Shot a look at Eriri, the say/way that Kasumigaoka Utaha thinks otherwise: „Her person supposes is the obscure offer, working few speeches, the lines were many unable to express the spirit of her selfless contributions on the contrary.” 瞥了一眼英梨梨,霞之丘诗羽不以为然的道:“她的人设就是默默无闻的奉献,多做事少说话,台词多了反倒体现不出来她无私奉献的精神了。” „Even like this she still likes 【adore/admire Fan】 How did the result turn into her to bless adore/admire Fan to end heartfeltly?” “就算这样她也喜欢【慕帆】吧,怎么结局就变成她由衷的祝福慕帆就结束了？” Eriri points at the above person to suppose to describe: „Also, what look this is, the Twintail bangs too covered the eye and face long, you said that to me what fresh refined face this is actually? The actor's pay lines little, didn't the face make others reveal even? Were you too also shameless?” 英梨梨指着上面的人设描写道:“还有,这是什么相貌啊,双马尾的刘海太长遮住了眼睛和脸,你给我说说这倒是是个什么样清新脱俗的脸？戏份台词少就算了,脸都不让人家露？你也太无耻了吧？” Kasumigaoka Utaha held the arm, face indifferent saying: „In the plot, does not beam with joy to increase the mystery. Some supporting actresses meet with the light dead.” 霞之丘诗羽抱起了胳膊,一脸淡然的说道:“在的情节上,不露脸可以增加神秘感。有的女配角会见光死的。” Say/Way that Eriri despises: „Don't you give Ichinose the rain to design such hairstyle? Make her also mysterious!” 英梨梨鄙视的道:“那你怎么不给一之濑雨设计这样的发型？让她也神秘一下啊！” ..... ..... Listened to two female quarrels, Mu Fan to put down the text, although this story was seemingly simple, may actually be full of many special meanings in inside. 听着两女的争吵,慕凡放下了文本,这个故事虽然看似简单,可却充满了许多特殊的含义在里面。 Moreover returns to original state by the Kasumigaoka Utaha exquisite style, occasionally in addition some slightly obviously only US , China two sentences, seem unusual has the poetic sentiment also to have the previous generation Capital Arney's realistic color. 而且以霞之丘诗羽细腻的文笔还原,偶尔加上一些略显唯美中二的句子,显得非常的有诗意又带有前世京阿尼的现实色彩。 Especially from the beginning the mentality explodes does not attend to 【adore/admire Fan】 Consoles the psychological portrayal of Ichinose rain, as well as Ichinose rain did not listen to adore/admire Fan the invitation afterward, that type wants certificate own light talent urgently, recognized that the psychological attitude that according to the reader the direction writing that anticipates certainly to succeed. 尤其是一开始心态爆炸不顾【慕帆】劝解一之濑雨的心理描写,以及后来一之濑雨不听慕帆的邀请,那种迫切想要证明自己的轻天赋,认定按照着读者期待的方向写作就一定能成功的心理态度。 At finally, attacked time, happened expected a bigger, disappointed bigger attitude transforms, the words that as well as jumped down to urge to go faster finally recklessly rescues to accompany her who Ichinose rain adore/admire Fan who said together to walk lets person tears. 在最终,遭受到打击的时候,才发生了期望越大,失望越大的态度转变,以及最后不顾一切跳下去去救一之濑雨的慕帆所说的陪着她一起走下去的话更是让人不禁泪目。 Because adore/admire Fan is because the Ichinose rain childhood help has engraved on mind , helping Ichinose rain, for love selfless pear, continuously silently is loving adore/admire Fan, is understanding finally the love of Ichinose rain and adore/admire sail, still has not said silently the blessing their psychology. 因为慕帆是因为一之濑雨小时候的帮助一直铭记在心,才帮助一之濑雨,还有为了爱情无私的梨子,一直默默的爱着慕帆,在最后明白了一之濑雨和慕帆的爱情,依然没有说出口默默的祝福他们的心理。 This book from original constrained to transform the warm-blooded friendship story and love story. 将这本书从原本的压抑转变成了热血的友情故事和爱情故事。 If again by Eriri and he regarding the understanding of manga, displays with the minute mirror, lets person unknowingly tears sufficiently. 如果再以英梨梨和他对于漫画的理解,和分镜来表现出来,足以让人不经意间泪目。 „Senpai, I felt that at least should also beam with joy to the pear, because in your book described that the passers-by have a face, Kanako does not have the face, the female as matches, seemed too far mystically.” Mu Fan also approves the person of same belief. “学姐,我感觉至少也该给梨子露个脸,因为你的书上形容路人都有个面孔,可梨子连脸都没有,作为中的女配,似乎真的有点神秘过头了。”慕凡也赞同道。 Eriri tallies immediately, is staring Kasumigaoka Utaha: „Yes, how I felt that you are aiming at this supporting actress, the supporting actress does not have the human rights!” 英梨梨立即符合,瞪着霞之丘诗羽:“就是啊,我怎么感觉你在针对这个女配角,女配角无人权啊！” „Good, that turned into blue bill ponytail to be good to her for the time being.” “好吧,那姑且就给她变成蓝发单马尾好了。” Heard Mu Fan saying that moreover the manga festival was about to begin, Kasumigaoka Utaha can only comply, revised person's a plot not too tremendous effect of look on book in any case, after three people studied the person to suppose well, by Mu Fan and Eriri starts to begin to draw manga. 听到慕凡都这么说了,而且漫画节开赛在即,霞之丘诗羽只能答应了下来,反正修改一个人的相貌对书的剧情没有太大的影响,在三人研究好了人设后,就由慕凡和英梨梨开始动手画漫画了。 Because Kasumigaoka Utaha has no talent regarding manga, can only one side look at the drawing of two people again, occasionally serves tea in side margin pours water but actually, maintains Mu Fan and Eriri state of mind. 由于霞之丘诗羽对于漫画没有任何天赋,只能再一旁看着两个人的绘画了,偶尔在旁边端端茶倒倒水,来保持慕凡和英梨梨的精神状态。 Sees industrious Kasumigaoka Utaha, then may be wild with joy Eriri, while opens mouth to direct Senpai that this opportunity non-stop. 看到勤劳的霞之丘诗羽,这下可把英梨梨乐坏了,趁此机会不停的张嘴使唤着学姐。 „Helps me take cup of drink troublesome.” “麻烦帮我拿杯饮料。” „I was hungry, I remember that nearby your family has a supermarket, buys fries.” “我饿了,我记得你们家附近有个超市,去买点薯条来。” „Can you not stand in the Mu Fan side stare at him to look, will disturb him to draw.” “你能不能不站在慕凡的身边盯着他看,会打扰到他画画的。” Just carried Kasumigaoka Utaha that bag between-meal snack is coming back to hear directing of Eriri from outside, somewhat was actually annoyed, toward her mouth stopper fries, the say/way that coldly: „I urged you should better you to play my time to use on drawing manga, otherwise could not catch up with the manga festival, I may be unable to forgive you.” 刚刚从外面拎着一袋子零食回来的霞之丘诗羽又听到英梨梨的使唤,倒是有些恼火了,往她的嘴里塞了一根薯条,冷冷的道:“我劝你最好将你耍我的时间用在画漫画上,不然赶不上漫画节,我可饶不了你。” Looks at Kasumigaoka Utaha to clench teeth that cold as ice and frost elegant face, Eriri recalls is only being left over less than four days of time, in the heart understands the urgency of time, can only start wholly-absorbed drawing again. 看着霞之丘诗羽咬着牙那张冷若冰霜的俏脸,英梨梨回忆着只剩下不足四天时间,心中明白了时间的紧迫,只能再次开始专心的画了起来。 One all day time, 一整天的时间, Mu Fan and Eriri in the Kasumigaoka Utaha family/home, may study the plot and person suppose to cost a lot of time, if catches up with the manuscript, perhaps now evening's some without enough time, Mu Fan can only call Lily, making her be responsible for looking after good Sagiri, decided that tonight and Eriri lived in the Kasumigaoka Utaha home. Mu Fan and Eriri, the Kasumigaoka Utaha light author and artists are the occupation that long-term stays up late, occasionally stays up late a evening also to have nothing. 慕凡和英梨梨都在霞之丘诗羽的家里,可研究情节和人设上耗费了不少时间,如果赶稿的话,今晚上或许有些来不及,慕凡只能给莉莉打了个电话,让她负责照顾好纱雾,决定今晚和英梨梨住在霞之丘诗羽的家里了。慕凡和英梨梨,霞之丘诗羽轻作者和画师都属于长期熬夜的职业,偶尔熬夜一晚上倒也没什么。 In the evening, Mu Fan made some simple ingredients, after three people finished eating, starts to continue the symbol. 晚上,慕凡做好了一些简单的料理,三人吃完后,又开始继续码字。 Just arrived at ten points time, Mu Fan and Eriri felt that in the entire room seemed to be more silent than the daytime. 只是刚刚到十点的时候,慕凡和英梨梨就感觉到整个屋子里似乎比白天寂静多了。 „Strange, Senpai?” “奇怪,学姐呢？” Persistent makes Mu Fan somewhat strange silent, thinks that this reason, in the heart remembered suddenly has been taking care of him and Eriri Senpai, as if Senpai has not appeared their here for a long time. 持续的寂静让慕凡有些奇怪,想了想这个原因,心中忽然想起了一直服侍着他和英梨梨的学姐,似乎学姐好久没有出现在他们这里了。 Mu Fan surprised turning head, had just turned the head to see lies on the table fell asleep Senpai, immediately somewhat does not know whether to laugh or cry. 慕凡惊讶的回过头去,刚刚转过头就看到了趴在桌子上睡着了的学姐,顿时有些哭笑不得。 Originally Senpai was too tired, rested. 原来学姐是太累了,才睡了过去。 Mu Fan without disturbing Senpai, instead took off own coat to walk to throw over on the body of Senpai, the words of normal person slept in the evening needs to cover with the quilt, like lying on table, if did not throw over anything to sleep very easy catching cold cold, awakened Senpai she likely unable to fall asleep, put on clothes would have no issue to her. 慕凡并没有打扰学姐,反而脱下自己的外套走过去披在了学姐的身上,正常人的话晚上睡觉是需要盖着被子的,就像趴在桌子上如果不披点什么睡觉很容易着凉感冒,叫醒学姐她很可能就睡不着了,给她披上一件衣服就没有问题了。 Sees Mu Fan to leave, Eriri turns head, saw that Mu Fan put on the clothes to Kasumigaoka Utaha, in the Eriri heart somewhat envied, said: „Mu Fan, you with the past same gentle.” 看到慕凡离开,英梨梨回过头去,看到慕凡给霞之丘诗羽披上了衣服,英梨梨心中有些羡慕,道:“慕凡,你还是和过去一样的温柔呢。” Mu Fan smiles lightly: „The Senpai first seven days have come under the attack, causes not to have a good sleep, for these days has been considering the plot of short article, possibly because just we were occupied by her to fall asleep here safely, let her relieved resting meeting.” 慕凡淡淡一笑:“学姐前七天一直受到了的打击,导致没睡好,这几天又一直在考虑短篇的剧情,可能是正因为我们住在这里她才能安心的睡着了,让她安心的睡会吧。” Actually Mu Fan had seen that Senpai was somewhat tired, after all her dark pouche was getting more and more heavy, particularly inborn charming Senpai, on the face happens a wee bit slight defects, can look. 其实慕凡早就看出学姐有些累了,毕竟她的黑眼圈越来越重了,尤其是天生丽质的学姐,脸上一旦出现一丁点瑕疵,一眼就能看得出来。 It can be said that Senpai can fall asleep, Mu Fan felt relieved actually. 可以说,学姐能这么睡着了,慕凡倒是放心了许多。 Heard the Mu Fan words, Eriri stares dull, in the heart whispered secretly: „Although her came under the attack, but I a little envied to have her at this moment actually .....” 听到慕凡的话,英梨梨呆愣了一下,心中暗自嘀咕道:“虽然她的受到了打击,但是这一刻我倒是有点羡慕起了她.....” Because these words were Eriri in the heart said that Mu Fan has not heard, two people sit on a table now, Mu Fan in the left side, Eriri to is drawing the picture in the right. 这句话由于是英梨梨在心中说的,慕凡并没有听到,两个人现在是坐在一张桌子上,慕凡在左面,英梨梨在右面对着画着画。 Mu Fan and Eriri have signed in upon arrival at work 1 : 00 am, because draws manga is strenuous to spend brain the physical strength lives, even if boils one today whole evening, tomorrow will not still have the strength to draw, Mu Fan and Eriri can only decide to rest at this time simultaneously, rest continue to begin to early tomorrow morning. 慕凡和英梨梨一直画到了凌晨1点,因为画漫画是个费力又费脑的体力活,就算今天熬了一整晚,明天依然没有力气画了,慕凡和英梨梨只能在这个时候同时决定休息,睡到明天一早继续开工。 They are on the floor not to have too on the ground to pay attention then by resting, next day Mu Fan woke up to move under the body, actually felt that the body seemed to be fettered by anything, opened the eye to see just in time to own that tranquil elegant face. UU reads 他们在地上打了个地铺也没太多注意便挨着睡了下来,第二天慕凡醒来挪动了下身体,却感觉到身体似乎被什么束缚住了,睁开眼睛正巧看到了正对着自己的那张恬静的俏脸。UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com Because this time Eriri last night slept untied Twintail, a golden long hair hung loose again the shoulder, is coordinating again gently beautifully tranquil rested condition, seemed like a beautiful woman in deep sleep is ordinary, extremely delightful pretty. 此时的英梨梨因为昨晚睡觉的时候解开了双马尾,一头金色的长发披散再肩头,再配合着柔美恬静的睡态,看上去给人一种沉睡中的美人一般,极为甜美俏丽。 I have never thought that Eriri also has such gently beautiful time. 真没想到,英梨梨也有这么柔美的时候。 Mu Fan cannot help smiling smiled, moves under the body to discover last night slept Eriri did not kick out of the way the quilt honestly, at this time seemed like eight claw octopuses general, tight is holding his body. 慕凡忍俊不禁的一笑,动了下身子才发现昨晚睡觉的时候英梨梨不老实的踢开了被子,此时像是一个八爪章鱼一般,紧紧的抱着他的身体。 Is like this tranquil to be possible the resting posture of person, Mu Fan facing this time Eriri is not really cruel enough to disturb her, can only decide that she welcomed, is lying down calmly here visits her. 面对此时英梨梨这样恬静可人的睡姿,慕凡还真不忍心打扰到她,只能决定等她迎来,躺着这里静静的看着她。 But Mu Fan making has made the Eriri intelligence more sober, opens the eye, happen to sees Mu Fan that distinctive face, feels own arm and hand is holding Mu Fan, the face was immediately red. 可慕凡刚才的挣动已经让英梨梨的神智清醒了许多,睁开眼睛,正好看到慕凡那张棱角分明的脸庞,感受到自己的胳膊和手都在抱着慕凡,脸顿时就红了。 „You woke up, Eriri.” “你醒来了,英梨梨。” Sees Eriri, on the fair cheek climbed up wiped to blush, on the face of Mu Fan revealed wipes the smile. 看到英梨梨,白皙的脸蛋上攀上了一抹红晕,慕凡的脸上不由露出一抹微笑。 „Em.” “恩。” Eriri shy nodded, then withdrew rapidly the hand, but in her heart actually some fawns proceed along no particular course, when home rests, on the bed of her family/home has a big bear to hug, has not thought that rested routine to regard Mu Fan here unexpectedly held the pillow. 英梨梨害羞的点了点头,然后迅速抽回了手,但她的心中却有些小鹿乱撞,在家睡的时候,她家的大床上有一个大熊可以抱着的,没想到睡在这里竟然习惯性将慕凡当成了抱枕。 Moreover was happen to seen by Mu Fan! 而且还正好被慕凡看到了！ Too disgraced! 太丢人了！ But in fact was Eriri wants to be many, Mu Fan cannot detect that the Eriri innermost feelings the idea, stood up, said: „Did not bump into you to disturb your rest a moment ago carefully, the time also early, you rest the meeting again, I make a breakfast, completed you and Senpai finished eating us to continue to work again.” 但实际上是英梨梨想多了,慕凡并不能察觉到英梨梨内心的想法,站起身来,说道:“刚才不小心碰到你了打扰到你的休息了,时间还早,你再睡会,我去做点早餐,做好了你和学姐吃完了我们再继续工作。” Saw that said then raises to make Mu Fan that the breakfast leaves on own initiative, in the heart of Eriri one warm, happy smiles. 看到说完便主动提出去做早餐离开的慕凡,英梨梨的心中一暖,甜蜜的一笑。 Mu Fan he is really a gentle male student! 慕凡他真是个温柔的男生呢！