WTNRAS :: Volume #2

#162: Brother * younger sister


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First those who map in the Seiji eye is, book title of expectation. 首先映入晴司眼里的是,预想的书名。 Sexual intercourse copies...... elder brother and younger sister to lose standard...... „I am younger sister...... Brother's Monogatari (Story)...... “春乐抄”……“兄妹失格”……“我是妹”……“兄物语”…… Seiji: ............ 晴司:“…………” Intense regards feeling as well as the brother x younger sisters tends to aura to head on to have the wood to have!? 一股强烈的即视感以及兄x妹趋向气息扑面而来有木有!? Sexual intercourse copies, what this first makes him think is the second of o five centimeters cherry blossom copies, but thinks what carefully the previous generation also does have a famous work to call to come probably? Probably is „the spring zither copies...... This world also has!? “春乐抄”,这个首先让他想到的是秒o五厘米的“樱花抄”,但仔细想想前世好像还有本名著叫什么来着?好像是“春琴抄”……难道这个世界也有吗!? elder brother and younger sister loses standard, this is „the world loses standard to feed! Or is this world edition „does xx lose standard? Also is very in any case possible is the plagiarism...... Does not imitate. 兄妹失格”,这个是“人间失格”吧喂!或者说是这个世界版本的“xx失格”?反正也很可能是抄袭……哦不,模仿来的。 I am younger sister, what this should not imitate is „I am cat? Other what? “我是妹”,这个该不会模仿的是“我是猫”吧?还是别的什么? Brother's Monogatari (Story), this was quite simple, is hard relatively ordinary on the contrary ridicule. 兄物语”,这个就比较简单了,相对普通反倒难以吐槽 As for brother x younger sister aura...... This was more obvious, Seiji a little escapes the strength simply. 至于兄x妹气息……这就更明显了,晴司简直有点脱力。 Good, buoys up mind to look earnestly that what issue sexual intercourse copies me is younger sister Brother's Monogatari (Story) these three names does not have probably, what ghost but elder brother and younger sister loses standard...... to lose standard!? 好吧,振作精神认真看,“春乐抄我是妹兄物语”这三个名字好像没啥问题,但“兄妹失格”……“失格”什么鬼!? The feeling is a little unclear! I study few have not looked at „the world to lose standard not to know that these two character anything meanings but felt is not quite right! What content Shika you actually want to write with this book title!? 感觉有点不详啊!我读书少没看过“人间失格”不知道这两字什么意思但感觉就是不太对!小诗你到底想以这个书名写什么内容!? The Seiji cheeks twitch slightly. 晴司脸颊微微抽搐。 Carefully looks again, what sees is the character setting and general plot idea. 再仔细看,看到的是人物设定和大概的剧情想法。 Sexual intercourse copies: Great Household family background the love story of aristocratic family Young Master and lonely blind female musician. “春乐抄”:大家族出身的世家公子与孤独盲女乐师的爱情故事。 elder brother and younger sister loses standard: Has brother and younger sister of blood relationship taboo chilly beautiful love story. 兄妹失格”:有着血缘关系的兄长妹妹的禁忌凄美爱情故事。 I am younger sister: How writes adopted brother handsome and formidable youth love story at the adopted sister angle. “我是妹”:以义妹的角度写义兄如何帅气和强大的青春爱情故事。 Brother's Monogatari (Story): Writes at the adopted brother angle with the comedy love story that adopted sister is together joyfully. 兄物语”:以义兄的角度写与义妹快乐相处的喜剧爱情故事。 Seiji wants to cover the face very much. 晴司很想捂脸。 Shika, your idea has issue! 小诗,你的想法有问题啊! What four stories have three writing is the elder brother and younger sister love story! You have like this theme!? 四个故事有三个写的是兄妹的爱情故事!你到底是有多喜欢这个题材!? In Shika innermost feelings...... No, stops! Do not think in the realistic direction that novel is the novel! 难道小诗内心里……不,打住!别往现实方向想,小说就是小说! But the novel also has the thing that does not write well, for example elder brother and younger sister loses standard this type, dangerous Domain that but bans high! 但小说也是有不好写的东西的,比如“兄妹失格”这种的,可是高禁制的危险领域 The traditional novel writes this theme to be very bad, not to mention light novel, presented this content proper was resisted the manuscript!! 传统小说写这种题材都很糟糕,更别提轻小说了,出现这种内容妥妥的被拒稿好吗!! If the high section galgame script can under the consideration, this have the trail blazer actually for the time being, for example reason o empties anything...... no no, do not think again! 要是高段galgame剧本倒是可以考虑下,这个姑且是有先驱者的,比如缘o空什么的……不不,不要再想了! Do not consider this, erases directly. 别考虑这个,直接删掉。 Other three, can include the consideration for the time being. 其他三个,姑且可以列入考虑。 Seiji then looks. 晴司接着看下去。 Sexual intercourse copies...... aristocratic family Young Master and lonely blind female are actually table elder brother and younger sister...... Eh, this criterion is very difficult to judge, moreover this theme really a little...... “春乐抄”……世家公子和孤独盲女其实是表兄妹……,这个尺度很难判断,况且这个题材实在有点…… Erased. 还是删掉好了。 I am younger sister and Brother's Monogatari (Story)...... Actually is the character angle of view is different, setting and plot anything can actually share. “我是妹”和“兄物语”……其实就是人物视角不同,设定、剧情什么的其实可以共用。 Seiji looks at these two settlements emphatically, discovered that has some plots and hypotheses is very interesting. 晴司着重看这两个的相关内容,发现有一些情节和设定挺有趣的。 After looking. 看完后。 He changes Kagura Shika, saw that the latter is waiting for coyly restlessly. 他转向神乐诗,见到后者正扭捏不安地等待着。 Saw this appearance, Seiji's a lot of ridicule could not say, can expose, only then smiled. 见到她这个样子,晴司的一肚子吐槽就说不出来了,能展露出的只有微笑。 These that you write down...... The overall looks like quite rough, but some flashing temperatures.” He said confidently. “你写下的这些……总体看来比较粗糙,不过还是有些闪光点。”他坦然说道。 Kagura Shika hears word, relaxed obviously, then has shown the light smiling face. 神乐诗闻言,明显松了口气,然后露出了淡淡的笑容。 I am younger sister and Brother's Monogatari (Story) these two can choose its one to write, uses the interesting thing above completely. For example I am younger sister Fantasy and mysterious plot, Brother's Monogatari (Story) the love comedy plot......” Seiji then said. “‘我是妹’和‘兄物语’这两个可以选其一来写,把有趣的东西全部用在上面。比如‘我是妹’的奇幻和神秘情节,‘兄物语’的恋爱喜剧情节……”晴司接着说下去。 Fantasy + the mysterious + love comedy, this lets is west the previous generation that Seiji thinks o is new story series. 奇幻+神秘+恋爱喜剧,这让晴司想到的就是前世西尾o新“物语系列”。 Although western this goods very pit, but has saying that his writing style is very unique, novel anime supervision new home o exactly with him to electric wave, therefore built similar unique style works this anime, was very the fire. 虽然西尾这货很坑,但不得不说他的文字风格很独特,小说动画化的监督新房o之恰好跟他对上了电波,于是将这部动画打造成了同样风格独特的作品,很是大火了一把。 Kagura Shika writes in the idea of book is very immature, but made Seiji see the possibility. 神乐诗写在本子的想法很稚嫩,但让晴司看到了可能性。 Makes her think again carefully that is checked by him. If can write, can perhaps create this world story series! 再让她仔细地想想,由他来把关。如果写得好的话,说不定能够创造出这个世界的“物语系列”! Me said my idea. Establishes provisionally for adopted sister angle of view, is ‚I am younger sister, at the beginning starts from mysterious this angle, first portrays a unique adopted brother character image......” “我来说说我的想法吧。就暂定为‘义妹’的视角,也就是‘我是妹’,开始时从‘神秘’这个角度入手,首先塑造出一个独特的义兄角色形象……” He recounted incessantly. 他滔滔不绝地述说。 Kagura Shika earnestly listens respectfully. 神乐诗认真地聆听。 more listens, her eye pupil more shines. 越听下去,她的眼眸就越是发亮。 The Seiji's words guided her train of thought that during gave her to be is confused the imagination, has pointed out the direction. 晴司的话语引导出了她的思绪,给她那本来处于迷茫之中的想象,指明了方向。 „...... After this kind of war, the adopted brother mysterious and formidable image described the peak.” “……经过这样一场大战之后,义兄的神秘和强大的形象描写到了最高点。” At this time exposed former all foreshadowing, pointed out adopted sister this character, was the relator of book himself, dominated in adopted brother above, this book truly deepest mysticalness! Gives the reader to shock by this, with doubts.” “此时把之前所有的伏笔揭露出来,指出‘义妹’这个角色,也就是本书的叙述者本身,是凌驾于‘义兄’之上的,本书真正最深的神秘!以此给读者以震撼,和疑惑。” Hence, the first volume of this book ended, leaves behind enough suspense, attracts the readers to look at Vol. 2.” “至此,本书的第一卷结束,留下足够的悬疑,吸引读者们去看第二卷。” My idea probably is this, the mysticalness of love comedy element a Fantasy background, the fusion loves is the story.” “我的想法大概就是这样,一个奇幻背景,融合喜闻乐见的恋爱喜剧元素的神秘系故事。” You...... Thinks how is it? “你……觉得怎么样? Seiji looks to Kagura Shika. 晴司看向神乐诗 young girl winked eyes, smiles. 少女眨了眨眼睛,微笑起来。 Seiji elder brother...... Too fierce!” 晴司哥哥……太厉害了!” Also heard such praise. Seiji flexure face. 又听到了这样的赞扬。晴司挠了挠脸。 Very is not fierce, I also find out a possibility the direction.” “不算很厉害啦,我也只是想出一个可能的方向。” Must walk this direction, is you decides. If walks, concrete plot, character setting, background detail and so on, is needs you to think.” “要不要走这个方向,是你来决定的。而如果走的话,具体的情节,人物设定,背景细节之类,也都是需要你来想的。” Un!” Kagura Shika nodded. “嗯!”神乐诗点了点头。 In her mind has had many ideas, wants to write down immediately. 她的脑海里已经冒出了许多想法,想要立刻写下来。 This is the impulsion of creation...... She thinks this feeling, real very happy. 这就是创作的冲动……她觉得这种感觉,真的很好 Seiji saw the enthusiasm from the face of Kagura Shika. 晴司神乐诗的脸上看出了热情。 This very happy, this likely is youth young girl. 很好,这才像是一个青春少女嘛。 Time early, I do not go back the room...... You later write the thing the words, paid attention not to write is too late.” “时间不早了,我要回去房间了……你待会写东西的话,注意别写太晚了。” Un...... Good night, Seiji elder brother.” “嗯……晚安,晴司哥哥。” Good night, Shika.” “晚安,小诗。” After gazing after Seiji leaves, Kagura Shika immediately sits before the desk, bends over one's desk to write. 目送晴司离开后,神乐诗立刻坐到书桌前,伏案书写起来。 This is elder brother cooperation creation works! Thinks of this point, she even more surges warmly. 这是与哥哥合作创作的作品!想到这一点,她就越发涌动出热情。 ...... …… Dawn. 天明。 After the breakfast, Seiji goes to the basement with Natsuya. 早餐后,晴司跟着夏夜前往地下室。 The Natsuya opens third fan wooden door, inside is a narrow small space. 夏夜打开第三扇木门,里面是一个狭隘的小空间。 Elevator? 电梯? Seiji follows Natsuya, saw the latter to press an arrow button downward, then had to close, felt the weightlessness feeling slightly. 晴司跟着夏夜走进去,见到后者按动了一个往下的箭头按钮,然后有门关上了,感受到微微的失重感。 Really is the elevator. 果然是电梯。 After the moment, the elevator stops, gate opened. 片刻后,电梯停止,门开了。 Front darkness. 面前一片漆黑。 Natsuya treads to go out outside, has the light to shine instantaneously in dark. 夏夜率先踏出门外,瞬间就有灯光在黑暗中亮起。 Seiji also walked, saw the lamp that shines are getting more and more, finally entire space bright, but not the dazzling brilliance illuminated. 晴司也走了出去,见到亮起的灯越来越多,最终整个空间都被明亮而不刺眼的光辉照亮了。 Here is a practice arena.” Natsuya said to him. “这里是练习场。”夏夜对他说道。
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