TRSFPUS :: Volume #2

#117: I have a proposition


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" I hope , can also create to touch the will of the people the work. To touch that person, looking like that person once touched me to be the same. " 「我希望以后也能够创造出打动人心的作品。想要打动那个人,就像是那个人曾经打动我一样。」 This is before today's bamboo slip will sell will start, in view of Machida young lady a joke makes the response that. 这是在今天的签售会开始前,针对町田小姐一句玩笑话所作出的回应。 " Perhaps does that Roman Teacher also meet come? " 「说不定那位埃罗芒阿老师也会来喔?」 Is pondering over these, vision condensation of cannot help but Utaha on a face. 思忖着这些,诗羽的目光不由自主的凝聚在了一张脸上。 Black becoming dark pupil, straight eyebrows slanting upwards and outwards star. 黑发黑眸,剑眉星目。 The facial features are delicate and outstanding. 面容清秀而俊逸。 By summer sunlight that the glass shoots, is jumping on the shoulder of youngster brightly. 透过玻璃射进来的夏日阳光,在少年的肩头上熠熠跳跃着。 Is capturing her attention firmly. 牢牢吸引着她的目光。 When the rookie enjoys makes a debut to make vol. 2, the work of leading lady from cutting in two at the waist the crisis saves, is artist in a network. 在新人赏出道作第二卷时,将女主角的作品从腰斩危机中拯救出来的,是一名网络上的画师。 In is acquainted before the opposite party, the leading lady was secret to the artist has the favorable impression. But this favorable impression, as with his being acquainted dear friend, started to sprout gradually the brand-new significance. 所以在与对方相识之前,女主角就暗暗对画师抱有好感了。而这种好感,随着与他相识相知,开始渐渐地萌生出了全新的意义。 „......, Really exists unexpectedly, this novel same plot......” “……呵,居然真的存在呢,这种小说一样的剧情……” The corners of the mouth hold light smile Utaha to easily speak to talk to oneself. 嘴角噙着淡淡笑容的诗羽轻言自语道。 How then to develop...... in the year the other female of department, under the year the department study younger sister...... hehe, hehe......” “接下来会怎么发展呢……年上系的彼女,年下系的学妹……呵呵,呵呵呵……” Clip clop dá dá dá dá 哒哒哒哒哒哒哒 With one after next stamping the feet sound, if there is a dark aura that resembles not to start from the young girl to spread. 伴随着一下下的跺脚声,若有似无的黑暗气息开始从少女身上蔓延。 That is the creator domain that the inspiration bursts out. 那是灵感迸发的创作者领域。 Rosy cloud and rosy cloud teacher? Are you all right?” “霞、霞老师?你没事吧?” ......?” “唔……?” From secure Yilun also inquired that has not fallen into the too deep consciousness Utaha, pulling back. 来自安艺伦也的询问将诗羽还未陷入太深的意识,给拉了回来。 „...... How?” “……怎么了吗?” The young girl who gathers together the ear fire silk has the sound said, and lowered the head to have the drink. 拢起耳边发丝的少女出声道,并低头喝起了饮料。 „,......” secure Yilun does not swallow saliva secretly, always felt that the rosy cloud teacher just appearance of...... was very terrifying.” “啊、不……”安艺伦也暗暗吞下一口口水,“总感觉霞老师刚刚的样子……很恐怖。” Buys Katou Yusuke that one cup of drink came back newly, sits down on the seat again. 去新买了一杯饮料回来的加藤悠介,也重新在座位上坐下。 In the straw the mobile liquid stopped quickly, a Utaha face shift topic calmly. 吸管中流动的液体倏地停顿了一下,诗羽一脸若无其事的转移话题。 That, regarding «Love Metronome», what opinion you have and feelings?” “那么,对于《恋爱节拍器》,你们有什么意见和感想吗?” Well? What? Can we express the opinion?” secure skill is also surprised the say/way. “咦?什么?我们可以发表意见吗?”安艺伦也惊讶道。 Author listens to the feelings or the desire of reader, is very natural matter. Also eventually was only the reference.” “作者听取读者的感想或愿望,是很自然的事吧。再说终究只是参考而已。” Kasumigaoka Utaha answered. 霞之丘诗羽答曰。 Arm while table, the young girl is also supporting the beautiful chin with the back of the hand gently, looks is revealing several points of interest in two people vision. 将胳膊支在桌子上的同时,少女还用手背轻轻撑着美丽的下巴,望向两人的目光流露着几分兴趣。 hears word. 闻言。 That! Actually......!” “那个!其实啊……!” Looking like must unable , in the bamboo slip sells the words that at the meeting delivered, shook to be the same altogether. secure Yilun who deeply inspires is also incessant by the potential of passing on responsibilities. 就像是要把未能在签售会上讲完的话,一股脑都抖出来一样。深吸了一口气的安艺伦也以当仁不让之势滔滔不绝。 „I have read over 20 like vol. 1! But read each time will cry.” “像第一卷我已经读过二十遍以上了!但每次读的时候还是会哭。” End of story, the straight artificial sand was moved me by the good part diligently......, but they actually missed each other intention subtly, making me quite worry.” “故事末尾,直人为沙由佳努力的部分太打动我了……可是他们却微妙地错失彼此的心意,让我好着急。” However perhaps the sand by the good that side, I said that some are not polite, but she a little makes people unable to produce the resonance at first, some ideas unable to make me accept.” “而沙由佳那边,也许我这么说有些不礼貌,但最初她有点让人无法产生共鸣、也有一些想法不太能让我接受呢。” When I read off about five, actually felt fairly. Should say that...... she will have the character of that psychological response.” “不过等到我读完五遍左右,却又感觉合情合理了。应该说……她就是会具有那种心理反应的人物。” After has read repeatedly, will discover many details. Perhaps is only my reading knowledge is insufficient, but I thought that the content is good the depth.” “像那样反覆读过之后,就会发现好多细节。也许只是我阅读能力不够,但是我觉得内容好有深度。” In brief, can see such outstanding work is really good! Is the god does simply! Actually I was anxious yesterday evening cannot sleep.” “总之,能看到这么优秀的作品真是太好了!简直就是神作!其实就连昨天晚上我都紧张得睡不着觉。” Because has not read the relations of vol. 2, what publishes by the secure skill is regarding the impressions of after-reading of vol. 1. 因为还没有读过第二卷的关系,是以安艺所发表的是对于第一卷的读后感。 He who falls into the stimulated condition will not worry the surrounding environment, but talking endlessly is telling the idea of innermost feelings. 陷入亢奋状态的他就丝毫不会顾虑周围的环境,只是喋喋不休的诉说着内心的想法。 Utaha has not thought that the opposite party really has such high warm peace talks, therefore cannot help but looked around Katou Yusuke one. 诗羽也未想到对方竟然有这么高的热情和谈性,于是不由得看了旁边的加藤悠介一眼。 Sees only the look of youngster to be very complex. 只见少年的神色十分复杂。 The way of if with Utaha not knowing described, then should be this- 若用诗羽所不知道的方式来形容的话,那么应该是这样- ( Subway, Old person, cell phone) .jpg (地铁,老人,手机).jpg „...... You have read that many times.” “呃……你读过那么多次啊。” Her then some do not know that should say any good should with, look at Katou Yusuke immediately. 她便有些不知该说些什么好的应和,随即将目光投向了加藤悠介 Then Katou-kun. You felt after this, how to develop? What kind of evolution do you like?” “那么加藤君呢。你觉得这之后会怎样发展?你喜欢怎么样的演变?” In the dark-red eye pupil the appearance is inexplicable. 暗红色的眼眸内神彩莫名。 Well?” “咦?” secure skill is also crooked the head to inquire: That...... rosy cloud teacher, Katou's issue probably and my not too same.” 安艺伦也歪着脑袋询问道:“那个……霞老师,加藤的问题好像和我的不太一样耶。” Schoolmate secure art/skill?” “安艺同学?” Is......?” “是……?” A young girl face genial looked, „can here make Katou-kun reply?” 少女一脸和善的望了过来,“这里可以让加藤君回答吗?” Why does not know, looks at the smile of opposite party, secure Yilun also only thinks that behind the neck surges instantaneously a chill in the air of share of frozen person. Therefore- 不知为何,看着对方的笑容,安艺伦也只觉脖子后面瞬间涌起一股冻人的寒意。于是- Is and is!” “是、是!” Utaha then satisfied nod, duplicate/restores moves back Katou Yusuke the vision, makes an inclining the head and listening attentively appearance. 诗羽便满意的点了点头,复又将目光移回加藤悠介,做出一副侧耳倾听的模样。 Looks at this, the opens the mouth of Katou Yusuke doubts said. 看着这一幕,加藤悠介疑惑的开口道。 Feelings secure art/skill who should say had just said similar?” “该说的感想安艺刚刚已经说的差不多了吧?” „, You said to make the suggestion of following development clumsily.” “那么,你就讲一些对拙作后续发展的建议吧。” Does clumsily......” “拙作……” In the mouth is chewing this glossary, the Katou Yusuke look becomes subtle. 口中嘴嚼着这个词汇,加藤悠介的眼神变得微妙。 Slightly did to think, he decided present every studied the young girl to select the material. 略作思索了一下,他决定给眼前的凡学少女来点猛料。 That told two stories slightly.” He is considering the words: Studies the elder sister to listen to the East city damask silk and Seino Division?” “那就稍微讲两个故事吧。”他斟酌着话语道:“学姐听过东城绫和西野司吗?” East city...... Nishimura......” “东城……西野……” In the eye of Utaha flashes through the look of thinking, and shakes the head, has not listened to name, but......” 诗羽的眼中闪过思索的神色,而又摇了摇头,“没听过的名字呢,但是……” The young girl leans forward the body, two arm graceful overlaps on the table, the smile is responding to slightly: „Will Katou-kun tell me?” 少女微微前倾着身体,将两条手臂优雅的交叠在桌上,微笑回应道:“加藤君会告诉我的吧?” Katou Yusuke nods to affirm, and tells the story in brain. 加藤悠介则点头表示肯定,并将脑中的故事娓娓道来。 „Is this one is fat about the dropping from the clouds strawberry? Male leading character who the story...... vainly hopes for to become the movie producer, after was on vacation from school the roof to meet with the first leading lady of destiny one time.” “这是一个关于从天而降草莓胖?的故事……梦想成为电影制片人的男主人公,在一次放学后的楼顶邂逅了命运的第一女主角。” Finally actually regarded another person the opposite party by mistake, conducted the confession to obtain the opposite party heart to the second leading lady accidentally/surprisingly.” “结果却误把对方当成了另一个人,对第二女主角进行了告白并意外获得对方芳心。” „A side is to have the female student of common dream, a side is the lively cute campus idol. Regarding this complex triangular relationship, three people known one another well the meet acquaintance.” “一方是有着共同梦想的女生,一方是活泼可爱的校园偶像。围绕着这段复杂的三角关系,三人相知相遇相识。” ...... …… „...... The male lord, but, blew hot and cold in this process also gradually understands oneself conscience, made the choice between two females finally.” “……而在这个过程中,原本摇摆不定的男主也逐渐明白了自己本心,最终在两女之间做出了选择。” At this point, he then stops talking suddenly does not say. 说到这里,他便突然住口不言。 Therefore following? Actually that male leading character chose whose you to say actually!” “所以后续呢?那个男主人公究竟选择了谁你倒是说啊啊啊啊!” Does not know secure Yilun who when collects, grabs his arm to sway unceasingly. 不知何时凑上来的安艺伦也,抓着他的手臂不断摇晃。 Regarding this. 对此。 Always feels...... the story very hackneyed stuff.” “总觉得……故事很老套呢。” The young girls appraise impartially, and lifts the hand to move lets fall in the sending silk of face. 少女不置可否的评价,并抬手拨动垂落在脸庞的发丝。 Then opens an eye saying: But, chose anyone regarding that indecisive waste male lord finally, I have the interest.” 接着睁开一只眼睛道:“不过,对于那个优柔寡断的人渣男主最后选择了谁,我也不是没有兴趣。” Katou Yusuke shakes the head with a smile, was saying such words to the young girl. 加藤悠介只是笑着摇了摇头,然后对着少女说出了这样的一番话。 Whom actually chose is not unimportant, but to that degree, must to the reader one type " where, regardless of wins will not feel strange " feeling, this was my suggestion.” “其实选择了谁并不重要,而是到了那个程度,要给读者一种「不论哪边获胜都不会奇怪」的感觉,这就是我的建议。” Heard that he said that the eye pupil of Utaha glittered gently. 闻他所言,诗羽的眼眸轻轻闪烁了一下。 Crossed probably for three seconds, the corners of the mouth of young girl appear to wipe to be addicted to the oppressive smile. 大概过了三秒钟,少女的嘴角浮现出一抹嗜虐的笑容。 Katou-kun.” 加藤君。” Utaha is staring at the opposite party, opens the red lips lightly. 诗羽凝望着对方,轻启朱唇。 Here has a proposition, are you willing to listen to?” “我这里有一个提议,你愿意听一下吗?”
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