Firstthose whomapin the Seijieyeis, book title of expectation.
首先映入晴司眼里的是,预想的书名。„Sexual intercoursecopies”...... „elder brother and younger sisterto losestandard”...... „I am younger sister”...... „Brother's Monogatari (Story)”......
“春乐抄”……“兄妹失格”……“我是妹”……“兄物语”……Seiji: „............”晴司:“…………”Intenseregardsfeelingas well as the brotherxyounger sisterstends toaurato head onto have the woodto have!?
一股强烈的即视感以及兄x妹趋向气息扑面而来有木有!?„Sexual intercoursecopies”, whatthisfirstmakeshimthinkis the second of ofivecentimeters„cherry blossomcopies”, butthinkswhatcarefully the previous generationalsodoes have a famous work to callto comeprobably? Probablyis„the springzithercopies”...... Thisworldalsohas!?
“春乐抄”,这个首先让他想到的是秒o五厘米的“樱花抄”,但仔细想想前世好像还有本名著叫什么来着?好像是“春琴抄”……难道这个世界也有吗!?„elder brother and younger sisterlosesstandard”, thisis„the worldlosesstandard”to feed! Oristhisworldedition„does xxlosestandard”? Also is very in any case possibleis the plagiarism...... Does not imitate.
“兄妹失格”,这个是“人间失格”吧喂!或者说是这个世界版本的“xx失格”?反正也很可能是抄袭……哦不,模仿来的。„Iamyounger sister”, whatthisshouldnot imitateis„I am cat”? Otherwhat?
“我是妹”,这个该不会模仿的是“我是猫”吧?还是别的什么?„Brother's Monogatari (Story)”, this was quite simple, is hardrelativelyordinaryon the contraryridicule.
“兄物语”,这个就比较简单了,相对普通反倒难以吐槽。As forbrotherxyounger sisteraura...... Thiswas more obvious, Seijia littleescapes the strengthsimply.
至于兄x妹气息……这就更明显了,晴司简直有点脱力。Good, buoys upmindto lookearnestlythatwhatissue„sexual intercoursecopiesmeisyounger sisterBrother's Monogatari (Story)”thesethreenamesdoes not haveprobably, whatghostbut„elder brother and younger sisterlosesstandard”...... „to losestandard”!?
好吧,振作精神认真看,“春乐抄我是妹兄物语”这三个名字好像没啥问题,但“兄妹失格”……“失格”什么鬼!?
The feelingis a little unclear! Istudyfewhave not looked at„the worldto losestandard”not to know that thesetwocharacteranythingmeaningsbutfelt is not quite right! WhatcontentShikayouactuallywantto writewiththisbook title!?
感觉有点不详啊!我读书少没看过“人间失格”不知道这两字什么意思但感觉就是不太对!小诗你到底想以这个书名写什么内容!?
The Seijicheekstwitchslightly.晴司脸颊微微抽搐。Carefullylooksagain, whatseesis the charactersetting and generalplotidea.
再仔细看,看到的是人物设定和大概的剧情想法。„Sexual intercoursecopies”: Great Householdfamily background the love story of aristocratic familyYoung Masterandlonelyblindfemalemusician.
“春乐抄”:大家族出身的世家公子与孤独盲女乐师的爱情故事。„elder brother and younger sisterlosesstandard”: Hasbrother and younger sister of blood relationshiptaboochillybeautifullove story.
“兄妹失格”:有着血缘关系的兄长和妹妹的禁忌凄美爱情故事。„Iamyounger sister”: Howwritesadopted brotherhandsome and formidableyouthlove storyat the adopted sisterangle.
“我是妹”:以义妹的角度写义兄如何帅气和强大的青春爱情故事。„Brother's Monogatari (Story)”: Writesat the adopted brotheranglewith the comedylove story that adopted sisteris togetherjoyfully.
“兄物语”:以义兄的角度写与义妹快乐相处的喜剧爱情故事。Seijiwantsto cover the facevery much.晴司很想捂脸。Shika, yourideahasissue!小诗,你的想法有问题啊!Whatfourstorieshavethreewritingis the elder brother and younger sisterlove story! Youhavelikethistheme!?
四个故事有三个写的是兄妹的爱情故事!你到底是有多喜欢这个题材!?InShikainnermost feelings...... No, stops! Do not thinkin the realisticdirectionthatnovelis the novel!
难道小诗内心里……不,打住!别往现实方向想,小说就是小说!But the novelalsohas the thing that does not writewell, for example„elder brother and younger sisterlosesstandard”thistype, dangerousDomain that butbanshigh!
但小说也是有不好写的东西的,比如“兄妹失格”这种的,可是高禁制的危险领域!
The traditional novelwritesthisthemeto be very bad, not to mentionlight novel, presentedthiscontentproperwas resisted the manuscript!!
传统小说写这种题材都很糟糕,更别提轻小说了,出现这种内容妥妥的被拒稿好吗!!If the highsectiongalgamescriptcanunder the consideration, thishave the trail blazeractuallyfor the time being, for examplereasonoemptiesanything...... no no, do not thinkagain!
要是高段galgame剧本倒是可以考虑下,这个姑且是有先驱者的,比如缘o空什么的……不不,不要再想了!Do not considerthis, erasesdirectly.
别考虑这个,直接删掉。Otherthree, caninclude the considerationfor the time being.
其他三个,姑且可以列入考虑。Seijithenlooks.晴司接着看下去。„Sexual intercoursecopies”...... aristocratic familyYoung Master and lonelyblindfemale are actually tableelder brother and younger sister...... Eh, thiscriterionis very difficultto judge, moreoverthisthemereallya little......
“春乐抄”……世家公子和孤独盲女其实是表兄妹……呃,这个尺度很难判断,况且这个题材实在有点……Erased.
还是删掉好了。„Iamyounger sister”and„Brother's Monogatari (Story)”...... Actuallyis the characterangle of viewis different, settingandplotanything can actually share.
“我是妹”和“兄物语”……其实就是人物视角不同,设定、剧情什么的其实可以共用。Seijilooks atthesetwosettlementsemphatically, discovered that hassomeplots and hypothesesis very interesting.晴司着重看这两个的相关内容,发现有一些情节和设定挺有趣的。
After looking.
看完后。HechangesKagura Shika, saw that the latteris waiting forcoylyrestlessly.
他转向神乐诗,见到后者正扭捏不安地等待着。Saw this appearance, Seiji'sa lot ofridiculecould not say, canexpose, only thensmiled.
见到她这个样子,晴司的一肚子吐槽就说不出来了,能展露出的只有微笑。These that „youwrite down...... The overalllooks likequiterough, butsomeflashing temperatures.”Hesaidconfidently.
“你写下的这些……总体看来比较粗糙,不过还是有些闪光点。”他坦然说道。Kagura Shikahearsword, relaxedobviously, thenhas shown the lightsmiling face.神乐诗闻言,明显松了口气,然后露出了淡淡的笑容。„‚Iamyounger sister’and‚Brother's Monogatari (Story)’thesetwocanchooseitsoneto write, uses the interestingthing above completely. For example‚Iamyounger sister’Fantasyandmysteriousplot, ‚Brother's Monogatari (Story)’ the lovecomedyplot......”Seijithensaid.
“‘我是妹’和‘兄物语’这两个可以选其一来写,把有趣的东西全部用在上面。比如‘我是妹’的奇幻和神秘情节,‘兄物语’的恋爱喜剧情节……”晴司接着说下去。Fantasy+ the mysterious+lovecomedy, thisletsiswest the previous generation that Seijithinksois new„storyseries”.奇幻+神秘+恋爱喜剧,这让晴司想到的就是前世西尾o新“物语系列”。Althoughwesternthisgoodsverypit, buthas saying that hiswritingstyleis very unique, novelanimesupervisionnew homeoexactlywithhim to electric wave, thereforebuiltsimilarunique styleworksthisanime, was very the fire.
虽然西尾这货很坑,但不得不说他的文字风格很独特,小说动画化的监督新房o之恰好跟他对上了电波,于是将这部动画打造成了同样风格独特的作品,很是大火了一把。Kagura Shikawritesin the idea of bookis very immature, butmadeSeijisee the possibility.神乐诗写在本子的想法很稚嫩,但让晴司看到了可能性。Makesherthinkagaincarefullythatis checkedbyhim. Ifcan write, can perhaps createthisworld„storyseries”!
再让她仔细地想想,由他来把关。如果写得好的话,说不定能够创造出这个世界的“物语系列”!„Mesaidmyidea. Establishes provisionallyfor‚adopted sister’angle of view, is‚I am younger sister’, at the beginningstartsfrom‚mysterious’thisangle, firstportrays a uniqueadopted brothercharacterimage......”
“我来说说我的想法吧。就暂定为‘义妹’的视角,也就是‘我是妹’,开始时从‘神秘’这个角度入手,首先塑造出一个独特的义兄角色形象……”Herecountedincessantly.
他滔滔不绝地述说。Kagura Shikaearnestlylistens respectfully.神乐诗认真地聆听。morelistens, hereyepupilmoreshines.
越听下去,她的眼眸就越是发亮。
The Seiji'swordsguidedhertrain of thought that during gave her to be is confused the imagination, has pointed out the direction.晴司的话语引导出了她的思绪,给她那本来处于迷茫之中的想象,指明了方向。„...... Afterthis kind ofwar, the adopted brothermysteriousandformidableimagedescribed the peak.”
“……经过这样一场大战之后,义兄的神秘和强大的形象描写到了最高点。”„At this timeexposedformerallforeshadowing, pointed out‚adopted sister’thischaracter, was the relator of bookhimself, dominatedin‚adopted brother’above, thisbooktrulydeepestmysticalness! Gives the reader to shockbythis, withdoubts.”
“此时把之前所有的伏笔揭露出来,指出‘义妹’这个角色,也就是本书的叙述者本身,是凌驾于‘义兄’之上的,本书真正最深的神秘!以此给读者以震撼,和疑惑。”„Hence, the firstvolume of thisbookended, leaves behindenoughsuspense, attracts the readersto look atVol. 2.”
“至此,本书的第一卷结束,留下足够的悬疑,吸引读者们去看第二卷。”„Myideaprobablyisthis, the mysticalness of lovecomedyelement a Fantasybackground, the fusionlovesis the story.”
“我的想法大概就是这样,一个奇幻背景,融合喜闻乐见的恋爱喜剧元素的神秘系故事。”„You...... Thinkshow is it?”
“你……觉得怎么样?”SeijilookstoKagura Shika.晴司看向神乐诗。young girlwinkedeyes, smiles.少女眨了眨眼睛,微笑起来。„Seijielder brother...... Toofierce!”
“晴司哥哥……太厉害了!”Alsoheardsuchpraise. Seijiflexureface.
又听到了这样的赞扬。晴司挠了挠脸。„Veryis not fierce, Ialsofind out a possibility the direction.”
“不算很厉害啦,我也只是想出一个可能的方向。”„Mustwalkthisdirection, isyoudecides. Ifwalks, concreteplot, charactersetting, backgrounddetailand so on, isneedsyouto think.”
“要不要走这个方向,是你来决定的。而如果走的话,具体的情节,人物设定,背景细节之类,也都是需要你来想的。”„Un!”Kagura Shikanodded.
“嗯!”神乐诗点了点头。Inhermindhas hadmanyideas, wantsto write downimmediately.
她的脑海里已经冒出了许多想法,想要立刻写下来。Thisis the impulsion of creation...... Shethinksthisfeeling, realvery happy.
这就是创作的冲动……她觉得这种感觉,真的很好。Seijisaw the enthusiasmfrom the face of Kagura Shika.晴司从神乐诗的脸上看出了热情。Thisvery happy, thislikelyisyouthyoung girl.
这很好,这才像是一个青春少女嘛。„Timeearly, Ido not go back the room...... Youlaterwrite the thing the words, paid attentionnot to writeis too late.”
“时间不早了,我要回去房间了……你待会写东西的话,注意别写太晚了。”„Un...... Good night, Seijielder brother.”
“嗯……晚安,晴司哥哥。”„Good night, Shika.”
“晚安,小诗。”
After gazing afterSeijileaves, Kagura Shikaimmediatelysitsbefore the desk, bends over one's deskto write.
目送晴司离开后,神乐诗立刻坐到书桌前,伏案书写起来。This is elder brothercooperationcreationworks! Thinks ofthis point, sheeven moresurgeswarmly.
这是与哥哥合作创作的作品!想到这一点,她就越发涌动出热情。
......
……Dawn.
天明。
After the breakfast, Seijigoes to the basementwithNatsuya.
早餐后,晴司跟着夏夜前往地下室。
The Natsuyaopensthirdfanwooden door, insideis a narrowsmallspace.夏夜打开第三扇木门,里面是一个狭隘的小空间。Elevator?
电梯?SeijifollowsNatsuya, saw the latterto press an arrowbuttondownward, thenhadto close, felt the weightlessnessfeelingslightly.晴司跟着夏夜走进去,见到后者按动了一个往下的箭头按钮,然后有门关上了,感受到微微的失重感。Reallyis the elevator.
果然是电梯。
After the moment, the elevatorstops, gateopened.
片刻后,电梯停止,门开了。Frontdarkness.
面前一片漆黑。Natsuyatreadsto go outoutside, has the lightto shineinstantaneouslyindark.夏夜率先踏出门外,瞬间就有灯光在黑暗中亮起。Seijialsowalked, saw the lamp that shinesare getting more and more, finallyentirespacebright, but not the dazzlingbrillianceilluminated.晴司也走了出去,见到亮起的灯越来越多,最终整个空间都被明亮而不刺眼的光辉照亮了。„Hereis a practice arena.”Natsuyasaidtohim.
“这里是练习场。”夏夜对他说道。
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