7 : 30 am, stretch/open Tan goes to the company. Luo Ming has not come, the office window shuts tightly, is somewhat worried. 早上 7 点半,张叹来到公司。罗明还没来,办公室窗户紧闭,有些气闷。 He puts down the backpack, before arriving at the window, shoves open the window, making the fresh air come, in Yong'an Street heavy traffic, the noise one and wells up with the air. 他放下背包,走到窗前,推开窗,让新鲜空气进来,永安街上车水马龙,噪声随着空气一并涌进来。 Luo Ming likes peacefully, therefore the window is always closing, the air conditioning often opens, has not come while him, first trades the air to the room. 罗明喜欢安静,所以窗户总是关着,空调常开,趁着他没来,先给房间换换空气。 Opened sighs found a fever canteen from the corner, touched, in the hand then moistened ash, seeming like useless for a long time, he washed inside and outside, put the water in the drinking fountain place, inserted the plug, put out the Lushan fog that brought from the backpack, as well as an insulated cup and a teapot. 张叹从角落里找到一个烧水壶,摸了一下,手上便沾了一层灰,看起来许久没用,他把里外都洗了一遍,在饮水机处装了水,插上插座,又从背包里拿出带来的庐山云雾,以及一只保温杯和一个茶壶。 The water boiled, made pot tea, eight point over several points, supposing Luo Ming must arrive, stretch/open Tancai closes the window, turns on the air conditioning, the furnishing air change pattern, in the office is drab, thought that tomorrow the end two basin flowers and plants, will embellish some greens, beautiful. 水烧开了,泡了一壶茶,八点过几分,估摸罗明要到了,张叹才把窗户关上,打开空调,调成换气模式,办公室里色调单一,心想明天端两盆花草来,点缀一些绿色,养眼。 Without a while, Luo refuses outright the gate to come, somewhat said strangely: „In office looks a little differently, did you clean?” 没一会儿,罗明推门进来,有些奇怪地说:“办公室里看着有点不一样,你打扫了吧？” stretch/open Tan smiles, said: „Made the pot tea, tastes.” 张叹笑了笑,说:“烧了壶茶,尝一尝。” „Had a mind.” Luo Ming one cup, after drinking up with a laugh, said to stretch/open Tan: „Defers to you to write, joins a Zou I.” “有心了。”罗明笑呵呵地倒了一杯,喝完后对张叹说:“就按照你写的,加入一只驺吾吧。” stretch/open Tan the big surprise, the nod had not said the sound is good. 张叹没有多大的意外,点头说了声好。 Luo Ming then said: „I have written the first 5 volumes of plots, you are responsible for my plot adding today Zou, the principle cannot be influential to the main line.” 罗明接着说:“我已经写好了前五集的剧情,你今天负责把驺吾的剧情加进去,原则是不能对主线有影响。” „Does not have the issue.” stretch/open Tan puts down the teacup, packs the tea to own insulated cup, places on hand, turns on the computer, in the investment work. “没问题。”张叹放下茶杯,给自己的保温杯装满茶水,放在手边,打开电脑,投入工作中。 Luo Ming's personality is a little sad, does not like chatting greatly. 罗明的性格有点沉闷,不大喜欢聊天。 stretch/open Tan is also. 张叹也是。 As soon as two people work, without whom spoke, in the office seemed specially peaceful, water that only then the computer keyboard rapped sound, as well as in the drinking fountain conveyed once for a while rumble sound. 两人一工作起来,没谁说话,办公室里显得特别安静,只有电脑键盘被敲击的声音,以及饮水机里时不时传来的水咕噜声。 Joins Zou my role, but cannot affect the main line, therefore actually inserts funny dialog, the mediation atmosphere, opens sighs firmly holds this principle, in range that may choose, sets up as far as possible as soon as possible Zou my image. 加入驺吾这个角色,但是又不能影响主线进行,所以其实就是插科打诨,调解氛围,张叹牢牢把握这一原则,在可选的范围内,尽量尽快把驺吾的形象立起来。 In the afternoon writes, Luo Ming takes the script, looks the director to discuss, finally becomes inadequate, wants the director to check. 下午写好,罗明拿着剧本,去找总导演讨论,最终成不成,要总导演把关。 Shortly, Luo Ming came back to say the director to agree, stretch/open Tan relaxes slightly, Zou my role determined finally. 没多久,罗明回来说总导演同意,张叹微微松了口气,驺吾这个角色终于是确定下来了。 Luo Ming encourages two, then said: „That's good, a bad news, the director makes us in three days take the following 5 volumes of script, the time is very tight, I write the first two volumes, latter three volumes of you write to look, what kind of?” 罗明鼓励两句,接着说:“这是个好消息,还有个坏消息,总导演让我们三天内把后面五集的剧本拿出来,时间很紧,我写前两集,后三集你来写写看,怎么样？” The animated cartoon is the grouping system, the first 5 volumes are manufactured by a group, several days later, another 5 volumes are started the manufacture by another group, this can safeguard the progress to be ordered. 动画片是分组制,前五集由一个小组制作,过几天后,另外五集由另一个小组启动制作,这样能够保障进度有序。 Luo Ming must divide the mirror with the first group discussion tomorrow , without the time to write the script, sees stretch/open Tan to display steadily, the ability is also very strong, wants to allow him to participate to try. 罗明明天要和第一小组讨论分镜,没时间写剧本,又见张叹表现稳重,能力也挺强,就想让他参与进来试试。 stretch/open Tan naturally does not have the issue, wishes for earnestly. 张叹当然没问题,求之不得。 „We stroke the main line plot again.” Luo Ming said. “那我们再来捋一捋主线剧情。”罗明说道。 Over the following three days, stretch/open Tan puts the play writing wholeheartedly, in maintaining with first 5 volumes of uniform foundations, regarding the main line plot, makes a slight innovation, the entire process is smooth, is throughout a timid and hesitant feeling. 接下来三天,张叹一心扑在剧本创作上,在保持与前五集风格统一的基础上,围绕主线剧情,做一些微创新,整个过程还算顺利,就是始终一种束手束脚的感觉。 Luo Ming reads three volumes of scripts that he wrote, made a revision slightly, roughly retains the original design, conforms two volumes that he himself writes, a total of 5 volumes, print, gives the director to scrutinize. 罗明看了他写的三集剧本,稍微做了点修改,大体保留原样,整合他自己写的两集,总共五集,打印出来,交给总导演审阅。 „Is this that rookie who you lead writes?” The director is surnamed Fu, after reading 5 volumes of scripts, turns to the latter three volumes, looked, inquired Luo Ming curiously. “这是你带的那个新人写的？”总导演姓傅,看完了五集剧本后,翻到后三集,又看了一遍,好奇地询问罗明。 Luo Ming's brow tip cannot help but lifted lifting upward, said: „Called stretch/open Tan, he wrote.” 罗明的眉梢不由自主地往上抬了抬,说:“叫张叹,他写的。” Fu Dao places the script with a smile neatly on hand, the palm covers above, said: „Good, no wonder settled on by you quickly. The script I do not have the issue, is very good.” 傅导笑着把剧本整整齐齐地放在手边,手掌盖在上面,说:“挺不错的,难怪这么快被你看中。剧本我没问题,很不错。” Luo Ming makes the experience of project to be rich, can say has fought many battles, but hears these words still to relax at heart greatly. As screenwriter, most unendurable is not the idea script, but is the higher authority discusses the script, if especially bumps into the layman to instruct the expert, can die the popularity, he sees has had the female screenwriter air/Qi has cried. 罗明做项目的经验丰富,可以说身经百战,但听到这句话依然心里大为放松。作为编剧,最难熬的不是构思剧本,而是和上级讨论剧本,尤其要是碰到外行指导内行,能把人气死,他见过有女编剧被气哭过。 „After getting off work, eats meal together? Has the time?” “下班后一起吃个饭吧？有没有时间？” After coming back, Luo Ming sees to open to sigh to be attached to the desk to write to draw, asks. 回来后,罗明见张叹附在办公桌上写写画画,问道。 Opens sighs can see from Luo Ming's manner, should be very smooth with director's talk, 5 volumes of scripts that in other words just delivered passed, therefore had not asked, said: „I know that has the family/home restaurant to be good.” 张叹从罗明的神态能看出,和总导演的谈话应该很顺利,也就是说刚上交的五集剧本通过了,所以没有多问,笑着说:“我知道有家餐厅不错。” „That under followed you to walk, do you drive or sit my?” “那等下跟着你走,你开车还是坐我的？” stretch/open Tan does not have the car(riage). 张叹没有车。 „Builds your.” “搭你的。” A half hour gets off work, Luo Ming said that now walks, does not miss this time. 还有半个小时下班,罗明说现在就走,也不差这点时间。 Two people pack the thing, Luo Ming see on stretch/open Tanzhuo manuscript paper, above drew some designs, first swept one at will, suddenly comes back to stare is looking, with, gathers at present, asked stretch/open Tan curiously: „Do this you draw?” 两人收拾东西,罗明看到张叹桌上的稿纸,上面画了些图案,先是随意地扫了一眼,忽然回过头来盯着看,又拿起来,凑到眼前,好奇地问张叹:“这你画的？” Opens to sigh to tidy up the backpack, said: „Does not know that conforms to the story the style.” 张叹收拾好背包,说:“不知道符不符合故事的风格。” Luo Ming expressed admiration, has not thought that stretch/open Tan also had this, what on the manuscript paper drew was a lead and Zou I stands near the great river, in the river monster with river confronted the scene that words that did not remember incorrectly, this was the 6 th centralized story, with Zou my help, the lead defeated the river monster difficultly, obtained monster pill for the first time, the strength obtains large scale sudden rise. 罗明啧啧称奇,没想到张叹还有这一手,稿纸上画的是一个主角和驺吾站在大江边,和江中的河妖对峙的场景,没记错的话,这是第六集中的一个故事,在驺吾的帮助下,主角艰苦战胜河妖,取得妖丹,实力得到第一次大幅度的暴涨。 This is a very important plot high tide. 这是非常重要的一个剧情高潮。 What although stretch/open Tanhua is only a static picture, but has the manner, after letting the person can feel the picture , the intense feeling of at daggers drawn, being ready to be set off, has the tensity very much. 虽然张叹画的只是一个静止的画面,但是颇具神态,让人能够感受到画面之后剑拔弩张、一触即发的紧张感,很有张力。 „Very good, with I imagine is very consistent, tomorrow can with this go to and minute/share of mirror master Men chats, making them make the reference.” Luo Ming said. “很不错,和我想象中的很一致,明天可以拿这个去和分镜师们聊聊,让他们做参考。”罗明说道。 After the animation script determines, next step is the picture is divided the mirror, transforms the writing as the drawing, this need writes a play and minute/share of mirror master fully communicates, mutual understanding intention. 动漫剧本确定后,下一步就是画分镜,也就是把文字转化为图画,这需要编剧和分镜师充分沟通,相互了解意图。 Two people close the door of office, had/left the building, under opening the sighing direction, the driving dozen minutes, arriving one home is not very conspicuous restaurant. 两人关上办公室的门,出了大楼,在张叹的指引下,开车十几分钟,来到一家并不是很显眼的餐厅。 Although the environment is not on big, but the dish is very good, Luo Ming is full of praise. 虽然环境不是高大上,但是菜品很不错,罗明赞不绝口。 Finished eating the food, Luo Ming receives wife's call, stretch/open Tan from the content and tone of speech guesses that this was not difficult to guess. 吃完饭,罗明接到老婆的电话,张叹是从说话的内容和语气上猜的,这不难猜。 Luo Ming over 40 years old is, have married, on the finger wears the marriage abstention, sometimes also meets to bring the lunch at noon, manipulated color variety, very beautiful fine, looked is the woman prepares. 罗明40多岁,早就结了婚,手指上戴有婚戒,有时候中午还会自己带来便当,摆弄的花花绿绿,十分养眼精致,一看就是女士准备的。 Saw him to make the telephone call, stretch/open Tan said with a smile: „Sister-in-law's telephone?” 见他挂了电话,张叹笑道:“嫂子的电话吗？” Luo Ming receives the cell phone: „Lets tutor the daughter to do one's assignment.” 罗明收起手机:“让回去辅导女儿做作业。” Then also quite said reluctantly: „Child read 3 rd, some work I could not do, must think with the wife, uses energy.” 接着又颇为无奈地说道:“小孩子读初三了,有些作业我都做不出来,得和老婆一起动脑子,费劲。” stretch/open Tan said with a smile: „That hurries.” 张叹笑道:“那赶紧回去吧。” Luo Ming: „It is not anxious, I first deliver you to go home.” 罗明:“不急,我先送你回家。” „Does not use the trouble, here takes the subway, the dozen minutes arrived.” “不用麻烦,我这里坐地铁,十几分钟就到了。” Luo Ming drove finally, stretch/open Tan took the subway to return to Chang'an Avenue West, just arrived at the little red horse academy, saw that under the mulberry tree is standing two young female students. 罗明最终自己开车走了,张叹坐地铁回到西长安街,刚到小红马学园,就看到桑树下站着两个小女生。 Now is 9 : 00 pm, the children in the activity room are playing, only these two. 现在已经是晚上 9 点,小朋友们都在活动室里玩,唯独这两个。 stretch/open Tan knows them, one is the millet, one is Meng Chengcheng, saw that he appears suddenly, two children obviously have a scare, young thief, the eye looks randomly. 张叹认识她们,一个是小米,一个是孟程程,见到他忽然出现,两个小朋友明显吓了一跳,小贼似的,眼睛乱瞄。 Am I so scary? stretch/open Tan said: „Do you do outside? Returns to the classroom to play, outside has the mosquito.” 我有这么吓人吗？张叹说:“你们在外面干嘛？回教室里玩吧,外面有蚊子。” Meng journey Chengmeng nods ignorant, turns around to leave, but three steps turn head. 孟程程懵懵地点点头,转身离开,只是三步一回头。 As for the millet, has not walked, raises the small head to look toward the tree on, covertly. 至于小米,没走,昂着小脑袋在往树上看,偷偷摸摸的。 stretch/open Tan looks toward the mulberry tree on following her vision, is one's turn him to have a scare. 张叹顺着她的目光往桑树上看去,轮到他被吓一跳。 Sees only a young female student who wears the red clothes is hugging the tree trunk, sits on the crotch, sees him to look, waves grinningly, happily said with Sichuan: „I am, I am performing my strong point.” 只见一个穿红衣服的小女生抱着树干,坐在树杈上,见他看过来,笑嘻嘻地挥挥手,用川普得意地说:“我是阿佛儿,我在表演我的强项哈。”