发话,大意是:不许拍做梦这一段,贾宝玉追求自由婚姻,是反封建斗士云云。 This special is the logical expression?!!! 这特么是人话嘛？！！！ Naturally no one has entire to understand, can't you feudal superstition, that «Journey to the West» and «Daoji» what's the matter? We do not understand in any case, we may I ask...... 当然谁也没整明白,你不许封建迷信,那《西游记》和《济公》是怎么回事？反正咱也不懂,咱也不敢问…… The night is getting deeper and deeper, Hou Changrong and Wu Xiaodong read the half-day script, mainly estimates the role that oneself want to play, is familiar with the lines. When their some feelings of weariness, want to turn off a light sleeps, actually discovered that permits non- also sits before the table. 夜越来越深,侯昌荣和吴小东看了半天剧本,主要是揣摩自己想演的角色,熟读台词。当俩人有些倦意,想关灯睡觉时,却发现许非还坐在桌前。 The physique supports straightly, the right hand takes the pencil, writes to draw in the script. Also is not that simple character illustration, even pulled several papers, above is dense and numerous. 身板挺得笔直,右手拿着铅笔,在剧本上写写画画。还不是那种简单的人物注解,甚至又扯了几张纸,上面密密麻麻。 They look at each other one, looks puzzled each other. 俩人对视一眼,都瞧出彼此不解。 This roommate is young, actually does not dare to despise, usually in has the astonishing action, this will not know that is doing anything. 这位室友年纪虽小,却丝毫不敢轻视,平日里多有惊人之举,这会又不晓得在搞什么。 ............ ………… On April 10, morning nine points. 四月 10 日,早九点。 Everyone finished eating the breakfast, does not need to shout that does not need to urge, the automatic aware pack conference room, spreads out the pamphlet, is especially proper. 大家吃完了早饭,不用喊不用催,自动自觉的挤进会议室,一个个摊开小本,格外正经。 The front table removed, because must accommodate the space, only had a sofa, side is setting up the block blackboard. Before the sofa, put. the tape recorder, said that while record, what manages matter was Guo Xiaozhen( history Xiangyun) 前面的桌子撤了,因为要容出空间,只摆了一张沙发,旁边立着块黑板。沙发前还放了台录音机,一边讲,一边录,管这事的是郭晓珍(史湘云)。 From the day before yesterday, some expert advisers started to give the people to attend class, first day was screenwriter Zhou Lei, spoke «Hong studies Introduction». The next day is hong studies specialist Hu Wenbin, spoke «Domestic and foreign Hong studies Research review». 从前天起,一些专家顾问就开始给众人上课,第一天是编剧周雷,讲《红学概论》。第二天是红学家胡文彬,讲《国内外红学研究概况》。 Today is Mr. Deng Yunxiang, spoke " Dream of the Red Chamber » in folk formality. 今儿是邓云乡先生,讲《红楼梦》里的民俗礼节。 Mr. Deng is the red educational world senior statesman, is not only «Dream of the Red Chamber», knows a great deal about to local conditions and social customs of north-south two places. He for a long time occupies the demon, catches up specially for the training class, lives is opening couple next door- later also became the entire journey with the folk instruction of group. 邓先生是红学界元老,不仅仅是《红楼梦》,对南北两地的风土人情也极有研究。他久居魔都,为了培训班特意赶过来,就住在张俪隔壁-之后也成了全程跟组的民俗指导。 Everyone waited for a meeting, saw king Fulin to hold the venerable to enter the room, sat well in the sofa. 大家等了一会,就见王扶霖扶着老先生进了屋,在沙发坐定。 Deng Yunxiang 70, the air/Qi a little breathed, breathes opened the mouth uniform slowly: 邓云乡七十了,气有点喘,喘匀了才缓缓开口: „ As we all know, «Dream of the Red Chamber» does not have the dynasty to test, Cao Xueqin deliberately blurred the age background, even physiographic region. For example the location in Jia Residence, actually in the south, is in the north, still has the argument. “大家都知道,《红楼梦》是无朝代可考,曹雪芹刻意模糊了年代背景,甚至地理区域。比如贾府的所在地,究竟在南方,还是在北方,至今仍有争论。 Cao Xueqin wants the real matter hidden, but in many life trivia was hidden, particularly inside folk formality. For example the basic necessities of life, the sacrificial offering visits friends, the lantern riddle theatrical troupe wait/etc, we unravel, can see many clue. 曹雪芹想将真事隐,但在很多生活细节上是隐不了的,尤其是里面的民俗礼节。比如衣食住行,祭祀访友,灯谜戏班等等,我们抽丝剥茧,还是能看出不少端倪的。 Today we do not say complex, spoke the regards ritual. ” 今天我们不讲复杂的,就讲问候礼。” He drinks water , to continue saying: „Actually Dream of the Red Chamber reflected many bannerman formalities, such as ninth, Jia Zheng asked what with precious jade is, outside comes in 34 guys, hits thousand sons to send respects......” 他喝了口水,继续道:“其实红楼梦反映了很多旗人礼节,如第九回,贾政问跟宝玉的是谁,外面进来三四个大汉,打千儿问安……” Speaking of this, Mr. Deng supports the sofa to stand, king Fulin empty holds hastily, sees the venerable to demonstrate personally, „left leg strives to be first step, bends the right leg partly to kneel, under the right hand partly makes a fist extends, this called to hit thousand sons. When the servants see the master uses, typical bannerman ritual.” 说到这,邓先生撑着沙发站起来,王扶霖连忙虚扶着,就见老先生亲自示范,“左腿抢前一步,屈右腿半跪,右手半握拳下伸,这就叫打千儿。仆人见主人时用的,典型的旗人礼。” „......” “……” permits non- sees that in the heart moves, besides taking note, brushes rips open one page of papers, few, drew a sketch. 许非见状,不由心中一动,除了记笔记之外,刷的撕开一页纸,寥寥几笔,就画了一张速写。 Chen Xiaoxu tilts the head looks, a simple vivid strange villain, the right leg partly kneels to salute, movement that the venerable demonstrates. 陈小旭歪头看,一个简单生动的古怪小人,右腿半跪施礼,正是老先生示范的动作。 She blinks, writes a paper to fling. permits non- looks, „this method is good, understands clearly, finishes class draws well, making everyone also study study.” 她眨了眨眼,写了张纸条甩过去。许非一瞧,“这个法子好,清晰明了,下了课好好画画,让大家也学学。” „You praised are not really easy.” He returns said. “得您夸奖真不容易。”他回道。 Chen Xiaoxu has turned head, no longer pays attention. 陈小旭扭过头,不再理会。 „ 31, Hunan clouds arrives, the sisters paid respects to give regards. Did paying respects invite? According to the Han people etiquette, the right hand on, the left hand below, partly makes a fist, places below the chest, high and low moves, this called the innumerable blessings. “还有三十一回,湘云到来,众姊妹请安问好。请安是如何请呢？按汉人礼法,右手在上,左手在下,半握拳,放在胸口以下,上下动一动,这叫万福。 According to the bannerman etiquette, on both hands keep flat knee, the curved knee bumps the body, this called to bump secure. 按旗人礼法,双手平放膝上,弯膝碰一碰身躯,这叫请碰安。 That is the innumerable blessings, please bump secure? Cao Xueqin did not have clear(ly) to write, you considered. 那到底是万福,还是请碰安呢？曹雪芹没有明写,你们自己考量。 These are held responsible achieve peace of mind by sitting in meditation, is not the official big ritual, the big ritual is to worship on bended knees to kowtow. Most vivid is 62, even Er pays birthday respects to the precious jade, how you have a look to write...... ” 这些都是问安礼,并非正式的大礼,大礼就是跪拜磕头。最生动的便是六十二回,平儿给宝玉拜寿,你们看看怎么写的……” Some people are busy flipping through the book, Mr. Deng have no rough draft, said directly: „even Er then does obeisance, the precious jade bows in salute constantly ; even Er kneels, the precious jade also kneels down busily, supports by the arm hastily ; Also did obeisance did obeisance, the precious jade also bowed with hands clasped.” 有的人忙着翻书,邓先生却没有任何草稿,直接道:“平儿便拜下去,宝玉作揖不迭;平儿又跪下去,宝玉也忙还跪下,袭人连忙搀起来;又拜了一拜,宝玉又还了一揖。” He said to king Fulin, „ this must pay attention, the woman first innumerable blessings, the man first bows in salute, then kneels down to kowtow. Bows with hands clasped, kneels kowtows, with another bows with hands clasped, this calculates that completed. 他冲着王扶霖道,“这段一定要注意,女人先万福,男人先作揖,然后才跪下磕头。一揖,一跪一磕头,跟着又一揖,这算完成了。 Kowtows do not hit thousand sons, that is the rule of bannerman, casual, really must pat to laugh. ” 磕头千万别加打千儿,那是旗人的常礼,随便的,真要拍出来让人笑话。” king Fulin nods again and again, Deng Yunxiang also called the person: „Zhou Ling, Zhou Ling?” 王扶霖连连点头,邓云乡又叫人:“周领啊,周领？” „This!” Zhou Ling stands up slightly. “这呢！”周领稍稍站起。 „Also a little, my previous time looked you write has a paragraph, kowtows to curl upwards the buttocks, that is incorrect. Kowtows the outstanding buttocks, expressed submits to completely, very humble despicable one behavior, Dream of the Red Chamber looked over the book, no one need type, must change.” “还有一点,我上次看你写的有个段落,磕头把屁股翘起来,那是不对的。磕头翘屁股,表示完全臣服,非常谦卑下贱的一种行为,红楼梦纵观全书,没人需要这种,一定得改了。” „Remembered!” Zhou Lingmang said. “记下了！”周领忙道。 The language of Mr. Deng fast is very slow, the sound is also low, full room elegant bird silent, feared that leaked listened to a character. Dozens eyes are gazing at the front, light thin written sound, with the hoarse rotation of tape recorder. 邓先生的语速很慢,声音也低,满屋子雅雀无声,就怕漏听了一个字。数十双眼睛注视着前方,只有轻细的书写声,和录音机的沙哑转动。 „......” “……” Comes more than ten days, permits non- most likes attended class. 来此十余天,许非最喜欢的就是上课。 Zhou Lei, Hu Wenbin, Deng Yunxiang, behind also has Zhu Jia jin, Zhou Ruchang, Jiang Hesen, Wu Shichang, Qi Gong wait/etc. No reward, dramatic team embarrassed cannot have a car(riage). 周雷,胡文彬,邓云乡,后面还有朱家溍,周汝昌,蒋和森,吴世昌,启功等等。没有任何酬劳,剧组窘迫的也出不起一辆车。 These over fifty-year-old venerables, are sit the public transportation to catch up, at noon keeps food, sits the public transportation to go back again. 这些年过半百的老先生,都是自己坐公交一路赶来,中午留顿饭,再坐着公交回去。 „First put a provincial appointment, improper, at that time did not say, should only first put lacking.” “优先放了个外任,不妥,那时候不这么说,应该是仅先放了缺。” „Tile defeat deglaciation, improper, changes disintegrates......” “瓦败冰消,不妥,改成瓦解冰消……” Character by character deliberates to you, a logical logic teaches to you. Everyone clear opportunity is not easy, some people school records are not high, listen not to understand, but also full paper takes down, went back taking advantage of the tape recorder, oneself pondered over again slowly. 一个字一个字的给你推敲,一个逻辑一个逻辑的给你讲授。大家清楚机会不易,有些人学历不高,听不太懂,但也满纸记下,回去借了录音机,再自己慢慢琢磨。 Young people 20 years old is, are lively active, when only have to attend class, most serious earnest. 年轻人二十来岁,正是活泼好动,但唯有上课时,最为严肃认真。 This is the person who this age engages in scholarship, is the person who this age listens to the knowledge. 这便是这个年代做学问的人,也是这个年代听学问的人。 Like this afterward, where had the person who engaged in scholarship afterward, where had the person who like this listened to the knowledge...... 后来呢,后来哪有这样做学问的人,又哪有这样听学问的人呢……