Chu Gethinks that may the picturesquescenery, realizetruly.楚戈认为可入画的风景,真正在实现着。Hesitsin the roomwriting, Qiu Wujisitsin the living roomwith concentrationreadspeacefully.
他坐在屋里潜心码字,秋无际坐在客厅安静地看书。
The keyboardhas the rhythmknocking, the rustling sound that the pagechanges, interwoveBGM in picture, the afternoon of summerseemedsopeaceful.
键盘有节奏的敲击声,书页翻动的沙沙声,交织成了画中的BGM,夏日的午后显得如此安宁。OccasionallyChu Gewill set outto go outpours waterto drink the ——drinking fountainin the living room. With the Qiu Wujivisionrelative, two peoplealsorespectiverevolutions, saidsomedestructionideal conditionsvery muchcalmlyprobablymuch.
偶尔楚戈会起身出门倒水喝——饮水机在客厅。和秋无际目光相对,两人又都很平静地各自转开,好像多说一句都有些破坏意境。Qiu Wujilooked that heboils water the appearance that makes tea, occasionallyin the heartalsoflashes through the thought that should the presentishein the practical training, oneselfidle, helphimadd the waterto pour teaandenablehimto writesafelyquitereasonably? At oncethis„reasonable” the thoughtcast offbyoneselfquickly, whatthiscalled, the young housemaidor did the red sleeveadd the fragrance?秋无际看他烧水泡茶的样子,偶尔心中也闪过念头,现在是他在劳作,自己无所事事,是不是该帮他添水倒茶、让他可以安心写作比较合理?旋即这“合理”的念头很快就被自己甩开,这叫什么啊,小丫鬟还是红袖添香?Howthisdoes not bravecompletelyabout the idea of oneselfpersonality, isthis foolin„haspatch”secretly?
这完全不合自己性情的想法是怎么冒出来的,是不是这货又偷偷在“打补丁”?Chu Gehas not really had the patch, becausethisissupposed.楚戈还真没打过补丁,因为这是原设。
When the bystandereyesonegeneration of powerhouses of the world, removed the military garbhomevertically and horizontally/able to move unhindered, is a good wife and loving mother. Howorto sayis the perfectwoman in fantasy...... in the book the plothas not just arrived atherto exposethissideby far the time, howeverin the realityallowedherto enter the lifeatmosphereaccidentally/surprisinglyahead of time.
外人眼中纵横天下的一代强者,褪去了戎装居家之时,就是一个贤妻良母。要不怎么说是幻想中的完美女人呢……只不过书中剧情远远还没到她展露这一面的时候,然而现实之中却意外地提前让她进入了生活氛围。ToChu Gethatsentiment, the thoughthas not then only flashed pastpitifully is pinched.
很可惜对楚戈没那感情,念头便只一闪而过就被掐了。Qiu Wujicontinuesto investin that Tales from 5,000 Years of Chinese Historyvastsea, Chu Gethat sidementalityis also getting more and more smooth.秋无际继续投入在那上下五千年的浩瀚海洋之中,楚戈那边的思路也越来越顺畅。
The later wordhas set the melodyin any case, wrote, Chu Gesimplywas simpler a point, makingChu Tiangefeel the truth of rougeskeletongradually, moved towardroad of the intentthis solitary onecoldcultivation.
反正后文已经定下了调子,就是那么写了,楚戈索性更干脆了一点,让楚天歌渐渐感受到红粉骷髅的道理,走向了一意孤寒的修行之路。Trueno female lead.
真正的无女主之路。Speculated in the stock marketto give up, did not gather the Chu Getemper, feltirritable.
炒股放弃了,不合楚戈的性子,觉得别扭。To be honest, justtransferrednofemale leadarticle, is not quite convenient, becauseis accustomed to the actor's pay that writes the men and womento happen together, onceconcentrates on the main characterindividualstoryis not familiar withvery much. Butis in fact betterto write, the thing that becauseneedsto worrytails off.
老实说,刚转无女主文,不太顺手,因为惯于写男女交集的戏份,一旦专注在主角个人故事里很不习惯。但实际上更好写一点,因为需要顾虑的东西变少。For examplegoes outtravels, onedoes not needto consider that the female leadgodhiddenactor's payissue, twodo not needto considerto offendenemy'sinvolvementissue, threedo not needto consider that characterization, is really swaysas boundless as the heavens and seawillfully. Naturally if not good atdesigning the plot, will appearfrailbored, will beno onecanwrite, will be a challenge.
比如出门游历,一不需要考虑女主神隐的戏份问题,二不需要考虑得罪仇家的牵连问题,三不需要考虑人物塑造了,真是天高海阔恣意挥洒。当然如果不擅长设计剧情的话,会显得单薄无聊,也不是谁都能写好的,算是个挑战。
Before Chu Ge, has not attemptedwell, thistried, slowlywas used to feel likealsogood...... Zhang Qirenthattype of himto lookafter alloften,was not strange, on handbold handwriting vigorous style, imitatedZhang Qirenthatwrap/setsto write, probably can also write.楚戈以前也没好好尝试过,这回试了下去,慢慢习惯了觉得好像也还行……毕竟张奇人那种类型他经常在看,并不陌生,手头笔力在,就仿张奇人那套去写,好像也能写。Chu Gelooksoneselflook like the Zhang Qirentastemore and more, suddenlyis thinking, ifsuchportraitcan the fire, besomesignificancecost-effectiveisZhang Qirenrectifies names?楚戈看着自己越来越像张奇人的味儿,忽然在想,如果这么写真能火起来,是不是某种意义上算为张奇人正名了?
The newchapteris completed, preserves, issue.
新一章完成,保存,发布。
The book reviewareawas more peaceful than before, the disappointedpersonhas abandoned, the newpersondid not havemany, seemedsomewhatlonely. Brushed a backstage, the new regulationspursuedsubscribe the dataalsoto slide, butunexpectedly the Chu Geestimatewas better.
书评区比之前安静,失望的人已经弃了,新来的人还没多少,显得有些冷清。刷了一下后台,新章追订数据也下滑了,但居然比楚戈预计的好很多。Thisthinks that the minimumrunninghalf, were short about 1/10finally. Perhapsis partially being waited and seen, partiallyisno matteryouwritewhattypeanythingfemale lead, so long as the storycanIlook.
本以为起码跑一半呢,结果也就少了十分之一左右。也许部分是尚在观望中,部分是不管你写什么类型什么女主不女主的,只要故事可以我就看。
Such a wants is also right, actuallyfell1/10isin the normal conditioncannotwithstandwas heavy, butanticipatedis too low, appearedgoodason the contrary. In the Chu Geheartis very calm, leaves a seatto go outto look atQiu Wuji.
这么一想也对,其实掉了十分之一已经是正常情况下不可承受之重了,只是自己预期太低,反倒显得不错似的。楚戈心中很是淡定,离座出门去看秋无际。Qiu Wujion the sofa, in the kitchendoes not transmit the stir-fried dish the sound and mealis fragrant. The Chu Geprobe headlooked, for a whilesomedelay.秋无际已经不在沙发上了,厨房里传来炒菜的声音和饭菜香。楚戈探头看了一下,一时有些呆滞。Qiu Wujistandstherecontinuesto read, the presentwokautomaticin the stir-fried dish, sidealsohas a block, a kitchen knifeis cutting the vegetable/dishautomatically.秋无际就站在那里继续看书,眼前的炒锅自动在炒菜,旁边还有个砧板,一把菜刀在自动切菜。Had a look in the pot the vegetable/dishto fry, Qiu Wujihit a soundto refer , the vegetable/dish in potflewin the trayautomatically, suspendedneatly.
看看锅中菜炒好了,秋无际打个响指,锅中的菜就自动飞到盘子里,摆得整整齐齐。Thencontinuesto read: „What's wrong, hasn't seen the immortal techniquestir-fried dish?”
然后继续低头看书:“怎么,没见过仙术炒菜?”„Myanythinghas not seen...... thismereallynot to see.”Chu Gedoes not know whether to laugh or cry: „Howsimplydirectlydoesn't becomeripe?”
“我什么没见过……这我真没见过。”楚戈哭笑不得:“怎么不索性直接变熟呢?”Qiu Wujithinksabout the book: „Fewfeelings. Thisselectsexactlyfine, I must eat.”秋无际合书想了想:“少点感觉。这活还是精细点好,我也要吃的。”Chu Gespeechless.楚戈哑然。Today'semaciated lookis very simple, on the spareribscabbage and scrambled eggs, Chu Gedoes not know that whichmealsQiu Wujiwill make, Qiu Wujidid not knowaboutmodernmanyfood, in the casualsupermarketbought a point.
今天的菜色很简单,也就排骨白菜和炒蛋,楚戈并不知道秋无际会做哪些菜,秋无际对现代很多食物也不了解,就随便超市里买了一点。Finallyon the meal the table, Chu Gealmosteats the tonguenot to swallow down.
结果饭菜上桌,楚戈吃得舌头都差点没吞下去。Toodelicious...... is thiscabbageIimagines the cabbage?
太好吃了……这白菜还是我想象中的白菜吗?What does immortalcontrol the level of fire controlthingto be usedto make the world of mortalsfoodisexperiences?仙家控火控物的水准用来做凡间食物是什么体验?
The experiencewasoutside the thing of innturned into the pig feedinstantaneously.
体验就是外面馆子的东西瞬间变成了猪食。Qiu Wujialsoeatsmiles: „Imake the master chefalsoenergyto make moneyright.”秋无际自己也吃得笑眯眯的:“我去做大厨也能赚钱对吧。”„Right.”Chu GefeltQiu Wuji, ifhas a status, thatisno mattermakesanything to gaingreatlygainsespecially, existence of immortal cultivationisBUG.
“对。”楚戈觉得秋无际如果有个身份,那是不管做什么都能大赚特赚,修仙的存在本来就是个BUG。Hesighed: „Iaskedmanypeople, feltyoudo the status is quite truly difficultlike this.”
他叹了口气道:“我问了不少人,感觉你这样搞身份确实比较困难。”Qiu Wujiis expected: „Naturally, tradinginmysectemitted a new face saying that suddenlyisourdisciples, no one believes that becauseis not.”秋无际似是早有所料:“当然,换了我宗门里忽然冒出一个生面孔说是我们的弟子,也没人信的,因为本来就不是。”„Ilooked the operation that othersdevisestays behind the lifetracegradually, eveninothercityconstructionspeciousexistencerecords.”
“我看别人构想的操作是逐步留下生活痕迹,甚至在其他城市构建一点似是而非的存在记录。”„en, the conceptionis very reasonable.”Qiu Wujismiles: „ButIam not really willingto intertwineto rush aboutin a status, yousaidruns the borderto go to the place of chaos caused by waralsoto suitmyintention. Ifin any casethismatterdifficultoffice, not to manage, Icurrentlydo not have the thingto arrive at the house rent......, whenunderstood that thisworldsituation, Iwent out.”
“嗯,构想很合理。”秋无际笑笑:“但我真不太愿意纠结在一个身份里奔忙,你说的跑出国境去战乱之地还更合我心意。反正如果这事难办,就不办了吧,我现在不是有东西抵房租了么……等到更了解此世情况,我就出去了。”Knows.
就知道。Chu Geeatsreluctantly: „How many did booklook at? Has the unreadableplaceto needto introduce?”楚戈无奈地扒饭:“书看了多少?有难以理解的地方需要介绍么?”„Temporarilywithout...... the ancient times of thisworld, hasmanysimilaritieswith the book that youwrite, youalsomeltedusedmanylegends, for examplefourare...... substitutescompared with the presentenvironmentlikelyin my opinion, but also was very interesting.”Qiu Wujiwas saying to be saying, somelookbut actuallypalpitations: „Ialwaysfelt, your worldshouldhave the spiritual energy......”
“暂时没有……这个世界的古时,和你写的书有很多相似之处,你还化用了很多神话传说,比如四象就是……在我看来比现在的环境更为代入,还挺有趣的。”秋无际说着说着,神色倒有些怔忡:“我总觉得,你们这个世界本来应该是有灵气的……”Chu Gesaid: „Somemanybookshavethiskind of setting. For example the daypassedcertainlylaterdissipated, after for examplecut the dragon vein, dissipated, wait/etc.”楚戈道:“有很多书都有这类设定。比如绝地天通之后消散了,比如斩龙脉之后消散了,等等。”Qiu Wujishakes the head: „Said that is the radicaldissipation, poursis also insufficient, there arequitethin...... other......”秋无际摇摇头:“说是彻底消散,倒也不至于,还是有比较稀薄的……另外……”She, somescrupletunnels: „Does not knowis the misconception, Ifeltspiritual energy that thistimefeelscompared withprevioustimericher a faint trace. Thisquantityis extremely thin, Iam unable to confirm.”
她顿了顿,有些迟疑地道:“不知道是不是错觉,我觉得这次过来感觉到的灵气比上次更浓郁了一丝丝。这量太过稀薄,我无法确认。”Chu Geraised the head, in the eyesomewhatis also serious.楚戈抬起头,眼里也有些严肃。
Did thiscall...... the spiritual energyrecovery?
这叫……灵气复苏?
Can thisbe she reason that runsfrom the book?
这会是她从书里跑出来的原因么?If yes, perhaps the specialcondition in thatthisworld , to continue.
如果是,那这世界的特殊状况,或许不止自己一个。————————PS: Sorry the renewal, transitedlate a chapter, because ofsomepuzzles.
PS:很抱歉更新晚了,过渡一章吧,因为有些困扰。Somepeopledislike the post of mybook reviewnot to haveexplicitcutting, nowIexplain the white spot: The laserbottleis notJicross/crotch, toreadwelcome, forJiChalaitreatedon the inaction period. Ifresulted in the undulycurrent capacityIto be sorryvery much, forJicross/crotchcollectioncan the bottom carriage, be mistakeniscancontact withme who Jicross/crotchhitto enjoyto refund money.
有人嫌我书评的帖子还是没明确切割,现在我说明白点:镭射瓶不是姬叉,为了看书来的欢迎,为了姬叉来的就不用期待了。如果多得了不应有的流量我很抱歉,为了姬叉而收藏的可以下架,误以为是姬叉而打赏的可以联系我退款。Whywasn't explicitpreviously? Becauseis easyto offend the person. Looked that thisdoesn't queer?
为什么此前不明确?因为容易得罪人啊。看这段得罪人不?Said that anythingiswrong.
说什么都是错。ReadersI who the good intentionsguessedunderstood,was truly a bit like.
善意猜测的读者们我理解,确实有点像。Butcanthink, thiswind direction, ifIam notJicross/crotch, will seewill spit blood, becausewill not have the authorto be willingto be regardedisothers, will not wanteveryoneto come up the explanationplottowardothers'writingsignificance, thiswill bemyplot, based onmysignificance. Reallymustsay the storystyle, Iimitated in 1000 of prostitute more.
但能不能想想,这种风向,如果我不是姬叉,看到会吐血,因为没有作者愿意被当成是别人,更不愿意人人都往别人的写作意义上去解读剧情,这是我的剧情,基于我的意义。真要说故事风格,我仿花姐的一千年还更多一点。IfIamJicross/crotch, saw that will also spit blood, becausebesideshavingblackhistory, does the normal personchange the trumpetforwhat? Tolet the personcontinuedXXyoumustcontinueto write, XX to write, XX unable to write, areXXunderstood at a glance, isXXwill not writeon a star?
而如果我是姬叉,看到也会吐血,因为除了有黑历史之外,正常人换小号是为了什么啊?是为了让人继续说XX你要继续这么写、XX必须那么写、XX不能这么写、是XX一看就知道会怎样、是XX不那么写就一星的吗?
Does thattradeto trade?
那换个屁啊换?Isaidforhim, trades the numberratherto give up the current capacityalsobeing probableto work loosesuchsituation, canwritething in the heartunrestrained, hidessignificancemost12tenths of reporting. Butto me, does not welcomethissituation, even ifIthrewto take offto go homewithZhang Qirensamenot to welcome, becauseIalsowanted the unrestrainedwritingthing.
我替他说了,换号就是宁愿放弃流量也要挣脱这样的情况,可以无拘无束写自己心中的东西,躲举报的意义最多一两成。而对于我来说,同样不欢迎这情况,即使我扑死了跟张奇人一样卷铺盖回家了也不欢迎,因为我也想要无拘无束的写东西。Iamthrow the streetsmall-sizedlaserbottle, the requestto the big shotIcannot undertake, variousrequestsgood that do not anticipate.
我就是个扑街小号镭射瓶,对大佬的要求我更承担不起,各种各样要求的还是别期待的好。As for the individualevil intentions, whatboth sleeping around whilst also wanting to get married, did Iaskyouto comefor example? Letyourolliswhenorstands? Funny.
至于个别恶意的,比如说什么又当又立的,我求你来了?让你滚算是当还是立?搞笑。Ok, offends, no wonder, hopes that everyone'sattentionlies in the work.
好了,得罪莫怪,希望大家的关注在于作品本身。Thanks.
谢谢。
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