TDFS :: Volume #5 复苏的记忆

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„Story was one once wrote the author of manga plot, transformed to be the light novel writer, although started to write the light novel to have some result, but failed afterward, gave shelter by the companion, finally helped the companion obtain the first position at the manga festival, understands direction that oneself wrote?” “故事是一位曾经执笔漫画剧情的作者,转型去做轻小说作家,虽然开始去写轻小说有了些许成绩,可在后来失败了,又被同伴收留,最终在漫画节上帮助同伴获得了第一名的名次,明白了自己写作的方向？” In the light and bright living room, sits in the Eriri hand on sofa takes the draft, wear a look of despising looked that asked to Kasumigaoka Utaha: „You determined that this isn't your true portrayal?” 宽敞明亮的客厅内,坐在沙发上的英梨梨手中拿着文稿,面带着鄙视的看向霞之丘诗羽问道:“你确定这不是你内心的真实写照？” Kasumigaoka Utaha provoked under the long hair, stands in the Eriri front, indifferent say/way: „Also only then Sawamura your such brain circuit can think that was my innermost feelings portrayed, the animation plot and reality were different, you grew are like Airi, were you really that all day long by the father Airi that liked loving?” 霞之丘诗羽撩拨了下长发,站在英梨梨的面前,淡然的道:“也只有泽村你这样的脑回路会以为是我的内心写照了,动漫的剧情和现实是不同的,难道你长得和爱莉一样,你就真的是那个成天被父爱宠爱的爱莉吗？” „You!” “你！” Eriri air/Qi pounded on the table to stand, discontented snort/hum: „I also think that what plot your Kasumi Utako will write, without thinking is such simple plot? How does such plot possibly compare favorably with the Senju Muramasa short story?” 英梨梨气的一拍桌子站了起来,不满的哼了一声:“我还以为你霞诗子会写出什么样的剧情,没想到就是这样简单的剧情？这样的剧情怎么可能比得上千寿村征的短篇小说？” „Always writes continuously unable to write compared with somebody good?” The Kasumigaoka Utaha disgruntled rebuttal said. “总比某人连写都写不出来的好吧？”霞之丘诗羽不悦的反驳道。 „I regarding some original plot also research, your such plot, I can also write!” Eriri also uncomfortable inserted the waist. “我好歹对于原创剧情也有些研究,你这样的剧情,我也能写出来！”英梨梨也不爽的插起了腰。 This Mu Fan has not refuted Eriri, instead puts down draft earnest saying: „Indeed, only then such plot as to win Senju Muramasa to be a little difficult.” 这次慕凡倒没反驳英梨梨,反而放下文稿认真的说道:“的确,只有这样的剧情似乎想要赢千寿村征有点困难。” If can manufacture the short article the manga plot, in the Mu Fan memory has, for example once previous generation «Your Name» as well as «Shape of Sound» was very good plot, but his choice has not written these plots. ” 如果说可以制作成短篇的漫画的剧情,慕凡的记忆里有很多,比如曾经前世的《你的名字》以及《声之形》都是很好的剧情,可这次他并没有选择来写出这些剧情。” Because, the copying from a book class/flow and may not first, only have powerful forever is a kingly way. 因为,抄书流并不一定会永远第一,唯有强大自己才是王道。 Indeed once that world perhaps Makoto Shinkai and Hayao Miyazaki's script which was almost impeccable, looked made one unable to bear want tears, and had deep feeling, but cannot say that they very outstanding, no one can exceed him in such a parallel world. 的确曾经那个世界或许新海诚和宫崎骏的剧本哪个都几乎无可挑剔,看的都让人忍不住想要泪目,并且深有感触,可是并不能说他们非常的优秀,在这样一个平行的世界就没人能超越他。 Does not raise others, bald Wu Ke of b1 manufacture group that once they knew possibly writes the good script. 不提别人,那个曾经他们认识的b1制作组的光头吴克就可能写出好的剧本。 Like «Accel World» that the Mu Fan copying from a book class/flow copies and «Kono Subarashii Sekai ni Shukufuku wo», although the sales volume is good, but must exceed Senju Muramasa still some difficulties. 就像慕凡抄书流抄出来的《加速世界》和《为美好的世界献上祝福》,虽然销量不错,可要超越千寿村征依然有一些困难。 Perhaps, Senju Muramasa in such a world, the written short article plot becomes the script that exceeds Makoto Shinkai is also not implausible. 也许,千寿村征在这样一个世界,写出的短篇剧情成为超越新海诚的剧本也并不是没有可能。 But Kasumigaoka Utaha really relied on her talent to arrive this step, if the words, Senpai just marched into the university, she wrote the novel to have Strength and potential very much. 但霞之丘诗羽是真的凭借着她一个人的天赋走到了这一步,如果说的话,学姐才刚刚步入大学,她写作小说是很有实力以及潜力的。 Therefore Mu Fan planned that he does not participate in a revision of manga script, the entire plot is under the charge to a Senpai person completely. 所以慕凡才打算他不参加一点漫画剧本的修改,整个剧情全部都由学姐一个人负责。 Then, Mu Fan smiles, added: „Do I guess Senpai manga plot not just this?” 说完,慕凡又笑了笑,补充道:“我猜学姐的漫画剧情并不是只有这点吧？” Kasumigaoka Utaha at present one bright, gathered in front of Mu Fan, the long and narrow beautiful pupil narrows the eyes, sends the silk to hang in the shoulder, is staring at the eye of Mu Fan, said with a smile lightly: „Really worthily is Kouhai-kun, this you looked, right this was only the program, true plot needs to write through the packing of program, short story simple lay in not needing so many branch plots to fill, so long as conformed with the main line, to quite have the style and sentence of profound meaning accepted as a memento affectingly is OK.” 霞之丘诗羽眼前一亮,凑到了慕凡面前,狭长的美眸眯起来,发丝垂在肩头,盯着慕凡的眼睛,轻笑道:“果然不愧是学弟君,这你都看出来了,没错这个只是大纲,真正的剧情的需要通过大纲的填充来写,短篇小说的简单又在于不需要那么多的支线情节填充,只要将主线整合,以颇有深意的文笔和句子让人感动留念就可以了。” The gentle supple elegant acoustic ray made the Mu Fan spirit shake, is on the rise happen to sees the cheek that Senpai collected, Mu Fan found that cheek of Senpai very exquisite, the snow greasy cheek did not contain impurity, fresh refined, elegant peerless. 温婉柔雅的声线让慕凡的精神一震,抬起头正好看到学姐凑过来的脸蛋,慕凡发现学姐的脸蛋非常的细腻,雪腻的脸蛋不含一丝杂质,清新脱俗,秀美绝伦。 Because Senpai is looks down to sit on chair her, several wisps of mild-mannered sending silk fall on the Mu Fan tip of the nose just in time, sends among the silk is mixing with the delicate fragrance of young girl to transmit, making the Mu Fan heartbeat accelerate, complexion slightly red lowering the head, actually saw that just in time Senpai two are tying tight the clothes vivid peaks and ridges, the angle of view of even if under cover of underwear to overlooking can still see that wipes a perfect outline corner/horn the snow white color. 因为学姐是低着头看着坐在椅子上的她,几缕柔顺的发丝正巧落在慕凡的鼻尖,发丝间夹杂着的少女的清香传来,使得慕凡的心跳不由加速了起来,脸色微红的低了低头,却又正巧看到学姐两个紧绷着衣服呼之欲出的峰峦,就算在内衣的遮盖下以俯视的视角依然可以看到那一抹完美的轮廓一角的雪白之色。 Saw that Mu Fan did not speak for a long time, Kasumigaoka Utaha astonished blinking, lowers the head, this realized that Mu Fan saw anything a moment ago, the elegant face fled to wipe crimson, rebuked saying: „Kouhai-kun, lascivious .....” 看到慕凡长时间不说话,霞之丘诗羽惊愕的眨了眨眼睛,低下了头,这才意识到慕凡刚才看到了什么,俏脸窜上了一抹绯红,嗔怪道:“学弟君,好色.....” Listens to this, Mu Fan coughed awkwardly, was reasonable, the matter is completely the force majeure, but said no matter how he also looked, how to explain again is unable to change this fact, he can only the apology smiled, changes the topic: „Senpai, we only had four days, said the recent plot! If this short article manga ranks the first, but has the opportunity to make the movie.” 听此,慕凡尴尬的咳嗽了一声,讲道理,刚才的事情完全是不可抗力的,但不管怎么说他也是看了,再怎么解释也无法更改这个事实了,他只能歉意的一笑,岔开话题道:“学姐,我们只剩下了四天的时间,还是把新剧情说一下吧！这次短篇漫画如果获得第一名可是有机会拍成电影的。” Saw collects to tally to urge to Mu Fan Kasumigaoka Utaha somewhat disgruntled Eriri immediately: „Yes, takes to tell us the plot quickly.” 原本看到凑向慕凡的霞之丘诗羽就有些不悦的英梨梨立即符合着催促道:“就是,还是快把剧情拿出来告诉我们。” Saw Mu Fan is not willing in the topic to continue, Kasumigaoka Utaha can only also take one stack to print the good draft from the cabinet, placed on the table: „This complete plot about short article light novel manga.” 见慕凡不愿意在刚才的话题继续下去,霞之丘诗羽只能从柜子里又拿出来一沓打印好的稿子,放在了桌子上:“这就是关于短篇轻小说漫画的全部剧情。” Because the time was quite tight, Mu Fan and Eriri carefully read. 由于时间比较紧张了,慕凡和英梨梨仔细阅读了起来。 It looks like in Mu Fan, the complete plot wants splendid many compared with the program, after all the program outlined under the plot, the similar program will place in the hand of hand and in ordinary author of big god author will write two completely different styles and flavors, this will be the disparity between authors. 在慕凡看来,全部的剧情比起大纲要精彩的多,毕竟大纲只是概述了下剧情,同样的大纲放在大神作者的手里和普通作者的手里会写出两种完全不同的风格和韵味,这就是作者间的差距。 What Kasumigaoka Utaha writes is grows up together a man and a woman 【adore/admire Fan】 And 【Pear】 Submits a piece of writing together the text author of manga festival 【Ichinose rain】, Is defeated at the evaluation finals of manga festival finally, by the second ending story. 霞之丘诗羽写的是和从小一起长大的一男一女【慕帆】以及【梨子】一起投稿漫画节的文本作者【一之濑雨】,最终在漫画节的评选决赛上失败,以第二名收场的故事。 Because of being defeated, held the online manga reader of anticipation regarding their group, saw that in the network the consistent discussion is Ichinose rain that the text of novel has problems, did not attend to detaining of adore/admire Fan and pear left them. 因为失败,原本对于他们三人组抱有期待的网上漫画读者,看到网络上一致的讨论是小说的文本出了问题的一之濑雨,不顾慕帆和梨子的挽留离开了他们。 Half a month later, Ichinose rain contribution E-Mule Library becomes the E-Mule Library author, although the first book had some result, may be too high because of the online anticipation value, writing style that she actually could not find out the second book. 半个月后,一之濑雨投稿电击文库成为了电击文库的作者,虽然第一本书有了一些成绩,可因为网上的期待值太高,她却摸不清第二本书的写作方式。 Helpless she ran into once companion, hopes that she can return to the work room to write together manga, and told her to believe very much her text, has not hated her because of the previous failure. 无助的她又遇到了曾经的同伴,希望她能够回到工作室一起重新执笔漫画,并且告诉她一直很相信她的文本,从来没有因为上次的失败而怨恨她。 The plan that but Ichinose rain actually, planned that with the light novel showed her talent, proves her Strength. 可一之濑雨却并没有回去的打算,打算用轻小说证明她的天赋,证明她的实力。 After the first book terminates, she has been looking for the pragmatic strategy of second book, she looks at the online commentary, is reorganizing on the mistake of this book, defers to way that the reader is thinking, the way in others heart anticipating writes the second book, may be defeated finally, even was liked all her readers to turn into the dislike from the affection, even edits also no longer pays attention to her. 在第一本书完结后,她一直找寻着第二本书的写作方法,她看着网上的评论,整理着上本书的过错,按照着读者所想的方式,别人心中期待的方式来写出第二本书,可最终失败了,甚至被喜爱她的所有读者从喜爱变成了厌恶,甚至编辑也不再去理会她。 The heart of Ichinose rain from before regarding the anticipation of second book, after was devastated by the readers dropped from the highest anticipation point instantaneously, turned into the biggest disappointment. 一之濑雨的心从之前对于第二本书的期待,在被读者们摧残后瞬间从最高的期待点跌落了下来,变成了最大的失望。 At this moment, she remembered for several years ago, the failure in companion manga festival, and satire in network, dejected she felt that the writing of her meeting betrayed her merely, hides several days decided that in the room jumped into the river to end the useless life, but the companion must look for her just in time at this moment, finally saw this, plunged into Shenshuihe to rescue her recklessly. 这一刻,她又想起了几年前,同伴漫画节上的失败,以及网络上的讽刺,心灰意冷的她感觉她仅仅会的写作都背叛了她,躲在房间中几天决定去跳河结束自己无用的生命,可正巧这一刻同伴要去找她,结果见到了这一幕,不顾一切的跳入了深水河里救出了她。 Then was the quite encouraging plot, in companion's the comfort of enlightening and persuasion, as well as many edge ball and happy several stories, Ichinose rain decided that helped the companions complete the wish, started carefully wrote a text of short article, because the manga festival will soon start, Ichinose rain not slept nor rested three days of texts, finally finished in manga before the holiday, three people tried hard for three days to complete short article manga together finally. 接下来就是相当励志的情节了,在同伴的开导和劝说的安慰,以及不少擦边球和开心的几个小故事,一之濑雨决定帮助同伴们完成心愿,开始细心的写出一个短篇的文本,因为漫画节即将开始,一之濑雨不眠不休三天的文本,终于在漫画节前写完,三人又共同努力了三天终于将短篇漫画完成。 Moreover they also defeated at one fell swoop defeated previous time defeated their team ranked the first, finally obtained the Ichinose rain of best text to say her to want under the interview to obtain the manga festival's first first thought that as well as understands at this moment the importance of partners, had the companion of never-ending partners, helped her be successful, because she is not once all alone, the entire story from original constraining, turned into the encouraging story that among the companions encouraged mutually. 而且他们还一举击败了击败了上次战胜他们获得第一的队伍,最终获得了最佳文本的一之濑雨在采访下说出了她想要获得漫画节第一的初心,以及事到如今才明白了伙伴们的重要性,有了不离不弃伙伴们的陪伴,才让她获得了成功,因为她已经不是曾经孤身一人了,整个故事从原本的压抑,变成了同伴间相互鼓励的励志的故事。 Moreover, when interviewed the male companion, reason that the male companion said helps Ichinose rain is because the childhood hopes that became his family member and friend of manga does not support him, only had with the school Ichinose rain has given him to encourage, made him arrive this step, and he also wanted to complete Ichinose rain at this time the ideal. 而且,在采访男同伴的时候,男同伴说之所以帮助一之濑雨是因为小时候希望成为漫画家的他亲人和朋友都不支持他,唯有同校一之濑雨一直给予他鼓励,才让他走到了这一步,并且他也想要在这个时候完成一之濑雨的理想。 Hears here, Ichinose rain affected shed tears, finally has the courage, with has helped her male companion confession in the interview. 听到这里,一之濑雨感动的流下了眼泪,最终鼓起勇气,在采访中与一直帮助她的男同伴告白。 The male companion also puts out a hand to her: „I harbor the sentiment of love to you since childhood ....” 男同伴也对她伸出了手:“我对你从小就怀有恋爱之情....” Finally two people because the love reason arrived at one, brings to let the love color that the person yearns , the story ended .... 最终两个人又因为爱情的原因走到了一起,又带着让人向往的爱情色彩,故事就此结束.... „Wait!” “等等！” Reads the entire plot, suddenly a discontented cry transmits, Mu Fan and Kasumigaoka Utaha turn head, sees only Eriri „” one text arranging on the table, the clenching teeth beautiful pupil is staring Kasumigaoka Utaha, uncomfortable say/way: „What your yy was a little excessive, Ichinose rain that originally the three people in work room, why have been doing the matter can obtain the love, that always helped adore/admire Fan and Ichinose rain obscure 【Pear】 Even lines few!” 看完整个剧情,忽然一个不满的叫声传来,慕凡和霞之丘诗羽回过头去,只见英梨梨“啪”的一下将文本给排在了桌子上,咬着牙美眸瞪着霞之丘诗羽,不爽的道:“你这yy的是不是有点过分了,本来工作室的三个人,凭什么一直都在搞事的一之濑雨都能获得爱情,那个一直以来都默默无闻帮助慕帆和一之濑雨的【梨子】连台词都没有几句啊！”
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