„Good.”Seijishould, „thank you, Editor Yoshizawa.”
“好的。”晴司应下了,“谢谢你,吉泽编辑。”„IsImustthankyouto be right, Harano.”Sakisaid.
“是我要谢你才对,原野。”纱希说道。„Mayuzumihad not hadnightmareover the two daysagain, phobiawas also hopefulto cure, all thesehave been luckyyou...... Myrealthank you very much.”
“黛这两天没有再做噩梦,恐惧症也有望治愈了,这一切都是多亏了你……我真的非常感谢你。”„Editor Yoshizawa......”
“吉泽编辑……”„Iffrom now onhasanyme to be able to help, toldmethatIwill tryto helpyour, no matterwith the novelrelatedmatter, isothermatters.”female editorsaidseriously.
“今后若有什么我能帮上忙的,就跟我说,我会尽全力帮你的,不管是跟小说相关的事,还是其他的事。”女编辑郑重地说道。„Editor Yoshizawayousaidwith the teacheralmostsamewords.”Seijismiled, „regarding the teacher, I have done this matter of doing, youdo not needsuchpolitely, butplease treat me kindly, inlater.”
“吉泽编辑你说了跟老师差不多一样的话呢。”晴司笑了笑,“对于老师,我只是做了该做的事,你不需要这么客气的,不过还是请多关照,在以后。”„Un...... Here is also, please treat me kindly, Harano...... Haruta-kun.”Sakihas shown the smile, said.
“嗯……这边也是,请多关照,原野……春田君。”纱希露出了微笑,说道。Ended the telephone conversation.
结束通话。SeijisaidtoMikaandChiakimatter that „Brother's Monogatari (Story)”soontrulywill sign, two peopleextended the congratulation.晴司对美佳和千秋说了“兄物语”即将真正签约的事,两人都表示祝贺。„Ithought that yourthisbookis interesting, looked atthree.”Chiakisaid with a smile, „certainlycansellgreatly!”
“我觉得你这本书非常好看,都看了三遍了。”千秋笑道,“一定能够大卖的!”„Ialsothought.”Mikaapproves the person of same belief, eyesshines, „is really verygoodworks, wrotetoowell.”
“我也觉得。”美佳赞同道,眼睛发亮,“真是非常棒的作品,写得太好了。”Theylooked atSeijito issuetheirdraft, and has readmore than once.
她们都已经看过晴司发给她们的稿子,而且读过了不止一次。„Obtainsyouto appraiselike this, Ihad the confidence.”Seijisaid with a smile, „‚Brother's Monogatari (Story)’Vol. 2, Shikawas forming in one's minddiligently, Iplanned that wrote the gamescriptwhilewrotethis, the two sidesgave dual attention.”
“得到你们这样的评价,我更有信心了。”晴司微笑道,“‘兄物语’第二卷,小诗正在努力构思,我打算一边写游戏剧本一边写这个,两边兼顾。”„Canbe good?”
“能行吗?”„Naturally, the two sidesare notanxiouslymustcomplete, can definitely give dual attention.”Seiji, „spoke of the script, must first withyourdiscuss, Chiaki.”
“当然,两边都不是急着要完成,完全可以兼顾好的。”晴司顿了顿,“而说到剧本,首先就得跟你讨论了,千秋。”„The plotrouteaboutfirst female lead, whatopinion you have?”
“关于第一女主的剧情路线,你有什么意见?”Chiakilooksto the Seiji'sface.千秋看向晴司的脸。„Iwantto askyoufirst, how do youplanto writeme?”Hersmilingtunnel.
“我想先问你,你打算怎么写我呢?”她笑眯眯地道。„Does not writeyou, takesyouas the prototype.”Seijitouches the chin.
“不是写你,是以你为原型。”晴司摸了摸下巴。„Firstmustestablishgoodfemale protagonist, mypreliminaryidea...... Orplanned the essential factor that establishesis‚Drama ClubTrump Card’and‚wealthy familythousand gold (daughter)’and‚is very popular’and‚attractivebright and beautiful’and‚richtaste’...... Like this.”
“首先得设定好女主角,我初步的想法……或者说打算设定的要素是‘戏剧部王牌’、‘富家千金’、‘很受欢迎’、‘光鲜亮丽’、‘富有品味’……这样的。”„Thenin the plot, is‚turning point that the meet of male and female main characters’and‚is togetherdaily’andloves one another ’ and‚becomesloverlaterbeing together’and‚affectionis bogged down in difficulties’‚male and female main charactersto overcomedifficulties’probably‚and ‚ result’...... Like this.”
“然后剧情上,大概就是‘男女主角的相遇’、‘日常相处’、‘相恋的契机’、‘成为恋人之后的相处’、‘恋情陷入困境’‘男女主角克服困难’、‘结局’……这样的。”„Howmustwritespecifically, refers toyouropinion.”
“具体要怎么写,就参考你的意见。”„So that's how it is.”Chiakinodded, „whatopinion do Iexpress?”
“原来如此。”千秋点了点头,“我发表什么样的意见都可以吗?”„Yes, Iwill consideryou said that will acceptas far as possible, butdid not guarantee that certainlyilluminatesto write.”
“是的,我会考虑你所说的,会尽可能地采纳,但不保证一定照着来写。”„Un......”Chiakitoucheschin, the corners of the mouthbrings backcunningarc.
“嗯……”千秋摸了摸下巴,嘴角勾起一丝狡黠弧度。„Myopinion, firstistomale protagonist!”
“我的意见,首先是对男主角的!”„Heneeds‚to be much longer’and‚handsome’! Even ifplayed the role of the girl, was that female student of naturalheroic spirit, butwas notmiserable.”
“他需要‘长得高’、‘帅气’!即使扮成了女孩子,也是潇洒英气的那种女生,而不是楚楚可怜型的。”„‚Is good atfighting’and‚richsense of justice’and‚frankopen’and‚hobbyis the dwellingto’!”
“还有‘擅长战斗’、‘富有正义感’、‘坦率开朗’、‘爱好是宅向’!”Seiji: „............”晴司:“…………”„that's right, isyou!”male-clothing beautyputs out a hand a finger/refers, „Iwant the male protagonistimageyouto be the same withSeiji, more seems like better!”
“没错,就是你!”男装丽人伸手一指,“我想要男主角的形象跟晴司你一样,越像越好!”„Why?”
“为什么?”„Becausethisis fair!”Herrighteoustunnel, „youwritefemale protagonistbased onme, thatmale protagonistestablishes is the same withyou, is the equality of the sexes.”
“因为这样才公平!”她理直气壮地道,“你基于我来写女主角,那男主角设定得跟你一样,才是男女平等嘛。”Equalghost!
平等个鬼啊!Seijidoes not know whether to laugh or cry.晴司哭笑不得。„This does need to doequality? The scriptshouldto writeinteresting......”
“这个有必要搞平等吗?剧本应该是要写得有趣……”„Ithought that thisis quite interesting, was rather most interesting! Does Mikaalsoapprove ofmythisopinion?”
“我觉得这样比较有趣,倒不如说最有趣了!美佳也赞同我这个意见吧?”twintailsyoung girlnodshastily.双马尾少女连忙点头。„I...... Iagreed that Chiaki said that thinksthisopinionvery happy!”Hercheeksslightlyred.
“我……我同意千秋说的,觉得这个意见很好!”她脸颊微红。„Thenturned into two joint comments of female protagonist! Has the componentvery much.”Chiakishows the glisteningsmiling face.
“这下就变成两个女主角的联合意见了!是很有份量的哦。”千秋露出闪亮笑容。Seijiis speechless.晴司无言。„Good...... Iwill consider.”Heshouldfor the time beingunder.
“好吧……我会好好考虑的。”他姑且应下。„Thenistome, is the female protagonistimage...... No, statusopinion.”male-clothing beautycontinuesto say.
“然后是对我自己,也就是女主角形象……不,身份的意见。”男装丽人继续说道。„‚actually childhood friends with the male protagonist’and‚agreed to marry as children’and‚in the eyes of others, most likely to end up as a pair’!”
“‘跟男主角其实是青梅竹马’、‘小时候就约定好结婚’、‘在旁人看来是最登对的一对’!”Mika: „............”美佳:“…………”„BecauseIam the first female leadcorner/horn, thisKing's Wayto the statusmatches, not?”Chiakisaid with a smile.
“因为我可是第一女主角,这种王道向的身份才匹配,不是吗?”千秋笑道。„Naturally, King's Waydoes not mean the plotto the settingsmoothly, otherwiseis uninteresting.”
“当然,王道向设定并不意味着剧情要一路顺利到底,否则就不有趣了。”„Mustadd on‚family fortuneto decline’and‚is maltreatedby the stepmothersecretly’and‚is forced the politicsto marryby the father’, suchpathoessential factor.”
“要加上‘家道中落’、‘被继母暗地虐待’、‘被父亲强迫政治联姻’,这样的悲情要素。”„Plothigh tide, isfemale protagonistis forced to forhouseholdmarryanotherman, male protagonistrushes to the marriagescene, greatlynoisy, carries offfemale protagonist!”Sheexhibits the facial expression that young girlexpectation-typepostureas well asis infatuated with.
“剧情高潮,就是女主角被迫要为了家族嫁给另一个男人,男主角赶到结婚现场,大闹一番,带走女主角!”她摆出少女憧憬式的姿势以及陶醉的神情。„Resultistwo peopleelopes the distant place, has marriedon the happy life...... What kind of?”
“结局则是两人私奔到远方,结婚过上美好幸福的生活……怎样?”„Quiteclassicalplot.”Seijicomments, „like thiswritesyes...... HoweverI want brightereyething......”
“相当经典的情节。”晴司评价道,“这样写是可以……但是我想要有更亮眼的东西……”„Thatchanged tofemale protagonistto be sold tousuryunderworldbyparents, was forced to go to seato shoot a movie, how?”
“那就改为女主角被父母卖给了高利贷黑道,被迫要下海拍片,如何?”„Suddenlyturned intohighbannedplot!?”
“突然就变成高禁制情节了!?”„Makes a debut the firstroundismanypeopletrains, turnsoto add the flat and thin piece that oleaves.”
“出道第一发就是多人调教,轮o加o出的片子。”„Moreoveris the heavytaste!?”
“而且是重口味!?”„male protagonist of female attirerushes to the scene, unusualhandsomesaid that ‚Ireplaceher’!”
“女装的男主角赶到现场,非常帅气地说‘我来代替她’!”„handsomeghost! Thisthoroughfellcrookedlyfeeds!!”
“帅气个鬼啊!这个彻底歪掉了吧喂!!”WhichtypeTrapmale leadreplacesfemale leadto take the heavytastepicture to make!?伪娘男主代替女主拍重口味片子是要闹哪样!?Thisis the fresh idearatherisreadyproper**plot! Blapproaches!!
这与其说是新意倒不如说是妥妥的**剧情好吗!还是bl向的!!On the SeijimouthinWagokorosimultaneouslymakes an effortridicule.晴司嘴上和心里齐齐用力吐槽。Chiakihee heesmiles.千秋嘻嘻地笑。„Ia littlewantto look that male protagonistwas trained the plot that opublishes.”
“我有点想看哦,男主角被调教o出的剧情。”„Yousufficed!”male protagonisthasanyenmitywithyou.
“你够了!”男主角跟你有什么仇啊。„Ialsoa littlewantto look that......”Mikaalsosaid.
“我也有点想看……”美佳也说道。„Yousufficed!!” Do the female studentshavespoiledsidereal?
“你们都够了!!”女生都有腐的一面难道是真的?
The jokestops.
玩笑到此为止。SeijiandChiakicontinuediscuss, but both sides for a whiledo not have the speciallygoodinspiration, like thiscontinued the lunch breakto finish.晴司和千秋继续讨论,但双方都一时没有特别好的灵感,就这样持续到了午休时间结束。
......
……In the afternoon after examhad finished.
下午考试结束后。SeijiandChiakiandMikaseparate, go to the Presidentdwelling, plansto test„Spiritual Energy Bullet”might.晴司与千秋和美佳分开,前往会长宅,打算测试“灵能飞弹”的威力。Heused the keyto open the door, entered the house, thenentered the basementpractice arena.
他用钥匙开门,进了房屋,然后进了地下室练习场。Arrivesprevioustimetests the Mashiro-chanstrength, after having the locations of varioustypes of targets, helooked, was tryingopens the computer of ringside.
走到上次测试小真白力量的,有着各种靶子的场地后,他看了一下,试着打开了场边的电脑。Does not know how mustuse.
不知道要怎么用。Hasto callto ask that looked.
只好打电话问问看了。
After relatingNatsuya, Seijiexplained the situation, inquired the usage of computer.
联系上夏夜后,晴司说明情况,询问电脑的用法。PresidentOjou-samatoldhim.会长大小姐告诉了他。Heoperatesimmediately, has assigned out a circulartargetsmoothly.
他随即操作起来,顺利地调出了一个圆形靶子。In the approach apron, puts out a handto aim at the target.
进入场内,伸手对准靶子。Displays„Spiritual Energy Bullet”!
施展“灵能飞弹”!In the spiritual visionfield of vision, the whiteenergygroupincreasesbefore the palmrapidly, had the palm of the handsizeall of a sudden, thenbursts out the brilliance, suddenlyemission.灵视视野中,白色的能量团在掌心前迅速变大,一下子就有了巴掌大小,接着迸发光辉,骤然放射而出。Touches!!
碰!!Hits the target, crack as ifheavyblunt instrumentstrokesmaliciouslyin the abovesound.
击中靶子,炸响出仿佛沉重钝器狠狠击打在上面的声音。
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