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#31: The plot kills


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You take a look, what matter did this call? Too excessive!” river Fengqi must want to fall the astrolabe, said with clenched jaws: Do not let me know that who this mold train is designs, otherwise I must certainly mail the bit to that bastard!” “你瞧瞧,这叫什么事儿啊?太过分了!”江枫气得想摔星盘,咬牙切齿地说:“别让我知道这个模组是谁设计的,不然我肯定要给那个混蛋寄刀片!” Calms down, hasn't looked? This is plot kills.” “消消气,还没看出来吗?这是‘剧情杀’。” Soars river woman who comforts to fly into a rage with a smile. 高飞笑着安慰暴跳如雷的江女侠。 Four rank obviously high enemies brave to find fault suddenly, without negotiation option, does not allow to form a team, this clarifies being doomed to be difficult to escape today a tribulation, if really made you successfully escape, the following plot could not arrange.” “四个等级明显偏高的敌人突然冒出来找茬,没有交涉选项,也不允许组队,这就摆明了苏摩今天注定难逃一劫,如果真让你成功逃脱,后面的剧情就编不下去了。” „...... Real? I have a look!” “啊……真的吗?我看看!” river Feng examines the astrolabe prompt hastily, on the face the angry look abates, transfers feels relaxed. 江枫连忙查看星盘提示,脸上怒色消退,转为释然。 Soars! Really has your! Really made you guess right, the astrolabe prompted me whether must spend together the energy, jumped over the interlude link, cut into the next story scene directly!” “高飞!真有你的!果然让你猜对了,星盘提示我是否要花费一道能量,跳过过场环节,直接切入下一个故事场景!” Soars to shake the head smiles: „There is nothing greatly, but is the commonly seen screenwriter repertoire, if I write in the novel, guarantees to have the reader to jump to curse forcefully the oppressive lord certainly.” 高飞摇头一笑:“这没什么了不起,不过是司空见惯的编剧套路,如果我在小说里这么写,保准有读者跳出来大骂强行虐主。” According said, the net article writer must blame pitifully......” river Feng sympathizes is looking at him, then what to do?” “照这么说,网文写手还怪可怜的……”江枫同情的望着他,“接下来怎么办?” „Are you hungry? Not the hungry words continue to advance the plot.” “你饿不饿?不饿的话就继续推进剧情。” A little hungry......” river Feng traces the belly, „around 7 : 00, how had we first had the dinner?” “有点饿……”江枫摸摸肚子,“已经七点多了,咱们先去吃晚饭怎么样?” Soars the nod approval, withdraws from the game. 高飞点头赞同,退出游戏。 Two people receive the astrolabe, changes the shoes to go out. 两人收起星盘,换鞋出门。 The plot transition is extremely towering, river Feng eats meal is also missing situation, appears no appetite. 剧情转折太过突兀,江枫吃饭的时候也在挂念苏摩的处境,显得没什么胃口。 Soared to accompany her to eat a thing to leave the restaurant slightly, returned to the dormitory, entered " Desert Foreign land Person » mold train, continued to observe. 高飞陪她稍微吃了点东西就离开餐厅,回到宿舍,进入《瀚海异邦人》模组,继续观战。 Spent an astrolabe energy, river Feng jumps over the traveling schedule that hunted for slave team sends under custody rapidly. A picture revolution, the story stage arrives at a metropolis that is situated in northern Gobi Desert. 花费了一道星盘能量,江枫迅速跳过苏摩被猎奴队押送的行程。画面一转,故事舞台来到一座坐落在戈壁滩北部的大都市。 One week later, loses free youngster monk to be sent under custody south autonomous city-state Sevignacq to Fijian real kingdom, with the pricetags of 300 gold coins, sells into the slave auction market. 时隔一周,失去自由的少年武僧苏摩被押送到斐真王国南方的自治城邦塞维尼亚,以300个金币的价码,卖入奴隶拍卖场。 After the game interlude ended, when river Feng opens again calls upon the gods pattern, restored the control, discovered oneself were closed in the prison cell of auction market, property and short-sword along searched, fortunately most important two equipment- bunch sword waistband and magic collar- also on body. 游戏过场结束后,当江枫再一次开启“降神模式”,恢复了对苏摩的控制,发现自己被关在拍卖场的牢房中,随身的财物和短剑都被搜走,幸而最重要的两件装备-“束剑腰带”和魔法项圈-还都在身上。 This detail is not quite reasonable, is the game designer to the compromise that the player makes.” Soars said by the status review of author, player was killed by the script, originally on a lot of air/Qi, if discovered that the most precious two demons lead are also won, even if can also again from hunting for the slave mercenary hand afterward seizes with the development of plot, after all is at heart uncomfortable.” “这个细节不太合理,算是游戏设计者向玩家做出的妥协。”高飞以作者的身份点评道,“玩家被剧本杀了一回,本来就一肚子气,如果发现最宝贵的两件魔导器也被夺走,哪怕事后还能随着剧情的发展再从猎奴佣兵手中夺回来,终归还是心里不爽。” river Feng agrees with his view, but cannot attend to looking to hunt for the slave team now to do accounts, the urgent matter is tries to escape from the prison, the retrieval freedom. 江枫同意他的看法,不过现在顾不上找猎奴队算账,当务之急是设法逃脱牢狱,重获自由。 She bases in, takes a walk in the prison cell, wants to look for a skylight and so on to be possible for the way of withdrawing. 她凭依在苏摩身上,在牢房中走动,想找一处天窗之类可供脱身的途径。 In the prison cell crowded the slave who catches from various places, the body mostly has the trace of whipping, looks haggard, dispirited rolling up in the corner, has not had the hope to the retrieval freedom. 牢房里塞满了从各处抓来的奴隶,身上大多有鞭打的痕迹,神情憔悴,颓丧的蜷缩在角落里,已经对重获自由不抱希望。 A bald guy of wear skin sleeveless jacket, grasps the leather whip, the inspection prison cell, the vicious vision has swept on the slaves, seems choosing the lamb the butcher. 一个穿着皮坎肩的光头大汉,手持皮鞭,巡视牢房,凶狠的目光在奴隶们身上扫过,仿佛正在挑选羔羊的屠夫。 The line of sight of bald prison guard falls on, suddenly eye one bright, wicked approaches to him. 光头狱卒的视线落在苏摩身上,忽然眼睛一亮,恶狠狠的向他逼近。 Little fellow, on your neck that gadget is gold/metal or the copper, picks to take a look to me!” “小家伙,你脖子上那玩意儿是金的还是铜的,摘下来给我瞅瞅!” Is only the ordinary brass collar, is not valuable.” “只是普通的黄铜项圈,不值钱。” river Feng tries to get by under false pretences, helpless has not grasped deceiving skill, the DC20 examination difficulty is too high, not only cannot deceive the prison guard, instead enrages the opposite party, sinks the complexion, wields the whip strong drive to come. 江枫试图蒙混过关,无奈没有掌握“欺瞒”技能,DC20的检定难度实在太高,非但未能骗过狱卒,反而将对方激怒,沉下脸色,挥鞭猛抽过来。 river Feng the monk, 18 point agile attributes are not the ornaments, without hesitation leaning step transverse shift, 江枫的武僧,18点敏捷属性可不是摆设,不假思索侧步横移, Moves sideways the leather whip that avoids to howl to drop, the backhand holds the end, catches up to tow to entrain suddenly! The prison guards ten thousand have not thought, this young slave response such rapidness, detects whip to fail, gawked. 闪身避开呼啸落下的皮鞭,反手抓住鞭梢,猛然发力拖拽!狱卒万没想到,这个年轻的奴隶反应如此之快,发觉鞭打落空,不由愣了一下。 In god instantly, suddenly felt a strong strength raids by the leather whip, cannot help but before staggering, to/clashes. 就在愣神的刹那,突然感到一股强劲的力量透过皮鞭袭来,不由自主踉跄前冲。 river Feng takes advantage of opportunity to sweep the hall leg, the next plate impractical prison guard falls down, fell dog to gnaw excrement at the scene. 江枫顺势一记扫堂腿,将下盘虚浮的狱卒绊倒在地,当场摔了个“狗啃屎”。 river Nvxia suppressed a lot of hot nowhere to vent, the prison guard delivered to find fault, happen to brought to work as undeserved target of anger, brandished the leather whip to brush this goods right in the face, pulled out him everywhere to tumble, wails to beg for mercy. 江女侠憋了一肚子火无处发泄,狱卒送上门来找茬,正好拿来当“出气筒”,挥舞皮鞭劈头盖脸抽打这货,抽得他满地翻滚,哀嚎求饶。 Young fellow, hit attractiveness!” “小伙子,打的漂亮!” Out the prison cell, hears the bravo. 牢房门外,传来喝彩声。 river Feng puts down the leather whip, turns head vigilant looking to out of the door. 江枫放下皮鞭,扭头警惕的望向门外。 The middle-aged man who entangles the white turban stands outside the door, is clapping to applaud. The loose silk long gown cannot block from the plentiful stomach intestinal fat, handlebar that handles carefully, for that fat face that piles up with the smile increased several points of riches and honor style. 一个头缠白巾的中年男人站在牢门外,正在拍手鼓掌。宽松的丝绸长袍遮不住丰满的肚腩,精心打理的八字胡,为那张堆满笑容的胖脸增添了几分富贵气派。 Young fellow, my name was Abdullah Ismail, operates an corner/horn to fight today the wrestler who came the choice to be worth training in the city, met your like this good seedling, was my good fortune!” “小伙子,我叫阿卜杜拉・伊斯梅尔,在城里经营一家角斗今天过来挑选值得培训的角斗士,遇见你这样的好苗子,是我的福气呀!” The abattoir boss laughs, the fat face shines. 角斗场老板哈哈大笑,胖脸放光。 This dead fatty what meaning? I felt like that he has not settled the good intention......” river Feng to switch over the God angle of view, then with soaring to discuss the following plot development. “这死胖子什么意思啊?我隐约觉得他没安好心……”江枫切换成上帝视角,转而跟高飞讨论接下来的剧情发展。 „Is this not very obvious? The fat boss plans to disburse money to buy, the belt/bring goes back to train the wrestler, with tool that when makes money.” Soaring to detect that river Feng complexion is ugly, urged her with a smile, this fatty, although was not what good person, however business is business, others approaches you could not pick up the problem, was the wrestler always compared with here squatting prison.” “这不很显然吗?胖老板打算出钱买下苏摩,带回去训练成角斗士,拿苏摩当赚钱的工具。”高飞发觉江枫脸色难看,笑着劝她,“这胖子虽然不算什么好人,然而在商言商,人家的做法你也挑不出毛病,况且当角斗士总比在这里蹲大牢强。” That but actually is also.” river Feng accepted his enlightening reluctantly. “那倒也是。”江枫勉强接受了他的开导。 The following plot development, really like soaring to expect, Mr. Ismail found the boss in slave auction market, after one bargained back and forth, looked in the share of old customer, the auction market boss only received 500 gold coins to sell to Mr. Ismail. 接下来的剧情发展,果然如同高飞所料,伊斯梅尔先生找到奴隶拍卖场的老板,一番讨价还价过后,看在老主顾的份上,拍卖场老板只收了500个金币就把苏摩卖给伊斯梅尔先生。 Goes out of the prison cell, under two big beast person guards send under custody, on a carriage, followed new host Abdullah Ismail to arrive at the Sevignacq most luxurious abattoir. 苏摩走出牢房,在两名高大的兽人侍卫押送下,上了一辆马车,跟随新主人阿卜杜拉・伊斯梅尔来到塞维尼亚最豪华的角斗场。 As the rookie, did not have the qualifications to mount the stage temporarily the martial arts contest, must first be trained in the wrestler office. 作为新人,苏摩暂时还没有资格登台比武,先得在角斗士事务所接受培训。 In this time, in this city, the corner/horn fights the competition most to receive the recreational activity of various social strata welcome. 在这个时代,在这座城市,角斗比赛是最受社会各阶层欢迎的娱乐活动。 The wrestlers do not have the personal freedom slave, is the widely-noted public figure, wins on the arena the player, will become the big star who the entire city focuses attention on. 角斗士既是没有人身自由的奴隶,同时也是广受瞩目的公众人物,在竞技场上获得胜利的选手,将成为全城瞩目的大明星。 The renowned young woman woman of quality of upper circles of society, regards as the idol the champion in arena, offers flowers for them, gives the expensive gift straightforwardly, even is rivals for sexual favor for the idol, attacks brutally. 就连上流社会的名媛贵妇,也把竞技场上的冠军视为偶像,争相为他们献花,豪爽地赠送昂贵的礼物,甚至为偶像争风吃醋,大打出手。
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