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#41: Terminates the words expressing feelings

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Un...... is very sudden, but pondered that is not sudden, was a little short. 嗯……挺突然,但细想想也不突然,就是有点短了。 Wū wū I really short. 呜呜呜我真的短小啊。 Naturally, this theme's first attempt, generally speaking, with similar of estimate, surpasses the plan is only the Apocalyptic World part...... listens to me to quibble. 当然,这个题材第一次尝试,总的来说,和预想的差不多,唯一超出计划的就是末世部分……听我狡辩。 Because custom continuously is to write a story program, thousand come the character, even several hundred characters, establish a result, then fills in toward inside fills, illuminates the result to write from the opening, from the introduction, has paved the way toward the result, looks first two to be able to look, will not write the thing that writes front is presenting to be useless, possibly the big later period can also contact with some chapter of front introduction. 因为一直的习惯是写一个故事大纲,千来字,甚至几百字,设定一个结局,然后往里面填啊填,从开头就照着结局去写,从开篇,就一直往结局铺路,看过前两本应该都能看得出来,不会写着写着前面出现的东西就没用了,可能大后期还会和前面开篇的某章联系起来。 However after writing this, discovered that story program is only applicable to the modern background, all ready-made, so long as there is a story to bring to use. 但是写了这本之后,才发现,那种故事大纲只适用于现代背景,所有一切都是现成的,只要有个故事就可以拿来用。 If must write theme outside a metropolis, must have another enough thin program. 如果要写一个都市之外的题材,必须有另一个足够细的大纲。 Because wants many details to describe one to be different from the modern background, fictionalized world, this is I biggest insufficiency , is this book biggest harvest. 因为要许多细节才能描绘出一个和现代背景不同的,虚构的世界,这是我最大的不足,呃,也是这本书最大的收获。 This book main body frame is the Apocalyptic World length, but without enough program, still according to the beforehand custom writes, be only a story program, the length greatly reduced. 这本书主体框架就是末世的篇幅,但是没有足够的大纲,依然按照以前的习惯来写,只有一个故事大纲,篇幅就大大缩短了。 Originally match abundant part, is the space station, it is expected that is a big length, however the Apocalyptic World thickness is insufficient, writes again it seems towering, the structure also destroyed, therefore became the length of present. 本来还有赛博的部分,也就是空间站,预计是个大篇幅,但是末世的厚度不够,再把它写出来就显得突兀,结构也破坏了,所以就成了现在的这个篇幅。 Other, the overall is satisfactory, including result, because each book opens is to think the result, if this result looks at a face ignorant to compel now, that is my mistake, has not written. 其他的,总体还算满意吧,包括结局,因为每本书开的时候都是想好结局的,如果说现在这个结局看得一脸懵逼,那是我的错,没写好。 Is insufficient except for the Apocalyptic World length detail, other plots have not surpassed control. 除了末世篇幅细节不足,其他剧情从没超出过把控。 All are starting to exist, it most starts setting that. 所有一切在开始就存在了,它就是最开始的的设定。 Possibly because is not the one breath looked that among some friends will forget, will wait to put the program, the program of more than 3000 characters, or a diary, looked that understood. 可能因为不是一口气看的,有些朋友中间很多会忘记,等下会把大纲放上来,三千多字的一个大纲,或者说一段日记,看完就明白了。 Generally speaking, this is a story of god, or unusual clear/pain gate. 总的来说,这就是一个神的故事,或者说另类的楚门。 So long as lives enough for a long time, sooner or later can understand clearly the truth of this world. 只要活得够久,早晚能洞悉这个世界的真相。 What a pity I cannot, I only be able to let one's thoughts wander. 可惜我不能,我只能乱想。 I do not know that the truth is anything, but I can always ponder. 我不知道真相是什么,但我总能去思考。 I felt, if the god, the true god, It should know. 我觉得,如果有一个神的话,真正的神,祂应该会知道。 Creates the world god not to calculate, it is the thing outside latitude, I perhaps am only in the story that it wants to look at a small background board, for example he wants to create future Star Wars, I am grain of sand in a human civilization, had been brought by one: 创世神不算,它是纬度外的东西,我也许只是它想看的故事里一个小小的背景板,比如他想创造一个未来的星际大战,那我就是人类文明中的一粒沙子,被一笔带过: It writes in 2508, then since „story speaks such a few words from 2508”, before these 2508 all history are the background boards, including me, exists, but runs its own course. 它写2508年,那么“故事从2508年讲起”这么一句话,这2508年之前的一切历史就都是背景板,包括我,真实存在,但自生自灭。 Is the truth this? 真相是这样吗？ I do not know, because I am a mortal, without the god told me. 我不知道,因为我是个凡人,没有神来告诉我。 ...... …… Moreover the style of this book, the bean told me greatly from the beginning, now the mainstream is relaxed, a best seven points of relaxed belt/bring three points of heaviness, I also full mouth to comply, but after writing,...... 另外这本书的风格,豆大一开始就跟我说,现在主流都是轻松,最好七分轻松带三分沉重,我也满口答应,但是写起来之后就…… Because chose the Apocalyptic World background, wants to a Apocalyptic World respect, to cut the monster to eliminate the demon laughing, that is not Apocalyptic World that I want to look, therefore I cannot write, cannot help but became now like this, awkward. 因为选了末世背景,就想给末世一点尊重,嘻嘻哈哈一路斩妖除魔,那不是我想看的末世,所以我写不出来,不由自主就成现在这样了,尴尬。 Finally Apocalyptic World because of the first bumping reason, the program is not very thin, was a little finished. 最后末世因为第一次碰的缘故,大纲不够细,有点完蛋。 The on the shelf words expressing feelings have also raised, this is a transformation, at present looks is a little defeated. 上架感言也提过,这是一次转型,目前看是有点失败。 However opened the front door of new world actually. 不过倒是打开了新世界的大门。 One day possibly, I will also write one, purely, the main line is one crowd of monsters in the article that Apocalyptic World struggles, without modern age, not at sixes and sevens. 可能有一天,我还会重新写一个,纯粹的,主线就是一群怪物在末世挣扎的文,没有现代,没有乱七八糟的。 Guards in Apocalyptic World mutually, then approaches slowly, finally the feeling of mutual support, is good. 在末世里互相防备,然后慢慢靠近,最后相互扶持的感觉,还是挺好的。 ...... …… Nearly two years, wrote three books. 近两年,写了三本书。 The first itself/Ben, the rebirth, others think are external, actually establishes. 第一本,重生,别人以为是外挂,其实是设定。 The second itself/Ben, passing through, others think are external, actually setting. 第二本,穿越,别人以为是外挂,其实还是设定。 The third itself/Ben, is now this, others think that is the setting...... it also is really the setting. 第三本,也就是现在这本,别人以为是设定……它还真是设定。 Told three stories, generally speaking, has not regretted. 讲了三个故事,总的来说,算是没有遗憾了。 Except for this Apocalyptic World length that because is the ability is really insufficient, I want to construct 800,000 characters the Apocalyptic World story, dopes 200,000 character modern plots, finally half and half. 除了这本的末世篇幅那段,因为实在是能力不足,我想构建一个八十万字的末世故事,掺杂二十万字现代剧情,结果一半一半了。 Finally, about below itself/Ben, currently does not have the idea, initially started to write , because wants to look, but could not find. 最后,关于下本,目前没想法,当初之所以开始写,是因为想看,但找不到。 For example wants to look that a person rebirth makes up regretted, finally he leapt to make money the company to rest the star steaming to go...... 比如想看一个人重生弥补遗憾,结果他腾腾腾赚钱开公司睡明星去了…… Attractive, but does not meet one's taste. 好看,但不合口味。 Could not find itself to write. 找不到就自己写。 This is a reason that takes pen in hand is coming. 这算是提笔的一个原因来着。 The current condition is, having wants to write, but does not want to look. 目前的状态是,有想写的,但是没有想看的。 This condition is actually bad. 这种状态其实蛮糟糕。 Therefore first slow one slow, wrote three books also to rest, but also remembers last year before sealing the city, bought this fire bead forest to plan to carry, finally has delayed now. 所以先缓一缓吧,写了三本书也该休息一下,还记得去年封城之前买了本火珠林打算背下来,结果一直耽误到现在。 Then, thank you. 然后,谢谢你们。 The friends, rivers and lakes path Yuan, is predestined friends says goodbye. 朋友们,江湖路远,有缘再见。 The program is attached to behind. 大纲附在后面。
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