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Hence, the main text finished, the story line of arrangement basically pushed, according to the program terminated smoothly, with anticipating the time disparity was not big, had said the end of last month ended the itself/Ben, almost. The plot finished here just, originally scheduled is returns to real cosmos to treat as the ending, wanted is the feeling of stopping suddenly, although again in the future will have the thing to write, but that was other stories, what Transcendental Mechanic in the metropolis, did not give unnecessary detail in main text. 至此,正文是结束了,安排的故事线基本都推完了,按照大纲顺利完结,和预期时间差距不大,说过上月底完本,也差不多。剧情在这里结束刚好,本来预定就是回到真实宇宙当做结尾,要的就是戛然而止的感觉,再往后虽然还有东西写,但那是其他的故事了,什么超神机械师在都市,就不在正文里赘述了。 This book also wrote for three -and-a-half years, first time wrote the 5 million character big lengthy, after all was the place that some experience were insufficient, but then has a look now, whole completion was good, wrote, ended the itself/Ben that scheduled must write smoothly is the good deed. 这本书也写三年半了,第一次写五百万字的大长篇,总归是有些经验不足的地方,不过现在回头看看,整体完成度还行,把预定要写的写了,顺利完本就是好事。 Crosses section time I to from the beginning stress, combs to summarize the good and bad points, the original intention is to write one with ease, can make people think that the interesting novel, then has a look, done also good, the humorous paragraph that sometimes writes can make my oneself also smile to make noise, this was very rare. 过段时间我自个儿得从头重读一遍,梳理总结一下优缺点,初衷是写一本轻松的、能让人觉得有意思的小说,回头看看,做的还行,有些时候写出来的幽默段落能让我自己也笑出声来,这就挺难得了。 Although wrote several books, but terminated each time is somewhat disconsolate, after all Mechanic serialized for three -and-a-half years, has become the custom, when serialized is hoping for the leave, may finish instead felt game and movie anything did not raise vigorously, some people teased write the novel to be fun than anything, actually truly was this, was used to it unable to throw it, a day of non- symbol idled, but the symbol felt mental to be tired, therefore rest a period of time, restored under one mental status, digested under one experience. 虽然写了好几本书,但每次完结了都是有些惆怅的,毕竟机械师连载三年半了,已经成了习惯,连载时期盼着休假,可写完了反而觉得游戏、电影什么的都提不起劲,有些人调侃写小说比什么都好玩,其实确实是这样,习惯了就扔不开它了,一天不码字闲得慌,但是码字又觉得精神疲乏,所以还是得休息一段时间,恢复一下精神状态,消化一下经验。 I felt, during serializing, on equivalent to leveling, but after a book terminates idle time is a systematic additional stage, after finishing, does not summarize is incorrect, immodest said that on my book relative this book progress should be very big, big probable error five building so many. 我是觉得吧,连载期间就相当于练级,而一本书完结后的空闲时间就是系统性的加点阶段,写完以后不总结是不行的,不谦虚的讲,我这本书相对上本书进步应该是很大的,大概差了五层楼那么多。 The result of this book is very good, subscribes 54,000, is also very popular in the international stand, the head subscribes probably is about 3000, but the intermediate stage gets on soundings, following rose slowly, some brothers caught to think that I could write earlier, actually looked with my present vision, earlier wrote immaturest, but just opened the book is the enthusiasm fullest, the status best time, can make up. Overall speaking of which, this book writes is quite trembling and cautious, every day is the new challenges, which day of status is not for fear that steady, one went astray the path, is not good to change in the serializing process, I encountered more than ten this risks at least, responded luckily finally promptly before the issue and deletes the recomposition, maintains a bestseller the mental pressure compared with the imagination in big. However to me, this is an interesting process, three -and-a-half years of enough student finished attending the high school to enter the university, perhaps but also extra a half year of even girlfriends found, long-term serializing quite painful, but also was the rare life experience, had the background of this book, had experience to the greatly lengthy construction, following can take this as basic, became skilled, added to the refresh rate. 这本书的成绩还是很不错的,均订5万4,在国际站也挺受欢迎,首订大概是3000左右,不过中期渐入佳境,后续慢慢涨起来了,有些兄逮觉得我前期写得好,其实以我现在的眼光去看,前期写的最稚嫩,不过刚开书是热情最足、状态最好的时候,能弥补一点。总体说起来,这本书写的比较战战兢兢、如履薄冰,每一天都是新的挑战,生怕哪一天状态不稳,一下走错了路子,在连载过程中不好改,我起码遇到了十几次这种风险,幸好最后都在发布前及时反应过来并删除重写,维持一本畅销书的精神压力还是比想象中大的。不过对我个人而言,这是个有意思的过程,三年半都足够学生上完高中进大学了,还富余半年说不定连女朋友都找到了,长期的连载比较熬人,但也是难得的人生经历,有了这本书的底子,对大长篇的架构有了经验,后续才能以此为基础,变得熟练起来,给更新速度加点。 Reviews this book the serializing course, the rhythm, structure and result and other aspects, the overall also calculates quite steadily, the player NPC theme innate does not stabilize easily, behind I changed the emphasis point, lengthened work lifeline, from joke class the novel shifts to emphatically the plot content, this aspect does. I am not the warm eruption -type player, as far as possible every day stable in the appropriate number of words that one can withstand, status can for a long time maintain, fluctuates rashly can disrupt the writing rhythm, needs to choose, is primarily is steady, final whole completion I am satisfied. Actually the novel writes slowly, serializes best status is the big eyeball, goes away, cuttlefish such, is stable and strong, writes also happily, but the market is fastidious about the output, behind finds the way to enhance. 回顾这本书的连载历程,节奏、结构和成绩等各方面,总体还算比较稳,玩家NPC题材先天就不容易稳定,后面我改变了侧重点,延长了作品的生命线,从噱头类的小说转向着重剧情内容,这方面做的还可以。我不是热情爆发式的选手,尽量每天稳定在一个自身能承受的恰当字数,状态才能长期保持,贸然增减都会打乱写作节奏,还是需要作出取舍,以稳为主,最后的整体完成度我还算满意。其实小说就得慢慢写,连载最好的状态就是大眼珠子、滚开、乌贼那样的,稳定、坚挺,写起来也愉快,不过市场讲究产量,后面再想办法提高吧。 Writes this finished words expressing feelings time, I was prompted by a sudden impulse to count while convenient, the program, the thin outline and the waste manuscript this book added that altogether 1.45 million characters about, almost the equivalent to this book one third number of words, felt that should not be many person who I was more, I must comb from the beginning, oneself looked at scalp tingles, solid Tete were many. 写这个完结感言的时候,我顺便心血来潮统计了一下,这本书的大纲、细纲、废稿加起来,统共145万字左右,差点相当于这本书三分之一的字数了,感觉比我多的人应该不多,我还得从头梳理一遍,自己看了都头皮发麻,实在太特么多了。 As for inside creative idea and creation technique anything, I thought each end product book is the textbook, speaking of which is too troublesome, my oneself has not reorganized, interested oneself refining was best. 至于里面的创作理念、创作技法什么的,我是觉得每本成品书都是教科书,说起来太麻烦,我自己都还没整理完,有兴趣的自己提炼最好了。 Returns to the story, the overall construction layout of novel is quite in my opinion clear, this aspect does also good, but my world outlook construction to the Star Sea also very likes, but also therefore spreads too greatly the outdoor shop, needs more time to conclude, otherwise can finish in the first half of the year. Actually most pits also filled in similarly, some brothers caught to think that the towering place, in the book front basically had the foreshadowing or the upholstery, then looks always has. 回归故事本身,小说的整体结构布局在我看来相当清晰,这方面做的还行,而我对星海的世界观架构也挺喜欢,但也因此把摊子铺得太大,需要更多时间收尾,不然上半年就能写完了。其实大部分坑也都填得差不多了,有些兄逮觉得突兀的地方,书里前面基本都有伏笔或铺垫,回头找找总是有的。 Before this ending is more than one year, establishes, I same do not like all affairs big or small confession all endings, likes reviewing kind or the blank class result, many mammoth, must return to the light life finally, this concept I quite like, the plot after return real cosmos did not plan to write in the main text, the clue leaves, remaining Shun pushed can push to come out, keep to taste then it will be alright. 这个结尾是一年多以前就设定好的,我一样不太喜欢事无巨细型交代一切的结尾,更喜欢重温过去类或留白类的结局,再多的波澜壮阔,最终还是要回到平淡的生活,这种概念我是相当喜欢的,回归真实宇宙后的剧情本就不打算写在正文,线索都出完了,剩下的顺推都能推出来,留点回味就行了。 About character, protagonist, although takes the benefit as first, but can always bring about the good change for the world, by the mark regardless of the heart, is good. Some character have the character respectively, in the entire story, is actually Lackey that I most like, firm pesimist, but also is lazy enough, can lie down is not sitting, simply is status in dream, ha. 关于人物,主角虽以利益为先,但总能为世界带来好的变化,论迹不论心,还是不错的。一些人物也各有性格,不过在整个故事里,我最喜欢的其实是拉基,坚定的悲观主义者,还足够懒,能躺着就不坐着,简直是梦想中的状态,哈。 Probably pulls was a little far, writing the words expressing feelings is easy verbose, returns to the subject. 好像扯的有点远了,写感言就是容易絮絮叨叨,回归正题。 In brief, after the main story finished, should be able to write beyond some occasionally, possibly is some character to divulge to an outsider, or is not good to write in the main text drags the rhythm the extending story, during for example each Edition Update detail experience, either is individual risks of certain character, writes behind anything to study specifically. 总之,正传写完之后,应该会不定时写一些番外,可能是一些人物外传,或者是不好写在正文里拖节奏的延伸故事,比如各个版本更新期间的细节经历,或者是某些人物的个人冒险,具体写什么后面再研究一下。 As for sequel anything, this looks at the situation, at present is nothing idea, later was interested in possibly writing. 至于续集什么的,这就看情况吧,目前是没什么想法,以后有兴趣了可能写。 During serializing, my brain quite single thread, the world in immersion book, will for fear that pull out to lose status wholeheartedly, other things will not be careful, many matters delayed, after finishing, I must go to comprehensive physical examination, will see a doctor to raise the keeping in good health, will exercise, when adjusted similarly, wrote the new book again properly, now only constructs the blank folder, but also anything has not thought, waited to blow off the a period of time brain, had the mental idea. 连载期间,我大脑比较单线程,一心沉浸书里的世界,生怕拔出来会丢了状态,其他的事情都不上心,不少事都耽搁了,写完之后我还得去全面体检一下,看看病养养生,锻炼一下身体,等调整得差不多了,再正经写新书吧,现在只建了个空白文件夹,还啥都没想,等放空一段时间大脑,才有精神构思。 Moreover, about Transcendental Mechanic cartoon, animation and other reorganization news, having the interest can pay attention to micro blog „beginning Immaculate Armor”, or the public number „qipeijia”, has what first-hand news and resources, I will put, announced 另外,关于超神机械师的漫画、动漫等改编消息,有兴趣可以关注微博“起点齐佩甲”,或者公众号“qipeijia”,有什么第一手的消息和资源,我都会放出来,公告一下 Finally, thank support that fellow brothers catch, especially this chapter said that inside show person and is the friend with person work, frequently can stimulate the inspiration, is the talent, the speech is also of pleasant to hear. 最后,感谢各位兄逮的支持,特别是本章说里面的骚人和做同人作品的朋友,经常能激发灵感,都是人才,说话又好听。 Thank the editor-in-chief daytime, the help of loach, indicator and spicy strip fellow editors, during serializing, made everyone take the trouble. 感谢主编长天,泥鳅、指针、辣条各位编辑的帮助,连载期间让各位费心了。 Thank the rising wind forebodes the coming storm and other support of the management and moderator, I did not make the book review area to move, most activities were the moderator help operate, very thanked. 感谢山雨欲来风满楼等各位管理和版主的支持,我不怎么弄书评区活动,大部分活动都是版主帮忙运作的,十分感谢。 Final final, thank fellow dozen of enjoying big shot, the boss atmosphere, was grateful. 最后的最后,感谢各位打赏的大佬,老板大气,感激涕零。 Can make money with ability writing a book, relying on one's own effort to revive, in this era is a good matter. 能凭着能耐写书赚钱,自力更生,在这个时代是一件挺好的事。 Novel that I write, so long as can make people think a little meaning, thought that can also look, to me was complete. 我写的小说,只要能让人觉得有点意思,觉得还能一看,对我而言就圆满了。 The scenery meets by chance, arranges in order the position new book to say goodbye, wish the brother to catch lives happily. 山水有相逢,列位新书再见,祝兄逮们生活愉快。 Immaculate Armor thanks politely. 齐佩甲拜谢。
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