TMA :: Volume #5

#11: The appraisal of paper

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ps: Today has to make up ~ asked the monthly ticket ps:今天有补更~求月票 The time close to Congress of Magic headquarters closure, Lucien took is revising the good paper to arrive at the Sorcerers control division according to the Lord of Storm instruction. 接近魔法议会总部关闭的时间,路西恩拿着根据风暴主宰指导修改好的论文来到了魔法师管理部。 „Good afternoon, Teacher Evans.” Stands sees Lucien to appear in receptionist following Katrina pleasantly surprised. “下午好,伊文斯老师。”站在接待台后面的卡特里娜惊喜地看到路西恩出现。 She selects, stature to be beautiful high bright-colored, youth brims with, has the intense attraction to many unmarried official Sorcerers, therefore Sorcerers control division hall, even if close to the evening, still several young men stop over. Some of them pretend here the wine-tasting leisure, the every action and every movement to the utmost graceful strong point, some exchange latest Arcane theory intentionally, often jumps the glossary that the average man is unable to understand, shows own Arcane and magic ability by this, some are quite bold, simply chitchatted taking advantage of the opportunity and Katrina and her side that young girl inquiry, stirred up other Sorcerers to look askance to look angrily. 她高挑明艳、身材姣好、青春洋溢,对不少未婚的正式魔法师有着强烈的吸引力,因此魔法师管理部大厅即使是接近傍晚,也有几位年轻男子逗留。他们有的装作在这里品酒休闲,一举一动极尽优雅之能事,有的故意交流最新的奥术理论,不时蹦出常人无法理解的词汇,以此彰显自身的奥术和魔法能力,有的则比较大胆,干脆借着询问的机会与卡特里娜和她身边那位少女攀谈,惹得其他魔法师纷纷侧目怒视。 After hearing the Katrina obviously blissful sound, they will be responsible for receiving the young girls who to look at Lucien together with another. 听到卡特里娜明显充满喜悦的声音后,他们连同另外一位负责接待的少女都将目光转向了路西恩。 Pretty peaceful face, neat graceful clothing, as well as on right hand index finger beautiful dream light purple gem ring, mapped their view instantaneously. 俊秀安静的面庞,整齐优雅的服饰,以及右手食指上美丽梦幻的淡紫色宝石戒指,瞬间映入了他们的眼帘。 „That, is that Holm imperial crown ring? Teacher Evans? Lucien? Evans?!” They responded quickly, at present this is in current one generation of young Sorcerers one of the most outstanding two, the hearsay is five levels of Arcanist! “那,那是霍尔姆皇冠戒指？伊文斯老师？路西恩?伊文斯？！”他们很快反应过来,眼前这位是当前一代年轻魔法师中最杰出的两位之一,传闻已经是五级奥术师了！ Therefore many Sorcerers set out to salute, respectable said/tunnel: „Good afternoon, Mr. Evans.” 于是不少魔法师起身行礼,尊敬地道:“下午好,伊文斯先生。” Meanwhile, they are guessing the relations of Lucien and Katrina at heart, according to the name of Katrina. Two people should have the masters and disciples status in some sense, but is certain Katrina also isn't Lucien? Evans official disciple, otherwise she this/should politely calls the teacher directly, is not classified as the surname. 同时,他们都在心里猜测着路西恩与卡特里娜的关系,根据卡特里娜的称呼。两人应该有某种意义上的师徒名分了,但可以肯定卡特里娜还不是路西恩?伊文斯的正式弟子,否则她就该直接尊称老师,不冠以姓氏。 Even so, they also surged to envying of Katrina, although Lucien? Evans or middle rank Sorcerers, but has been universally recognized as one of the most hopeful promotion high rank Sorcerers. Holm imperial crown prizes and his several papers fully showed him the attainments on Arcane, the promotion in magic rank also explained that his Arcane rank was not pure rises suddenly, but had the deep foundation. 即使如此,他们也涌起了对卡特里娜的羡慕,虽然路西恩?伊文斯还是中阶魔法师,但已经被公认为最有希望晋升高阶的魔法师之一。霍尔姆皇冠奖和他的几篇论文都充分地展现了他在奥术上的造诣,魔法等级上的提升也说明他的奥术等级并不单纯是突然蹿升,而是有深厚的根基。 Learns from such teacher, the future absolutely is light. At least promotion official Sorcerers and Arcanist should no difficulty be able to be recommended this position. Explained that Katrina Arcane and energetic talent are outstanding, lacks is the good teacher teaches and accumulation of resources. 跟着这样的老师学习,前途绝对是一片光明。至少晋升正式魔法师和奥术师应该没什么难度能够被推荐到这个位置。说明卡特里娜的奥术和精神天赋都出类拔萃,缺的就是好的老师教导和资源的积累。 Returns a courtesy to all around Sorcerers nod, Lucien arrives in front of Katrina, the smile said: „Good afternoon. Katrina. Which deacons is today in?” 向四周魔法师点头回礼,路西恩走到卡特里娜面前,微笑道:“下午好。卡特里娜。今天是哪些执事在？” „Mr. Eric. Mr. David......” said six names in the Katrina one breath, „Teacher Evans you were submit the paper?” “埃里克先生。大卫先生……都在”卡特里娜一口气说出六个名字,“伊文斯老师您是来提交论文的吗？” Lucien slightly jaw head: „Yes. The matter of application possibly must wait for some time, should not be anxious. Also says to others.” 路西恩微微颌首:“是的。申请的事情可能还得等一段时间,你不要急。也给其他人讲一讲。” „No matter applied to succeed, can the following teacher you study is a very good matter.” Katrina detected the vision that the people admire, even more thinks the decision that oneself make is correct, such opportunity does not strive, later will perhaps regret to cry! “不管申请能不能成功,可以跟着老师您学习都是非常棒的一件事情。”卡特里娜察觉到众人艳羡的目光,愈发认为自己做出的决定正确恰当,这样的机会不争取,以后恐怕会后悔得想哭！ Lucien exchanged greetings satisfied several, having the light smile to walk toward the following office, the goal naturally is acquaintance Mr. Eric. 路西恩满意地寒暄了几句,带着淡淡的微笑往后面的办公室走去,目标自然是熟人埃里克先生。 Does the young girl who Katrina side that is responsible for receiving look at the companion and Lucien? Mr. Evans knows extremely well to chat, in the heart arises spontaneously intense envying and light feeling inferior. 卡特里娜身边那位负责接待的少女看着同伴和路西恩?伊文斯先生熟稔谈笑,心中油然而生强烈的羡慕和淡淡的自卑。 Although oneself are also another magic school „the Allyn hardship” the excellent graduate, Arcane and psychic force talent is splendid, and similarly the appearance is sweet and pretty, the pursuer is many, but saw for the first time when Katrina thought that with her stands, a oneself likely mature little miss, the discussion Arcane and magic, she has not been profound, often can have a white study three years of misconception by oneself. Adjusts the good mentality with great difficulty, comforts oneself everyone to have the respective strong point, sees such a, immediately raises the Katrina destiny favor, the powerless feeling of Spiritual God kind support, oneself compare. 虽然自己也是另外一所魔法学校“阿林厄”的优秀毕业生,奥术和精神力天赋出色,且同样容貌娇美,追求者甚多,但第一次看到卡特里娜时就觉得和她站在一起,自己像个没成熟的小姑娘,讨论起奥术和魔法来,她更是见解深刻,时常能让自己产生白学三年的错觉。好不容易调整好心态,安慰自己每个人都有各自的长处,又见到这样的一幕,顿时就升起卡特里娜命运青睐,神灵垂爱的无力感,自己怎么也比不过。 „Katrina, cannot think that you and Mr. Evans knew, moreover is he your teacher?” This young girl pretends to ask calmly, in the heart the mood is complex. “卡特里娜,想不到你和伊文斯先生认识,而且他还是你的老师？”这位少女装作若无其事地问道,心中情绪复杂。 Katrina smiles with ease: „I and Teacher Evans come from the mainland while the same ship, on the road deceived him to instruct, afterward luck with him in the Douglas magic school reunion, was under his Arcane counselling in secret.” 卡特里娜轻松地微笑:“我和伊文斯老师是乘同一艘船从大陆对面过来的,路上蒙他指导了很多,后来又幸运地与他在道格拉斯魔法学校重逢,私下里得到了他的奥术辅导。” „This is the destiny......” young girl sighs gently is saying the words that surrounding other Sorcerers want to speak. “这就是命运啊……”少女轻轻叹息着说出周围其他魔法师想说的话。 As a also underage young girl, Katrina still remains several points of little girl thoughts, lifts the head is conceit at the same time, cannot bear is showing off to say at heart: „Teacher Evans or Lord of Storm your excellency disciple, this matter I will not speak irresponsibly everywhere.” 作为一名还未成年的少女,卡特里娜依然残留几分小女孩心思,微抬脑袋自矜的同时,忍不住在心里炫耀道:“伊文斯老师还是风暴主宰阁下的弟子,这种事情我才不会到处乱说。” ............ ………… „1124 Arcane overalls, 65 Arcane points, Evans you expect for a year to become five levels of Arcanist compared with me quickly.” Eric has the badges of five silver stars to give Lucien, on the face that doubtful smiling face, „the development of these years Arcane made one have a not gasping for breath feeling, idles slightly, will discover oneself are unable to understand the content on periodical.” “一千一百二十四个奥术积分,六十五个奥术点,伊文斯你比我预料得快一年成为五级奥术师。”埃里克将已经有五颗银星的徽章递给路西恩,脸上还是那种疑似的笑容,“这几年奥术的发展让人有种喘不过气来的感觉,稍微懈怠一点,就会发现自己无法理解期刊上的内容了。” In the ten years, in the Arcane domain, the new discovery and new theory appears eyes cannot take it all, even Lucien, goes out for more than one year to come back, discovered issue that everyone discussed a little „in advance”. 这十年,在奥术领域,新的发现、新的理论目不暇接地出现,即使是路西恩,外出一年多回来,都发现大家讨论的问题有点“超前”。 „Mr. Eric you are also the harvest are in more than one year great, the Arcane rank has promoted to four levels.” Lucien looked at Eric's Arcane badge to turn into four silver stars. “埃里克先生你这一年多也是收获不浅啊,奥术等级已经提升到四级了。”路西恩瞄到埃里克的奥术徽章变成了四颗银星。 Hears the Lucien's words, on Eric face as if shines a ray: „In Evans your Arcane overall I contributed three. Right, are you submit the paper?” 听到路西恩的话,埃里克脸上仿佛亮起一层光芒:“伊文斯你的奥术积分里我就贡献了三个。对了,你是来提交论文？” Lucien has not raised the matter of renewal magic badge, Eric has not thought short more than one year of time he can promote from three points to close to five points, therefore shifts the topic to Lucien takes the magic processed parchment. 路西恩没提更新魔法徽章的事情,埃里克也没想过短短一年多的时间他就能从三环提升到接近五环,因此将话题转移到路西恩手上拿着的魔法处理过的羊皮纸。 „Yes, the inspiration of this duty obtaining, the Illusion Magic domain paper.” Lucien submits the paper to Eric, in the heart quite anticipated. After all this is the first half original papers, does not know that what kind of appraisal will have. “是啊,从这次任务里得到的灵感,幻术领域的论文。”路西恩将论文递交给埃里克,心中颇为期待。毕竟这是自己第一份半原创性的论文,不知道会有怎样的评价。 Eric submits the paper routinely, then asked curiously: „Each paper that Evans you publish more or less caused the stir, does not know that the research in what aspect this Illusion Magic is the paper probably is?” 埃里克按部就班地将论文提交,然后略带好奇地问道:“伊文斯你发表的每一份论文都或多或少引起了轰动,不知道这份幻术系论文大概是什么方面的研究？” „Main confirmation human brain can produce the special electromagnetic wave, and causes the hormone secretion, creates the mood change and illusion.” Since the paper has submitted, behind oneself also has Lord of Storm to be the backing, Lucien also has nothing to conceal. “主要验证人脑能产生特殊电磁波,并引起激素分泌,造成情绪变化和幻觉。”既然论文已经提交,自己背后又有风暴主宰做后盾,路西恩也没什么可隐瞒的。 Eric a little surprised said/tunnel: „Is Ms. Isabella prerequisite of that paper? This stirred the enormous controversy in the Illusion Magic domain, some Arcanist think that she can win the sorcerer competition, but most Illusion Magic masters thought the paper lacks the research of deeper level. Does not match the laurel crown. Perhaps your paper will also be attacked. However also calculates that indirectly aggravated Ms. Isabella the value of that paper. Perhaps you can share the laurel crown with her, becomes recent hundred years of second before the person who high rank attains two diverse sector highest honors.” 埃里克有点惊讶地道:“是伊莎贝拉女士那篇论文的前置？这在幻术领域可是引起了极大争议,有部分奥术师认为她可以获得巫师桂冠,但大部分幻术师则觉得论文缺乏更深层次的研究。不配桂冠。你这篇论文恐怕也会受到攻击。不过也算间接加重了伊莎贝拉女士那篇论文的价值。或许你能与她分享桂冠,成为最近百年第二位在高阶前拿到两个不同领域最高荣誉的人。” „My this paper , to win the competition, but also lacks the decisive thing, only hopes to be able the good evaluation result.” The Lucien comparison had self-knowledge. Half jokingly is simultaneously typical. „Also hope some day I can not have the dispute to win the competition.” “我这篇论文要想拿到桂冠,还缺乏决定性的东西,只希望能够得到好的评定结果。”路西恩比较有自知之明。同时半开玩笑地道。“也希望有一天我能没有争议地拿下桂冠。” Because the appendix has two „to attract human” magic as the evidence. Eric to Lucien said that can receive the vetting result probably next day. 由于附录有两个“魅惑人类”魔法作为佐证。埃里克对路西恩表示大概第二天就能收到审核结果。 ............ ………… „When...... research photoelectric sensor, I discover a strange phenomenon, to being lower than the light of some frequency. Regardless how to increase its intensity, is unable to make the metal have the electric current, this and inferential reasoning in advance produced contradictory......” “……研究光电感应时,我发现一个奇怪的现象,对低于某个频率的光而言。无论怎么加大它的强度,都无法让金属产生电流,这与预先的推导产生了矛盾……” The was letter/believes that Lucien read big Arcanist „the sovereign of control” and „goddess poetry” Edwin? Brook writes to oneself teacher Fernando, he has noticed unusual of photoelectric effect. 路西恩读的这封信是大奥术师“掌控之皇”、“女神的诗歌”埃德温?布鲁克写给自己老师费尔南多的,他已经注意到了光电效应的反常。 However because the cathode ray had not discovered and determined, he has not noticed the photoelectric current temporarily the essence, but according to such trend gets down, discovering the electron is only the time issue. 不过由于阴极射线等尚未发现和测定,他暂时还没注意到光电流的本质,但按照这样的趋势下去,发现电子只是时间问题。 Thinks of here, Lucien even more feels „atomic research institute” the urgency of establishment: „The Arcane development process and Earth of magic world really have a big difference, if were the same, makes people think strange. Em, must step up to display to make the teacher support me to establish the atomic research institute, otherwise simply does not have the experiment that enough experimental condition completes me to need!” 想到这里,路西恩愈发感觉到“原子研究所”成立的迫切:“魔法世界的奥术发展进程与地球真是有不小差别,不过要是相同了,才让人觉得奇怪。恩,必须加紧表现让老师支持我成立原子研究所了,否则根本没有足够的实验条件完成我需要的实验！” „Does Lucien, how your experiment to the Brook description see?” Does not have the accident/surprise, Fernando to inquire the Lucien's view again. He does not care about the Lucien's idea wrongly weakly, is mainly transfers him to ponder and acts according to his state-of-art give the instruction. “路西恩,你对布鲁克描述的实验怎么看？”没有意外,费尔南多再次询问起路西恩的看法。他并不在乎路西恩的想法错误还是幼稚,主要是调动他思考并根据他的知识水平给予指导。 Lucien replied discretely: „I have not done this experiment, not clear specific situation, but according to Brook your excellency description, can see an issue, perhaps it in some sense explained that Brook the inferential reasoning foundation of your excellency preinstall is wrong.” 路西恩非常谨慎地回答:“我没做过这个实验,不清楚具体的情况,但根据布鲁克阁下的描述,可以看到一个问题,或许它从某种意义上说明布鲁克阁下预设的推导基础是错误的。” „Being equivalent to anything had not said that...... perhaps this is a Douglas opportunity.” Fernando oneself was partial in wave theory, situation not blind letter/believes either one but who he like others, is unable to solve in many issues. “相当于什么也没说……也许这是道格拉斯的一个机会。”费尔南多本人更偏向于波动说,但他不像其他人,在很多问题无法解决的情况并不盲信任何一方。 Then, Fernando detailed explained this experiment to Lucien, but has not made Lucien write the reply immediately, but after when two people did some heat radiation experiments, the preliminary data ordering, one and writes about in the letter/believes. Meanwhile, such data gave back to Douglas one. 接着,费尔南多详细给路西恩讲解了这个实验,不过并没有让路西恩马上撰写回信,而是等到两人做了部分热辐射实验后,将初步的数据整理出来,一并写到信上。同时,这样的数据还给了道格拉斯一份。 ............ ………… In the Congress headquarters uses the lunch, Lucien to receive the Arcane vetting result to Eric Office directly. 在议会总部用过午餐,路西恩直接到埃里克办公室领取奥术审核结果。 „In the morning returned.” Eric is still the old-fashioned serious expression, „appraisal is good, committee members at least not because of own fondness, but changes the assessment standard at will.” “上午就返回了。”埃里克依然是古板严肃的表情,“评价还算不错,委员们至少不会因为自己的喜好而随意更改评定标准。” A little when the elementary student receives the result Lucien of uneasy mood received that document, does not know how many Arcane overalls can the own first -and-a-half original papers have? 有点小学生领取成绩时惴惴不安心情的路西恩接过了那份文件,不知道自己第一份半原创性论文能有多少个奥术积分？ The document opens, above wrote: 文件打开,上面写道: „ The appraisal of Committee Member Augustus is: ‚This paper confirmed with the experiment and magic the human body spontaneity electric current and existence of brain electromagnetic wave, how and adopted the magic to confirm the brain wave to affect the hormone secretion thus to make the person mood change and have the illusion, was well-composed, the logic was clear, but lacked enough much brain waves as the contrast, is unable to make one believe that only depended on a few type of brain waves to have that complex mood to change, even author still expressed the disappointment in this aspect. Similar deficiency also has.’ “奥古斯都委员的评价是:‘这篇论文用实验和魔法证实了人体自生电流和脑部电磁波的存在,并通过魔法验证了脑波如何影响激素分泌从而使人情绪变化和产生幻觉的,结构严谨,逻辑清晰,但缺少足够多的脑波作为对比,无法使人相信仅靠少数几种脑波就能产生那么复杂的情绪变化,即使论文作者本人也表达了这方面的缺憾。类似的不足之处还有很多。’ ‚My evaluation result is, this research results groundbreaking introduced the Illusion Magic domain the electromagnetism, in integrates in the Arcane system to have the breakthrough progress some Illusion Magic, has discussion, has certain importance, but lacks the decisive evidence, suggested to reward Arcane overall 30, Arcane 0.3 hundred.’ ”( To be continued......) ‘我的评定结果是,这个研究成果开创性地将电磁引入了幻术领域,在把部分幻术纳入奥术体系上有突破性进展,极具讨论性,有一定的重要性,但缺乏决定性的证据,建议奖励奥术积分三十个,奥术点三百个。’”(未完待续……)
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