Lookedto scatter the clothing...... actually the feeling of baseonsofa.
看了看散落在沙发上的衣物……其实挺靡靡的感觉。
The appealunderpants, the blacklongtubesilk stockings...... scattercasually there, the primary tasteis coming.
情趣内衣裤,黑色长筒丝袜……就那么随便散落在那里,还是原味来着。Ifsawsomewhatto be perhaps capriciousbefore, but the Chu Gereallycompletethoughtsdo not haveat this moment, tidied upto throw into the washersilently. Presses the washerswitch, listening the sound that the machineis rotating, Chu Geto standlost the period of time, finallyshook the head, enteredroomwriting.
要是以前看见说不定会有些心猿意马,但此时此刻楚戈真的完全一点心思都没有,默默地收拾起来丢进了洗衣机。摁下洗衣机开关,听着机器转动的声音,楚戈出神地站了好一阵子,终于摇摇头,进了房间码字。Buthas thought very muchcompletetranscriptcontentobviouslybeforehand, beforewritingsuch asflew, squatted over the latrine pitcontinuallycan the code, thisactuallysuppressed the half-daydetentionto be incomparable, howto be hardinto the play.
可明明事先已经想得很完整的副本内容,之前码字如飞,连蹲坑都可以码的,这回却憋了半天滞涩无比,怎么都难以入戏。Writes about„Qiu Wuji” the name, thatfrown and smileappearrapidlyin the heart, the spot that suffersherto punchalsopains.
一写到“秋无际”的名字,那一颦一笑就迅速浮现在心底,就连挨她揍的部位都还隐隐作痛。Thiswas a realperson, was notfictionalizingcharacter that whateverswayed.
这是一个真实的人了,不是任由自己挥洒的虚构角色。Will hesitate then, how manynowwritessome of heralsoto affect?
然后就会犹豫,现在写她到底还有多少影响?For example, evencut off happening together of Qiu WujiandChu Tiange, butdialogue between normalsect leader and sect memberandindicatedmust, otherwisemain characterentered the sectsignificancenot to have. ThenwritesQiu Wujito directChu Tiangenow, Qiu Wujicanjudge that isshewantsto teachmeto write? Ifdetected that isIwrites, sheis also willingto teach?
比如说,即使斩断了秋无际与楚天歌的交集,但正常的宗主与门人之间的对话和点拨还是必须的,不然主角进宗门的意义都没了。那么现在写秋无际指点楚天歌,秋无际是否能判断那是她自己想教还是我写的?如果察觉是我写的,她还肯不肯教?
The thoughtsare chaotic, is really difficultto write. Was goodis truly simplebecause ofthisplot, suppressesfor quite a whileto suppress2000charactersto come outactually, Chu Gealsonotcarefulcultivating, the publication, was completedin a hurry for daytwochapters of conventionalduties.
心思纷乱,实在难写。好在这段剧情确实简单,憋了半天硬是憋了两千字出来,楚戈也无心细修,匆匆发表,完成了一天两章的常规任务。Thiscould be said asthisbookfrom the openingtoonechapter that the presentwritesmosthas not felt, does not knowoneselfare writingwhatbird. Chu Gedoes not dareto look at the commentary, hesitantmoment, opened the groupto chat.
这可以说是这本书从开局到现在写得最没感觉的一章了,都不知道自己在写个什么鸟。楚戈也不敢去看评论,犹豫片刻,还是打开了群聊。Usuallywas all rightpeeps the screenbook friend grouptwodaysnot to opennow, oneselffeltnotlikely the person of writing a book.
平时没事就窥屏的书友群如今两天没打开过了,自己都感觉是不是不像个写书的人了。Openslooked, the groupfriendis criticizing the new regulations, the reason of criticismis very unified, as follows:
打开一看,群友正在批评新章,批评的理由十分统一,如下:„Is incapableshort.”
“短小无力。”„Is incapableshort.”
“短小无力。”„Thenhow manypages? Did Isquat over the latrine piteven the pantsnot to escapeto look?”
“这才几页?我蹲坑连裤子都没脱完就看完了?”Chu Ge: „...... The two dayscultivated/repairedsynopsis, firstmade to put up withsuddenly.”楚戈:“……这两天修大纲,先将就一下哈。”„Well did Big Chucome? When does Qiu Wujipush?”
“咦楚大来了啊?秋无际什么时候推啊?”„hurry uphurry up......”
“GKDGKD……”„WordssaidBig Chu, thesetwochaptersmorewroteare better!”
“话说楚大,这两章越写越好了啊!”Chu Ge: „?”楚戈:“?”
Did youdetermine? Iobviouslywas blindchirp the tyrantto deal withonechapter. The previouschapteralsohasless than halfissquats over the latrine pitto write, hasflavoronechapter.
你们确定?我明明瞎叽霸应付了一章啊。上一章还有小半是蹲坑写的,带味道的一章。Hashumanity: „Thought that thesetwochapters of Big Chuwroteexquisitely, a Qiu Wujislightexpressiondid not let off, was right, the clothingdetailalsoadded the words, thisbeforehandBig Chudid not excel? Feels likewritesto the person is the same.”
有人道:“觉得这两章楚大写得更细腻了,秋无际一个细微的表情都不放过,哦对了,服装细节也加了笔墨,这以前楚大不擅长的吧?感觉好像对着人写的一样。”„YesBig Chuprogress.”
“是啊楚大进步了。”
The hand of Chu Gehangson the keyboard, goodlong timeto receive, held up the mouseto sendtwoblackcharts.楚戈的手悬在键盘上,顿了好半晌又收了回去,举起鼠标发了张二次元色图。
The groupchattedinstantaneouscrooked the building: „Did thisalsocall the colorchart? Isend a balloonto comparethiscolor.”
群聊瞬间歪了楼:“这也叫色图?我发张气球都比这色。”In the groupstarts the dazzlingcrazyhair colorchart, the discussionis flungbeyond the highest heavensaboutChu Geprogresseddirectly.
群里开始琳琅满目的狂发色图,关于楚戈是不是进步了的讨论直接被甩到了九霄云外。
The evil intentioninitiatesChu Ge of crookedbuilding by the chairback, somewhatlooks at the crowdto chat the discussionlost, alwaysfeltsomewhatpulls outtodistance. As ifplacesin the livelyreception room, obviouslya babel of voices, ifactuallyseparates the worldto be the same.
恶意引发歪楼的楚戈靠在椅背上,有些出神地看着群聊讨论,总感觉有些抽离的悠远。仿佛身处热闹的花厅之中,明明人声鼎沸,却如隔世一般。............
…………world in the book.书中世界。Qiu Wujiopens the eyefrom the secret room, the surroundingsare also protectingall roundforpreviously„crossedtribulation”, but the strategyandtreasure under preparing. The unusual brightnessis radiant, the spiritual energycirculation, formed the extremelysharpstrikingcontrastwithChu Gethatordinaryrental housefor a while.秋无际从密室中睁开眼睛,周围还团团防护着此前为了“渡劫”而备下的阵法与宝物。宝光璀璨,灵气流转,一时和楚戈那平凡的租屋形成了极其鲜明强烈的对比。Separated the world......
隔世了啊……Qiu Wujilowers the headto have a look at itselfon, isthatdignifiedsect leaderdaoist robe. Thatwrap/setsanything that justput on, just likemadedream.秋无际低头看看自己身上,还是那身庄严的宗主法衣。刚刚穿的那套什么,犹如做了一场梦似的。almost as if it was a dream.一梦如是。Sheimplored the tone, the longbody, left the secret room.
她吁了口气,长身而起,离开了密室。„sect leader did yougo out?”Outsidedefends the coredisciple, the respectis saluting: „Elder Zhoucame and announced, saidjust nowreceives the message, insouthwest10,000 liMyriad Snake Denpossiblyhas the Azure Dragonto shed the scale, said that issect leadergoes outreportsimmediately.”
“宗主您出关了?”外面守着核心弟子,尊敬行礼:“适才周长老来报,说收到消息,西南万里的万蛇窟中可能有青龙蜕鳞,说是宗主一出关就立马禀告。”Qiu Wujismiled: „Knew.”秋无际笑了起来:“知道了。”Hereis„Qiu Wujifaintly said”, Qiu Wujislightlydoes not curl the lipobviously.
这里本来是“秋无际淡淡道”的,秋无际微不可见地撇了撇嘴。
The discipleslook that for a whileis somewhat out of sorts.
弟子看着一时有些失神。sect leadersmilesvery muchrarely, thissmilesattractivelyreally......宗主很难得笑,这笑起来真的好看啊……Qiu Wujiraised the headto have a look atmoon above heaven, strolls in the moonlightto go: „Makesthemcome the meeting hallset.”秋无际抬头看看天上的月,踏月而去:“让他们来议事厅集合。”
The disciplesreceived an order, just before leavingwonderedto look at the appearance that spaceQiu Wujideparted.
弟子领命去了,临走时纳闷地看了看天上秋无际离去的样子。
Does the sect leaderflightpressclothessleeveto do?宗主飞行摁着衣袂干什么?„Azure Dragonshed the matter of scale, this Eminenceknows.”In the meeting hall, Qiu Wujisaidto the elders: „Thisthingthis Eminencewins, mustgo toonepersonally. In additionMyriad Snake Denhas the mystery, the outer layerquitesuitabledisciplestrial, sincewent, shouldleadsomehangers-onto go, orhas the affinity.”
“青龙蜕鳞之事,本座知道了。”议事厅里,秋无际对长老们道:“此物本座志在必得,是必须亲自去一趟的。此外万蛇窟多有玄妙,外层颇为适合弟子们试炼,既然去了,理应带些门下前往,或有缘法。”Thenhas the elder saying: „Iand othersscreenedsomedisciples......”
便有长老道:“那我等去筛选一些弟子……”„Is this matterChu Tiangein the clue of southern bordercounty fairdiscovery?”Qiu Wujisaid: „Thisdisciplehas the destiny, mustbring...... this Eminencealsoto givesomedirectionsandrewardingadditionally, treats as the reward of thisnews, shouted that hecomes.”
“此事是楚天歌在南疆市集发现的线索吧?”秋无际道:“这弟子有气运,应当带着……本座也会额外给予一些指点与赏赐,当作这个消息的奖励,去喊他来。”
The elderslook at each other in blank dismay. Youjustwent out, howto know that is the clue of thatChu Tiangediscovery?
长老们面面相觑。您刚出关,怎么知道是那个楚天歌发现的线索?Is it possible thatsect leader can divinationbe inthisdegree? Butsect leaderseemed likedoesn’t cultivate divination, thiswaseven moreimmeasurably deep......
莫非宗主的卜算之能已经到了这种程度?可宗主本来似乎不修卜算的,这是越发深不可测了啊……Chu Tiangewas shouted, enters the meeting hall that the big shotsurroundscarefully, respectablegood a ritual: „Has seensect leader.”楚天歌被喊了过来,小心地进入大佬环绕的议事厅,尊敬地行了一礼:“见过宗主。”Salutingtime, inhisheartsomestrangefeelings.
行礼的时候,他心中有些怪异感。Alwaysthought that sect leaderstares in ownvisionto have...... murderous aura.
总觉得宗主盯着自己的目光里有……杀气。Possiblyis the misconception, sect leaderin good conditionwantsto kill itselfto do? Ifreallywantsto kill, thatdirectlevelwaits for deathis, has nothingto think. en, the sect leaderlookhas turnedfunnily, it seems liketestsowndisposition.
可能是错觉,宗主好端端的想杀自己干嘛?要是真想杀,那直接躺平等死就是,也没什么好想的。嗯,宗主的神色已经变成好笑了,看来只是测试自己的心性。
The Qiu Wujivisionhas truly turnedfrom the murderous intentionwantsto smile.秋无际的目光确实已经从杀机变成了想笑。Shediscovered that thisChu TiangeandChu Gea littleare longlook like, naturallyis a bit like, thatisChu Geownprojection, substitutes itselfmain characterto write. Hisdescriptionis impossiblecompletelyaccording toowntemplate, for examplehe himselfis very handsome, butmustwrite an average personto makemain character, thisChu Tiangealso can only write„appearanceto be ordinary, but the sunlightis firm and resolute”.
她发现这个楚天歌和楚戈长得有点像,当然有点像,那本来是楚戈自己的投影,把自己代入主角来写的。只是他的描写不可能完全按自己的模板,比如他自己挺英俊的,但要写一个普通人做主角,这个楚天歌也就只能写得“样貌平凡,但阳光坚毅”。MoreoverChu Tiange„youngster”, Chu Ge27-28. Thisforeheadis the Chu Getemplate, looksseems likehistrumpetsimply, orson?
而且楚天歌还是“少年”,楚戈都27-28了。这眉宇又是楚戈模板,看上去简直像是他小号似的,或者说儿子?Was, hecreated, „Father God”, wasn't that his son? Thinks ofthis, the Qiu Wujiinnermost feelingsis overjoyed. Strict, is Chu Ge„son”snatching the womanwithoneselfnow?
是了,他创造的嘛,“父神”嘛,那可不就是他儿子?想到这个,秋无际内心乐不可支。严格来说,楚戈现在是不是在和自己“儿子”抢女人?Thiscognitionmadeherbe pulled the red string the depressedfeelingnot to haverandomly, becamewantsto smile.
这个认知让她连被乱牵红线的郁闷感都没了,变得很想笑。Simultaneouslyalsosomesympathies.
同时还有些同情。Youthink that isyoufightsdiligently?
你以为是你一路努力打拼的?Is the personwrites......
都是人写的……Qiu Wujiright handon the chairarm rest, leansto arrive at the foreheadlazily: „DiscoversAzure Dragon shedding scales, tomy sectgreat meritone, Chu Tiange, whatyouwantsthis Eminenceto reward?”秋无际右手支在椅子扶手上,懒洋洋地斜倚抵着额头:“发现青龙蜕鳞的线索,对本宗大功一件,楚天歌,你要本座奖励什么?”Chu Tiangehurriedly said: „Does not dare, thisis the discipleshoulddo.”楚天歌忙道:“不敢,这是弟子该做的。”Qiu Wujisaidreluctantly: „Bestowsyouto enterScripture Towerthird floorto comprehend for seven days, canselecta profound gradecultivation technique.”秋无际懒懒道:“赐你进入藏经楼第三层参悟七日,可以任选一门玄级功法。”
The elderssomewhatchange countenance, thisrewardsreallyhigh, by the Chu Tiangerank, canentersecond floorScripture Towerto be good, rewardingcultivation techniqueapproximately is also yellowlevel, thisondirectthird floor, profound gradecultivation technique......
长老们都有些动容,这个赏赐真高,以楚天歌的级别,能进第二层藏经楼就不错了,赏赐功法大致也是黄级,这直接上了三层,玄级功法……
Is sect leadersuddenlysonatural?宗主怎么忽然这么大方?Qiu Wujicurls the lipsecretly, is difficultto be inadequatealsowantsthis Eminenceto teachpersonally? Paid off a debt in kindfinished up.秋无际暗自撇了撇嘴,难不成还要本座亲自教导?折抵一些完事。Right, whathewritesissecond floor, whatsuch will onehaveto change? Pouring to observeone or two.
对了,他写的是二层,这么一来会有什么变化?倒可以观察一二。„In addition......”Qiu Wujithinks: „abstained from foodis right? Todaytold that the mess halladdsbeef noodlestohim, encourages. This, everyonegoes backto prepare, after sevendays, proceeds towardMyriad Snake Den.”
“此外……”秋无际想了想:“楚天歌尚未辟谷对吧?今日吩咐膳堂给他加一份牛肉面,以资鼓励。就这样吧,大家都回去准备一下,七日之后前赴万蛇窟。”Elders: „?”
长老们:“?”Chu Tiange: „???”楚天歌:“???”
The Qiu Wujicorners of the mouthshow a happy expressionagain.秋无际嘴角再度露出一丝笑意。Mediocre.
不过如此。
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