Under the Aki also leadership, Mu Fan goes to the E-Mule Library hall. 在安艺伦也的带领下,慕凡来到电击文库的大厅。 „Hello, welcome to E-Mule Library, what two do have to need to help?” “您好,欢迎来到电击文库,请问二位有什么需要帮助的？” Two people just entered the E-Mule Library hall, was responsible for the onstage putting on a sales clerk of black uniform/subdue to walk, smiling also and Mu Fan inquiry said to Aki. 二人刚一进入电击文库的大厅,负责前台穿着一身黑色制服的前台小姐就走了过来,一脸微笑的对着安艺伦也和慕凡询问道。 „Disturbs.” “打扰一下。” Aki can also to smile: „I have booked the Kagurazaka Ayame edition. She now in Company?” 安艺伦也会以微笑:“我已经预约了神乐坂菖蒲编辑。请问她现在在公司吗？” „Please wait a bit.” “请稍等一下。” The onstage work young lady has turned round, picked up the phone to dial a number, after inquiring one next, this to Aki also and saying of Mu Fan apology: „Two embarrassment, the Kagurazaka edition is meeting now, her office on seven, you can first go to seven reception rooms to wait for her, about several minutes of conference will end.” 前台工作小姐回过身去,拿起电话拨通了一个号码,询问了一下后,这才对着安艺伦也和慕凡歉意的说道:“两位不好意思,神乐坂编辑现在正在开会,她的办公室就在七层,你们可以先去七层的接待室等着她,大约几分钟的时间会议就会结束了。” „Good, thanks, we now on the past.” “好的,谢谢,我们现在就过去。” „Is impolite!” “不客气！” ..... ..... After Aki also expresses gratitude, bringing Mu Fan to walk into the elevator, and pressed down to the seventh button conveniently. 安艺伦也道了声谢后,带着慕凡走入了电梯,并顺手按下了通往第七层的按钮。 „Is the Kagurazaka edition that , you said what person?” After the elevator door closes up, Mu Fan remembers the edition name that Aki also said a moment ago, cannot bear ask. “伦也,你说的神乐坂编辑是一个什么样的人啊？”在电梯门合拢的后,慕凡想起了安艺伦也刚才说的编辑名字,忍不住问道。 Hears the inquiry of Mu Fan, Aki also surprised asking: „Mu Fan, are you really the first time moe newly intruded light novel? The Kagurazaka Ayame name haven't you actually heard?” 听到慕凡的询问,安艺伦也惊讶的问道:“慕凡,你真的是萌新第一次闯入轻小说界吗？神乐坂菖蒲的名字你竟然没有听说过？” „Un.” “嗯。” Mu Fan nodded, said, he is the Two Dimensional kind that the Heavenly Dynasty the lord writes, but he arrives at this world now for the first time truly is intrudes light novel. 慕凡点了点头,说起来,他在天朝的时候主写的就是二次元类,但他现在来到这个世界确实是第一次闯入轻小说界。 This he had not heard with this world the best-selling light novel is the same, the light novel of this world edits he has not heard the name. 这点和这个世界他没听说过的畅销轻小说一样,这个世界的轻小说编辑他也都是没有听说过的名字。 Aki also explained: „Kagurazaka Ayame, the E-Mule Library famous edition, specifically is more responsible the popular work. For example the author of «Fantasy Monster Blade Biography» this light novel best-selling novel is under the charge to her.” 安艺伦也解释道:“神乐坂菖蒲,电击文库著名编辑,专门负责一些热门作品。比如《幻想妖刀传》这本轻小说界畅销小说的作者就是由她一个人负责的。” „Originally is responsible for the edition of best-selling light novel.” “原来是负责畅销轻小说的编辑。” Mu Fan is somewhat surprised, never expected that Aki also actually knows the E-Mule Library such outstanding edition, although but this editor is quite outstanding, made his edition to be completely enough. But the Mu Fan matter was also quite worried. 慕凡有些惊讶,没想到安艺伦也竟然认识电击文库这么优秀的编辑,但虽然这个编辑比较优秀,做他的编辑完全是足够了。可慕凡还有一件事比较担心。 „Can't that such edition and does not care to the book of my rookie?” “那这样的编辑不会对我这种新人的书并不在意吧？” Mu Fan indicated that moe trembles newly, is responsible for the edition of result in his memory is the aloof, although edits very outstandingly, if thought that he is the rookie does not attach great importance, that later handles anything time many that must trouble. 慕凡表示萌新瑟瑟发抖,在他的记忆中一些负责有成绩的编辑都是很高冷的,虽然编辑很优秀,可是如果觉得他是新人就不重视的话,那以后办什么事情的时候要麻烦的多。 „Cannot.” “不会。” Aki also shakes the head, explained with a smile: „Miss Kagurazaka is a very amiable edition, so long as she thought that can the manuscript work, she will be responsible for earnestly, at Mu Fan your «Accel World» splendid degree, can certainly through the verification of E-Mule Library.” 安艺伦也摇了摇头,笑着解释道:“神乐坂小姐是一个非常随和的编辑,只要她觉得可以过稿的作品,她都会认真负责的,以慕凡你的《加速世界》的精彩程度,一定可以通过电击文库的审核的。” „That is good.” “那就好。” Mu Fan relaxes secretly, a good edition thousand are not exchanged for gold, Mu Fan does not count on so many, the hope does not only want extremely pit to be good. 慕凡暗自松了口气,一位好的编辑千金不换,慕凡并不指望那么多,只希望不要太坑就好。 At this time, the gate of elevator had opened, Aki also brought Mu Fan to go out of the elevator, entered the reception room of editor. 这时,电梯的门已经开了,安艺伦也带着慕凡走出电梯,进入了编辑的接待室。 The arrangement of edition reception room very simple, clean neat desks and four soft chairs. 编辑接待室的布置十分的简单,一张干净的整洁的办公桌和四把软的椅子。 Because the Kagurazaka edition has not met, Mu Fan and Aki also sat on one side chair simply the static waiting. 由于神乐坂编辑还没有开完会,慕凡和安艺伦也索性就坐在了一边的椅子上静静的等待起来。 In a while, sound of footsteps transmits, Mu Fan raised the head, seems like over 20 years old, wears an occupation OL uniform/subdue, is combing the capable hair's length only to ears, the beautiful woman who the stature selects high walked: „Excuse me, mister, recently was really busy, because was responsible for many popular works, making two wait for a long time.” 没过多久,一阵脚步声传来,慕凡抬起头,一位看起来二十多岁,穿着一身职业OL制服,梳着干练的齐耳短发,身材高挑的美女走了过来:“不好意思,伦也先生,最近实在是太忙了,因为负责了很多热门的作品,让两位久等了。” „ Doesn't matter, we also just came to here. “没关系,我们也是才刚刚来这里。 ” Aki also stands up to say. ”安艺伦也站起身笑着说。 „Before this is also mister, «Accel World» author who telephone said that Teacher Mu Fan?” “这位就是伦也先生之前电话里说的《加速世界》的作者,慕凡老师吗？” After Kagurazaka Ayame greets, slightly surprised looks that Aki also Mu Fan asked. 神乐坂菖蒲打了个招呼后,微微惊讶的看着安艺伦也身边的慕凡问道。 The Kagurazaka Ayame understanding as Aki of popularity blogger, from Aki also to she recommends Mu Fan the time, she receives " Accel World » 30,000 character drafts that Aki also sent. 神乐坂菖蒲原本就认识身为人气博主的安艺伦也的,从安艺伦也对她推荐慕凡的时候,她就收到了安艺伦也发过来的《加速世界》三万字稿子。 In industry Aki also regarding the light the recommendation of novel and animation is the conscience, therefore also accumulated many popularity, therefore looks like in Kagurazaka Ayame can let the Aki also recommendation the work inevitably is some highlights. 在业界安艺伦也对于轻小说和动画的推荐都是十分良心的,因此也积累了不少的人气,所以在神乐坂菖蒲看来能够让安艺伦也推荐的作品必然是有些亮点的。 Then Kagurazaka Ayame looked at the Accel World first 30,000 characters merely, felt the uncommonness of this book. 接下来神乐坂菖蒲仅仅看了加速世界的前三万字,就感觉到了这本书的不凡。 The pragmatic strategies of «Accel World» this light novels and other game class novels are completely different, compared with the deviation science fiction future category, but can definitely be called the work of this year's potential from the transition of style and plot. 《加速世界》这本轻小说和其他的游戏类小说的写作方法完全不同,比较偏向科幻未来的类别,但从文笔和剧情的转折上来看完全可以称为今年的潜力之作。 Therefore reads the following plot stemming from she also urgent wish of anticipation. 所以出于期待的她也迫切的想要看一下接下来的剧情。 The Kagurazaka Ayame itself thinks that Mu Fan is an old author can write this type of horizontal light novel , when she sees Aki also side Mu Fan that immature face, in the heart somewhat is surprised. 神乐坂菖蒲本以为慕凡是一个年纪较大的作者才能写出这种水平的轻小说,可当她看到安艺伦也身边慕凡那张略带稚嫩的脸庞时,心中不禁有些惊讶。 Does Mu Fan this semblance seem like should with Aki also be the student of same first grade? 慕凡这外表看起来应该和安艺伦也是同一年级的学生吧？ However her responsible author, including several are the best-selling light novels that the high-school student writes, for example «Fantasy Monster Blade Biography» Senju Muramasa is one of them, worked as so many years editions, regarding this she is also only some slightly accidents/surprises. 不过她负责的作者,其中有几位就是高中生写出的畅销轻小说,比如《幻想妖刀传》的千寿村征就是其中之一,当了这么多年的编辑,对此她也只是略微有些意外而已。 „Un, you good Miss Kagurazaka, calling me Mu Fan to be good. Moreover my time plans to participate in this year the E-Mule Library novel big enjoys.” Mu Fan stands up says with a smile lightly. “嗯,您好神乐坂小姐,叫我慕凡就好了。另外我此次准备参加今年电击文库小说的大赏。”慕凡站起身来轻笑道。 „Did that remaining drafts bring?” “那剩下的稿子带来了吗？” „Brought.” “带来了。” Mu Fan turns on the backpack, took out from inside printed the good «Accel World» original manuscript gave Kagurazaka Ayame: „Here.” 慕凡打开背包,从里面取出了打印好的《加速世界》原稿交给了神乐坂菖蒲:“都在这里。” Kagurazaka Ayame both hands received the draft to place on the table, turns around to take away two cans of Cola from nearby refrigerator, placed Mu Fan and Aki front. 神乐坂菖蒲双手接过稿子放在桌子上,转身从一旁的冰柜里拿去两罐可乐,放在了慕凡和安艺伦也的面前。 „Two Cola?” “两位可乐可以吗？” „Ok, thanked.” “可以,谢谢了。” „Good, that please wait a bit. I look at the following plot.” Kagurazaka Ayame started to sit on Mu Fan and Aki another side chair also carefully is reading " Accel World » following plot. “好的,那请稍等一下。我看一下后面的剧情。”神乐坂菖蒲开始坐在了慕凡和安艺伦也的另一边的椅子上仔细的阅读着《加速世界》后面的剧情。 Far away however Aki who comes also and Mu Fan somewhat was also tired, is not artificial, while the edit of Kagurazaka Ayame time, opened the suspension link of Cola directly, drank a big mouth, alleviated an own thirstiness. 大老远而来的安艺伦也和慕凡也都有些累了,也不做作,趁着神乐坂菖蒲的审稿的时候,直接拉开了可乐的拉环,喝了一大口,缓解了一下自身的口渴。 Sees Kagurazaka Ayame to verify the draft earnestly, stemming from the politeness, Mu Fan and Aki has not spoken, but sits in the other aspect static waiting the Kagurazaka Ayame scrutinization is completing. 见神乐坂菖蒲在认真的审核着文稿,出于礼貌,慕凡和安艺伦也都没有说话,只是坐在另一面静静的等待着神乐坂菖蒲审阅完成。 In the entire room except for the icy cold air conditioning aura, only remains the sound that three people breathed. 整个房间内除了冰凉的空调气息,只剩了三人呼吸的声音。 Another side, Kagurazaka Ayame is reading " Accel World » following plot, in the heart even more acclaims outstanding of this light novel, although this novel starts, because the lead is a fatty slightly has insufficient, this beginning estimated that will have the persuading to quit effect that plans unable to think to many people. UU reads 另一边,神乐坂菖蒲读着《加速世界》后续的剧情,心中愈发赞叹这本轻小说的优秀,这本小说虽然开始因为主角是一个胖子略有不足,这一种开端估计会对许多人有着意想不到的劝退效果。UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com But following, the plot proceeds in an orderly way, is never loathsome, usually relaxed cheerful daily, did not play the treasure to interrupt by the crucial time absolutely, time also description of fight unusual warm-blooded vivid, the most important thing is everyone 's characterization has the individuality. 可接下来,剧情循序渐进,从不拖泥带水,平时轻松欢快日常,到了关键的时刻绝对不耍宝打岔,战斗的时候也描写的非常热血生动,最重要的是每一个人的性格描写的都非常有个性。 In the light novel, in some works will present a series of likable roles, is „buys stock that” the so-called cause people disputed and „sell-off”, as well as „crashing”. 在轻小说中,一些作品中都会出现了一系列让人喜欢的角色,也就是所谓的引起众人争议的“买股”和“抛售”、以及“崩盘”。 Therefore changes in the animation lightly, some people will brush „this are my wife!” With „your wife in my arms!”, „Has read your wife's book!” And „your wife is really terrific!” Barrage. 所以一本轻改动画中,有人会刷“这个是我的老婆！”和“你老婆在我怀里！”、“看过你老婆的本子！”以及“你老婆真棒！”的弹幕。 Is every year will appear in light novel, most likes „the Two Dimensional male advocates peace ranking of Heroine”. 在轻小说界更是每年都会出现,最喜欢的“二次元男主和女主的排名”。 Naturally these established in a work the aspect of characterization, in light novel you can the plot be slightly insufficient, you can also develop was unscientific, but work inside character disposition was bright, was likable. 当然这些都建立在了一部作品中人物塑造的方面,轻小说中你可以剧情略显不足,你也可以发展的毫不科学,但是作品里面的人物性格要鲜明,要让人喜欢。 The character who a light novel, you portray, the reader looks is tired, that also discussed that what succeeds? 一部轻小说,你刻画的人物,读者看着都烦,那还谈什么成功？ «Accel World» this point does is quite splendid: Steady natural Kuroyukihime, lively cute small thousand, as well as from spiritless little becomes must the strong spring snow, can prove the success in this novel characterization. 《加速世界》这一点做的就颇为出色:稳重大方的黑雪姬,活泼可爱的小千,以及从懦弱一点点的变得坚强的春雪,都可以证明这本小说人物塑造方面的成功。 Although the hypotheses seem like some difficulties, but this simple described, is a spiritless knight to protect the beloved princess becomes the powerful encouraging stories little! 虽然设定看起来有些难度,可这简单的来形容,就是一个懦弱骑士为了保护自己心爱的公主一点点变得强大的励志故事！ Although simple, but many interest light novel. 虽然简单,但又不乏趣味的一本轻小说。 Sees here, Kagurazaka Ayame look strange looks at Mu Fan, if not Mu Fan now before her, some of her really suspicions. 看到这里,神乐坂菖蒲不禁眼神怪异的看着慕凡,如果不是慕凡现在就在她面前,她真的有些怀疑。 The author of this novel, Mu Fan, he .... Really is only 17 years old? 这本小说的作者,慕凡,他....真的只有十七岁吗？