„synopsis this thing, is not necessary, many Great God do not make synopsis.” “大纲这东西,不是必要的,很多大神不做大纲的。” In the Qiu Wuji room, Chu “Signed a Fan to be an Author; Immortal Disciple; Master Writer; Full of Bright Love” Ge, moves the small stool to sit by her, starts to direct: 秋无际的房间里,楚·父神·被粉丝要签名的作家·修仙徒弟·写书师父·明恋者·戈,搬着小凳子坐在她旁边,开始指点: „The synopsis biggest significance, is actually makes you be clear about you to write any story, main character must make anything, experienced anything, obtained what result, this process brief row understood, is most initial synopsis. If in your heart has the explicit story line, can not need this thing. Therefore what story do you want to write?” “大纲的最大意义,其实是让你明确你要写一个什么故事,主角要做些什么,经历了什么,取得了什么结果,这个过程简要的列明白了,就是最初始的大纲。如果你心中有明确的故事线,就可以不需要这玩意。所以你想写一个什么故事？” In Qiu Wuji two eye socket circles: „I want to write a woman beheading monsters and exterminating demons story.” 秋无际两眼圈圈中:“我想写一个女侠斩妖除魔的故事。” „...... This is not the story. Recalled one my words?” “……这不是故事。回忆一遍我刚才的话？” The circle circle in Qiu Wuji eye starts to proliferate: „main character must make anything...... my main character to want beheading monsters and exterminating demons. She experienced anything...... to experience beheading monsters and exterminating demons.” 秋无际眼里的圈圈开始扩散:“主角要做些什么……我的主角要斩妖除魔。她经历了什么……经历了斩妖除魔。” Chu Ge: „Obtained what result, success beheading monsters and exterminating demons, yes......” 楚戈:“取得了什么结果,成功斩妖除魔,是吧……” „, Yes.” “啊,是的。” „This is not the story, can only be called a theme.” Chu Ge said: „If you want to write female lead the story that runs from the book, this can only call idea, an setting, was not called the story. Between Qiu Wuji and Chu Ge had anything, called the story.” “这不是故事,只能叫做一种题材。”楚戈道:“假如你想写一个女主从书里跑出来的故事,这只能叫一个点子,一个设定,不叫故事。秋无际和楚戈之间发生了些什么,才叫故事。” Qiu Wuji a little returns to the soul probably: „You want anything with me, you pig foot!” 秋无际好像有点回魂:“你想和我发生什么,你下流！” Chu Ge covers the face: „This apprentice I have no way to teach.” 楚戈捂脸:“这徒弟我没法教。” Qiu Wuji visits him angrily: „You touched my hand.” 秋无际气鼓鼓地看着他:“你都摸我手了。” „...... Good all various professions, I try again.” Chu Ge caught the small hand to touch two. “……行行行,我再试试。”楚戈抓过小手摸了两下。 The Qiu Wuji subconscious response, a fist punched on the Chu Ge face. 秋无际下意识反应,一拳揍在了楚戈脸上。 Stage 1 the teaching ended. 第一阶段教学结束。 ............ ………… „Story could not convince, one side we first put, first said the person to suppose, since the person supposed also to construct the plot. For example what kind of person your female lead is, has anything to pursue and ideal, she is because anything experiences to turn into such personality...... that from her ideal and pursue, can the construction next step move toward......” “故事说不通,咱们先搁一边,先说人设,从人设上也可以构建出剧情来。比如你的女主是个怎样的人、有什么追求和理想,她是因为什么经历而变成这样的性情……那么从她的理想与追求,就可以构建下一步走向……” Qiu Wuji mouse click, click. 秋无际鼠标点击,点击。 „Do you do?” “你干嘛？” „Finds your Qiu Wuji person to suppose the manuscript.” “找你的秋无际人设稿。” Chu Ge: „My damn......” 楚戈:“我TM……” „It is not right, in your setting has not written me to experience anything, setting this personality.” “不对啊,你的设定里也没写我经历了什么,就设定这性情。” „Because the background and looks at fixedly a difference, your past was only a powerful label, the having god-given wisdom rare talent, leading sect to progress day by day, how, how rose to challenges as for your cultivation, this completely had the reader brain to make up was OK, does not need to write plainly. Like this I following instead have the leeway of display, like sways on the white paper, can add Qiu Wuji to have the bookworm air/Qi momentarily, Qiu Wuji has the good wife and loving mother attribute, others do not know before you, anything experiences, is quite easy to accept.” “因为背景和凝注点不同,你的过去只是一个强大的标签,天纵奇才,带领宗门蒸蒸日上,至于你一路怎么修行、怎么披荆斩棘,这个尽有读者脑补就可以了,不需要写明。这样我后续反而有发挥的余地,就像在白纸上挥洒,随时可以添一句秋无际有文青气,秋无际有贤妻良母属性,别人又不知道你以前什么经历,就比较容易接受下来。” „Did you also call me to make this setting?” “那你还叫我做这种设定？” „What you must write is female lead.” “你要写的是女主角。” „Your Qiu Wuji is not female lead.” “你的秋无际不就是女主角。” Chu Ge covers the face: „This apprentice I have no way to teach.” 楚戈捂脸:“这徒弟我没法教。” „You touch......” “你都摸……” Chu Ge first step made the defense gesture. 楚戈先一步做出了防御姿态。 Stage 2 the teaching ended. 第二阶段教学结束。 ............ ………… „Ok, like this, we first construct the character to relate, relates on also to organize the plot from the character. For example, your female lead leaves the mountain to meet male lead, this male lead is anyone, at this moment he faced what situation, female lead was meeting, was the help also good is the misunderstanding, this first plot came out. Then launches the male lead anything background, which people he was connected and which influences, some anything demanded, which then deep cut female lead own life experience to be connected again, interwove, a plot net also came out.” “算了,这样,我们先构建人物关系,从人物关系上也可以组织出剧情来。比如说,你的女主角出山遇上男主角,这个男主角是个什么人,此刻他面临着什么情况,女主角遇上了,是帮助也好是误会也罢,这第一个剧情就出来了。然后展开男主角什么背景,他关联了哪些人、哪些势力,都有些什么诉求,回头再深挖女主角自己的身世又关联了哪些,交织一下,一张剧情网也就出来了。” „I do not know that in your family does, yourself do not know, our days do not have well.” “我都不知道你家里干嘛的,连你自己都不知道,我们的日子不也过得好好的。” Chu Ge: „...... You are making up the story, can first forget the matter of our reality.” 楚戈:“……你在编故事,能不能先忘了我们现实的事情啊。” „I felt you said with difference that I experience.” “我只是觉得你说的和我体验到的不一样嘛。” „You live in the experience, the life is light and arid, daily the daily necessities same live. But what we in doing compiles the story, needs various plot fluctuating, this is not a matter.” “你在体验生活,生活是平淡且枯燥的,天天柴米油盐一样过日子。而我们在做的是编造故事,需要各种剧情起伏,这不是一回事。” „Did not say that the story does originate from the life?” “不是说故事来源于生活？” „...... I, when your apprentice, there are you to talk back?” The Chu Ge air/Qi spins its wheels in the room, finally grasps the young pig to hold the pillow to press on the Qiu Wuji head: „Going against!” “……我当你徒弟的时候,有没有你这么会顶嘴啊？”楚戈气得在屋子里打转转,最后抓起小猪抱枕摁在秋无际脑袋上:“顶着！” Qiu Wuji withstand/top is holding the pillow: „Is this also practices balanced?” 秋无际顶着抱枕:“这也是练平衡？” „No, the old person said that in shape complementary form, this is to make you make up.” “不,老人说以形补形,这是让你补补。” „Chu Ge can you?” “楚戈你能了是吧？” „Bang bang pang pang!” “砰砰乓乓！” After is in chaotic situation, the Chu Ge two eye socket circles lay on the ground: „Qiu Wuji your deceived master and exterminated his ancestors!” 一阵鸡飞狗跳之后,楚戈两眼圈圈地趴在了地上:“秋无际你欺师灭祖！” „I am also your master!” Qiu Wuji furiously stated: „Does not learn from you, do yourself are also partly throw, I write, does not believe me unable to write!” “我也是你师父！”秋无际气哼哼地道:“不跟你学,你自己也是个半扑不扑的,我自己写,就不信我不能写！” Chu Ge painful nod: „Believes oneself......” 楚戈沉痛点头:“相信自己……” „en!” “嗯！” „What I said that believes itself, but can also ask me to teach.” “我说的是,相信自己,还会来求我教的。” Qiu Wuji opened the group to chat: „Goes to the code your character, I looked that group of friends chatted, their anything understood.” 秋无际打开了群聊:“去码你的字,我看群友聊天去,他们什么都懂。” Group friend: „Qiuqiu ~ my Qiuqiu......” 群友:“秋秋~我的秋秋……” Little Blue Pill by manager Qiu Wuji speech banned for 1h. 蓝色小药丸被管理员秋无际禁言一小时。 The group friend was also unreliable, Qiu Wuji a lot of does not have the place to send depressed, suddenly remembered own portrait so many days this/should to be good, then walked to want portrait: „Meow, my was portrait good?” 群友也靠不住了,秋无际一肚子郁闷没地方发,忽然想起自己的头像这么多天了该好了,便找上门去要头像:“喵,我的头像好了吗？” Opposite silent period of time, suddenly drew a discussion group, draws Qiu Wuji and a strange artist in the same place: „This is the artist wife who we look.” 对面沉默了好一阵子,忽然拉了一个讨论组,把秋无际和一位陌生画师拉在一起:“这是我们找的画师太太。” Then sent a form: „Fills out the third-class star character portrait table troublesome.” 然后又发了一张表格:“麻烦填个三等星人物头像表。” Qiu Wuji: „?” 秋无际:“？” She air/Qi not to hit one: „This how long passed, indeed do you just now look for the artist? This anything table, previous time you did not say must fill, at this time also filled out a form! Did I attempt give you to finish up according to the picture also filled out a form?” 她气不打一处来:“这都多久过去了,敢情你才刚找画师？还有这什么表,上次你不说要填,这时候了还填表！我图都给你了照着画就完事了还填什么表啊？” „Emmmm embarrassed this is the stipulation......” “emmmm不好意思这是规定……” Qiu Wuji:() 秋无际:() She realized finally Pan Da was away from internet line to hit the mood of person, turned around Chu Ge’s room: „Relates Pan Da, making him help me hit individual!” 她终于体会到了潘达隔着网线打人的心情,转身去了楚戈房间:“联系一下潘达,让他帮我打个人！” Chu Ge: „?” 楚戈:“？” „So long as he hit, I relieve speech ban to him!” “只要他打了,我就给他解除禁言！” „You burnt muddled, I gave under him the form, in your group lifted a ban, who didn't tell him obvious us is?” Chu Ge speechless say/way: „Was annoyed such big temperament by whom?” “你烧糊涂了,我给他下单子,你群里解禁,不是明摆着告诉他我们是谁吗？”楚戈无语道:“被谁惹了这么大脾气？” „Selects mother to make portrait.” “点娘做头像的。” Chu Ge thinks, first mounts the QQ large size, private chatted „Little Blue Pill”: „Panda head, is day after day by speech ban, wanted to make the management, she could not ban you.” 楚戈想了想,先登上QQ大号,私聊“蓝色小药丸”:“熊猫头,一天天被禁言,想不想做管理啊,她就禁不了你了。” Pan Da great happiness: „Big Chu you are my forever light!” 潘达大喜:“楚大你就是我永远的光！” „en, mainly I thought that your online time is very long......” “嗯,主要我看你在线时间很长……” „Right, I soak in online! This broken group I stared certainly to you, who dared tells dirty jokes to look that I did not pat him!” “对对,我泡在网上的！这破群我一定给你盯好了,谁敢开车看我不拍死他！” „It is not this , helping me and a mother has to do, that side slacks off on the job is very annoying.” “不是这个,帮我和点娘打交道吧,那边磨洋工的很烦人。” „Does not have the issue!” “没问题！” Little Blue Pill is promoted as the manager. 蓝色小药丸被提升为管理员。 Qiu Wuji private chatted: „They were too exasperating, my portrait more than ten days, just now drawing discusses the group, but must fill out what broken watch.” 秋无际私聊:“他们太气人了,我的头像都十几天了,才刚拉讨论组,还要填什么破表。” Little Blue Pill: „Sect Leader Qiu felt relieved, wraps on me!” 蓝色小药丸:“秋宗主放心,包在我身上！” Qiu Wuji invited Little Blue Pill to join the discussion group: „《Chu Tian Wuji》 character card discussion group”. 秋无际邀请蓝色小药丸加入讨论组:“《楚天无际》角色卡牌讨论组”。 „Every man has his master.” Chu Ge turns the head to smile to Qiu Wuji: „I can foresee our character card to be entire world most efficiency.” “一物降一物。”楚戈转头对秋无际笑:“我可以预见我们的角色卡牌会是全世界最效率的。” The Qiu Wuji mood became well, smiled: „Heart of really writing a book is dirty.” 秋无际的心情变得好了起来,笑眯眯的:“写书的果然心都脏。” „Hey, you now are also accurate writing a book.” “喂,你现在也是个准写书的。” The Qiu Wuji eyeball transferred the revolutions, the sound suddenly becomes has such several points of charming: „Master ~” 秋无际眼珠子转了转,声音忽然变得有那么几分妩媚:“师父~” The Chu Ge whole body hit to startle: „What's wrong?” 楚戈浑身打了个激灵:“怎么？” „I deliberately considered, a moment ago the master said somewhat truth, en, truth one after another very scary...... teaches a point to be good again?” “我寻思了一下,师父刚才说的还是有几分道理的,嗯,道理一套一套的很唬人……再教一点好不好？” The Chu Ge look is serious, speaks righteously: „If you hold the pillow to withstand/top that pig, I try reluctantly again.” 楚戈神色严肃,义正辞严:“如果你把那猪头抱枕顶着,我就勉强再试一下。” This husband outline must seize the chance to inspire! 这夫纲是一定要趁机振的！ „Does not teach not to teach!” Qiu Wuji changed the complexion, snort/hum turned around to leave: „Waits for this Eminence wrote, scares to death you!” “不教就不教！”秋无际变了脸色,哼了一声转身走人:“等本座写出来,吓死你！” Chu Ge gazes after her back to leave the room, the small heart and liver swings to the present has not returned to normal. 楚戈目送她的背影离开房间,小心肝荡到现在都没平复。 That a moment ago checked charming...... was really overwhelmed with emotion the eclipse bone. 刚才那一刹的妩媚……真的销魂蚀骨。 He remembers anything suddenly, pulls out the synopsis person to suppose the column cautiously, found „Qiu Wuji” column, mouse in a place that seems like the blank delimited, demonstrated that was hidden the word that as the white typeface, usually cannot see: „In flatters.” 他忽然想起什么,小心翼翼地拉出大纲人设栏,找到“秋无际”栏目,鼠标在一段看似空白的地方划了过去,显示出了被隐藏为白色字体、平时看不见的词:“内媚。”