Qiu Wujiwas madeven the peaceful roomto be explodedbyherquickly, but this a short timealsoreallyhad no wayagain a break the realmtime.秋无际气得连静室都快被她炸了,可她这一时半会还真没法再破界一次了。„Comes the person!”Amongsect mountain, is reverberatingfaintlyQiu Wuji’s enraged voice: „Givesmeto go tosectto hide away, takesBlack Tortoise Phosphorus CrystalandChaotic Space Shuttle, invitedHeaven and Earth Bewildered Return Grand Array!”
“来人!”宗门山间,隐隐回荡着秋无际饱含怒火的声音:“给我去宗门秘藏,取玄武磷晶、乱空之梭,请天地迷返大阵!”
The secteldersfrightened the faceto be white: „sect leader is your this mustcross the tribulation? This thisdoes not havewhen the time comes!”宗门长老们吓得脸都白了:“宗主您这这这是要渡劫?这这这没到时候啊!”Qiu Wujicutting tooth: „Whynot to havewhen the time comes, this Eminenceisto cross the tribulation!”秋无际切齿:“凭什么没到时候,本座就是要渡劫!”Isn'tascension?
不都是飞升吗?
The paradiseand do thatstrange square box characterstypingmagic treasureworld, have the difference?
仙界和那个奇怪的方格子打字法宝世界,有区别嘛?Qiu Wujiis preparingbreak the realmaggressively, that nightChu Gealsolost sleepnaturally.秋无际在紧锣密鼓筹划破界,这一夜楚戈也理所当然地失眠了。Alsodoes not knowQiu Wujinow„seeing through the truth”undercondition, does oneselfthisalsowriteshaveability that affectsherthought?
也不知道秋无际如今“勘破真实”的状态下,自己这写得还有没有影响她思维的能力?No mattercanaffect, sheshouldbe ableto discover?
不管能不能影响,她应该都会发现的吧?Thatissues,oneself felt turning onwhatPandora's Boxto be the same , isanxiousisexciting, alwaysfelt that Qiu Wujimustcome outto kill peopleshamefully and angrily, tosses aboutis unable to close the eyes.
那一句发布出去,自己都感觉在打开什么潘多拉魔盒一样,又是紧张又是刺激,总感觉秋无际要恼羞成怒地出来杀人,翻来覆去怎么也无法合眼。Casualnight windhas blown, was the feelingQiu Wujiappears, frightensto look at the past, anythingdid not have.
随便一阵夜风刮过,就感觉是不是秋无际出现,吓得一身冷汗看过去,什么都没有。Fortunatelyfortunately, should unable to come outmomentarily, thathas not wantedownlife!
还好还好,应该不是随时能出来,那还不要了亲命!Enduresaround 2 : 00 pm, reallycannot lie down, crawlsto continuewritingsimply.
熬到夜里 2 点多,实在躺不下去,索性爬起来继续码字。Thatchapterissueda moment agoanxiously, even the erroneous characterhas not inspected, forgottoZhang Qirensectionpush. Zhang Qiren12 : 00 pm wanted the on the shelf, boostedoneas the friendisshould, bestissueonechapterin the morningagain, canhelpZhang Qirenpushinsectionend.
刚才那章发布得急了,连错别字都没检查,更忘了给张奇人章推。张奇人今天中午12点就要上架了,作为朋友助推一把是很应该的,最好早上再发布一章,可以在章末帮张奇人推一下。
The resultturned on the computerstupidlyto sitfor quite a while, in the brainonegroup of starch, followingdo not know how completelyshouldwrite.
结果打开电脑傻坐了半天,脑子里一团浆糊,后续也完全不知道该怎么写了。Entiresynopsiscollapsed, but alsowrites a calf.
整个大纲都崩了,还写个犊子。
The Chu Gehesitantmoment, opened the book reviewarea. Does not dareto look,felt a female leadthoughtssuchrevolutionmustbe scolded, finallyopenslooks, is dumbfounded.楚戈犹豫片刻,打开了书评区。原先根本不敢看,感觉女主心思这么一转要被人骂死,结果打开一看,傻了眼。
The book reviewareais the high praiseis in the majority...... justthishigh praiseto makeChu Gelookunexpectedlysomewhatis uncomfortableon the contrary.
书评区居然是好评居多……只不过这种好评让楚戈看得反倒有些不是滋味。„Thiswas right! Qiu Wujisuchwoman, thinks a low leveldisciple, Ialsothink that the personsupposesmustcollapse, fortunately, waspulls backfortunately.”
“这就对了!秋无际那样的女人,想一个低级弟子,我还以为人设要崩,还好还好,算是拉回来了。”„Right, ourharemcannotopenis so quick, slowlyconquersis interesting.”
“没错,我们后宫也不能开那么快,慢慢征服才有味。”Chu Gereallycannot bearchange the trumpetto return: „To be how quick? Even if not transferthisfinally, the lightisthinks ofmain characterstilljustforupholsteryone, has not fallen in love, caret-shapeddid not haveoneto cast aside.”楚戈实在忍不住换小号回:“怎么就快了?就算最后不转这一笔,光是想到主角也只不过为了铺垫一下而已吧,又不是已经爱上了,八字都还没一撇呢吧。”„That said...... whosenamewrites the haremfamily background, such a wrotemakespeople feel quick, must always receivein any case.”
“话是这么说……谁叫作者是写后宫出身的,这么一写就让人感觉快成了,反正总是要收的。”„Right, was the feeling is too quick.”
“对,就是感觉太快了。”
The Chu Geair/Qidoes not hitone: „The matterdefault that has not hadhas happened thensaid that toomayreallyhavequicklyyour, ifdoesn't receive?”楚戈气不打一处来:“还没发生的事默认已经发生然后说太快可真有你们的,万一不收呢?”„Howpossibly, youhad not looked that on the authorthisbook...... canmake a betto receive?”
“怎么可能,你没看作者上本书吧……要不要打赌收不收?”Chu Ge: „......”楚戈:“……”
If before, Chu Gedoes not dareto hitthisgambling.
如果是以前,楚戈可不敢打这个赌。Naturallymustreceive......
原本当然要收啊……Butnow......
可现在……Heraised the headto thinkfor quite a while, suddenlylaughed in spite of trying not.
他抬头想了半天,忽然失笑。Suddenlyfelt,reallywroteQiu Wujiandmain characterdid not have the connection, perhapswas the good deedtobranch that probably...... thoughtanything.
忽然感觉,真写秋无际和主角没了瓜葛,说不定是好事才对……自己原先想的好像岔了点什么。Told the storyimportantlyshould notbe the suspensefeeling, making one unable to guess correctlyfollowing? Whatnowdoeseveryoneto tacitly approve to havebeforehand, evenhas loanedto receive, suspense where thatcomes?
讲故事最重要的难道不该是悬念感,让人猜不到后续的吗?如今搞得大家事先都已经默认要发生什么了,甚至都已经贷款收了,那又哪来的悬念呢?Main linestoryperhapsalsogood, at least insentimentalonlineisnothingsuspense, was only left over the process the anticipation, thisis not, is only unscientific, likelamefoot.
主线故事或许还行,至少在感情线上是没什么悬念的了,只剩下过程的看点,这也不是不可以,只是并不科学,如同瘸了一只脚似的。Qiu Wujidoes not makeaccording to any caseoriginalwrote, thatresetssynopsissimply, is separated fromeveryone'sspeculation, could not make upotherstories.
反正秋无际不让按原来的写了,那索性就此重设大纲,正好脱离所有人的猜测,又不是编不了其他故事了。
The most seriousconsequencealsothrows the street, hasto throw.
最严重的后果也不过是扑街,又不是没扑过。Intertwinedhalf the nightdepressedcompletelydisappears, Chu Gelaughed, returned totwocharacters: „Gambling.”
纠结了半宿的郁闷尽消,楚戈哈哈一笑,回了两个字:“赌了。”Said that does not wait for the opposite partyto reply, without consulting anybodywinding.
说完也不等对方回复,径自下线。
The gambling stakeisanything, is unimportant.
赌注是什么,并不重要。More importantly under went out of itselfto draw the jail.
重要的是走出了自己画下的牢。——went out ofthatskylikeQiu Wuji.——就像秋无际走出了那片天空一样。Chu Gehandled arrival and departuresinglesectionsimply: «change the synopsis, Asks for leave for Day, Traces to the originBookWhile convenient».楚戈索性直接发了个单章:《整理大纲,请假一天,顺便推本书》。Giving the commitment of Zhang Qirencompletes, the lasthindrancedisappeared, Chu Gerelaxesthoroughly, stretch/leisurelylived the physiqueto go out of the door.
把给张奇人的承诺完成,最后一点挂碍都消了,楚戈彻底放松下来,舒活着筋骨走出了房门。Next doordoorconfinement, lightfaintlyfromcrack in a doorthoroughly.
隔壁房门禁闭,灯光隐隐从门缝中透了出来。Zhang Qirenreallyalsoendureshas not restednow.张奇人果然也熬到现在还没睡。Chu Geunderstoodvery much...... the daytimewanted the on the shelf, pressureat this momentwonderfullygreatlyincomparable, was anxiously difficultto sleep to be too normal.楚戈很是理解……白天就要上架了,此刻的压力奇大无比,紧张难眠可太正常了。Let alonetheirwritersstayed up lateregularly, quiet at dead of nightoftenimmerseshas the inspiration, writingmidnightis very normalmatter.
何况他们写手本来就惯常熬夜,夜深人静往往更沉浸更有灵感,写到半夜是很正常的事情。Heknocks on a door: „Cango outto eat a thing?”
他敲了敲门:“要不要出去吃点东西?”Zhang Qirenstuffily said: „Justate the instant noodles...... you to come? Came to say,pokedoutsideto do.”张奇人闷声道:“刚吃了泡面……你要不要来点?诶,进来说,杵外面干嘛。”Chu Gethenpushes the doorto enter, saw that Zhang Qirenis talking nonsenseinQQ and person.楚戈便推门而入,一眼看到张奇人正在QQ和人扯淡。„Yourheartis actually big, Ithink that youinwriting, are pulling the fartfinally.”Chu Gewalked, swept the Zhang Qirenscreen, the chatframeisyounger sisterportrait, „does fuck have the thoughtsto pick up the little girlunexpectedly?”
“你倒是心大啊,我以为你在码字呢,结果在扯屁。”楚戈走了过去,扫了眼张奇人的屏幕,聊天框是个妹子头像,“卧槽居然还有心思泡妞?”Zhang Qirenindifferently said: „God knowsthisis the malefemale, lostseriously. The affablemood, the difficultnon-achievementto be in a dazeto the documents?”张奇人无所谓地道:“天知道这是男的女的,当真就输了。舒缓一下心情而已,难不成就对着文档发呆?”„Alsoyes.”Chu Gethenlooks at the Zhang Qirenaffablemood.
“也是。”楚戈便看着张奇人舒缓心情。Oppositeyounger sisterwas saying: „My motherpassed away.”
对面妹子正在说:“我妈妈去世了。”Zhang Shi Qiren (relying on force to bully others): „Wantedmeto accompanyyouin the past?”仗势欺人:“要不要我过去陪你?”„Ihave the boyfriend.”
“我有男朋友。”„Ihave mother.” The Zhang Qirentransmission, the blacklisted, forms a coherent whole.
“我有妈妈。”张奇人发送,拉黑,一气呵成。Chu Ge: „......”楚戈:“……”Zhang Qirenturns the head: „Do not visitmewiththatlook, Iknow that youonlywant the whitechicken...... is not only right, wantsto have a night-time snack. Boiled chicken sliceshow?”张奇人转头:“不要用那种眼神看着我,我知道你只想要只白鸡……哦不对,想吃夜宵。白斩鸡怎么样?”„The boiled chicken slices that thispointhas, eat the bowl of flatmeatto finish up.”Chu Gewalks out, says with a smile: „Hadn't youjust eaten the instant noodles?”
“这个点有个屁的白斩鸡,去吃碗扁肉完事。”楚戈往外走,笑道:“你不是刚吃过泡面?”Zhang Qirenhehesaid with a smile: „Youhave the concern, let alonehad just eaten the instant noodles, had just eaten18cagesteamed stuffed buns, Ialsoaccompanyyouto eatagain.”张奇人嘿嘿笑道:“你有心事,别说刚吃过泡面了,就是刚吃过十八笼包子,我也陪你再吃一点。”Chu Geis somewhat surprised: „Cannot look, do youalsomeetmind reading?”楚戈有些惊奇:“看不出来啊,你还会读心?”„Readsinglechapter of me who whatheart...... yousentto see, in the eveningwas in good condition, suddenlywantedchange the synopsis, was the followingmentalityhas problems? Thisduringknocksmydoor, whattonot chat the mentality can also be?”
“读什么心……你发的单章我看见了,傍晚还好端端的,忽然就要整理大纲,是后续思路出问题了?这当口敲我门,不是为了聊聊思路还能是什么?”RightChu Gewalks innaturally to chat the followingmentalitywith the writerfriend, asks the writerfriendaboutrentinginitialsignificanceforthis, howeverthisverypossibleis they gives the new bookopinionfor the six monthsmutually the firstimplementation.
没错楚戈找上门当然是为了和写手朋友谈谈后续思路,找写手朋友合租的初始意义就是为了这个,然而这很可能是他们半年来除了互相给个新书意见之外第一次实施。Zhang Qirenalsothinks ofthismatterprobably , is a little funny, copies the shoulder of Chu Geto walk: „Hadoneto break the friend who did not forgetto helpmysectionpush...... Ito feelthisaboutrenting the significancechattedanythingwritesis more vital.”张奇人好像也同时想到这事儿,不由也有点好笑,抄着楚戈的肩膀走着:“有了一个连断更都不忘帮我章推的朋友……我觉得这个合租的意义比什么聊写作更重要。”Chu Gealsofelt,hasalsoto wantmidnightto accompany itselfnear the on the shelfthoughtsto have a night-time snackfearfullyto chat the friend of mentality, thissignificanceismost vital.楚戈也觉得,有个临上架心思惶惶还愿意半夜陪自己吃宵夜聊思路的朋友,这意义才是最重要的。Two peoplearrived at the roadsidebooth outside community, did not eatflatmeat/flesh, put in order the pointto roast the skewer, wantedonebottle of beerrespectively.
两人到了小区外的路边摊,不吃扁肉了,整了点烤串,各自要了一瓶啤酒。„Wantedme saying that althoughmyvegetable/dish, butIthought that your bookalsoreallychanged the mentalitygood.”Zhang Qirenandhebumpedonecup, said with a smile: „Beforeussaid that sistersdual flightanything, wrotemeto lovelookright, but finally, Iremembered was also this. Nowthis, Ialsoonlywantto look when youoverthrewthatfemale sect leader, the plot of main characterstruggleIalljumped, whatyouwantedwasthis?”
“要我说啊,虽然我菜,但我觉得你这书还真是改改思路的好。”张奇人和他碰了一杯,笑道:“包括我们之前说姐妹双飞什么的,写了我爱看没错,但到了最后,我记得的也就是这个了。现在这本,我也只想看你什么时候推倒那个女宗主,主角奋斗的剧情我全跳了,你想要的是这个?”Chu Gelooks in the cup the hops: „Threw? Am Ipseudo-model?”楚戈看着杯中酒花:“扑了呢?我就是嫩模?”Zhang Qirenpurses the lips, the hearthas the intimacy.张奇人抿了抿嘴,心有戚戚。Chattedorallyeasily, not popularIwaspseudo-model.
口头说笑容易,不火我就是嫩模。Howeverhow manyday and nightsuffering, a daysitincomputerfrontmore than tenhours, the cervical syndrometenosynovitissciatica, boils a problem, whois willingto look that ends up a pitifuldatanobody will ask?
然而多少个日夜煎熬,一天坐在电脑面前十几个小时,颈椎病腱鞘炎坐骨神经痛,熬得一身毛病,谁又愿意看着落得个可怜巴巴的数据无人问津?HisZhang Qirenis not the samethoughtsis fearfulnear the on the shelf, whocanbe so free and easy? Let aloneChu Gethishas seen with own eyes the trend that startsto rise, gives up?
他张奇人临上架还不是一样心思惶惶,谁能那么洒脱?何况楚戈这样已经眼见开始上升的趋势,舍得吗?He can only respondreluctantly: „Youlook atme, throws the dognot to look,has not insistedwithoutfemale lead.”
他只能勉强回应:“你看我,扑得狗都不看,还不是坚持无女主。”Chu Gelooked athisoneeyes.楚戈看了他一眼。ActuallyChu Geknows,Zhang Qirenthistimereallycannot throw.
其实楚戈知道,张奇人这次真扑不起了。
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