„Really worthily is the work that the popularity blogger Aki also mister recommends.” “果然不愧是人气博主安艺伦也先生推荐的作品。” Kagurazaka Ayame, reorganizes after the draft is neat, placed on the table, looked that to saying that a Mu Fan face acclaimed: „Mu Fan, your work slightly has insufficient besides the style, the setting is novel, the plot proceeds in an orderly way, is interesting, the character disposition portray is full, is this year's rare light novel excellent work.” 神乐坂菖蒲,将稿子整理整齐后,放在了桌子上,看向慕凡一脸赞叹的说道:“慕凡,您的作品除了文笔略有不足外,设定非常新颖,剧情循序渐进,非常有趣,人物性格刻画饱满,是今年难得一见的轻小说佳作。” I first-level light novel talent, you can also count on that I do have the good style? 我只有一级的轻小说天赋,你还能指望我有多好的文笔？ In the heart of Mu Fan is smiling bitterly secretly, although he once wrote many novels, but in the appraisal of System, his light novel talent first-level, first-level style naturally some slightly is insufficient, but there is no what too major problem, the light novel requests to be not too high regarding the style, so long as can make the reader understand were OK, at least «Accel World» will narrate is not the difficult matter. 慕凡的心中暗自苦笑着,虽然他曾经写了不少小说,但在系统的评价上,他的轻小说天赋只有一级,一级的文笔自然有些略显不足,但这并没有什么什么太大的问题,轻小说对于文笔要求并不是太高,只要能够让读者看懂就可以了,至少将《加速世界》叙述完并不是什么难事。 System gives rank and cook the rank about light novel talent has skilled to be able through the unceasing tempering promotion, waited to create Accel World this work, even if did not complete Mission, the talent of light novel will still promote in skilled. 系统给出的关于轻小说天赋的等级和厨艺的等级都是有着熟练度可以通过不断的磨炼提升的,等创作完了加速世界这部作品,就算不完成任务,轻小说的天赋也会在熟练度中升级的。 „Haha, I said that by the setting of Mu Fan your light novel, participates in E-Mule Library enjoys greatly can certainly pass.” “哈哈,我就说嘛,以慕凡你这本轻小说的设定,参加电击文库的大赏是一定可以通过的。” Aki also patted the shoulder of Mu Fan to say with a smile excitedly. As him of «Accel World» first senior reader, naturally hopes that very can see " Accel World » following plot, as well as future «Accel World» sales volume. 安艺伦也激动的拍了拍慕凡的肩膀笑道。作为《加速世界》的第一个资深读者的他,自然是十分希望能够看到《加速世界》的后续剧情,以及未来《加速世界》的销量的。 „Un, we hope very much can recommend «Accel World» this novel.” “嗯,我们是很希望能推荐《加速世界》这本小说的。” Kagurazaka Ayame this time from sincerity changed the name to Mu Fan: „Teacher Mu Fan, I will draw up a contract for you over the two days, gave you to mail the past, at the numbers of words of your 100,000 characters, wrote a point , after again can publish, was only the illustration issue, I suggested that you needed again diligently, after the number of words was enough, I will recommend your work to industry famous artist Eromanga-sensei, but she , if not willing for your picture illustration, the publication time I also can only ask other's artist to complete the illustration.” 神乐坂菖蒲这次是发自真心的对慕凡改变了称呼:“慕凡老师,这两天我会为你拟定一份合同,给你邮寄过去,以你十万字的字数,再多写一点之后就可以出版了,只是插画问题,我建议你需要再努力一下,等字数足够后,我会将你的作品推荐给业界有名的画师埃罗芒阿老师,但是她如果不愿意为你的画插画的话,出版的时候我也只能找其他的画师完成插画了。” „Eromanga-sensei?” “埃罗芒阿老师？” In the Mu Fan mind recalls, initially the online two sharing the honor same person artists, „Kashiwagi Eri” and „Eromanga” these two seemingly had the attainment in the Ecchi | Eroge same person illustration, if can a person help make the illustration, that Accel World sales volume can be raised again. 慕凡的脑海中不由回忆起来,当初网上两位齐名的同人画师,“柏木英理”和“埃罗芒阿”这两位貌似在工口的同人插画上非常有心得,要是能够得到其中的一人帮助做出插画,那加速世界的销量就能够再度提升了。 It looks like that a game named Fate/Grand Order he once played initially, before the clothing/taking, only attracted a attention of innumerable governing dwelling clan with a Onee-sama Kakha's all kinds illustration, getting down the load capacity was to break through 1 million, various hands about Scar managed the sale is unthinkable. 就像是当初他曾经玩的一个叫做fgo的游戏,在开服之前,仅凭着御姐斯卡哈的一副略带色色的插画就吸引了无数御宅一族的注意,下载量更是突破到了百万,各种关于斯卡哈的手办销售更是匪夷所思。 Thus it can be seen the illustration in light novel was important. 由此可见轻小说中的插画有多重要了。 Except for this. In Mu Fan heart another plan, if „Eromanga” teacher does not draw the illustration to oneself, that is uses oneself other Fantasy Point(s) to exchange the manga talent, although the first-level manga talent possibly and „Kashiwagi Eri” is worse than „Eromanga”, but also on 1 compared with some amateur illustration masters points. 除了这个。慕凡心中另外一个打算,如果“埃罗芒阿”老师不给自己画插画的话,那就是用自己剩余的一个幻想值兑换漫画天赋,虽然一级的漫画天赋可能比“埃罗芒阿”和“柏木英理”差一些,不过也要比一些业余的插画师强上一点。 Actually in the Mu Fan mind has the Kuroyukihime appearance, but he naturally does not hope that Kuroyukihime spoils in own hand. In Akihabara this all kinds same person book best-selling place, suits Ecchi | Eroge type „Eromanga” drew to be quite convenient. 其实慕凡脑海中有着黑雪姬的样子,但他自然也不希望黑雪姬糟蹋在自己的手里。在秋叶原这种色色的同人本子畅销的地方,还是适合工口类型的“埃罗芒阿”画起来应该比较顺手了。 You look Eromanga-sensei in Japanese, translating was * draws the teacher, although Mu Fan has not seen this person, but solely looked that the name knows this person had multi- Ecchi | Eroge. 你看吧在日语中埃罗芒阿老师,翻译过来就是*画老师了,慕凡虽然没有见过这个人,但是单单看名字就知道这个人有多工口了。 „That trouble Kagurazaka edited.” “那就麻烦神乐坂编辑了。” After Mu Fan stands up expresses gratitude, received paper and pen that Kagurazaka Ayame hands over, after leaving behind own address and telephone , after taking down the Kagurazaka Ayame telephone, then led Aki also to leave E-Mule Library. 慕凡站起身道了声谢后,接过神乐坂菖蒲递过来的纸和笔,留下了自己的地址和电话后,又记下了神乐坂菖蒲的电话后这才带着安艺伦也离开了电击文库。 Over the two days Kagurazaka Ayame will draw up a contract, when the time comes oneself and E-Mule Library signed and other numbers of words more, 这两天神乐坂菖蒲会拟定出一份合同,到时候自己和电击文库签约等字数再多一些, Can publish, Mu Fan was also worried «Accel World» and style of this world is incompatible, when sees Aki also and Kagurazaka Ayame surprised degree, Mu Fan also becomes regarding " Accel World » sales volume anticipates. In the Mu Fan ponder time, a System prompt sound made a sound in the mind once again. 就可以出版了,慕凡本来还担心《加速世界》和这个世界的风格不符,不过当看到安艺伦也和神乐坂菖蒲的惊讶程度,慕凡也对于《加速世界》的销量也变得期待起来。正在慕凡思考的时候,一阵系统的提示音又一次在脑海中响了起来。 „Opening fantasizes light novel talent Mission: With all due respect, fellow light writers of fiction present are the trash. Finished next month first of light novel rookie sales volume, and obtained over 50,000 fan to obtain the light novel talent to promote, as well as Fantasy Point(s), failure light novel talent degradation.” “开启幻想轻小说天赋任务:恕我直言,在座的各位轻小说家都是垃圾。获得下个月轻小说新人销量的第一名,并获得五万以上的粉丝可获得轻小说天赋升级,以及一个幻想值,失败则轻小说天赋降级。” No wonder is called to fantasize System, is really thinks that what it comes anything. 怪不得叫做幻想系统,真的是自己想什么它就来什么。 However the Mission name that your System gives what ghost is, with all due respect, is everyone present the trash? 不过你这个系统给出的这个任务的名字是什么鬼,恕我直言,在座的各位都是垃圾？ This saying said that won't be really towed to club dead randomly? 这话说出去真的不会被人拖出去乱棍打死吗？ Mu Fan scratched cold sweat, actually obtains the light novel sales volume first E-Mule Library has 100,000 Japanese Yen Reward, but he, if were defeated, oneself the first-level light novel talent, did reduce to the zero order directly? 慕凡擦了一把冷汗,其实获得轻小说销量的第一的电击文库是有着十万日元的奖励的,只是他要是失败了,自己本就只有一级的轻小说天赋,岂不是直接降为了零级？ Can that turn sprouted is covered under the Saint light of big shot newly trembled? 那岂不是又要变成了萌新被笼罩在了大佬的圣光下瑟瑟发抖？ Thinks of here, Mu Fan hit to tremble, but finished sales volume first three in the Mission prompt in the rookie well, this proved «Fantasy Monster Blade Biography» and «Love Metronome» this kind of work was not in the Mission category, was short of these powerful enemy Mission became relaxed many. 想到这里,慕凡不由打了个寒颤,不过好在任务提示是在新人中获得销量前三名,这就证明了《幻想妖刀传》和《恋爱节拍器》这类作品是不在任务范畴内的,少了这些劲敌任务就变得轻松多了。 Come on, my «Accel World», my Kuroyukihime, my small thousand, do not disappoint me! 加油吧,我的《加速世界》,我的黑雪姬,我的小千,你们可别让我失望啊！ „Smears dirty .......” “污污污.......” Long time, in a small train in tunnel the sound of emanation, Mu Fan and Aki also returned to Akihabara, because „SAO” Device decides tomorrow can receive, therefore Mu Fan can only say goodbye to Aki in Akihabara, agreed and other on Monday game Device gave Aki after the school, from direction of Akihabara toward own family/home in walks. 良久,在一阵小火车的过隧道的发出的声音中,慕凡和安艺伦也回到了秋叶原,由于“SAO”的设备定在明天才可以领取,所以慕凡只能在秋叶原告别了安艺伦也,约定好了等周一将游戏设备在学校交给安艺伦也后,从秋叶原向着自己家里的方向走去。 Then, these days matter was filled, UU reads 说起来,这几天的事情都被排满了,UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com Tomorrow must goes to Akihabara to take „SAO” Device, on Monday must start to operate Food Department. 明天要去秋叶原取“SAO”的设备,周一又要开始经营美食部了。 But always felt that some weren't right, reached an agreement the leisurely and carefree salt fish life of this world? Mu Fan expressed that present have not seen. 可是总感觉有些不对劲,说好了这个世界的悠闲的咸鱼生活呢？慕凡表示到现在自己都还没有看到。 The words expose are quite more tired, who changes me, making me go back you to try, how many days has a look to insist? 话说穿越者好累啊,谁来换换我,让我回去你过来试试,看看能坚持几天？ It is not good, is not absolutely good, who knows that trades your crazed fellows who I pass through to my cute sprouting/moe younger sister to start? 不行,绝对不行,谁知道换我穿越过来的你们这些丧心病狂的家伙会不会对我可爱的萌妹妹下手？ For my younger sister, I continue to enjoy the life here. 为了我的妹,还是我继续在这里享受人生吧。 About a half hour, Mu Fan arrived at the Gabriel main house gate mouth finally, although the weather is cool in the morning, may to afternoon, the weather be burning hot, the exposed to the sun his head is somewhat dizzy. 大约半个小时的时间,慕凡终于来到了珈百璃的家门口,虽然早上天气凉爽,可到了下午,天气又是炎热了起来,晒的他脑袋有些晕。 It seems like, must reduce as far as possible went out, does the non- dwelling hit the life of game to be called the leisurely and carefree life at home? 看来以后要尽量减少出门了,不宅在家里打游戏的生活怎么会被称为悠闲人生？ In the Mu Fan preparation across the street goes home the time, glimpses to withstand/top Gabriel of straw hat to squat in the garden that oneself live in brings the glove to clean up the weed diligently. 正在慕凡准备穿过马路回到家里的时候,无意间瞥见顶着一个草帽的珈百璃正蹲在自己居住的庭院中带着手套勤奋的清理着杂草。 Mu Fan laughs in spite of trying not, really cannot think that this wants to help the person obtain happy little angel is very but actually diligent. 慕凡不由失笑一声,真想不到这个想让人获得幸福的小天使倒挺勤奋的。 Actually regardless , the industrious female students is when noticeable, for example Yuuki Asuna and present Gabriel, this character is very likable. 其实无论什么时候,勤劳的女生都非常引人注目的,比如结城明日奈和现在的珈百璃,这种性格就很让人喜欢。 Is turning around to go home in the Mu Fan preparation, a wear brown coat that a stature selects high, the check short skirt, combed a capable purple short hair female student to carry a giant trash bag from the Gabriel garden, saw that Mu Fan first gawked slightly, then surprised say/way: 正在慕凡准备转身回家的时候,一个身材高挑的穿着一件褐色上衣,格子短裙,梳着一头干练紫色短发女生拎着一个巨大的垃圾袋子从珈百璃的庭院中走了出来,看到慕凡先是微微一愣,然后惊讶的道: „Schoolmate Mu Fan, how can you here? Should not from Gab , in the garden cleans up have you been observing her in secret?” “慕凡同学,你怎么会在这里？该不会从小珈在庭院里打扫卫生的时候你就一直在暗中观察着她吧？”