ER :: Volume #1

#8: Criticism


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After seven classes, after home-room teacher and English teacher Qin Huai spoke several, simply left the classroom. 七节课后,班主任兼英语老师秦淮简单讲了几句之后离开了教室。 Sun Sūn mounts the platform, if the shape takes a fast look around the classroom dignifiedly. 孙荪走上讲台,状若威严地扫视教室。 Except for Qin An, but also really useless several dare to be on the rise to look straight ahead Sun Sūn, most people when touching her vision lower the head, either vision twinkle. 除了秦安,还真没用几个敢抬头直视孙荪的,绝大多数人在触碰到她的目光时低下了头,要么目光闪烁。 By a bright-colored dazzling, calm near cold female was looked, regarding mostly in her at present some rural children of feeling inferior, some blushing heartbeats. 被一个明艳耀眼,从容近冷的女子看过来,对于大多在她眼前有些自卑的农村孩子来说,都有些脸红心跳。 Today Wang Qi, Wang Huanle, Li Mei, the Liu Zhen four people are late, are responsible for cleaning up. Summer vacation the work has 13 people is not completed, within three days must make additional payment. Those who want the key criticism was Schoolmate Qin An, Schoolmate Qin An escapes today the midday nap class, several times attended class does not concentrate the energy, has not attended a lecture earnestly, has not done a classwork, simultaneously his summer vacation work has not done completely, simultaneously tried to bribe the class cadre, here gave the grave criticism to him, asking all schoolmates to supervise him together, urging him to study the progress.” The Sun Sūn vision has leaked Qin An, looks down the memorandum: Class cadres keep a short meeting, Qin An also remains. Being on vacation from school “今天王启,王欢乐,李梅,刘震四个人迟到,负责打扫卫生。暑假作业有十三个人没有完成,三天之内必须补交。要重点批评的是秦安同学,秦安同学今天逃了午睡课,数次上课不集中精神,没有认真听课,没有做一节课堂作业,同时他的暑假作业完全没有做,同时试图贿赂班干部,在这里向他提出严正批评,请全班同学一起监督他,督促他学习进步。”孙荪的目光漏过秦安,又低下头看了看记事本:“班干部留下来开个短会,同时秦安也留下来。放学” Looks that Sun Sūn slightly has the dignity, leadership that solemn self-criticizes seriously, Qin An at heart straight happy, at this time actually does not dare to smile to make noise, offended her ruthlessly. 看着孙荪小有威严,俨然一位严肃律己的领导,秦安心里直乐,这时候却也不敢笑出声来,把她得罪狠了。 Qin An has not expected, oneself helped Sun Sūn copy the lyrics, although said that did not want the reward, but thought that she should not haggle over again, will not at least mention by name to criticize itself, who knows that she was really not spare personal feelings, the blood and iron was brutal. 秦安没有料到,自己帮孙荪抄了歌词,虽然说不要报酬,但心想她应该也不会再计较,至少不会点名批评自己,谁知道她果然是六亲不认,铁血无情。 Sun Sūn is girl who has the principle, when this is also her start-up entertainment world can maintain the pure own reason, is the reason that the final tragedy is born, making her cousin know the persuasion to be fruitless, making that Director lose the confidence, finally takes risks. 孙荪是个有原则的女孩,这也是她初创娱乐圈时能够保持洁净自身的缘故,也是最后悲剧诞生的缘故,让她的表姐知道劝说无果,让那位导演失去信心,最后铤而走险。 already reorganizes the schoolmates of good book bag early, a bang disperses gushes out the classroom, Sun Sūn goes down the platform, returns to the seat, actually presently this time Qin An, although is far from beams with joy, but truly a point knows knows the shame the consciousness not to have bashfully. 已经整理好书包的同学们,一轰而散涌出教室,孙荪走下讲台,回到座位,却现这时候的秦安虽然谈不上眉开眼笑,但确实一点知羞知耻的觉悟也没有。 Must know that the usually mentioned by name student, which has not to lower the head to the table, Qin An is booing, quite the same as the safe/without matter, is really an insensitivity. 要知道平常被点名的学生,有哪个不是把头颅低到桌子下,秦安倒好,浑然无事,真是个厚脸皮。 Sun Sūn sits on the seat, the class cadres surrounded. 孙荪坐在座位上,班干部们围拢了过来。 Sun Sūn said several must do the class work the words, assigns to want several of key support to fall behind the schoolmate to each class cadre, finally said: This week of blackboard newspaper must catch up this afternoon, Ye Xiaohua is responsible for the page layout, did you prepare?” 孙荪说了几句要开展班级工作的话,给每一个班级干部分配好要重点扶持的几位落后同学,最后说道:“这一周的黑板报今天下午要赶出来,叶小花负责版面,你准备好了吗?” already prepared, was little colored chalk.” Ye Xiaohua looked at the platform. 已经准备好了,就是少一点彩色粉笔。”叶小花看了看讲台。 Qin An does not know that Sun Sūn leaves behind itself to do, looks up Ye Xiaohua, this girl appearance is very delicate, is somewhat small and exquisite, if Qin An did not remember incorrectly, Ye Xiaohua has not tested into one, went to Fine Arts Institute Specialized middle school directly, afterward became the domestic known designer, as for concrete was what domain, Qin An did not have the impression. 秦安不知道孙荪留下自己干什么,抬头看着叶小花,这个女孩长相十分清秀,有些小巧玲珑,要是秦安没有记错的话,叶小花没有考上一中,直接去了一所美院中专,后来成为了国内小有名气的设计师,至于具体是什么领域,秦安却没有了印象。 Liu Cai looks for Teacher Qin to take.” Liu Cai is the sports committee member, just like the sports committee members of most classes and grades, Liu Cai is tall and sturdy, the sports committee member is in the class cadres the position is also lowest, because this duty is the only disagreement/not with academic record hook. 刘才去找秦老师拿吧。”刘才是体育委员,和绝大多数班级的体育委员一样,刘才人高马大,体育委员也是班干部里地位最低的,因为这个职务是唯一不和学习成绩挂钩的。 Why does not make Qin An go, isn't Teacher Qin his father?” Liu Cai some are not glad, who knows after one will break up, did not have the means frankly and uprightly, to sit by Sun Sūn sporty, this is close to the Sun Sūn opportunity rarely, usually he did not dare, did not have the courage and Sun Sūn speaks several words. “为什么不让秦安去,秦老师不是他爸吗?”刘才有些不乐意,谁都知道一会散会后,就没有办法光明正大,底气十足地坐在孙荪旁边了,这可是难得接近孙荪的机会,平常他根本就不敢,也没有勇气和孙荪多说几句话。 Makes you go to go.” Sun Sūn stared his one eyes. “让你去就去。”孙荪瞪了他一眼。 Liu Cai went obediently, a temperament does not have, immediately is docile, in fact proposed a moment ago objection already makes this Yuliang good, height over one meter seven 14 -year-old youngster beat a drum. 刘才乖乖地去了,一点脾气也没有,马上服服帖帖,事实上刚才提出点异议已经让这个育良好,身高过一米七的十四岁少年心里打鼓了。 I am responsible for transcribing a prose and aphorism, the page layout of English Corner give Qin An.” Sun Sūn finally distributed duty: Ok, without the class cadre of matter can go home.” “我负责抄写一篇散文和警句,英语角的版面交给秦安。”孙荪最后分布任务:“好了,没有事情的班干部可以回家了。” Several male class cadres somewhat left reluctant, remaining Ye Xiaohua, Sun Sūn, Qin An, Class Study Incharge Li Hao. 几个男班干部有些不情不愿地离开了,剩下叶小花,孙荪,秦安,还有一个学习委员李浩 Liu Cai brought back the colored chalk, took a look at Li Hao, walked at the back of the book bag. 刘才取回了彩色粉笔,瞅了一眼李浩,背着书包也走了。 Li Hao, how don't you walk?” Sun Sūn visits him strangely. 李浩,你怎么不走?”孙荪奇怪地看着他。 Li Hao is Class Study Incharge, the result in class is next to Sun Sūn, can arrange in the grade to first ten, his family is well-off, does not feel inferior like the ordinary rural children, can chat freely facing Sun Sūn. 李浩学习委员,在班里的成绩仅次于孙荪,在年级里也能排到前十,他家境不错,不像普通的农村孩子那样自卑,面对孙荪也能说笑自如。 Qin An remembers, at that time Li Hao quite envied Qin An to be able with the Sun Sūn classmate, but he thinks is in the school has the male student who the qualifications and Sun Sūn are the friend only, will always find the excuse to be close to Sun Sūn, often is pompous, on class, the matter on learn/study, moreover makes Sun Sūn think that each time these things truly must discuss with her, not embankment Li Hao. 秦安记得,那时候李浩颇为嫉妒秦安能和孙荪同桌,而他自认为是学校里唯一有资格和孙荪做朋友的男生,总是会找许多借口接近孙荪,往往都是冠冕堂皇,班级上的,学习上的事情,而且每次都让孙荪觉得这些事情确实要和她商量,没有怎么堤防李浩 However Li Hao and Sun Sūn friendship also stopped in this, has not said several words ordinary schoolmates compared with these from 1 st to 3 rd with Sun Sūn about, but was far from the friend. 不过李浩孙荪的交情也就止于此了,比那些从初一到初三没有和孙荪说过几句话的普通同学近一点,但是远远谈不上朋友。 Sun Sūn, my English grade is best, before was the English Corner...... he who I wrote?” Li Hao suspected that looks at Qin An, corners of the mouth already has one to disdain, he, although is the Teacher Qin son, but who knows that he was caught up with by 68 classes, academic record bad in a complete mess, except for mischievous, anything will not do.” 孙荪,我的英语成绩是最好的,以前英语角都是我来写的……他行吗?”李浩怀疑地看着秦安,嘴角已经有了一丝不屑,“他虽然是秦老师的儿子,可是谁都知道他是被68班赶出来的,学习成绩差的一塌糊涂,除了调皮捣蛋,什么也不会做。” We write the blackboard newspaper, so long as in the English Corner copied a short written work to be OK, did not present the topic, won't his 26 English letters write?” Sun Sūn is extremely discontented with the question of Li Hao. “我们是写黑板报,英语角里只要抄一篇短文就可以了,又不是做题,难道他连26个英文字母也不会写吗?”孙荪对于李浩的质疑非常不满。 My English writes also good, to prepare the blackboard newspaper, I trained hard was very long.” Li Hao is unforgiving strives. “我的英文写的也不错,为了准备黑板报,我苦练了很久。”李浩不依不饶地争取。 Originally was to pull oneself is the coolie, Qin An had a yawn, he may have no interest too many, participated in the class to move to appreciate these worry-free days is a joy, now what he wants to do was looks for Ye Zhulan. 原来是拉自己做苦力,秦安打了个哈欠,他可没有太多兴趣,参加班级活动体味这些无忧无虑的日子是一种快乐,但现在他想做的是去找叶竹澜 You write, I walked.” Qin An eye one bright, the Ye Zhulan form one flashes in out, the small head extended rapidly, looked at Qin An, is frisking and scampering from the staircase runs. “你写吧,我走了。”秦安眼睛一亮,叶竹澜的身影在门外一闪,小脑袋又迅伸了出来,看了一眼秦安,从楼梯上撒着欢地跑了。 Qin An knows, Ye Zhulan looks for own meaning absolutely, raised the book bag to clash outward. 秦安知道,叶竹澜绝对是找自己的意思,提起书包就往外冲。 Hehe, I know how he dares show off.” The Li Hao sound coldly conveys. “嘿嘿,我就知道他怎么敢献丑。”李浩的声音冷冷地传来。 Qin An has turned head, sees the disappointed color in Sun Sūn eye. 秦安回过头,看到孙荪眼里的失望之色。 Ye Zhulan...... I.” Qin An shouts secretly, has turned round, took a white chalk from the platform, loses to Li Hao: You first write......, since you dare, I think your show off.” 叶竹澜……等我。”秦安暗暗喊道,回过身来,从讲台上拿了一支白色粉笔,丢给李浩:“你先写……既然你敢,我看着你献丑。”
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