PS: Asked the recommendation ticket ~ PS:求推荐票啊~ Handed over «Burnt the Lamp» script, next day had/left the result. 交了《燃灯者》的剧本,第二天就出了结果。 5 scripts, they chose 3 books, the team decides to interview simultaneously these three screenwriters. 五本剧本,他们选了三本,项目组决定同时面试这三个编剧。 stretch/open Tan the script in these three, smoothly enters the next link, he also relaxes. 张叹的剧本就在这三本之中,顺利进入下一个环节,他心里也松了一口气。 To be honest, reorganizes the cartoon to let the leeway of his full display, the plot story ready-made, cannot change greatly, that did not call to reorganize, called the recomposition. 说实话,改编漫画没有可以让他充分发挥的余地,剧情故事都是现成的,总不能大改吧,那就不叫改编了,叫重写。 Because is only the minor repair slightly changes, must therefore say that stretch/open Tan script, compared with others, that is impossible, must with others' difference, more manifest in the script frame and detail, macroscopic microscopic, other, according to the original work maintain on the line. 因为只是小修小改,所以要说张叹的剧本,比其他人的强很多,那不可能,要和别人的不一样,更多是体现在剧本框架和细节上,一个宏观一个微观,其他的,按照原作保持就行。 For serveral days caught up with the script, went to work to get off work in busily, after matter almost must finish, stretch/open Tancai remembered little white not to appear, in the past may be every day must come to his here, the fleeing gate was a guest. Even if not look at him, having a look at her small to tow the child never to fall. 这些天赶剧本,上班下班都在忙,事情差不多要忙完后,张叹才想起小白一直没出现,以往可都是每天要来他这里,窜门做客的。哪怕不看他,看看她的小拖孩从不落下。 He made the dinner, is preparing to eat, suddenly thinks of little white, puts down the tableware, changes the shoes, goes out, arrives at an active region of building. 他做了晚饭,正准备吃呢,忽然想到小白,就放下碗筷,换上鞋子,出了门,来到一楼的活动区。 The present is 6 : 30 pm, the red dazzling setting sun afterglow shop sprinkles in the courtyard, under the dense sparse tree's shadow, the small insect came out to take a stroll. 现在是傍晚 6 点半,红的耀眼的落日余晖铺洒在院子里,密密疏疏的树影下,小虫子出来溜达了。 In the academy had the teacher and little friend came, but were not many, stretch/open Tan saw Luo Zikang in the slippery slide, asked that he noticed little white did not have. 学园里有老师和小朋友来了,但是不多,张叹见到罗子康在溜滑滑梯,问他看到小白没。 Since previous time fights, two people apologize mutually, in the surface reconciled, later lives in peace with each other. 自从上次打架后,两人相互道了歉,表面上和解了,之后相安无事。 Luo child Kang finger/refer referred to the courtyard, said that the small hot pepper is playing the soccer. 罗子康指了指院子里,说小辣椒在踢足球。 Looks at his suffering appearance, it is estimated that wants to join, but was rejected, thinks very pitifully, playing the soccer is the game of boy, finally was snatched by little white, moreover does not make his young fellow join, is really unreasonable. 看他委委屈屈的样子,估计又是想加入但被拒绝,想想挺可怜的,踢足球本来是男孩子的游戏,结果被小白抢了,而且不让他这个小伙子加入,真是没有道理啊。 stretch/open Tan found little white in the courtyard, this little friend brings the millet to dig the sand, installs toward the red plastic barrel , the busy delight, the setting sun is very long, under the light shadow that their forms draw, they looked like inlaid gold-edged. 张叹在院子里找到小白,这个小朋友带着小米正在挖沙子,往红色塑料桶里装,忙的不亦乐乎,落日把她们的身影拉的很长,光影下,她们像镶了金边。 As for the soccer, was thrown in the one side. 至于足球,被扔在一旁。 „What is busy at?” stretch/open Tan goes forward to ask. “忙什么呢？”张叹上前问道。 little white squats in the sand pit digs the sand, Xiaomi in being responsible for installing toward the barrel, two people divide the work to be clear, act in harmony, looked the first time is not did. 小白蹲在沙坑里挖沙子,小米在负责往桶里装,两人分工明确,配合默契,一看就不是第一次这么干。 Hears the sound, little white in spite of being very busy raised the head, sees is stretch/open Tan, said happily: „Notch, Uncle ~ is our uncles comes duck ~” 听到声音,小白百忙之中抬起头,见到是张叹,高兴地说:“哦豁,大叔~是我们的大叔来啦鸭~” The millet following the sound looks like, smiles shyly, without speech. 小米循声看来,羞涩地笑了笑,没说话。 This little girl like little white extroversion, the courage does not have her to be big, timid, saw each time stretch/open Tan smile shyly, has not spoken several words, even if is asking her, she is also very low voice the simple reply. 这个小女孩不像小白外向,胆子也没她大,怯怯的,每次见到张叹都是羞涩地笑,没说过几句话,哪怕是问她,她也是很小声地简单回答。 Because originally, is quick with little white, stretch/open Tan thinks that own affinity is very strong, discovered to millet here, is not his affinity, but is little white serves as contrast him. 原本,因为和小白很快熟悉,张叹以为自己的亲和力很强,到了小米这儿才发现,不是他亲和力强,而是小白衬托得他强。 Millet both hands are carrying the small pail, huh walks toward another end of sand pit, possibly the sand installs were too many, is carrying several steps, could not take a walk, then shouted little white weakly. 小米双手拎着小桶子,哼哧哼哧往沙坑的另一端走去,可能沙子装的太多,拎着走了几步,走不动了,回头弱弱地喊了一句小白。 „The rabbit police come.” “兔子警察来啦。” little white stands up immediately, the racket the small hand, runs, un well, both hands are carrying the small pail, drags toward the distant place with effort, but also greeted stretch/open Tankuai to come simultaneously. 小白立刻站起身,拍拍小手,跑过去,嗯咦一声,双手拎着小桶子,费力地往远处拖,还同时招呼张叹快过来。 „Wants me to help?” stretch/open Tan asked that asking to help raise. “要我帮忙么？”张叹问道,伸手要帮忙提。 Two little friend foreheads seep out the perspiration, on their faces full is the smile, stretch/open Tan also thinks is who is maltreating them to do the coolie. 两个小朋友额头渗出汗,要不是她们脸上满是笑容,张叹还以为是谁在虐待她们干苦力。 „What do you want to live in?” little white was not a little happy. “你想住啥子？”小白有点不高兴。 What's wrong? The good intention asked that must help, how this attitude? 怎么呢？好心问要帮忙吗,怎么这种态度？ stretch/open Tan said: „I look at you to raise motionless, wants me to help you raise?” 张叹说:“我看你提不动,要不要我帮你提？” little white put down to install the small pail of sand, stopped, breathed hastily two tones, said: „Uncle you looks down upon the baby.” 小白放下装了沙子的小桶子,停下来,连忙喘两口气,说:“大叔你看不起娃娃。” This anything with anything, I am the good intention, stretch/open Tan beckons with the hand, did not say that meaning, if not willing to want him to help, that even. 这什么跟什么啊,我是好心,张叹摆摆手,说没那个意思,如果不愿意要他帮忙,那就算了。 little white is quite satisfied with his attitude, nods, said that makes him work as the guest today, then lowers the head to size up the small pail, crowds together to whisper several with Xiaomi, stretch/open Tan heard, what pail Risako many, dies of exhaustion individual, then two people joint effort, dragging the small pail to walk. 小白对他的态度比较满意,点点头,说让他今天当客人,然后低头打量小桶子,和小米凑在一起嘀咕几句,张叹听到了,什么桶子里沙子好多哟,累死个人哦,然后两人合力,拖着小桶子走。 stretch/open Tangen in them behind, seeing them is so busy, wants to leave, but little white does not let, let him with the past, had the good thing to him. 张叹跟在她们身后,见她们这么忙,想离开,但是小白不让,让他跟过去,有好东西给他。 Perhaps they really dug the sand to dig out diamond anything. 可能她们真的挖沙子挖出了钻石什么的。 What good thing? stretch/open Tan full of enthusiasm with the past. 什么好东西？张叹兴致勃勃地跟过去。 It is not the diamond, but is „sumptuous” dinner! 不是什么钻石,而是一顿“丰盛”的晚饭！ little white is pointing at the good meal of ground, smiled likely flower, is very self-satisfied. 小白指着地上的美味佳肴,笑的像朵花,十分得意。 „Emmmm ~” stretch/open Tan hesitates, light/only looked that the belly is full. “emmmm~”张叹沉吟,光看肚子就已经饱了。 „Did uncle you eat meal?” little white asked. “大叔你吃饭了吗？”小白问。 „Also no.” “还没呢。” little white invites immediately cheerfully: „Do you eat this? Eats luxuriantly, quack eats.” 小白立刻欢快地邀请:“那你吃这个吧？吃莽莽,还有嘎嘎吃呢。” Xiaomi in very happy, does not seem to see her who the one side smiles such happily, like stealing the yellow weasel of chicken, on the face is hopeful. 小米在一旁笑的十分开心,好像没见她这么开心过,像偷鸡的黄鼠狼,脸上满怀期待。 Opens sighs starts to have a headache, present this „sumptuous” the dinner is sand does, some are the sand stirs purely in together, in some sand mixed two stones, some doping some weeds, little white that glass jar was also made the vegetable/dish unexpectedly! 张叹开始头痛,眼前的这顿“丰盛”的晚饭是一盘盘沙子做的,有的纯粹是沙子搅拌在一起,有的沙子里混了两块石头,有的掺杂了一些杂草,小白的那个玻璃瓶竟然也被做成了菜！ little white introduced food that grandly this has the glass jar, said that this is the fish lays out most likes eating, delicious, passionate, lets open to sigh to squat one. 小白隆重介绍这个有玻璃瓶的菜肴,说这是鱼摆摆最喜欢吃的,好吃啊,热情洋溢,让张叹一定要蹲下来品一品。 stretch/open Tandun gets down looks, mother, what fish lays out most likes eating, emmm, truly is the fish lays out most likes eating, what because in glass jar attire is two earthworms! The fish most does not like eating the earthworm! 张叹蹲下来一看,妈呀,什么鱼摆摆最喜欢吃的,emmm,确实是鱼摆摆最喜欢吃的,因为玻璃瓶里装的是两只蚯蚓！鱼可不就是最喜欢吃蚯蚓吗！ When the earthworm is they dig the sand digs, shouts and wrangles excitedly, the millet does not dare to grasp, little white courage is fat, is she bare-handed puts the glass jar. 蚯蚓是她们挖沙子时挖出来的,兴奋地大呼小叫,小米不敢抓,小白胆子肥,都是她徒手抓进玻璃瓶的。 „Uncle you tastes sai.” little white recommended warmly. “大叔你尝一尝噻。”小白热情地推介。 Is this child crosses each family? Really is very unthinkable, stretch/open Tan the hollow laugh turning down, was saying that he has eaten meal. 这就是小孩子过家家吗？果然很匪夷所思,张叹干笑着婉拒,说他已经吃过饭了。 „You deceived people, you just said that has not eaten luxuriantly!” “你骗人,你刚刚说没吃莽莽！” little white clearly remembers that he had just said that has not eaten meal, how one saw that her fish laid out the grand feast to say ate luxuriantly, looked down upon the baby? 小白分明记得他刚刚说过没吃饭,怎么一看到她的鱼摆摆盛宴就说吃莽莽了呢,看不起宝宝吗？ stretch/open Tan:- 张叹:-- little white is very warm, the millet is also warm, is that implicit enthusiasm, she pulled out two branches unexpectedly, said is the chopsticks, gives little white, then little white toward stretch/open Tan hand, asking him to finish eating. 小白真的很热情啊,小米也热情,是那种含蓄的热情,她竟然掏出了两根树枝,说是筷子,交给小白,然后小白往张叹手里塞,请他一定要吃完哦。 little friend who stretch/open Tanna the branch, is having a look at the whole face anticipation, has a look in the ground sand pit „fish lays out grand feast”, under is hard the chopsticks, can only feign illness: „Aiyu, I have a headache, for these days worked was too busy, quite sore.” 张叹拿着树枝,看看满脸期待的小朋友,又看看地上沙坑里的“鱼摆摆盛宴”,难以下筷,只能装病:“哎呦,我头痛,这几天工作太忙了,头好疼。” „Ha, slightly gives for nothing the uncle to knock the brain extravagant child.” “哈,小白给大叔敲敲脑阔子。” Such good deed? Early brain extravagant child who little white wants to truncate stretch/open Tan, when that is stretch/open Tan has clashes of opinion the idea, now has become reconciled, but idea, once takes root, was long in the abdomen black place, was hard to eliminate, now has such opportunity, little white did not pass on responsibilities, runs up to stretch/open Tan behind, said that began to begin, knocked the head to him. 还有这样的好事？小白老早就想削张叹的脑阔子,虽然那是和张叹闹矛盾时的想法,现在已经和好了,但是想法一旦扎了根,在腹黑的地方长开了,就难以消灭,现在有这样的机会,小白当仁不让,跑到张叹身后,说动手就动手,给他敲脑袋。 „Uncle, your brain big sai.” “大叔,你的脑子好大噻。” little white emits such a few words suddenly, making stretch/open Tan not know that she is praising or scolding. 小白忽然冒出这么一句话,让张叹不知道她是在夸还是在骂。 The difficult to turn down an offer make with such warmth, stretch/open Tan pretended to eat finally full, but also hit a belch. 盛情难却,张叹最后假装饱吃了一顿,还打了一个嗝。 „Good, ate to the full, I must go back to work, bye-bye.” “好啦,吃饱了,我要回去工作了,拜拜。” stretch/open Tandiu the chopsticks wants to run, he was too naive, thinks that ate one to finish up? Does not have, little white is drawing his pants, does not let, because...... 张叹丢了筷子就想跑,他太天真了,以为吃一顿就完事儿了吗？没有的,小白拉着他的裤子,不让走,因为…… „This is slightly does without charge, the millet does, here.” “这是小白做的,还有小米做的呢,在这里。” Draws him another side, good, here also has one sumptuously. 把他拉到另一边,好啊,这里还有一顿丰盛的。 The millet visits him eagerly, waits for his accepting this invite. 小米眼巴巴地看着他,等待他的赏脸。