TSDNSP :: Volume #1

#67: Sensei inspection


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Asakawa.” A fair cute jade steps on fully gently on the Asakawa Naoki leg, helps me look at manga.” 浅川。”一只白皙可爱的玉足轻轻踩在浅川直树腿上,“帮我看一下漫画。” Foot is quite cool.” Asakawa Naoki closes the exercise book in hand, moves away the foot.” “脚好凉。”浅川直树将手中的习题册合上,“把脚拿开。” Does not want.” Nanjou is unemotional, the tone is desolate, helps the younger sister warm foot is elder brother's duty.” “不要。”南条面无表情,语气冷淡,“帮妹妹暖脚是哥哥的义务。” In the winter can also help you warm the bed?” Asakawa Naoki cannot bear complain. “冬天是不是还要帮你暖床?”浅川直树忍不住吐槽起来。 The foot is cold like the ice piece, the ice to is not good, these said that was stepped on by the younger sister in the person who the under foot should be grateful, person who all does not have the younger sister! 脚冷得像冰块一样,冰到不行,那些说被妹妹踩在脚下应该感恩戴德的人,全都是没有妹妹的人吧! Nanjou partly narrows the eye: „......” 南条半眯起眼睛:“呵……” Please shut up.” Asakawa Naoki interrupts the taunt of Nanjou, puts out a hand saying that notebook gives me.” “请闭嘴。”浅川直树打断南条的嘲讽,伸手道,“笔记本给我。” After three minutes . 三分钟后。 Asakawa Naoki closes the notebook, said the innermost feelings to appraise as reader really: I do not look good.” 浅川直树合上笔记本,以读者的身份说出内心真实评价:“我看不行。” Where isn't good?” “哪里不行了?” Nanjou both hands hug in the chest front, steps on the jade on Asakawa Naoki thigh to aggravate the strength fully slightly. 南条双手抱在胸前,踩在浅川直树大腿上的玉足微微加重力气。 Too ordinary.” Asakawa Naoki not, because younger sister Nanjou status submits on the choice, the tone calm say/way, manga style is good, although does not have the awl face of recognition, but this does not have the issue reluctantly...... the issue is plot.” “太普通了。”浅川直树并没有因为南条妹妹的身份就选择屈服,语气冷静道,“画风还不错,虽然都是没有辨识度的锥子脸,但这一块勉强没有问题……问题是剧情方面。” Asakawa Naoki continues saying: Main actor and male 2nd because of playing tennis to know, Senpai looks after Kouhai, the program of dark fresh mood was too then senseless......” 浅川直树继续道:“男一号和男二号因为打网球而结识,前辈照顾后辈,然后暗生情绪的戏码太无趣了……” What did you say?” “你说什么?” The Nanjou willow eyebrows select lightly, pink cheeks obviously roused, forced in the foot the Asakawa Naoki bosom spitefully. 南条柳眉轻挑,粉腮明显鼓了起来,赌气将脚塞进浅川直树怀中。 How saying that was also oneself drew two days of things laboriously, encouraged not, unexpectedly also criticized being worth a red cent, do you really want to take a beating? 怎么说也是自己辛辛苦苦画了两天的东西,一句鼓励都没有也就罢了,居然还被批评的一文不值,你果然是想挨揍吧? Homogenization was too serious.” Asakawa Naoki puts out a hand to grip the foot of Nanjou, plots and other manga are extremely similar, cannot discover the highlight and new idea.” “同质化太严重了。”浅川直树伸手握住南条的脚,“剧情和其它漫画太过相似,找不出亮点和新意。” „......” “……” Nanjou is silent. 南条默然。 Looked book time has not felt to have anything, oneself begins the picture to discover to be beset with difficulties, although the appraisal of Asakawa Naoki does not like listening, but fact so. 看本子的时候还不觉得有什么,自己上手画才发现困难重重,浅川直树的评价虽然不爱听,但事实如此。 What to do did you say?” “那你说怎么办?” Un......” Asakawa Naoki hesitates for a half second, might as well change to draw Shoujo Manga?” “嗯……”浅川直树沉吟半秒,“不如改画少女漫画?” „It is not good.” Nanjou overrules, do not look down upon Fujoshi to inundate!” “不行。”南条否决,“别看不起腐女漫啊!” The looked down upon premise must look, if not your pervert hobby, oneself looked that will not look at one! 看不起的前提是要看,如果不是你的变态爱好,自己连看都不会看一眼啊! That can only conduct the breakthrough in the plot and innovates......” Asakawa Naoki to stretch out finger, rubbed the forehead, then said, for example main actor and male liked female protagonist on the 2nd simultaneously, two people usually various competitions, finally to finally, the person who the discovery did like suddenly truly are each other?” “那就只能在剧情上进行突破和创新了……”浅川直树伸出手指,揉了揉眉心,然后道,“比如说男一号和男二号同时喜欢上了女主角,两个人平时各种竞争,结果到了最后,忽然发现真正喜欢的人是彼此?” hey?” Nanjou blinks, sounds...... also good......” ?”南条眨了眨眼睛,“听起来……还不错……” The Nanjou eye shone, on the elegant face floats off wipes the exciting flushed, muttered: Two people understand in a rainy night each other intention, only leaves behind the indecisive woman to sob same place, at the same time, main actor and male 2nd life experience also opened gradually......” 南条眼睛亮了起来,俏脸上浮起一抹兴奋的潮红,喃喃自语道:“两人在一场雨夜中明白了彼此的心意,只留下优柔寡断的女人在原地哭泣,与此同时,男一号和男二号的身世也渐渐揭开……” Originally their two people are the separate many years of blood brother!” “原来他们两个人是失散多年的亲兄弟!” —— “噗—— Asakawa Naoki nearly the pencil in hand not breaking off. 浅川直树差点儿没把手中的铅笔给掰断。 Spat blood! Was mad by you to spitting blood three rises! manga style normal Fujoshi inundated a moment ago, was turned into the ethics morality play of breakthrough taboo by you in an instant, even if to make do the ancient Geek myth that was famous, was still the brother and sister relates the confusion at most, had not heard that did not let off the blood brothers! 吐血了啊!被你气到吐血三升啊!刚才还是画风正常的腐女漫,一转眼就被你变成了突破禁忌的伦理道德剧,就算是以乱搞著称的古希腊神话,也顶多是兄妹关系混乱,没听说连亲兄弟都不放过的啊! Notebook also I.” The Nanjou whole face excitedly, bends the waist impatiently, prepares to take away the computer from the Asakawa Naoki hand, I had the inspiration!” “笔记本还我。”南条满脸兴奋,迫不及待地弯腰过来,准备从浅川直树手中拿走电脑,“我有灵感了!” „......” “……” Asakawa Naoki is preparing to speak, suddenly discovered that the own line of sight received darkly cannot know the distortion of strength, cannot help but looked to Nanjou. 浅川直树正准备说话,忽然发现自己的视线受到了冥冥中不可知力量的扭曲,不由自主地望向南条 ( Is wonderful and strange, has unknown strength to distort the own line of sight......) (奇、奇怪,有未知的力量正在扭曲自己的视线……) The vision falls to the young girl snow white slender nape of the neck above, then cannot help but falls downward, under the nape of the neck is the clear fine collar bone, the curve and curve that Shenao gets down as if can be used to raise the goldfish , to continue downward...... 目光落到少女雪白纤细的脖颈之上,然后不由自主地向下滑落,脖颈下面是圆润精致的锁骨,那深凹下去的弧度与曲线似乎可以用来养金鱼,继续往下…… Wears the pajamas time do not bend the waist! As the girl, you pay attention to a point actually! 穿着睡衣的时候就不要弯腰了啊!身为女孩子,你倒是注意一点啊! Saw that what to do younger sister oneself is exposed? 看到自己妹妹走光怎么办? Naturally is hurries to put aside the vision! 当然是赶紧移开目光啊! What a pity the girl in this aspect is most sensitive, Asakawa Naoki stayed for less than one second, Nanjou had detected, sits the straight body swiftly, lifts the hand to cover up the neckband, partly narrows the eye to look to Asakawa Naoki, the vision that shuts out looks like in looking at the trash can the kitchen trash of nonrecoverable. 可惜女孩子在这方面是最敏感的,浅川直树只是停留了一秒钟不到,南条已经有所察觉,倏然坐直身体,抬手掩住领口,半眯眼睛向浅川直树望来,嫌弃的目光就像是在看垃圾桶中不可回收的厨余垃圾。 Goes to the hospital to subscribe the bed.” “去医院订床位吧。” „......” “……” To draw the Fujoshi book younger sister really not cute. 想画腐女本子的妹妹果然一点儿都不可爱 ...... …… A night does not have the words. 一夜无话。 Next morning, Asakawa Naoki came across the difficult problem. 第二天早上,浅川直树遇到了难题。 Nanjou, 7 : 30, should get out of bed.” 南条,七点半钟,该起床了。” „......” “……” The young girl on bed is stirless. 床上的少女毫无动静。 Nanjou, gets out of bed to have the breakfast, has saury pike that you most like.” 南条,起床吃早餐,有你最喜欢的秋刀鱼。” „......” “……” Did not get up I to raise the quilt.” “再不起来我掀被子了。” „......” “……” The young girl on bed has no response as before, if no breath, will also knit the brows, suspected that she was one night turns into the vegetable. 床上的少女依旧没有任何反应,如果不是还有呼吸,还会皱眉,都怀疑她是不是一夜变成植物人了。 People Die if they're Killed. 人被杀,就会死 What a pity the person was shouted, may not awake, in the world has some severe to hate to get out of bed sickness the patient, once enters hates to get out of bed the pattern, will lose the sense of hearing, how is casual you to shout, will never wake up, is you shouted that forever not awaking pretends to be sleeping person. 可惜人被喊,不一定会醒,世界上有一些重度赖床症患者,一旦进入赖床模式,就会失去听觉,随便你怎么喊,永远都不会醒来,也就是‘你永远喊不醒装睡的人’。 It can't he helped.” Asakawa Naoki sits the bedside, searches into which from the quilt edge the hand, I began.” 没办法了。”浅川直树坐到床边,将手从被子边缘探入其中,“我动手了。” The voice instruction is invalid, at this time can only use manual awakens the pattern. 语音指令已经无效,这种时候只能使用手动唤醒模式。 ......” “唔……” With the invasion of Asakawa Naoki, leans Nanjou of body to be quickly pressed the slender black eyebrow, exudes one from the nose depressed low, reverberates in dawn beautiful early morning gently. 随着浅川直树的入侵,侧着身体的南条很快蹙起纤细黛眉,从鼻中发出一声苦闷的低哼,在晨光明媚的清晨轻轻回荡。 And Do not bump me......” “别、别碰我……” Nanjou wants to move aside, what a pity the strength is too weak, was easily then grasped by Asakawa Naoki in the palm. 南条想要躲闪,可惜力气太弱,轻易便被浅川直树抓在掌心。 Shouted that so many sounds are not willing to get out of bed, I think it is necessary to give you a gift.” The strength on Asakawa Naoki rapid in addition big hand. “喊这么多声都不肯起床,我认为有必要送你一份礼物。”浅川直树迅速加大手上的力量。 The strange numb feeling makes the young girl on bed roll up the body, on the cheeks surges crimson, several messy hair fall on the face, appears especially soft no use: 奇怪的酥麻感觉让床上的少女蜷缩起身体,脸颊上涌起浅浅绯红,几根凌乱发丝落在脸上,显得格外柔软无助: Quick, stops...... there a bit faster not good......” “快、快点停下来……那里不行……” On Nanjou face crimson are getting more and more, both hands are incapable of holding by the corner/horn, the breath is gradually rapid, now is enduring the depressed attack. 南条脸上的绯红越来越多,双手无力抓住被角,呼吸渐渐急促起来,现在正在忍受着苦闷的侵袭。 On mouth was saying to be not good, you open the eye actually.” “嘴上说着不行,你倒是把眼睛睁开啊。” „......” “……” After several seconds, hates to get out of bed sickness the late stage young girl to be driven beyond the limits of forbearance finally, opens the eye swiftly, in the attractive wine red eye pupil full is the flaming anger. 数秒后,赖床症晚期少女终于忍无可忍,倏然睁开眼睛,漂亮的酒红色眼眸中满是熊熊怒火。 Bang!” “砰!” Nanjou kicked, closes tightly the silver tooth to shout: Hentai! Pinches my foot you to enter the hospital again!!” 南条一脚踢了过来,咬紧银牙喊:“hentai!再捏我的脚你就进医院吧!!” Hates to get out of bed the young girl to wake up by shouting this finally, has had the breakfast hurriedly, Nanjou in corridor changes the shoes, complained: da, damn, was soon late.” 总算是将这个赖床少女喊醒,匆匆忙忙吃过早餐,南条玄关边换鞋子,边抱怨道:“可、可恶,快要迟到了。” Changes the shoes a bit faster.” “快点换鞋。” Blames you to in the morning toss about me.” “都怪你非要在早上就折腾我。” „......” “……” Ice-cold cold air raids suddenly, making the Asakawa Naoki scalp tingle with numbness slightly. 一股冰冷的寒气骤然袭来,让浅川直树头皮微微发麻。 This familiar constriction......” “这股熟悉的压迫感……” The Asakawa Naoki top of the head soon had the cold sweat to fall. 浅川直树头顶很快有冷汗落了下来。 The next quarter, put on Nanjou Mao of shoes to put out a hand to grasp on the doorknob. 下一刻,穿好鞋子的南条真绪已经伸手握在了门把上。 wait a moment......” 等一下……” kāchā.” 咔嚓。” The door opens. 房门打开。 Wears the suit, the pretty woman of pink hair shawl stands in out of the door, the snow and ice goddess that as if the foreign land is born, the ice-cold vision to it place, the myriad things is freezing rapidly. 一名穿着西装,粉发披肩的漂亮女人站在门外,仿佛异域降生的冰雪女神,冰冷目光所至之处,万物都在迅速冻结。
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